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专题10 英语作文
编者按：上海十六区二模完整齐全，深度解析，排版整齐。
（一）
（2024年宝山区二模）
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是李华，是希望中学的一名学生。现在你们班级英语课上的互动形式和内容都越来越丰富了，但有一个现象需要注意，就是当老师提出的问题学生不能及时回答时，有时候老师会代替学生回答，有时候也会出现较长时间的冷场。针对这种情况，请你给老师写一封邮件，提出你的意见和建议。你的文章必须包括：
简单描述你觉得能改变这种现象方法；
阐述你所提建议的理由。
（文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称）
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【答案】Dear Teacher,
I am Li Hua, a student from our esteemed school. Recently, I have noticed that our English classes have become increasingly interactive and engaging. However, there is a small aspect that I believe could be further improved upon.
Occasionally, when a question is posed and students hesitate to respond promptly, there are instances where you might answer on our behalf or a momentary lull ensues. To address this, I suggest implementing a few strategies. Firstly, we could be encouraged to discuss in small groups before sharing our thoughts with the class. Secondly, you could provide prompts or guiding questions to help us bridge the gap in our thinking.
The reason for these suggestions is twofold. Firstly, it would foster a more student-centered learning environment, encouraging active participation and critical thinking. Secondly, it would help build our confidence in speaking English, knowing that we have the support and space to explore our ideas.
Thank you for your dedication to our learning.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生假如是李华，是希望中学的一名学生。现在你们班级英语课上的互动形式和内容都越来越丰富了，但有一个现象需要注意，就是当老师提出的问题学生不能及时回答时，有时候老师会代替学生回答，有时候也会出现较长时间的冷场。针对这种情况，请你给老师写一封邮件，提出你的意见和建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
培养：foster→develop
建议：suggestion→advice
提出：pose→put forward
提供：provide→offer
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To address this, I suggest implementing a few strategies.
拓展句：If we want to address this, I suggest implementing a few strategies.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Recently, I have noticed that our English classes have become increasingly interactive and engaging. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Occasionally, when a question is posed and students hesitate to respond promptly, there are instances where you might answer on our behalf or a momentary lull ensues. (运用了when引导时间状语从句和where引导的限制性定语从句)
（二）
（2024年崇明区二模）
Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学的高三学生徐晶，你远在英国的朋友Anna前几天给你发来电子邮件，向你叙述了她未能成功入选校学生会的事情，为此一直闷闷不乐。恰巧你在图书馆看到下面图中英国前首相丘吉尔讲过的这句名言。你给Anna回一封邮件，用这句名言来劝慰和鼓励她。在邮件中你必须：
1.对Anna的失败表示同情；
2.用你对这句名言的理解和1-2个实例来劝慰和鼓励Anna。
注：不要在邮件中提及你的真实姓名和学校等相关信息。
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【答案】Dear Anna,
I’m sorry to hear about your unsuccessful bid for the student council. Failure can be tough but remember, as Winston Churchill said, “Success is not final, failure is not fatal; it is the courage to continue that counts.” So, don't let one small failure stand in your way.
Think of Edison, who failed thousands of times before inventing the light bulb. His courage to persevere led to a world-changing discovery. You, too, have the potential to overcome this setback. Don’t let this failure define you; let it be a stepping stone to greater success.
Keep going, Anna. It is your courage and determination that will lead you to new heights. I believe you will be selected successfully in the next election.
Best wishes,
Xu Jing
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于远在英国的朋友Anna前几天给你发来电子邮件，向你叙述了她未能成功入选校学生会的事情，为此一直闷闷不乐，恰巧你在图书馆看到下面图中英国前首相丘吉尔讲过的这句名言这一情况，给Anna回一封邮件，用这句名言来劝慰和鼓励她。
【详解】1.词汇积累
痛苦的：tough→ painful
挫折：setback→ frustration
克服：overcome→ conquer
决心：determination→ resolution
2.句式拓展
简单句变非谓语作状语
原句：I’m sorry to hear about your unsuccessful bid for the student council.
拓展句：Hearing about you failed in your bid for the student council, I feel so sorry.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Think of Edison, who failed thousands of times before inventing the light bulb.（运用了关系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句。）
【高分句型2】It is your courage and determination that will lead you to new heights.（运用了It is…that…的强调句式。）
（三）
（2024年奉贤区二模）
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
随着中国传统文化的复兴，汉服(Hanfu)作为一种独特的服饰文化，逐渐受到人们的关注和喜爱。假如你是明启中学的学生李华，你校正在向学生们征集新社团的创建意向。作为汉服爱好者，你准备成立汉服社，请给校委会写一封邮件表达你的想法。你的邮件需包含：
1. 成立该社团的目的；
2. 社团拟开展的活动及原因。
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【答案】
Dear School Committee,
I hope this email finds you well. My name is Li Hua, a student at Mingqi High School, and I am writing to propose the establishment of a Hanfu Club within our school community with the purpose of the revival of Hanfu clothing.
