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2024年高考英语读后续写之万能句型+万能主题升华句
读后续写之万能句型
万能片段1:复杂心情(震惊/害怕/迷茫)
For a moment, within my heart was a complex feeling, which made me rooted to the spot.
I should not have behaved in that way.
有一瞬间，我心中有一种复杂的感觉，令我钉在原地(全部倒装+定从)
我不应该那样做(虚拟语气)
在她内心有一种复杂的感觉，简维持一动也不动，疲惫和无法动弹。
Within her heart was a complex feeling. Jane remained rooted to the spot, exhausted and unable to move.
续写:在我内心有巨大的惊讶和感激，我站着一-动也丕动，盯着那个即将从盒子里拿出午餐的女孩。
Within my heart were enormous surprise and gratitude. I stood rooted to the spot, staring at the girl who was about to take out their lunch from a box.
爸爸难以置信地钉在原地，当他看着可怕的厨房，想象双胞胎做了啥
Within his heart was a complex feeling. Dad remained rooted to the spot in disbelief, watching the terrible kitchen and imagining what they had done.
复杂心情词汇
Complex complicated emotion (s) startled freeze (froze) adj.复杂的 adj.复杂的 n.情绪 adj.吃惊的 v.冻住，冻结 be rooted to the spot abruptly stand (stood) still imagined what sb had done the sudden situation (因为惧怕或吃惊而)钉在原地 突然地 站住不动那 想象下某人做啥 突如其来的情况
万能片段2:不知所措(茫然/紧张/害怕)
基础版:心在狂跳，她不知道该怎么办。随着数秒后，她的脑海里出现了一个想法。
Heart beating wildly, she had no idea what to do.
As a few seconds passed, an idea came into her mind.
升级版:(高分替换词+比喻+名从+时间独立主格句式)
Heart beating wildly like a beast, she was at a loss what to do next. A couple of seconds slipping away, an idea struck her like lightning.
（独立主格句式:独立主语1+非谓语动词，句子主语2+谓语动词。）
真题举例
练习1:她的脸颊因尴尬而灼热，她不知道该怎么办。(前半句 “五官”用:独立主格)
Cheeks burning with embarrassment, she wondered what to do.
练习2:顿时，她的大脑一片空白，不知道该怎么办。 (前半句“大脑”用:独立主格)
All of a sudden, her mind going blank, she had no idea what to do.
练习3:被所发生的一切吓坏了，他站原地不动，不知道接下来怎么办(非谓语)。
Terrified by what had happened, he was rooted to the spot, not knowing what to do next.
不知所措词汇
wildly like a beast like lightning slip away (be)at a loss adv.狂乱地 像猛兽般地 像闪电般地 (时间)溜走 不知所措的 Mind going blank,.. Heart beating (racing).... Cheeks burning, ... wonder what to do a couple of 大脑一片空白,... 心狂跳... 脸颊在燃烧般.. . (不知道)想着怎么办 一些(人或物)
万能片段3:感激(感激+感悟)
①Choked with overwhelming gratitude, Mac bowed low to them repeatedly, without whose help he couldn't have gone through it.
②It was this unique experience that reminded Mac of the value of strangers' help, inspiring him to spread this kindness to others.
①Mac被巨大的感激之情所哽咽，- -再向他们深深鞠躬，没有他们的帮助，他就无法度过难关。
②正是这个独特的经历让Mac想到了陌生人帮助的价值，激励他将这种善意传播给他人。
提炼:
①Choked with overwhelming ... sb1...sb2, without whose help sb1 couldn't have done sth.
②It was this unique experience that reminded sb1 of the value of sth, inspiring him to do sth.
构思结尾: David完成跑步，明白勇气的重要t(用以上模板)
①David因巨大的兴奋而哽咽，他紧紧地抱着我和他的教练，没有(我们的)指导，他就无法完成跑步，他坚持这样说。
②正是这次独特的经历让大卫想到了勇气和信心的价值，激励他从此勇敢地应对挑战。
参考范文: (红字模板通用，黑字根据题目替换)
Choked with overwhelming excitement, David hugged me and his coach tightly, without whose guidance he couldn't have finished the run, as he insisted. It was this unique experience that had reminded David of the value of courage and faith, inspiring him to address challenges bravely ever since.
