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中考英语书面表达真题+范文
2023年题目
新时代英语课堂的语言实践活动丰富多彩。学校英语社团开展了以Students’ Favorite English Class Activities为主题的调查,请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇英语短文向学校英文报投稿。
内容包括:
1.描述并评价调查结果;
2.陈述你的选择并说明理由。
注意:
1.词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
There are many practical learning activities in English class. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
满分作文
总体:
1)题材: 本文是一篇议论文写作,为看图作文:
2)时态: 时态为“一般现在时”为主
3)提示:观点已给出,写作时注意结构清晰;适当添加细节,突出写作重点
写作步骤:
第一步,提出调查的内容;
第二步,描写调查结果:
第三步,详细描述自己的最喜欢的课堂活动以及理由。
范文
There are many practical learning activities in English class. Recently, our school club has made a survey on students’ favorite English class activities. Here are the results.
Of the four activities mentioned, about one third of the students say presentation is their favorite. The number of students who choose discussion and creative writing is almost the same, taking up 25% and 27% each. Only 17% of the students consider debate their favorite as they think it is challenging.
As far as I am concerned, presentation is the most useful. On the one hand, I am able to learn a lot while preparing for it. On the other hand, it helps to improve my English speaking ability as well as communication skills.
English class activities are important, so we had better make full use of them to make English learning more interesting and colorful.
2022
2022年题目
中学生学习和运用英语有助于开阔国际视野,培养家国情怀,增强文化自信。“用英语讲好中国故事”是实现这一目标的有效途径之一。为鼓励更多中学生学好英语,用英语讲好中国故事,某英语报社正在举办以“Lear English,Tell China's Stories”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括:
1.作为中学生,你所理解的用英语讲好中国故事的意义;
2.在学习生活中,你将如何付诸行动(请列举两到三种具体做法 )
注意:
1.词数100 左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
满分作文
1.文章体裁:议论文和记叙文相结合
2.时态确定:一般现在时,一般过去时,一般将来时结合使用
3.人称确定:第一人称为主
4.写作方法:运用夹叙夹议的表达手法,对使用英语讲述中国故事进行阐述,并举例描述
5.中心思想:学会使用英语介绍中国文化,向世界展示中国的快速发展,展示爱国情怀
范文
Learn English, tell China's Stories
Why should we learn English and tell Chinese stories in English Today I want to talk about what is the meaningof telling China's stories in English.
As we all know, English is widely used in the world. Learning English can better introduce Chinese culture toother countries. Telling Chinese stories let the world know more about China and promote cooperation with ChinaIn recent years, our country has developed rapidly. For example, China's unique four new inventions, code scanningpayment,bike sharing, online shopping and high-speed railway are all at the world's leading level.
In my English study listened carefully in class.learned English in various ways after class, such as watchingEnglish movies, listening to English songs, and so on. I triedto tell the stories of China to foreigners; Once, I met anAmerican on my way home. He wanted to go to the subway station, I not only told him the way but taught him howto use shared bicycles.He was so surprised by the convenient transportation in China that he said he would come toChina to do business and introduced China to his friends.
Although I am only a student, I can do my best to tell the stories of China and contribute to the development ofour motherland. I think if we do, our country will beome stronger and stronger.
2021年
2021年题目
在每个人的成长过程中,都难免经历失败《failur》。只有在失败中不断反思和成长才能取得成功。某英讲报社正在举办以“Lcarm rom Failure”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一靠短文投稿,内容包括:
1.你的一次失败经历:
2,从中得到的收获与感悟。
注意:
1,词数 100 左右:
2。可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
3。不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
满分作文
Dear Tom,
I'm Li Hua.In our life,we will encounter many difficulties, and how to solve themI'd like to share my story with you. When I entered middle school, my English is very poor due to unsuitability. 【高分句型一】(缘由)
It really made me worried. But I didn't give up. Then I made word cards and remembered 50 words every day.I listened to the teacher carefully in class and tried my best to do homework well at home. (解决方法)
Little by little,I caught up with others. Now I often help my classmates with their English.(更深的意义)
Life is not always full of smiles and flowers. But if we have confidence and are good at learning, everything will be better.Anything can be solved.【高分句型二】(感悟)
Do you have anything to share with me (回问)
Yours,
LI Hua
【解析】
题干解读:这是一篇话题作文。要求以“人生遇到的困难,怎么解决”为主题,谈谈你遇到的困难是什么,你是怎么克服的,也可以升华到从中领悟到了什么。
注意:写作时要注意语句通顺,语意连贯,紧扣要点,注意句子之间的连接与过渡,要注意涵盖所给提示。
2020年
2020年题目
中国历史源远流长,中华文化博大精深,其中茶文化是重要代表。为弘扬中国传统文化,你校将在近期举办一场“茶文化节”。假定你是学生会主席王华,请写信邀请你校外教 Linda参加(20分)。
内容包括:
1.发出邀请;
2.时间:9月27日晚7:00-9:00;地点:大礼堂;
3.具体活动安排。
注意:
1.词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
满分范文
Dear Linda,
We are going to have a tea culture festival in our school.
l am Wang Hua,president of the student union.I'm writing to invite you to attend the festival,which will be held in the auditorium from 7:00 to 9:00 on the evening of September 27th.【高分句型一】(时间和地点)
The tea culture festival includes three activities.Firstly,we will have a report about the history of Chinese tea.Next,we will enjoy a tea art performance,learning how to make and taste tea in person.In the end,there will be an activity.