The activities that the Hanfu Club plans to undertake are as follows. At first, we will organize workshops to teach interested students about the history of Hanfu, its significance in Chinese culture, and how to wear it correctly. These sessions will be interactive and informative, allowing students to appreciate the beauty and elegance of Hanfu. Besides, the club will host cultural performances showcasing various aspects of traditional Chinese culture, with a focus on Hanfu. By engaging in these activities, we believe that the Hanfu Club can contribute to fostering a greater sense of cultural pride and identity among our student body.
Thank you for considering our proposal.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校委会写邮件，提出组建汉服社团的申请。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要性：significance → importance
得体地：correctly → decently
此外：besides → in addition
各种各样的：various → diverse
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：These sessions will be interactive and informative, allowing students to appreciate the beauty and elegance of Hanfu.
拓展句：These sessions will be interactive and informative, which allows students to appreciate the beauty and elegance of Hanfu.
【点睛】【高分句式1】The activities that the Hanfu Club plans to undertake are as follows.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
【高分句式2】By engaging in these activities, we believe that the Hanfu Club can contribute to fostering a greater sense of cultural pride and identity among our student body.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
（四）
（2024年虹口区二模）
Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生赵磊，你的外国朋友William一直对中国文化很感兴趣。近日，他在网上了解到有两个相关的线上节目（节目信息如下表所示），但他对节目选择有些茫然，想听听你的建议。请给William回复一封邮件，邮件内容须包括：
（1）推荐其中一个节目；
（2）通过比较两个节目的信息，说明你推荐该节目的理由。
节目名称 故宫里的国宝 Treasures of the Forbidden City 寻访中国美食 Exploring Chinese Cuisine
节目内容 介绍故宫里的国宝及其背后的故事 介绍中国传统美食及其烹饪方式
节目形式 纪录片 短视频
节目语言 英语解说 无字幕 (subtitles) 中文解说 英语字幕
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【答案】Dear William,
Having learnt you are interested in Chinese culture and that you cannot decide whether to opt for the Treasures of the Forbidden City or the Exploring Chinese Cuisine, I am writing to put forward my own idea that the second option might be more suitable for you.
The reasons behind the choice, as far as I can see, can be analyzed in three aspects. To begin with, as is universally acknowledged, delicious cuisine is always a popular topic around the whole world. In this programme, you will be introduced the process of making Chinese traditional food, which is also a part of the Chinese culture. In addition, it won't cost you much time since it is presented by short video, so that you can choose your time freely. Last but not least, although the programme is spoken in Chinese, there are English subtitles for you to have a full understanding of the content.
To sum up, it is advisable that you choose the second one. Hope the above might be of any help to you. Thank you for your time and wish you a great success in learning about the Chinese culture.
Yours,
Zhao Lei
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外国朋友William写一封邮件，给他提一些关于了解中国文化节目的选择建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
选择：option→choice
总之：to sum up→in short
普遍地：universally→widely
有帮助的：be of help→be helpful
2.句式拓展
改为复合句
原句：The reasons behind the choice, as far as I can see, can be analyzed in three aspects.
拓展句：The reasons why I made the choice can be analyzed in three aspects.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Having learnt you are interested in Chinese culture and that you cannot decide whether to opt for the Treasures of the Forbidden City or the Exploring Chinese Cuisine, I am writing to put forward my own idea that the second option might be more suitable for you.(运用了现在分词短语作状语和idea后that引导的同位语从句)
【高分句型2】To begin with, as is universally acknowledged, delicious cuisine is always a popular topic around the whole world.(运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
（五）
（2024年黄浦区二模）
Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
“人设”通常指人们向公众展示的自我，现在很多学生经常说“我的人设不能倒”。校学生会正在开展有关“人设能不能倒 (Can my public image fall apart )”的讨论，请你在学生会邮箱投稿，表达自己的想法。你的投稿须包括(文中请不要出现真实的校名和人名)：
1)你觉得自己的人设是什么？
2)你觉得你的人设能倒吗？为什么？
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【答案】范文
Can My Public Image Fall Apart
My public image is that of a diligent student and a responsible team player. I strive to maintain this image by consistently performing well academically and actively participating in school activities.
However, I believe that my public image can indeed fall apart. No one is perfect, and we all make mistakes. If I were to behave in a way that contradicts my established image, it would naturally collapse. This is not something to fear, as it provides an opportunity for growth and self-reflection. What’s important is to learn from our mistakes, adapt, and strive to rebuild a more authentic and sustainable image.
Therefore, while I aim to uphold my current public image, I am also open to the possibility of its fallibility.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封主题为“Can My Public Image Fall Apart ”的作文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要：be important→matter
机会：opportunity→chance
害怕：fear→scare
维持：uphold→sustain
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：My public image is that of a diligent student and a responsible team player. I strive to maintain this image by consistently performing well academically and actively participating in school activities.
拓展句：Since my public image is that of a diligent student and a responsible team player, I strive to maintain this image by consistently performing well academically and actively participating in school activities.
