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中考作文专题
成长变化
【话题解读】
成长变化是中考常见的写作话题，针对这一话题，考生需具备介绍自身变化，周围的变化和家庭成员的变化的能力。结合全国真题可知，与“成长变化”话题相关的书面表达有以下命题角度:
①介绍自身变化，包括外貌、性格、心理、学习、与人交往或所取得的成绩等方面；
②介绍周围的变化，包括家庭成员的变化等。
【常用表达】
1. 词汇
兴趣爱好相关: hobbies, painting, collect, swimming, sing，
important, reading, valuable, enjoy...
学习习惯相关: habit, spend, exercise, memorize, subject,
homework, recite, translate, copy, necessary,
weak, repeat, knowledge, value, mistakes...
行为习惯相关: absent, change, believe, gradually, doubt,
problem, positive, seldom...
2. 短语
过去相关: in the past, at that time, used to do, take place,
from then on...
现在相关: at present, beget used to doing, fall in love with,
be fond of, be interested in, feel sorry for...
其他: with the help of, day by day, keep doing sth., be proud of,
take pride in, in person, have/show/take an interest in,
make progress, be afraid of/to do, be pleased with,
from time to time...
3. 俗语谚语
★More haste, less speed. 欲速则不达。
★ Habit is a second nature. 习惯成自然。
★He who makes no mistakes makes nothing. 不犯错误者一事无成。
★Every man has his faults. 金无足赤, 人无完人。
★A fall into the pit, a gain in your wit. 吃一堑, 长一智。
4.写作模板
开头句:
★How time flies!
★I have changed a lot during the past threeyears.
★ There are many changes in my life that make up grow up.
★The biggest personal change I've made is that...
★Great changes have taken place in...
★There are many changes in my life that make me grow up.
★Along with our journey of life, we'll make plenty of personal changes.
.中间句:
★I used to be a bit shy, but now I become outgoing.
★When I was a child, I didn't enjoy books at all.
★In addition, I become a positive student...
★I have no choice but to learn to be independent.
★I wasn’t good at English at first.
★They will benefit me a lot.
★With the help of the teachers and classmates, I take exercise when I’m free.
★When my English teacher leraned about that, she taught me how to memorize new words.
★My parents and teachers used to worry about me, but now they are pleased with me.
.结尾句:
★All in all, the biggest personal change I've made is the most valuable treasure in my life.
★I believe my life will be better and better in the future.
★Thanks to the middle school life, I have changed so much!
★ In short, our life has become convenient and comfortable.
★Thanks to the middle school life, I have changed so much.
★Thanks to the teachers and classmates, I have learned so much.
★I will never forget the valuable middle school life.
【实例讲解】
三年的初中生活, 你一定有许多收获, 也会有一些不足。展望未来, 你肯定有许多美好的期待。假如你被邀请在班会上发言, 请你根据以下信息, 写一篇发言稿。
要点: 1. 回顾收获;
2. 反思不足;
3. 对未来的期望。
要求: 1.文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名;
2. 词数 100 左右。
【分析】
开头: 总述自己在过去三年变化很大 ___________________________________________
( improve, change, grow up, in the past three years...)
中间: 回顾过去并展望未来
1.回顾过去三年的收获
___________________________________________
( used to do sth., in the past, at that time, with the help of, get on well with, outgoing, learn from...)
2. 反思自己的不足
___________________________________________
( however, what's worse, not understand, waste time, play computer games...)
3. 展望未来, 说明自己以后会怎么做
___________________________________________
( make a decision, come true, have a bright uture, be proud of...)
结尾: 书写结语___________________________________________
( good luck, thanks for your time...)
【参考范文】
Dear students,
How tme flies! Looking back at these past three years, I have improved a lot. I used to be very shy, not daring to express myself in public. But with the encouragement from my teachers, I not only become more outgoing but also get on well with all the people around me. Besides, I often learn from my classmates so I have made great progress in my study. However, I also wasted much valuable time in playing computer games. What's worse, I couldn't really understand my parents, always talking back to them loudly. But now, everything has changed. I make a decision to study harder to make my parents proud of me. I believe that my dream will come true and I will have a bright future.
Good luck!
【实战练习】
（一）
时光荏苒，转眼大家已经步人九年级。回想过去两年的初中生活，你是否觉得自己改变了许多？请你根据以下提示，以"Some Changes in My Life"为题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈自从上初中后，你在哪些方面发生了变化。
提示：（1）What did you use to be？
（2）What are you like now？
（3）How do you feel about these changes？
要求：（1）包括以上内容要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
（2）100词左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Some Changes in My Life
How time flies! It has been two years since I entered the middle school.________________
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One possible version:
Some Changes in My Life
How time flies! It has been two years since I entered the middle school. I find that there have been two main changes in my life during the past two years.（点题）
First of all, I have become better at dealing with others. It used to be difficult for me to make new friends. Then I found out the reasons. （过去）Now, I have a lot of friends. Besides, I have become much more confident. In the past, I was worried that I couldn't do well in my lessons. However, with the help of my teachers and classmates, ow I do well in all the subjects.（现在）
I like these changes. They have made my life better than before.（感受）
（二）
你班以"告别陋习，走向文明"为主题进行了一次综合实践活动。通过活动，同学们收获很大，尤其是李华同学进步最快。请你根据表格内容写一篇关于李华的短文。
要求：词数100左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
One possible version:
My Hometown
My hometown lies in a small village in the southwest of China. We used to live a poor life. People didn't have enough food to eat or enough clothes to wear. Many villagers had to leave homes to make a living in some big cities. In recent years, great changes have taken place in my hometown. Now everyone can eat and dress well. Many families have not only fridges, TVs, cell phones, but also computers, cars and so on. New roads, houses, schools and hospitals have been built.
I love my hometown and I hope it will become more and more beautiful.
（三）
理想 (ideal) 是人生导航的灯塔，它指引我们成为对祖国和社会有用的人。近来，某英文报刊将举行以“如何做一名有理想的时代新人”为主题的征文活动。请你结合以下提示要点和自己的认识，写一篇英文稿件。
写作提示:
1.你的理想是什么
2.为什么有这样的理想 (不少于两点理由)
3.你打算怎样实现自己的理想 (不少于两点做法)
写作要求:
1.文中须包含以上要点;
2.文中不能提及本人的真实姓名、地名和校名;
3.词数 100 左右，标题和开头语已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：ideal adj.&n. 理想的; 理想
My Ideal
In the new times it's very important for us to be a middle school student with an ideal.
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One possible version:
How life changes
Great changes have taken place in our life during the years. In the past, people read newspapers, listened to the radio and watched TV for news and other information. People kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or sending postcards. They would buy everything in the shop or the market. Big families had to share small houses which were old and dirty. Children used to go to school by bicycle.（过去的情况）
But now people can get information on the mobile phones or computers almost at any place and at any time. They can buy things online at home. What's more, people can talk to others by e-mail WeChat or QQ, with which they can send and receive messages whenever they like. More and more people live in new and clean houses with several rooms. Some families are rich enough to send their children to school in their own cars.（现在的变化）
In a word, people live better than before.（结束语）
One possible version:
My changes
I'm in Grade 9 and I have changed a lot.（引出话题）First, I used to play sports after school, but now I don't have time to do it anymore. I'm really busy with my studies. Second, I have made much progress in English. I used to be weak in it.But with my English teacher's help, now I often get good scores on my English exams. What's more, I'm more outgoing than I used to be.I used to be afraid of speaking in front of people. But now I can give a speech in public. I've also made many friends.（过去与现在的变化）
These are my changes. What about yours （结束语）
THANKS

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