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如何写推荐信
[基本框架]
推荐信一般采用三段式：
1．开头——概括说明要推荐的内容；
2．主体——从表面和深层两方面叙述推荐的东西的价值；
3．结尾——简单归纳总结或表达期待与感谢。
[常用词块]
1．offer sb. some recommendations向某人提议
2．make a big decision做出一个重大的决定
3．choose the hotel on their recommendation根据他们的推荐选了这家酒店
4．as far as I'm concerned我认为
5．a well known tourist attraction一个著名的旅游胜地
6．a suitable candidate一位合适的人选
7．with a deep sense of gratitude怀着深深的谢意
8．have a wide range of uses有广泛的用途
9．take into consideration the candidates' experience and qualifications考虑到候选人的经验和资格
10．the value of regular exercise经常锻炼的好处
学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封80词左右的信，推荐这两类书，并分别说明推荐理由。
注意：信的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Wang，
I'll be glad if you can consider my recommendations.
Yours sincerely，
Li Yue
[学生习作]　
Dear Mr. Wang，
Knowing that our library is going to buy books，I'd like to give some suggestions.
We need popular science books most. Usually popular science books explain basic rules of nature in a simple and interesting way.They help us understand the world better and make us curious about scientific discoveries.Besides reading for knowledge，we read for fun and inspiration.That is why I recommend another kind of books：literary books.They were written by famous writers and they present great thoughts，offer us joy and encourage us to think differently.
I'll be glad if you can consider my recommendations.
Yours sincerely，
Li Yue
点评：
1．文章结构合理，详略得当，重点突出；
2．文中不乏亮点词汇或句式，例如for fun and inspiration, recommend, that is why, present (呈现，表达)，offer，differently...
3．不足之处：有些句子还有升格空间。
[升格作文]　
Dear Mr. Wang，
Knowing that our library is going to buy books，I'd like to give some suggestions.
What we need most are popular science books.Usually popular science books explain basic rules of nature in a simple and interesting way.They help us understand the world better and make us curious about scientific discoveries.Besides reading for knowledge，we read for fun and inspiration.That is why I recommend another kind of books：literary books.Written by famous writers，they present great thoughts, offer us joy and encourage us to think differently.
I'll be glad if you can consider my recommendations.
Yours sincerely，
Li Yue
假定你是李华，你的朋友张柯发邮件，就买什么样的英语词典征求你的建议。请你回复邮件，推荐他买电子词典，内容包括：
1．方便、快捷；
2．内置几部词典、能发音；
3．能储存资料。
注意：词数80左右。
参考词汇：内存RAM
【参考范文】
Dear Zhang Ke，
I've got your e mail and think it a wise choice to buy an electronic dictionary.
To begin with，an electronic dictionary much smaller than the common one is convenient to carry.Additionally，you can get what you want in it immediately.Also it has several dictionaries and you can store material as much as possible because there is RAM in it.What makes it outstanding from others is that it can give you a vivid，clear and correct pronunciation.
I do hope my suggestions will be useful to you.
Yours，
Li Hua倡议书
[基本框架]
倡议书一般包括三段：
第一段：点明发起倡议的背景和目的；
第二段：列举倡议的具体内容和要求；
第三段：发出呼吁。
[常用词块]
1．in order to do sth./for the purpose of为了……
2．should/be supposed to/ought to do sth.应该做某事
3．form the/a habit of...养成……的习惯
4．require sb. to do sth.要求某人做某事
5．be beneficial to/be of (great) benefit to/do good to对……有益
6．be helpful to/be of great help to对……有所帮助
7．try/do one's best 尽某人最大的努力
8．devote oneself to致力于； 献身于
9．take action/measures/steps采取行动/措施
10．call on/appeal to sb. to do sth.号召/呼吁某人做某事
端午节将至。请你以校学生会的名义写一份倡议书，内容包括：
1．中国传统节日的重要意义；
2．你校打算怎样过端午节。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[学生习作]
Dear schoolmates，
Traditional Chinese festivals are of great importance and they should be well celebrated and maintained．That's because they can teach us about our nation's history as well as give us opportunities to learn about fine Chinese values．Besides，they are also sources of national pride．
Therefore, on the day of the coming Dragon Boat Festival，an activity of making and eating zongzi at the school has been designed for us students．The festival is best known for its dragon boat races．Schools，especially those in Southern China where there are many rivers and lakes should organize students to take part in or just watch the races．
In a word，it's everyone's duty to celebrate traditional Chinese festivals and give up the foreign ones. I hope everybody will be actively involved in the action.
