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[基本框架]
1．开头——开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点(state your idea)；
2．主体——对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence)；
3．结尾——呼应开头，重申观点(restate your opinion)。
注意事项：
1．开门见山，直入主题。在书信正文的开头找准话题的切入点，自然而然地引出自己想要谈的主题。写信时要充分了解情况，有的放矢，以提高书信的针对性。
2．给出希望对方采取或者终止某种行为的理由。在陈述理由的过程中要换位思考，尽量为对方考虑。要用事实说话，以增强说服力。
3．语气要和缓，让对方考虑你的想法或者建议，以理服人是关键，不能把自己的想法强加于人。
4．给出合理建议，通过提建议让对方明确行动的方向，从而达到写信的最终目的。
[常用词块]
1．I think it would be a good idea if...
如果……我认为这是个好主意
2．In my opinion it would be wise to...
依我看，做……是明智的
3．I suggest that you should...
我建议你应该……
4．In my opinion，you'd better...
我认为你最好……
5．I advise you to...我建议你……
6．If I were you，I would...
如果我是你的话，我会……
7．Why not...？/Why don't you...
为什么不……？
8．How about...？/What about...
……怎么样？
假如你是李华，你的好朋友苏珊最近和妈妈发生了争吵，好几天不说话了。为此她非常烦恼，想让你给出一些主意。请你根据下面的提示写一封建议信。
1．认真考虑自己的行为；
2．尽量理解妈妈，明白她所做的都是为自己好；
3．找个机会主动和妈妈聊天，了解妈妈的真实想法；
4．适当赞美妈妈并道歉。
注意：1.词数80左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Susan，
I'm sorry to hear that you have argued with your mother and you're feeling sad now.
Yours，
Li Hua
【学生习作】
Dear Susan，I'm sorry to hear that you have argued with your mother and you're feeling sad now.I understand your feelings.Here is some advice helpful to you.Firstly，if you think it over，you'll find that you're likely to have done something wrong.For example，you shouldn't have argued with your mother.Secondly，you should learn to understand your mother.After all，she's willing to do anything that will make you happy.Thirdly，find a chance to have a talk with your mother and it will help you understand each other better.Lastly，try to do something for your mother and it will make her happy.I wish you all the best.Yours，Li Hua 点评：1.文章结构安排合理；2.个别句式还有升格的空间；3.过渡衔接比较单调；4.句式结构还可以更丰富。
【升格作文】
Dear Susan，
I'm sorry to hear that you have argued with your mother and you're feeling sad now.I understand your feelings.Here is some advice which I think will help you.
First of all，think it over，and you'll find you're likely to have done something wrong.For example，you shouldn't have argued with your mother.Secondly，you should learn to understand your mother.After all，she's willing to do anything that will make you happy.Thirdly，find a chance to have a talk with your mother，which will help you understand each other better.Last but not least，try to do something for your mother，which will make her happy.
I wish you all the best.
Yours，
Li Hua
假定你是李华，你的好朋友Mary因搬家换了一所新学校，因不知如何结交新朋友而感到苦恼。请你根据下面的提示写一封建议信。
1．表示理解与同情；
2．提出建议；
3．表达祝愿。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mary，
I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble making new friends in your new school.
Hope my advice will be of great help to you.
Yours，
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mary，
I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble making new friends in your new school.There is no need to be anxious about making new friends，because many teenagers find they meet the same situation when in a new environment.The problem is easy to solve，if you take my advice.
First of all，communicate with your classmates more often.As it may help you develop a close relationship with them.Besides，why not join in activities and discussions held in your class？If you do this，you can make friends easily.Last but not least，it is a good idea to help others whenever possible.
Hope my advice will be of great help to you.
Yours，
Li Hua介绍类文章
[基本框架]
1．开头——先总体介绍一个好的朋友应该是怎样的；
2．主体——然后再分别介绍一个好的朋友必须具备的几种品质；
3．结尾——最后进行总结。
[常用词块]
1．a boy with great ability一个能干的男孩
2．a promising writer 一位有前途的作家
3．spare no effort to do sth.不遗余力地去做某事
4．have a wide range of interests 兴趣广泛
5．get on well with 与……相处融洽
6．a considerate person 体贴别人的人
7．be willing to help others 乐于助人
8．be expert in/at 善于……
9．be in good health/shape/condition身体健康
10．gain scholarship 获得奖学金
11．gain/win the first prize/place 获得一等奖/第一名
12．be awarded with the title of 获得……的称号/头衔
13．make great contributions to对……作出巨大贡献
14．set a good example to sb.为某人树立好榜样
15．to one's credit 值得赞扬的是
16．care about sb. 关心某人
17．show respect for sb. 尊重某人
18．be rude/kind to sb.对某人无礼/和蔼可亲
假如你是李华，你的同学Lucy发现被好朋友欺骗了，很是苦恼，不知道还该不该继续她们的友谊。于是她向你询问“什么是真正的朋友？”请你根据下面的提示给她写一封电子邮件。
1．真正朋友的特点是：……
2．学着去了解别人，找到真正的好朋友；
3．表达祝愿。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Lucy，
I'm sorry to hear that your best friend has tricked you.
