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专题09 读后续写之积极和消极写景烘托
一、关键词
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blow 吹
howl 咆哮
crash 碰撞
stir 搅动
darken 使变黑
envelope 信封，包裹
gloomy 阴郁的
dip 蘸
pour 泼
sunshine /sunlight 阳光
breeze 微风
dim 昏暗的
faint 微弱的
winding 蜿蜒的
frighten 是某人害怕
chilling 寒冷的
thunder 雷，打雷
lightening 闪电
frosty 寒冷的
melt 融化
二、常用短语
be bathed in 沐浴在
amber-like sunshine 琥珀色的阳光
stretch off 延伸
凉爽清新的风cool and refreshing breeze
落日the setting sun
stroll down the street在街上漫步
the first ray of sunlight第一缕阳光
flood into涌入
gentle breeze微风
多雨的季节a rainy season
暴风雨之夜a stormy night
在茫茫大雨中in the blinding rain
在春天温暖的阳光里
in the warm spring sunshine
难以忍受的热unbearable hot
放晴了clear up
木日光浴bathe in the sunshine
一个偏僻的小村庄
a small village off the map
离海滨仅咫尺之遥
be dotted with 点缀着
三、各种场景描写片段赏析
（一）阳光明媚，生命美好，心情愉悦的景色描写
The beach to your right stretches off(延伸) to the horizon, slowly narrowing to nothingness（虚无）, only to re-emerge（重新出现） again on your left.
When I was bathed in the sunlight, it felt like the amber-like sunshine was kissing every inch of my skin.
The sun dropped through and laid on his head and shoulders.太阳下山，温和的光线落在肩头。
When I drew the curtains back, the sunlight flooded in. 阳光倾斜而入
The clear blue sky was dotted with fluttering larks. 天气晴朗，碧空里星星点点的云雀在翩翩起舞。
I was immediately stunned by the azure sky with thick silver lining clouds drifting around. 我立刻被湛蓝色的天空和成群飘动的金色云朵所吸引了。
White clouds flow in the blue sky like quiet fish swimming in broad ocean.
A gust of wind blew and parted the drooping branches of the weeping willow like a curtain. 一阵风吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条，就像那卷起的窗帘。
The wind, soft and cold, clicked through tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled （撒、点缀）the slope. 风，轻柔而清冷，轻点这树枝，搅动着斜坡下的零星灌木丛。
There are many kinds of flowers blooming in the corner of the park, even in autumn, I smell the fresh scent with cool breeze. How sweet!
It was Saturday morning, and all the summer world was bright and fresh, and filled with life. There was a song in every heart. There was cheer in every face and a spring in every step. The air was filled with the pleasant smell of flowers. Cardiff Hill, beyond the village and above it, was green with trees and looked beautiful.
（二）暴风骤雨、心情抑郁的景色描写
12. The sky is overcast, darkened with gloomy clouds，(乌云密布、黑云压顶) and the whole world seemed to be enveloped in a huge gray quilt. 整个世界仿佛都被一块巨大的灰色棉被笼罩。
13. The thin trees were blowing wildly, and untidy gray clouds were sailing past a pale, sicky moon(苍白昏暗的月亮).
14. The frosty air （寒冷的空气）blew in, cutting like knife.
15. The frigid gusts of wind stung their faces. 一阵阵寒风刺痛他们的脸颊。 Stung 的原形为sting“叮咬”
16. The summer breeze gently moved through the leaves with a sighing sound. 叹息的声音
17. There was a deathly stillness in the house. 死寂
18. The evening of this day was very long, and melancholy(阴郁的), at Hartfield. The weather added what it could of gloom. A cold stormy rain set in(阴冷的暴风雨袭来), and nothing of July appeared but in the trees and shrubs（灌木丛）, which the wind was despoiling(摧残), and the length of the day, which only made such cruel sights the longer visible.（白昼的延长可以让人多瞧一瞧这凄冷的景象）
（三）烦闷焦躁的景色描写
19. It’s hot enough to melt hell. 天热得能融化地狱。
20. The air that has been hot all day becomes heavy. It hangs over the trees, presses the heads of the flowers to the ground, and sits on my shoulders. 整日闷热的空气变得格外呆滞。它笼罩着树木，逼得花朵垂向地面，也压得我的肩头沉甸甸的。
（四）凄风苦雨、狂风暴雨、恐惧阴冷害怕的景色描写
21. On the dark and stormy night, the waves were crashing and the winds were howling(嚎叫).
22. The rain came pouring down, the streams rose, and the winds blew and beat against the house.大雨倾盆，洪流暴涨，狂风肆意冲击房屋。
23. The boys were frightened as the wind blew several trees on their side and the light continued to come and go in the sky(闪电在空中持续乱舞).
24. There was now a fine, cold drizzle falling(寒冷的细雨), and the wind had risen from its uncertain（模糊的） puffs （一阵阵小风）into a steady blow. The few foot passengers astir （活动的）in that quarter hurried dismally（沉闷地） and silently along with coat collars turned high and pocketed hands（踹口袋里的手）.
消极与积极场景：
（一）细节描述之“describe a peaceful scene”
1. When I was bathed in the sunlight, it felt like the amber-like sunshine was kissing every inch of my skin. (沐浴在阳光下；琥珀色的阳光亲吻着全身的肌肤)
2. Mist-covered mountains were dotted with small farms and villages. (点缀着)
3. The sound of my footsteps was accompanied only by the gracefully waving reeds. (优雅地随风飘扬的芦苇)
（二）细节描述之“describe stormy weather”
1. The sky is overcast, darkened with gloomy clouds.(乌云密布；黑云压顶)
2. On that dark and stormy night, the waves were crashing and the winds were howling. (海浪肆意拍打；劲风咆哮)
3. The rain came pouring down, the streams rose, and the winds blew and beat against the house. (暴风骤雨)
（三）Good setting description for appreciation (佳“景”赏析)
1. The house smelled musty and damp, and a little sweet, as if it were haunted by the ghosts of long-dead cookies.
2. The sun kept dipping down into the ocean and the lights came on at the harbor, casting sudden shadows on the ground, illuminating the faces that were just a second ago silhouettes. The sky was golden and purple, the ocean a darker shade of violet.
3. The sun had set, but a faint pastel haze lingered in the mid-summer sky.
4. They rolled up the path, tree branches raking the windshield like angry wardens.
5. Outside, the air filled with cricket noise, as the sun reddened in its descent.
6. A restaurant overlooking a starlit night sprang to my imagination like something out of an illuminated manuscript from the late Middle Ages.
7. The moon went slowly down in loveliness; she departed into the depth of the horizon, and long veil-like shadows crept up the sky through which the stars appeared.
8. All brightness was gone, leaving nothing. We stepped out of the tent onto nothing. Sledge and tent were there, Estraven stood beside me, but neither he nor I cast any shadow. There was dull light all around, everywhere. When we walked on the crisp snow no shadow showed the footprint. We left no track. Sledge, tent, himself, myself: nothing else at all. No sun, no sky, no horizon, no world.
9. Night had fallen fast upon the land. No more than an hour ago the sky was painted with hues of red, orange and pink, but all color had faded leaving only a matt black canvas with no stars to be looked upon.
10．It would be a cold moonless night. The sky was dark and low, the air so chilled it hurt to breathe. Already the ground was laid white with frost and any water that had been liquid under the winter sun had become ice.
（四）自然景观描写：
1. We used to live in a beautiful village, and there were trees and flowers and green grass, and the air was so sweet.
我们以前住在一个漂亮的村舍里，那里树很多，还有花花草草，连空气都是甜的。
2. The sight of a large cornfield in the latter part of summer, with all its green banners waving and its tasseled plumes nodding, is one to admire, and not to be forgotten.
盛夏时节，一望无际的玉米地，绿色的叶子像旗帜一样迎风飞舞，抽穗的包谷随风点头，这是多么赏心悦目而又令人难忘的景色啊！
3.In the spring its branches are covered with bunches of creamy flowers,
春天里，栗子树的枝干上开满了一簇簇奶油般的花朵。
4.Before this, he had lived in a warm country, where the sun shines down on beautiful orange groves, and fields always sweet with flowers.在这之前，他一直住在一个天气暖和的乡村。在那里，阳光洒满美丽的满是橘子的山坡，田野里到处是芳香扑鼻的鲜花。
5. Last night, the cold north wind blew great snow clouds over the sky. Not a star, not a bit of blue sky could be seen.昨天夜里，北风呼啸，乌云密布。看不见一颗星星，整个天空也不见一丝蓝色。
6. It is winter. The cold wind whistles through the branches of the trees.
正值冬季，寒风呼啸着吹过树枝。
7. Johnny looked through the glass. There lay the pure, feathery snowflake like a lovely little star.
乔尼透过玻璃看着雪花，那片纯洁轻柔的雪花就像一颗可爱的小星星。
8. Soon the tiny flakes floated softly down, like flocks of little white birds.
不久，小小的雪花静悄悄地飘落下来，就像一群白色的小鸟。
9.The sun must have been pleased with what he saw, for he smiled such a bright, sweet smile, that the whole white world sparkled as if it were made of little stars.太阳一定对雪花们的作品非常满意，因为他笑得如此灿烂和甜蜜。整个洁白的世界闪闪发光，就像一颗颗小星星在眨眼睛。
（五）早中晚场景举例：
早上：（部分描写也可用于其它时间）
1. The sweetness of the sun fills my lungs.
2. The first ray of sunlight is too fragile to touch.
3. Spring breeze draws the curtain of clouds and the sunshine floods into the classrooms.
4. The whole world blossoms with one breath of the sunshine.
5. Snow blanketed every rooftop and weighed on the branches of old trees.
雪覆盖了每一个屋顶，压在老树枝上。
6. Kissed by the rain and shining, the wet ground is cold under foot. The birds busy themselves around me, not caring that I'm there.潮湿的地面走起来很冷，被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。鸟儿们在我周围忙碌着，不关心我在那儿。
7. A dense earthly sweet smell rose from the ground, enveloping everything within its soft embrace.一股浓郁的泥土般的香味从地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。
8. When I drew the curtains back, the sunlight flooded in. 阳光倾斜而入.
9. Golden sunshine, fragile greens and a sea of fragrant flowers crowd into my eyes. Walking into the painting, I am totally drunk with the twittering (吱喳) of birds. Soon the delicate 纤弱的,精致的 air and soft raindrops melt my heart.
10. It was Saturday morning, and all the summer world was bright and fresh, and filled with life. There was a song in every heart. There was cheer in every face and a spring in every step. The air was filled with the pleasant smell of flowers. Cardiff Hill, beyond the village and above it, was green with trees and looked beautiful.
黄昏：（部分描写也可用于其它时间）
1. As the sky gradually darkened and the light dimmed, （天空越来越黑，光线越来越暗）he quickened his steps.
2. The sun hid himself behind the mountains, making it hard to see anything in the thick darkness.
3. Falling leaves fluttered down in the cool mid-autumn air, bidding farewell to sweet summer and beckoning the autumn in.
秋天的树叶在凉爽的中秋空气中飘落，告别甜美夏天，召唤秋天的到来。
4. It's dark now and the snow is still falling, clumps of wet flakes drifting mindlessly down, the air moist, the sidewalk mushy underfoot.现在天黑了，雪还在落下，一团团的雪花随风飘落，空气潮湿，走在人行道上，脚底粘糊糊的。
5. The rain drummed on the window, bidding farewell to the last beam of sunlight.
雨敲打在窗户上好像敲起了小鼓，向最后一缕阳光告别.
6. The lingering sunlight was obliterated by the rapidly falling night，resembling a pitch-black curtain draped over the sky.逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，像是天空被一层漆黑幕布覆盖。
7. The leaves crunched beneath my feet as I strolled down the street. Occasionally, one would fall past me, lightly swaying as the air gently carried it to the ground.
我在街上漫步时，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。偶尔，有叶子会从我身边掉下来，轻轻地摇晃，因为空气轻轻地把它吹到地上。
8. The lake mirrored the sky above, both of them blameless blue and shimmering.
湖面映照着上方的天空，它们都是无比湛蓝，并且闪闪发光。
9. The sunset was like orange paint on a blue canvas. 日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料.
10. The strong sun on my black hair would burn me in minutes if I couldn’t find shelter.
如果我找不到庇护所，我黑发上强烈的阳光几分钟后就会把我烧焦
11. The sun dropped through and laid on his head and shoulders.太阳下山，温和的光线落在肩头。
晚上：（部分描写也可用于其它时间）
1. From the distance, he saw some dim light(昏暗的灯光) in the village.
2. Silence between dad and me made me more nervous and scared. At that moment, it was completely dark except the faint light given out by a few stars in the sky.
3. The dark, rainy evening, the wind, the thundering clouds held me entirely in their power.
4. The sky, midnight blue, gave the scene a fairytale quality, and the stars that dotted the sky lit up the night.天空，午夜蓝，给了这一场景一个童话般的质量，星星点点的天空照亮了夜晚。
5. The clear blue sky was dotted with fluttering larks. 天气晴朗，碧空里星星点点的云雀在翩翩起舞。
6. The wind was howling dreadfully and the rain was pouring from the heaven, whipping against the branches of lined trees. The world was burdened with a sea of darkness. I was seized with the roaring power of nature, a sense of horror creeping up on me. I immediately turned around to slide into the bed and curled up.
7. The dark, rainy evening, the wind, the thundering clouds held me entirely in their power.
8. The evening of this day was very long, and melancholy(阴郁的), at Hartfield. The weather added what it could of gloom. A cold stormy rain set in(阴冷的暴风雨袭来), and nothing of July appeared but in the trees and shrubs（灌木丛）, which the wind was despoiling(摧残), and the length of the day, which only made such cruel sights the longer visible.（白昼的延长可以让人多瞧一瞧这凄冷的景象）
9. The sky is overcast, darkened with gloomy clouds，(乌云密布、黑云压顶) and the whole world seemed to be enveloped in a huge gray quilt. 整个世界仿佛都被一块巨大的灰色棉被笼罩。
10. The thin trees were blowing wildly, and untidy gray clouds were sailing past a pale, sicky moon(苍白昏暗的月亮). The frosty air （寒冷的空气）blew in, cutting like knife.
其它：
1. I closed my eyes in the speeding car. Winding rivers, lofty mountains, deep valleys and sunny beaches held me entirely in their fascination.
2. The gentle breeze(微风) stroked his head , as if comforting all his tiredness.
3. Familiar smells of the earth rose up to greet her. Wandering in the woods, Ally slowed her pace to find the little guy in the mixed air. The sun looked at her with a glowing smile and the flowers nodded merrily towards her. The breeze patted her on the face, warm and comfortable.
4. The wind was howling dreadfully and the rain was pouring from the heaven, whipping against the branches of lined trees. The world was burdened with a sea of darkness. I was seized with the roaring power of nature, a sense of horror creeping up on me. I immediately turned around to slide into the bed and curled up.
5. On the day back to school, dark clouds hung low in the sky. The rain poured down, with cold drops and angry winds slapping(拍；掴) my face. I was drowned in floods of warm tears and freezing rain.
6. Spring, like an amazing artist, paints our campus with richer and deeper colors. Golden sunshine, fragile greens and a sea of fragrant flowers crowd into my eyes. Walking into the painting, I am totally drunk with the twittering(吱喳) of birds. Soon the delicate 纤弱的,精致的 air and soft raindrops melt my heart. Oh, I’m lost… in the masterpiece of Spring!专题15 读后续写之各种精彩收尾段落
一、读后续写收尾的方式：
1.画面定格
2.对话收尾
3.主题升华
4.结尾留白
5.首尾呼应
二、画面定格
1.人物动作的画面定格
如：（2020杭州高级中学等五校联考） They stood there for a moment, side by side, waiting for the rushing holiday current and for their place in it. Then the daughter glanced over and momentarily regarded her mother. And slowly, almost reluctantly, she placed her arm with apparently unaccustomed affection around her mother’s shoulders and gently guided her back into the deluge.
如：His hard work paid off! Holding the soda tin firmly, Reuben rushed for the shop to buy the brooch. The moment he got the beautiful brooch, he burst through the front door and placed it in Dora’s hand. Never had Dora received such a gift. Speechless and happy, she held her son tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.
如： The butterfly cleaned her tears on the face，“No.” God felt a bit relieved and said，“Tomorrow you can become human again.” But she shook her head and said, “No, I want to be a butterfly for the rest of my life...”Then the butterfly would stay together with her lover forever. On the top of the mountain, she seemed to enjoy the sunrise and the sunset happily with them.
2.特殊寓意的写景画面
（1）The sky was a billion pure eyes of light and the grass green underfoot, it was as if night and day had become one beautiful moment. Dawn had come.
天空像是一亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一起，脚下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽的时刻。黎明已经来临。（黎明到来的画面）
2.特殊寓意的写景画面
（2） Dawn sent shimmering rays over the placid ocean, bestowing a golden path from the shore to the horizon.
黎明在平静的海面上放射出出闪闪发亮的光线，留下一条从海岸到地平线横亘而过的金色道路。 （黎明到来的画面）
2.特殊寓意的写景画面
（3） The crystal and cerulean water was gentle as I waded through it, the sunset like orange paint on a blue canvas.
当我涉过水晶般天蓝色的轻柔的水时，日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料。 （美好日落时的画面）
2.特殊寓意的写景画面
（4） The lingering sunlight was obliterated by the rapidly falling night，resembling a pitch-black curtain draped over the sky.逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，就像是天空被一层漆黑的幕布覆盖。（日落时的画面）
2.特殊寓意的写景画面
（5）The moon under siege by stars seemed to lighten the night bringing forth stars that shone and hung in the blackness. The never ending blackness consumed everything.
被群星围困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，带来了在黑暗中闪耀和悬挂着的群星。无尽的黑暗吞噬了一切。（描写夜空的画面）
2.特殊寓意的写景画面
（6）Looking up, I saw the sun shine brighter than I ever knew before. I saw a tree in the distance glisten gently as it reflected the sun's rays. My consciousness ebbed away with the heat. I took a few blinks before I landed with a thud.
抬头一看，我看到太阳比我以前所知道的还要明亮。我看见远处有一棵树反射着太阳光，发出柔和的光辉。我的意识随着热度而衰退。我眨了眨眼，然后摔倒在地才猛然回到现实中，恢复了知觉。（特殊寓意）
2.特殊寓意的写景画面
（7） Dotted with glittering stars, the sky, midnight blue, gave the scene a fairytale quality. 缀满星光的天空，午夜的蓝色，给了这一场景一个童话般的质量。（神话般美丽的夜空画面）
2.特殊寓意的写景画面
（8）Kissed by the rain and glistening, the wet ground is cold under foot. A dense earthly sweet smell rises from the ground, enveloping everything within its soft embrace.潮湿的地面走起来很冷，被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。一股浓郁的泥土般的香味从地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。（雨后清新的画面）
The rain drummed on the window, bidding farewell to the last beam of sunlight.雨水打着窗户，向最后一缕阳光告别。
（雨水来临的画面）
2.特殊寓意的写景画面
（9）The leaves crunched beneath my feet as I strolled down the street. Occasionally, one would fall past me, lightly swaying as the air gently carried it to the ground. 我在街上漫步时，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。偶尔，有叶子会从我身边掉下来，轻轻地摇晃，缓缓落到到地面。（描写落叶的画面）
三、对话收尾
（1） Chester said his father told him he had tried to search for him and his brother, but both brothers had changed their last names.“He does remember me and my older brother and he told me that he’s been looking for us ever since we lost contact，” he said. Chester said his brother has since flown to Colombia to be reunited with Urrea as well. When asked how the reunion with his father will change his life, Chester said，“I got family everywhere, so it might lead to many more trips now.”
(2) What was most fascinating about the reunion is that Shavi also moves others. Nina’s family had moved to a bigger apartment.“I’ve heard amazing stories about dogs’ loyalty, but I never imagined this sort of thing would ever happen to me. Even now, I can hardly believe this dog traveled such a long distance to find us，” said Nina，“I would never give this kind of friend away again. I never grow tired of repeating this—animals are the most devoted and loving creatures. They need our love and care.”
(3) Her husband spoke to the director of Heightvale, Dolores Haworth. Soon she offered him a job working for the company. She said，“He just had a brilliant working attitude and is definitely the type of employee we are looking for. I was told, ‘If he does this for free, imagine his jobs if he was being paid. ’I met him and he was a lovely and polite young man and he has already started working for us.”
(4) …They hung all the things back to the wall.Jack asked Paisley, “Are you really willing to lead a tough life with me？” She patted away the ashes on hands and looked at the walls with loads of stuff on them satisfactorily, saying，“Yes! For me，it is not a suffering to live.”
四、主题升华
(1) Everyone has one person they look up to as a role model. To me there is none other than my mom. She has beauty, brains, and one of the best hearts I know. Without her in my life, I would have no idea whether I can be a_famous_dancer. Someday, when_I_am_older and have children of my own, I hope I can be just as great a parent as my mom.（母爱的深远影响）
(2) ….I am extremely unhappy about it. I think money doesn’t equal happiness. And free life style also doesn’t equal happiness. The real happiness is that everyone loves each other, and does everything useful for our society. Most of my classmates support me. But some of them think money is everything. In my opinion, money can’t take the place of everything, such as your life, your time and your happiness.(表达自己的价值观）
(4) “Two reasons account for that you won，” the teacher answered.“First, you’ve almost mastered one of the most difficult throws in all of judo. Second, the only known defense for that move is for your opponent to grab your left arm. It is your biggest weakness that makes you win the match. As a proverb says, ‘Every coin has two sides.’ Making full use of your strength is your achievement. Please remember that in no case will you give up especially in trouble. God is fair to everyone.”(借用名言警句来升华主题）
五、结尾留白
(1) While she wrapped them, I took a deep breath and asked Joy, “Do you have dinner plans ” I explained that I’d like to wait a bit before I went back to the hospital – gave Grace and her husband some time alone with baby. “Would you be interested in joining me in a bite to eat ” I asked. “I’d love to,” she replied, her eyes sparkling like diamonds. And, this was the beginning of the end to my months of heartbreak following Betsy’s death.（故事结尾留白，给予读者想象空间）
(2) The beggar hesitated for a moment, then he decided to open it. He declared aloud, “Who cares He wanted me to have it anyway. I might as well enjoy it now.”With that, he unwrapped the white tissue paper, but to his surprise, there was no hard rock candy inside. Instead, into his fingers fell a shiny white pearl worth thousands of dollars.
六、首尾呼应
(1)
开头： I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with suprises and amusements, all because of my mother---loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange faimly trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.
结尾：Despite mom's being absent-minded and forgetful,
she was still a kind and nice mom.
(2)
开头：It was summer and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
结尾：Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip to the Wild West was deeply engraved in my mind.
(3)
开头：A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.
结尾：What a funny day. Arthur couldn't stop laughing whenever he looked back on this hilarious 搞笑的experience.
附：名言警句升华主题
1. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者，事竟成。
2. Well begun is half done. 好的开端是成功的一半。
3. East, west, home is best. 金窝、银窝，不如自己的草窝。
4. There is no royal road to learning. 学无坦途。
5. Look before you leap./ First think, then act. 三思而后行/摸着石头过河
6. It is never too late to mend. 亡羊补牢，犹为未晚。
7. Light come, light go. 来得容易，去得快。
8. Time is money. 时间就是金钱。
9. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真交。
10. Great hopes make great man. 远大的希望，造就伟大的人物。
11. After a storm comes a calm. 雨过天晴。
12. All roads lead to Rome. 条条大路通罗马。
13. Art is long, but life is short. 人生有限，学问无涯。
14. Stick to it, and you'll succeed. 只要人有恒，万事都能成。
15. Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.
早睡早起，富裕、聪明、身体好。
16. A good medicine tastes bitter. 良药苦口。
17. It is good to learn at another man's cost. 前车之鉴。
18. Keeping is harder than winning. 创业不易，守业更难。
19. Let's cross the bridge when we come to it. 船到桥头自然直。
20. More haste, less speed. 欲速则不达。
21. No pains, no gains. 不劳则无获。
22. Nothing is difficult to the man who will try. 世上无难事，只要肯登攀。
23. Where there is life, there is hope. 生命不息，希望常在。
24. An idle youth, a needy age. 少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。
25. We must not lie down, and cry, "God help us." 求神不如求己。
26. A plant may produce new flowers; man is young but once.
花有重开日，人无再少年。
27. God helps those who help themselves. 自助者，天助之。
28. What may be done at any time will be done at no time.明日待明日，明日不再来。
29. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.只工作，不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。
30. Diligence is the mother of success. 勤奋是成功之母。
31. Truth is the daughter of time. 时间见真理。
32. Take care of the pence, and the pounds will take care of themselves.
积少自然成多。/小事留意,大事顺利
33. No man is wise at all times. 智者千虑，必有一失。
34. Never put off till tomorrow what you can do today.今天能做的事绝不要拖到明天。
35. Live and learn. 活到老，学到老。
36. Kill two birds with one stone. 一石双鸟。
37. It never rains but it pours. 祸不单行。
38. In doing we learn. 经一事，长一智。
39. Easier said than done. 说起来容易做起来难。
40. An ounce of prevention is worth a pound of cure. 一分预防胜似十分治疗。
41. Industry is fortune's right hand, and frugality her left.
勤勉是幸运的右手，节约是幸运的左手。
42. Genius is one percent inspiration and 99 percent perspiration.
天才一分来自灵感，九十九分来自勤奋。
43. He who laughs last laughs best. 谁笑在最后，谁笑得最好。
44. He who pays the piper calls the tune. 谁负担费用，谁加以控制。
45. He who has health has hope, and he who has hope has everything.
身体健壮就有希望，有了希望就有了一切。
46. No man is born wise or learned. 人非生而知之。
47. Action speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩。
48. Courage and resolution are the spirit and soul of virtue.
勇敢和坚决是美德的灵魂。
49. United we stand, divided we fall.合即立，分即垮。
50. There is no smoke without fire.无风不起浪。
51. Many hands make light work.人多好办事。
52. Reading makes a full man. 读书长见识。
53. The best horse needs breeding, and the aptest child needs teaching.
最好的马要驯，最伶俐的孩子要教。/ 好马需驯, 好人需教
54. Learn young, learn fair. 学习趁年轻，学就要学好。
55. Wisdom in the mind is better than money in the hand.
胸中有知识，胜于手中有金钱。
56. Once bitten, twice shy. 一次被咬，下次胆小。
57. Sound in body, sound in mind. 有健全的身体才有健全的精神。
58. Seeing is believing.百闻不如一见。
59. Dogs wave their tails not so much in, love to you as your bread.
狗摇尾巴，爱的是你的面包。
60. Money is a good servant but a bad master. 要做金钱的主人，莫作金钱的奴隶。
61. It's hard sailing when there is no wind. 无风难驶船。
62. The path to glory is always rugged. 通向光荣的道路常常是崎岖的。
63. Living without an aim is like sailing without a compass.
没有目标的生活如同没有罗盘的航行。
64. Quality matters more than quantity.质重于量。
65. The on-looker sees most of the game.旁观者清。
66. Wisdom is a good purchase though we pay dear for it .
为了求知识，代价虽高也值得。
67. Joys shared with others are more enjoyed. 与众同乐，其乐更乐。
68. Happiness takes no account of time.欢乐不觉日子长。
69. Time and tide waits for no man.岁月不等人。
70. If you want knowledge, you must toil for it.若要求知，必须刻苦。
71. Learn to walk before you run. 循序渐进。
72. Knowing something of everything, and everything of something.
通百艺而专一长。
73. From words to deeds is a great space.言行之间，大有距离。
74. Skill and confidence are an unconquered army. 技能和信心是无敌的军队。
75. Habit is a second nature.习惯成自然。
76. Lifeless, faultless.只有死人才不会犯错误。
77. A book is the same today as it always was and it will never change.
好书千载常如新。
78. Books, like friends, should be few and well chosen.
读书如择友，宜少且宜精。
79. A book that remains shut is but a block.书本不常翻，犹如一块砖。
80. It's not the gay coat that makes the gentleman.君子在德不在衣。
81. Two heads are better than one.三个臭皮匠顶个诸葛亮。
82. Birth is much, but breeding is more. 出身重要，教养更重要。
83. Nothing is impossible to a willing mind. 世上无难事，只怕有心人。
84. You can't make something out of nothing. 巧妇难为无米之炊。
85. Nothing venture, nothing have. 不入虎穴，焉得虎子。
86. Nothing for nothing. 不费力气，一无所得。
87. Of nothing comes nothing. 无中不能生有。
88. He who makes no mistakes makes nothing. 不犯错误者一事无成。
89. Better say nothing than nothing to the purpose. 话不中肯，不如不说。
90. Nothing succeeds like success. 一事如意，万事顺利。
91. Nothing stake, nothing draw. 不顶千里浪，哪来万斤鱼。
92. Nothing is as good as it seems beforehand. 期待比现实更美好。
93. Nothing is given so freely as advice. 劝人最容易。
94. Nothing is so certain as the unexpected. 天有不测风云，人有旦夕祸福。
95. Nothing seek, nothing find. 无所求则无所获。
96. A little of every thing is nothing in the main. 每事浅尝辄止，事事都告无成。
97. A great ship asks deep waters. 大船要走深水。（蛟龙要在海中游。）
98. The best physicians are Dr. Diet, Dr. Quiet, and Dr. Merryman.
节食博士、精心博士、快乐博士，三人都是最好的医生。
99. He that once deceives is ever suspected. 骗人一次，受疑一世。
100. Empty wagons rattle loudest. 空车响声大。
101. Nothing so bad but might be a blessing. 塞翁失马，焉知非福。
102.Barking dogs seldom bite. 吠犬不咬人
103.Better go to heaven in rags than to hell in embroidery. 宁可穷而有志，不可富而失节
104.Better late than never. 迟做总比不做好
105.Between two stools you fall to the ground. 脚踩两条凳，早晚要坠地(意同：脚踏两条船)
106.Birds of a feather of lock together. 物以类聚，人以群分
107.Blood is thicker than water. 血浓于水(意指：亲人总比外人亲）
108.Beggars‘ bags are bottom less. 乞丐永远不知足
109.The most tragic blow for one is the death of his mind． 哀莫大于心死。
110.He who does not have a strong will can never achieve high intelligence·．
志不强者智不达。
111.When Heaven is about to place a great burden on a man，it always tests his resolution first，exhausts his body and makes him suffer great hardships，frustrates his efforts to recover from mental lassitude．Then Heaven toughens his nature and makes good his deficiencies．
天将降大任于斯人也，必先苦其心志，劳其筋骨，饿其体肤，空乏其身，行拂乱其所为，所
以动心忍性，曾益其所不能。
112.How can a sparrow know the will of a swan 燕雀安知鸿鹄之志哉!
113.Among three people I meet on the way，there will be at least ont from whom I can learn something．I may follow his goodness or correct my own mistakes by learning from him．
三人行必有我师焉。择其善者而从之，其不善者而改之。
114.Education should be for all，irrespective of their social status.
有教无类。115.Too many cooks spoil the broth．厨师多坏一锅汤。
116. We would rather be short of books than believe all that they say。
尽信书则不如无书。 I
117.Long as the way is I will keep on searching above and below.
路漫漫其修远兮，吾将上下而求索。
118.When a book is read a hundred times，its meanings will naturally become clear.
