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Module 2 My home town and my country
模块话题满分范文必背
一、材料作文
1. 请根据所给中文提示，以“My hometown—Changzhou”为名用英文写一篇短文，向大家介绍你家乡。
要求；
1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2.必须包含所有信息，并作适当发挥；
3. 不得使用真实姓名和校名；
4.字数在90字左右。
内容如下：
1. 常州地处江苏省南部，因悠久的历史，文化博大精深而有名。
2. 气候宜人，环境优美，有很多美景和著名的景点。
3. 常州曾经是一个小地方，但是近20年常州发生了翻天覆地的变化，现在已经变成一个现代化的城市。
4.如果你来常州旅游，你可以品尝到许多当地的风味小吃。
5. 最佳的旅游时间是春天和秋天，因为……
6.常州人正享受着舒适的生活，欢迎大家来常州游玩。
My hometown—Changzhou
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【答案】例文
My hometown—Changzhou
Changzhou
is my hometown.Changzhou
is
located in
the
southern Jiangsu
Province.It
is
famous
for
its
long
history
and profound
culture.Changzhou has
a pleasant
climate
and beautiful
environment,with man
y
beautiful
scenery
and
famous
scenic
spots.In
addition,C
hangzhou used to be
a
small place,but
in
the
past
20
years,
)
Changzhou has undergone tremendous changes,and now it has become a modern city.If you travel to
Changzhou,you can taste many local snacks.The best time to visit Changzhou is spring and autumn because the
weather is very comfortable.
Now people in Changzhou are enjoying a comfortable life.Welcome to visit Changzhou.
【详解】[总体分析
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍常州的地理位置和风景；
第二步，介绍常州的变化以及来常州旅游的时间；
第三步，最后欢迎大家来常州游玩。
[亮点词汇]
① be located in 位于
② be famous for 因……而出名
③ in addition 此外
[高分句型]
①If you travel to Changzhou,you can taste many local snacks.(if引导的条件状语从句)
② The best time to visit Changzhou is spring and autumn because the weather is very comfortable.(because 引
导的原因状语从句)
2. 请根据所给中文提示，以My hometown”为题用英文写一篇短文，向大家介绍你的家乡。内容如下：
1. 无锡地处江苏省 (province) 南部，以太湖 (the Taihu Lake) 而闻名于世。
2. 无锡有悠久的历史，还有许多著名的景点。
3. 无锡曾经是一个小城市，但是近20年无锡发生了翻天覆地的变化，现在已经变成了一个现代化、受欢
迎的城市。
4.如果你来无锡旅游，你可以去南禅寺 (NanchanTemple) 购物，还可以……。
5. 最佳的旅游时间是春天或秋天，因为……。
6.我认为我的家乡……。
注意：1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2.作文应包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；
3.词数90字左右。
My hometown
【答案】例文
My hometown
Do you know my hometown It is a small city called Wuxi.It's in the south of Jiangsu and famous for the
Taihu Lake.It has a long history.There are many famous places of interest.
Wuxi used to be a small city,but it has changed a lot over the past 20 years.It has been turned into a modern
and popular city.If you come to Wuxi for tourism,you can go shopping at Nanchan Temple,and you can also
taste different kinds of local food.You'd better come in spring or autumn because the weather is very pleasant.
In a word,I think Wuxi will become better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示：根据题干中的提示内容介绍自己的家乡无锡，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，介绍无锡的地理位置以及历史等；
第二步，介绍无锡的变化、去无锡可以做什么以及去无锡的最佳时间；
第三步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
(
①
be famous for
因为……而闻名
②
place
of
interest
名胜古迹
③
different kinds of各种各样的
[高分句型
]
①
Wuxi used to be a
small city,but i
t
has
changed
a
lot
over
the past
20
years.(but
连接的并列句)
②
If
you
come to Wuxi
for tourism,you
can go
shopping
at Nanchan
Temp
le,and you
can
also
taste
different
kinds
of
local
food
.(
if
引导的条件状语从句)
)
3. 假如某英文杂志正在举办题为“A place I have beento”的征文活动。请你根据下面的提示用英语写一篇短
文，参加此活动。
提示：1.我去过几次天津；
2. 我通过参观一些有趣的地方了解了中国的历史；我参观了天津古文化街和瓷房子；
3.我品尝了天津传统美食；
4. 我认为……
参考词汇： Tianjin Ancient Culture Street 天津古文化街； Porcelain House 瓷房子
要求：1.要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.文中不能出现真实的校名、姓名的信息；
3.词数80左右。
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【答案】例文
A place I have been
to
I have been to Tianjin
several times.It
is
a wonde
rful
place.I
fell
in
love
with
it
when
I
traveled
there
for
the
first time.One
great thing is that I
have
learnt
a
lot
about
Chinese
history
by
visiting
some
interesting
places.I
have visited
Tianjin Ancient
Culture
Street
and Porcelain House.I thought
they
were
reall
y
fantastic.I
will
never
forget
the
experience
of visiting
them.Also,I have
enjoyed
the
traditional
food
of Tia
njin.They were
delicious.
