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Module 8 Accidents
模块话题满分范文必背
一、材料作文
1. 请根据下面的提示，写一篇以“An Accident”为题的记叙文，词数：70左右。
1.踢足球时，摔倒，双腿受伤；
2. 同学们送我去医院；
3.住院期间， 一些同学来看我，帮我复习功课；
4. 我返校后很快赶上别人，所有考试及格；
5. 感谢同学们的帮助，今后我也会尽力去帮助身边的人。
An Accident
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【答案】例文：
An Accident
Last
Saturday I played football with my friends.When
I was
running
tow
ards
the
ball,I
was
kicked
and
fell
down
on the
field.I
could not get up becau
se my
feet
hurt.My
classmates
called
an
ambulance
and
they
accompanied me to hospital.
When I was
at hospital,some
classmates visited me
and helped
me
wit
h
my
schoolwork.So
I
was
able
to
catch up with others at
school after
I
recovered,and
I
passed
my
examination.
It was kind of
my classmates to have helped me,and
I
will
do
my
best
to
help
others
in
the
future.
【详解】[总体分析
]
①
题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②
时态：时态为“一般过去时”;
③
提示：根据给出的写作要点介绍这次事故，可适当添加细
节，并突出写作重点。
)
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[写作步骤]
第一步，直入主题，介绍意外是如何发生的；
第二步，介绍住院期间，同学给的帮助；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感激之情。
[亮点词汇]
①
play football
踢足球
②
fall down
摔倒
③
help sb with sth
帮助某人做某事
④
catch up with
追赶上
[高分句型]
①
When
I was
at hospital,some
classmates visited me
and helped
me
wi
th
my
schoolwork.(when
引导的时间状
语从句)
②
So I was
able to
catch up with
others
at
school
after
I recovered,and
I
passed
my
examina
tion.(after
引导的时
间状语从句)
)
2. 每个人的生命只有一次， 一定要珍爱自己的生命。该怎样安全自救 请根据以下提示，以 How to
Protect Ourselves 为标题写一篇发言稿。
安全对每个人都 很重要 交通：外出时遵守交通规则
食品：吃健康食物，少吃垃圾食品
活动：体育锻炼时，不要弄伤自己 不私自下河游泳
自救是重要的技 能之一 交友需谨慎 远离危险之人
遇到危险保持冷静 然后要及时报警或向老师、 家长求助 尽可能避免 受伤害 保证自己的 安全
要求：
1.语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺。
2.短文应包括所有内容，可适当发挥，不要逐句翻译。
3. 词数80左右。文章开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear friends,
Everyone has only one life,we should treasure our lives.But how can we protect ourselves
Here are some suggestions
In a word,we should try our best to protect ourselves and value our lives.
That's all.Thank you
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【答案】例文：
How to Protect Ourselv
es
)
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Dear friends,
Everyone has
only
one
life,we
should treasure
our
lives.But
how
can we protect
ourselves
Here are some
suggestio
ns.
On
the
one
hand,we
should
realize
the
importance
of safety
and
know
what
to
do.First,when
we
go
out,we
must
follow
traffic
rules.If we
walk,we
must use
sidewalks
and
mustn't run
a
red
light;If we
ride bikes,we
must ride
along the right
side
and
shouldn't
carry
others;Second,w
e
should
develop
a healthy
eating habits.Eat regular
meals
every
day
and try not to
eat junk
food
or
eat
less.When
food
sm
ells bad,don't
eat
it.Third,when we play
sports
or
games,be
careful not to hurt
ourselves.Fourth,we mustn'
t
swim
in
rivers
without
our
parents
or
other
adults around.
On the
other hand,we
should
learn to protect
ourselves,which
is
one
of
the
most
important
living
skills.We
must be
careful when making
friends
especially
online.Some person
online
are no
t
honest.They
are
dangerous,
so we must keep
away
from them.If
we happen to
have
trouble,we
should
keep
calm
an
d
remember
to
ask
our
)
(
parents,teachers or police for help
so that we can protect
ourselves
fr
om
danger
or
being
hurt.
In
a word,we
should try
our best to protect ourse
lves
and
value
our
lives.
That's
all.Thank
you!