读书百遍，其义自见。
119.He owns a gifted pen，who reads tremendously. 读书破万卷，下笔如有神。
120.A gentleman would rather be quick in action than talk a lot.
君子欲讷于言而敏于行。
121.Do not do evil things though they may be insignincant．Do not given up good things though they may be minor matters．
勿以恶小而为之，勿以善小而不为。
122.One must stand by one's words and must not stop one's action until success is achieved． 言必信，行必果。
123.Never do to others what you would not like them to do to you．己所不欲，勿施于人。
124.To surpass others，a person has to surpass himself first；to criticise others，he has to criticise himself first；to make comments upon others，he has to make comments on himself first.
欲胜人者，必先自胜；欲论人者，必先自论；欲知人者，必先自知。
125.Where there's smoke，there's fire．无风不起浪。
126.No fish can survive if the watert is too clean. For the same reason,no company can bear one whose requirements are too critical．水至清则无鱼，人至察则无徒。
127.He sits no sure that sits too high. 高处不胜寒。
128.He that respects not is not respected. 欲受人敬，要先敬人。
129.So said, so done. 说到做到。言出必行。
130.Haste makes waste. 忙乱易错。欲速则不达。
131.Better be envied than pitied. 宁被人妒，不受人怜。
132.Although the sun shine, leave not your cloak at home. 未雨绸缪。
133.So the world wags. 这就是人生。
134.One can not be in two places at once. 一心不可二用。
135.No weal without woe. 福兮祸所伏, 祸兮福所倚。
136.Little chips light great fires. 星星之火，可以燎原。
137.Like knows like. 惺惺相惜。
138.It is a poor mouse that has only one hole. 狡兔三窟。
139.Dreams are lies. 梦不足信。
140.Do not teach fish to swim. 不要班门弄斧。
141.A light heart live long. 心情开朗寿命长。不恼不愁，活到白头。
142.An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 日吃苹果一只，身体健康不求医。
143.Poverty is stranger to industry. 勤劳之人不受穷。
144.Deliberate in counsel, prompt in action. 考虑要仔细,行动要迅速.
145.One sin opens the door for another. ---German 犯了一次罪恶就会犯另一次罪。
146.One man's meat is another man's poison. 萝卜青菜，各有所爱。
147.We never know the worth of water till the well is dry. 井干方知水珍贵
148.Less is more. 简单就是美
149.A blessing in disguise. 因祸得福
150.Love me, love my dog. 爱屋及乌
151.Every dog has his day. 凡人皆有得意日
150.Sharpening your axe will not delay your job of cutting wood. 磨刀不误砍柴功。
153.Seeing is believing. 眼见为实
154.Well begun is half done. 好的开端是成功的一半
155.Time flies never to be recalled. 光阴一去不复返　
156.When in Rome, do as Roman do. 入乡随俗
157.He laughs best who laughs last. 谁笑到最后谁笑得最美
158.Deal with a man as he deals with you. 以其人之道还治其人之身
159.Look before you leap. 三思而后行
160.A friend in need is a friend in deed. 患难见真情。专题05读后续写之各种“走”和“跑”
一、关键词
各种“走” (
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stroll闲逛
mince碎步走
toddle婴儿学步
tiptoe蹑手蹑脚
shuffle拖着脚走
march列队走
stride大步走
strut趾高气扬地走
stalk昂首阔步
sneak鬼鬼祟祟地走
sidle侧身走
limp瘸着走
stumble跌跌撞撞地走
stagger蹒跚
trudge吃力地走
plod沉重缓慢地走
wade涉水
wander 漫步
saunter 闲逛
各种“路”
1)avenue 大街；
2)boulevard 林荫大道；
3)walk, promenade 散步的路；
4)ring road 环行路；
5)alley 胡同；
6)pavement 人行道,便道；
7)pedestrian crossing 人行过街横道；
8)public thoroughfare 街道；
9)high street 大街,主要街道（英）
10.main street主街道（美）
11.along/up/down the street 沿着街道
12. across the street 街对面
13. on the other/opposite side of the street
在街道的另一边/对面
14.side/back street 小路/偏僻街道
15.crowded street 拥挤的街道
16.one-way street 单行道
17.street corner 街角
二、常用短语
sneak out of the house偷偷溜出
give a jump in the air 跳到空中（表示开心）
Jump to one’s feet 跳起来（表示震惊）
make a running step back 跑着后退
dash back 冲回
Pace restlessly 不安地走动
aimlessly 无目的地
pop down a hole 跳入一个洞
dig into one’s pocket 插入口袋
Press one’s hand upon one’s heart 用手压住胸口（表示惊吓）
stand a few moments without saying a word 无话可说地站在那里
...flashed across her mind 闪过脑海
start to one’s feet 站起来
三、句子赏析
1．Then Lisa stood up and made her way through the crowd toward me.
2．Lisa planted her feet firmly in front of me.
3．She managed to climb onto it and waited patiently.
4．Reuben ran/rushed down Water Street, trembling with great panic.
5．The shadows were lengthening when Reuben arrived at（动作） the factory.
6．Then, clutching the tin can, he headed for the shop.
7．Racing home, Reuben burst through the front door.
8．Disappointed and frustrated, the poor man made his way back to his family.
9．Suddenly, the woman stood up and entered the house in tears.
10．And yet, they all just stood there staring at me, motionless.
11．Belle Ringer nodded thoughtfully, and Frannie hurried off to wait on the rest of her tables.
12．I led them toward a large corner booth. I could feel the rest of the staff following behind as we marched through the dining room.
13．I dragged myself through daily chores, feeling exhausted.
14．The elderly man fled away with great panic.
15．The man stepped back/stepped onto the platform to take a good look at the paintings.
16．He leapt to his feet and rushed out of the living room.
17．He sprung from his chair and rushed to pick up the telephone.
18．He jumped up and rushed out of the living room.
19．She just sat there staring into space
20．The kids sat around a campfire
21．Please remain seated until your name is called.
22．He seated himself comfortably at the foot of the bed.
23．He took his usual seat at the front of the classroom.
24．That man is hurt, he's limping.
25．He was so drunk that he staggered all the way home.
26．She stumbled upstairs and into bed.
27．She tiptoed to the bed so as not to wake the baby.
28．They strolled around the park.
29．They enjoy wandering through the countryside.
30．He paced up and down the platform, waiting for the train.
31．Demonstrators marched through the streets of the city.
32．A baby crawls before he can walk.
33．Paul decided to edge away from the crowd.
34．The cat crept silently towards the bird.
35．The boy sneaked in without paying.
36．I must dash or I'll miss the train.
37．She goes jogging every day.
38．He tripped over the step and fell.
39．The group hiked up to the top of the hill.
40．As I was sitting in the park, I watched as couples seemed to meander around happily.
四、翻译练习
1. 这个运动员失去了平衡，向后趔趄摔倒了。
2. 她溜下床，踮起脚尖走向窗户。
3. 小黄人向门冲去，逃离了现场。
4. The Indian government is eager for their economy to sprint like a tiger rather than amble along like an elephant.
5. He lost his balance, staggered (蹒跚地走) back against the rail and toppled over.
6. It only takes five minutes to run to the old quarry.
7. When I get there and I'm gasping for breath.
8. I dragged(拖) my heavy legs and moved tiredly forward.
9. She had pulled this pigtail around her neck, and was biting the end of the ribbon, resting her elbows on the desk, as she stared wonderingly at the new pupil.
I put the Christmas present down, pounded(重击) his doorbell and then Grandma and I hid in the car, waiting breathlessly(屏息等待).
Why have you been banging on(大声敲) my door
Ideas poured in.
His eyes spring open.
She was dressed in a blue and white silk that flowed to(垂到) the wooden floor.
Megan watched as men and women of different ages, all apparently hungry, gobbling down\wolf down(狼吞虎咽) a fine meal.
With a leap, she threw her arms around the man’s neck. 搂住She buried her face in his shoulder埋在他的肩膀 and sobbed for a few moments, then she said in a low but determined voice.
“For the sake of God!” With a loud noise of fist hitting the wheel, the car window was wound down(摇下来). The man thrust(挤出) his head out again, staring at the man breaking his sweet dream, his eyes red from lack of sleep.
答案
1. The player lost his balance, staggered back and toppled over.
2. She slipped out of bed and tiptoed to the window.
3. The minion made a rush for the door and escaped from the scene.
4. 印度政府急切希望其经济能像老虎一样快速奔跑而不是像大象一样慢慢踱步。
5. 他失去了平衡，向后趔趄撞在栏杆上摔倒了。
6. 到采石场仅需6分钟。
7. 当我达到时，气喘吁吁。
8. 我拖着沉重的双脚，疲惫前行。
9. 她把这条辫子绕在脖子上，咬着丝带的末端，胳膊肘搁在桌子上，惊奇地盯着新来的学生。
10. 我放下圣诞礼物，敲了敲他的门铃，然后我和奶奶躲在车里，屏息等待。
11. 你为什么一直敲我的门？
12. 想法纷至沓来。想法蜂拥而至
13. 他的眼睛刷地一下睁开了。
14. 她穿了一件蓝白相间的丝绸衣服，丝绸飘逸到木地板上。
15. 梅根看着不同年龄的男女，显然都饿了，狼吞虎咽地吃了一顿美餐。
16. 她猛地一跳，双臂搂住那人的脖子。她把脸埋在他的肩膀里，抽泣了一会儿，然后用低沉但坚定的声音说。
17. “看在上帝的份上！”随着拳头打方向盘的响声，车窗被拉下了。那人又把头探出去，盯着那人打破了他的美梦，他的眼睛因缺乏睡眠而发红。专题10 读后续写之上下文衔接
一、关键词
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hesitation 犹豫
hesitantly犹豫地
add补充说道
continue继续说道
retort反驳道
explain解释道
state陈述道
protest抗议道
sob哭诉道
agree同意地说
comfort安慰道
blurt out脱口而出
seemingly 似乎
surprisingly 令人惊讶的是
suddenly 突然
eventually 最后
completely 完全地
fortunately 幸运地
instead 代替，相反
namely 即，也就是
meanwhile 期间，同时
naturally 自然地
obviously 显而易见 =apparently
more or less 或多或少，差不多，几乎
once in a while 偶尔，时不时地
willingly 情愿地
unexpectedly 出乎意料地
unwillingly 不情愿地
unforgettable 难忘的
dash/rush冲
slip 滑到
sneak/creep偷偷走
crawl 爬
wobble/limp/stagger/stumble摇摇晃晃地走
to one’s + n. 令某人……的是
admiration (羡慕), amazement (惊奇), amusement (娱乐), annoyance (烦恼), astonishment (惊奇), delight (欣喜), despair(绝望), disappointment(失望), embarrassment(难堪), happiness(幸福), horror (恐怖), joy (高兴), puzzlement (疑惑), regret (遗憾), relief (放心), satisfaction (满意), shame (羞愧), sorrow (悲伤), surprise (惊讶)
二、常用短语（时间/衔接）
rise to one’s feet站起来
struggle to one’s feet 吃力地站起来
jump to one’s feet 跳起来
kneel down跪下
get down on one knee单膝跪地
Much to his surprise, 令他十分惊讶的是
Before they knew it,不知不觉中，
After what seemed ages, 在过了似乎几年的时间后，（夸张）
After seemingly a long time, 在过了似乎很长一段时间后，
All of a sudden,突然
Hearing this听到这个
Almost without thinking,几乎想都没想。
Without hesitation, 毫不犹豫地
Knowing what had happened, 知道发生什么事情后，
One day, 有一天
Early in the morning, 一大早
One Sunday afternoon 一个星期天的下午
the other day = a few days ago 几天前
The next/following day,… 第二天（一般过去时）
Just then, … = Just at that moment 正在那时，…
After that, =Later on, …. Then …然后
After a while, …一会儿以后
about half an hour later, ... 大约半小时以后
In the end/ at last/ finally/ eventually,… 最后
from then on, 从那以后,
Surprisingly, 令人惊讶的是，
It was then that I noticed...就在那时我注意到……
For one frozen moment，有一瞬间，
After several attempts, 经过几次尝试，
On arriving home, 一回到家
三、句子赏析
He stiffened(僵硬) for seconds and then shuffled (拖曳、慢慢走) his feet forward, eyes red with fury(愤怒) but without any fear or hesitation.
2. George and I stood there dumbfounded(哑然失声的，发楞的) watching him finishing the whole job, gratitude and admiration rushing in my heart（感激和仰慕涌入我心）.
3. Hearing the bad news, Mary fainted away on the spot and fell into unconsciousness.(当场晕倒，陷入昏迷)
4. His eyes widened further and his mouth opened. He took a huge breath as if winded（喘不过气）. He looked tortured-vulnerable. 他的眼睛瞪大了，嘴巴张开。他深深地吸了一口气仿佛呼吸困难，他看起来饱受折磨，非常脆弱。
5. Approaching me with a great deal of obvious discomfort, Tommy looked up at me with pleading（乞求的）eyes.
6. There was a light touch on my hand; looking down, I saw my son looking at me, curious.我感觉到有人轻轻碰触我的手；低头一看，是我的儿子好奇地在看我。
7. Every knock on the door fills me with expectation(让我充满期待). I immediately picture him walking through(想象某人做某事) the door.
8. He looked out of the window, biting his lips, as if thinking.他一边看着窗外，一边咬着嘴唇，仿佛在思考。
9. At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating. (被深深地恐惧感所控制，手心出汗)
10. Upon hearing the bad news, her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks. (心痛，眼泪直流)
11. Upon hearing the bad news, she, numb with grief, had trouble speaking. (悲伤到失去知觉，不能开口说话)
12. When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, his face beamed and his bright smile lit up the room. (眉开眼笑；笑容照亮房间)
13. Sheldon felt so angry that he stormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him. (冲出房间；狠狠摔门)
14. One flight（一段楼梯） up Della ran, and paused for a moment, panting. 气喘吁吁She was wondering whether she should open the door.
15. And suddenly everything went green, like right before a tornado.（一切变得昏暗） My ears were ringing（耳鸣）, I felt dizzy（头晕）, and I threw up（呕吐）.
16. He stiffened（僵住了）. The smile faded from his lips, and his face turned pale. His hands trembled
17. As I prepared to confess（坦白）, I took a deep breath and swallowed hard(抑制强烈的感情).
18. The fear was like an electric shock, pumping shivering waves tearing through his body（恐惧就像是点击一样，电波撕扯着她的身体） and making his hair stand on end.（毛发直竖）
19. All his instincts（本能）screamed \yelled at him to slip away before he was stopped. He felt uneasy. The hairs on the back of his neck prickled with dread and he was drenched（湿透）in sweat.
20. His eyes lifted slowly, met Mariam’s, lingered （徘徊）for a moment, then dropped. He opened his mouth, but all that came forth was a single, pained groan. 呻吟。He crossed and uncrossed his arms.(手盘起来又放下)
21. I jumped to my feet, completely thunderstruck 如遭雷击; I blinked（眨眼）my eyes hard. I looked carefully all around me.
22. The girl’s voice began to crack(变得嘶哑). She shook her head sadly. Suddenly she began to shake, and stopped talking.
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（一）承接
1. Everything was back to normal. 一切都回归正常。
2. Had not been for your honesty, I would have lost if forever.要不是你的诚实，我将永远失去它。
3. My mother was more than delighted to see my change. 我母亲看到我的改变非常开心。
4. Then there came the sound of turning on the computer.然后传来了开电脑的声音。
5. He had such a horrible but exciting experience to share! 他有如此可怕却又激动人心的经历可以分享！
6. He was moved beyond words.他感动的难以用语言表达。
7. It brought back the great memories of our family eating together. 我们一家人一起吃饭的美好回忆重现脑海。
8. Thus, I will insist on chasing my dream and making every effort. 这样，我就会坚持追逐我的梦想，尽一切的努力。
9. She was too heartbroken to do anything. 她太伤心了以至于不想做任何事情。
10. Never will I regret what I have done. 我永远不会后悔我所做的事。
11. Following the voice, I saw a young man with gray eyes standing here. 顺着声音的方向，我看到了一个灰色眼睛的年轻人站在这里。
12. What touched him most was that I protected his dignity.最让他感动的是我保护了他的尊严。
13. We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性都不为过。
14. By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy. 借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。
15. On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。
16. What an important thing it is to keep our promise!= How important a thing it is to keep our promise!遵守诺言是多么重要的事!
17. All this shows that nothing can prevent us from reaching our aims.这显示了没有事情能够阻挡我们实现目标。
18. So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it.时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。
19. Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。
20. It was not until recently that the problem was solved. 直到最近这个问题才被解决。
（二）行为动作描写
1. Hearing his words, I couldn’t help bursting into tears. 听到他的话，我忍不住哭起来。
2. All of a sudden, a good idea occurred to …突然，***想到了一个好主意。
3. Then her father smiled, comforting her with a warm hug. 然后他的父亲笑了，给了她一个温暖的拥抱来安慰她。
4. The more you are willing to love, the more you are likely to receive.你越是愿意去爱，就越可能被爱。
5. Shocked, Jason called for help immediately. 杰森感到很震惊，立马求助。
6. Hearing this, my father’s face changed from tense to a smile. 听到这个，我父亲的脸从紧张变成了微笑。
7. Under no circumstance can children lead a happy life without love. 孩子们不可能在没有爱的情况下过着幸福的生活。
8. He said firmly, without hesitation. 他说的很坚定，毫不犹豫。
9. They moved so slowly that each second was like an hour to the boy. 他们移动的很慢，对小男孩来说，每一秒都像是一个小时。
10. The wise man looked into the little boys eyes, placing his hands on the boy’s shoulders, and replied softly. 智者看着小男孩的眼睛，把手放在男孩的肩膀上，轻轻地回答。
11. Upon / On hearing of the unexpected news, he was so surprised that he couldn’t say a word.
一听到这个出乎意料的消息，他惊讶到说不出话来。
（三）动物的外貌和动作：
1. Her feathers were so jetty, and her topping so white and full!
它的羽毛乌黑发亮，头上的羽毛又白又密。
2. He looked with sadness upon the little prisoners flying about the cage, peeping through the wires, beating them with their wings, and trying to get out.
他伤心地看着那些囚犯似的小鸟在笼子里飞来飞去，透过丝网向外观望，它们不停地拍打翅膀，想努力飞出来。
3. They were on the watch for him, and would fly down from the green tree tops to greet him with their chirp.
小鸟或在枝头上观看他，或从枝繁叶茂的树上飞下来，叽叽喳喳地和他打招呼。
4. The squirrels peeped out of their holes at Bessie. The birds sang in the branches overhead. Thump, came something all at once into the middle of the road.
松鼠们从它们的洞里探出头来瞧着贝希，鸟儿在头顶的树枝上唱着歌。砰的一声，一个东西一下子蹦到道路中央。
5. When the faithful dog came and rubbed his head against her hand, Susie put her arms around his neck, and burst into tears.
忠心的狗跑回来，头在苏茜的手上蹭来蹭去。苏茜双臂抱住它的脖子，禁不住大哭起来。
6. The Newfoundland is a large, noble fellow. He is black, with a white spot, and with long, shaggy hair. His name is Sport.
纽芬兰犬既高大又名贵，颜色是黑的，缀着白色斑点；毛发长而蓬松。它的名字叫斯波特。
7. Dodger is up on a chair, under the table, behind the door, down cellar, and out in the yard, —all in a minute.
道吉尔能够在一分钟之内跳到椅子上，躲在桌子下，藏在门后，钻进地窖，最后又跑到院子里。
8. Dodger has very bright eyes, and he does many funny things. He likes to put his paws up on the crib, and watch the baby.
道吉尔双眼明亮，调皮可爱。它喜欢将爪子趴在婴儿床的围栏上，看着小宝宝。
（四）体会（结尾，文章主题）
1. A little bit kindness will be rewarded with a large amount of benefit. 滴水之恩当涌泉相报。
2. Love everybody because that’s the greatest thing you can give and it is the start of your life trip. 去爱每一个人因为那是你可以给予的最美好的东西，这也是你人生旅程的开始。
3. So say goodbye to the past and embrace the present. 所以告别过去拥抱当前。
4. I am firmly convinced that the slight power of every person can make our country more prosperous. 我坚定的相信每个人轻微的力量都能是我们的国家更加的繁荣。
5. True love is the most invaluable thing in the world. 真爱是世界上最无价的东西。
6. My patience and love let him believe that the world was full of kindness. 我的耐心和爱心让他相信这个世界上充满了善意。
7. Beauty is not in the face, beauty is a light in the heart. 美不在表面，美是心灵的光。
8. All the students came to realize that everyone wants and deserves to be treated with respect, dignity and warmth. 所有的学生都意识到，每个人都想要得到尊重、尊严和温暖的对待。
9. We will be successful as long as we insist on working hard.只要我们坚持努力工作，我们会成功的。
（五）人的语言和动作
1. "Fire! fire!" The cry crept out on the still night air, and the fire bells began to ring
“着火啦！着火啦！”惊呼声划破了寂静的夜空，火灾报警声随后鸣叫起来。
2."It is Mr. Barton’s house, mother. Do let me go," he said in eager, excited tones.
是巴顿先生的房子着火了，妈妈。让我去帮忙吧！”他用急切而又激动的语气说道。
3. Looking up to the window, he took off his hat and bowed with a bright, pleasant smile.
他抬头看了一眼窗户，然后摘下帽子，鞠躬打招呼，脸上是明亮、欢快的笑容。
4."I should like to go with you very much," replied Susan, with a sigh; "but I can not finish the task grandmother set me to do."
我很想跟你们一起去，”苏珊叹了一口气，回答道，“可是我还没完成奶奶交给我的任务。
5."How tiresome it must be to stay at home to work on a holiday!" said one of the girls, with a toss of her head. "Susan’s grandmother is too strict."
“放假还待在家里干活儿多没劲啊！”其中一个女孩晃着脑袋说，“苏珊的奶奶太严厉了。”
6.Susan heard this remark, and, as she bent her head over her task, she wiped away a tear, and thought of the pleasant afternoon the girls would spend gathering wild flowers in the woods.
苏珊听到了这句评语，当她转身低头继续干活时，拭去了眼中的一滴泪水，想象着那些女孩们将在树林里采摘野花，度过一个愉快的下午。
7. While this was taking place, Ray, who had got tired of standing, was seated in a fence corner, behind a tree.
就在人们兴致勃勃地探索真相时，一直站在那里的芮感到有些疲惫，便在栅栏旁的一棵大树后面坐了下来。
8. Herbert’s passion was over quickly, and, sitting down upon the floor, he covered his face with his hands, and began to cry.
赫伯特顿时怒火中烧，坐在地板上，双手捂着小脸哭了起来。
（六）其它
I felt so scared/nervous that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.
Her stomach was gripped with anxiety,因为焦虑胃抽搐了 like a volcano erupting inside her.
At the theater, nervousness overtook\held me as i realized how much i wanted to make my parents proud.紧张焦虑
I was too scared to move an inch and my palms were sweating/my palms grew sweaty.
Time seemed to stop as I held my breath, waiting for the harsh punishments that I deserved.
I tensed, waiting for the barrage （连珠炮似的）of verbal punishment.(责骂)
Every nerve 神经in his body warned him not to go any further.
I was so scared that my heart was hammering in my chest. 心砰砰直跳
Ann looked upon the doll with a sort of terror\fear.
A burst of horror held me totally in its power, and I was unable to move an inch.
She was struck dead with terror. Her heart was beating painfully fast and banging against her ribs(肋骨).
The September 11 terrorist attacks left many of us confusion and fear（让我们处于困扰和恐惧的状态）.
I feel like my tummy is churning （搅动）around and around and I am going to be sick. （紧张）
I stood with my head down, my eyes directed toward the floor in front of me, making no move to look up.
The thin trees were blowing wildly, and untidy gray clouds were sailing past a pale, sickly moon.(环境描写)
（六）人物动作语言加自然描写：
1. As she looked out, she first saw the western sky and some bright, sunset clouds. "O mother!" she exclaimed, "what a splendid sunset!"
向外望去，她先看见西边的天空，点缀着明亮的落日云。“哦，妈妈！多美丽壮观的落日啊！”她欢呼起来。
2. But Margery sat on the doorstep, and wondered, as the sea sounded louder, and the sunshine grew warmer around her.
玛杰丽坐在台阶上，好奇地思考着。海浪声越来越大，太阳温暖地照耀着她
3.I can smell the sweet flowers in the garden. The sky is all bright with sunset; I can see purple, and pink, and golden. I do not believe that anyone on earth has a paint box with such lovely colors in it.
我能闻到花园里香甜的花朵。天空因为落日非常明亮，我能看见紫色、粉色和金色。我觉得地球上没有人有这样的画笔，能调出这么可爱的颜色。
4. Poor lame Jennie sat at her window, looking out upon the dismal, narrow street, with a look of pain and weariness on her face. "Oh, dear," she said with a sigh, "
可怜的跛腿珍妮坐在窗户旁，看着阴郁、狭窄的街道，脸上写满痛苦和倦意。她叹了口气：“唉，天哪，”
5. How they laugh and sing, and shout to each other as they fill their baskets! The sun looks down through the yellow leaves; the rocks give them mossy seats; the birds and squirrels wonder what these strange people are doing in their woods.
他们又笑又唱，一边互相喊话，一边把栗子往袋子里装，多么快乐啊！太阳透过金黄的叶子俯视着他们；岩石为他们准备好了铺满青苔的座位；小鸟和松鼠好奇地看着他们，嘀咕着这些奇怪的人到底在它们的树林里做什么。
四、翻译练习
（一）细节描述之“思考”
1. 得知问题所在之后，他的大脑开始急速运转，想要想出一个好的解决方案。
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2. 独自一人时，他总是会想到那可怕的经历。
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3. 在他洗澡时，突然想到了一个好主意。
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（二）关于说的动作：
嘟囔： ____________________
结结巴巴地说： ____________________
宣布： ____________________
保证： ____________________
建议： ____________________
喊叫：： ____________________
补充说道： ___________________
继续说道： ____________________
安慰道： ____________________
脱口而出： ____________________
（三）关于eye的动作：
闪烁（某种感彩）： ____________________
各种哭： ____________________
睁大眼睛： ____________________
（四）关于face/cheek的动作：
露出笑容： ____________________
焕发光彩： ____________________
脸红： ____________________
各种笑： ____________________
（五）关于hand的动作：
各种打： ____________________
各种抓： ____________________
拥抱： ____________________
（六）关于body的动作：
弯腰： ____________________
倚靠： ____________________
低头： ____________________
（七）关于heart的动作：
各种心跳： ____________________
漏跳了一拍： ____________________
（八）添加修饰成分，做到生动描写
可以添加介词短语或者副词来修饰动词。
① Her eyes ____________________.她的眼睛中闪烁着兴奋的光芒。
② The ferocious wolf stared at Mac ____________________.(红着双眼)
She kissed Oliver ____________________. （嘴唇苍白）
③ He gazed at me _______________.（惊讶地）
④ He carefully jumped over the broken glasses.
2.①She howled long and loud ____________________（像一只凶恶的狼）_ and then jumped at Buck.
②She went home_________________________.她泪如泉涌地回家去了。
参考答案：
（一）细节描述之“思考”
1. 得知问题所在之后，他的大脑开始急速运转，想要想出一个好的解决方案。
2. 独自一人时，他总是会想到那可怕的经历。
3. 在他洗澡时，突然想到了一个好主意。
1. After he knew what the problem was, his mind began to race, trying to think of a good solution. 2. When left alone, he would always be haunted by that horrible experience. ([不好的回忆]萦绕心头挥之不去)
3. When he was taking a shower, a brilliant idea suddenly crossed his mind
（二）关于说的动作：
嘟囔： whisper/mumble/grunt/murmur
结结巴巴地说：stutter/stumble/stammer
宣布：announce/declare
保证：promise/assure
建议：offer/propose/suggest；
喊叫：cry out喊叫/call喊叫/shout大喊/scream尖叫/yell大喊/exclaim惊叫（因高兴、愤怒、痛苦、惊讶等发生的喊叫）
add补充说道
continue继续说道
comfort安慰道
blurt out脱口而出
（三）关于eye的动作：
闪烁（某种感彩）：shine/sparkle/glimmer/glitter/twinkle with + excitement/joy/pride等表示感彩的名词
各种哭：cry/sob/weep/wail/burst into tears/burst out crying/fight back tears抑制住泪水
睁大眼睛：one’s eyes widened/ grew wide
（四）关于face/cheek的动作：
露出笑容：a smile appeared on/ spread across his face
焕发光彩：one’s face lit up/brightened/glowed
脸红：flush/burn （with embarrassment）
各种笑：smile微笑/laugh出声笑/chuckle轻声笑/giggle咯咯笑/sneer讥讽地笑/beam笑容满面/grin露齿笑
（五）关于hand的动作：
各种打：pound/thump/punch 猛击; beat连续击打；slap打耳光；tap/pat轻拍
各种抓：seize；grasp；grab; clutch; take hold of; catch hold of; hold on to
hug/embrace/hold sb in one’s arms拥抱
（六）关于body的动作：
bend/stoop 弯腰
lean against..倚靠
drop/hang/lower one’s head 低头
（七）关于heart的动作：
各种心跳：beat/thump/pound/pump ( with excitement/fear)
miss/skip a beat 漏跳了一拍
（八）添加修饰成分，做到生动描写
可以添加介词短语或者副词来修饰动词。
①with+情感名词的搭配：
with delight/excitement/ pleasure/ happiness /joy/satisfaction /anger/rage/patience/fear/terror/embarrassment/pride /caution/care/patience/certainty
如：Her eyes shone with excitement.她的眼睛中闪烁着兴奋的光芒。
②with+身体部位
with its hungry red eyes/ its sharp teeth/her shaky hand/her pale lips等等
如：The ferocious wolf stared at Mac with its hungry red eyes.
此处用with its hungry red eyes来修饰动作stare，使狼凶狠的形象更加丰满。
如：She kissed Oliver with her pale lips.
此处用with her pale lips来修饰动作kiss，体现了母亲当时虚弱的状态，和对Oliver满满的爱。
③in+名词 in surprise/amazement/shock/sorrow伤心
in a high /low / sweet/loud/soft /weak voice 用..的嗓音
In a tone of surprise /curiosity /impatience /regret /command命令/sarcasm讽刺 用……的语气
如：He gazed at me in surprise.
④副词 suddenly /immediately /instantly /rapidly /firmly /slowly /angrily/happily/excitedly/
如：He carefully jumped over the broken glasses.
此处也可以把副词carefully提高句首，强调他的小心，效果更好。
高分表达：Carefully，he jumped over the broken glasses.
在动作描写中也可以运用明喻、暗喻、拟人、夸张等写作手法，让你的写作更加生动传神。
① She howled long and loud like a ferocious wolf and then jumped at Buck.
