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1．根据下面的简要提示，以“Welcome to Ningxia”为题用英语写一篇作文。
提示：
1. 人口大约有700多万，位于中国的西北部；
2. 有许多著名的旅游景点，如贺兰山、沙坡头和沙湖等；
3. 参观沙湖的最佳时间是在六月和十月，天气既不冷也不热；
4. 在这里可以品尝各种水果和美食；
5. 它闻名全国，你可以骑骆驼，游泳……；
要求：
1. 必须包括所给信息，字数80左右；
2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 紧扣要点，可适当发挥；
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名。
Welcome to Ningxia
Hello everyone. Welcome to Ningxia! ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．一次旅游，一次经历，一次成长，一段美好的回忆。把点滴记录，把所感留存！请以 “A Wonderful Trip” 为话题写一篇旅游日记，包括以下内容：
内容提示：
1. 去了哪里，和谁一起；
2. 去了多久，每天都有些什么活动；
3. 天气怎样，最喜欢的美食；
4. 你的感受。
写作要求：
1. 日记的格式要正确；
2. 语意连贯、语言流畅、语法正确，适当发挥；
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 不少于80词。
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3．为了展示我们青年一代的责任与担当，你们班开展了“走进金秋老年公寓——为老人包饺子”的爱心活动。这次活动很有意义，因为老人感受到了温暖，而你学会了如何包饺子。现在请根据图片与提示词写一篇以“How to make dumplings”为题的作文，并在最后一段写出你对活动的感受。词数70左右。
提示词：flour(面粉)，dough(面团)
How to Make Dumplings
Last Saturday, my classmates and I made dumplings for the old in Jinqiu Flat. Now let me tell you how to make dumplings.
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4．请以“The Food I Like Best”为题，并根据以下提示和要求用英语写一篇短文。
提示：
1. What food do you like best
2. Why do you like it
要求：
1. 文章应包含提示的所有内容，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的学校、班级、姓名等信息；
3. 词数100左右。
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5．请根据以下提示以Wonderful time in Zhangjiajie为题写一篇短文。
1. 张家界（面积）很大，约 480 平方千米。它以奇形怪状的巨石而著名。
2. 昨晚我们在一个小湖边宿营。夜间我们听到一阵声响！每个人都被它吵醒了。我们悄悄地走出去，发现那只是一只饥饿的猴子在寻找食物。
3. 今天上午我们爬了天子山！但遗憾的是天气多云，我们只能看到云雾缭绕的山顶。
4. 明天我们要去洞庭湖——中国第二大淡水湖。
要求：1. 词数：80 左右。
2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。
Wonderful time in Zhangjiajie
I’m having a wonderful time here in Zhangjiajie.
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6．健康对我们每个人来说都是非常重要的，但是并非每个人都知道如何保持健康。这里，请你根据下面表格的提示内容，以“Good Ways To Keep Healthy”为题，写一篇70~80词的短文，倡导健康生活并从以下三个方面做起。
Food a balanced(均衡的) diet, vegetable, fruit, less meat
Exercise do more exercise, take a walk after meals
Mood(情绪) keep happy, smile often, make friends
注意：1. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 卷面整洁，语言流畅，可适当发挥。
Good Ways To Keep Healthy
It is very important for us to keep healthy. But do you know the ways to keep healthy
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7．随着人们生活水平的提高，旅游成为同学们休闲放松的一种方式。去年暑假你和朋友去了湖南省张家界旅游，请你根据表格提示写一篇英语作文，介绍一下张家界并说明你们的活动情况。
Where about 400 kilometres from Changsha
How large about 480 square kilometres
be famous for strange shape of tall rocks
things you did climbed Mount Tianzi walked down the path went to Dongting Lake camped by a small lake in the evening
注意：1. 字数：80词左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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8．“ You can either travel or read, but either your body or soul must be on the way.” 去旅行，这是身体在路上，可以拓宽人的眼界；去读书，这是灵魂在路上，让人的心智成长。某英文杂志正在开展“身体和灵魂在路上”的演讲，请你写一篇演讲稿，谈谈以前假期自己去过的地方，自己读过的好书，以及你的收获。
要求:
1. 注意人称和时态。
2. 要点齐全，可适当增加细节使句子通顺、连贯。
3. 词数90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
We students should always improve ourselves. Travelling and reading are good for us. Our body and mind must be on the way. ____________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．Write at least 60 words on the topic “Use electricity safely”. （你发现你身边的亲朋好友经常有不安全用电的行为，有很大的危险隐患。请以“安全用电”为题写一篇 60—120 词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Use the following points as a guide: （写作必须包含以下内容）
1. How do some people use electricity
2. Why should we use electricity safely
3. What’s your suggestion on using electricity safely
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10．根据内容提要和提示词，以第一人称形式写一篇关于你所经历的 “The First Food Festival” 的短文。短文的开头已给出。
内容提要：许多人来参加，一些人要北京烤鸭，一些人要印度咖喱等等。所有这些食物很可口。你工作最认真，卖了最多的炒饭，这一天很有趣。
要求：1. 内容可适当增加；2. 词数：60~80。
提示词：many different kinds of, order, would like, and so on, smell nice, sell, carefully, fried rice, interesting day, Indian curries
The First Food Festival
Today was the first Food Festival. Many different kinds of people came for it.