感激词汇
overwhelming Gratitude repeatedl go through sth value adj.巨大的 n.感激 adv.一再地 度过(难关) n.价值，重要性 be chocked with (+情绪n.) bowed (low) to sb couldn't have done sth remind sb of sth inspire sb to do sth 因..而哽咽 向某人(深深)鞠躬 本不能做到(但实际做了) 提醒某人做某事(使某人想到某事) 激励某人做某事.
万能片段4:激动(开心/紧张/害怕)
情绪+肢体+语言
Overwhelmed by wild joy, I rose to my feet and punched my fist in the air, shouting out loud,“I made it!".
被狂野的喜悦所淹没，我站起来，在空中挥拳，大喊道:“我做到了! ”
练习1:惊慌失措，我跳了起来，尽可能大声地尖叫:“救命!”。
Overcome by a sense of panic, I rose to my feet, screaming as loud as I could,“Help!”.
练习2:被一阵紧张所支配，我跳了起来，问自己说:“我该怎么办 ”。
Dominated by a flush of nervousness, I jumped to my feet, asking myself,“What should I do ”
练习:
Mother's Day Surprise] (红字通用，黑字根据题目替换) “成功了!我们做到了! Jeff 大喊大叫，她在空中挥舞着拳头。
一种温暖的感觉充满了她们的心，因为这对她们来说真的是- - 次难忘的经历。不管怎样，她们胜利完成了一个愉悦的惊喜
“It was a success! We made it!”
Jeff shouted as she punched her fist in the air.
A sense of warmth filled their hearts in that it was truly a memorable experience for them. (in that由于=because)
Believe it or not, they pulled off a delightful surprise.
激动词汇
made it in that a sense of Truly delightful 成功了;做到了 由于(=because) 一种..感觉(后加情绪名词)真正地. (=really / exactly) 令人快乐/愉悦的 punched sb's fist warmth filled sb's heart a memorable experience pulled off (doing) sth Believe it or not, ... 挥舞拳头 温暖充盈内心 一次难忘的经历 胜利完成 (= succeed in doing)不管怎样; 不管你信不信
万能片段5:紧张+成功
Heart racing and palms sweating, he dragged his trembling legs forward.
Taking a deep breath, he murmured to himself firmly, “Everything will be great. I’ll make it!"
(成功后) Hearing the inspiring news, he leaped into the air with joy.
心跳加速，手心出汗，他拖着颤抖的双腿向前走。
深吸一口气，他坚定地喃喃自语道，“- -切都会很好的。我能做到!”听到这个鼓舞人心的消息，他高兴地跳到了空中。
相关词汇
heart racing palms sweating hands shaking throat tightening legs trembling 心跳加速着... 手心出汗着... 手抖着... 喉咙紧绷着.. 腿在颤抖着... dragged sb's legs /feet rose to sb's feet leaped into the air murmured to oneself took a deep breath 拖曳着步伐 站/跳起来 跳起来/跃入空中 喃喃自语 深吸了一口气
心跳加速，手心出汗，他拖着颤抖的双腿向前走。
深吸一口气，他坚定地喃喃自语道，“- -切都会很好的。我能做到!”听到这个鼓舞人心的消息，他高兴地跳到了空中。
Heart racing and palms sweating, David dragged his trembling legs back to the course.
He could feel nothing but his hands shaking, heart pounding and throat tightning.
Taking a deep breath, he murmured to himself firmly,“Everything will be great. I'll make it!" ....
Having finished the run, David leaped into the air with joy.
紧张+成功词汇 （左边动词为非谓语，右边动词为谓语过去式）
heart racing (heart pounding) palms sweating Hands shaking Throat tightening legs trembling 心跳加速着... 手心出汗着.. 手抖着... 喉咙紧绷着... 腿在颤抖着... . dragged sb's legs /feet rose to sb's feet leaped into the air murmured to oneself took a deep breath 拖曳着步伐 站/跳起来 跳起来/跃入空中 喃喃自语 深吸了一口气
万能片段6:成功+结尾
A buzz of excitement filled the air as he finally made it.
Peter was so thrilled in that he succeeded in delivering the speech and convincing the judges.
He thought to himself that he would do whatever he could whenever needed. Shedding tears of joy, he was in high spirits the whole day!
[2022深圳二模Go Green]
空气中弥漫着一阵热烈的兴奋，他最终做到了。
Peter非常激动，因为他成功地发表了演讲并说服了评委们。他内心想到，只要有需要，他会尽其所能。
他流下了喜悦的泪水,整天都兴高采烈!