Tianjin
is
a
fantastic
city.For
sure,I will
go to
Tianjin
again
soo
n.
)
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为以“现在完成时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明自己去过天津几次，并赞美天津这个地方。
第二步，讲述自己在天津游览过的地方和品尝的美食。
第三步，讲述自己对于天津的感受和想法，突出重点。
[亮点词汇]
①fall in love with 爱上
②traditional food 传统食物
③for sure 肯定
[高分句型]
①One great thing is that I have learnt a lot about Chinese history by visiting some interesting places.(that引导的
表语从句)
②I fell in love with it when I traveled there for the first time.(when 引导的时间状语从句)
4. 下周，你的笔友 Danny 要来西安游玩。请根据下列提示写一封电子邮件，简要介绍你的城市中几
个有特色的地方，并推荐给他。
places reasons
Qujiang Park beautiful,do morning exercises,go boating..
Xi'an Restaurant famous,delicious,good service,local food(特色食物).
Wanda Cinema good sound,big screen,comfortable seats,cheap tickets…
要求： I)可参考以上提供的信息，可适当发挥。
2)词数不少于70词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Danny:
Longtime no see.I am glad to hear that you will have a trip to Xi'an next month.In my town,there are many
good places to go to
【答案】例文
Dear Danny.
Long time no see.I am glad to hear that you will have a trip to Xi'an next month.In my town,there are many
good places to go to.
First of all,you can go to Qujiang Park.It is the most beautiful park in my town.You can do morning
exercises and go boating there.What's more,it is a good idea to go to Xi'an Restaurant.It is the most famous
restaurant in my town.The dishes there are delicious.It has good service and real local food.Finally,you can go to Wanda Cinema.It has the best environment.It also has good sound,a big screen,comfortable seats and cheap
tickets.
I am sure you will like my town.I am looking forward to your coming soon.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，结合理由介绍三个地点，适当增加细节，注意条理清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体介绍西安有很多适合游玩的地方；
第二步，具体阐述三个具有特色的地方，并给出理由；
第三步，表明“期待你的到来”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① the most beautiful park 最漂亮的公园
② first of all 首先
③look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
①I am sure you will like my town.(宾语从句)
② What's more,it is a good idea to go to Xi'an Restaurant.(不定式作后置定语)
5. 中学生外研社杯征文比赛面向全国中学生征稿，征稿主题My Hometown —the Place in My
Heart”。假设你是李华，请写一篇英语征文
内容提示：
(1)家乡的美味、特产、发展情况等；
(2)讲述家乡发展的一个小故事以及你从家乡故事中收获的感受或领悟的道理等。
写作要求：
(1)请先将横线上的词补充完整；
(2)书写规范，表达流畅；
(3)词数约100词左右，
【答案】例文
My Hometown—the Beautiful Place in my Heart
Welcome to my hometown Yantai for a visit.It is in the north of Shandong.My hometown is famous for
apples.Yantai apples are famous all over the country.There are also many famous food in Yantai.If you come to
travel,you will enjoy the beauty and delicious food.
My grandma told me that they were very poor in the past.She didn't have enough food to eat.With the help
of the government,Yantai gradually became richer.Now my grandma is more than 80 years old.She lives a
happy life with us.I realize that only when the country is strong can we have a happy life.