The Students' Union
点评：
1．文章中运用了很多中高级词汇，如of great importance, maintain, as well as, opportunity, be designed for等；
2．文中有些句式还有升格空间：如开头的并列句可改为复合句。
[升格作文]
Dear schoolmates，
Traditional Chinese festivals，which are of great importance，should be well celebrated and maintained.That's because they can teach us about our nation's history as well as give us opportunities to learn about fine Chinese values.Besides，they are also sources of national pride.
Therefore，on the day of the coming Dragon Boat Festival，an activity of making and eating zongzi at the school has been designed for us students．We think it's necessary for us to celebrate traditional Chinese festivals and give up the foreign ones．
So we hope everybody will be actively involved in the activity，especially those good at making zongzi．
The Students' Union
假设你所在社区是幸福社区，该社区开展践行社会主义核心价值观的活动，请你代表幸福社区工作委员会，围绕“实现中国梦”为主题， 写一份倡议书。倡议内容包括：
1．爱国、爱家；
2．诚信、友善；
3．和谐、文明。
注意：1.词数80左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
A Letter of Appeal
Dear fellow citizens，
Xingfu Community Work Committee
November 4, 2023
【参考范文】
A Letter of Appeal
Dear fellow citizens，
Our government is aiming to realize the Chinese Dream.I think it is every citizen's duty to work hard to achieve this goal.
Firstly, we should love our motherland and our hometown.Secondly, we should be honest and friendly.Last but not least, we should try our best to build a harmonious and civilized community.Only in this way can we make our home a more beautiful place.
Let's take action at once and try our best to work hard together towards the Chinese Dream!
Xingfu Community Work Committee
November 4, 2023如何写建议信
[基本框架]
1．开头——简要描述现象，表示理解；
2．主体——对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，提出自己的建议；
3．结尾——希望建议有帮助，并给予适当鼓励。
[常用词块]
1．offer some suggestions提供一些建议
2．go jogging every evening每天晚上慢跑锻炼
3．join one or two sports clubs加入一两个体育俱乐部
4．a number of sports许多体育运动
5．provide a wide variety of activities提供丰富的活动
6．as far as I am concerned 就我而言
7．spare no effort to do sth.不遗余力去做……
8．make good use of 充分利用
假如你是李华。你的好朋友Peter最近身体很弱，想参加一些运动，但是不知道什么运动合适，特写信来征求你的建议。请你回一封信，建议他去打乒乓球，内容包括：
1．对乒乓球的认识；
2．打乒乓球的要领；
3．打乒乓球的好处。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯、通顺。
[学生习作]　
Dear Peter，
I'm sorry to hear that you are weak because of lack of exercise.I recommend you table tennis.
①Table tennis is a sport and an art，because it need strength and skill.②When you play table tennis，you should judge the direction of the ball，and hitted it back with great strength.And after one game you will be very tired if you have tried your best.So，it is not a so called“light exercise”．
I think playing table tennis can build you up.Hope you will join me in playing table tennis.
Yours，
Li Hua
点评：
1．本篇习作结构布局合理，但出现了两处低级语病，如it need和hitted。
2．某些句子还可以升格，如①句和②句。
3．文中一些词汇运用得比较好，比如 recommend sb.sth.，with great strength等。
[升格作文]　
Dear Peter，
I'm sorry to hear that you are weak because of lack of exercise.I recommend you table tennis.
Table tennis is not only a sport but also an art，because it is a game that needs strength and skill.When playing table tennis，you should judge the direction of the ball，and hit it back with great strength.And after one game you will be very tired if you have tried your best.So，it is not a so called“light exercise”．
I think playing table tennis can build you up.Hope you will join me in playing table tennis.