Yours，
Li Hua
【学生习作】
Dear Lucy，I'm sorry to hear that your best friend has tricked you.I'd like to offer you some advice.Before you make a decision，you'd better think the whole thing through.Your friend really tricked you on purpose.It's time for you to let go of your friendship.First of all，a good friend is a person you can trust.Secondly，when you will get into trouble，your friend will try to help you out.That is，a good friend should be helpful.Thirdly，a good friend should be understanding.Whenever you feel sad or lone，he/she is willing to spare some time to keep you company.I hope that you will find a truly good friend and he/she will also value you very much.Yours，Li Hua 点评：1.左栏的文章中运用了含状语从句、宾语从句、定语从句等的复合句。2.offer，think through，trick，on purpose，let go of，get into trouble，help...out，helpful，understanding，be willing to do，spare some time to do sth，keep pany，truly，value等的应用也恰到好处。3.文中含有时态错误(如when you will get into trouble)和词语误用(lone应为lonely)。4.分段不合理，如将第二、三段合并为一段，全文采用三段式就好了。
【升格作文】
Dear Lucy，
I'm sorry to hear that your best friend has tricked you.I'd like to offer you some advice.
Before making a decision，you'd better think the whole thing through.If your friend really tricked you on purpose，it's time for you to let go of your friendship.Firstly，a good friend is a person you can trust.Secondly，when you get into trouble，your friend will try to help you out.Thirdly，a good friend should be understanding.Whenever you feel sad or lonely，he/she is willing to spare some time to keep you company.
I hope that you will find a truly good friend who will also value you very much.
Yours，
Li Hua
假定你是李华，希望通过外籍老师John找一位英语笔友。请写一封信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括：
1．年龄；
2．性别；
3．爱好(旅游、运动、养宠物等)。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear John，
I'm writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favour.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear John，
I'm writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favour.
I want to have a penfriend，hopefully a girl in her early twenties.She should be interested in travelling，swimming，and playing table tennis.Besides，it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home.With such a penfriend，I hope we can share with her our experiences in travelling，taking care of pets and so on.I hope I will improve my English by doing so.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua观点类文章
[基本框架]
本单元要求写一篇陈述观点的议论文。此类议论文一般采用“三段式”写法：
1．开头——提出一种现象或某个观点作为议论的话题。
2．主体——全文的主要部分，对提出的问题进行分析，运用材料对观点进行论述，列出2～3个赞成或反对的理由。
3．结尾——对主体部分进行概括，用一两句话来阐明自己的观点，构成“总——分——总”结构。
[常用词块]
1．表达支持的：
Some are in favour of ...一些人赞同……
Some support...一些人支持……
The majority of them think...
大多数人认为……
Many of them are for...
他们很多人赞成……
There are many advantages of...
……有很多优点
...play an important part in...
……在……发挥了重要作用
...be of vital significance...
……有极其重要的意义
...benefit a lot from ...
……从……受益很多
2．表达反对的：
Others are against ...一些人反对……
Some hold the different view that ...
一些人持不同的观点……
There are also some disadvantages of ...……也有一些不利因素
3．承接词汇：
firstly；secondly；besides；in addition；what's more；furthermore；in a word；even worse ...首先/其次/除外/另外/还有/进而/总之/更糟的是
4．引出另一方观点的转折词汇：
however；on the other hand；while；on the contrary；whereas ...不过/另一方面/然而/恰恰相反/但是
5．表明作者的看法及理由：
in my opinion/in my view/personally，I think...就本人而言，我认为……
Taking everything into consideration，we should make good use of...
总体考虑，我们应该充分利用……
Only in this way can we do...
只有这样，我们才能……
假如你是李华，你们学校就“青少年是否应该整容”的问题进行讨论，要求每个同学用书信的形式投稿，发表自己的意见。请根据下面的提示写一封信。
1．你的观点：青少年不应该整容；
2．你的理由：对身体有害；分散学习的注意力；中学生过分注重外表不合适……
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Editor，
I'm Li Hua.I'm writing to express my opinions about whether teenagers should have plastic surgery.
Yours，
Li Hua
【学生习作】
Dear Editor，I'm Li Hua.I'm writing to express my opinions about whether teenagers should have plastic surgery.I strongly believe that teenagers shouldn't have plastic surgery.Firstly，a teenager should not care about his/her appearance too much.He/She should concentrate on his/her lessons.In other words，a teenager should improve himself/herself by working hard.Secondly，a teenager is still growing and such surgery is likely to harm his/her health.Some teenagers had plastic surgery and it stopped them from returning to a normal life.Therefore，they regret having the surgery.In a word，a teenager should keep away from plastic surgery，read more books and lead a meaningful life.Yours，Li Hua 点评：1.文章中包含了所有要点，并且结构清晰、合理，语句连贯。2.文章的不足之处是语言不够丰富，有些句子之间存在一定的逻辑关系，所以语言需要优化整合，实现升格。①用同位语从句改写第二段的第一句。I strongly hold the view that teenagers shouldn't have plastic surgery.②用not...but...把第二段的第二句和第三句连成一句。Firstly，a teenager should not care about his appearance too much，but concentrate on his/her lessons.③用定语从句改写第二段的第六句。Some teenagers had plastic surgery，which stopped them from returning to a normal life.