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以
“How to Protect
Ourselves”
为标题写一篇发言稿
，结合表格提示内容，写
一些怎样安全自救。要包含所有提示并适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主、使用一般现在时给出建
议。在承接已给出的开头的基础上，用两
段话分别概括表格中的两个要点，可使用连词、副词等保持语言的连贯性，要做到无单词拼写错误，无语
法错误。
)
3. 请你根据下面提示写一篇70词左右的英语短文。汉语提示：几个男孩在街上踢足球。 一位老人提 着篮子经过，被飞来的足球击中。孩子们向老人认错。老人原谅了他们，并嘱咐他们不要在街上踢足球。 英语提示： a few boys,play football,in the street;an old man,have a basket in his hand,pass by;stop playing,
tell them not to play football in the street;never play football,carry the basket
【答案】例文：
One day,a few boys were playing football in the street.They had a good time.Suddenly an old man who had
a basket in his hand was passing by.The ball hit him.His cap and basket fell to the ground.The boys stopped
playing and ran over to the old man.They said,“Sorry!Sorry!”The old man forgave them.He told them not to
play football in the street any more.The boys said they would never play football in the street again and they
helped the old man to carry the basket.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态： 一般过去时为主；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍事情的起因， 一群孩子在街上踢足球；
第二步，介绍事情的发展，足球踢中老人；孩子们向老人道歉；
第三步，介绍事情的结果，老人原谅孩子们，并给予嘱咐。
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[亮点词汇]
①
have a good time
玩得开心
②
pass
by
经过
③
stop doing sth.
停止做某事
④
telll
sb.not
to
do
sth.
告诉某人不要做某事
[高分句型]
①
Suddenly
an
old man who had
a basket
in
his
hand
was
passing
b
y.(who
引导定语从句)
②
The boys said they would never play football in the street again
(省略
that
的宾语从句)
)
4. 安全对每个人都很重要。中学生年龄较小，学生安全更是人们关注的焦点。请你根据以下提示，写一
篇关于学生安全的作文。
提示内容：
(1)交通安全：遵守交通规则，不闯红灯；
(2)食品安全：吃健康食品，不吃垃圾食品；
(3)活动安全：进行体育锻炼时，不要弄伤自己，不私自下河游泳。
要求：(1)词数：100左右。正文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
(2)作文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥。
(3)文中不能出现真实的人名、地名和校名。
参考词汇：焦点focus 遵守obey
交通规则 traffic rules
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【答案】
Safety
is Very Importa
nt to Everyone
Safety
is very
important to
everyone.
Middle
school
students
are the
flowers
of our
country,so
students'
safety is the focus of
everyone's
a
ttention.
First,we must
obey the traffic rules
when
we
go
out.Don't
cros
s
the
street
when
the
traffic
lights
are
red.
Second,we
should
eat
healthy
food.Don't
eat junk
food.Eat
more
fruit
and
vegetables.
Besides,don't
hurt
ourselves
while
we
are
exercising.It's
dangerous
to
swim
in
the
river
alone,so
don't
go
swimming without permi
ssion.
In
a
word,life
is
all,and
safety
is
the
first.As
students,please
remember
all
the
above.They're
re
ally
)
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important to us.