Yours，
Li Hua
假如你是大学一年级新生李华。开学之初，你的英语老师Ms Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议。请用英语给她写一封信，内容包括：
1．你对英语学习的认识；
2．英语学习存在的主要问题；
3．对英语教学的建议(至少两条)。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Ms Li，
I'm very happy to have you as our English teacher.
Thank you!
Yours，
Li Hua
【参考范文】　
Dear Ms Li，
I'm very happy to have you as our English teacher.
As the world is becoming a global village，English is getting more and more important，so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.
My English is just OK but I feel it difficult to learn words by heart，and I often feel nervous when speaking English.I really hope that you can give me some advice on how to memorize new words.Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking.I believe we can make much progress in English with your help.
Thank you!
Yours，
Li Hua如何写影评
[基本框架]
文章基本结构为“三段式”：
第一段：电影简介。
第二段：情节介绍。
第三段：对电影的评价。
[常用词块]
1．as we can see 正如我们所看到的那样
2．was adapted from a novel with the same title由同名小说改编
3．is based on a real life incident以真实事件为蓝本
4．was directed by由……执导
5．tell an interesting story讲述一个有趣的故事
6．is set in London以伦敦为背景
请根据下面的材料，写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍电影《夜宴》。
Night Banquet《夜宴》
Stars(Cast)：Zhang Ziyi(章子怡)，Daniel Wu(吴彦祖)，Zhou Xun(周迅)，Ge You(葛优)
Director：Feng Xiaogang(冯小刚)
Plot：这部电影根据莎士比亚(Shakespeare)的《哈姆雷特》(Hamlet)改编。该片讲述了中国的五代十国时期，宫廷中人与人之间争权夺利的故事。
Review & comments：这是一部历史武打题材的电影。冯小刚用激动人心的故事向我们诠释了正义和勇气的含义。这部电影堪称精品，百看不厌。
[学生习作]　
Night Banquet is a history and martial arts film.①It is Feng Xiaogang's another masterpiece.②And it is directed by Feng Xiaogang.Zhang Ziyi，Zhou Xun，Ge You，and Daniel Wu star in the film.
③The film is based on Shakespeare's Hamlet.④It is set in ancient China during the Period of Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms.It tells of a fight for power and interests in the court between different people.
Feng Xiaogang has used an exciting story to examine the ideas of courage and justice.So I'd like to recommend it to you all.
点评：
1．本篇习作布局合理，符合影评的“三段式”基本结构。
2．文章中运用了be directed by，be based on，recommend sth.to sb.等词汇，表达准确、恰当。
3．个别语句之间还存在优化整合空间，比如，
用过去分词作定语合并句①和句②；
用非限制性定语从句合并句③和句④。
[升格作文]　
Night Banquet is a history and martial arts film.It is another masterpiece directed by Feng Xiaogang.Zhang Ziyi，Zhou Xun，Ge You，and Daniel Wu star in the film.
The film，which is based on Shakespeare's Hamlet，is set in ancient China during the Period of Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms.It tells of a fight for power and interests in the court between different people.
Feng Xiaogang has used an exciting story to examine the ideas of courage and justice.So I'd like to recommend it to you all.
请根据电影《功夫熊猫》写一篇80词左右的影视评论。写作要点：
1．故事以China's Valley of Peace为背景；
2．从一只普通熊猫被选为神龙勇士(the Dragon Warrior)到成为功夫大师的过程；
3．发表自己的看法。
参考词汇：《功夫熊猫》Kung Fu Panda
【参考范文】
Kung Fu Panda tells a story about a fat，big panda that can perform martial arts.It is set in China's Valley of Peace，where there are only a group of animals who can speak.
At first，the panda works for his father in a noodle shop and is only a common panda.By accident，he is chosen to be the Dragon Warrior.Finally，he realizes the truth to be a master of Kung Fu is that you will succeed if you believe in yourself.
It is considered one of the greatest cartoons.It is popular among teenagers.

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