Unit 7 What s the highest mountain in the world?话题作文(含解析) - 2023-2024学年八年级下册英语同步检测(人教新目标Go for it!)

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Unit 7 What s the highest mountain in the world?话题作文(含解析) - 2023-2024学年八年级下册英语同步检测(人教新目标Go for it!)

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Unit 7 What’s the highest mountain in the world
话题作文
1.大熊猫丫丫的“回家之旅”屡上热搜,又一次提高了人们对大熊猫保护工作的关注。假如你和你的同桌正在参加学校举办的以Giving pandas a good life为主题的英文手抄报评选。你的同桌负责手抄报的绘制,而你负责文本的撰写。请根据如下提示,完成一篇英语短文。
注意:
(1)短文必须包括所有要点,并适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(3)词数 80—100;标题已给出,不计入总词数。
Giving pandas a good life
What animal has 6 fingers and wears a black and white coat Yes, it’s the panda!
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【范文】
Giving pandas a good life
What animal has 6 fingers and wears a black and white coat Yes, it’s the panda! Pandas are so popular because they are cute and shy. They are also friendly to people. They like eating bamboo. It seems that they like sleeping all day if possible.
It is known that pandas are endangered. For one thing, many people cut down lots of trees so they may have terrible living conditions. For another, they may die of illnesses easily because many of them are out of protection.
I hope the government can build more natural panda homes. Also, it is necessary that everyone should treat them as our friends and protect their homes.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。以猜谜语的形式开头介绍熊猫;
第二步,从熊猫的个性、生活习惯、危险及措施等方面具体介绍;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己的感受,提出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①be friendly to对……友好
②It seems that似乎
③cut down砍伐,减少
④die of死于
[高分句型]
①Pandas are so popular because they are cute and shy.(because引导原因状语从句)
②I hope the government can build more natural panda homes.(宾语从句)
2.假如你是李华,今天你们班召开了“敬畏自然,保护野生动物”的主题班会,此次活动让你认识到保护野生动物的重要性。班会后,你打算写一份英文倡议书投到你校英文校报,以此号召全校同学行动起来,为保护野生动物而努力。
描述现状 数量减少、消失
分析现状主要原因 栖息地变少、人类的捕杀……
改变现状的措施 保护环境、拒绝野味……(自行补充一点)
发出呼吁 号召同学们行动起来
要求:
1. 词数不少于80(倡议书的开头已经给出,不计入总词数);
2. 内容须包括图示中的所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 不得出现真实姓名;
4. 条理清晰,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范。
Dear fellow students,
Wild animals are our friends. We live on the same earth. So protecting them is protecting ourselves.
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【范文】
Dear fellow students,
Wild animals are our friends. We live on the same earth. So protecting them is protecting ourselves.
As far as we know, the number of wild animals is smaller and smaller. Even some wild animals have died out. Why do wild animals face problems like this
On one hand, people cut trees and pollute the environment, so they are losing their homes. They have no place to live in. They don’t have enough food to eat. On the other hand, people kill them all the time. As middle school students, what can we do to save wild animals
First, I think everyone should take part in protecting the environment and we must refuse to eat wild animals. We should learn to live with animals in peace. Second, we should read more books and learn more about the situation of animals and protection measures. Finally, we should volunteer for animal protection and ask people not to kill animals.
I hope everyone can do something to protect wild animals so that we can have a wonderful world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:材料已给出,写作时注意表述清晰,做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头;
第二步,详细描述野生动物的现状,引出原因;
第三步,具体分析现状的主要原因;
第四步,提出改变现状的具体实施方案;
第五步,号召同学们行动起来。
[亮点词汇]
①As far as we know据我们所知
②die out灭绝
③On one hand一方面
④On the other hand另一方面
⑤take part in参加
⑥in peace和平地
⑦so that以便
[高分句型]
①On one hand, people cut trees and pollute the environment, so they are losing their homes.(状语从句:由so引导结果状语从句)
②First, I think everyone should take part in protecting the environment and we must refuse to eat wild animals.(宾语从句:由that引导宾语从句跟在think后,其中that已省略)
③I hope everyone can do something to protect wild animals so that we can have a wonderful world.(宾语从句:由that引导宾语从句跟在hope后,其中that已省略;状语从句:由so that引导结果状语从句)
3.你听说过某些濒临灭绝的动物吗?请以“Why Should We Protect Wild Animals ”为题,写一篇英语短文,说明为什么要保护野生动物。词数为80左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
提示:
1. 为什么有些野生动物处于危险之中;
2. 为什么保护野生动物很重要;
3. 我们应该采取什么措施来保护野生动物。
参考词汇:endangered濒危的;wildlife野生动物
Why Should We Protect Wild Animals
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【范文】
Why Should We Protect Wild Animals
Do you know any endangered animals Why are they in danger
I think there are many endangered animals in the world, such as tigers and pandas. When farmers cut down trees, tigers can no longer hide themselves or hunt for food. Many tigers are killed by people who want to sell their fur for money. And there are few places where pandas can live.