此句把她比作凶残的恶狼，用到了明喻的写作手法，使整句的动作描写更有力度，更有画面感。
② She went home in a flood of tears.她泪如泉涌地回家去了。
此处在动作描写中添加了in a flood of tears夸张描写，生动传神地体现她当时的情感状态。专题06 读后续写之各种“哭”和“笑”
一、关键词
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1.轻声的哭泣：
weep 无声地流泪；
sob 呜咽、抽泣；
whimper 啜泣、呜咽；
lament 恸哭哀悼；
mewl 低声啜泣；
snivel 哭诉、抽鼻子哭；
whine 哀鸣、发出呜呜声；
2.大声的哭泣：
squall 嚎啕大哭；
wail 哀嚎、恸哭流涕；
yowl 大哭大叫；
blubber 放声大哭、又哭又闹
3.笑
Grin 咧嘴笑
Beam眉开眼笑
giggle咯咯地笑
chuckle轻轻地笑（以免打扰别人）
roar with laughter疯狂大笑
howl with laughter狂笑（尤指一群人）
二、常用短语
1. put a smile on someone’s face 使某人高兴
2. be all smiles 笑容满面
3. grin from ear to ear 咧着嘴笑
4. keep smiling 保持微笑，乐观
5. something smiled on someone 好事降临某人
6. 强忍住笑 trying not to laugh
7. 开怀大笑 bursting with laughter
1．burst into tears
2．weep/sob
3．be about to cry
4．cry in silence
5．tears streamed down his face/cheeks
6．with tears streaming down his face/cheeks
7．with tears glistening in his eyes
8．with tears welling up in his eyes
9．tears of excitement/joy welled up in his eyes
10．two drops of tears rolled down her cheeks
11．couldn’t/fail to contain his tears
12．be close to tears
13．fight back the tears
14．couldn’t help shedding tears
15．tears he shed were tears of joy.
a bright smile 灿烂的笑容
one’s face brightened 某人的脸上焕发出了光彩
one’s face grow serious表情变得严肃
one’s face looked a little confused 某人看起来有点因惑
one’s face flushed/burned with embarrassment. 某人的脸窘得满脸通红
one’s face paled with fright 某人的脸吓得都白了
had a slight frown on one’s face 某人愁眉不展的样子
one’s cheeks burning with shame 某人因为羞愧而感到脸颊发烧
one’s cheeks are wet with tears 某人泪流满面
color rushed/flooded to one’s cheeks 某人涨红了脸
a tear slid down one’s cheek 一滴泪顺着某人的脸颊滑落下来
kissed sb. on both cheeks 亲了某人的脸颊
三、句子赏析
1．Susan smiled at him and waved.
2．He was smiling broadly now.
3．Oh, I’m fine,’ Anna replied with a smile.
4．A broad smile spread over Lucy’s face.
5．He managed a faint smile.
6．He looked across at Jos with a wry smile (=one which shows both amusement and sadness). Oh, I understand,’ he said with a knowing smile (=one which shows you know something that is secret).
7．a smile on your face/lips
8．Now he had a great big smile on his face.
9．She gave them a little smile.
10．Of course,’ she replied smilingly.
11．Tony was laughing so hard he had to steady himself on the table.
12．Nora laughed so much that she nearly cried.
13．laugh heartily/uproariously/hysterically etc (=laugh a lot)
14．The kids tumbled around on the floor, laughing hysterically.
15．He couldn’t help it; he burst out laughing (=suddenly started laughing). laugh your head off
16．He’s one of the few writers who can make me laugh out loud.
17．“What a mess!” she said, with a laugh.
18．At first she was silent, then she gave a nervous laugh.
19．He looked shocked, then burst into laughter (=started laughing).
20．roar/scream/shriek with laughter (=laugh very loudly)
21．Audiences roared with laughter.
22．He shook with laughter.
23．Catch me if you can,’ she said with a giggle.
24．Vicky suppressed a nervous giggle.
25．If you can’t stop giggling you’ll have to leave the room.
26．What are you chuckling about
27．Rosie gave a little chuckle.
28．The boys tried not to smirk.
29．What are you smirking at
30．He had a self-satisfied smirk on his face.
31. Patsy could hardly be heard above the baby’s yowls.
在婴儿的号哭声中很难听清帕齐在说些什么。
32.The patient gave out a scream of pain.病人痛苦地尖叫一声。
33. She began to sob again, burying her face in the pillow
她把脸埋在枕头里，又开始抽噎起来。
34. “Everything’s my fault,” she sobbed. 她呜咽着说：“一切都是我的错。”
35. In severe cases, the skin can crack and weep.
在恶劣的条件下，皮肤可能会开裂并流脓。
36. The weeping family hugged and comforted each other
哭泣着的一家人相互拥抱并彼此安慰。
37. The women began to wail in mourning. 女人们开始哀哭起来。
38.I will weep and wail for the mountains. 我要为山岭哭泣悲哀。
四、写作练习
（一） 根据提示填空：
1.No matter how many times I said, Come here, Bong-Soon she _________________
______________(都不予理会,只是嚎叫着).
2.My normally mild-mannered dog_________________(失去了理智), ___________
_______(在厨房里又跳又叫)until someone, anyone, would give her even the smallest morsel of cheese.
3.As soon as the ball was hit, Cook ________________________________________
(垂下头，弯腰，挥拳头，沮丧地在地上尖叫).
4._________________(女人们在尖叫); some of the houses nearest the bridge were
on fire
5.Suddenly he heard, or thought he heard, _________________(传出一声呜咽) in
the brushes.
6.If I ____________________(因为失去太阳而哭泣), will lose the star.
7.The woman used her _________________(悲伤故事来赢得同情) from the press.
8.She _________________(抽泣了起来), holding herself in as if_________________
(哭泣是件丢脸的事似的). (disgrace)
9.Wonderfully melodic and tuneful, ___________________(他的歌让我潸然泪下).
10.I _________________(与你一起流泪) without shame and without honor.
11. Laugh, and the world laughs with you, _________, and _________________.
(哭，你独自去哭吧)
12.Mace still remembers __________________________________(那些被困者和受伤者的令人同情的哀号).
13.The exhausted mother smiled at ________________________(听到新生儿的哭叫声).
14.I wanted to tell her, __________________________________(她们会流泪哭泣，但从不嚎叫).
15.Fellow citizens, above your national, tumultuous joy, _______________________(我听到千万人的悲恸号哭).
（二）将下列句子翻译成英文：
1.一声尖叫划破了寂静的夜空。
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2.人们在害怕、生气或痛苦时会尖叫。
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3.我会呆在门口哭泣而对任何人都没好处。
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4.过了一会儿，他长长地抽泣了一声，但立即用闲着的那只手捂住了自己的脸。
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5.她将手捂住脸哭了起来。
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6.他讲一个悲伤的故事给我听，使我落入圈套。
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7.这样的想法使我呜咽得更厉害。
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8.她喜极而泣.
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9.她鼻子一酸，流下泪来。
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10.那我就坐在黑暗中流泪好了。
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11.再也不要哭泣了，我的姑娘。
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12.抱着我，假如我需要哭泣。
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13.“看看你干的好事！”雪莉哭诉道。
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14.紧闭的窗户外狂风呼啸。
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15.新生儿痛哭一声便开始了他们的生命。
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16.小孩中的一个吓得大哭起来。
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（三）翻译小练：
1. 他的脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。
2. 我给她礼物时，他的脸上焕发出了光彩。
3. 他的表情突然严肃起来。
4. 他看起来有点因惑。
5. 杰克窘得满脸通红。flush [fl ] 脸红
6. 她吓得脸都白了。
7. 他的脸上现出有点儿愁眉不展的样子。
8. 他因为羞愧而感到脸颊发烧。
9. 她泪流满面。
10. 意识到有人在看她，她顿时涨红了脸。
11. 一滴泪顺着她的脸颊滑落下来。
12. 他亲了亲她的脸颊，然后上了火车。
参考答案
写作练习（一） 根据提示填空：
1. No matter how many times I said, Come here, Bong-Soon she refused to obey and cried with a yowl.
我不断地呼唤她:奉顺,来这里!她都不予理会,只是嚎叫着。
2. My normally mild-mannered dog lost her mind, yowling and dancing around the kitchen until someone, anyone, would give her even the smallest morsel of cheese.
我平时温文尔雅的狗失去了理智，在厨房里跳舞，直到有人把最小的奶酪给了她。
3. As soon as the ball was hit, Cook dropped his head, bent at the waist, balled his fists and screamed at the ground in frustration.
球一被击中，Cook垂下头，弯腰，挥拳头，沮丧地在地上尖叫。
4. Women were screaming; some of the houses nearest the bridge were on fire
女人们在尖叫；离桥最近的几所房屋起火了。
5. Suddenly he heard, or thought he heard, a sound as of a sob in the brushes.
突然他听到，他认为他听到了灌木丛林中传出一声呜咽。
6. If I because of loses the sun to sob, will lose the star.
如果我因为失去太阳而哭泣，就将会失去星星。
7. The woman used her sob story to gain sympathy from the press.
那女人用她的悲伤故事（注：含有夸大做作之意）来赢得新闻界的同情心。
8. She began to sob, holding herself in as if weeping were a disgrace.
她抽泣了起来，同时又尽量克制着自己，好像哭泣是件丢脸的事似的。
9. Wonderfully melodic and tuneful, his songs have made me weep.
他的歌旋律优美、悦耳动听，让我潸然泪下。
10. I weep with you without shame and without honor.
我与你一起流泪，没有羞愧，也没有自尊。
11. Laugh, and the world laughs with you, weep, and you weep alone.
笑，世界与你同笑；哭，你独自去哭吧。
12. Mace still remembers the pitiful wailing of the trapped and the wounded.
梅斯依然还记得那些被困者和受伤者的令人同情的哀号。
13. The exhausted mother smiled at the wail of her newborn baby.
听到新生儿的哭叫声，倦极了的母亲笑了。
14. I wanted to tell her, they wail and weep, but they never howl.
我想告诉她，她们会流泪哭泣，但从不嚎叫。
15. Fellow citizens, above your national, tumultuous joy, I hear the mournful wail of millions!
同胞们，在你们举国欢腾的作乐声中，我听到千万人的悲恸号哭。
写作练习（二）将下列句子翻译成英文：
1. A scream broke the silence of the night.
一声尖叫划破了寂静的夜空。
2. People scream in fright, in anger, and in sudden pain.
人们在害怕、生气或痛苦时会尖叫。
3. I would sob at the door and be no good to anyone.
我会呆在门口哭泣而对任何人都没好处。
4. After a moment, he let out a long sob, quickly covering his face with his free hand.
过了一会儿，他长长地抽泣了一声，但立即用闲着的那只手捂住了自己的脸。
5. She buried her face in her hands and began to sob.
她将手捂住脸哭了起来。
6. He set me up by telling me a sob story.
他讲一个悲伤的故事给我听，使我落入圈套。
7. This thought caused me to sob even harder.
这样的想法使我呜咽得更厉害。
8. She wept tears of joy.
她喜极而泣。
9. Her nose twitched and she began to weep.
她鼻子一酸，流下泪来。
10. I’d just sit in the dark and weep.
那我就坐在黑暗中流泪好了。
11. Weep no more my lady.
再也不要哭泣了，我的姑娘。
12. Hold me if I need to weep.
抱着我，假如我需要哭泣。
13. “Now look what you’ve done!” Shirley wailed
“看看你干的好事！”雪莉哭诉道。
14. The wind wailed outside the closed windows.
紧闭的窗户外狂风呼啸。
15. Newborn babies begin their life with a wail.
新生儿痛哭一声便开始了他们的生命。
16. One of the small children began to wail with terror.
小孩中的一个吓得大哭起来。
（三）翻译练习1：
1. A bright smile appeared on his face.
2. Her face lit up/brightened/glowed when I gave her the present.
3. His face suddenly grew serious.
4. His face looked a little confused.
5. Jack’s face flushed/burned with embarrassment.
6. Her face paled with fright.
7. He had a slight frown on his face.
8. He felt his cheeks burning with shame.
9. Her cheeks were wet with tears.
10. Color rushed/flooded to her cheeks when she realized she was being watched.
11. A tear slid down her cheek.
12. He kissed her on both cheeks and got on the train.专题01 读后续写之人物手上动作描写
一、关键词
1.seize 抓住；俘获
seize a chance, an opportunity 抓住机会 seize sth. (from sb.)（常指通过暴力突然）夺取
seize on sth.突然大为关注，抓住（可利用的事物）
2.grab/ grasp 抓住；急忙抓住
~ a chance/an opportunity急忙抓住（机会） grasp at sth.尽力抓住某物
3.drag 拖拽；吃力地往前拉
常用短语：
drag by 过得很慢；拖沓地进行
例句：The last few weeks of the summer really dragged by.夏天最后的几个星期过得真是慢啊。
drag sth into sth 毫无必要地扯到
例句：Don’t drag the children into our argument. 不要硬让孩子也卷入我们的争论。
4. wag [w ɡ] v.（动物尾巴）来回摇摆；来回摇动（竖立的手指）
5. rub [r b] vt. 擦；摩擦
6. pull /push 拉/推
7. raise 举起，抬起
8. tap轻叩 / pat轻轻地拍
二、常用短语
take one’s hand 牵某人的手
reach for one’s hand 伸手抓住某人
hold hands 手拉手
in one’s hand 在手里
with both hands 用双手
shake one’s hand 握手
hold out a hand 伸出手
put one’s hands to one’s cheeks 用双手捂住脸
raise one’s hands 举手
slid one’s hands into将手插进......
spread one’s hand 摊开双手
rub one’s hands together使劲搓着双手
one’s hands shake/tremble 某人的手颤抖着
catch/ hold of one’s arm 抓住某人的手臂
cup one’s hand over 捂住......
with one’s head in one’s hands双手抱着......
hand in hand 手拉手
raise a warning finger 举起一手指以示警告
raise/hold up a finger to one’s lip 把一根手指举到某人唇边
wag/wave one’s finger 某人摇着手指
wave one’s arms 挥动某人的双臂
with crossed arms 双臂交叉
fold one’s arms 某人双臂交叉
hold out/open one’s arms伸出/张开双臂
catch /grab one’s arm 抓住某人的胳膊
take one’s arm 挽住某人的胳膊
arm in arm 手挽手
put/throw one’s arms around sb. 搂住某人
pull sb. into one’s arms 拉某人进怀
三、优美句子
1．Stunned, I stood up and gave her an awkward hug / hugged her in an award way.
2．Speechless, she smiled radiantly and gathered her son into her arms.
3．The nearer it got, the more she waved the yellow blouse wildly.
4．The man took the sacks, reached into his pocket and placed four coins in Reuben’s hand.
5．Then, clutching the tin can, he headed for the shop.
6．He parked down the street from Bobby’s house, and rushed to his front door, trembling with excitement.
7．The man gently wrapped the gift in brown paper and placed the parcel in Reuben’s hands.
8．Dora lifted the lid, tears beginning to blur her vision.
9．Seeing no other people notice us, I placed the Christmas present down and pounded his doorbell.
10．She didn’t say a word, but smiled a watery smile and held my hand tightly.
11．As we shook hands with the new owners, I told them how fortunate they were.
12．He patted my head, and inquired: “Is there anything particular you want ”
13．He was squeezing my wrist so hard that it ached.
14．She stroked her fingers through my hair, and said: “Of course there is a Santa Clause.”
15．She handed the napkin to me, and three $20 bills fell onto my desk when I opened it.
16．Stevie looked at me, and then at his mother, then pulled out one of the napkins.
17．The class clapped warmly as Mr. Lee presented me with the reward.
18．He reached into his pocket and withdrew a note.
19．Mrs. Damon pointed to the quotation from Albert Einstein hanging on the wall.
20．Calmly he picked up the brush and started again to whitewash.
21．She nervously fingered her collar.
22．He stroked the cat and patted the dog
23．She tapped him on the shoulder.
24．He grasped my hand and we ran
25．She grabbed her briefcase and ran to the bus stop
26．The thief snatched the handbag and disappeared into the crowd.
27．Press the button.
28．Please handle the goods with great care。
29．George stood silently with his arms folded.
四、写作练习（一） 根据提示填空：
1.She tried___________________(夺枪) from him.
2.He was ____________________________ (笨手笨脚地想抓住艾尔弗雷德的手臂)and dig my nails into his flesh.
3.In sport, it’s usually men ________________________(新闻人物通常是男性) .
4.If you were you, I_________________________(要抓住我的免费索取的权利，现在)!
5.Success is now ___________________(在望).
6.She allowed __________________________(胜利从手中溜走了).
7.He___________________(马上就明白)Tephen was talking about his wife.
8.He ______________________________(设法牢牢抓住了那个金属物), get a firm grip of it and heave his body upwards.
9.Attlee was extremely intelligent and____________________________________(对局势的把握颇为高明).
10.Use your mouse __________________________________(拖动图片将其调整为新的尺寸).
11.He was barely able______________________________________(拖着那条中毒的腿走路 )
12.The minutes ___________________(熬过去)
时间一分钟一分钟地。
13.As far as shopping for clothes goes, ___________________(是件挺没意思的事)
14.___________________(他拖着腿), and he can hardly lift his arm.
15.I tried to ___________________(走出来)morass of despair.
16.Please concentrate on the business at hand and ______________________(不要牵扯其他问题).
17.I don’t want to go back there and________________________(重提那件气人的事)
18.You’ll never get home______________________________________(你走这么慢).
19.He felt hot tears_______________________(掉到他的手指上)
他感觉到热泪。
20.Nancy ___________________(疲惫地瘫坐到)a nearby chair
21.Britain _________________________ (从第二位降到了)third place in the league.
22.There was ___________________(垂直深渊)just outside my window
23.If I___________________(给点暗示)he might give me a big present.
24.Burning embers started ______________________________________(从天花板上往下掉)
25.He ___________________(放低了声音) and glanced round at the door.
写作练习（二）将下列句子翻译成英文：
（第一组）：
1.他向前跑着，挥动着双臂。
2.他站在那里，双臂交叉，看上去很生气。
3.她双臂交叉，盯着他
4.他微笑着伸出/张开双臂。
5.他伸出一只手抓住她的胳膊。
6.她走近父亲，挽住他的胳膊。
7.他们手挽手走着
8.他跑到她跟前，搂住她。
9.他把她拉进怀里，吻了她。
（第二组）：
1.她拉住孩子的手牵着他爬上台阶。
2.他伸手抓住她的手并紧紧握住。
3.他们手拉手并肩走着。
4.他手里拿着钥匙。
5.他双手抓着绳子。
6.他握住我的手好像我们是失散多年的朋友。
7.她笑着伸出一只手表示欢迎。
8.窘迫之中她用双手捂住了脸。
9.几个学生举手回答问题。
10.他悄悄地将手插进口袋里。
11.她耸耸肩，摊开双手说：“我只能告诉你这么多了。”
12.她一边颤抖，一边使劲搓着双手。
13.她的手颤抖着把杯子送到唇边。
14.一只有力的手伸了出来抓住了她的手臂。
15.我用手捂住电话，免得他们听到我的话。
16.他双手抱着坐着。
17.他们手拉手沿着小路走。
（第三组）：
1.老师举起一个手指以示警告，我们停止了交谈。
2.她把一根手指举到唇边，要求肃静。
3.“这些都不是！”老师摇着手指喊道。
4. 我把手指蘸着酱汁舔了舔。
参考答案
写作练习（一） 根据提示填空：
1. She tried to seize the gun from him.
她试图夺他的枪。
2. He was clumsily trying to grab at Alfred’s arms and dig my nails into his flesh.
他笨手笨脚地想抓住艾尔弗雷德的手臂，指甲抠进了他的肉里。
3. In sport, it’s usually men who grab the headlines.
在体育方面，新闻人物通常是男性。
4. If you were you, I’d grab my FREE copy right now!
如果你是你，我要抓住我的免费索取的权利，现在！
5. Success is now within our grasp.
现在胜利在望。
6. She allowed victory to slip from her grasp.
她让胜利从手中溜走了。
7. He instantly grasped that Stephen was talking about his wife.
他马上就明白斯蒂芬在说他的妻子。
8. He managed to grasp the metal, get a firm grip of it and heave his body upwards.
他设法牢牢抓住了那个金属物，把整个身子往上提。
9. Attlee was extremely intelligent and his grasp of the situation was masterly.
阿特利聪明过人，对局势的把握颇为高明。
10. Use your mouse to drag the pictures to their new size.
用鼠标拖动图片，将其调整为新的尺寸。
11. He was barely able to drag his poisoned leg behind him
他极费力地拖着那条中毒的腿走路。
12. The minutes dragged past
时间一分钟一分钟地熬过去。
13. As far as shopping for clothes goes, it’s a drag
逛街买衣服是件挺没意思的事。
14. He drags his leg, and he can hardly lift his arm.
他拖着腿，几乎举不起他的胳膊。
15. I tried to drag myself out of the morass of despair.
我试图从绝望的困境中走出来。
16. Please concentrate on the business at hand and don’t drag in irrelevant issues.
请你集中谈这件事，不要牵扯其他问题。
17. I don’t want to go back there and drag up that anger again
我不想再回到那儿，重提那件气人的事。
18. You’ll never get home if you drag along like this.
你走这么慢，哪辈子能蹭到家呀？
19. He felt hot tears dropping onto his fingers
他感觉到热泪掉到他的手指上。
20. Nancy dropped into a nearby chair
南希疲惫地瘫坐到近处的椅子上。
21. Britain has dropped from second to third place in the league.
英国在联赛中的排名从第二位降到了第三位。
22. There was a sheer drop just outside my window
我的窗外就是垂直深渊。
23. If I drop a few hints he might give me a big present.
如果我给点暗示，他没准会送我一个大礼。
24. Burning embers started dropping from the ceiling
余火未尽的木块开始从天花板上往下掉。
25. He dropped his voice and glanced round at the door.
他放低了声音，在门口环视了一下。
写作练习（二）将下列句子翻译成英文：
（第一组）翻译练习：
1. He was running forward, waving his arms.
2. He stood there with crossed arms, looking angry.
3. She folded her arms and stared at him.
4. He held out/opened his arms with a broad smile.
5. He reached out a hand and caught /grabbed her arm.
6. She moved closer to her father and took his arm.
7. They walked along arm in arm.
8. He ran up to her and put/threw his arms around her.
9. He pulled her into his arms and kissed her.
（第二组）翻译练习：
1. She took the child’s hand and helped him climb the steps.
2. He reached for her hand and held it tightly.
3. They walked along, holding hands.
4. He held the key in his hand.
5. He grasped the rope with both hands.
6. He shook my hands as if we were long lost friends.
7. She smiled and held out a hand in welcome.
8. She put her hands to her cheeks in embarrassment.
9. Several students raised their hands to answer the question.
10. He slid his hands into his pockets.
11. She shrugged and spread her hands."That’s all I can tell you."
12. She shivered, rubbing her hands together fiercely.
13. Her hands shook/trembled as she lifted the glass to her lips.
14. A strong hand reached out and caught/ hold of her arm.
15. I cupped my hand over the phone so they couldn’t hear me.
16. He sat with his head in his hands.
17. They walked hand in hand along the path.
（第三组）翻译练习：
1. The teacher raised a warning finger and we stopped talking.
2. She raised/held up a finger to her lip to ask for silence.
3. "None of that!" cried the teacher, wagging/waving her finger.
4. I dipped my finger in the sauce and licked it.专题11 读后续写之各地联考汇编附答案（第1-50篇）
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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Ariana caught another whiff（难闻的味道）and tried to hold her breath. She moved away slightly, but Ashley only moved closer and continued talking. Ariana felt trapped. She wanted badly to tell Ashley that she didn’t smell very good. But how could she do that without hurting Ashley’s feelings Instead, she gathered the remains of her lunch to throw in the trash, thankful for the excuse to get some fresh air. She looked back to see Ashley eating quietly. Ashley’s hair was tangled（乱糟糟的）, and her clothes were dirty. Ariana forced herself to go back to the table and take her seat, vowing（发誓）that she would not sit with Ashley tomorrow.
When Ariana got home from school, she complained to her mother, “There’s a girl named Ashley who likes to sit next to me in school, but she smells bad.”
“She’s probably having a tough day,” said her mother.
“No, it’s not just one day. She smells bad a lot,” Ariana explained. “Nobody else likes to sit next to her, either.”
“I don’t think you understand Ashley’s situation, so let me ask you this…’ Her mother’s tone was serious. “Who makes sure that your hair is combed every morning so you’ll look nice when you go to school ”
“You do,” answered Ariana.
“Who makes sure you’re bathed and cleaned every day And your clothes are washed and neatly ironed ”
“You and Daddy,” Ariana said again.
“Do you live in a nice home Do you have enough to eat ”
Ariana nodded, beginning to feel guilty. She was starting to understand now. Ashley couldn’t help her situation because she was only seven years old—the same age as Ariana. Grown-ups are supposed to take care of kids.
“Why doesn’t her family take better care of her ” Ariana asked.
“Not all children live in the best situation,” her mother said. “The best thing you can do for Ashley is to treat her with kindness and sympathy.”
Paragraph 1:
Ariana bit her bottom lip. Sadness for Ashley filled her heart._____________________ ______
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Paragraph 2:
At the end of the school year, the second grade prepared to go on a field trip to the zoo.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Para1:
Ariana bit her bottom lip. Sadness for Ashley filled her heart. She vowed that from now on she would be the best friend that she could be to Ashley. At school, Ariana voluntarily sat next to Ashley. She partnered with Ashley to help with her schoolwork. On the days that Ashley smelled bad, she moved away a little or politely asked Ashley for a little room. She was always careful not to hurt Ashley’s feelings.
Para2:
At the end of the school year, the second grade prepared to go on a field trip to the zoo. The day before the trip, the teacher announced that the class needed to bring lunch from home. Ashley was absent, and Ariana worried that her friend would not have lunch because Ashley always ate the school lunch. Therefore, the next day, Ariana asked her mom to make an extra lunch for Ashley—just in case. When Ariana got to school, she discovered that she had been right. Ashley had not brought any lunch for the field trip. When Ariana gave the lunch to Ashley, she saw tears well up Ashley’s eyes.
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第二节 读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Carl lost his job. He tried to find another one but it wasn’t easy. As a result, the poor fellow couldn’t pay his bills and he couldn’t even find anybody to lend him any.
Carl spent most of his days at home. Sometimes he looked out of the window and watched his neighbor’s house. An old professor lived there alone. Strangely, he hardly talked to his neighbors. Carl could see into the professor’s house because he never drew the curtain. The rooms were full of antique (古董) furniture and vases. Carl thought, “If I got an antique vase, I could sell it for a lot of money.”
Every day Carl saw the professor. He left at 10 o’clock in the morning and came back home at 4 o’clock in the afternoon. He had a dog. Carl often went to the fence and played with it or gave it a piece of meat.
One day Carl thought, “I will go into the professor’s house and steal a vase. I will break the window and climb in. The dog is not a problem.”
There was an old gun in the cellar(地下室). It had been his great grandfather’s favorite thing a long time before. Carl didn’t want to use the gun but he thought, “Anything could happen.”
He wanted to hide the gun under his coat but it was too long so he had to cut the end off with a saw（锯）.
The next morning he watched the professor leaving home at 10 o’clock. Carl climbed over the fence. The dog ran to him and Carl gave it a big bone. He threw a piece of stone through the window, which broke. It wasn’t high. He could climb into the house easily.
He looked around inside. There were paintings on the walls, small figures and vases on the shelves and the floor. Carl didn’t know much about arts. He couldn’t choose. He reached his hands towards a big vase when he heard a noise. The front door opened and someone entered the house.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头已为你写好;
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
It was the professor. He had forgotten to take an important document(文件) with him.
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Paragraph 2:
The professor was scared.
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Possible version:
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第二节 读后续写 (满分25分)
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning. Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don’t be late for supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
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Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. It was furry with a coat of gorgeous( 华丽的、极好的) brown hair. After looking up at me with its pair of red bulbs , it began to scurry（窜逃） ahead. “ Why not catch it and bring it back to Uncle Paul They must be very happy.” With this thought, I rode hard to hunt for it. Dad saw it and had to follow me. The rabbit was very agile, soon entering a mountain forest . We had to get down the horses, continuing the chase and totally forgetting the track back. Even though we tried desperately, the rabbit was out of sight in the end. Then we realized we were in the deep part of an forest.
Paragraph2:
We had no idea where we were and it got dark. And dark clouds seemed to be gathering in the sky. Taking out the cell phone, we soon found something was wrong: no signal. And no compass. Frightened, I stared at Dad , trying to seek a solution for the trouble from him. “Maybe what you have learned in geography class works," he said, pointing to the stars in the sky. I knew he meant the North Star. Soon we found the right direction. We hurried back finding the horses . And the river was in sight again. The family was worried and about to call the police. At the sight of us, they were relieved and hugged us tightly. There was nothing more memorable than this rabbit hunting in my life!
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第二节：读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Christmas Day was coming. I was just a kid then, and my big sister told me there was no Santa Claus. I fled to my Grandma because she would be straight with me. I knew Grandma always told me the truth. Grandma was home, and I told her everything. She was ready for me. “No Santa Claus !” She shouted. “Ridiculous! Don’t believe it.” That rumor has been going around for years, and it makes me mad. Now, put on your coat, and let’s go.”
“Go where, Grandma ” I asked. “Where” turned out to be Kerby’s General Store, the one store in town that had a little bit of just about everything. As we walked through its doors, Grandma handed me ten dollars. “Take this money, ” she said, “and buy something for someone who needs it. I’ll wait for you in the car.” Then she turned and walked out of Kerby’s.
I was only eight years old. I’d often gone shopping with my mother, but never had I shopped for anything all by myself. The store seemed big and crowded, full of people competing to finish their Christmas shopping. For a few moments I just stood there, confused, holding that ten-dollar bill, wondering what to buy and who to buy it for. I suddenly thought of Bobby Decker, who was a kid with bad breath and messy hair. He sat right behind me in Mrs Pollock’s grade-two class. Bobby Decker didn’t have a coat. I knew that because he never went out for recess (放假) during the winter. His mother always wrote a note, telling the teacher that he had a cough, but we kids knew that Bobby Decker didn’t have a cough, and he didn’t have a coat. I would buy Bobby Decker a coat! I settled on a red one, which looked really warm, and he would like that.
“Is this a Christmas present for someone ” the lady behind the counter asked kindly, as I laid my ten dollars down. “Yes.”
The nice lady smiled at me, put the coat in a bag and wished me a Merry Christmas.
注意：
所续写短文的词数应为150词左右；
应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词；
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
That evening, Grandma helped me wrap the coat in Christmas paper.
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Paragraph2:
Grandma and I waited breathlessly for Bobby Decker’s front door to open and finally it….
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One possible version:
That evening, Grandma helped me wrap the coat in Christmas paper. She wrote “To Bobby, From Santa Claus” on it, after which she drove me over to Bobby Decker’s house, explaining I was officially one of Santa’s helpers. Grandma parked down the street form Bobby’s house, and I took a deep breath, and dashed for his front door. Seeing no other people notice us, I put the Christmas present down, pounded his doorbell and then Grandma and I hid in the car.
Paragraph2:
Grandma and I waited breathlessly for Bobby Decker’s front door to open and finally it opened. Out went Bobby Decker. Seeing the coat in the bag, he looked very astonished and then called his mother to go out. After hearing them say “Thanks” to Santa Claus, I felt very proud of what I had done. At that time I decided to be Santa’s helper forever. It was on that night that I realized the truth that he who has no Christmas in his heart will never find Christmas under a tree.