【点睛】[高分句型1] What’s important is to learn from our mistakes, adapt, and strive to rebuild a more authentic and sustainable image. (运用了what引导主语从句以及不定式to learn作表语)
[高分句型2] Therefore, while I aim to uphold my current public image, I am also open to the possibility of its fallibility. (运用了while引导让步状语从句)
（六）
（2024年嘉定区二模）
Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
你所在的小区附近将新建一个大型游乐场，很多居民表示不满。社区管理处决定征集居民意见并召开专题讨论会，作为居民代表，写一份讨论会发言稿，内容需包括：
1. 你认为新建大型游乐场可能会存在的问题(至少2个)；
2. 你对以上问题的建议和理由。
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【答案】Dear neighbors,
I am here as a resident representative to voice our concerns about the upcoming large amusement park near our community. While the idea sounds exciting, there are potential issues we must consider.
Firstly, noise pollution could become an important problem. The constant hustle and bustle of the amusement park might disturb our peace and quiet. Secondly, traffic congestion is another concern. The influx of visitors is likely to cause major traffic jams, affecting our daily commutes.
To address these issues, I propose conducting a thorough noise impact assessment and implementing noise reduction measures. Additionally, we should explore traffic management strategies to minimize congestion.
It's crucial for our voices to be heard and considered in this process. Let's work together to find solutions that benefit our community.
【解析】
【导语】这是一篇发言稿。要求考生作为居民代表就你所在的小区附近将新建一个大型游乐场，很多居民表示不满一事，写一份讨论会发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
变得：become→ turn into
重要的：important → significant
问题：problem→ issue
合作：work together→ team up
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：Firstly, noise pollution could become an important problem.
拓展句：Initially, the matter of noise pollution emerges as a significant concern.
【点睛】【高分句型1】While the idea sounds exciting, there are potential issues we must consider.（使用了关系代词that引导的定语从句，先行词为issues）
【高分句型2】To address these issues, I propose conducting a thorough noise impact assessment and implementing noise reduction measures.（使用了非谓语动词作状语）
（七）
（2024年金山区二模）
Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学的学生吴磊，你在英语一考中取得了118分的成绩，现在你正面临着是否参加6月份二考的选择，请谈谈你的想法。内容需包括：
1）说明你的选择；
2）阐述你的理由。
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【答案】范文
My Decision on the Second English Test
I'm Wu Lei, a student from Mingqi High School. I am writing to share my thoughts on whether to participate in the second English test scheduled for June. After careful consideration, I have decided to forego the second test.
My primary reason for this decision stems from the encouraging score of 118 I achieved in the first exam. This result indicates that I possess a solid foundation in the language, and I believe that with continued effort and dedication, I can further enhance my proficiency. Additionally, I recognize that my time is valuable, and I wish to utilize it effectively. Participating in the second test might not significantly impact my overall score, but it could potentially detract from my focus on other subjects and extracurricular activities.
In conclusion, I am confident in my current English proficiency and believe that my efforts should be directed towards maintaining and improving my performance in other areas. Therefore, I have chosen not to participate in the second English test.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是明启中学的学生吴磊，你在英语一考中取得了118分的成绩，现在你正面临着是否参加6月份二考的选择，请谈谈你的想法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：participate in→join in
此外：additionally→besides
提高：enhance→strengthen
总之：in conclusion→in short
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Additionally, I recognize that my time is valuable, and I wish to utilize it effectively.
拓展句：Additionally, after I recognize that my time is valuable, I wish to utilize it effectively.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am writing to share my thoughts on whether to participate in the second English test scheduled for June.(运用了特殊疑问词+不定式作宾语)
[高分句型2] In conclusion I am confident in my current English proficiency and believe that my efforts should be directed towards maintaining and improving my performance in other areas. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
（八）
（2024年静安区二模）
假设你是明启中学李华，你校艺术节即将举办主题为“最美瞬间”的摄影展，捕捉“热爱生活、积极向上、全面发展”等正能量的精彩瞬间。现邀请每位同学提供自己生活中的一张照片参展，并撰写摄影作品的介绍供参观者阅读。你打算提供什么样的照片？请写一篇短文作为参展摄影作品的介绍，内容包括：
1) 对该照片的简要描述；
2) 你选择该照片参展的理由。
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【答案】One possible version:
This is a photo depicting a sunrise over a misty mountain peak. In the image, the sun is just peeking over the horizon, casting a warm golden glow across the sky and illuminating the rolling clouds that cling to the mountain slopes.
I chose this photo for the exhibition because it captures a breathtaking moment of natural beauty and serenity. The vibrant colors of the sunrise symbolize hope and new beginnings, reflecting the theme that the art festival seeks to promote. Additionally, the tranquil atmosphere of the scene encourages viewers to pause and appreciate the wonders of nature, fostering a sense of mindfulness and gratitude. The photo invites viewers to connect with their surroundings and find inspiration in the simple joys of everyday life. It serves as a reminder to embrace each moment with enthusiasm and a positive outlook.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，参与学校艺术节即将举办的“最美瞬间”摄影展，为参展摄影作品写一篇介绍，需涵盖简要描述和选择的理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
描绘：depict→portrary
捕捉：capture→catch, seize
象征：symbolize→represent signify
激励某人做某事：encourage sb. to do→motivate sb. to do, inspire sb. to do
培养：foster→cultivate, develop
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：This is a photo depicting a sunrise over a misty mountain peak.