We are not alone in the world. We human beings could not live without all the plants and animals around us. So protecting wildlife animals is very important. We must take measures to keep plants from being destroyed and stop animals from being killed. If each of us can plant a tree and build a birdhouse, the world will be more beautiful. It is very easy but
useful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要求已给出,注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍濒危的动物有哪些以及原因;
第二步,介绍保护野生动物的重要性;
第三步,给出如何保护野生动物的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①in danger处于危险之中
②no longer不再
③take measures to do采取措施做某事
[高分句型]
①I think there are many endangered animals in the world, such as tigers and pandas.(省略that的宾语从句)
②When farmers cut down trees, tigers can no longer hide themselves or hunt for food.(when引导的时间状语从句)
③If each of us can plant a tree and build a birdhouse, the world will be more beautiful.(if引导的条件状语从句)
4.假如你是中国野生动物保护协会(CWCA)的成员,请你根据以下内容提示,以“Whales in Danger”为题,用英语写一篇文章,呼吁人们热爱动物、保护动物。
内容包括:
1. 简单介绍鲸鱼习性(food, place, interesting things…)
2. 分析鲸鱼现状及濒临灭绝的原因(至少2点)(in danger, kill, eat, pollution…)
3. 提出挽救、保护鲸鱼的方法(至少3点)(make rules, know, stop…)
Whales in Danger
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【范文】
Whales in Danger
Whales are huge animals. They live in the sea and eat small fish and other sea life. One interesting fact is that whales can jump high out of the water. Another interesting fact is that they can sing beautiful songs.
On one hand, some kinds of whales are in danger because humans kill them for meat, fat and oil. On the other hand, whales are also in danger because of water pollution.
We should protect whales by not putting rubbish into the sea and making rules on whale protection. What’s more, we are supposed to stop killing them. As students, we should learn more about them.
Take actions now! We need to hold together to protect whales.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简单介绍鲸鱼习性;
第二步,析鲸鱼现状及濒临灭绝的原因;
第三步,最后提出挽救、保护鲸鱼的方法。
[亮点词汇]
①On one hand...On the other hand一方面……另一方面
②because of因为
③what’s more而且
[高分句型]
①One interesting fact is that whales can jump high out of the water.(that引导的表语从句)
②On one hand, some kinds of whales are in danger because humans kill them for meat, fat and oil. (because引导的原因状语从句)
5.2023年4月,大熊猫丫丫结束了长达20年的旅美生活,平安回国,大熊猫的保护情况备受关注。假如你是李华,你校来了一批国际交换生,他们很关心大熊猫丫丫,你们学校制作了一个视频介绍丫丫并呼吁大家保护动物,请你为该视频写一段英文解说词。
内容包括:
1.大熊猫丫丫目前的基本情况(①被精心照顾;②…);
2.保护大熊猫的举措(①建立自然保护区;②… ③…);
3.倡议一起保护动物。
要求:
1.词数80左右(开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.要点齐全,可适当发挥;
3.条理清晰,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范。
参考词汇:自然保护区nature reserve
Boys and girls, welcome to our school! We know that you care about Yaya very much. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for your watching.
【范文】
Boys and girls, welcome to our school! We know that you care about Yaya very much. The giant panda Yaya is currently being carefully taken care of, with good physical recovery and good mental health. Luckily, our government is doing useful things to protect pandas. We have built a nature reserve for pandas in Sichuan. We plant more bamboo so that they have
enough food to eat. The number of the giant pandas is now increasing.
I hope everyone will love and protect these animals because they are one of the treasures of all human beings.