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第二节 读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面短文：根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Dannis was waiting at the airline ticket counter when he first noticed the young woman with shiny black hair pulled tightly into a knot. She wore black boots of soft leather. Dannis struggled to sec her face, she was ahead of him in line, but it was not until she bought her ticket and turned to walk away that he realized her beauty, which was fair-skinned and big-eyed. She seemed aware that he was staring at her and lowered her gaze abruptly.
His flight was leaving in an hour. To kill time, Dannis stepped into an airport bar and ordered a Scotch. While sipping it, he watched the flow of travelers through the terminal （航站楼）until he caught sight of the black-haaired girl in the leather coat again, deep in conversation with a blonde girl （金发女孩）."Invite her for a drink " Dannis hesitated. In another instant ,the two women separated, neither of whose directions was toward him.
When next he saw her, Dannis was buying a magazine and became aware someone was pushing him. At first, he was startled （受惊吓的）that anyone would be so close as to touch him, but when he saw who it was, he smiled.
“Busy place," Dannis said.
She looked up at him and blushed. Wordlessly, she moved away and joined the crowds in the terminal.
Dannis was at the counter with his magazine, but when he reached into his pocket for his wallet, the pocket was empty. Where could I have left it His mind was racing, the credit cards, the cash, the identification card.. His stomach stirred with something very like fear. "The girl who was so near to me!" he said to himself. All at once he understood she had picked his pocket. What shall he do
First, find a policeman, tell him what has happened. He would probably never see his wallet again. Dannis gritted his teeth. When glancing around for the police, suddenly,he spotted the black-haired girl, seated against a front window of the terminal She seemed absorbed in a book
Para 1：
A seat beside her was empty, and Dannis occupied it.
Para 2:
girl ran and Dannis ran after her.
第二节：读后续写
Possible version 1:
Para 1：
A seat beside her was empty, and Dannis occupied it. He felt a wave of anger swept over him. “Where is my wallet ” he yelled. The black-haired girl glanced up from her reading, with a confused look on her face.Dannis stood up, glared at her and shouted,“ You stole my wallet!” The crowds began to gossip. The girl turned deadly pale, looking so restless that words failed her. A strange silence hung in the air. Abruptly, she leaped from the seat.
Para 2:
The girl ran and Dannis ran after her. After a while, Dannis finally grabbed her by the arm. At exactly that moment, a policeman approached them and asked about what happened. Dannis hastened to explain it while the girl frowned with a shake of her head. After further enquiries, the policeman took out a wallet and handed it to Dannis, adding that someone had found it in the toilet. What a mistake he had made! Overwhelmed by guilt, Dannis made an apology to the girl.
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第二节读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Rescue
Dawn came slowly. A shaft of sunlight reached into the 4-meter-deep crater（弹坑），making the metal of the bomb shine. The boys were numb and tight, and hungry. They tried not to look at the huge shape of the bomb that appeared over them.
Harry suddenly opened his eyes and seized Jack's arm. "Listen!" he whispered. Jack's eye widened instantly, and both boys strained their ears. They could hear a man talking softly. The voice seemed a long way off. Jack went to shout, but Harry clamped his hand over Jack's mouth. "Don't shout/' he hissed（发出嘘声），"We'll be blown into pieces."
The soft voice came nearer and nearer. Suddenly, an army captain appeared at the top of crater. He was talking to a mouthpiece（话筒）around his neck. He stopped talking when he saw the boys. "What the..." he said, “Who are you " Hairy found his voice, "Jack and Harry Brown." "Is that dog dead " asked the captain. “No： he's sleeping," said Harry.
The captain spoke into the mouthpiece again, “Sergeant（中士）," he said, stopped and took a breath before he went on. “There are two kids and a dog down here." Then the captain crouched down and stared closely at the bomb. “Don't move and don't speak," he said, "or we'll all go up." He began talking quietly to his sergeant.
Jack and Harry were too stiff to move. They held Raf, the dog, tightly and waited. Another man appeared at the top of the crater. "I thought so," he said, "It's them all right "
"It!s Old Tin Hat!" whispered Jack. Old Tin Hat was carrying a ladder. He and the captain lowered the ladder into the loose earth next to the two boys. "Keep still," the captain warned them. As the captain held on at the top. Old Tin Hat started to come down the ladder very slowly, very gently, step by step. At last, he reached the bottom, and with one movement, he lifted Jack on his back. Harry watched as Jack was carried up. It seemed to take an age.
Paragraph 1:
With a sudden fall of earth, Old Tin Hat froze halfway up.
Paragraph 2:
Old Tin Hat pulled Harry onto his back, carrying Raf under his arm.
7.【杭州市学军中学10月模拟】
第二节 读后续写 (满分25分)
It was a Saturday afternoon. The color of the sky was changing, first light gray, then dark gray, and finally dark and dense. The wind was blowing heavily, and the trees were swaying in the strong wind. It began to rain cats and dogs. Soon, the road was filled with puddles from the rain.
In such a stormy afternoon, My mother took my five-year-old brother, Christopher, and me to a new big toy store she had read about in the newspaper. "So many toys,“ the advertisement had shouted in full and flashy color, “ that we had to get a huge warehouse to fit them all!”
Christopher and I couldn't have been more excited. We ran across the parking lot, through the cold and biting rain, as fast as our little legs could carry us. We left our mother outside to battle with the frustrating umbrella, which never worked when she wanted it to. "Christine! Take care of your young brother!“ Mother shouted at the top of her voice.
“Christine! I'm going to find the Lego section(乐高积木区）！There's a new pirate ship I want, and I have four dollars! Maybe I can buy it!“ Christopher exclaimed and ran off excitedly. I only half heard him. I took a right turn and, to my wide-eyed delight, found myself in the midst of the Barbie(芭比）World.
I was studying a Barbie and doing some simple math in my head when suddenly an earthshaking clap of thunder roared from the storm outside. I jumped at the noise, dropping the doll to the floor. The lights flickered(闪烁）once and died, covering everything in a blanket of blackness. Thunder continued to shake the sky and lightning illuminated the store for seconds, casting frightening shadows on my mind.
Para 1:
“Oh no,” I thought, “Where’s Christopher ” _________________________________________________
Para 2:
“Christine, I’m here.” ___________________________________________________________________
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第二节：读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
There was a thick forest on the sides of a mountain. Many kinds of animals lived in the forest. A deer was eating grass and leaves with her two young ones. The young ones wandered happily here and there. The deer followed her fawns （幼鹿）into a cave. The deer was frightened because it was a tiger's cave. There were bones of dead animals all over the cave. Fortunately, the tiger was not inside the cave at the time.
The deer was trying to lead her young ones out of the cave when she heard a loud roar. She saw the tiger at a distance coming towards the cave. It was dangerous to go out of the cave now. She thought of a plan. The deer raised her voice and shouted, "My deer young children do not weep. I shall capture （捕捉）a tiger for you to eat. You can have a good dinner."
The tiger heard these words and became frightened. He thought, "Whose is that strange voice from the cave A dangerous animal is staying inside to capture me. I shall run away to escape death." The tiger began to run away from there as fast as possible.
A jackal （胡狼）saw the running tiger. “Why are you running in great fear " the jackal asked. The tiger said, "My friend, a powerful and fierce animal is in my cave. The young ones are crying for a tiger to eat. The mother is promising to capture a tiger for them. So, I am running away."
The cunning jackal was now sure the tiger was a coward （懦夫）.It said, "Don't be afraid. No animal is fiercer or stronger than a tiger Let us go together to find out.”
But the tiger said, "I do not want to take a chance. You may run away. I will be left alone to die. So, I will not come with you."
The jackal said, "Trust me. Let us knot （打结）our tails together. Then I will not be able to leave you." The tiger agreed unwillingly to this proposal. So the jackal tied their tails in a knot. Now they walked towards the cave together.
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The deer saw the jackal and the tiger coming together.
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The tiger was shocked to hear this and he was sure now the jackal cheated him.
注意：
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
应使用至少5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词；
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词。
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第二节 读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Sally had anxiety disorder trouble that made her fail to speak in social situations. I'm a nurse and use Bella to help children in my community, to bring them comfort and confidence the way only a dog can. I thought back to the day when I'd first brought Bella to the school.
That morning in January, her teacher led us to a room. “Sally hasn't spoken outside her home in two years," she told me. “Her parents have taken her to doctors, but nothing has worked. ” A little girl stood shyly just inside the doorway. Her eyes brightened when she noticed my dog.
“This is BellaI said. “She does tricks. Would you like to see "
Sally nodded. I motioned with my hand. Bella lay down and then rolled over. Sally's eyes lit up. I showed Sally the hand signals for various commands. She was a natural with Bella, maybe because she couldn't rely on the spoken word herself. Bella sensed that and responded. Soon Sally was able to put Bella through her paces all on her own. I could see her standing taller, more sure of herself each time we met.
One morning in March when she was working with Bella, I heard a tiny voice barely a whisper, “Good dog. " Sally didn't take her eyes off Bella, but I wanted to jump for joy. Sally spoke a little more each week, only to Bella at first, but then to me. Later,she started giving voice commands with her hand signals and her confience rose.
Now, five-year-old Sally stood nervously in front of her kindergarten class,with Bella, my trained dog, sitting calmly by her side. All the eyes of her classmates were focused on Sally. They were waiting for her to speak. It was June-only one week of school left—but they had never heard her voice. Not once.
注意：
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好；
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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But not a zuord came out.
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The next week , she told me she wanted to try again , looking up at me with determination.
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第二节：概要写作（满分25分）
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Did you know that 60.2% of US families own dogs That's over 75 million families. Besides getting a faithful companion, these friends also provide many health benefits that can be truly life changing for your fitness and wellness.
Most dogs need to do their business outside many times per day, so you are up and moving more often than non-pet owners. The average dog owner spends 300 minutes per week walking, compared to a non-pet owner's 168 minutes. Frequent daily exercise lowers your blood pressure and reduces your chances of suffering from heart disease.
Your physical health isn't the only thing that gets better with a companion dog. You can also improve your mental well-being. People suffering from anxiety find it helpful to have a dog on hand that's happy to provide assistance. You can find many dogs operating as emotional support animals, and help people in stressful situations feel better. If your dog is a more active type, you could find yourself taking your friend all over the place. If you take your dog to the forest, you actually lower your tendency to suffer negative（消极的） feelings. A research study discovered that the part of the brain that is most active when you deal with negative things calms down when you spend time among the trees.
The dog ownership routine allows you to build healthy habits and it also gives you the opportunity to make social connections Dog parks are filled with people you share a common interest with, and there are plenty of people who love to give dogs a friendly pat轻拍）during walks. All of these are opportunities to have new great friendships and other emotional connections
Your doctor might not write down a dog prescription（处方）,but when you become a dog owner; you get plenty of health benefits
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读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A few years ago, I had taken a part-time holiday-season job in a video store at the local shopping mall. From inside the store, I’d begun to see the people rushing by outside. Then an elderly woman caught my eye. Although slow and unsure of step, she moved with deliberation (从容), and there was no hesitation in her gestures. The elderly woman had come into the store along with a younger woman who I guessed was her daughter. The daughter was clearly impatient, rolling her eyes, huffing（长吁短叹） and sighing, checking her watch every few seconds.
The older woman then separated from the younger one and began to tick through the DVDs on the nearest shelf, obviously expecting someone else to help. After the slightest hesitation, I walked over and asked if I could help her find something. The woman smiled up at me and showed me a title scrawled (乱涂乱画的) on a piece of paper. It was a bit unclear to make out. Clearly a person looking for it knew a little about movies, about quality. Rather than rushing off to locate the DVD for the woman, I asked her to walk with me so I could show her where she could find it.
Looking back, I think I wanted to enjoy her company for a moment. Something about her deliberate movements reminded me of my own mother, who’d passed away the previous Christmas. As we walked along the back of the store, I introduced her to the different sections: old television shows, action movies, cartoons, science fiction. The woman seemed glad of the unrushed company and casual conversation.
We found the movie, and I complimented her on her choice. She smiled and told me it was one she’d enjoyed when she was her daughter’s age and that she hoped she would enjoy it as much as she had. Maybe, she said with a hint of wistfulness（一丝渴望）, her daughter could enjoy it with her own young children. Then, when the older woman’s turn in line came, she paid in cash, counting out the dollars and coins with the same sureness she’d displayed earlier.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150字左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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As the cashier put the DVD into a plastic bag, I walked over to the younger woman.
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The elderly woman moved with her deliberate slowness back to her daughter.
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As the cashier put the DVD into a plastic bag, I walked over to the younger woman. “Is that your mom ” I asked, halfway expecting her to tell me it was none of my business. But she rolled her eyes and said, “Yeah.” I smiled to show her I wasn’t criticizing. “Cherish her,” I said. And then I answered her curious expression by saying, “When she’s gone, it’s the little moments like this that’ll come back to you.” It was true. I missed my mother still and remembered the moments when I was so impatient as to make her life miserable.
The elderly woman moved with her deliberate slowness back to her daughter. Together they made their way toward the exit of the video store. They stood there for a moment, side by side, waiting for the rushing holiday current and for their place in it. Then the daughter glanced over and momentarily regarded her mother. And slowly, almost reluctantly, she placed her arm with apparently unaccustomed affection around her mother’s shoulders and gently guided her back into the deluge.
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第二节：概要写作（满分25分）
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
High school exit tests are tests that students must pass to graduate from high school. In the last few years, however, a number of states in America have dropped them. Although some states still use them for diplomas, the number is down from a high of 27 states during the testing craze promoted by No Child Left Behind (NCLB).
The appearance of this phenomenon is small wonder. Researches clearly show that exit tests have little positive effects on students. A 2014 report found exit testing was associated with lower graduation rates, negatively affected labor market outcomes, and, most alarmingly, produced a 12.5 percent increase in incarceration (监禁) rates. Exit exams, the study concluded, had tended to add little value for most students.
Exit testing relies on the following assumptions. One is that standardized testing can serve as a kind of “quality control” for high school graduates, guaranteeing that graduates are college ready. The other is that they have predicting value for future success in academic situations.
But there is little evidence. The tests don’t exactly measure what they pretend to measure. For example, qualities such as intelligence, academic ability, college readiness are not determined. Those that should be developed in all young people, like responsibility, critical thinking, and empathy (移情), are not measured, either. Even supporters of exit tests have acknowledged that they don’t offer reliable data.
Thus, more and more people are suggesting that exit test scores ought to be just one component of the high school diploma. Schools should consider many other records including credits earned, courses taken, activities, service, projects and other elements of academic accomplishment so that students can be evaluated flexibly. In other words, exit test scores should never be the only criterion for high school diplomas.
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第二节 概要写作（满分25分）
One possible version:
High school exit tests have been cancelled in some states in America in recent years.This is not surprising because studies show they do little good to students.Instead of ensuring college readiness and academic success,they actually don’t measure what should be measure.Therefore,exit test scores should only be one part of the standards of high school diplomas. [60 words]

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第二节 读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Jatin and his younger sister, Neha, lived with their parents in a poor neighborhood. Their mother was very sick and their father was struggling to find a job, and they had only a little money with which to buy food. As they had not paid the rent for several months, the landlord was breathing down their necks (盯着他们).
One day, Jatin took Neha’s shoes to a shoe repairman to be fixed, but he lost them on the way home. It wasn’t until he got home that he realized he had lost the shoes. He was afraid that his parents would be angry and disappointed, so he begged his sister to keep it secret. Neha agreed and the two decided to share Jatin’s running shoes. Neha’s school hours were in the morning, so she would wear them first. After school, she would rush back and give them to Jatin. He could then run to his school, which began in the afternoon. Although he ran as fast as he could, Jatin often arrived late and was warned by the school.
A long distance race was going to be held for the boys in the city. When Jatin learned that the third prize was a new pair of shoes, he decided to take part. He ran home excitedly and promised his sister that he would win her the new shoes.
The day of race arrived. Jatin had a strong start, but halfway through the race he began to get tired and his legs began to ache. Getting more and more exhausted he thought only of Neha and his promise to her. Dreaming of the new shoes he would win for his sister gave him strength, and he stayed right behind the two fastest runners, determined to finish third. Suddenly, as the finish line drew near, another runner collided(碰撞) with Jatin from behind and Jatin crashed to the ground.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Jatin looked up and he saw the other boys rushing ahead. Refusing to give up at this crucial point, Jatin clenched his teeth, jumped to his feet and ran as fast as he could. Finally, he was the fourth one to dash across the finish line. Jatin couldn’t help sobbing at the thought of letting his sister down. But much to his surprise, the runner who collided with him was disqualified for breaking the rule and Jatin won the third prize. Jatin felt overjoyed and relieved during the award ceremony, holding the shoes close to his chest.
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Filled with pleasure, Jatin walked home in no time. He could not wait to see his sister and share the good news. On his arrival, Jatin found Neha was walking about outside nervously and anxiously. “Neha, see what I have got for you.” Jatin said excitedly, taking the prize out of his bag with his trembling hands. The instant Neha saw the shoes, her face lit up. So thrilled was she that she threw herself at Jatin. “Thank you! Jatin.” Tears of joy welled up in their eyes as the brother and the sister hugged tightly together.
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第一节 读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
The event that stands out in Tom’s memory happened one morning when Tom was only ten years old. He was at home with his elder sister Jane. Tom was doing his homework when he heard raised voices. At first he thought nothing of it since customers in the motorcycle shop directly below their flat often became loud, but he soon realized this time it was different.
“Quick! Quick! Remove the motorcycles from the shop.” someone yelled.
Then a thick burning smell filled the air. When Tom opened the front door of their flat to investigate, a thick cloud of smoke greeted him. The motorcycle shop had caught fire and people were running and crying.
Jane, who had been playing the violin in her room, hurried to the living room. They rushed out of the door and along the corridor（走廊）through the smoke.
They were heading towards the stairway at the far end of the corridor when Jane stopped in her track. She turned around and headed back the way they came. Tom had no idea what she was doing, but he followed suit.
Jane had suddenly remembered the lady in her 70s who lived next door to them, who they called Makcik, Malay for auntie. Jane began banging on Makcik’s door, but got no answer. As the smoke thickened around them, Tom could see many of their neighbors—some still in their pyjamas—running for safety. The thought of fear crossed his mind.
“She would have run for safety like everyone else!” Tom cried. However, Jane refused to give up. “I know Makcik’s still inside.” She said she was familiar with Makcik’s daily routine and was certain she would still be sleeping. She pounded the door. “Go downstairs. Go now! Go!”
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个或以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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读后续写：One possible version:
Tom noticed the flame was reaching up. Frozen with fear, he stood rooted to the spot. He comprehended the gravity of the situation and held Jane’s hand tightly. By then, both of them were coughing and their eyes were stinging. Time seemed to stand still, though they were probably there for only two or three minutes. Tom begged Jane to run for safety as quickly as possible. Jane tried to shield her nose from the choking smoke and shook her head. She kept pounding against the door. Tom burst out crying.
Luckily, some neighbors passing by stopped and offered help. A sense of strength immediately replaced the mounting fear and anxiety in Jane’s mind. She told them Ms. Makcik must be still in the room. They forced the door open with all their might. Sure enough, Makcik was lying in bed, unconscious. She was carried downstairs and then rushed to the hospital, where she finally came to herself. People in the neighborhood felt relieved and Jane and Tom’s joy was immense.
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读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Jenny was a pretty eight-year-old girl.
One day when she and her mother were checking out at the grocery store, Jenny saw a plastic pearl necklace, by which she was totally defeated. How eagerly she wanted it! But when she saw the price, her heart sank a little. She gathered up her courage and asked her mother if she would buy it for her. Her mother said, “Well, it is a pretty necklace, but it costs an awful lot of money. I can buy you the necklace, but when we get home, we should make up a list of housework that you can do to pay for the necklace.” Jenny agreed immediately, feeling a burst of joy. So her mother bought the pearl necklace for her. Jenny worked on her housework determinedly and earnestly every day. Soon Jenny paid off the pearls.
Jenny had a very loving daddy. When Jenny went to bed, he would read Jenny her favorite story. One night when he finished the story, he said, “Jenny, do you love me ” “Oh, yes, Daddy, you know I love you.” the little girl said delightedly, with a broad smile on her face. “Well, then, give me your pearls.” Hearing that, Jenny froze there, an anxious expression twisting her face. “Oh! Daddy, not my pearls! But you can have Rosy, my favorite doll. Remember her You gave her to me last year for my birthday. Okay ” “Oh no, darling, that’s okay.” Her father brushed her cheek with a kiss, gently and calmly. “Good night, little one.”
A week later, her father once again asked Jenny after her story, “Do you love me ” “Oh yes, Daddy, you know I love you.” the little girl murmured softly, trying to escape from her father’s eyes. “Well, then, give me your pearls.” “Oh, Daddy, not my pearls! But you can have Ribbons, my toy horse. Do you remember her She is my favorite.” The little girl begged. “No, that’s okay,” her father said, smiling broadly and sweetly and brushed her cheek again with a kiss. “God bless you, little one. Sweet dreams.”
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Several days later, when Jenny’s father came in to read her story, Jenny was waiting anxiously for him on the bed. _________________________________________________________________
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Holding the plastic pearl his daughter offered, the father dragged out a blue box.
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读后续写：
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Several days later, when Jenny’s father came in to read her story, Jenny was waiting anxiously for him on the bed. When listening to the story, Jenny was totally absent-minded, with her hands holding the necklace tightly and firmly. When the story came to an end, unexpectedly, Jenny offered her beloved necklace to her father, with her fingers trembling automatically. No one knew what the necklace meant to her. She whispered to her father, softly and gently, “Daddy, you know I love you more than the necklace.” Then, the necklace slid into her father’s hands determinedly.
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Holding the plastic pearl his daughter offered, the father dragged out a blue box. Much to Jenny’s amazement, a beautiful real pearl necklace lay peacefully in the box, which set her heart racing. Jenny froze there, a thrilled expression twisting her face. Before Jenny was able to say something. her father brushed a warm kiss on her face and gathered her into his arms. Holding the genuine necklace in her hand, Jenny lifted her lip, tears beginning to blur her vision.
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第二节 读后续写（满分 25 分） 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
My name is John and I must share with you an event which took place on Flight 1553 out of DCA. My wife and I were traveling to Miami to celebrate an achievement for her and as you can imagine, we were looking forward to fun, sun and laughter.
We boarded the aircraft, without a care in the world. It was cold in Washington and we were ready for Florida. Shortly after taking my seat, I began to feel sick. I knew something wasn't right but just couldn't find out what was happening .Being a doctor and a stubborn man, I resisted efforts by my wife to call for assistance. As the aircraft began its departure roll, I lost consciousness for a short amount of time. As I came around, I quickly realized a few things. Firstly, something very bad had happened to me .Secondly, the aircraft was too heavy with the fuel to go back home. Thirdly, my loss of consciousness had been so deep that I found myself out of control. So not only did I have a medical issue to deal with, but I also had to figure out how to deal with an embarrassing experience.
My wife gathered the crew as soon as it was safe to move about and I made my way to the washroom to attempt to clean up. I did my best and the flight crew members were so supportive,
checking on me often and reassuring me that there was nothing to be embarrassed about. It was their sympathy and support that helped me so much. During the flight they kept watching over me and I suddenly had a small group of nurse, bringing blankets, food, drinks and caring and smile. I was thankful to them.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；
2. 应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语；
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Upon landing, I remained in my seat, allowing other people to go first. As I was in my seat, I looked up and see the captain standing with a warm smile. “What can I do for you ” the captain asked. I told him I was ok. I was very embarrassed and concerned because of the previous things. He said, “What sizes of pants do you wear ” His voice was full of care. I was puzzled and replied,“34*34.Why do you ask this ”
Paragraph 2：Hearing that, the captain left and returned a couple minutes later with a pair of his own blue jeans. The man opened his own luggage and gave a complete stranger his pants. I didn’t know what to say. Then I looked at my wife, who smiled and ,without saying a word, let me know it was ok. I made my way to the exit and he said ,“Change on the aircraft. It is fine.”Because of the experience, I was thankful to him for his kindness. I made up my mind to treat others with kindness.
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第二节 读后续写(满分25分)
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Robert and Henry were two friends in the same class．They always played together and went home together．One day，Robert and Henry were going home from school，when，on turning a corner，Robert cried out，“A fight! Let’s go and see!”
“No，”said Henry．“Let us go quietly home and not meddle with(插手)this quarre1．We have nothing to do with it and may get into trouble．Also our parents are expecting to have dinner with us together at home and I don’t want them to worry about me．”
“You are a coward，and afraid to go，”said Robert，and off ha ran．Henry want straight home，and in the afternoon went to school as usual．
But Robert had told all the boys that Henry was a coward，and they laughed at him a great deal．From then on，they looked down upon Henry and didn’t want to play with him together．
Henry was sad but he wasn’t angry with Robert for his rude behavior，because he learned that true courage is shown most in bearing misunderstanding when it was not deserved，and that he ought to be afraid of nothing but doing wrong．Thus，he just ignored the other boys’laughter and continued to go to school and study as well．However，Robert didn’t invite Henry to go home with him anymore．Instead，he had some other boys who also thought Henry was a coward．Every day after school，they didn’t go home directly but went to the river or somewhere to play games and had a lot of fun．
A few days later，Robert was bathing with his new friends in a river，and got out of his depth．He struggled，and screamed for help，but all in vain．The boys who had called Henry a coward got out of the water as fast as they could，but they did not even try to help him．
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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第二节：读后续写
Robert was fast sinking. It seemed as if Robert would be drowned. Just at the moment, Henry happened to be passing by. Hearing the screams, Henry ran to the riverside, threw off his clothes and jumped into the water without hesitation. He reached Robert just as he was sinking the last time. By great effort, and with much danger to himself, he brought Robert to the shore.
Thus, Robert’s life was saved. Robert and his new friends were ashamed at having called Henry a coward. They realized that Henry had true courage. They said sorry to Henry for their rude behavior and asked for his forgiveness. Henry forgave them happily. He and Robert were friends again and they went home together as usual. From this, Robert learned what true courage was: never be afraid to do good, but always fear to do evil.
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第二节：读后续写(满分25分)
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
On July 8，2017，eight members of a family in total，were enjoying an evening together at the beach in Panhandle，Florida．As the sun sank lower on the horizon，the two boys Noah，11，and Stephen，8—swam into the waves without the grown-ups noticing．Soon they realized that the ocean had pulled them into the sea．After trying and failing to swim back，they started waving and screaming for help．But the lifeguards had been off duty for the evening．
The boys had been struggling for several minutes when Jacky and Tabatha，a couple from Georgia，heard them．They dived into the water and soon reached the two brothers．But after a few minutes，they were all trapped in a rip current(离岸流)—a powerful one that could sweep even the strongest swimmer out to sea! By then，some teenagers had heard the cry．One of the teens rushed into the water，grabbed Jacky，and pulled him back to shore．Meanwhile，Tabatha could feel herself being pulled farther out．She was already exhausted and beginning to feel desperate as she was trying to save both boys alone．
Onshore，Jacky was terrified．A man stopped．“What’s wrong ”asked Shaun，who was heading back to his car．“My wife is drowning!”Brittany said．Shaun immediately strode(大步跨)into the water．But several minutes later，a gaping 15 feet still lay between him and Tabatha and the boys．He knew that if he continued，he’d become another victim．He turned around to seek help．
It was about that time that Roberta，the boys’mother，returned from the bathroom and looked around for her children．She was shocked to spot them floating much farther out than they were allowed to go．She fought the waves to get to her screaming sons and the stranger who was trying to save them，but she quickly discovered it was nearly impossible to make headway in any direction．Looking around，Roberta sighed with relief to see some more people coming to help．
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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读后续写：
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When they tried in vain to rescue the brothers and Tabatha，a risky idea came to them．To keep themselves from losing their footing in the rip current，they began holding on to one another to form a human chain extending from the beach all the way out to the struggling and Tabatha．They stayed linked tightly and managed to ensure they were safe by making their feet firmly planted in the sand．However，that required more links—probably dozens of them．Shaun spotted other swimmers on the beach and shouted，“Don’t just stand there! Come and help．”
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By then，more swimmers had also noticed the group in trouble and rushed to join the human chain．One by one，link by link，total strangers walked into the waves and grasped one another by the wrists，determined that no one would die on that beach．At last，they made it and Tabatha and the two brothers were saved! “Those people on the beach are angels on earth，”said Roberta．“Whether it is the first person or the last person in the chain，they are all our heroes，who helped get our family out of trouble．
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文章续写（25分）
In 1945, a 12-year-old boy saw a beautiful brooch(胸针) in a shop window that set his heart racing. But the price－five dollars－was too high for Reuben Earle. Five dollars would buy almost a week's food for his family.
Reuben couldn't ask his father for the money. Everything his father made through fishing went to his mother, Dora. Slim and beautiful, she was the center of the home, the glue that held it together. The housework was never-ending, and she struggled to support their five children but she was happy as her family and their well-being were all she cared about.
Nevertheless, he opened the shop's weathered (风化的)door and went inside, Standing proud and straight in his flour－sack(面粉袋改做的) shirt and washed－out trousers, he told the shopkeeper what he wanted, adding, "But I don't have the money right now. Can you please hold it for some time
"I'll try," the shopkeeper smiled. "People around here don't usually have that kind of money to spend on things. It should keep for a while."
Reuben respectfully touched his worn cap and walked out.
He would raise the money and not tell anybody, for he thought Mum would get surprised when she saw that brooch. On hearing the sound of hammering from a side street, Reuben suddenly had an idea that he could raise money by selling the used nail bags(装钉子的麻袋). People built their own buildings in Bay Roberts, using nails bought in bags from a local factory. Sometimes the used nail bags were thrown away at the construction site, and Reuben knew he could sell them back to the factory for five cents a piece.
That day he sold two nail bags and hid the money in a rusty soda tin.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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参考范文
Paragraph 1: Every day after school, Reuben started his plan. Cold and hungry, Reuben wandered the streets, searching for the nail bags carefully. To save more money, he even decided to deliver papers in the early morning. Exhausted and tired as he felt, he still stuck to the plan. It was the brooch in the shop window that reminded him that what he did was worthwhile. After a long time of hard work, he made it eventually.
Paragraph 2: Finally the time came! He took out the soda tin, poured the coins out and began to count. Five dollars! His hard work paid off! Holding the soda tin firmly, Reuben rushed for the shop to buy the brooch. The moment he got the beautiful brooch, he burst through the front door and placed it in Dora's hand. Never had Dora received such a gift. Speechless and happy, she held her son tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.
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第二节 读后续写（满分 25 分）
阅读下面短文， 根据所给情节进行续写， 使之构成一个完整的故事。
At first, Michael Surrell didn't see the black smoke or flames shooting from the windows of his neighbors' home. He and his wife had just parked around the corner from their own house in Allentown, Pennsylvania, when they got a call from one of his daughters: “The house next door is on fire! ” He went to investigate. That's when he saw a woman crying desperately on their porch.
“The baby' s in there! ” the woman cried. Though the fire department had been called, Surrell, then 64, instinctively ran inside. “The baby” was 8-year-old Tiara Roberts, the woman's granddaughter.
Entering the burning house was like “running into a bucket of black paint,” Surrell says. The thick smoke caused him to stumble blindly around, burned his eyes, and made it impossible to breathe. The conditions would have been dangerous to anyone, but for Surrell, who has chronic obstructive pulmonary disease （慢性阻塞性肺病）, they were life-threatening.