拓展句：This is a photo that depicts a sunrise over a misty mountain peak.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In the image, the sun is just peeking over the horizon, casting a warm golden glow across the sky and illuminating the rolling clouds that cling to the mountain slopes (运用了现在分词短语作状语、that引导限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I chose this photo for the exhibition because it captures a breathtaking moment of natural beauty and serenity. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)
（九）
（2024年浦东新区二模）
随着人工智能的快速发展，ChatGPT已进入我们的生活，正逐渐影响我们的学习方式和体验，有人认为它会带来诸多便利，也有人心存顾虑。假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，学校贴吧就此话题正在热议，你对此很感兴趣，决定回帖响应。回帖内容应包括：
1.你是否支持使用ChatGPT;
2.你的理由。
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【答案】As a student at Mingqi High School, I am intrigued by the ongoing discussion surrounding the integration of ChatGPT into our lives amidst the rapid development of artificial intelligence. Regarding the use of ChatGPT, I am cautiously supportive, recognizing both its potential benefits and concerns.
Firstly, I support the use of ChatGPT because of its convenience and accessibility. With ChatGPT, we have instant access to information and assistance, which can greatly enhance our learning experiences. Whether it’s clarifying concepts, practicing language skills, or receiving personalized feedback, ChatGPT offers valuable support that complements traditional learning methods.
Additionally, ChatGPT can foster creativity and exploration. By interacting with ChatGPT, students have the opportunity to engage in stimulating conversations, explore new ideas, and expand their knowledge in diverse subjects. This interactive learning experience can spark curiosity, inspire innovation, and encourage independent thinking among students.
However, I also acknowledge the need for caution when using ChatGPT. As with any technology, there are concerns about privacy, accuracy, and overreliance. It’s essential to use ChatGPT responsibly, critically evaluate the information it provides, and maintain a balance between technological assistance and independent learning.
In conclusion, while I support the use of ChatGPT as a valuable tool in education, it’s important to approach its integration thoughtfully and mindfully to maximize its benefits while addressing potential challenges. (word: 217)
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。随着人工智能的快速发展，ChatGPT已进入我们的生活，正逐渐影响我们的学习方式和体验，有人认为它会带来诸多便利，也有人心存顾虑。假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，学校贴吧就此话题正在热议，你对此很感兴趣，决定回帖响应。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提高，促进：enhance→prompt/facilitate
鼓励：inspire→motivate
重要的：essential→vital
总之：in conclusion→to conclude
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Firstly, I support the use of ChatGPT because of its convenience and accessibility.
拓展句：Firstly, I support the use of ChatGPT because it is convenient and accessible.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Whether it’s clarifying concepts, practicing language skills, or receiving personalized feedback, ChatGPT offers valuable support that complements traditional learning methods.（运用了whether...or引导的让步状语从句）
【高分句型2】With ChatGPT, we have instant access to information and assistance, which can greatly enhance our learning experiences.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
（十）
（2024年普陀区二模）
假设你是明启中学高三学生张磊，你的英国朋友Michael来信说他打算今年暑期来中国度假，你想邀请他去你的家乡游览。请你给他回信，内容需包括：
1）你最想带他去的几个地方，以及参与的活动；
2）你所提建议的理由。
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【答案】Dear Michael,
I’m very glad to hear that you plan to come to China for a vacation this summer. I’d like to invite you to visit my hometown.
There are several places I’d like to take you to. First, we can go to the local history museum to learn about the culture and history of my hometown. Then, we can visit the beautiful natural scenery, such as the mountains and rivers. We can also participate in some local activities, like tasting the local food and experiencing the traditional customs.
I suggest these places and activities because they can give you a comprehensive understanding of my hometown. You can not only appreciate the beauty of nature but also feel the charm of the local culture. I believe you will have a great time.
Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours,
Zhang Lei
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的邀请信。要求考生给英国朋友Michael写信，邀请其去你的家乡游览。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→ happy/delighted
打算做某事：plan to→ intend to
参观：visit → pay a visit to
参与：participate in → take part in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：First, we can go to the local history museum to learn about the culture and history of my hometown.
拓展句：First, we can go to the local history museum, where we can learn about the culture and history of my hometown.
【点睛】【高分句型1】There are several places I’d like to take you to.（运用了省略关系代词that的定语从句修饰先行词places）
【高分句型2】I suggest these places and activities because they can give you a comprehensive understanding of my hometown.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）
（十一）
（2024年青浦区二模）
假设你是浦润中学高三学生李青。学校将举办“中国工坊”（Chinese Workshop）活动，主题涉及本地美食（cuisine）、中国传统手工艺（handicraft）、中国书法（calligraphy）和中国绘画。届时，英国姐妹学校的师生代表将到校访问。学校拟招募学生现场教授相关技能。请写一封自荐信，内容必须包括：
申请参加本次活动；
阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解；
结合个人兴趣和特长，说明一项你想要教授的技能，并陈述理由。
（注：文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称。）
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【答案】
Dear Organizing Committee
I am Li Qing, a Grade 12 student from Purun High School. I am writing to express my keen interest in participating in the upcoming “Chinese Workshop” event.