练习:
空气中弥漫着一阵热烈的兴奋，Jane最终获救了。
她非常激动，因为她成功地和丈夫团聚。
她内心想到，她再也不会犯同样的错误了。
流下了喜悦的泪水，夫妇两人都兴高采烈! (句首非谓语shedding tears)
A buzz of excitement filled the air as Jane was eventually rescued.
She was so thrilled in that she succeeded in reuniting with her husband.
She thought to herself that never would she make the same mistake
Shedding tears of joy, the couple were in high spirits!
成功+结尾词汇
Thrilled convince judge shed tears tears of joy dj.兴奋的，激动的(=delighted) v.说服，使信服 n.评委/法官v.判断 流泪 喜悦的眼泪 A buzz of excitement succeed in (doing) sth deliver a speech think to oneself in high spirits 一阵兴奋 成功做某事 发表演讲 内心想着 兴高采烈;心情欢畅
总结
万能片段①:复杂心情(负向)
Within my heart was a complex feeling, which made me rooted to the spot.
万能片段②:不知所措(负向)
Heart beating wildly like a beast, she was at a loss what to do next.
万能片段③:感激(转变)
Choked with overwhelming gratitude, Mac bowed low to them repeatedly, without whose help he couldn't have gone through it.
万能片段④:激动(转变)
Overwhelmed by wild joy, I rose to my feet and punched my fist in the air, shouting out loud, “I made it!".
万能片段⑤:紧张+成功(正向)
Heart racing and palms sweating, he dragged his trembling legs forward. Taking a deep breath, he murmured to himself firmly, ...
万能片段⑥:成功+结尾(正向)
He thought to himself that .... Shedding tears of joy, he was in high spirits the whole day!
读后续写高分万能主题升华句
（一）永不言弃——希望见于坚持，梦想圆于不懈
1. Never give up no matter what happens, no matter how hopeless.
无论发生什么，无论多么绝望，都不要放弃。
2. Every cloud has a silver lining. / There is always light at the end of the tunnel. / Somebody sometime somewhere will shine a lamp of hope.
黑暗中总有一线光明。/ 隧道尽头总有光明。/ 某时某地某人会点亮一盏希望之灯。
3. There are no shortcuts to any place worth going. / There is no elevator to success, only stairs.任何值得去的地方都没有捷径。/没有直达成功的电梯，只有一步步走楼梯。
4. As long as you have a dream, just go for it, and never give it up easily.
只要你有梦想，就去追求它，不要轻易放弃。
5. Luck is what happens when preparation meets opportunity.
当准备遇到机会时就会有好运。
6. Be the flower that blooms, and butterflies will come.
若盛开，蝴蝶自来。
（二）面多挫折——世界以痛吻我，要我报之以歌
1. Life is full of smiles and tears. Only by accepting them both can we enjoy our life.
生活充满了微笑和泪水，只有接受他们两者，我们才能享受生活的美好。
2. Life consists not in holding good cards, but in playing well those you hold.
人生不在于拿到好牌，而在于打好手中的牌。
3. You cannot control the behavior of others, but you can always choose how you respond to it.你无法控制他人的行为，但你可以随时选择如何回应。
4. The more you feed your mind with positive thoughts, the more you can attract great things into your life. 你越是用积极的想法来充实你的头脑，你就越能把美好的事物吸引到你的生活中。
5. Embrace every possibility in your life and believe in yourself.
把握住你生命中的一切可能，相信自己。
6.Where there is a life, there is a hope. 生命不息，希望不止。
读后续写升华高级句
1. 内心暖意
I felt a coursing current of warmth deep inside as the old memories of mail flooded into my mind,arousing endless ripples.
我感到内心深处有一股暖流涌动，邮件的旧记忆涌入我的脑海，激起无尽的涟漪。
2. 冰释前嫌
Flakes were stillswirling in the sky but the tender flame in my heart had melted the snow surrounding us.
雪花还在天空中飞舞，但我心中温柔的火焰已经融化了我们周围的雪。
3.自然邂逅
The encounter with the little creature was like aneverlasting flower, blossoming in the river of my memory and reminding me of the value of caring those adorable creatures in our life.
与小生物的相遇就像我的记忆之河一朵绽放的永恒之花，提醒着我在生活中关爱这些可爱的生物的价值。
4. 追忆青春
Bathed in the warm sunshine and enjoying the company and the love of the family, Dad beamed , his mindtravelling back to his youth times, dynamic.