This is the beautiful place in my heart.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文写作；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：写作主题已给出，写作时首先补全标题，围绕要点提示展开描写，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍家乡的美味、特产和发展情况；
第二步，讲述家乡发展的小故事，及自己的感受；
第三步，书写结语，再次点题。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for 因……而著名
(
②with the help of在……的帮助下
③more
than
多于
[高分句型]
①If you come to travel,you will enjoy the beauty and delicious food
.(条件状语从句)
②I realize that only when the country is strong can we have a h
appy life.(宾语从句+倒装句)
)
6. 假如你是李华，你校英文校报征集以“My home town”为主题的文章。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
1.你家乡的位置、气候； 2.你家乡的文化。
注意：
1.词数：80～100;
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 短文题目已给出，不计入总词数。
My home town
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【答案】例文
My home town
My
home
town
is
Hefei.It's
in
Anhui
Province.It
is
in
the
east
of China.It's
cool
in
autumn.There
are
many
things
about Anhui's
traditional
culture
to
learn.Huangmei
Opera
is
the
traditional music
of
Anhui.It's very
interesting,so
it's
popul
ar
among
the
old.Anhui
is
also
famous
for
its
tea.If you
come
to
Anhui,I'll
take
you
to
the
teahouse.We
can
drink
te
a
and
watch
the
Huangmei
Opera
there.It
will
be
great.Welcome
to
Anhui!I'm
looking forward to seeing
you here!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时根据题干中的提示信息介绍自己的家乡，可适当增加细节，突出写作要
点。
)
(
[写作步骤
]
第一步，介绍家乡的位置和气候；
第二步，详细介绍家乡的各种文化；
第三步，书写结语，欢迎参观自己的家乡。
[亮点词汇]
①
be famous for
因为……而闻名
②
look forward to
期待
[高分句型
]
①
There
are many things
about Anhui
's traditional
culture to
learn.
(动词不定式作定语)
②
lt's
very
interesting,so
it's
popular
among
the
old
.(so
连接的并列句)
)
7. 假如你是大明，你的家乡是深圳。请根据提示介绍一下你的家乡。
提示：
1.深圳在临近香港的海岸。它是一个比香港还新的城市。有一千多万人，比中国的许多其他城市的人口都
要多。
2.实际上，它在20世纪80年代才变得重要。它正变得更大、更繁忙。街道也更宽、更干净。我相信有一
天它会变得和香港一样繁忙。
3. 欢迎来参观深圳，记得去参观一下帝王大厦，它比深圳的许多其他建筑都高。
要求：
1.书写认真，条理清晰，语句通顺，可适当添加内容。
2.必须包含以上信息。
【答案】例文
I'm Daming Ilive in Shenzhen.Shenzhen is on the coast near Hong Kong It is a newer city than Hong
Kong.It has a population of over ten million,that's larger than the population of many other cities in China.In fact,it only became important in the 1980s.It's getting bigger and busier.Its streets are much wider and cleaner
too.I think it will become as busy as Hong Kong some day.
Welcome to Shenzhen!Remember to visit the Diwang Tower.It's taller than many other buildings in
Shenzhen.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示：根据所给的中文提示，介绍你的家乡——深圳。写作中多用比较级句型。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直入主题，并从“地理位置、变化”来介绍深圳这座城市；
第二步，书写结语。欢迎大家来参观，并着重提出要参观的地方。
[亮点词汇]
①a population of……的人口
② in fact实际上
[高分句型]
①It is a newer city than Hong Kong. (形容词比较级句型)
②It's getting bigger and busier. (比较级+and+ 比较级)
③I think it will become as busy as Hong Kong some day.(省略引导词 that 的宾语从句； as…as 同级比较)
8. 山水田园， 美丽梁平!我们的家乡梁平正在创建国家森林城市。近年来梁平的环境发生了很大的 变化，请你根据以下提示，以“The Changes in My Hometown”为题，写一篇80—120词的短文，题目和开
头已给出。
参考信息：
1. 过去： 空气污染、水污染严重，鱼、鸟不多；公园很少。
2.现在：山清水秀，空气清新， 鸟语花香；公园很多，其中双桂湖湿地公园(Wetland Park)是最大、最漂
亮的一个，吸引了各地游客。
3. 为家乡创建国家森林城市(create a national forest city)而努力。
The Changes in My Hometown
Liangping,my hometown,is trying to create a national forest city now.
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【答案】例文：
The Changes in My Hometown
Liangping,my hometown,is trying to
create
a national
forest
city
now.It
has
becom
e
more
and
more
beautiful these yea
rs.