This cultural exchange holds profound significance as it offers a platform for our British counterparts to intimately experience the richness of Chinese culture. Through this workshop, we can bridge cultural divides and foster mutual understanding. Given my passion for Chinese calligraphy, I am eager to share this ancient art with our guests. Calligraphy is not just about writing; it’s a reflection of one’s spirit and character. Teaching this skill will not only impart knowledge but also promote cultural appreciation.
I believe that my enthusiasm and proficiency in calligraphy will contribute to the success of this workshop. Thank you for considering my application.
Sincerely,
Li Qing
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校将举办“中国工坊”（Chinese Workshop）活动，主题涉及本地美食（cuisine）、中国传统手工艺（handicraft）、中国书法（calligraphy）和中国绘画。届时，英国姐妹学校的师生代表将到校访问。学校拟招募学生现场教授相关技能。要求考生根据提示写一封自荐信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
强烈的：keen→ strong
参加：participate in→ engage in
即将到来的：upcoming→ forthcoming
重要性：significance→ importance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am Li Qing, a Grade 12 student from Purun High School..
拓展句：I am Li Qing, who is a Grade 12 student from Purun High School.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to express my keen interest in participating in the upcoming “Chinese Workshop” event.（运用了动名词participating作宾语）
【高分句型2】I believe that my enthusiasm and proficiency in calligraphy will contribute to the success of this workshop.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
（十二）
（2024年闵行区二模）
假设你是上海市明启中学的高三学生李华，你的新西兰笔友Terry即将在下个学期来你们学校参加为期2个月的学习交流项目。他发来邮件，请你给他一些在上海生活和学习的建议。请你回复邮件。你的邮件须包含2～3条建议和相关理由。
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【答案】Dear Terry,
Happy to know that you will come to our school to participate in a 2-month learning exchange program next semester, I’m writing to give you some suggestions on your life and study here.
First, it is better to live in the dormitory, which can give you more chances to communicate with your classmates and know more about our school. Besides, you can go out at night to Shanghai Bund to enjoy its beauty and learn some customs and cultures of the city. What’s the most important is that if you can’t feel at home at first, making video calls to your parents is a good way to ease your bad feelings.
Hope my advice here can be of great help to you. Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本文是书面表达类应用文。要求考生给即将在下个学期来你们学校参加为期2个月的学习交流项目的新西兰笔友Terry发邮件，告诉他一些在上海生活和学习的建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
高兴的：happy→glad/delighted
参加：participate in→take part in
此外：besides→what’s more
欣赏：enjoy→appreciate
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Besides, you can go out at night to Shanghai Bund to enjoy its beauty and learn some customs and cultures of the city.
拓展句：Besides, you can go out at night to Shanghai Bund so that you can enjoy its beauty and learn some customs and cultures of the city.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Happy to know that you will come to our school to participate in a 2-month learning exchange program next semester, I’m writing to give you some suggestions on your life and study here. (由that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】First, it is better to live in the dormitory, which can give you more chances to communicate with your classmates and know more about our school. (由which引导的非限制性定语从句)
（十三）
（2024年松江区二模）
你是新华中学的高三学生张敏。临近毕业，同学间正在互留赠言。假设李华是你的同班好友，请给他/她写一封邮件，你需要在邮件中：
1)写明你给他/她的临别赠言；
2)结合李华的高中生活经历，谈谈你送他/她该赠言的理由。
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【答案】Dear Li Hua,
As we near the end of our high school journey, I find myself reflecting on the countless memories we've shared. As your close friend, I want to offer you these parting words: “Remain true to yourself, and let your light shine bright.”
Your high school experience has been a testament to your unwavering self-belief and unique radiance. You have always stood for what you believe in, never afraid to voice your opinions or pursue your passions. Whether it was leading our class in academic projects or inspiring us through your artistic endeavors, you have illuminated our days with your positivity and enthusiasm.
These words are my wish for you in the future. May you continue to be your authentic self, never compromising your principles or passions. And may your light continue to shine brightly, inspiring and motivating those around you. Farewell, my dear friend. May your journey ahead be filled with joy and success.
Yours,
Zhang Min
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你是新华中学的高三学生张敏。临近毕业，同学间正在互留赠言。假设李华是你的同班好友，请给他/她写一封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
回想起：reflect on→recall
害怕的：afraid→scared
相信：believe in→have faith in
表达：voice→express
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Your high school experience has been a testament to your unwavering self-belief and unique radiance.