Tea and Poems",where traditional Chinese poems about tea will be shared.(具体活动安排)
I know you are very interested in Chinese tea culture and I am sure you will have a good time.Would you please let me know soon if you can accept my invitation 【高分句型二】(发出邀请)
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Wang Hua
【高分句型一】
I'm writing to invite you to attend the festival,which will be held in the auditorium from 7:00 to 9:00 on the evening of September 27th.
我写信是想邀请您参加9月27日晚上7点到9点在大礼堂举行的音乐节。
which引导非限定性定语从句。
【高分句型二】
Would you please let me know soon if you can accept my invitation
能否尽快告诉我你是否能接受我的邀请
if引导条件状语从句。
2019年
2019年题目
假定你是李华,你在网上得知会展中心将在 7 月举办一场国际文化博览会,正在招募英语志愿者。请你给会展中心负责外事工作的 Mr. White 写一封英文自荐信。
内容包括:
1.擅长英语;2.善于沟通;3.有相关经历。
注意:
1.词数 100 左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
满分范文
Dear Mr.White,
I'm writing to apply to be a volunteer for the coming exposition.
I'm a middle school student and will graduate this June.I like English and I learn it quite well.I won first prize in the school English speech competition held last year.(擅长英语)
Besides,I'm outgoing,helpful and good at communicating with others.(善于沟通)
Last summer,I worked as a volunteer in a museum.I helped the foreign visitors to know more about China and learn a lot about Chinese culture,such as Chinese art,music and so on.I did a good job.(有相关经历)
If I get the chance,I promise I will offer the best service.【高分句型一】Wish the international culture exposition a great success.(承诺)
I'm looking forward to your reply.【高分句型二】(期待)
Yours,
Li Hua
【高分句型一】
If I get the chance,I promise I will offer the best service.
如果有机会,我保证提供最好的服务. if引导条件状语从句.
【高分句型二】
I'm looking forward to your reply. 期待您的回复.
look forward to.. 期待…
2018年
2018年题目
下面这副漫画呈现了小明的爷爷昨天接他放学回家的情景。请根据你对漫画的理解,用英语写一篇 100 词左右的短文(15分)。
内容包括:
1.描述漫画内容;2.简要陈述你的看法。
注意:
1.可以进行适当的想象;2.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
满分范文
Xiaoming is a primary school student.He has to learn lots of subjects at school.【高分句型一】(引出话题)
It was Monday yesterday.Xiaoming had math,art,music and so on.When school was over,Xiaoming's grandfather met him at the school gate.
He put Xiaoming's schoolbag and drawing board on his back and took the violin in his hand.Xiaoming walked ahead happily and his grandfather walked after him slowly.Because the school things were really heavy,Xiaoming's grandfather was very tired.(叙述发生在昨天的一件事)
In my opinion.Xiaoming shouldn't have his grandfather carry all the things for him.He should learn to care about others.【高分句型二】(观点)
【点评】
本篇写作需注意图片中的内容,不可遗漏.注意时态的运用,另外需在平时积累相关的词汇,写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系.
2017年
2017年题目
如图描述了李华今年春节得到压岁钱(lucky money)后,他和父母对于如何花压岁钱产生不同观点.请根据图片提示,用英语写一篇100词左右的短文(10分)。
要求:
1.完整叙述图片内容.
2.结合自己的实际陈述个人观点.
满分范文
After this Spring Festival,Li Hua got a lot of lucky money,he and his parents had different opinions about how to spend lucky money.【点题】 Her mom wanted her to buy some books because reading more books could bring her more knowledge.【高分句型一,注意原因状语从句的使用】
Her dad thought she should offer the lucky money to the poor children to get education.Li Hua hoped to buy some delicious food.【正文部分详细介绍几个人的观点】
l think she can save it in a bank,she can take it out when she needs money.【高分句型二,注意时间状语从句的使用】
Anyway,we should never spend the lucky money on eating junk food or computer games.【结尾紧扣主题】
【高分句型一】
Her mom wanted her to buy some books because reading more books could bring her more knowledge.
她妈妈想让她买一些书,因为多读书能给她带来更多的知识.这是because引导的原因状语从句,因为……
【高分句型二】
she can take it out when she needs money.
她需要钱时就可以把它取出来.这是when引导的时间状语从句,当.…时候.