After a few minutes in the smoke-filled house, he retreated outside to catch his breath. Surrell knew he couldn't hold his breath for long. Taking a deep breath, he went in a second time. The darkness was overwhelming. Yet because the house had a similar layout （布局）to h is, he found the stairs and made it to the second floor. He turned to the right and was met by intense heat. He was already out of breath.
His throat and lungs burned as if he'd breathed in fire instead of the smoke and soot in the air. Every blink stung his eyes. All he could hear was the crackling and popping of burning wood. Then a soft but distinct moan （呻吟声） emerged. Still unable to see, Surrell fell to his knees on the hot wood floor. He crawled toward the sound, feeling around for any sign of the girl.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 词左右；
2. 至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Finally, he touched something — a shoe, then an ankle.
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Surrell woke up in the hospital a couple of days later.
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__________________________________专题04读后续写之各种“看”和“听”
一、关键词（各种感官）
1. look 看(指注意或有意识地看)；
2. see 看(强调看的结果)；
3. watch 观察；聚精会神的看；
4. gaze 凝视；注视；
5. stare 凝视；盯着看；
6. glare 怒目而视；
7. peek 偷看；“通过孔隙窥视”
8. glance 一瞥，看一眼；
9. peep 窥视，偷看；
10. gape 目瞪口呆地凝视。
11.其它：
I could smell the honeyed ripeness of peaches. 我可以闻到桃子成熟的香气。
…has an unpleasant odor (气味) and acrid(辛辣的) taste.
fragrant 香的; musty 霉味; stinky臭的
sour 酸的; tender 嫩的; crispy 脆的; mushy 糊状的; creamy 奶油味
observe 观察;
Upon hearing the bad news, she felt extremely sad. 一听到那个坏消息，她悲伤不已。
widen/broaden/expand one’s horizons/ broadened his outlook 拓宽视野
二、常用短语
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gaze at 凝视
stare at 盯住
glare at 怒目而视
peep at 偷窥
glimpse/glance at 瞥一眼
gape at 吃惊地看
blink at 朝…眨眼
look into 调查
look up 查阅
peeping Tom 偷窥狂
look down upon 看不起
look out of the window 望向窗外
look for 寻找
watch a movie / TV/a game
read the newspaper读报
browse the web page浏览网页
skimming and scanning 略读和扫读
catch a glimpse of偷瞄一眼
take a quick look 瞥见；不注意看到
one’s eyes are wide with horror
某人惊恐地瞪大了眼睛
one’s eyes shine with excitement
某人眼里闪烁着兴奋的光芒
one’s eyes filled with tears
某人的眼里充满泪水
one’s eyes fall on someplace
某人的目光落在..
look at sb straight in the eye
直视某人的眼睛
one’s eyes fix on某人的目光紧盯着......
one’s eyes scan ...... 某人的眼睛扫视......
one’s eyes dropped to某人垂下眼睛看着......
widen one’s field of vision拓宽视野
三、句子赏析
1．We all gather in front of the television, praying to catch a glance/glimpse of his face.
2．Seeing no other people notice us, I placed the Christmas present down and pounded his doorbell.
3．Her eyes fell on the photos of her and me at my fourth birthday party.
4．Singing happily, she gazed at her surroundings with large, innocent eyes.
5．The woman was staring eagerly at the girl, trying to make a conversation.
6．I watched helplessly, as the woman felt more and more frustrated and hopeless.
7．Then I crept downstairs and examined the tags attached to each of the packages.
8．When he finished he raised/lifted his eyes and looked out the window.
9．She had spotted a man pacing down the hall.
10．When the students stepped off the bus, James’s eyes widened in surprise.
11．We recognized the famous comedian on his arrival.
12．Meghan nodded seriously, eyes glistening with held-back tears.
13．Swallowing hard, I stared into Meghan’s eyes for a long moment, wondering how I could cope with it.
14．Then he jumped up, eyes twinkling as he ran to fetch some of his prized Matchbox cars.
15．I was taking my time, strolling in the park and looking in shop windows.
四、翻译练习
（第一组）
1.他惊恐地瞪大了眼睛。
2.她笑了，眼里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。
3.她的眼里充满泪水。
4.那条狗饥饿的目光落在我的三明治。fall on/land on...(目光) 落在……
5.她直视父亲的眼睛，诚实地回答了他的问题。
6.他似乎不愿意与我的目光接触。
7.她试图坐起来，目光紧盯着琼的脸。
8.他一刻不停地盯着我。
9.他进屋时眼睛扫视了整个房间。
10.他回答时垂下眼睛看着膝盖。
（第二组）
1. 巴黎的服装广告使他大开眼界。
2. 这真使我开眼界。
3. 电视真使人大开眼界。
4. 旅游使他大开眼界。
5. 这让我大开眼界。
6. 听到这个消息，他绝望地把悲伤淹没在酒里。
7. 别让小狗离开你的视线。
8. 女孩目不转睛地看着她美丽的新娃娃。
9. 他凝视这窗外的雪。
10. 那男人粗暴地冲她大声喊叫，她也怒目而视。
11. 闭上眼睛，不许偷看！
12. 观众们张大了嘴巴呆呆地看着魔术师的表演。
13. 她在考场上偷看教科书。
14. 亨利从窗户向厨房里窥视。
15. 我瞥见窗前有个身影。
16. 埃米莉回头看了一眼。
17. 他凶巴巴地环视房间，像是等待有人来挑战他。
18. 塔玛拉摇着头不相信地盯着他看。
19. 帕特里克坐着，茫然地看着前方。
20. 他羞涩地瞥了她一眼。
参考答案：
（第一组）
1. His eyes were wide with horror.
2. She laughed, her eyes shining with excitement.
3. Her eyes filled with tears.
4. The dog’s hungry eyes fell on my sandwich.
5. She looked at her father straight in the eye and answered his question truthfully.
6. He seemed unwilling to meet my eyes.
7. She tried to sit up, her eyes fixed on Jean’s face.
8. His eyes never left mine.
9. His eyes scanned the room as he entered.
10. His eyes dropped to her lap as she answered.
（第二组）
1. The advertisements of costume in Paris
2. What an eye-opener it’s been for me!
3. Television is a real eye-opener.
4. Travel has greatly broadened his horizons.
5. This has really opened my eyes.
6. Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine.
7. Don’t let the puppy run out of your sight.
8. The girl gazed at her beautiful new doll.
9. He gazed out the window at the snow.
10. The woman glared at the man after he yelled at her.
11. Close your eyes, and no peeking!
12. The audiences gaped at the Magician’s performance.
13. She peeped at her textbook during the examination.
14. Henry peeped through the window into the kitchen.
15. I glimpsed a figure at the window.
16. Emily glanced over her shoulder.
17. He glared round the room as if expecting a challenge.
18. Tamara stared at him in disbelief, shaking her head.
19. Patrick sat gazing into space.
20. He glanced shyly at her.专题14 句子提升思维之名词化
一、读后续写中抽象名词的运用
文本赏析:
At that, Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny’s speech first. Jenny made her way to the platform with every confidence. Words began to flood out of her. “How could she make it We’ve never seen Jenny give so terrific a speech.” Whispers went around the classroom, and even Miss Walker nodded with approval. Immediately Jenny finished her speech, a storm of applause erupted from the class. Relieved, Jenny told everyone the truth, and especially the magic of the watch. “But it’s just an ordinary watch with no magic”, Lee announced. [80 words]
文中多次运用到抽象名词作主语：
Words began to flood out of her.
Whispers went around the classroom, and even...
Immediately Jenny finished her speech, a storm of applause erupted from the class.
二、概要写作中抽象名词的使用
（一）despite的使用
1. Though Mike was reminded many times, apparently he didn't return the money.
Many times though Mike was reminded, apparently he didn‘t return the money.(变倒装句）
拔高：概写中 although/though 换成 despite
第一种方法把动词变成 doing。
Mike apparently did not return the money, despite being reminded repeatedly.
第二种方法把动词转化成相应的名词。
Mike apparently did not return the money, despite repeated reminders.
2. He has been criticized many times, but he remains the same.
Despite our repeated criticisms, he remains unchanged.
3. Although he failed many times, he didn’t give up.
Despite numerous failures, he didn’t give up.
4.He didn’t have enough experience, but he got the job.
Despite his lack of experience, he got the job.
（二）witness的使用
1. In the past four years, our production has increased.
The past four years has witnessed an increase in production.（时间作主语）
2. Many great historic events happened in the city.
The city had witnessed many great historic events. （地点名词作主语）
（三）其它常见抽象名词的使用
1. Different people have different opinions.
Views differ from person to person.
Opinions vary greatly among people.
2. Moreover, they spend less time with younger children because of school reforms.
Moreover, less time spent with younger children is attributed to school reforms.
3. Progress can be beneficial to people only when they accept technology and pursue efficiency.
Progress can be beneficial to people only with their acceptance of technology and pursuit of efficiency. （此处介词with后的宾语名词化）
4. Another reason is that they are not interested in it.
Lack of interest is another reason.
5. We should consider issues of health and safety carefully.
Careful consideration should be given to issues of health and safety.
6. People with good habits are efficient while those with bad habits are inefficient.
Good habits lead to efficiency while bad ones bring the opposite.
7. It is good for the plant to be exposed to sunlight.
Exposure to sunlight is a good for the plant.
8. There are many people who complain of housing shortages.
Housing shortages arouse great complaint.
9. If you compare the two methods carefully, you will find the difference.
Careful comparison of the two methods will show you the difference.
三、更多用法举例
Sleep didn‘t visit her although the silence of a dead world was on the jungle. 尽管丛林里是死一般的寂静, 她还是不能入睡。
Mist had crept in from the sea. 薄雾从海面上弥漫过来了。
A chill of horror suddenly swept over him. 他突然感到不寒而栗。
Despair seized him at the thought of her living alone in the small village.
想起她一个人住在小村庄里，他感到绝望。
Courage deserted him. 他没有了勇气。
A good idea suddenly struck me.我突然想到一个好主意
By now optimism had given way to doubt. 现在，乐观变成了怀疑。
Anger choked my words. 我气的说不出话。
Many years of hard work changed her grandfather greatly. 多年的辛劳使她爷爷大大变样了。
His name escaped me for the moment.我一时记不起他的名字。
His name slipped my mind…
四、句子翻译练习：
我忘了确切的日期。（exact date）
Jack周一早晨精神萎靡。（miserable）
他的工作使他不可能比每隔一个周末一次的频率更加经常地回家。
你吃了这药就会好些。
一见到那个孤儿，我就想到了她的父母。
天气太坏，我们无法动身。
She lost her courage. 她失去了勇气。
五年来，环境状况逐步好转。
他突然想出了一个好主意。
我心里热呼呼的。
一想起这事他就狂躁得无法工作。
他悲伤之极。
他非常贪恋钱财。
他先是惊讶，接着笑了起来，笑声越来越响。
他失职了，这说明他没有资格做这件事。
他读书，其乐无穷。
如果别人打扰你时，你表现出一幅宽容的样子，别人就容易利用你的善良、占用你的时间。
这个问题如果不解决，势必严重损害两国关系。
我有急事，所以没去看你。
黄昏的时候，她独自在街上哭泣。
这样的迁徙在世界上史无前例。
我立刻对他产生了一种崇敬和感激之情。
得知老人的经历后，我们对他深感同情。
她笑得说不出话来。
当他经济困难的时候，他绝望极了。
他开始感到惊恐万状。
这里的工作条件太差，已经对他的身体健康带来影响。
他心事重重，眉头紧锁。
答案：
1. The exact date has escaped me. （slipped out of my mind)
2.Monday morning found Jack miserable.
3.His work made it impossible for him to get home oftener than every other weekend.
4.This medicine will make you feel better.
5.Whenever I see the orphan, I remember her parents.----The sight of the orphan always reminds me of her parents.
6.We could not start because of bad weather.-------Bad weather prevented us from starting.
7.Her courage failed her.
8.Over the past five years, the environment has seen gradual improvement.
9.A good idea suddenly popped into his mind.
10.Warmth flooded over my heart.
11. The thought of it made him so wild that he couldn't work.
12. His grief knew no bounds.
13. His love of money knows no bounds.
14. His amazement turns into laughter, which builds steadily.
15. His failure in duty shows he is not qualified for the job.
16. Reading supplies him with endless entertainment.
17. Your tolerance of interruptions can allow others to take advantage of your time and good will.
18. Failure to settle this issue is bound to impair the relations between the two countries seriously.
19. Urgent business prevented me from calling on you.
20. Dusk found her crying companionless in the streets.
21. Never before had the world seen such a movement.
22. Admiration and gratitude swept through me.
23. All our sympathy went to the old man after we knew his experience.
24. Laughter had deprived her of speech.
25. Despair seized him when he was on the rocks.
26. Alarm began to take entire possession of him.
27. The effect of poor working conditions here began to tell on his health.
28. Care sat heavily on his brow.
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一、关键词
shrug [ r ɡ] vt. 耸肩
spin [spin] 旋转;眩晕
lean [li n] v. 倾斜身体
scratch [skr t] 抓；挠
crouch蹲
bend弯下（腰）
二、常用短语
lie on one's back仰面躺着
lie on one's face/ belly/ stomach趴着
lie on one's side侧卧
get down on one’s knees 跪下双膝
get down on one’s left knee 单膝下跪
get down on the ground 趴在地上
shrug one’s shoulders 耸耸肩
sit on one's shoulders 坐在某人的肩膀上
look (back) over one's shoulder 回头看
bend one’s back 弯腰/驼背
stretch one’s back 伸懒腰
lean one’s back against......把背靠在......
on the back后背
on one’s back 某人的背上
jump to one’s feet 跳起来
tap/stamp one’s feet敲打/跺脚
drag one’s feet拖着脚
put one’s feet up把脚抬起来
hug one’s knees抱着膝盖
on one’s knees 跪下
drop/lower/bend/bow one’s head 低下头
nod one’s head 低头
shake one’s head 摇头
scratch one’s head 挠头
rest one’s head on 把头靠在...上面
bury one’s head 把头埋起来
clear one’s head 清醒一下头脑
feel one’s head spinning 觉得天旋地转
head for/towards 朝……走去
三、优美句子
1．She felt asleep and dreamed of seeing Tom.
2．Suddenly a tall figure dressed in a dark cloak appeared before him.
3．Death spoke with a threatening voice, and disappeared.
4．Dr. Urssenbeck suddenly found himself in a large room where thousands of candles were burning.
5．The little girl slowly pushes herself on the swing.
6．They are sitting outside in the cool night on a wooden porch, talking quietly.
7．One of them approached and asked politely if I would throw the ball back to him.
8．Wanting to appear agreeable, I bent down, picked up the ball and, eyes half-shut, threw it back as hard as I could.
9．Once I was on the bus, I crouched in a seat and shut my eyes.
10．In a flash my friend was in the car and gone, disappearing in a cloud of dust.
11．For a moment I just stood there, paralyzed(呆若木鸡).
12. The little girl slowly pushes herself on the swing.
13. They are sitting outside in the cool night on a wooden porch, talking quietly.
14. One of them approached and asked politely if I would throw the ball back to him.
15. Wanting to appear agreeable, I bent down, picked up the ball and, eyes half-shut, threw it back as hard as I could.
16. Once I was on the bus, I crouched in a seat and shut my eyes.
17. In a flash my friend was in the car and gone, disappearing in a cloud of dust.
18. For a moment I just stood there, paralyzed(呆若木鸡).
四、练习
翻译练习1：
1.当我问他为什么这么做时，他只是耸耸肩。
2.那孩子坐在她父亲的肩膀上看游行经过。
3.他回头看了看。
翻译练习2：
1.他走路时弯腰/驼背。
2.他下床时打了个哈欠，伸了个懒腰
3.他把背靠在吧台上
4.他笑了笑，狠狠地打了我后背一巴掌。
5.他们把他的手绑在背后。
6.他背着一个小孩。
翻译练习3：
1.她一听到这个消息就跳了起来。
2.她不耐烦地敲打/跺脚。
3.她拖着脚，不情愿地跟着她的父母。
4.我的脚滑了，因为我正要投篮，我错过了球。
5.他回家后喜欢把脚抬起来看电视。
翻译练习4：
1.突然，她的膝盖弯曲/虚弱，她摔倒在地板上。
2.他抱着膝盖取暖。
3.他跪下乞求原谅。
4.他坐在她父亲的膝盖上，给她读故事。
5.他跪在地上，寻找丢失的戒指。
翻译小练习5：
1.他羞愧地低下了头。
2.他们点头同意。
3.她怀疑地摇摇头。
4.他挠了挠头，一个字也听不懂。
5.她用枕头捂住脑袋。
6.她将头靠在他的肩膀上。
7.我决定去走走，清醒一下头脑。
8.他只喝了一杯就觉得天旋地转。
9.他转身朝门口走去。
翻译1参考答案：
1. When I asked him why he had done it, he just shrugged his shoulders.
2. The child sat on her father's shoulders to watch the parade go by.
3. He looked (back) over his shoulder.
翻译2参考答案：
1. He bends his back when he walks.
2. He yawned and stretched his back as he got out of bed.
3. He leaned his back against the bar.
4. He smiled and gave me a hearty slap/pat on the back.
5. They tied his hands behind his back.
6. He was carrying a small child on his back.
翻译3参考答案：
1. She jumped to her feet when she heard the news.
2. She was tapping/stamping her feet impatiently.
3. She dragged her feet as she reluctantly followed her parents.
4. My feet slipped as I was about to shoot and I missed the ball.
5. He likes to put his feet up and watch TV when he gets home.
翻译4参考答案：
1. Suddenly her knees buckled/ weakened and she fell to the floor.
2. He hugged his knees to keep warm.
3. He went/got down on his knees and begged for forgiveness.
4. He sat on her father's knees while he read her a story.
5. He was on his knees, searching for the missing ring.
翻译5参考答案：
1. He dropped/lowered/bent/bowed his head in shame.
2. They nodded their heads in agreement.
3. She shook her head in disbelief.
4. He scratched his head, not understanding a word.
5. She buried her head in the pillow.
6. She rested her head on his shoulder.
7. I decided to go for a walk to clear my head.
8. He could feel his head spinning after only one drink.
9. He turned and headed for the door.专题07 读后续写之各种心理活动描写
一、关键词
（一）Hesitate (犹豫)
Then she asked, hesitating, filled with anxious doubt.
（二）Nervous/Frightened（紧张、害怕）
I said nervously, my voice trembling a bit.
I was seized by a sudden impulse （冲动）to run.
Fear took hold of me. / Panic seized us.
My body tensed as I heard...
I chewed my lip.
I tossed and turned all night.彻夜难眠
... I replied, feeling a lump(块状物) rise in my throat.
I felt that the blood in my body cooled\froze rapidly because of the terrible sight
With a pounding heart and cold, moist palms, I felt faint.
10.I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.
（三）Ashamed（羞愧）
My throat was dry and my face was burning up.
So ashamed was I that I could feel my face burning/the blood rush to my face.
I dropped my eyes.
（四）Sad/depressed (悲伤、抑郁)
Jack is overcome with grief.
Grief comes in waves. 悲伤如潮水一般涌来。
The last word went like a bullet(子弹) to my heart. ---伤心、扎心
A ripple of sadness welled up inside him 涌起阵阵悲伤
The gloom（忧郁）deepened as the result came in. 更加难过
My heart seemed to be torn.(心都要撕碎了)
Her eyes are flooded with tears.
Tears are rolling down from her eyes.
Eyes begin to water.
I sobbed bitterly, tasting the salt from the tears that streamed down my face.
I felt so sad that I found myself crying unconsciously, unable to hold back my tears.
There was clearly nothing left to do but drop herself onto the shabby little couch and weep.
An air of sorrow and depression settled over the crowd.
Her tears seemed to grieve （使伤心）the kindhearted others, for they immediately took out their handkerchiefs and began to weep also.
（五）Angry生气
Charlie glowered(怒视) when I asked him to come forward.
The boss is up in arms about the company’s poor sales record in the past few months. (举起双臂，抖动两个拳头, 表示愤怒)
be red with anger/rage(愤怒); boil with rage; be filled with fury（愤怒）
He clenched his fists. 他紧握拳头. / She shook her fist at him (i.e. as an angry threatening gesture). 她向他挥动拳头.
My voice sounds like a growling（咆哮）, angry bear.
The reply of the man again fueled the foolish officer’s anger(火上浇油、更加愤怒).
His friend, whose patience had worn thin(耐心被消磨光了), phoned to complain.
My teacher’s eyes were shining with anger.
Anger engulfed吞噬 him like a wild beast.
She could feel the anger growing, bubbling up inside her.如起泡一般变大
I had an undercurrent resentment （对...心怀不满）towards the new proposal.
She threw the invitation on the table with annoyance, murmuring...
Stamp one’s foot in anger 气得直跺脚
Run out of the room in a burst of anger怒气冲冲
He was sweating and burning with rage.
（六）Lonely（孤单）
I feel abandoned by the world 被全世界抛弃。
New fathers often feel left out when baby arrives.
He felt a strong sense of loss after his divorce.
I ended up feeling completely lost and abandoned.
We all have moments of desperation.我们都有沮丧的时候。
Ever since I lost him, I have been faced with a deep sense of loss(失落感)--a feeling which is difficult for me to describe in words(难以用语言描述).
（七）happy/ecstatic/radiant/warm开心、温暖
Bathed in sunshine, we all cheered and jumped with joy.
The crowd became restless(骚动), excitement filling the room.
Tears of happiness poured down Susan’s cheeks.
I felt the warmth surging through me.
I think he’d mighty(及其) happy that ...
His eyes twinkle with pleasure every time he remembers last winter. 每当他想起去年冬天，就喜上眉梢。
Smiles are dancing in his eyes./Her eyes danced with joy and happiness.
I laughed out loud/laughed heartily (哈哈大笑) when I saw that funny video. 当我在看有趣的录像的时候我大声笑了。
Eyes light up. 精神振奋、高兴
I beamed at(对...微笑) him, “Welcome back,...”
Her smile hit the deepest of my heart. 她的微笑触动了我内心深处。
Hearing this, everybody was wild with joy(欣喜若狂)
One’s eyes brim over with warm excited tears热泪盈眶
One evening, standing under a jeweled sky, I found myself thankful for all the hardships.
（八）Shocked/startled/stunned/surprised震惊
Mother fainted away, with the shock of the bad news. 坏消息带来的震惊让妈妈昏过去了。
Hearing the bad news, Mary froze with shock, as if rooted on the ground. (僵住了，像扎根在地上一样)
The car was gone in seconds, leaving Alice shaking her head in disbelief. 难以置信地摇头
I sensed a flash of surprise in his eyes. 我感觉到他眼里的一丝惊讶。A flicker of \ a gust of
（九）Disappointed/frustrated 沮丧
Overcome with/by my bitter disappointment, I refused to be comforted.
When I saw the pile of dirty dishes, my heart sank. 我看到那一堆肮脏的餐具时,感到很扫兴.
in low spirits \ in an unpleasant mood 情绪低落；沮丧
Feel nauseated 觉得恶心
I feel like all my insides have been drained out and I feel empty and let down.
I feel sad, frustrated, angry, confused, hopeless and hurt all at the same time.
（十）Jealous 嫉妒
This sense gives me a headache and makes me jump from envy to severe hate(从嫉妒发展到极度憎恨).
I feel like I am a big, green, grouchy (不高兴的；不满的)monster.
（十一）Regret/遗憾
Driven by a sense of regret(受到遗憾的驱使) he decided to ...
（十二）Tired/疲劳
She had been tired enough to sleep deeply and profoundly深深地--too deeply and soundly to be disturbed by anything.
（十三）curious/ 好奇
Burning with curiosity, she ran across the field after it.
（十四）其他情绪
Never get conceited(骄傲自满的) because of victory or lose heart in case of failure. 胜不骄、败不馁
A unique sense of accomplishment arises. 产生了一种独特的成就感
The police wrote a ticket with a tricky smile(狡黠的微笑).
I feel soft and gentle and caring and my heart feels really warm.
I feel like there are hundreds of butterflies dancing in my heart. (感觉到爱)
The actor playing the father was too wooden.饰演父亲的演员太呆板。
I’ve just been to the dentist and my face is still numb.我刚刚去看了牙医，脸上现在还没知觉呢。
Steve looked blank and said he had no idea what I was talking about.
史蒂夫显得很迷惑，说他不知道我在说什么。
She passed by with only a distant nod. 她冷漠的点了一下头就过去了。
Holly smiled distantly.霍利恍惚地笑了笑。
二、常用短语
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（一）表示人物喜乐
1、既兴奋又开心a mixture of excitement and happiness
2、心情愉快in cheerful spirits
3、振作精神keep up one’s spirits
4、满意的表情a satisfied look
5、高兴地跳起来dance/jump for joy
6、流下幸福的泪水tears of happiness flowing down
7、感到鼓舞的feel inspired/encouraged
8、精神高涨be in high spirit
（二）表示悲忧消沉
1、强烈的失落感a strong sense of loss
2、陷入绝望fall into despair
3、悲痛欲绝cry one’s heart out
4、怀着沉重的心情with a heavy heart
5、沮丧的with a sinking heart
6、情绪低落be down in spirits
7、垂头丧气lose one’s spirits
8、意志消沉a broken spirit
（三）表示怨怒
1、不断地抱怨complain constantly
2、气得满脸通红flame with anger
3、愁眉苦脸have a worried look
4、气冲冲地跑出房间run out of the room in a burst of anger
5、感到尴尬的feel embarrassed
6、感到困惑的feel puzzled/confused
7、感到沮丧的feel frustrated/depressed
8、感到恼怒的feel annoyed
9、感到泄气的feel discouraged
（四）表示其他情绪
1、宽容的精神a forgiving spirit
2、以和蔼可亲的态度with a kind and good-humored spirit
3、在这些情绪的控制下under the domination of these emotions
（五）人物动作或心理活动
1、鼓起勇气muster up courage
2、面对斗争与改变in the face of struggle and change
3、没有履行职责fail to carry out one’s duties
4、完全一团糟be completely in a mess
5、一项有意义的活动a meaningful/rewarding activity
6、相信in the belief that
7、抱着疲惫的双腿回家go home on tired legs
8、全心全意be devoted to sth whole-heartedly
9、感觉很不适应feel out of place
10、毫无倦意show no signs of tiredness
11、无力改变的结果be powerless to change the outcome
12、赞赏的眼光an admiring gaze
13、嫉妒的眼光an envious glance
14、向某人投以爱慕的目光cast admiring glance at sb
15、凝视着某人look at sb with a fixed gaze
16、好奇地向某人看了一眼throw a curious glance at sb
17、一听到声音就知道是某人recognize sb at first hearing
18、爆发出阵阵喝彩声break into shouts of applause
19、不耐心地听listen impatiently
20、严厉训斥某人give sb a sharp scolding
21、穿过田野的散步a walk across the field
22、散步/闲逛have/take a stroll
23、步行穿过马路walk across a street
24、在倾盆大雨中行走walk through the pouring rain
25、毫无目的地在街上游荡stroll aimlessly through the streets
26、来回踱步pace back and forth
27、臂挽着臂走walk arm in arm
28、平衡不同水平的学生的兴趣爱好
balance the interests of different levels of students
（六）
with a heavy/sinking/broken heart
怀着沉重的/沉的/破碎的心
with a light heart 心情轻松地
touch one’s heart 打动了某人的心
Pierce one’s heart 刺痛某人的心
follow one’s heart跟随某人的心
pour out one’s heart to sb.
向某人倾诉自己的心声
filled one’s heart 充满某人的内心
one’s heart is breaking某人的心正在碎
one’s heart melted 心被融化了
beating fast跳得很快
pound with excitement 激动得直跳
thump with fear 因恐惧而砰砰作响
be in tears 含泪
have tears in one’s eyes眼里含着泪水
burst into tears 放声大哭
fight back tears 抑制住泪水
be close to tears 快要哭了
fly off the handle 勃然大怒
lose one’s temper 发脾气
（七）
open one’s mouth 张开嘴
hide one’s yawn 打哈欠
cup one’s mouth 扣住某人的嘴
stuff one’s mouth with something 用......填满嘴巴
drop open in surprise惊奇地张大了嘴
start watering 开始流口水
heart be in one’s mouth紧张得心都到了喉咙眼
三、句子赏析
思考
An idea flashed across his mind.他脑子里闪过一个念头。
An idea formed in his mind.他脑中有了一个主意。
An idea occurred to / hit / struck him.他突然有了一个主意。
She was deep in thought and heard little of what was being said around her.她在沉思，几乎听不见周围的话。
The opportunity had gone and his mind scrabbled for alternatives.
机会已经失去了，他苦苦思索别的方案。
“感到害怕”的细节描述
当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我感到很害怕。
1. At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I felt very scared.
2. 1）At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak. (嗓子发紧，膝盖发软)
2）At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.(吓呆了，不敢动弹)
3）At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating. (被深深地恐惧感所控制，手心出汗)
表感到兴奋 thrilled
当主持人宣布她获奖时，她兴奋极了。
1. When the host announced that she won the prize, she felt thrilled.
2. 1) When the host announced that she won the prize, her eyes twinkled with excitement.（激动得两眼放光）
2) When the host announced that she won the prize, her heart was thumping with excitement. (激动得心砰砰跳)
3) When the host announced that she won the prize, a wide excitement took hold of her. (兴奋不能自已)
补充：
① He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。
② Fear slowly creeps upon her.恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。
③ She was struck with horror when...她感到恐惧……
④ She was choked by fear.她因恐惧而窒息。
⑤ Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.她脸色苍白地站在那里，舌头打结。
⑥ A flood of fear welled up in him. / Fear flooded over him.
他心中涌起一阵恐惧。 / 恐惧淹没了他。
⑦ Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly suffocated（窒息）.
她的心跳得厉害，几乎窒息而死。
⑧ She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.
她浑身颤抖，觉得如坐针毡。
感到悲伤”的细节描述
一听到那个坏消息，她悲伤不已。
1. Upon hearing the bad news, she felt extremely sad.
2. 1）Upon hearing the bad news, her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks. (心痛，眼泪直流)
2）Upon hearing the bad news, she, numb with grief, had trouble speaking. (悲伤到失去知觉，不能开口说话)
3）Upon hearing the bad news, she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn’t help crying bitterly.(被一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣)
“感到开心”的细节描述
当妈妈亲吻他时，小baby开心极了。
1. When his mother kissed him on the cheek, the baby was happy/delighted/full of joy.
2.1) When his mother kissed him on the cheek, it seemed as if the baby were on top of the world. (非常开心)
2) When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, his face beamed and his bright smile lit up the room. (眉开眼笑；笑容照亮房间)
3) When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, his eyes danced with joy and sweetness. (欢欣雀跃)
"感到羞愧"的细节描述
她感到非常羞愧。
Key 1: She felt ashamed.
Key 2:
1) She felt so ashamed that she could feel her face burning.(脸上滚烫)
2) So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face. (血液涌上脸颊)
3) So ashamed did she feel that she was close to tears. (快哭了)
“感到生气”的细节描述
Sheldon感到非常生气。
Key 1: Sheldon felt very angry.