拓展句：What you have experienced in high school has been a testament to your unwavering self-belief and unique radiance.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As we near the end of our high school journey, I find myself reflecting on the countless memories we've shared. (运用了as引导时间状语从句以及现在分词reflecting作宾语补足语)
[高分句型2] You have always stood for what you believe in, never afraid to voice your opinions or pursue your passions. (运用了what引导宾语从句)
（十四）
（2024年徐汇区二模）
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
在一堂写作课上，老师给出了以下三个题目供学生选择。
题目一： 以“盛年不重来，一日难再晨。”（Prime years do not return; a day’s morning is hard to come by again.）为题，结合你的生活体验，写一篇文章。 题目二： 针对目前因为了升学考试而导致的学生知识结构很不平衡（unbalanced knowledge structures）的现象，你觉得有什么好的方法或手段能够改变这种情况，谈谈你的想法。 题目三： 续写“当最后一个地球人（earthling）坐在房间里时，传来了敲门声……”
如果你是这个班级的学生，你会怎么选择呢
写一篇短文，说明你选择的题目，简述理由并介绍你的写作思路。
文章必须包括以下内容：
1. 你选择的作文题目及理由；
2. 你的写作思路。
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【答案】Sample 1
If I were a student in this class, I would choose topic one: “Prime years do not return; a day’s morning is hard to come by again.”
I am drawn to this topic because it speaks to the essence of seizing the moment and cherishing the present. It prompts reflection on the fleeting nature of time and the importance of making the most of our youth and opportunities.
My approach to this topic would be to draw from personal experiences and observations to illustrate the significance of embracing each day and living with purpose. I would share anecdotes of moments where I felt the weight of time passing, inspiring me to take action and pursue my passions.
I would explore themes of ambition, resilience, and gratitude, emphasizing the value of perseverance in the face of challenges and the importance of cultivating meaningful relationships.
Ultimately, I would aim to convey a message of empowerment and motivation, encouraging others to embrace the present moment, seize opportunities, and live with intention. By recognizing the fleeting nature of time and the preciousness of each day, we can strive to make a positive impact and create lasting memories.
Sample 2
If I were a student in this class, I would choose topic two: addressing the unbalanced knowledge structures caused by the current emphasis on entrance exams. My choice stems from the relevance and importance of this issue in the educational landscape today.
My approach to this topic would involve first acknowledging the root causes of the problem, such as excessive focus on exam-oriented learning and neglect of holistic education. Then, I would propose practical solutions like curriculum reforms to encourage interdisciplinary learning, promoting critical thinking skills over rote memorization, and incorporating project-based assessments to gauge a student’s true understanding.
I believe this topic offers a chance to explore innovative educational strategies that can lead to more well-rounded and adaptable learners, better equipped to navigate the complexities of the modern world. By addressing the issue of unbalanced knowledge structures, we can foster a learning environment that values both academic achievement and personal growth.
Sample 3
If I were a student in this class, I would choose topic three: continuing the story of “When the last earthling sat in the room, there came a knock on the door...”
I am drawn to this topic because of its open-ended nature, which allows for creativity and imagination to take flight. It presents an opportunity to explore themes of loneliness, curiosity, and the unknown, offering a canvas for storytelling that can captivate both the writer and the reader.
My approach to this topic would involve delving into the emotions and thoughts of the last earthling as they hear the knock on the door. I would consider various possibilities for who or what could be on the other side of the door – perhaps it’s another survivor, an alien visitor, or even a symbolic representation of hope or redemption.
I would aim to create a narrative that builds suspense and intrigue, keeping the reader engaged as they eagerly await the revelation behind the mysterious knock. Through descriptive language and vivid imagery, I would seek to evoke a sense of wonder and anticipation, leaving the reader with a lingering sense of curiosity and a desire for more.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生在所给的三个题目中选择一个题目，并写一篇短文，说明你选择的题目、简述理由并介绍写作思路。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
选择：choose→select
充分利用：make the most of → take full advantage of
机会，机遇：opportunity→chance
努力：strive→endeavour
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I am drawn to this topic because it speaks to the essence of seizing the moment and cherishing the present.
拓展句：The reason why I am drawn to this topic is that it speaks to the essence of seizing the moment and cherishing the present.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am drawn to this topic because it speaks to the essence of seizing the moment and cherishing the present. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】I would explore themes of ambition, resilience, and gratitude, emphasizing the value of perseverance in the face of challenges and the importance of cultivating meaningful relationships. (运用了现在分词作状语以及动名词短语作宾语)
（十五）
（2024年长宁区二模）
假如你是李华，准备参加《英文报》举办的主题为 “Changes in my community”的征文活动,要求用英文介绍身边发生的变化。你的征文必须包括：
1. 描述发生的变化；
2. 客观分析变化发生的原因。
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【答案】Changes in my community
It’s common phenomenon in my community that electric cars take up the most parking lot in the garage instead of gas vehicles. Also, when we commute between home and company, electric scooters play a critical role in time efficiency, convenience and expense spent on transportation. People travel everywhere with faster means of transports, and make full use of digital payment system such as WeChat, Alipay.
There are a few reasons contributing to this. Firstly, with the rapid development of technology, people tend to cater to mainstream lifestyle as technology aims to create a better and modern life and has achieved what it promises, which is beneficial to the public eventually. Secondly, our society has turned into a highly efficient one that people have to speed up to adapt to. So it comes as a trend that the faster, the more efficient, the better.