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11．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My favorite ________”（以“我最喜欢________”为题，可以是人，电影、书籍或是食物等，把你喜欢的美好事物分享给身边的人并说说你喜欢的理由，写不少于60个字的作文。）
注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
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12．Write a short passage at least 60 words about the topic “The person I admire is_______” (以“我所钦佩的人是___________”为题写一篇不少于60字的短文)
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Writing suggestions:
1. Whom do you admire (someone who is famous or ordinary people around you)
2. Why do you admire him/her
3. What can you learn from him/her
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13．回忆小时候令你最难忘的一件东西，它可能是一本书、一顶帽子，也可能是一个玩具……，请参考所给问题自拟题目写一篇短文，通过具体的事例谈一谈它带给你的意义。可适当发挥。不少于80词。
提示：
How long have you had it
How did you get it Did someone give it to you Who
Why do you like it so much Why is it special
Can you say anything more about it
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14．学校英语角本周的主题是“我最喜欢的国家”。假如你是李华，最喜欢的国家是新加坡，请你根据以下提示内容，以“My Favourite Country”为题，写一篇英语短文介绍新加坡。
要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于50词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。
My Favourite Country
My favourite country is Singapore.
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15．Everyone has some challenges in his life. How can you deal with challenges when you face them Think about one of the challenges you have faced and write at least 60 words about the topic “facing challenges”.（每个人的生活中会遇到各种挑战，想一想当你面对挑战时，你是如何应对的。联系一次你的相关经历，以“面对挑战”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文。以下问题可供参考。）
1. What was your challenge
2. How did you feel when you faced the challenge
3. How did you deal with the challenge
4. What did you learn from the experience
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参考答案：
1．例文
Welcome to Ningxia
Hello everyone. Welcome to Ningxia! Let me introduce Ningxia to you. It’s in the northwest of China. It has many great places of interest, such as Helan Mountain, the Shahu Lake, Shapotou and so on. The best time to visit the Shahu Lake is in June and October. The weather is neither cold nor hot. Moreover, you can enjoy many delicious food in Ningxia. For example, Ningxia is famous for its mutton. Many visitors who travel here will taste it. You can also ride camels, swim and so on.
I’m sure my hometown will become more and more beautiful in the future. Welcome to Ningxia!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍宁夏的人口及地理位置；
第二步，介绍宁夏的著名景点及最佳游览时间；
第三步，介绍宁夏的美食及活动。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②the best time to do sth做某事的最佳时间
③neither…nor…既不……也不……
④be famous for因……而出名
⑤more and more beautiful越来越漂亮
[高分句型]
I’m sure my hometown will become more and more beautiful in the future.（宾语从句）
2．例文：
A Wonderful Trip
Friday, August 18th
Last week, my parents and I went to Beijing by plane. Beijing is the capital of China. It’s very beautiful. There are many tall buildings in Beijing.
We satyed there for four days. The weather was very hot, but I was still excited. The first day, we went to the Great Wall. We were so tired that we can’t say a word, but we had a wonderful experience. The second day, we visited the Summer Palace and the Palace museum. The third day, we went to the countryside of Beijing to go boating and fishing. It was very interesting. The last day, we bought lots of presents for my grandparents. And We ate many delicious food, Beijing Duck is my favourite.