But
in the past,the
air wasn't
so
clean
and the
water
pollution
was
serious.We
couldn't
see
many
birds
fly
in
the
sky or fishes
swim in the water.People wanted
to
have
more
parks
or
gardens
to
enjoy
themselves
in
their
free
time.
Now
great
changes have taken place here.The
air is
fresher
a
nd
cleaner.The
mountains
are
greener
and
the
rivers
are
clearer.Different kinds
of
birds
a
nd
fishes
are
living here.Trees
and
flowers
are
everywhere.We
can
also
see lots of
beautiful parks and gardens
around us.Shuanggui
Lake
Wetland
Park
is
the b
iggest
and
the
most
beautiful
of
them
.
Thousands
of
tourists
come
here
every
year
.
As
students,we
should
do
our best to make
our hometo
wn better.I'm
sure we
will
succeed
in
creating
a
national forest
city
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以
“
The
Changes
in
My
Hometown
”
为题进行写作，介绍家乡
所发生的变化。具体的内容要包含所给的提示。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人
称和第三人称为主。第一段开头已给
出，可以接着介绍这些年家乡的整体变化情况；第二段介绍过去家乡的情况；第三段介绍现在家乡发生改
变后的情况；最后一段表达自己的希望。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
)
二、话题作文
9. 你曾经去过的印象最深刻的地方是哪里 请以“The best place I have ever been to”为题写一篇英语短文。
要求写出地点、景色、建筑、食品等。
注意：100词以上。不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
The best place I have ever been to
【答案】例文：
The best place I have ever been to
The best place I have ever been to is Sanya.Have you ever been there I have been there once.I flew there with my friends when it was snowing and very cold in Shandong.When I got off the plane,I could smell the sea. There are a lot of tall buildings.When I saw many beautiful flowers and trees in winter,I was very excited.It was
very warm at that time.We stayed in a hotel by the sea.Every day we could see the sea on my bed.And we
enjoyed the delicious seafood very much.The seafood there are very cheap.Sometimes we went to the beach to
swim.How clean and beautiful!I like Sanya best just because it's so beautiful.I love it because I can smell the
sea.
I will go there again.Would you like to go with me
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括地点、景色、建筑以及那里的食品等情况。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍这个地方是哪里；
第二步，具体介绍去到那里的所见所闻以及那里的风景、食物等；
第三步，最后是自己的感受以及对下次旅行的期待。
[亮点词汇]
① get off下车
(
②
a lot
of
很多
③
at
that
time
在那时
[高分句型]
①
When
I
saw
many
beautiful
flowers
and
tree
s
in
winter,I
was
very
excited.(when
引导的时间状语从句)
②
I
love
it
because
I
can
smell
the
sea.(because
引导的原因状语从句)
)
三、讲稿
10. 假如你来到了一所新学校，你向你的新老师和新同学介绍你的家乡和你的爱好情况，结合表中所
给的信息及要求，以 My hometown and my hobby 为题，写一篇80 字左右的演讲稿。
My hometown 1.Where is your hometown 2.What was it like in the past (Talk about its environment,transport and people's life) 3.What changes have taken place
My hobby 1.Do you like travelling What places of interest have you been to Which place did you visit last time (Introduce the place you visited)How did you go there 2.What did you do there (Give at least three details) 3.How did you feel
My hometown and my hobbyHello,Ladies and gentlemen!Please allow me to say something about my
hometown and my hobby.
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【答案】例文：
My hometown and my
hobby
Hello,Ladies
and
gentlemen!Please
allow me to
say
someth
ing
about my hometown
and
my
hobby.My
hometown
is
in
Changshu,Jiangs
u
province.It
was
very
small
in
the
past.The
roads
were
dirty.People
went
out
by bike.Their
lives
were
very
simple.But
now
great
changes
have
taken place.People
go
to places
by
car.And
)
they travel a lot in their free time.I also like traveling.I have been to Naijing and Shanghai.Last time I visited
Beijing by plane.I went to the Great Wall.I had a great time with my parents there.
【详解】
[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏表格中的问题要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明自己的家乡是哪个地方。讲述过去的状况；
第二步，讲述家乡现在的改变；
第三步，讲述自己的爱好及上次旅游的情况。
[亮点词汇]
①simple 简单的
② had a great time 玩的开心
[高分句型]
① But now great changes have taken place.(“but”表示转折)

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