I do hope technology will do us good more economically and bring more comfort to our community.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文，要求学生用英文介绍社区发生的变化，并客观分析变化发生的原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的：critical→crucial
利用：make use of→take advantage of
倾向于：tend to→be likely to
加速：speed up→accelerate
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Secondly, our society has turned into a highly efficient one that people have to speed up to adapt to.
拓展句：Secondly, our society has turned into such a highly efficient one that people have to speed up to adapt to it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly, with the rapid development of technology, people tend to cater to mainstream lifestyle as technology aims to create a better and modern life and has achieved what it promises, which is beneficial to the public eventually.（运用了what引导的宾语从句，which引导的非限制性定语从句和as引导的状语从句）
【高分句型2】It’s common phenomenon in my community that electric cars take up the most parking lot in the garage instead of gas vehicles.（运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句）
（十六）
（2024年杨浦区二模）
最近上海的某些餐馆和面包房采取了一项新的举措：在微信小程序上以盲盒的形式降价销售当天卖剩的食物，购买者能在小程序上看到商家信息、价格和取货时间。英语报“YOUR VOICE”专栏欢迎读者来信，就这一做法展开讨论。假定你是高三学生李华，请给专栏编辑写信，表达看法，说明理由。
(食物盲盒: mystery boxes of randomly packed leftover foods )
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【答案】Dear Editor,
Recently, the “bread blind box” has quietly become popular. You can buy bread at 50％ discount of the original price or even lower, which is accompanied by the freshness and excitement of opening a blind box and has attracted many diners.
It is true that the emergence of the “bread blind box” not only helps the store to solve the waste and loss caused by the failure to sell the products in time, but also enables consumers to buy good and cheap food.
However, some merchants put expired bread into blind boxes for sale, violating the original intention of selling “bread blind box” to avoid food waste. We hope to strengthen market supervision to ensure quality and safety and the consumers’ rights.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英语报“YOUR VOICE”专栏写一封信，就最近上海的某些餐馆和面包房采取了一项新的举措：在微信小程序上以盲盒的形式降价销售当天卖剩的食物现象表达看法，说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
吸引：attract →draw
出现：emergence →appearance
引起：caused by →resulting from
违背：violate →go against
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：However, some merchants put expired bread into blind boxes for sale, violating the original intention of selling “bread blind box” to avoid food waste.
拓展句：However, some merchants put expired bread into blind boxes for sale, which violates the original intention of selling “bread blind box” to avoid food waste.
【点睛】【高分句型1】You can buy bread at 50％ discount of the original price or even lower, which is accompanied by the freshness and excitement of opening a blind box and has attracted many diners.(使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】However, some merchants put expired bread into blind boxes for sale, violating the original intention of selling “bread blind box” to avoid food waste. (使用了现在分词充当结果状语)专题10 英语作文
编者按：上海十六区二模完整齐全，深度解析，排版整齐。
（一）
（2024年宝山区二模）
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是李华，是希望中学的一名学生。现在你们班级英语课上的互动形式和内容都越来越丰富了，但有一个现象需要注意，就是当老师提出的问题学生不能及时回答时，有时候老师会代替学生回答，有时候也会出现较长时间的冷场。针对这种情况，请你给老师写一封邮件，提出你的意见和建议。你的文章必须包括：
简单描述你觉得能改变这种现象方法；
阐述你所提建议的理由。
（文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称）
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（二）
（2024年崇明区二模）
Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学的高三学生徐晶，你远在英国的朋友Anna前几天给你发来电子邮件，向你叙述了她未能成功入选校学生会的事情，为此一直闷闷不乐。恰巧你在图书馆看到下面图中英国前首相丘吉尔讲过的这句名言。你给Anna回一封邮件，用这句名言来劝慰和鼓励她。在邮件中你必须：
1.对Anna的失败表示同情；
2.用你对这句名言的理解和1-2个实例来劝慰和鼓励Anna。
注：不要在邮件中提及你的真实姓名和学校等相关信息。