I will never forget this trip.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为日记；
② 时态：一般过去时为主；
③ 提示：注意日记格式，内容提示已给出，注意不要遗漏，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单叙述和谁去了哪里；
第二步，具体叙述每天的活动、天气和最喜欢的食物；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① the capital of ……的首都
② buy sth. for sb. 给某人买某物
[高分句型]
① There are many tall buildings in Beijing. （There be句型）
② We were so tired that we can’t say a word, but we had a wonderful experience. （so...that引导的结果状语从句）
3．例文
How to Make Dumplings
Last Saturday, my classmates and I made dumplings for the old in Jinqiu Flat. Now let me tell you how to make dumplings.
First, cut up some vegetables and pork into pieces and mix them together. You can add some salt. Next, mix water into the flour to make it into a dough. Then, make the dough into small, thin pieces. Finally, put meat into the pieces and make dumplings.
This activity is meaningful. The old feel warm and we can make dumplings now. We are all very happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍爱心活动的内容——如何包饺子；
第二步，介绍包饺子的步骤；
第三步，谈谈本次活动的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①cut up into切碎
②put…into放入
③mix…into把……混入
[高分句型]
①Now let me tell you how to make dumplings.（祈使句）
4．例文
The Food I Like Best
There are different kinds of food in China. Most of them are very delicious. Among them, I like hot pot most.
Hot pot has a history of more than 1,700 years in China. Since it was invented, it has been popular in China. Hot pot is very delicous because I can eat what I want to eat. What’s more, it is a good chance to get together with my friends and family when having hot pot. At last, hot pot is nutritious because there are different kinds of vegetables in it.
I think as long as you taste hot pot, you will like it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示介绍自己最喜欢的食物。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，介绍自己最喜欢的食物是什么；
第二步，介绍自己为什么喜欢这个食物；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of不同种类的
②as long as只要
[高分句型]
①Since it was invented, it has been popular in China. (since引导的时间状语从句)
②Hot pot is very delicous because I can eat what I want to eat. (because引导的原因状语从句)
③I think as long as you taste hot pot, you will like it. (as long as引导的条件状语从句)
5．例文：
Wonderful time in Zhangjiajie
I’m having a wonderful time here in Zhangjiajie.
Zhangjiajie is very large, about 480 square kilometres. It’s famous for the strange shapes of its tall rocks.
Last night we camped by a small lake. During the night, we heard a noise! It woke everybody up. We came out without making any noise, and found it was just a hungry monkey looking for food.
This morning, we climbed Mount Tianzi! It was a pity that it was cloudy. We could only see the mountain tops above the clouds.
Tomorrow we’re going to Dongting Lake, the second-largest lake in China.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题干中给出的关键信息，介绍在张家界度过的精彩时光。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍张家界；
第二步，谈谈在张家界的经历；
第三步，介绍接下来的打算。
[亮点词汇]
①square kilometres 平方公里
②be famous for 因……而著名
③wake up 唤醒
④look for 寻找
[高分句型]
It was a pity that it was cloudy.（that引导宾语从句）
6．例文：
Good Ways To Keep Healthy
It is very important for us to keep healthy. But do you know the ways to keep healthy
First, it’s necessary to keep a balanced diet. Eat more vegetables and fresh fruit, and less meat.
Besides, doing more exercise every day can help us keep healthy. We can take a walk after meals. Sometimes, we can walk to school or to work instead of taking a bus.
What’s more, staying in a good mood is another way to keep fit. We should keep happy and simle often. Do you feel lonely or unhappy sometimes If so, try to make friends with others.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：这是一篇话题作文，为说明文；
② 时态：一般现在时；
③ 提示：从饮食、锻炼、情绪三个方面介绍保持健康的好方法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，从饮食方面介绍保持健康的方法；
第二步，从锻炼方面介绍保持健康的方法；
第二步，从情绪方面介绍保持健康的方法。
[亮点词汇]
① instead of 而不是
② What’s more 此外
③ in a good mood 心情不错
④ another way to 另一种方法
[高分句型]
① First, it’s necessary to have a balanced diet.（it的固定句型）
② If so, try to make friends with others.（条件状语从句）
7．One possible version:
Last summer holiday, I went to Zhangjiajie with my friends. It’s in Hunan Province. It’s about 400 kilometres from Changsha. It’s very large, about 480 square kilometres. It’s famous for the strange shape of its tall rocks.