Key 2:
1) Sheldon felt so angry that he stormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him. (冲出房间；狠狠摔门)
2) Boiling with rage, Sheldon shook his fist at me.(怒火中烧；挥舞拳头)
3) Filled with fury, Sheldon was unable to utter a single word. (充满愤怒；说不出话)
“感到绝望”的细节描述
Tony感到很绝望。
Key 1: Tony felt hopeless/desperate.
Key 2:
1) As the result of an accident, Tony was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness and sank into hopelessness. (被投入黑暗之中；陷入绝望)
2) Tony felt left out and was getting desperate with loneliness. (感觉被遗忘、忽视)
3) Tony’s beliefs in looking forward and seeing the positive in everything deserted him.
感动：
Touched deeply/immensely, we…被深深感动，我们……
Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.她热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢。
With tears streaming down her face, she... 泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来，……
All those present to listen to her sad story were moved to tears.凡在场听到她悲惨经历的人无不感动得流泪。
I was greatly touched by what you told me.你对我讲的话使我大受感动。
It is very moving to see how much strangers can care for each other.看到陌生人之间这般彼此关照，实在令人感动。
His speech was inspiring and touched my heart. 他的发言鼓舞人心，让我很受触动。
后悔
My face flushed radish red and I stared at my feet, hoping no one would notice how embarrassed I was.
我的脸红红的萝卜和我盯着我的脚，希望没有人会注意到我有多尴尬。
Shame hitting, the woman kept silent, having no courage to look his husband in the eye.
羞耻的打击，女人保持沉默，没有勇气直视丈夫的眼睛。
Guilt and shame flowing in her mind, she didn’t even dare to watch her husband in the eye, weeping in regret.
她心中充满了罪恶感和羞耻，甚至不敢直视丈夫的眼睛，因为后悔而哭泣。
I froze. I could feel the heat rising into my cheeks, did I really just do that
我僵住了。我能感觉到热流到我的脸颊，我真的这么做了吗？
希望
At this dark and hopeless moment, a wonderful idea came to him.
在这个黑暗而绝望的时刻，他想到了一个绝妙的主意。
It filled his mind with a great, bright light.
他的脑子里充满了明亮的光。
He was determined to tell people the truth, but no one could hear his voice.
他决心告诉人们真相,但是没有人能听见他的声音。
烦恼
She was like a cat on hot bricks before her driving test.
在她驾驶考试时，她像热锅上的蚂蚁。
In her nervousness she stumbled over her words.
她紧张得说不出话来。
She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.
她全身发抖，感觉如坐针毡。
I could feel sweat beading on my forehead as I walked around the corner.
当我走过拐角处时，我能感觉到额头上的汗珠。
I have butterflies in my stomach every time I speak in public.
我每次在公众场合讲话都会感到紧张。
I could feel my heart in my throat as my name was called.
当我的名字被呼唤时，我能感觉到我的心在我的喉咙里。
My mind went blank.
我的脑子一片空白。
She felt nervousness took hold of her whole body.
她感到紧张占据了整个身体。
She was so nervous that she was shaking like a jelly.
她太紧张了，吓得发抖。
Her ears rang and she couldn’t hear a single word.
她的耳朵一响，一个字也听不见。
She stood almost frozen, with a pale face and red eyes.
她几乎冻僵了，脸色苍白，眼睛通红。
She could feel her palms sweating, heartbeat racing and blood rushing in her ears.
她能感觉到她的手心在出汗，心跳加速，耳朵里的血在奔腾。
She bit her lips and looked away from Mrs. Willow’s eyes.
她咬着嘴唇，把眼睛从威洛太太的眼睛里移开。
My heart was pounding, as if it were about to pop.
我的心扑通扑通地跳个不停，好像要跳出来了。
He looks like an ant on a hot pot.
他看起来像热锅上的蚂蚁。
My heart is hanging like a big stone, how can not fall down.
我的心里像悬着一块大石头，怎么也落不下来。
其他例句：
1．These events constantly remind me of my father’s absence.
2．I immediately picture/imagine him walking through the door, wearing a shining smile.
3．Most days I hope that maybe he will turn up at my doorstep one day.
4．At that very moment, he wondered whether he would be sentenced to death for killing people.
5．He was determined to tell people the truth, but no one could hear his voice.
6．So the young man realized the police had arrested the wrong person, and he took the great courage to expose the real criminal.
7．I focused my thoughts on every part of myself.
8．We nodded our heads in agreement, understanding each other.
9．Somehow I got the idea it would be fun to waken my father by firing it.
10．I was wondering where he was. I had a new joke to tell him.
11．I was afraid to go to sleep, for fear that I would wake up the way I had been before.
12．Then I tried to figure out what I should do. Follow my friend to the hospital
13．There was nothing I could accomplish there, I convinced myself.
14．All I could do at the hospital, I decided, was to get in the way.
15．As I started my car, I realized that my friend had left his truck and keys at the courts.
16．From that one experience I learned that the most important thing in life isn’t the money you make.
17．I will cherish the fond memories for the rest of my life.
18．He felt he could not continue and sat down on the lawn.
19．At this dark and hopeless moment, a wonderful idea came to him. It filled his mind with a great, bright light.
20．Tom thought for a moment, was about to agree; but he changed his mind.
21．The peasant, surprised and disturbed, swallowed a tiny glass of brandy.（upset, bewildered, shocked, perplexed, doubtful ）
22．She met his gaze at last, a red flush creeping across her face.
23．He went home ashamed, chocking with anger and confusion.(embarrassed regretful apologetic
24．He grew angry, becoming annoyed, hot, and shocked.
25．The peasant stood choking with anger and fear.
26．He was consumed with guilt after the accident.
27．He was consumed by /with jealousy.
28．He was haunted by his memories of the war.
29．He grew a little pale.
30．The day of the ball drew near and Madame Loisel seemed sad, uneasy, anxious.
31．But one evening her husband reached home with a triumphant air and holding a large envelope in his hand.
32．He stopped, distracted, seeing that his wife was weeping.
33．Two great tears ran slowly from the corners of her eyes toward the corners of her mouth.
34．He stood up, bewildered.
35．They looked, thunderstruck, at each other.
36．They went toward the Seine in despair, shivering with cold.
37．She sat waiting on a chair in her ball dress, without strength to go to bed, overwhelmed, without any fire, without a thought.
38．Loisel returned at night with a hollow, pale face.
四、写作练习
（一） 根据提示填空：
1.He ___________________(变得呆板)and stood still in front of the camera.
2.Her life would never be the same again, _________________________(她模模糊糊地意识到).
3.I have recently been suffering from _______________________________(双手一直疼痛麻木).
4.He _____________________(糊里糊涂地走进了)into the cemetery.
5.The horror of my experience _________________________(已使我感觉迟钝).
6._________________________(她两眼发直), not knowing what to say next.
7._____________________________________(他颤抖的双手和茫然的眼神进一步证实了)her
earlier perception that he was extremely ill at ease.
8.He looked at her ___________________________(他那双黑眼睛茫然地望着她)that made no
opportunity for her to speak.
9.He found her _____________________________(冷若冰霜，拒人于千里之外)
10.There was __________________________(她眼中时时流露出心不在焉的神情), her thoughts elsewhere.
11.They ___________________ (依稀记得)that the islands were the only part of Britain occupied during the war.
12.He is a reckless driver and often drives ___________________(漫不经心).
（二）将下列句子翻译成英文：
1.听到这个消息，他给了我一个呆滞的笑容
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2.他手指被冻僵了，花了好大力气才在口袋中找到钥匙。
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3.他能感到指尖正在变得麻木。
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4.我太过震惊，呆若木鸡。
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5.她木然地盯着我。
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6.Tom给一位女士讲了个笑话，但获得的只是一个茫然的眼神，
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7.从电话里听起来帕特非常冷淡和疏远。
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8.她眼神恍惚，显然心里在想着别的什么事儿。
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9.他能听到在远处某个地方的海浪声。
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10.我们是远亲。
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11.“没什么，”罗茜心不在焉地说。
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12.他脸上一副心不在焉的神情，好像想起了什么往事似的。
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（三）翻译练习：
1.她怀着沉重的/沉的/破碎的心，看着他走了。
2.他心情轻松地出发了
3.他的悲惨故事打动了她的心..
4.她的话刺痛了我的心。
5.只要跟随你的心，你就会快乐。
6.最后，他泪流满面，向她倾诉了自己的心声。
7.松了一口气。
8.当我想起他们的悲伤时，我的心很痛。
9.他的心在里面慢慢地碎了
10.他笑了笑，她的心融化了。
11.她的心跳得很快。
12.她的心激动得直跳
13.他的心因恐惧而砰砰作响。
（四）翻译练习
1.她张开嘴要说什么,最后什么也没说。
2.他捂住嘴偷偷打了个哈欠。
3.我们惊奇地张大了嘴。
4.闻到食物的香味，我开始流口水了。
5.突然一只手扣住了她的嘴。
6.他的嘴上挂着一丝笑意。
7.他开始往嘴里塞意大利面。stuff [stf] 塞满;填塞
8.他直起身，目瞪口呆地看着我。
9.我走进她的办公室时，紧张得心都到了喉咙眼。
练习参考答案
写作练习（一） 根据提示填空：
1. He became wooden and stood still in front of the camera.
他变得呆板，一动不动的站在照相机前
2. Her life would never be the same again, she realized numbly.
她模模糊糊地意识到她的生活不会和过去一样了。
3. I have recently been suffering from pain and numbness in my hands.
我近来双手一直疼痛麻木。
4. He walked numbly into the cemetery.
他糊里糊涂地走进了墓地。
5.The horror of my experience has numbed my senses.
我经历的那种恐怖已使我感觉迟钝。
6.She stared blankly into space, not knowing what to say next.
她两眼发直，不知道下面该说什么。
7.His trembling hands and blank stare confirmed her earlier perception that he was extremely ill at ease.
他颤抖的双手和茫然的眼神进一步证实了她早先的感觉：他感到极不自在。
8.He looked at her out of black blank eyes that made no opportunity for her to speak.
他那双黑眼睛茫然地望着她，不给她以开口的机会。
9.He found her cold, ice-like and distant...
他觉得她冷若冰霜，拒人于千里之外。
10.There was a distant look in her eyes from time to time, her thoughts elsewhere.
她眼中时时流露出心不在焉的神情，思绪已飘至别处。
11.They distantly remember that the islands were the only part of Britain occupied during the war
他们依稀记得这些岛屿是英国在战时唯一被占领的部分。
12.He is a reckless driver and often drives in an absent way.
他是个粗心的司机，开车时经常漫不经心。
写作练习（二）将下列句子翻译成英文：
1.Hearing the news, he show me a wooden smile
听到这个消息，他给了我一个呆滞的笑容
2.His fingers were numb with cold, and it took a lot of energy to find the key in the pocket
他手指被冻僵了，花了好大力气才在口袋中找到钥匙。
3.He could feel his fingers growing numb at their tips...
他能感到指尖正在变得麻木。
4.I was so shocked I went numb.
我太过震惊，呆若木鸡。
5.She stared at me with a blank expression on her face.
她木然地盯着我。
6.Tom told a woman a joke and got a blank look.
Tom给一位女士讲了个笑话，但获得的只是一个茫然的眼神，
7.Pat sounded very cold and distant on the phone.
从电话里听起来帕特非常冷淡和疏远。
8.There was a distant look in her eyes; her mind was obviously on something else.
她眼神恍惚，显然心里在想着别的什么事儿。
9. Somewhere, distantly, he could hear the sound of the sea.
他能听到在远处某个地方的海浪声。
10. We’re distantly related.
我们是远亲。
11. “Nothing,” Rosie said in an absent way.
“没什么，”罗茜心不在焉地说。
12. His look had grown absent, as if he were calling up memories.
他脸上一副心不在焉的神情，好像想起了什么往事似的。
（三）翻译练习
1. With a heavy/sinking/broken heart, she watched him go.
2. He set off with a light heart.
3. His sad story touched her heart.
4. Her words pierced my heart.
5. Just follow your heart and you’ll be happy.
6. Finally, he broke down in tears and poured out his heart to her.
7. Relief filled his heart.
8. My heart aches when I think of their sorrow.
9. Inside, his heart was slowly breaking
10. He smiled and her heart melted.
11. Her heart is beating fast.
12. Her heart was pounding with excitement.
13. His heart thumped with fear.
（四）翻译练习
1. She opened her mouth to say something，but nothing.
2. He covered his mouth to hide his yawn.
3. Our mouths dropped open in surprise.
4. My mouth started watering when I smelled the food.
5. Suddenly a hand cupped her mouth.
6. A smile played around his mouth.
7. He began to stuff his mouth with pasta.
8. He straightened up and looked at me, open-mouthed.
9. My heart was in my mouth when I walked into her office.专题03读后续写之各种“说”和“叫”
一、关键词
murmur 咕哝 (人、微风、小溪发出柔和而连续的声音); utter 发出（声音）; stammer/ stutter口吃; 结结巴巴地说; howl / roar 怒吼; mock 嘲笑; scold 责骂； snap at sb 厉声说
She stroked his hair and murmured, "Don’t worry. You’ll be all right."
“I’ll, I’ll only be a m-moment,” he stammered.
He howled like a wounded animal as blood spurted from his body.
当鲜血从他身体喷射出来的时候，他像受伤的动物一样嚎叫。
When asked why he chose to help the family, the man detailed(详细解释道), “When i was young myself, I ...”
The boy could tell by the firmness in his father’s voice (可以通过爸爸声音里的坚定可以辨别出)that the decision was final.
We continued like this for a few minutes before i slipped into the conversation: “...”
But the lawyer persisted(坚持)，Finally, a voice came from the very back of the room.
7）其它：
swallow 吞下
whisper 低语，小声说
mumble 小声咕哝 He mumbled a few words of thanks.
mutter 轻声说（生气），低声抱怨
"This is ridiculous," he muttered under his breath.
She muttered something about having to go home early.
Stop muttering to yourself and speak clearly.
growl低声说（生气地说）"As I was saying," Lewis growled, "it needs to be finished today."
exclaim突然大声叫 "How beautiful!" she exclaimed.
二、常用短语
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1
)
tongue-tied with anger 气得张口结舌
bite one’s tongue忍着没有说出来
bite back one’s anger按捺住怒火
take a bite of 咬了一口
bite one’s lip 咬着嘴唇
run one’s tongue around one’s lips
用舌头舔了舔嘴唇
curl up one’s lips with disapproval
不以为然地翘起了嘴唇
lick one’s lips 舔嘴唇
三、句子赏析
1．Reuben murmured a thank you and ran home all the way.
2．“Here, Mum! Here!”Reuben exclaimed as he ran to her side.
3．A young man came to the police station, surrounded by a group of journalists, declaring that he had spotted the murderer.
4．I was getting ready to blow out all the candles and she’s getting ready to help me in case I ran out of air.
5．“Time to go.” I whispered to the girl, wishing she could follow me right away.
6．My teammates were all screaming as I dashed toward the finish line.
7．I picked up the ball one last time and grumbled, “Please just come to get the damn ball.”
8．Frannie quickly told Belle Ringer and the other two drivers about Stevie’s surgery, and then sighed.
9．The house got really noisy at that time, with everybody hollering and shouting at the top of his voice.
10．“How can I let you throw away the thing that means the most to you ” I pleaded with him.
11．They let out a surprisingly loud voice.
12．The smile froze on his face; his mouth fell wide open.
13．He interrupted the silence with an announcement: “The deadline to enter for the Competition is tomorrow.”
14．“I haven’t finished; I need more time,” he begged. “That’s what Michelangelo said.” Mr. Edgarjoked.
15．She greeted James and inquired. “Are you ready for our field trip ” James didn’t respond.
16．“What do you think matters for a bird ” Mrs. Damon questioned.
17．He added softly, “I miss you.”
18．Rose scolded the child gently for being naughty.
19．She suggested a walk in the open air and he readily agreed.
20．Students are clearly informed that drugs will not be tolerated.
21．Let me explain what I mean.
22．How can you explain that sort of behavior
23．“Look, I can’t tell you. Oh, come on, give me a hint.’
24．“Tell me.” “You must be joking-he’d never believe me.”
25．“Well, there is nothing we can do about it now,” she sighed.
26．As I recall, it was you who suggested this idea in the first place.
27．“I wouldn’t be afraid, “she boasted.
28．Instead of being delighted, she threw the invitation on the table crossly, muttering
29．By a violent effort she conquered her grief and replied in a calm voice,
Ben stammered out an apology.
30．Finally she replied hesitating
31．She uttered a cry of joy:
32．Then she asked, hesitating, filled with anxious doubt:
33．At the end of a week they had lost all hope. Loisel, who had aged five years, declared: We must consider how to replace that ornament.
34．Then he began to recount the adventures again.
35．He tried to protest. The entire table began to laugh.
36．Mauchecome stammered: “But since the pocketbook was found.”
37．When he was seated at the table in Jordanian’s tavern, he commenced to explain “the affair”.
四、练习
(
1.
to speak very quietly or in a low voice
2.
to
make a long, low sound because you are in pain
3. to give a sudden sharp loud voice
4. to speak with difficulty, repeating sounds or words
5. to talk about other ‘s private lives
6. to take a quick deep breath with your mouth open, especially
because you are surprised or in pain
7.
to
give moral or emotional strength to sb
.
8. to say sorry for doing sth
.
wrong
9. to blame that sb/sth is responsible for sth
.
bad
10. to order sb
.
to do sth
.
)（一）连线
scream
whisper
groan
gasp
stammer
gossip
criticize
comfort
command
apologize
(
criticize comfort apologize command gasp stammer whisper gossip groan
scream
)（二）选词填空
1. He approached me and _______________ to my ear that he was a bit afraid.
2. She ______________ herself with the thought that there was still a beam of hope.
3. “Help！Help！”Seeing the blood, the girl _______________ out in terror.
4. “I’m so sorry I’m late,” the aunt ______________to Franklin.
5. People are ___________about the film star’s sudden divorce.
6. “Don’t move！Hands up！” The police rushed in and _______________.
7. The on-lookers____________ the driver severely for his careless driving.
8. The old lady lay on the floor ___________ painfully.
9. “W-w-what ’ he _____________, feeling a bit nervous.
10. The messenger ___________ out his story after running all the way from the battle.
（三）翻译练习
（第一组）
1.“想试试吗 ”我说，碰了碰玛丽娜的手。“好吧，”玛丽娜用她那尖利、不确定的声音说。
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2.“你不用着急。慢慢来，”我温和地说。她的整个脸顿时变得明亮起来，肩膀也放松了。
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3. Derek补充道：“我讨厌看到他生病，我知道需要做些什么才能让他恢复健康。”
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4. 她接着说，“我紧紧地拥抱着他们，感觉到自己内心突然有了一种力量……”。
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5. “从来没有人投诉过我，”感到受辱的那名医生宣称。
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6.“诸位，这是一个钱的问题，”我郑重其事地说。
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（第二组）
他自豪地回答说：“我可以带我的家人去看马戏了。”
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2.“我觉得你在抛弃我。”她痛苦地回答。
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（第三组）
1.“你还是需要好好休息一下。”我建议道。
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2.“他和斯坦夫人有个计划，” 她解释说。
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3. 妈妈提醒我：“一切都会好起来的。”
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4.“我们明年会回来的，”他承诺道。
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5.“暂时不要采取行动，”他警告说，“太危险。”
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（第四组）
1.“他还活着，”Bettie坚持说。“但除非他把药列在单子上，否则他活不了多久。”
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2.“我以为我们可以成为朋友，”他抱怨道。
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3.“...但当这个可怜的男孩没有被选中时，我崩溃了，”他承认。
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4.罗先生用红边的眼睛安慰他说：“我也会想你的。”
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（第五组）
1.“不，不，”我抽泣着说。泪水模糊了我的视线。“很好，真的，”我叫道，“拿去吧。”
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2.我打开窗户大声向对面喊道：“我知道我们以前见过面，但我不记得在哪里。”
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3.车上的女人跳了出来，尖叫着，“你这个白痴！你为什么不看看你要去哪里？”
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4.“起来把你的钱和珠宝给我！”那人喊道。
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5. 她叹了口气，“你打碎了我们的明花瓶。”
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6.“你真漂亮，”我低声说，我的舌头勉强配合。
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（第六组）
1. 他真诚地为他所做的事情道歉。
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2.突然，妈妈尖叫道：“我的钱包哪里去了？”
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3.老人躺在冰冷的地上，痛苦地呻吟着。
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4.“晚安”妈妈在Mike的耳边轻声说，轻轻地离开了房间。
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5.她扶起老人，耐心地安慰他。
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6. 他大口大口地喘着气，把这个令人激动的消息告诉了村民。
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【练习参考答案】
一、连线 312 645 9 7 10 8
二、选词填空
1. whispered 2. comforted 3. screamed 4. apologized 5. gossiping
6. commanded 7. criticized 8. groaning 9. stammered 10. gasped
三、翻译练习
（第一组）
1.“Want to try one on ” I said, touching Marina’s hand. “OK,” Marina said in her sharp, unsure voice.
2. “You don’t have to rush. Just take your time,” I said in a gentle way. Her whole face instantly brightened and her shoulders relaxed.
3. “I hated seeing him sick and knew something needed to be done to make him healthy again.” Derek adds.
4. She continued, “I hugged them tightly, feeling a sudden strength inside me...”
5. “I had never received one single complaint against me,” claimed the humiliated doctor.
6. “It’s a question of money, folks,” I announced.
（第二组）
1.He proudly responded, “I can take my family to the circus.”
2. “I feel like you’re abandoning me,” she responded bitterly.
（第三组）1.“You still need a good rest,” I suggested.
2. “He and Mrs Stein have a plan,” she explained.
3. “Everything happens for the best,” Mom reminded me.
4. “We’ll be back next year,” he promised.
5. “Don’t do anything yet,” he warned. “Too risky.”
（第四组）1.“He’s alive,” Bettie insisted. “But he won’t be much longer unless he has the medicines on that list.”
2. “I thought we could be friends,” he complained.
3. “... But when the poor boy didn’t get picked, I broken down,” he admits.
4. With red-rimmed eyes, Mr. Rowe comforted him, “I will miss you, too.”
（第五组）
1. “No-o-o,” I sobbed. My vision was blurred by tears “It’s fine, really,” I cried, “Take it.”
2. I opened my window and shouted across. “I know we’ve met before, but I can’t remember where.”
3. The woman in the car jumped out, screaming, “You idiot! Why didn’t you look where you were going ”
4. “Get up and give me your money and jewelry!” the man yelled.
5. She sighed, “You broke our Ming vase.”
6. “You are beautiful,” I whispered, my tongue barely cooperating.
（第六组）
1. He apologized sincerely for what he had done.
2. Suddenly, Mom screamed “Where’s my purse ”
3. The old man lay on the cold ground, groaning painfully.
4. “Good night” Mum whispered to Mike’s ear, leaving the room quietly.
5. She lifted up the old man, comforting him patiently.
6. He gasped out the exciting news to the villagers.专题12 读后续写之各地联考汇编附答案（第50-80篇）
51. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
From the first day he entered my classroom, Willard P. Frank existed in his own world, shutting out his classmates and me. My attempts at building a friendly relationship with him were met with complete indifference. I could see that his classmates fared no better. Willard was strictly a loner who seemed to have no desire or need to break his silence．
Shortly after the Thanksgiving holiday, we received word of the annual Christmas collection of money for the less fortunate people in our school district.
“Christmas is a season of giving，”I told my students. “There are a few students in the school who might not have a happy holiday season. By contributing to our Christmas collection, you will help buy food, clothing and toys for these needy people. We will start the collection tomorrow.”
When I called for the contributions the next day, I discovered that almost everyone had forgotten except for Willard P. Frank. The boy dug deep into his pants pockets as he walked slowly to my desk. Carefully, he dropped two quarters into the small container.
“I don’t need milk for lunch，” he mumbled. For a moment, just a moment, he smiled. Then he turned and walked back to his desk.
That night, after school, I took our few contributions to the school principal. I couldn’t help sharing the incident that had taken place.
“I may be wrong, but I believe Willard might be getting ready to become a part of the world around him，” I told the principal.
“Yes.” he nodded.“And we might do well to have him share a bit of his world with us. I just received a list of the poor families in our school who most need help through the Christmas collection. Here, take a look at it.”
As I gazed down to read, I discovered Willard P. Frank and his family were the top names on the list. Seeing this, I decided to do something for him．
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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On that Sunday, I paid a visit to Willard’s family.______________________________
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On that Sunday, I paid a visit to Willard’s family. On entering his house, I was surprised to find a barely empty room with only a broken bed and a dirty second hand sofa. Willard told me that his mother died a few years ago and that his father was missed, leaving him to live with a sick grandma. When asked why he had given the two quarters,__Willard mumbled,__“There are people poorer than me, so I just want to do some help by contributing my milk money.” Hearing his words, I couldn’t help bursting into tears. I thought I should help him break his silence.
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The next day, I had a special class for Willard. I shared his story with the whole class and said “Now, on behalf of the people in need, I should say thank you Willard, you are great！”. After a silence, all the students clapped, saying “Willard, you are great! Willard, you are great！” and They walked slowly to him and hugged him tightly. A friend relationship was built and Willard’s silence was broken by a smile on his face.
52.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was 8 a．m. Kathy, a 25 year old nurse, had just finished a 12 hour night shifts at a hospital. She was tired, but glad to be sailing along highway to where she lived. Although the local government had posted a snow alert(预警), the calm grey sky convinced Kathy the drive would be safe. “I figured I’d be in bed in an hour，” she says.
Snow began when she was halfway home. Listening to the radio, Kathy learned the highway was closed because a tractor had slid off the road. She texted some friends and her mom, and tried not to sleep as she waited．
After a couple of hours, however, conditions worsened. Strong winds began rocking Kathy’s car. She couldn’t see anything outside, and snow was drifting up her doors. It was, she says, “a total whiteout and rows of cars and trucks.”
Late in the afternoon a police officer came and asked if she was in any difficulty. She said she was fine. She asked the police officer if there was any way to get past the trucks. “No, ma’am，” he answered. “You’re not going anywhere.”
Once as it got dark, Kathy began to worry. She texted his brother Cris, telling him to drive snowmobiling buddy(雪地汽车) to get to the highway and find her.
As Cris rode slowly alongside the rows of cars and trucks, people would roll down their windows and ask for help. “I was the first person they’d seen in six hours.”He explained he was picking up his sister. He told them, “Nobody’s coming and I can’t take you.”
Near 10 p．m. Cris reached Kathy. He directed Kathy to pull her car onto the shoulder and asked her to get into his snowmobiling buddy.
As they headed for home, the fun started. About five kilometres into the journey, Cris made a mistake. What he thought was a shallow ditch(浅沟) turned out to be a deep trough(水槽). Instead of coming out the other side, they just kept going down. They were trapped. And feathery snow was over their heads.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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At that moment, they had to take action and get out.
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At that moment, they had to take action and get out. They shouted at the top of their voice, but no one could hear them. They began__to__worry and were convinced they had to stay in their snowmobiling__buddy for the night. Suddenly, a good idea occurred to Kathy. She took off one of her clothes and burned it. Seeing the fire, people ran over and managed to pull__her__car out with all their efforts, making Cris ashamed for his refusal to others.
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When Kathy arrived at her home, her mother was waiting for her. She asked Kathy what had happened. Kathy explained，“I made a terrible mistake. But for others’ help, I couldn’t have been home for the night.”When asked what she would do when someone had difficulty,__Kathy answered immediately that she would do anything to help others because today’s experience turned__out to be a great lesson for her.
53.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
To be honest, sometimes, I hate it when I start thinking about money because it brings me down and drives me sad. When I was younger, I always wondered why money was so important. There wasn’t anything I needed. It’s good to be a kid, since he or she doesn’t have to worry about responsibilities. But as everyone get older, of course that changes. I work almost every day, but it’s still not enough. That’s what is discouraging—it’s never enough.
Right now I have to sacrifice(牺牲) the money I make. I put my school on hold so that I can pay for my girlfriend’s school fee and everything else. I’m very supportive in everything I do, and she is also very supportive. We warm each other up. Hoping she really gets everything right, because we only have each other. I find that hope is my inspiration and that everything will work out however hard it gets. Even though I find that life is hard, it never stops me from helping others, especially those who are less fortunate. While I might be going through hard times myself, there are those out there who could be going through even harder times.
Last night, on my way home I stopped by to buy some burgers in a fast food restaurant. A homeless man approached me and asked，“Do you have any bottles lying around？” I knew he would recycle them for a few cents, but I didn’t have any. I said，“Sorry, I don’t.” And again he asked，“Can you spare some change？” I smiled and said，“Sorry, I can’t.”He was very polite. He smiled back and said，“OK, thank you．” Even though he didn’t have anything, he was still in good spirits. Just from the way he spoke, I could tell he was fine.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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I went in and ate my meal, but in my head I wondered if the homeless man was hungry.
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I went in and ate my meal, but in my head I wondered if the homeless man was hungry. After I finished my meal I decided to order another one for him. I didn’t know if he was still around, but I thought my helping would warm him up. They handed me the hot chocolate first and as I waited for my burger, I noticed the homeless man standing beside me. I asked, “Are you hungry This hot chocolate is for you and there’s a burger coming up for you too.” He replied politely,__ “Thank__you. That’s very kind of you.”
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No matter how hard life is, there are always ways to handle it. And it’s not always through money. It’s through love. If you love someone, you will help him and give him what he needs. The love you give today might be forgotten tomorrow. But it doesn’t matter. Love everybody because that’s the greatest thing you can give and it is the start of your life trip.
54.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was a warm and sunny morning at the Central Park Zoo. Abigail and her classmates were abuzz with excitement as their school bus entered the zoo park lot. Today, Abigail’s class was going on a field trip to the zoo to learn more about the animals and their natural habitats.
“Before you leave the bus, please make sure you have your buddy！” Mrs. Brown announced. To make sure no one got lost in the zoo, each student had a buddy (companion/friend). Abigail’s buddy was named Derrick. Derrick loves animals and was also excited to go to the zoo. But sometimes, Derrick does not follow the rules and gets in trouble. Abigail hoped that today, Derrick would follow the rules so they would not get in trouble.
While the rest of the students got off the bus, Abigail and Derrick quickly ran off to explore. They found the exhibits for many different kinds of animals and learned a lot about their natural habitats. They saw the elephants playing and they saw giraffes eating. They saw the polar bears sleeping and the monkeys leaping. Abigail asked Derrick：
“Derrick, what is your favorite animal？”
“I think I like chimpanzees best. They have a lot of energy, just like me! What animal do you like, Abigail？”
“I love polar bears! I think their lifestyle in the Arctic is very interesting.”
A few hours later, Abigail and Derrick started to feel hungry. They made their way back to the zoo entrance to eat lunch at the Rainforest Cafe. The Rainforest Cafe is both Abigail and Derrick’s favorite restaurant because there is an aquarium inside. The restaurant is also famous for its chocolate cake, which Abigail ordered for dessert after they had finished their lunch.
As Abigail was finishing her cake, Derrick excused himself to go to the restroom. About ten minutes later, a sudden alarm began to go off and a voice came over the loudspeaker.