Thanks for your watching.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍大熊猫丫丫目前的基本情况。
第二步,介绍保护大熊猫的举措。
第三步,倡议一起保护动物。
[亮点词汇]
①care about关心
②take care of照顾
③nature reserve自然保护区
④the number of……的数目
⑤the treasures of ……的财富
[高分句型]
①We know that you care about Yaya very much.(that引导的宾语从句)
②The giant panda Yaya is currently being carefully taken care of, with good physical recovery and good mental health.(被动语态)
③We plant more bamboo so that they have enough food to eat.(so that引导的目的状语从句)
④I hope everyone will love and protect these animals because they are one of the treasures of all human beings.(because引导的原因状语从句)
6.Amy是你班一位新转来的学生,对于学校的社团一无所知。请你根据以下内容和提示发一封电子邮件给Amy,为她介绍学校的不同社团及其活动,并鼓励她积极加入,相信一定会有所收获。
Clubs Activities
Chinese Culture Club 了解中国传统文化,学习剪纸、制作中国结(Chinese knots)等传统技艺。
Cartoon Club 学习如何制作卡通画,并分享自己最喜欢的卡通片。
Wildlife Club 为濒危动物制作小档案; 了解有些野生动物濒危的原因;人类捕杀,树木被砍,失去家园。 措施:停止捕杀(自己补充一点)。
对社团的评价或收获;合理发挥1~2点。
注意:
1. 词数80词左右(文章开头、结尾已经给出,不计入词数,请根据要点提示适当发挥)。
2. 不得透露校区、班级、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Dear Amy,
I’m writing to introduce our school clubs to you. There are many different kinds of clubs in our school.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Amy,
I’m writing to introduce our school clubs to you. There are many different kinds of clubs in our school.
As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is attracting attention from all over the world, so Chinese Culture Club is very popular among students in our school. By joining the club, you can not only learn more about traditional Chinese culture, but also learn paper cutting, making Chinese knots and other traditional skills. I think you will be interested in them.
If you like cartoons, joining the Cartoon Club is also a good choice. Club members often get together to share their favorite cartoons, and besides that you can learn how to make cartoons by yourself, which is very interesting and challenging.
We also have the Wildlife Club. This is a group of boys and girls who love animals. You know I’m crazy about animals, so I joined Wildlife Club, too. We make profiles of animals that are in great danger. They are really poor. Lots of trees have been cut down and they have lost their homes. Human hunting and killing has also made them endangered. We have to take measures to protect them, such as stopping hunting, protecting their homes, making policies and so on.
Clubs make our school life more colorful, and we can make more friends in different clubs. That’s why I like our school clubs so much.
What do you think of these clubs Please tell me which club you like.I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中不同社团的活动要点,及最后对社团的评价或收获,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“简单介绍学校学校有很多社团”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“社团文化、社团活动、对社团的评价等”几个方面重点
介绍几个社团的具体情况;
第三步,书写结语。询问对方想法并表达“期待收到Amy回信”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①attract attention吸引注意
②not only...but also...不仅……而且……
③be crazy about...为……着迷
④take measures to do sth.采取措施做某事
[高分句型]
①Club members often get together to share their favorite cartoons, and besides that you can learn how to make cartoons by yourself, which is very interesting and challenging.(which引导的非限定性定语从句)
②That’s why I like our school clubs so much.(why引导的表语从句)
7.假设你是“绿色家园”环保组织的成员李明,现在正在向初中学生讲述植物的重要性并倡议学生们要保护它们。请根据下列要点写一篇关于植物的重要性(The Importance of Plants)的作文,可适当发挥,词数70词左右。
提示
(1)What plants can you see in our daily life
(2)What do plants need to grow well
(3)Why are plants important (至少三点)
提示词:environment环境
要求:1. 短文必须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
2. 不得出现真实人名地名校名。
3. 词数:不少于70词,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。书写规范整洁。
The Importance of Plants
My name is Li Ming. I am lucky to be here. Now, I want to say something about plants. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【范文】例文
The Importance of Plants
My name is Li Ming. I am lucky to be here. Now, I want to say something about plants.
Plants are very common in our daily life. There are many trees and flowers around us. Plants need sunlight and rain to grow well. They are very important to us. First, plants can provide us with fruit, medicine, wood and so on. Secondly, plants provide oxygen for human beings and beautify the environment. Finally, plants can also provide homes and enough food for animals and birds.