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（三）
（2024年奉贤区二模）
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
随着中国传统文化的复兴，汉服(Hanfu)作为一种独特的服饰文化，逐渐受到人们的关注和喜爱。假如你是明启中学的学生李华，你校正在向学生们征集新社团的创建意向。作为汉服爱好者，你准备成立汉服社，请给校委会写一封邮件表达你的想法。你的邮件需包含：
1. 成立该社团的目的；
2. 社团拟开展的活动及原因。
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（四）
（2024年虹口区二模）
Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生赵磊，你的外国朋友William一直对中国文化很感兴趣。近日，他在网上了解到有两个相关的线上节目（节目信息如下表所示），但他对节目选择有些茫然，想听听你的建议。请给William回复一封邮件，邮件内容须包括：
（1）推荐其中一个节目；
（2）通过比较两个节目的信息，说明你推荐该节目的理由。
节目名称 故宫里的国宝 Treasures of the Forbidden City 寻访中国美食 Exploring Chinese Cuisine
节目内容 介绍故宫里的国宝及其背后的故事 介绍中国传统美食及其烹饪方式
节目形式 纪录片 短视频
节目语言 英语解说 无字幕 (subtitles) 中文解说 英语字幕
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（五）
（2024年黄浦区二模）
Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
“人设”通常指人们向公众展示的自我，现在很多学生经常说“我的人设不能倒”。校学生会正在开展有关“人设能不能倒 (Can my public image fall apart )”的讨论，请你在学生会邮箱投稿，表达自己的想法。你的投稿须包括(文中请不要出现真实的校名和人名)：
1)你觉得自己的人设是什么？
2)你觉得你的人设能倒吗？为什么？
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（六）
（2024年嘉定区二模）
Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
你所在的小区附近将新建一个大型游乐场，很多居民表示不满。社区管理处决定征集居民意见并召开专题讨论会，作为居民代表，写一份讨论会发言稿，内容需包括：
1. 你认为新建大型游乐场可能会存在的问题(至少2个)；
2. 你对以上问题的建议和理由。
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（七）
（2024年金山区二模）
Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学的学生吴磊，你在英语一考中取得了118分的成绩，现在你正面临着是否参加6月份二考的选择，请谈谈你的想法。内容需包括：
1）说明你的选择；
2）阐述你的理由。
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（八）
（2024年静安区二模）
假设你是明启中学李华，你校艺术节即将举办主题为“最美瞬间”的摄影展，捕捉“热爱生活、积极向上、全面发展”等正能量的精彩瞬间。现邀请每位同学提供自己生活中的一张照片参展，并撰写摄影作品的介绍供参观者阅读。你打算提供什么样的照片？请写一篇短文作为参展摄影作品的介绍，内容包括：
1) 对该照片的简要描述；
2) 你选择该照片参展的理由。
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（九）
（2024年浦东新区二模）
随着人工智能的快速发展，ChatGPT已进入我们的生活，正逐渐影响我们的学习方式和体验，有人认为它会带来诸多便利，也有人心存顾虑。假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，学校贴吧就此话题正在热议，你对此很感兴趣，决定回帖响应。回帖内容应包括：
1.你是否支持使用ChatGPT;
2.你的理由。
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（十）
（2024年普陀区二模）
假设你是明启中学高三学生张磊，你的英国朋友Michael来信说他打算今年暑期来中国度假，你想邀请他去你的家乡游览。请你给他回信，内容需包括：
1）你最想带他去的几个地方，以及参与的活动；
2）你所提建议的理由。
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（十一）
（2024年青浦区二模）
假设你是浦润中学高三学生李青。学校将举办“中国工坊”（Chinese Workshop）活动，主题涉及本地美食（cuisine）、中国传统手工艺（handicraft）、中国书法（calligraphy）和中国绘画。届时，英国姐妹学校的师生代表将到校访问。学校拟招募学生现场教授相关技能。请写一封自荐信，内容必须包括：
申请参加本次活动；
阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解；
结合个人兴趣和特长，说明一项你想要教授的技能，并陈述理由。
（注：文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称。）
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（十二）
（2024年闵行区二模）
假设你是上海市明启中学的高三学生李华，你的新西兰笔友Terry即将在下个学期来你们学校参加为期2个月的学习交流项目。他发来邮件，请你给他一些在上海生活和学习的建议。请你回复邮件。你的邮件须包含2～3条建议和相关理由。
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（十三）
（2024年松江区二模）
你是新华中学的高三学生张敏。临近毕业，同学间正在互留赠言。假设李华是你的同班好友，请给他/她写一封邮件，你需要在邮件中：
1)写明你给他/她的临别赠言；
2)结合李华的高中生活经历，谈谈你送他/她该赠言的理由。
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（十四）
（2024年徐汇区二模）
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
在一堂写作课上，老师给出了以下三个题目供学生选择。
题目一： 以“盛年不重来，一日难再晨。”（Prime years do not return; a day’s morning is hard to come by again.）为题，结合你的生活体验，写一篇文章。 题目二： 针对目前因为了升学考试而导致的学生知识结构很不平衡（unbalanced knowledge structures）的现象，你觉得有什么好的方法或手段能够改变这种情况，谈谈你的想法。 题目三： 续写“当最后一个地球人（earthling）坐在房间里时，传来了敲门声……”
如果你是这个班级的学生，你会怎么选择呢
写一篇短文，说明你选择的题目，简述理由并介绍你的写作思路。
文章必须包括以下内容：
1. 你选择的作文题目及理由；
2. 你的写作思路。
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（十五）
（2024年长宁区二模）
假如你是李华，准备参加《英文报》举办的主题为 “Changes in my community”的征文活动,要求用英文介绍身边发生的变化。你的征文必须包括：
1. 描述发生的变化；
2. 客观分析变化发生的原因。
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（十六）
（2024年杨浦区二模）
最近上海的某些餐馆和面包房采取了一项新的举措：在微信小程序上以盲盒的形式降价销售当天卖剩的食物，购买者能在小程序上看到商家信息、价格和取货时间。英语报“YOUR VOICE”专栏欢迎读者来信，就这一做法展开讨论。假定你是高三学生李华，请给专栏编辑写信，表达看法，说明理由。
(食物盲盒: mystery boxes of randomly packed leftover foods )
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