“Attention! Someone has opened the chimpanzee exhibit! Some chimpanzees have escaped！”
People were screaming and starting to run. Abigail looked for Derrick, but he was nowhere to be found.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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As more and more people ran out of the zoo, Abigail began to think where her buddy,_Derrick could be. She got up from the table quickly and circled back to the restrooms, calling Derrick’s name. There was no answer, so Abigail left the restaurant. As she looked around the zoo grounds, she remembered that Derrick had a lot of energy and had told her that chimpanzees were his favorite animals. Derrick wouldn’t have left the restaurant to release the chimpanzees，would he Oh no! Abigail was sure she knew where Derrick had gone.
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As Abigail raced up the path to the animal exhibits, she was stopped in her tracks by none other than Derrick himself, with two chimpanzees cradled in his arms. He offered a small, guilty smile. “I didn’t mean to let them escape，” he began. “I just wanted to take them out to play for a little while! I took the key from a zookeeper who wasn’t looking. But then, the lock broke and...” Behind Abigail, Mrs. Brown had begun to walk up the path and saw Derrick holding the animals with excitement. It was clear from her stern expression that he was in big trouble because he didn’t follow the rules．
55.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
There was a guy who fell in love with a girl. This romantic guy folded(折叠) 1，000 pieces of paper cranes(千纸鹤) as a gift to his girl. Although at that time his future didn’t seem too bright, they were happy together. Until one day, his girl told him she was going to Paris and would never come back. She told him that she can’t see any future of them. So they’d better go their own ways. Heart broken, the guy agreed.
When he regained his confidence, he worked hard day and night. “You never fail until you stop trying，” he always told himself, “I must make it in life！” Finally this guy set up his own company.
On a rainy day, while this guy was driving, he saw an elderly couple sharing an umbrella in the rain walking to some place. It didn’t take him long to realize they were his former girlfriend’s parents. He drove slowly beside the couple, wanting them to discover him in his expensive car. He wanted them to know that he wasn’t the same anymore and he had his own company, car, etc.
He had made it in life.
Before the guy can realize, the couple was walking towards a cemetery(墓地), and he got out of his car and followed them and he saw his former girlfriend, a photograph of her smiling sweetly as ever at him from her tombstone(墓碑) and he saw his precious paper cranes in a bottle placed beside her tomb.
Her parents saw him. He walked over and asked them why this had happened．
They explained. She did not leave for France at all. She was diagnosed with cancer. In her heart, she had believed that he would make it someday, but she did not want her illness to be his obstacle(累赘)．
Therefore she had chosen to leave him.
She asked her parents to leave his paper cranes by her side. If one day the fate brings him here, he could take some back home. The guy just wept.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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The elderly couple walked towards him, telling him the whole story. They told him the girl was diagnosed with cancer. She left him in order not to depress him, but her love with him was the same as before. Every time she missed him, she would fold some paper cranes in memory of their sweet day. Before the day of her death, she told her parents to place her precious paper cranes beside her tomb so that her beloved boy could company her forever. Hearing what her parents said, the guy was heart broken. He seemed to understand what he should do.
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After going back home, the guy wanted to do something special. He regained his confidence and followed his girl friend’s actions. Every day, he went to her tomb and folded a paper crane for her, telling her what had happened in his daily life. He even set up a love fund, wanting to help more people who suffered from cancer.In this way, he cherished their memorable days.
56.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A Mother’s Love
My mom only had one eye. I hated her. She was such an embarrassment．She cooked for students and teachers to support the family.
There was one day during elementary school when my mom came over to say hello to me. I was so embarrassed.
How could she do this to me I ignored her, threw her a hateful look and ran out. The next day at school one of my classmates said, “Your mom only has one eye！”
I wanted to bury myself. I also wanted my mom to just disappear. I confronted her that day and said,“If you’re only going to make me a laughing stock, why don’t you just die？”
My mom did not respond. I didn’t even stop to think for a second about what I had said, because I was full of anger. I took no notice of her feelings at all.
I wanted to be out of that house, and have nothing to do with her. So I studied really hard, and got a chance to go abroad for further education.
Then, I got married. I bought a house of my own. I had kids of my own. I was happy with my life, my kids and the comforts. Then one day, my mother came to visit me. She hadn’t seen me in years and she didn’t even meet her grandchildren.
When she stood by the door, my children laughed at her, and I shouted at her for coming over uninvited. I screamed at her, “How dare you come to my house and scare my children! GET OUT OF HERE! NOW！！！”
And to this, my mother quietly answered,“Oh, I’m so sorry. I may have gotten the wrong address.” and she was soon out of sight.
One day, a letter regarding a school reunion came to my house. So I lied to my wife that I was going on a business trip. After the reunion, I went to the old house just out of curiosity.
My neighbors said that she died. I did not shed a single tear. They handed me a letter that she had wanted me to have.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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My dearest son，
I think of you all the time and I’m sorry that _________________________________
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With all my love to you.
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My dearest son，
I think of you all the time and I’m sorry that I came to your house and scared your children. I had never thought my visit would bring so much unhappiness to you. However, I was really so happy when I heard you were coming for the reunion．I missed you day and night. But I may not be able to even get out of bed to see you. I’m terribly sorry that I was a constant embarrassment to you when you were growing up.
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You see, when you were very little，you got into a terrible accident，as a result of which you lost one of your precious eyes.As a mother，I couldn’t stand watching you having to grow up with just one eye．It was too much for you—a young soul to endure such a cruel fact and a possible future full of challenges. So I gave you mine.I was so proud of my son who was seeing a whole new world for me, in my place, with that eye.
With all my love to you.
Your mother
57.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Though born into a rich family, by twenty, Hilary had spent all the money. He then had some trouble with the bank and was put in prison. He escaped and ran to Australia, where he could either die or work, which gave him no pleasure. Then he remembered that he had an aunt．
She was his father’s only sister, but his father used to say she brought no glory to the family. It seemed that his aunt had failed to marry a nobleman. Instead, she had chosen a businessman as her husband. So her brother considered her dead. Later on, her husband died and left her a lot of money; but that did not bring her back to life in her brother’s opinion.
Hilary discovered his aunt’s address. Fortunately she remained faithful and honest to him. So Hilary soon moved into her house and lived comfortably.
Soon his aunt was deadly ill. Hilary was very worried. Fate had found a home for him, and was now going to throw him out of it. There was only one thing that could save him: her will．
“Will？”she said，“Yes, I have made one. That was when I was a girl and had not much money. I left all my money to some religious people.”
“Didn’t you make another will when you were married.” Hilary asked.
“No，”she said in a low voice, “There was no need. When I finally had a lot of money I found I had no relations.”
On the next day he went to the public library and examined a book of law. It told him what he already believed. When a woman is married, an earlier will loses its value. A new will must be made. If no new will is made, the money goes to the nearest relation. Hilary knew that he was his aunt’s only relation. His future was safe.
After a few months, Hilary’s problems became serious. He badly needed money. He had expensive tastes, and owed a lot of money to shopkeepers. They trusted him because his aunt was rich; but the debt was terrible.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Unfortunately his aunt did not want to discuss money matters at all. Hilary began to wonder about a new problem. Should it be better for his aunt to die now so that he could get the money to pay off his debts Just then, his aunt told him that she was going to send for her lawyer. Worried that his aunt might leave all her money to someone else in her new will, he made a quick decision to put her life to an end.
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One night, his aunt asked him to prepare the medicine for her. Realizing it was a good chance to carry out his plan, Hilary doubled the amount of the medicine, which would surely put his aunt to sleep forever. Actually his aunt was so well aware of his intention that she explained that if she could live until tomorrow, she would make a new will in his favor and that if she died that night, he would get nothing. Hearing this, Hilary attempted to stop her drinking the medicine, but it was too late.
58.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
I encountered God the summer I was five. My father had finally grown too sick to get out of bed, so the heat and nervous tension in the air inside the house made it impossible to breathe. I would escape by squeezing under the front porch. All manner of creatures lived there, but I mostly ignored them, with one exception—a little frog who, every time I crawled under the porch, stared at me with great, golden eyes.
In late June, the frog finally hopped (跳跃) toward my arm and stared at me, demanding eye contact. Once he had my attention, he opened his wide mouth and said, “Hello, Sophie.”
I should have been shocked, but for some reason, I wasn’t. Perhaps at five years old, I was more receptive to something against the laws of nature. At any rate, I was not shocked that a frog could speak. I had a more pressing question.
“How do you know my name？”
The frog blinked slowly. “I know everything. I am God.”
I spoke,“You can’t be God. You’re too small.”
He extended a long, webbed finger and pointed to the edge of the porch’s shadow—to the spot where my mother had tried to grow flowers there for years. She had stopped trying when my father’s condition worsened.
“Look there，” commanded the frog, and I stared as a beautiful white flower blossomed as if stretching its limbs after a long sleep. In my five years, I had never seen anything so splendid.
God and I became good friends that summer. I spent every day under the porch, talking to him.
Sometimes I asked God questions. Sometimes he answered. Once, I asked him where Heaven was.
“Heaven，”he said, “is where I live.”
In August, my father’s illness had progressed to the point that I was sent to my aunt’s house in Virginia. I told God I would be back soon, and then waited in Virginia for my father to get better.
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1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
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Six months later, I came back home for my father’s funeral. Death is very confusing for a child. I didn’t understand what it meant to die; all I knew was that my father had been lying in bed and receiving medical treatment for his illness when I left, but now when I came back, he was nowhere to be found. He must be hiding somewhere, I was sure; people couldn’t just disappear, especially without saying goodbye. Though my mother told me he had “passed on”， I thought she meant he’d traveled to another town.
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Suddenly, an idea crossed my mind that my father might travel to Heaven. I knew exactly how to find my father. I ran to the front porch. However, I had grown during those six months in Virginia, and I could no longer squeeze into the porch’s shadow. I sat in front of the porch all afternoon, calling for someone to answer me. No voice came. No father returned from the dead. No frog jumped out of its hiding spot. I was too big to talk to God, so I started to cry.
59.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
I went up to the roof for a break after study for an hour and watched the 50 or so people swimming in the natural rock pool below our house. It was a sunny day—a blue, cloudless sky over calm sea. But then, as I looked in the distance. I discovered a series of three or four big waves heading towards the shore. I’d seen these mini tsunamis(海啸) many times before. They were heading at speed in the direction of the pool. Most people knew to look out for them, but from the screams that started coming from the beach, I could tell someone was in trouble.
Without thinking, I ran down into the street, holding my bodyboard(冲浪板) on the way and shouted at a stranger to go inside my house and call the coastguard. My neighbor Moises had heard the screaming as well and was also outside with his bodyboard, so together we rushed to the steps that led down to the sea．
Once we got closer, we discovered the waves had pulled a boy and a girl from the pool and into the open sea. I knew that the nearest boat would take at least 30 minutes to reach us. Waiting for help wasn’t a choice. I wasn’t used to this sort of emergency—I’d never been trained as a lifeguard—but I didn’t think twice about trying to save them. I suppose in a way I wanted to impress everyone; at 19, a deal like that can seem like a good opportunity to show off．
Moises and I dived into the water and it took us 10 minutes to get to them. When we finally reached them, they were almost lifeless with only their heads coming in and out of the water. We could tell they were still alive from their small breaths but it was clear that they wouldn’t have been able to stay there much longer. I held the boy and pulled him over my board. Moises moved the girl onto his board. We discussed pushing them back to the shore, but we were too far out.
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1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
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We had to wait，trying to keep them on the boards, feeling their faces to wake them up, telling them to be strong. 30 minutes later, I began to feel a bit tired. Finally, in the distance, we discovered a small boat with three lifeguards heading towards us. When the boat appeared, we helped push the boy and the girl on board, only to be told that there was no room for us. People who had watched what happened came to meet us and cheek if we were OK, but there was no round of applause. Everything was back to normal.
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That night, word came from the hospital that the two people were in a good condition. They probably would have died if they’d been in the sea for any longer. I knew it was a big deal that we’d saved them, but at the same time it didn’t seem like that much effort. I’m sure that anyone who could swim would do the same thing.
60.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
I have worked within team environments for many years. But, I learned about teamwork many years before the term became a popular word in organizations. Are large organizations the only places where teamwork exists
When I was a teenager, I had the opportunity to visit many country farms along with my father who taught music lessons to many farm kids. I always remember one farm in particular where both of the farmer’s sons took guitar lessons from my father.
The farm on which the boys lived was a small dairy farm where milking the cows was a daily routine both early morning and at night. The farm was big enough, though, that one person, the father, could not manage it alone and certainly could not do all the tasks by himself as well as plant the crops in the early spring and harvest them for his cows both in late June and in early September. This meant that if the farm was to grow and support the family, everyone had to work and help. This meant that all family members, including the farmer’s wife, had a set of clear responsibilities on a daily basis, seven days a week. As you may know, dairy cows must be milked every day including Saturday and Sunday—there is no rest on a farm—no days off—no sick time—nor any holidays.
So, what developed through necessity was the original teamwork—teamwork that meant survival, growth and enough money to feed the family, buy the necessary farm supplies like tools and machines. If there was no teamwork, there would be no farm—it was that simple.
If you have a chance some time in the future, I would encourage you to visit a working farm like this. It is too bad that more people couldn’t experience the original team on a farm before they start to talk about what teams are and how they should operate—they may learn more than they might first realize.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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I worked on this particular farm____________________________________________
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Farms have become even bigger business today.________________________________
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I worked on this particular farm from time to time for a couple of years and I certainly found out a lot. I found out how hard the work is. I found out what time meant when you needed to milk a cow at a set time, feed them at a certain time, and finish one task completely in a short time period because there was another one waiting to be done. I found out the importance of teamwork on the farm where family members all work together to make an operation a success.
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Farms have become even bigger business today. No longer are there the small farms unless of course those that are only a hobby farm. And, as farms grew, the machines to work them have become even more expensive. Farmers have to gain more knowledge of seeds, crops, fertilizers, and how to survive by investing in the markets. However, if there was no teamwork, there would be no farm.
61.(2017·浙江卷6月)
阅读下面短文， 根据所给情节进行续写， 使之构成一个完整的故事。
On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled(骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him.“Man, that’s a big dog！”he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac’s relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac’s bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase(追赶)．
Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easily caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.
At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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The car abruptly stopped in front of him._______________________________________
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A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived.
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The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Paul and Becky got out of the car immediately to give help. But with the bare hands, they didn’t dare to fight with the wolf. However, they still approached to the wolf bravely. At the same time, the wolf also noticed them and turned its head back, shouting loudly at Paul and Becky. Mac then jumped off the bicycle and was ready to fight against the wolf. That reached deadlock.
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A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. They found the dangerous situation, where three men circled the wolf. Mac’s friends also jumped off their bicycles and joined the fight with the wolf. More and more cars stopped. Some drivers took out the sticks from the cars, and some took out the knives, even the guns towards the wolf. Just at that time, the wolf might feel the threats from the people, starting to withdraw. Soon, it ran away off the road and disappeared in the distance.
62. (2016·浙江卷10月)
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom，“I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snow capped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom！”she cried.“Help！”
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling(滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy,_ she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse,_ thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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But the helicopter didn’t come back again, and the day became darker. ____________
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Jane woke up at the daybreak. _______________________________________________
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[写作指导]
步骤1
概括已知信息：标明核心词、核心句，梳理语篇内容的推进方向。
故事主线：驱车野营生嫌隙，迷失山林心焚急；挨饿恐惧度长夜，两架飞机失机会。
已知线索：
吵架——出走——迷路——失联——自救——思念——寻路——直升机——飞离
步骤2
按人物、环境、情节动词等分类划线词。
Kinds Underlined key words and phrases
Character Jane, Tom
Action walked, climbed
Place lake, stream
Concrete Things helicopter, yellow blouse
Abstract To her great joy, at a distance
步骤3
紧扣语境构思情节，分析：
1．据第一段开头“darker”可知，____________。
2．据第二段开头“woke up”可知，____________。
3．第二段情节可能：____________。
可续写线索：
失望？坚信？曲折？直升机？Tom？自救？获救？
话题激活词汇：
环境：forest, stream, rock, berry, valley, steep, cave, lake, waterfall(人口、环境与自然)
困难：hunger，starve，thirsty，injure，broken，blood，panic，shelter，survive(survival)，suffer，cold，severe(天气与自然灾害)
活动：walk，climb，fall，crawl，taste，attempt，struggle to one’s feet，make one’s way to，pick up(人体与动作)
情绪：to one’s great joy, break down
救援：rescue team, doctor, search for, spot(天气与自然灾害)
意志品质：calm, courage, will(性格与行为特征)
评价：amazing, make it
步骤4
初稿(分析原文写作风格，特殊语法结构有时间状语从句、结果状语从句、条件状语从句、宾语从句、现在分词作状语、直接引语、虚拟语气、倒装、疑问句、感叹句和介词短语等)。
步骤5
核查字数、下划线标明原文给出的5个以上关键词语、连接词、标点、语法错误等。
One possible version：
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But the helicopter didn’t come back again, and the day became darker. Jane was so tired, hungry, and extremely frightened. She thought to herself，“If only I had not quarreled with Tom. Where is Tom He must have made the emergency call. What indeed is enough courage. If I continue my spirits tomorrow, I will be likely to guide the helicopter．”Lying beside the stream,__she fell asleep very soon. Suddenly, she heard the shouts of tigers, which made her scared to death. After she held her breath for a few minutes, everything was quiet again. In the terrible darkness, she slept again.
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Jane woke up at the daybreak. She caught sight of a fisherman at__a__distance,__with whose help she climbed to an open area.__To__her__great__joy,__ a helicopter flew overhead just at that moment. The fisherman helped flag her yellow__blouse wildly. This did catch the rescuers’ attention! Jane was rescued. Seeing Tom, she told him how much she missed him. Never would they be away from each other. Tom gave her the warmest and longest hug she had ever received. People around smiled with satisfaction.
63. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp.” and walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom!” she cried. “Help!”
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
But no more helicopters came and it was dark. _________________________________
It was daybreak when Jane woke up. _________________________________________
Possible version:
But no helicopters came and it was getting dark. Jane was sad. She sat by the stream with sadness, resting her aching feet. ‘If I hadn’t quarreled with Tom, I wouldn’t have to be here.’ Jame thought regretfully with tearing welling up in her eyes.How she wanted to say sorry to Tom for losing her temper!. However, the only thing she could do was lie by the stream and wait for help. Soon she fell asleep .
It was daybreak when Jane woke up. She stood up to find something to eat. She walked on until she came to an open area where water and berries were available. Suddenly she heard a helicopter. She took off her yellow blouse and began shaking it violently, hoping someone could see her. To her joy, the helicopter slowed down and landed on the ground. With the door open, Tom ran out. Seeing Jane, he was so excited that he hugged Jane tightly. “Tom, I won’t lose my temper again. I want to stay with you forever.” Jame said in tears.
But no helicopters came and it was getting dark. Feeling scared and helpless, Jane sat beside a tree and held her shoulder in her arms to make herself warm. Slowly, the sun hid itself behind the mountains and soon it was hard to see anything. Looking through the thick darkness, Jane seemed to see Tom’s smiling face. She said to herself for thousands of times that she wouldn’t leave Tom again. Determined to find him, Jane started to look for the lake in the darkness. An hour later she was too tired, so she lay down on a rock and fell asleep.
It was daybreak when Jane woke up. It was a foggy day. Climbing down the rock, she heard the sound of the stream, so she walked towards the water. Suddenly she heard someone’s voice. To her great joy, it was Tom! He rushed to her wildly and hugged her tightly. Their cry of happiness broke the silence in the forest. After several minutes, when the fog was swept by the wind, Jane figured out everything: last night she walked here accidentally. Tom recognized her by the yellow blouse in the morning. Most amazingly, it was their car that Jane slept on rather than a rock.
64. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no money. He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market. The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But it was raining hard that afternoon and there were few people in the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought some medicine and hurried to his village. On his way home he saw a person lying on the snow. He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to get up. At that time he found it was a dead man and there was much blood on his body. He was so afraid that he ran away quickly, without taking the baskets with him.
The next afternoon the farmer was sent to the police station. Having shown the baskets, an officer asked, “Are these yours” “Yes, sir.” the farmer answered timidly(胆怯地). “Have you killed the man” “No, no, sir.” the farmer said in a hurry. “When did you see the dead man” “About seven last evening.” “Did you see who killed the man” “No, sir.” The officer brought out a knife and asked, “Have you seen it yet” “No, sir.” The officer became angry and told the policemen to beat him up and sent him into prison. the officer wanted to trap the farmer into the confession(供认), but the farmer didn’t admit he was the murderer.
注意:
1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为二段,每段的开头语已经为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him upagain.


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The farmer was lucky. A few days later,

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The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again. The farmer was very afraid, he thought he would be sentenced to death by killing people, but he didn’t, he was innocent. He must tell people the truth, but no one could hear his voice. he hoped that someone could come and save him.
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The farmer was lucky .A few days later, a young man came to the police station with a lot of journalists, saying that he saw the murderer. It was the police officer who killed the man on the snow! He saw the police office used a knife killing the man late in the evening. he was so frightened and ran away. But the young man thought the farmer was innocent. So he took the great courage to expose the real criminal. After the investigation, the young man was right. The police officer was sent into prison and the policeman who beat up the farmer was fired, and the brave young man was regarded as the hero by the villagers
65.阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
There was a thick forest on the sides of a mountain. Many kinds of animals lived in the forest. A deer was eating grass and leaves with her two young ones. The young ones wandered happily here and there. The deer followed her fawns (幼鹿)into a cave. The deer was frightened because it was a tiger's cave. There were bones of dead animals all over the cave. Fortunately, the tiger was not inside the cave at the time.
The deer was trying to lead her young ones out of the cave when she heard a loud roar. She saw the tiger at a distance coming towards the cave. It was dangerous to go out of the cave now. She thought of a plan. The deer raised her voice and shouted, "My deer young children do not weep. I shall capture (捕捉)a tiger for you to eat. You can have a good dinner."
The tiger heard these words and became frightened. He thought, "Whose is that strange voice from the cave A dangerous animal is staying inside to capture me. I shall run away to escape death." The tiger began to run away from there as fast as possible.
A jackal (胡狼)saw the running tiger. “Why are you running in great fear " the jackal asked. The tiger said, "My friend, a powerful and fierce animal is in my cave. The young ones are crying for a tiger to eat. The mother is promising to capture a tiger for them. So, I am running away."
The cunning jackal was now sure the tiger was a coward (懦夫).It said, "Don't be afraid. No animal is fiercer or stronger than a tiger Let us go together to find out.”
But the tiger said, "I do not want to take a chance. You may run away. I will be left alone to die. So, I will not come with you."
The jackal said, "Trust me. Let us knot (打结)our tails together. Then I will not be able to leave you." The tiger agreed unwillingly to this proposal. So the jackal tied their tails in a knot. Now they walked towards the cave together.
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The deer saw the jackal and the tiger coming together.
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The tiger was shocked to hear this and he was sure now the jackal cheated him.
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注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用至少5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词。
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The deer saw the jackal and the tiger coming together. She again raised her voice. She shouted towards her children standing inside the cave, “My dear children, I requested my friend, the clever jackal, to capture a tiger for us. Now look the jackal has captured a tiger for us. He has tied the tiger’s tail to his tail. This is to prevent the tiger from escaping. You will soon have the tiger for dinner."
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The tiger was shocked to hear this and he was sure now the jackal cheated him. So, the tiger decided to escape from the terrible animal standing inside his cave. He started running. He forgot about the jackal. He dragged the jackal over rocks and thorns. In the mad escape the jackal was caught between two rocks. The tiger pulled with all his might. His tail got cut. The jackal was killed in this incident. The tail-less tiger ran away to another part of the forest. The deer and her young ones left the tiger’s cave. They joined their herd safely. Presence of mind and intelligence can save one from dangerous situations.
66.阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Sara Savick remembers one special Easter when she was nine years old. Her parents gave her a baby duckling in a yellow basket.
“Mom said later that she bought the little duck because she felt sorry for it,” recalled Sara. The people at the pet store colored the feathers pink for Easter. Sara named the duck Pinky.
Sara’s mother really didn’t think the baby duck would survive very long. But to her surprise, Pinky grew and got stronger and stronger. Soon, the little duckling was a healthy, hungry duck with white feathers.
“We fed Pinky oatmeal, cooked and uncooked, and small pieces of vegetables,” said Sara. Pinky lived inside the house with Sara and her family. She specially fancied taking baths with Sara. Everyone treated Pinky as a family member.
But just when everything appeared to be perfect, the night of the “talk” came. Sara’s Mom and Dad sat her down, explaining that the best thing for Pinky was to live a normal duck life, with other ducks. It was not natural for ducks to live indoors with a family, her father told her. He added Pinky needed to swim in ponds and do all the same things that ducks in the wild do.
Sara started to cry, knowing what was going to happen. Sara’s parents decided to take Pinky to a park, which was two miles away. There was a pond with a lot of other ducks. Pinky would have the chance to live a natural life and Sara could still visit her.
The big day came, Sara and her parents put Pinky in a box and drove to the park. Sara said that Pinky did not look happy; maybe Pinky was convinced that she was a human, not a duck.
注意:
所续写短文的词数应为 l50 左右;
至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Everyone was sad when they left Pinky at the pond, even Sara’s father.
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The next morning, when looking out of the kitchen window, Sara couldn’t believe her eyes!
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答案：
Everyone was sad when they left Pinky at the pond, even Sara’s father. But he tried to convince Sara that Pinky was fine. Walking towards the car, Sara looked over her shoulder and saw Pinky standing alone. The other ducks were swimming around in circles, looking at Pinky. To Sara, it seemed that they were trying to identify the strange animal. They didn’t recognize Pinky as a duck. Worried about Pinky, Sara dreamed of Pinky being bullied by other ducks the whole night .
The next morning, when looking out of the kitchen window, Sara couldn’t believe her eyes! There was Pinky, happily walking around on the grass. Thrilled at what she saw, she kept asking herself,” How did she make it ” After all, it was two miles away and he managed to walk back through the city street. Incredible! But her parents drove Pinky back to the pond again regardless of her request. The following morning, there was Pinky again on the grass! Seeing Pinky again, her father, waving his arms about wildly, moved his lips without saying anything. Meanwhile, Sarah, overjoyed, hugged Pinky tightly, tears streaming down her cheeks.
解析：
【分析】这是一篇读后续写作文。阅读部分主要阐述了故事的主人公收到了一个圣诞节的礼物
——黄色的小鸭子,随着小鸭子的长大,父母认为小鸭子应该和其他正常的鸭子一样生活,于是决定放生小鸭子。
【详解】第一步:把握文章主题。
仔细阅读所给短文,把握短文核心内容是完成续写的前提。本文讲的是一个故事,故事的主人公 Sara 收到了一个圣诞节的礼物——黄色的小鸭子,随着小鸭子的长大,父母认为小鸭子应该和其他正常的鸭子一样生活,于是决定放生小鸭子。
第二步:预测故事的发展。根据已知人物、事件及续写段落的首句进行预测。根据 Paragraph 1 的首句Everyone was sad when they left Pinky at the pond, even Sara’s father. 可预测到一家人怀着不舍和担忧放走了小鸭子,再根据 Paragraph 2 的 The next morning, when looking out of the kitchen window, Sara couldn’t believe her eyes! 可预测小鸭子居然又回到了一家三口身边。
第三步:罗列写作要点,结合文本中划线词语和预测,展开想象,罗列出故事情节发展。
第四步:连词成篇。结合罗列的要点,恰当使用衔接词。避免重复使用同一个单词或短语,避免只使用一两个句式。
第五步:认真检查。检查行文是否流畅、合逻辑、时态、人称是否一致,句子结构是否清晰,短语使用、单词拼写是否正确等。
【点睛】范文叙述流畅,逻辑清晰,上下文转换自然,词数适当,并试了一些高级句式:
非谓语动词(动词-ing)做伴随状语:Walking towards the car, Sara looked over her shoulder and saw Pinky standing alone.
固定句型:it seemed that…
独立主格:Meanwhile, Sarah, overjoyed, hugged Pinky tightly, tears streaming down her cheeks.
67.阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Jack, a clerk at the local bank, was wandering alone on the street. It was a cold, silent winter night. His mind was on his wife Linda, who had been in a car accident two months ago and was now lying in a hospital bed, waiting for more money for her operation. Jack had sold everything he had, and he had tried his best to borrow money from all the people and banks he could. But the real world is cruel.
A large amount of money was still needed. To Jack, it would mean a great deal of suffering to see his wife die without any help. "l have only one option left," Jack said to himself. Then he went to the bank, his workplace, again.
For several days, he observed the bank and planned a theft. Then the next day, he went to work as usual. Everything seemed normal: he joked with his workmates and helped his clients as he always did. But no one noticed that he had brought a bigger suitcase to work, instead of the small one he always carried. At 5: 00 pm, the bank closed, and the clerks and the guards had all gone home. However, at that moment, Jack was in the bathroom, and the guards didn’t notice him, of course.
When the noises coming from the street were replaced by silence and everything turned dark, Jack came out from the bathroom. He first cut the lines of the alarms and monitors with tools from his new suitcase. He was all too familiar with the equipment since he had been working there for 8 years and had been studying the security system for the past 30 days. Using a special key and some other tools, he then easily opened the doors of the safes. The bank's security system wasn't very good, which allowed Jack to take a lot of money. Several minutes later. Jack left the bank with a heavy bag filled with money.
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
After Jack had been away from the bank for a while, the alarms began to ring.

Paragraph 2:
But the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank, an old man.

答案：
Paragraph 1:
After Jack had been away from the bank for a while, the alarms began to ring. The police arrived at the bank very quickly, only to find no one there. The next day was a really special day for the town, which was filled with newspapers and TV reports covering the strange theft. The clerks at the bank were busy discussing the case, of course% including Jack. The police could only promise to catch the thieves as soon as possible, even though no clues had been found yet.
Paragraph 2:
But the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank, an old man. He seemed to be the only person to blame and was removed from his position. At last, with enough money for her operation. Jack’s wife was saved. However, Jack felt guilty about the manager of the bank. He could not forget what he had done to the old man. His guilt deepened as time went by. Finally, he turned himself into the police and accepted his punishment.
68.阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
A knock at the front door announced a visitor. Phil Radcliffe opened the door, looked down, and found a small boy of about 10,head down and face hidden,nose sniffling(抽鼻子),obviously in some unhappiness.
Phil and his wife Molly lived in this neighbourhood for almost three decades. The families here all knew and trusted one another. Youngsters bounced from home to home looking for friends and entertainment. In the school holidays, Molly and Phil had been known to take children at a time to the local cinema to give some of the parents a break.
Having taken him to the living room and had him seated,Phil asked the boy,“Philip,what’s happened ”
The boy seemed genuinely upset by the inquiry. “Sorry,Mr Radcliffe,’’ he sobbed, ‘‘My dad’s just left home. He’s not going to live with us any more. Mum’s crying. It’s made me cry. I don’t think I’m going to see him again.”