So we should protect the environment, and we should plant trees every year.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍日常生活中的植物;
第二步,介绍植物需要什么才能长得好;
第三步,最后介绍植物很重要的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①be important to对……重要
②provide sth for sb为某人提供某物
③beautify the environment美化环境
[高分句型]
So we should protect the environment, and we should plant trees every year.(and连接两个并列结构)
8.假设上周你和朋友一起去南京游玩,共游玩三天时间。请根据下表写一篇短文,
记录一下你们的旅游经历和感受。
Day Place Activity Feeling
the lst day Xuanwu Lake Park (玄武湖公园) go boating fun
the 2nd day Nanjing University (南京大学) visit and learn about the university excited
the 3rd day Tzu-chin Mountain (紫金山) climb the mountain and enjoy the view (景色) tired but proud
要求:1. 语句通顺,中心突出,合乎逻辑,书写规范。
2. 文中不能出现真实的姓名。
3. 100词左右。
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【范文】
Last week, I went on a three-day visit to Nanjing with my friends. On the first day we travelled to Xuanwu Lake Park. It was beautiful. And it was fun to go boating in the park. On the second day, we visited Nanjing University. It is an old university with a long history. It was so great and we felt excited. On the last day, we climbed Tzu-chin Mountain. It was hard work. Along the way we enjoyed the beautiful view. When we got to the top, we were tired but proud.
The trip is great and we look forward to tavelling there again.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:要点已给出,注意时态的使用,注意不要遗漏“记录旅游的感受”,适当添加细
节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总述旅行的时间及地点;
第二步,具体介绍每天的目的地及感受;
第三步,书写结语,表明游后的感受及期盼。
[亮点词汇]
① a three-day visit一个三天的旅行
② with a long history有着悠久的历史
③ look forward to期盼
[高分句型]
When we got to the top, we were tired but proud.(when引导的时间状语从句)
9.假定你是李华, 将参加《英语周报》组织的主题为 “How to protect endangered animals.”的征文比赛,请为此写一篇短文。
内容提示:
1. 保护濒危动物的原因;
2. 保护濒危动物的方法和措施(如:了解当地的濒危动物、不购买濒危动物皮毛 制品、报告非法捕猎、 保护濒危动物的家园等);
3. 发出号召。
注意:
1. 词数 80~100 词。开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2. 短文必须包括所给内容信息,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实姓名和校名。
How to protect endangered animals.
As we all know, protecting endangered animals is everyone’s responsibility.
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【范文】
How to protect endangered animals
As we all know, protecting endangered animals is everyone’s responsibility. Nowadays, a lot of animals are in great danger because of human behaviour. In my opinion, animals are our friends. We must protect them. Then how can we protect endangered animals
First, we should stop cutting down trees because the forest is home to many wild animals. If we stop polluting water, creatures like fish can live safely. Creating more nature reserves is very helpful. Secondly, we should stop buying things made of animal fur. What’s more, we should set some laws to protect these endangered animals.
Let’s take action from now on.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍动物所面临的危险;
第二步,介绍保护濒危动物的方法;
第三部,发出号召。
[亮点词汇]
①be in great danger处于极大的危险之中
②because of因为
③in my opinion在我来看
④cut down砍倒
[高分句型]
①If we stop polluting water, creatures like fish can live safely.(if引导条件状语从句)
②What’s more, we should set some laws to protect these endangered animals.(动词不定式作目的状语)
10.我们学校将组织以“I Want to Be a Volunteer of Protecting Animals”为主题的英语演讲比赛。 请你以李明的名义写一篇英语演讲稿来参加比赛, 内容要点下:
你的品质 善良, 善待动物
你的爱好 ……(至少两点)
你的事迹 为Save China’s Tigers 筹款(至少一点)
你的感悟 动物是人类的朋友, 保护动物就是保护我们自己
你的打算 ……(至少两点)
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【范文】
Hello everyone. I’m Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals. I’m glad to make a speech here.
I am kind to others. I like looking after homeless animals. I am generous and often donate my money to the local charities. I have ever raised money for Save China’s Tigers.
What’s more, I hand out-leaflets to ask people to protect animals. We should make friends with animals. I think protecting animals is protecting ourselves, so it is important for everyone to protect them.
If I can be a volunteer, I will work harder and do more meaningful things to protect animals. I will call on more people to love animals like me. I must try my best to make the world more beautiful.
Thanks for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,讲明写这篇演讲稿的原因——想成为保护动物的志愿者;
第二步,具体阐述自己的品质、爱好、保护动物的事迹以及自己的感悟;
第三步,最后讲述自己成为志愿者以后的打算。
[亮点词汇]
①be glad to do sth很高兴做某事
②What’s more另外
③call on sb to do sth号召某人做某事
[高分句型]
① I think protecting animals is protecting ourselves, so it is important for everyone to protect them.(动名词作主语)
②If I can be a volunteer, I will work harder and do more meaningful things to protect animals.(if引导的条件状语从句)

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