2016年
2016年题目
校团委准备在教师节举行征文活动,请根据提示回想自己在学习生活中遇到的最喜欢的一位老师,以“my favorite teacher ” 为题 用英语写一篇100词左右的短文(10分)。
内容包括:
1.对老师的相貌描写
2.喜欢老师的原因:①讲课很好;②与学生做朋友;③..
要求:
1.所写内容应包括所提供的信息,可适当的发挥,
2.不得出现真实的人名地名校名等相关信息。
满分范文
My Favorite teacher Everyone has his or her favorite teacher at school,and so do l.(引出话题)
My favorite teacher,Miss Lu,is a 30-year-old young lady of medium height,with big eyes and long straight hair.She wears glasses and often gets dressed in different styles of clothes.And a big smile can be always found on her round face.(对老师的相貌描写)
Maybe you'll wonder why she is considered my favorite teacher.Well,as our English teacher,she does good job in her classes.I can easily understand everything she tells us and would like to finish each task she leaves us after class.Another example is that she's so kind and friendly that she's friends with each of her students.
We(especially)like to share everything about our pleasure or problems in our school life.Some even asks her to help with their family problems!(喜欢老师的原因)
All in all,I love Miss Lu so much.Whenever I think of her,a strong feeling of joy can always fill my heart!(我的感受)
【高分句型】
①Everyone has his or her favorite teacher at school,and so do l.
每个人在学校都有他或她最喜欢的老师,我也一样.句子中so+谓语动词+主语,这里运用了倒装语序,表示前面所说的话也适合与后者.
②Maybe you'll wonder why she is considered my favorite teacher.
也许你想知道为什么她被认为是我最喜欢的老师。句子中wonder后面跟的是一个宾语从句,所使用的语序为陈述句语序.
2015年
2015年题目
以下图画分别呈现今年小明和小玲为妈妈过母亲节的情景。请用英语写一篇约80词的短文(10分)。
要求:
1. 完整叙述图画内容。
2. 简明陈述你认为哪种方式更恰当
满分范文
As Mother's Day was getting close,many children were thinking about what gift to get for their mothers,and so were Xiao Ming and Xiao Ling.
Xiao Ming asked his father for one hundred yuan and went to the flower shop for some nice flowers.He hoped his mother would feel satisfied when she saw them after a tiring working day.【高分句型】(小明为妈妈过母亲节)But differently thinking from Xiao Ming,Xiao Ling decided to do something meaningful instead of buying a usual gift.In the end she painted a nice picture by heart and wrote the following words on it:I LOVE YOU,MOM!Her mother got really moved when she received it.【高分句型】(小玲为妈妈过母亲节)(描述图画)As an old saying goes,"It is the thought that counts."【高分句型】
So I do agree with Xiao Ling,and I think I'd do the same as her next Mother's Day.(认为小玲的方式恰当)
【高分句型】
1.He hoped his mother would feel satisfied when she saw them after a tiring working day.
①hope后是省略了that的宾语从句. ②when引导的时间状语从句.
2.Her mother got really moved when she received it.
when引导的时间状语从句.
3.As an old saying goes,"It is the thought that counts."
正如一句谚语所说:“心意最重要”,谚语的使用.
【点评】
这是一篇看图作文.看图作文要注意一下几点
(1)弄清图画内容,把握情节线索,根据图画在脑海中串联出完整的故事,注意图画中的细节.
(2)结合提示词,明确考查意图.所给提示词可帮助理解画面内容,也是组成句子的必用材料.有时还会给出起始句(这就给出了时态),学生运用正确的时态,运用所给或所学的词语,尽量运用熟悉的句型,作适当展开,联想,就能比较完整地表达出画面的意思了.
(3)切忌堆砌词语,句子,注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅,连贯.
(4)注意书写的规范:大小写,标点符号等的正确运用.
(5)注意检查:单词拼写,语法,动词时态,语序,主谓一致等.
2014年
2014年题目
根据所给图画,用英语写一篇约80词的短文。要求完整叙述图画内容(10分)。
满分范文
Tom is a kind-hearted boy.One day he went to the museum by bus.When he got on the bus,he found a seat and sat on it.After a while the bus stopped at the next stop and an old man got on the bus.
As soon as he saw him Tom stood up and gave his seat to the man.But the man didn't accept it.Tom was worried and he came up a good idea.He told the man that he would get off the bus the next stop and the old man sat on his seat.
Tom stood by the man and he felt sleepy.Seeing this,the old man reminded that he was going to get off the bus.Tom felt embarrassed and he told him the truth that he would get off at the terminal station.What a good boy Tom was and we should learn from him.
【点评】
本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头描述了汤姆上了公交车,接下来描述他为一个老爷爷让座,假装说自己下一站就下车,最后指出要向汤姆学习。此处用了get on,give his seat to,learn from等词组,让文章增色不少。
写在最后
看了济南这十年的英语主题后,中考作文是不是没有想象中那么难了呢 只有现在开始准备,开始加强阅读,丰富词汇量,多多朗读背诵范文,在一点一滴中积累中,高分也就不远了~

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