沐浴在温暖的阳光下，享受着家人的陪伴和爱，爸爸笑了，他的思绪回到了他的青年时代，充满活力。
5. 生命感悟
As the setting sunpainted the sky in a breathtaking tapestry of hues, a profound realization washed over me, elevating my perspective and leaving me with an indelible sense of awe and gratitude for the beauty of life's journey.
当夕阳将天空点缀成一幅令人惊叹的色彩织锦时，一种深刻的领悟涌上心头，升华了我的视野，使我对生命旅程的美丽产生了难以磨灭的敬畏和感激之情。
6.师生情深
In the bond between teacher and student, knowledgetranscends the confines of the classroom, nurturing not only intellectual growth but also fostering a lifelong connection built on trust, guidance, and mutual respect.
在师生之间纽带中，知识超越了课堂的限制，不仅培养了智力的成长，还建立了一种基于信任、指导和相互尊重的终身联系。
7. 心怀勇气
When we embrace the challenges ahead, courage will bethe unwavering flame that ignites our inner strength, propelling us to push beyond our limits and conquer the uncharted territories of possibility.
当我们迎接前方的挑战时，勇气成为点燃我们内心力量的不息火焰，推动我们超越极限，征服未知的可能性领域。
8. 拥有智慧
Wisdomemerges as the guiding compass, illuminating our path and empowering us to navigate complexities, and unravel the profound mysteries of the world.
在广袤的知识领域中，智慧显现为指引的罗盘，照亮我们的道路，赋予我们应对复杂问题的能力，解开世界的深奥之谜。
写作任务训练
“Have you decided on your major ” my parents inquired.
“Bioengineering, of course.” I responded without the slightest hesitation.
I entered this world with Poland syndrome, a disease that prevented the formation of my right arm and pectoral muscles(胸肌). My parents, believing that playing with Lego could enhance my dexterity(灵巧), gifted me my first kit when I was five. Struggling to piece the components together, I crafted my first Lego work – a car. As I got older, I grew obsessed with Lego Technic, a more advanced range, and how to use it to build more delicate structures. By the age of nine, I had fashioned my first prosthetic arm(义肢)using Lego Technic – a simple box that perfectly accommodated my right arm.
This early creation sparked my drive for further exploration. Years later, I developed another prosthetic arm that I called the MK-1, which had fingers, a motor, a pressure sensor, a movable elbow joint, and a grabber capable of picking things up.
Before constructing it, I had already decided against traditional prosthetics. Not because they were ineffective, but because playing with Lego did significantly improve my dexterity, helping me adapt to my condition. However, a more frustrating reason was that prosthetics were too expensive. My parents and I had looked into getting one a few years earlier, only to be discouraged by the prohibitive price. So, I concluded that I might not need one because I was managing well without. Nevertheless, the joy of creating prosthetics with Lego remained, and I continued making them purely for the fun of it.
As the years passed, my creations evolved from MK-1 to the more advanced and comfortable MK-V. It featured a control unit that could send and receive orders from sensors on the arm to the motors, with cables that contract like muscles.
One day, a couple with their eight-year-old son, who lost both arms in an accident, reached out to me after learning about my creations. Short of money, they couldn’t afford well-functioning prosthetics. “Daniel,” the father earnestly asked, “we were wondering if you could possibly help build a set of prosthetics for our son.”
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I knew it would be a challenging and demanding task, but I responded with a “yes”. The boy lifted his head with his once lifeless eyes now glittering with a spark of hope. I beamed at him with a radiant smile and without any delay, embarked on the task, ①The subsequent days witnessed how I carefully selected the Lego pieces that catered to the boy's interests and intricately integrated practical components to enhance its flexibility. Days turned into weeks, and the boy-customized prosthetics finally took shape. It's time for them to fulfill their intended purpose.
I rushed to the boy 's home and secured the prosthetics onto him. ② Holding breath, we anxiously awaited the result -they worked! The room erupted with cheers! The boy expressed his gratitude and sprinted to his parents to envelop them in the biggest hug he hadn't been able to give for years. The scene was truly inspiring. Never had I imagined that my creations, born out of mere fun, would someday make such a profound difference. It is on that day that I made up my mind to commit myself to making a lasting impact in the realm of prosthetic innovation.

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