【升格作文】
Dear Editor，
I'm Li Hua.I'm writing to express my opinions about whether teenagers should have plastic surgery.
I strongly hold the view that teenagers shouldn't have plastic surgery.Firstly，a teenager should not care about his/her appearance too much，but concentrate on his/her lessons.In other words，a teenager should improve himself/herself by working hard.Secondly，a teenager is still growing and such surgery is likely to harm his/her health.Some teenagers had plastic surgery，which stopped them from returning to a normal life.Therefore，they regret having the surgery.
In a word，a teenager should keep away from plastic surgery，read more books and lead a meaningful life.
Yours，
Li Hua
近日教育部(the Ministry of Education)要求加强中小学劳动教育，这一举措引发了人们的热议。请你根据下面表格中的内容，写一篇短文向校报英文版投稿。
学生的观点 一部分学生：劳动教育意义重大，有助于他们的全面发展。另一部分学生：劳动教育占用学习时间，影响成绩。
你的观点 ……
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Recently，the Ministry of Education has issued a requirement that students should be given labor education while at school，which has immediately led to a heated debate.
The students are divided.Some think that labor education is of great value，helping them grow into well rounded individuals.Others believe it will take up their time，having a negative effect on their grades.
It's true that students are given little chance of laboring nowadays，thus lacking the sense of labor.In my opinion，students should receive labor education so that they'll value more what labor brings about.倡议书
[基本框架]
1．开头——点明发出倡议的目的；
2．主体——详细说明倡议的内容；
3．结尾——对特定对象发出呼吁。
注意事项：该体裁观点鲜明，情感真挚。观点鲜明，显示着说话者对一种理性认识的肯定，也显示着说话者对客观事物见解的透彻程度，能给人以可信性和可靠感，情感真挚才能打动人，引起共鸣。
[常用词块]
1．Nowadays，...As high school students，what should we do
现在，…… 作为高中生，我们应该做些什么呢？
2．In order to ...I think we should try our best to do whatever we can.
为了……我认为我们应该尽最大努力。
3．Now I would like to call on everyone to pay attention to...
现在我想要呼吁大家关注……
4．In my opinion，we should ...Only in this way can we ....
在我看来，我们应该…… 只有用这样的方法我们才能……
5．It would be better if ...
如果……，那就更好了。
6．It is high time that we ...
是我们……的时候了。
7．As long as we work together，we can...
只要我们团结，就能……
8．If you are willing to ...，please...
如果你愿意……，请……
越来越多的汽车进入了我们的家庭，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如堵车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来了极大的危害。请你以学生会的名义，就交通安全问题用英语给全体学生写一封倡议书。内容包括：
1．遵守交通规则，如走人行道/过斑马线；
2．别在街道或马路上玩耍；
3．劝父母不要酒后驾车。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：斑马线zebra crossing
【学生习作】
Dear schoolmates，More and more cars are coming into our families and we are happy that they have greatly improved our life.But unluckily，they have also brought many problems，such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.Traffic safety is everybody's business.We must obey the rules.For example，we must walk on the sidewalks，when we cross zebra crossing，stop，look right and left，and then go across fast.Don't play on the road.We can tell our parents not to drink before they drive，not to run through red lights，not to talk and laugh while they are driving.Cars are coming into our life，but we can be safe to drive on roads and walk on sidewalks only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business.The Students' Union 点评：1.文章主体结构安排欠合理：第二段可以分成两段。2.句式较为单调：有些句子可以适当整合以提升句子质量，增强表达效果。　3.词汇选择以初级词汇为主：应多用一些高级词汇。
【升格作文】
Dear schoolmates，
With more and more cars coming into our families，we are happy that they have greatly improved our life.But unluckily，they have also brought many problems，such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.
Traffic safety is everybody's business.We must obey the rules.For example，we must walk on the sidewalks，when we cross zebra crossing，stop，look right and left，and then go across fast.Don't play on the road.We can tell our parents not to drink before they drive，not to run through red lights，not to talk and laugh while driving.
Let's take immediate action!
The Students'Union
假定你是某国际学校的学生李华，你校正在开展“创建美丽校园”的活动。请你用英语给全校学生写一封倡议书。要点包括：
1．创建美丽校园的重要性；
2．校园内存在的不文明现象；
3．你的态度。
注意：1.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear fellow students，
I'm writing to call on everyone to take an active part in building a beautiful campus.
Yours，
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear fellow students，
I'm writing to call on everyone to take an active part in building a beautiful campus.
As we know，we spend most of our time on campus.An attractive campus can make our learning pleasant and as a result improve our grades.However，some students can be seen running on the lawn，picking flowers.Some even spit in public or throw rubbish everywhere.
It's time we did something to change the situation.I think everyone is responsible for the beauty of our campus and if each of us avoids doing anything improper，our campus will no doubt become more beautiful.Every effort matters.Let's take action now!
Yours，
Li Hua

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