We climbed Mount Tianzi! From the top we saw the lakes and forests. Then we walked down the path, along the river. And we went to Dongting Lake, the second largest freshwater lake in China. We camped by a small lake in the evening. We had a good time there.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍张家界的情况；
第二步，介绍自己的旅游经历。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for因……而出名
②walk down走下去
③have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①And we went to Dongting Lake, the second largest freshwater lake in China.（the+序数词+最高级，表示“第几最”）
8．例文
We students should always improve ourselves. Travelling and reading are good for us. Our body and mind must be on the way. I’ve been to Beijing before. There, I visited many places of interest such as the Forbidden City, Tian’anmen Square and the Palace Museum. I also went to other scenic spots. They are so wonderful that I will remember these places forever. What’s more, we ought to pay attention to public health and civilized travel.
When I read the books that I love, I feel relaxed. For example, Journey to the West is my favorite book. When I read it, I am able to learn something new. The monkey king always tries his best to solve the problems. He makes me strong. He really encourages me a lot in some ways.
So, travelling and reading can enrich our experience and help us understand our life better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以一般过去时和一般现在时为主；
③提示：结合题干所给的要点，介绍假期你去过的地方，读过的好书以及这本书带给你的收获。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍自己假期去过的地方，比如名胜古迹之类；
第二步：介绍你曾经读过的一本好书，并谈谈你从这本书里学到了什么；
第三步：点题，说明旅行和读书对我们的成长是有益的。
[亮点词汇]
①such as 例如
②ought to 应该
③many places of interest 许多名胜
④pay attention to... 注意……
[高分句型]
① They are so wonderful that I will remember these places forever. (so... that...引导结果状语从句)
② So, travelling and reading can enrich our experience and help us understand our life better. (动名词作主语)
9．例文
Use electricity safely
Using electricity safely is a very important topic in our daily lives.
First, ensure any electrical items are approved standard when purchasing and keep them correctly maintained. Second, unplug electrical items that are not in regular use and
ensure that you unplug and switch off electrical items when you are away from the house for any length of time . Third, don’t use any electrical items in the bathroom unless specifically
designed for use there, such as shavers and electric toothbrushes. But when you use them, make sure not to get them wet and avoid plugging and unplugging with wet hands. The last, always turn
the electrics off at the mains if carrying out any electrical repairs and only attempt repairs if you know what you are doing.
We should use electricity carefully because items left plugged in can be a fire risk and waste energy if left on standby.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“应该如何用电；安全用电的原因以及安全用电的建议”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“安全用电是我们日常生活中非常重要的话题。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“如何安全用电以及安全用电的建议”重点介绍安全用电的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“我们应该谨慎用电，因为插上电源的物品如果处于待机状态，则可能会引发火灾，并浪费能源。”
[亮点词汇]
① switch off关上
② make sure not to do sth确保不做某事
[高分句型]
① Third, don’t use any electrical items in the bathroom unless specifically designed for use there, such as shavers and electric toothbrushes.（don’t...祈使句的否定形式，表劝告）
② We should use electricity carefully because items left plugged in can be a fire risk and waste energy if left on standby.（because引导的原因状语从句，if引导的条件状语从句）
10．例文
The First Food Festival
Today was the first Food Festival. Many different kinds of people came for it. Some people ordered Beijing Roast Duck. Some people would like Indian curries, and so on. All the foods smelt nice and tasted nice, too. I worked very hard. I sold the most bowls of fried rice. What an interesting day it was! Though I was very tired, I was very happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰，无语法和拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍第一次美食节的盛况；
第二步，谈谈自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① different kinds of 不同种类的
② would like 想要
[高分句型]
① What an interesting day it was!（what引导的感叹句）
② Though I was very tired, I was very happy.（though引导的让步状语从句）
11．
My favorite person
My favorite person is my teacher, Ms. Wang. She is a 36-year-old woman. But she is tall and thin with long straight hair. And she often wears black pants and a white shirt. She teaches us English. We all like listening to her. Her classes are very interesting and creative. Because she has different ways of teaching. But she is very strict with us in everything. She is warm-hearted. When we are in trouble, she can try her best to help us. We all know she is always ready to help others. In a word, I love Ms. Wang.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中喜欢的美好事物以及喜欢的理由的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山直接介绍最喜欢的人是王老师。