Phil sat down next to him and put a comforting arm around his shoulders, trying to reassure the youngster, "I'm sure that you’ll see your father again very soon,Philip. You’re a lovely boy and he’ll want to see you a lot. And your teach专题08 读后续写之不同时间场景描写
一、关键词
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sunshine /sunlight 阳光
breeze 微风
dim 昏暗的
faint 微弱的
winding 蜿蜒的
lofty 高耸的
fragile 脆弱的
flutter飘散
drift 漂流
float 浮动
beam/ ray 一束（光线）
envelope 信封，包裹
embrace 拥抱
obliterate 擦除
linger 逗留
resembling 像
sway 摇摆
fairytale 童话故事
dot 点缀
mirror 映照
light 点亮
二、常用短语
flutter down飘落
bid farewell to告别
clumps of wet snowflakes
一团团湿润的雪花
drift mindlessly down随波逐流
the last beam of sunlight最后一束阳光
a pitch-black curtain漆黑的幕布
stroll down the street在街上漫步
the first ray of sunlight第一缕阳光
flood into涌入
gentle breeze微风
winding rivers蜿蜒的河流
lofty mountains高山
deep valleys深谷
sunny beaches阳光灿烂的海滩
凉爽清新的风cool and refreshing breeze
落日the setting sun
多雨的季节a rainy season
暴风雨之夜a stormy night
在茫茫大雨中in the blinding rain
在春天温暖的阳光里
in the warm spring sunshine
难以忍受的热unbearable hot
放晴了clear up
木日光浴bathe in the sunshine
一个偏僻的小村庄
a small village off the map
离海滨仅咫尺之遥
within a stone’ s throw of the beach
在群山环抱的村庄里
in a village among the hills
朝南的房间room facing south
人烟稀少的农村地区
the thinly populated rural area
三、句子赏析
早上：（部分描写也可用于其它时间）
1. The sweetness of the sun fills my lungs.
2. The first ray of sunlight is too fragile to touch.
3. Spring breeze draws the curtain of clouds and the sunshine floods into the classrooms.
4. The whole world blossoms with one breath of the sunshine.
5. Snow blanketed every rooftop and weighed on the branches of old trees.
雪覆盖了每一个屋顶，压在老树枝上。
6. Kissed by the rain and shining, the wet ground is cold under foot. The birds busy themselves around me, not caring that I’ m there.潮湿的地面走起来很冷，被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。鸟儿们在我周围忙碌着，不关心我在那儿。
7. A dense earthly sweet smell rose from the ground, enveloping everything within its soft embrace.一股浓郁的泥土般的香味从地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。
8. When I drew the curtains back, the sunlight flooded in. 阳光倾斜而入.
9. Golden sunshine, fragile greens and a sea of fragrant flowers crowd into my eyes. Walking into the painting, I am totally drunk with the twittering (吱喳) of birds. Soon the delicate 纤弱的,精致的 air and soft raindrops melt my heart.
10. It was Saturday morning, and all the summer world was bright and fresh, and filled with life. There was a song in every heart. There was cheer in every face and a spring in every step. The air was filled with the pleasant smell of flowers. Cardiff Hill, beyond the village and above it, was green with trees and looked beautiful.
黄昏：（部分描写也可用于其它时间）
1.As the sky gradually darkened and the light dimmed, （天空越来越黑，光线越来越暗）he quickened his steps.
2. The sun hid himself behind the mountains, making it hard to see anything in the thick darkness.
3. Falling leaves fluttered down in the cool mid-autumn air, bidding farewell to sweet summer and beckoning the autumn in.
秋天的树叶在凉爽的中秋空气中飘落，告别甜美夏天，召唤秋天的到来。
4. It’ s dark now and the snow is still falling, clumps of wet flakes drifting mindlessly down, the air moist, the sidewalk mushy underfoot.现在天黑了，雪还在落下，一团团的雪花随风飘落，空气潮湿，走在人行道上，脚底粘糊糊的。
5. The rain drummed on the window, bidding farewell to the last beam of sunlight.
雨敲打在窗户上好像敲起了小鼓，向最后一缕阳光告别.
6. The lingering sunlight was obliterated by the rapidly falling night，resembling a pitch-black curtain draped over the sky.逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，像是天空被一层漆黑幕布覆盖。
7. The leaves crunched beneath my feet as I strolled down the street. Occasionally, one would fall past me, lightly swaying as the air gently carried it to the ground.
我在街上漫步时，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。偶尔，有叶子会从我身边掉下来，轻轻地摇晃，因为空气轻轻地把它吹到地上。
8. The lake mirrored the sky above, both of them blameless blue and shimmering.
湖面映照着上方的天空，它们都是无比湛蓝，并且闪闪发光。
9. The sunset was like orange paint on a blue canvas. 日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料.
10. The strong sun on my black hair would burn me in minutes if I couldn’ t find shelter.
如果我找不到庇护所，我黑发上强烈的阳光几分钟后就会把我烧焦
11. The sun dropped through and laid on his head and shoulders.太阳下山，温和的光线落在肩头。
晚上：（部分描写也可用于其它时间）
1. From the distance, he saw some dim light (昏暗的灯光) in the village.
2. Silence between dad and me made me more nervous and scared. At that moment, it was completely dark except the faint light given out by a few stars in the sky.
3. The dark, rainy evening, the wind, the thundering clouds held me entirely in their power.
4. The sky, midnight blue, gave the scene a fairytale quality, and the stars that dotted the sky lit up the night.天空，午夜蓝，给了这一场景一个童话般的质量，星星点点的天空照亮了夜晚。
5. The clear blue sky was dotted with fluttering larks. 天气晴朗，碧空里星星点点的云雀在翩翩起舞。
6. The wind was howling dreadfully and the rain was pouring from the heaven, whipping against the branches of lined trees. The world was burdened with a sea of drakness. I was seized with the roaring power of nature, a sense of horror creeping up on me. I immediately turned around to slide into the bed and curled up.
7.The dark, rainy evening, the wind, the thundering clouds held me entirely in ther power.
8. The evening of this day was very long, and melancholy(阴郁的), at Hartfield. The weather added what it could of gloom. A cold stormy rain set in(阴冷的暴风雨袭来), and nothing of July appeared but in the trees and shrubs（灌木丛）, which the wind was despoiling(摧残), and the length of the day, which only made such cruel sights the longer visible.（白昼的延长可以让人多瞧一瞧这凄冷的景象）
9. The sky is overcast, darkened with gloomy clouds，(乌云密布、黑云压顶) and the whole world seemed to be enveloped in a huge gray quilt. 整个世界仿佛都被一块巨大的灰色棉被笼罩。
10. The thin trees were blowing wildly, and untidy gray clouds were sailing past a pale, sicky moon(苍白昏暗的月亮). The frosty air （寒冷的空气）blew in, cutting like knife.
四、翻译练习
1. As ______________________________________, （天空越来越黑，光线越来越暗）he quickened his steps.
2. __________________(微风) stroked his head , as if comforting all his tiredness.
3. From the distance, he saw _______________(昏暗的灯光) in the village.
4. She had no choice but to stop for another night. _________________(一股冷风吹来) and she started to miss the warmth of Tom’ s hug.
5. Silence between dad and me made me more nervous and scared. At that moment, it was completely dark _____________________(除了微弱的光) given out by a few stars in the sky.
6. The dark, rainy evening, the wind, the thundering clouds_____________________(完全把我镇住了).
7. I closed my eyes in the speeding car. ___________________________________________(蜿蜒的小溪，高耸的山，深深的山谷)and sunny beaches held me entirely in their fascination.
8. ______________________(泥土熟悉的芬芳)rose up to greet her. Wandering in the woods, Ally slowed her pace to find the little guy in the mixed air.
9. The sun looked at her with a glowing smile and the flowers____________________(快乐地朝着她点点头).
10. The breeze patted her on the face, warm and comfortable. However, it seemed that Ally couldn’t catch sight of the wood warbler（莺） after a long time wait.__________________(太阳落山), Ally was about to leave.
参考答案：
1. the sky gradually darkened and the light dimmed
2. The gentle breeze
3. some dim light
4. A gust of cold wind blew
5. except the faint light
6. held me entirely in their power
7. Winding rivers, lofty mountains, deep valleys
8. Familiar smells of the earth
9. nodded merrily towards her
10. With the sun setting专题13 读后续写句子提升思维之无灵主语
一、读后续写中无灵主语的运用
赏析:
Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny, waiting for an explanation. Embarrassed, Jenny didn’t say anything. Dead silence suddenly fell. Then came Miss Walker’s voice. “Why is Lee’s watch on your wrist ” Jenny hesitated for a while and decided to tell everybody about the truth. However, thinking of the well-prepared speech, the magic of the watch, she changed her mind. “But Miss Walker, could I give the speech first and then explain ” She made a request in a tone of begging. [70 words]
At that, Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny’s speech first. Jenny made her way to the platform with every confidence. Words began to flood out of her. “How could she make it We’ve never seen Jenny give so terrific a speech.” Whispers went around the classroom, and even Miss Walker nodded with approval. Immediately Jenny finished her speech, a storm of applause erupted from the class. Relieved, Jenny told everyone the truth, and especially the magic of the watch. “But it’s just an ordinary watch with no magic”, Lee announced. [80 words]
好句式学习：
Embarrassed, Jenny didn’t say anything.形容词作状语，精简高级。后文还有：
Relieved, Jenny told everyone the truth.
Dead silence suddenly fell.无灵主语，有灵谓语动词，高级。形容词dead修饰微妙，恰到好处。包括后文多次运用到抽象名词作主语：
Words began to flood out of her.
Whispers went around the classroom, and even...
Immediately Jenny finished her speech, a storm of applause erupted from the class.
Then came Miss Walker’s voice.完全倒装，高级句式。类似的还有：
Then 的完全倒装：
The chairman came then=>Then came the chairman.
Computer was used in teaching then =>Then computer was used in teaching.
衔接词however的使用，让上下文语义衔接自然。
复合形容词well-prepared的使用。
分词作状语的使用：
However, thinking of the well-prepared speech, the magic of the watch, she changed her mind.
高级词汇和语块的使用：made a request in a tone of begging，made her way to，with every confidence，nodded with approval，erupted等。
Immediately引导的时间状语从句的使用。
Immediately Jenny finished her speech, a storm of applause erupted from the class.
二、无灵主语概念以及用法举例
（一）概念
无灵主语（inanimate subject），又叫做物称主语，指的是使用没有生命的事物充当句子的主语成分，例如物品、动作、情感、时间、地点等，这与中文表达中习惯“以人为本”的特点，即常常会把人这个行为主体作为句子主语的情况大相径庭，体现了英语语言所强调的客体思维。
读后续写和概要写作中常用到无灵主语，如
1.Night approaching, darkness ruled the forest.
2.Anxiety tore(撕裂)him into pieces.
3.Anger choked (哽咽)my words.
4.Despair took hold of him.
5.Moreover, less time spent with younger children is attributed to school reforms.
6. Exposure to different cultures can encourage creativity.
（二）句子改写（20例）
1. In the past four years, our production has increased.
The past four years has witnessed an increase in production.（时间作主语）
2. At dusk, he was crying in the street.
Dusk found him crying in the street
3. At dawn, the little boy was still working.
Dawn saw the little boy still working.
4. Different people have different opinions.
Views differ from person to person.
Opinions vary greatly among people.
5. He thought of his mother and didn’t want to eat.
The thought of his mother made him lose his appetite.
The thought of his mother led to his loss of appetite.
6. She couldn’t fall asleep though the jungle was silent.
Sleep didn‘t visit her although the silence of a dead world was on the jungle.
7 .We walked for ten minutes and got to the hotel.
A ten minutes’ walk brought us to the hotel.
8 . They whispered in the classroom.
Whispers went around the classroom.
9. She began to speak.
Words began to flood out of her.
10 .The boy was crying in the street at dusk.
Dusk found the boy crying in the street because he was hungry.
11. In the past four years, our production has increased.
The past four years has witnessed an increase in production.（时间作主语）
12. Many great historic events happened in the city.
The city had witnessed many great historic events. （地点名词作主语）
13. They spend less time with their parents because of school reforms.
School reforms lead to less time spent with parents.
14.People with good habits are efficient while those with bad habits are inefficient.
Good habits lead to efficiency while bad ones bring the opposite.
15. If you compare the two methods carefully, you will find the difference.
Careful comparison of the two methods will show you the difference.
16. He was optimistic just now, but now he is doubtful.
His optimism has given way to doubt.
他的乐观变成了怀疑。
17. We should consider issues of health and safety carefully.
Careful consideration should be given to issues of health and safety.
18. I forgot his name at the moment.
His name escaped/failed me at the moment.
19. I didn’t notice the mistake.
The mistake slipped my attention.
20. She changed greatly after ten years of hard work .
Ten years of hard work changed her greatly.
三、无灵主语的种类
（一）主语是情感状态的抽象名词
谓语选择如：creep, strike, seize, dawn, catch, worm into, grip, enter, register, overcome, take possession of, surround, give way to, desert, pass, tear 等词。
1. Fear gripped the village. 整个村庄笼罩在恐怖之中。
2. Courage deserted him. 他没有了勇气。
3. His presence of mind deserted him. 他失去了沉着。
4. The earthquake struck the village two minutes ago.
5. A new dignity crept into his steps. 他走起路来，不知不觉添了几分尊严。
6. Anxiety tore him into pieces. 他焦虑万分，肝肠寸断。
7. By now optimism had given way to doubt. 现在，乐观变成了怀疑。
8. Anger choked my words. 我气的说不出话。
9. Astonishment deprived me of my power of speech. 我惊讶得说不出话来。 10. Neither sorrow nor regret followed my passionate outburst.
我这样发作一通之后，既不难过，也不后悔。
11. A chill of horror suddenly swept over him. 他突然感到不寒而栗。
12. Despair seized him at the thought of her setting out alone to renew the weary quest for work.
想起她一个人出去重新登上找工作的艰辛路途，他觉得万念俱灰。
13. Anger and bitterness had preyed upon me continually for weeks and a deep languor had succeeded this passionate struggle.
几个星期以来，我又气又恨，感到非常苦恼，这种感情上的激励斗争过去之后，我感到浑身乏力。
（二）主语是具有动词意味的名词，谓语选择如 fill, give, make 等词汇。
1. The sight of the desolation filled me with forlornness.
看到这孤寂的景象，我心中满是凄凉。
2. The sight of his father-in-law made Fanjin afraid that he was in for another cursing. 见丈人在眼前，恐怕又要挨骂。
3. Only the thought of his mother gave him the strength to go on doing it.
只有想到母亲，他才有力量继续工作。
4. The discovery of a knife in his possession lends to all a suspension of his being the murder.
5. A ten minutes’ walk brought us to the hotel. 我们步行十分钟就到了旅馆。
6. Ten years of hard work changed her greatly.
十年的辛勤劳动使她大大地变样了。
7. Rest brought him new confidence and almost a feeling of security.
休息之后，他充满了新的自信，几乎有了一种相当安全的感觉。
8. Sleep didn't visit Rainsford although the silence of a dead world was on the jungle. 尽管丛林里是死一般的寂静，雷恩斯福德还是不能入睡。
（三）谓语动词如：slip, lend, elude, escape, stump 等词汇
1. His name escaped/ evaded/ failed me at the moment.
当时我没有记起他的名字。
2. The question eludes/stumps me. 这个问题把我难住了。
3. The mistake slips my attention. 我没有注意到这一错误。
4. His hint escaped me. 我没有注意到他的暗示。
5. The sentence eludes me. 我理解不了这个句子。
（四）谓语动词如：deny, ask, admit, allow, fail, pass 等词
1. The scenery baffles/denies description. 风景美得难以描述。
2. Such a chance denied me. 我没有得到这样一个机会。
3. The matter asks immediate attention. 这件事需要立即处理。
4. The exigencies of the matter admitted no alternative. 此事紧急，别无他法。
5. Reproach spared him not, even in his grave.
即便是在他死后，人们也一直在谴责他。
6. Time fails me to finish the topic. 我没有时间把这一话题说完。
7. The title of the book invites/ spells/ incenses the readers’ interest.
（五）主语中的名词或名词化结构表示原因、方式、目标，谓语动词使用“使…产生变化”的词汇。
A: 使 失 去 (deprive, cost, rob, bereave, disarm, prevent, diminish)；使增加(add, embolden, brighten, win)；使无能(disable, incapacitate, disqualify)；使能(enable, empower, qualify)；使免除 (save, exonerate)
1. Two bowls of wine bolstered up his courage, making him lose his scruples and start his usual rampaging.
屠户被众人局不过，只得连斟两碗喝了，壮一壮胆，将平日的凶恶样子拿出来。
2. My capacity for hard work saved me from early dismissal.
我要不是能干重活，早就被解雇了。
3. His embezzlement leads to his imprisonment.
4. His addition completed the list. 把他添上以后，名单就完备了。
5. His adventurous exploits soon won him notoriety.
他作战勇敢，屡建 战功，很快就声名远扬。
6. Successive exertion chipped a few pounds off him.
他工作一直太尽 力，瘦了好几磅。
B: 使保持状态(keep, make, hold)
The old and dilapidated house in the deserted lane made a dismal picture.
房子位于荒废的小巷里，破败陈旧，一片凄凉。
2. Loneliness held the immigrants together and poverty kept them down.
孤寂使得移民们聚集在一起，但贫困却使他们情况每况愈下。
The want of his family had kept him from school, and he seemed to feel the loss. 他因家庭贫困而辍学，他似乎也感觉到这一损失了。
C: 过程、状态变化类动词（throw, get, bring, temper, show, send）
The laconic nature of Washington’s note to Conway had thrown them all in confusion. 华盛顿给康威的短信，言简意赅，使他们陷入一片慌乱之中。
An early start will get you there at noon. 你早点出发的话，中午就能到。
A careful comparison will show there is no resemblance between the two in nature. 仔细比较一下就会发现两者在本质上没有相似之处。
A few steps across the lawn brought me to a large, splendid hotel.
沿着草地走上几步，我就来到一个豪华的大宾馆前。
Ten days would disband his corps and leave him 1400 men.
十天以后，他的军队就会土崩瓦解，他也就只剩下 1400 人了。
（六）．将时间、处所作为主语， 谓语动词用 “（使）看见” “（使）听见”
1. That chilly afternoon witnessed him trudging in the snow.
2. Thus the gathering dark often finds me hastening home in a hurrying crowd.
3. Whether it rains or snows, windy or foggy, it is the longing to be home that quickens my steps.
4. Dusk found the child crying in the street.
5. Dawn found him well along the road. 东方破晓的时候，他早已经上路了。
6. Beijing witnesses great changes since the preparation of Olympic Games.
（七）．表示地点或范围的名词
1. The town boasts a beautiful lake. 镇上有个美丽的湖，人人以此自豪。
2. Beijing first saw the raising of the five-star red flag in Tian'anmen Square.
五星红旗首先在北京天安门广场上升起。
3. Shanghai witnessed the birth of the Chinese Communist Party.
中国共产党在上海成立。
4. Rome witnessed many great historic events．
在罗马发生过许多重大历史事件。
（八）. 主语是表示情景的名词
1. A hush fell upon the assembly．会场一片寂静。
2. The softness of the earth gave him an idea．
踏着松软的泥土，一个主意油然而生。
3. A new spirit will dominate the organization with the People's Republic of China. 随着中华人民共和国的参加，这个组织的精神面貌将焕然一新。
4. The sight and sound of our jet planes filled me with special longing
看到我们的喷气式飞机，听见隆隆的飞机声，令我特别神往。
（九）. 拟人手法
1. Smile crumpled his face.他笑得一脸皱纹。
2. Pork has priced itself out of his dish. 猪肉太贵，他吃不起。
3. This lesson will take root in my mind.
4. Pit closure saw violent scenes. 矿井关闭以后，暴力事件接二连三。
5. The wheel of the car obeys the slightest touch. 这车的方向盘非常灵敏。
6. Gifts and messages snowed in on her birthday.
7. Business took me to town yesterday. 昨天我因业务进城了。
8. History knows only two kinds of war: just and unjust.
历史只知道两种战争：正义的和非正义的。
9. Poor planning wasted all the money and time.
10. Excitement knows no bounds at the party 晚会上人们非常激动。
11. My total ignorance of the connection must plead my apology.
恕我孤陋寡闻，对此关系一无所知。
12. His words sent me a quiver through my body.他的话让我全身不寒而栗。
13. A sudden shower killed the wind.突然下了一阵雨，风停了。
14. Like good looks and money, quick-mindedness passed her by.
她既不美丽，也不富裕，还不聪明。
四、更多例句赏析
35.2.1 表示时间的名词
The year 1949 witnessed the founding of the People's Republic 0f China．
1949年中华人民共和国成立了。
The postwar years in Germany saw honours heaped upon the great scientist．
在德国战后的岁月里，这位伟大的科学家得到了种种荣誉。
Dawn met him well along the way．It was a pleasant uneventful ride．
在东方欲晓的时候，他早已走了一大段路了。这次骑马旅行是很愉快的，没有碰到意外事件。
Dusk found the little girl crying in the street．
黄昏时分人们发现小女孩在街上哭。
The evening 0f November 3 saw the IWW(Industrial Workers 0f the World)tactics bearing fruit．
11月3日晚，世界产业工人协会的战术生效了。
Autumn sees many young Beijing people in smartly tailored jackets and colorful pullovers and windbreakers．
到了秋季，北京许多年轻人穿上精心裁制的漂亮上衣，五颜六色的套头毛衣和风雨衣。
35.2.2 表示地点或范围的名词
The town boasts a beautiful lake．
镇上有个美丽的湖，人人以此自豪。
Beijing first saw the raising 0f the five-star red flag in Tian'anmen Square．
五星红旗首先在北京天安门广场上升起。
Shanghai witnessed the birth of the Chinese Communist Part．
中国共产党在上海成立。
Britain Saw the first jet airline in 1952．
第一架喷气式飞机于1952年在英国诞生。
Rome witnessed many great historic events．
在罗马发生过许多重大历史事件。
The wide range of spindle speeds permit the milling machine for use of carbide tipped and high speed steel tools．
由于主轴的速度范围很广，因此此类铣床使用硬质合金刀具和高速钢刀具。
35.2.3表示动作的名词
A glance through his office window offers a panoramic view of the town．
从他的办公室窗口可以一眼看到城镇的全景。
A ten minutes’walk brought us to the hotel．
我们步行十分钟就到了旅馆。
Ten years 0f hard work changed her greatly．
十年的辛勤劳动使她大大地变样了。
The thought of seeing her son very soon filled her heart with great happiness．
想到不久就要见到她的儿子，她心中感到十分快乐。
Rest brought him new confidence and almost a feeling 0f security．
休息之后，他充满了新的自信，几乎有了一种相当安全的感觉。
Sleep didn't visit Rainsford although the silence of a dead world was on the jungle．
尽管丛林里是死一般的寂静，雷恩斯福德还是不能入睡。
35.2.4 表示情感的名词
All my courage deserted me．
我完全丧失了勇气。
Rarely did his sense of humour desert this noble man．
这位高尚的人很少发脾气。
Astonishment deprived me 0f my power of speech．
我惊讶得说不出话来。
Neither sorrow nor regret followed my passionate outburst．
我这样发作一通之后，既不难过，也不后悔。
His first thought made him sick and numb．
他的第一个念头使他作呕，浑身瘫软。
A chill of horror suddenly swept over him．
他突然感到不寒而栗。
Despair seized him at the thought of her setting out alone to renew the
weary quest for woke
想起她一个人出去重新登上找工作的艰辛路途，他觉得万念俱灰。
Anger and bitterness had preyed upon me continually for weeks and a deep languor had succeeded this passionate struggle.
几个星期以来，我又气又恨，感到非常苦恼，这种感情上的激励斗争过去之后，我感到浑身乏力。
35.2.5 表示情景的名词
A hush fell upon the assembly．会场一片寂静。
Such a chance was denied(to)me． 我可得不到这样的机会。
Shortness of time has required the omission of some states.
由于时间不够，他不能访问某些国家。
After the WWI(World War I)honours were heaped upon Einstein
第一次世界大战后，荣誉像雪片般地向爱因斯坦飞来。
The softness of the earth gave him an idea．
踏着松软的泥土，一个主意油然而生。
A new spirit will dominate the organization with the People's Republic of China．
随着中华人民共和国的参加，这个组织的精神面貌将焕然一新。
The sight and sound of our jet planes filled me with special longing
看到我们的喷气式飞机，听见隆隆的飞机声，令我特别神往。
35.2.6 表示自然现象的名词
The rain prevented me from coming． 因下雨，我不能来。
The night breeze brought him the perfume 0f the general's cigarette
夜晚微风徐徐，他闻到了将军烟卷的香味。
A heavy rain visited the city·
这个城市刚下过一场大雨。
An earthquake comes like a thief in the night，without warning.
地震到来，犹如夜贼，不作预告。
The shadows tell me that the sun has done much travel since I fell asleep.
目睹太阳投下的阴影，我知道入睡后，太阳巳走过很远的路程。
35.2.7 表示身体部位和音容的名词
My heart failed me at the sight． 一见那情景我就失去了勇气。
The eyes were the same color as the sea，cheerful and undefeated.
碧海般的那双眼睛饱含着兴奋和不可战胜的神色。
His accent suggests shanghai．听他的口音像是上海人。
35.2.8 其他一些名词
Careful comparison 0f them will show you the difference．
只要仔细比较一下，你就会发现它们的差异。
Business took him to the town．他因事进城去了。
A cold that rapidly grew worse cause his unlamented return to Paris．
她患了感冒，而且愈来愈凶，只好回巴黎去了，但对他的离去，谁也没有感到遗憾。
The photo often reminds me of my childhood.
这张照片常使我想起我的童年。
The revolution of 1917 brought a significant change to the difficult pattern
of Russian Jewish existence．
1917年十月革命成功后，俄国境内犹太人的困难处境立刻有了明显的改变。
Little knowledge will get into trouble in everything．
不学无术将寸步难行。
“My experience in Spain，”Bethune went on，“convinces me that seventy-five
percent of the seriously wounded would recover if operated on immediately．”
白求恩接着说，“我在西班牙已有经验，深信重伤病人如果立即动手术，有75％能够恢复健康。”
注：以上所列是几种比较常见的可作主语的无灵名词。实际上，英语里无灵名词大多数都可以在一定的语境中用作主语。
35.3 无灵名词作主语的特点
35.3.1 无灵名词作主语时，常带有前置定语或后置定语
Improved roads and motorized transportation made it possible for the
farmer to send his children by bus to good central high school．
道路改良和机动交通运输工具的出现，使农民可以让子女搭乘公共汽车到较好的中心中学去上学。
The heavy flywheel coupled with the spindle ensures smooth run of the
spindle．
由于主轴装有飞轮，所以能保证主轴运转平稳。
A comb drawn a few times through the hair in dry，cold weather may
make a cracking sound and cause the hair to stand on end．
在干燥寒冷的天气，拿一把梳子在头发上梳几下，它就会发出噼啪的响声，使头发耸立起来。
注：有时这类名词作主语时也可不用修饰语，此时往往带有限定词。
例如：
His youth got him off． 由于他年轻，他得到了宽恕。
Those grim times saw adult women change hands，sometimes sold bv their
Starving husbands．
在那冷酷无情的年代里，成年妇女也会易主；有时丈夫自己也挨饿，就把妻子卖了。
35.3.2 无灵名词作主语时常见的谓语动词
无灵名词作主语的句子中，可用作谓语的常见动词有：see，find，
make，bring，cause，enable，desert，prevent，meet，visit，give，witness，convince，request，compel等。(例句见上)
35.3.3 无灵名词作主语时常见的动词短语
无灵名词作主语的句子中，某些短语动词(如lead to，bring out，fall up-on．keep／prevent…from等)也可用作这类句子的谓语。
例如：Plastics are in evidence．A wet day brings out the colourful light mackintoshes．
塑料随处可见，天一下雨，五颜六色的轻便雨衣就都出现了。
The extreme labour shortage led to further innovations in employing persons on the basis of ability．
由于劳动力极端缺乏，以致进行了进一步革新，用人只能以才能为标准。
35.3.4 无灵名词作主语时常见的反向心理动词
无灵名词作主语的句子中，谓语动词往往含有“使”的意义，其中所有
“反向心理动词”（Reverse Psychological Verb）都可用作无灵名词的主语。这些动词有：delight, move, please，strike，amaze，astonish，surprise, worry, trouble，impress，satisfy等。
例如：
Your letter has amazed me． 你的信使我感到惊讶。
The news greatly surprised us． 这消息使我们大为吃惊。
That answer didn’t satisfy us． 这个回答没有使我们感到满意。
35.3.5 无灵名词作主语具有简洁凝练、含蓄不露等修辞特点
a. This medicine will make you feel better.
b. If you take this medicine, you'll feel better.
a. That moment's stop cost the U.S. team its lead.
b. Because that runner stopped a moment, the U.S. team lost its lead.
a. Another sound from me might make the snake strike.
b. If I made another sound, the snake might strike.
a. The bad weather prevented us from going on the tour.
b. We didn't go on the tour because of the bad weather.
从以上句子可以看出，a.组句与b.组句所表达的意思是一样的，但a.组句
用词简洁、凝练，句意客观公正、含蓄不露。
此外，无灵名词作主语，避免了文章乏味枯燥，句型单调、呆板无力的
弊病，从而使文章显得生动活泼、形象突出，句型多样，长短间隔，错落有
致
35．4 无灵名词作主语的含义
35.4.1 表示时间状语意义
The novel excited him.
看了这部小说，他很激动。
A few steps along the corridor brought me to a large splendid hall.
我沿着走廊走了几步，就到了一个华丽的大厅。
Ten years of hard work changed her greatly.
经过十年的辛勤劳动，她大大地变了样。
The arrival of Monday called Mr．Collins from his amiable Charlotte.
星期一一到，科林斯先生就要和温柔可爱的夏绿蒂分手了。
35.4.2 表示条件状语意义
Careful comparison of them will show you the difference.
你只要仔细比较一下，就会发现它们的不同之处。
The application of special additional device permits the car to run faster
than before．
只要使用一种专用的附加装置，这辆汽车就可以跑得更快。
35.4.3 表示原因状语意义
Rich experience keeps him smooth in his work．由于他富有经验，工作一贯得心应手。
Business took him to the town． 他因事进城去了。
The rain prevented me from coming． 我因雨不能来。
Astonishment deprived me 0f my speech of power． 我惊讶得说不出话来。
35.4.4 表示地点、场所状语意义
Beijing saw many historic events．
在北京发生过许多历史事件。
The world has witnessed different roads to modernization．
世界上已经有不同的现代化道路。
35.4.5 无灵名词作主语在有些场合并不暗含状语意义(即可直译)
Rome witnessed many great historic events．
罗马城目睹过许多重大的历史性事件。
Their drive moved us deeply．
他们的干劲使我们深受感动。
Excitement deprived me of all power of utterance．
兴奋使我什么话都说不出来。
Darkness would make him more appreciative of sight；silence would teach
him the joys of sound．
黑暗使人更加珍惜光明；寂静教人体会到声音的欢乐。
Socialism isn't talking all the time，it is living，it's singing，it's dancing，it's being interested in what go on about you，it's being concerned about people and the world．
社会主义不是夸夸其谈的学说，它是活生生的事实，它在唱歌，它在舞蹈，它感兴趣的是与人民息息相关的事情，它所关心的是人民和世界的前途。
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