第二步，具体阐述喜欢王老师的理由。
第三步，书写结束语。表达“爱王老师”的想法，首尾呼应。
[亮点词汇]
① be strict with对……严格
② in a word总之
③ be always ready to help others乐于助人
④ in trouble处于困难中
[高分句型]
① We all know she is always ready to help others.（know后是省略了that的宾语从句）
② When we are in trouble, she can try her best to help us.（when引导的时间状语从句）
③ But she is tall and thin with long straight hair.（with表伴随）
12．例文
The person I admire most
The most admirable person of mine is my dearest mother. She is an ordinary woman—not very beautiful and a little heavy. But she is very kind and enthusiastic. Although she didn’t receive high education, she knows a lot and often teaches me the essence of life. She always tells me “honesty is the best policy” and “no pain, no gain”. My mother loves me and tries to give me a comfortable environment to study and live in. She also understands me and treats me as a friend. From my mother, I have learnt to be an optimistic person with a strong mind. I love my mother. Although she is ordinary, she is the person I admire most.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首句点题，说明最钦佩的人是妈妈；
第二步，具体阐述钦佩妈妈的原因；
第三步，最后讲述从妈妈身上学到的以及表达对妈妈喜爱之情。
[亮点词汇]
①honesty is the best policy诚实为上策
②try to do sth尽量去做某事
③give sb sth给某人某物
[高分句型]
①Although she didn’t receive high education, she knows a lot and often teaches me the essence of life.（although引导让步状语从句）
②From my mother, I have learnt to be an optimistic person with a strong mind.（with复合结构）
13．例文：
A Story Book
When I was 6 years old, my mother gave a story book to me as a present of my birthday. I keep it till now because it can bring back many sweet memories. That is the first gift I ever got, so it is greatly special for me. And it also made me see an interesting world. Once I was so sad, it would remind me to be positive and go out to a new day. I really like it and will keep it well in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示中“通过具体的事例谈一谈它带给你的意义”，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据要点提示，首先自拟题目“A Story Book”。
第二步，根据问题提示，介绍物品获得途径、原因和时间，以及它对自己的特殊意义。
第三步，总结对它的喜爱，并会和它一起走向未来。
[亮点词汇]
①bring back 想起
②remind sb. to do sth. 提醒某人做某事
[高分句型]
I keep it till now because it can bring back many sweet memories.(because引导的原因状语从句)
14．范文
My Favourite Country
My favourite country is Singapore. It is located in the southeast of Asia. Singapore City is the capital of Singapore. It is also called the Lion City. It is a very beautiful and clean city. There is no dust in the air. And it is famous as the business centre. Singapore is a young country and an island with a long history. There are lots of places of interest, such as Singapore Zoo and Sentosa Island. So, it’s a good choice for a holiday.
Do you like Singapore I’m sure you will have a good time there.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中所给的有关新加坡的信息。可适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，点明自己喜欢的国家是新加坡，并从“位置、首都、历史和旅游业”等方面进行介绍；
第二步，书写结语，推荐去新加坡旅游。
[亮点词汇]
①be located in位于，坐落于
②be famous as作为……而出名
[高分句型]
①There is no dust in the air.（there be句型）
15．例：
Facing challenges
Life is filled with challenges. In my study, I always meet with new challenges.
When I was in grade eight, I used to fail my final math exams. This was a serious problem because math is a very important subject. However, I did not quit. I listened to the teacher carefully in class. I also did as many exercises as I could. Besides, I turned to my teacher and classmates for help. In the end, after several months’ hard work, I passed the final exam.
Looking back on this, I realize that whatever challenges I am faced with, if I can spare no efforts and never give up, I will get them over. What’s more, those challenges make me who I am.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点以问题的方式给出，考生应注意不要遗漏；适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明写作主题“生活充满挑战”；
第二步，阐述具体写作内容。从挑战的内容、面对挑战的感受、解决措施三方面阐述面对挑战的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，总结面对挑战学习到的经验。
[亮点词汇]
①be filled with 充满
②as…as sb. could 尽可能……
③turn to sb. for help 向某人求助
④spare no efforts 不遗余力
[高分句型]
①When I was in grade eight, I used to fail my final math exams.(used to)
②Looking back on this, I realize that whatever challenges I am faced with, if I can spare no efforts and never give up, I will get them over.(动名词作主语；if引导的条件状语从句)
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