【分析】这篇书面表达主要是写学生在交通、
食品和活动中的安全问题。
【详解】这是篇材料作文。在内容方面需要根据要点从交通安全、食品安全和活动安全三个
方面入手；语
言上要注意时态以一般现在时为主，第一人称，要注意单词、短语的准确性，
句式简洁性以及句子间的连
贯性；写作后，修改润色。首先检查单词，标点的准确；其次要注意格式的正确，
一定要保证字数够。
)
5. 假设你是某英文报社的特约小记者，昨天(1月5日)你目睹了一场交通事故，你很难过，因此你 写了一篇事故报道发表在了该报纸上。请你根据以下提示，从事故发生的时间(4:30 pm)、 原因、经过等
内容出发完成这个报道。
要求：
1.80词左右；
2.要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
提示：
1.一个女孩正放学回家，她低着头边玩儿手机边走路；
2.一辆汽车开得很快；
3. 女孩和汽车相撞；
4. 救护车来了，女孩儿被送往医院。
5.你的看法……
参考词汇： ambulance 救护车； lower one's head 低头
A traffic accident report
Yesterday
WaS
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【答案】例文
A traffic accident r
eport
Yesterday was January
5th.I
was
sad to
see
a traffic
accident
happen.While
a
girl
was
leaving
school
at
4:30
pm,she
lowered her head
and was playing her mobile
phon
e.A
car
drove
so
fast
and
the
driver
was
so
careless
)
that he didn't notice the girl.The car hit the girl and unluckily the girl lay on the ground.It seemed that she was hurt badly.The driver hurried to get off his car and called the doctor at once.An ambulance came fast and the girl
was sent to the hospital quickly.What a terrible traffic accident it was!The accident tells us,we should look
carefully while we are walking on the road,and the driver should drive slowly and carefully.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”;
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示信息介绍这次事故，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍事故发生的经过；
第二步，呼吁人们注意安全，小心驾驶。
[亮点词汇]
① lay on the ground 躺在地上
② hurry to do sth 急于做某事
③ get off下车
④at once 立刻
[高分句型]
① While a girl was leaving school at 4:30 pm,she lowered her head and was playing her mobile phone.(when 引
导的时间状语从句)
② A car drove so fast and the driver was so careless that he didn't notice the girl.(so…that引导的结果状语从句)
6. 根据所给提示信息，请以Atraffic accident为题写一篇报导：(字数在90词左右，开头已经给出，
不计入总数)
时间：上星期天上午9:30
地点：新华路
发生的事： 一位老太太被一名年轻人骑车撞倒，受伤严重
事故原因：年轻人闯红灯。
结果：有人打电话给急救中心，不久救护车赶到把老太太送到医院。
事故给你的启示： ……
提示词：救护车ambulance 急救中心 First Aid Centre
It was 9:30 am last Sunday at Xinhua Road,
【答案】例文
A traffic accident
It was 9:30 am last Sunday at Xinhua Road,and there were many cars in the street at that time.An old lady
was crossing the street when a young man riding his bike fast without seeing the red lights and knocked her down.
The accident happened so suddenly that the other people in the street didn't understand what was happening. The old lady was badly hurt and it was impossible for her to move.Someone called the First Aid Centre and soon
some doctors came in their ambulance and carried the lady to the hospital.
I think we should be careful and obey the traffic rules when we go out.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”;
③ 提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数
要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍发生的事，及发生的时间和地点；
第二步，介绍事故发生的原因及结果；
第三步，谈谈事故给你的启示。
[亮点词汇]
①at that time 在那时
②knock sb down 把某人撞倒
③carry sbto…把某人送到……
[高分句型]
① An old lady was crossing the street when a young man riding his bike fast without seeing the red lights and
knocked her down. (时间状语从句)
②I think we should be careful and obey the traffic rules when we go out.(宾语从句)
7. 以“An Accident”为题并根据下面的提示，请写一篇记叙文。
提示：
1.我喜欢和同学一起踢足球。
2.但上周六我摔了一跤， 一条腿严重受伤。
3. 同学们送我去了医院。我在住院期间……(发挥想象，适当表达)
4. 感谢同学们帮了我，今后我也会……(发挥想象，适当表达)
要求；
1.句子通顺，条理清晰，无语法、单词拼写及标点符号错误。
2.所写短文与提示内容相符。
3. 词数：80词左右。
An Accident
【答案】例文
An Accident
I like playing football with my classmates.But last Saturday,I fell down and hurt one of my legs badly when we played together.My classmates took me to the hospital quickly.The doctor put some medicine on the cut,and
then put a bandage around the hurt part of the leg.
During my stay in the hospital,some of my classmates visited me and helped me with my schoolwork.That's
very kind of them.I will try my best to help others in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作
重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己喜欢和同学踢足球；
第二步，具体阐述上周六发生的事故；
第三步，最后表达对同学的感谢以及今后自己也会怎么做。
[亮点词汇]
① fall down 跌倒
② help sb with sth 帮助某人某事
③ try one's best to do 尽某人最大的努力做
[高分句型]
I fell down and hurt one of my legs badly when we played together.(when 引导的时间状语从句)
8. 请根据表格中的提示，写一篇关于火灾的报道。词数80左右，可以适当发挥。
A report about a fire
时间 昨天下午三点钟
地点 李先生家
经过 房子着火时，李先生的父亲独自一人在家，在客厅看电视；他很害怕，拨打了119电话；最 终消防员们将他救出；他的右手臂受了伤。
逃生提 示 给出火灾逃生提示(至少两点)。
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【答案】例文
A report
about
a
fire
There was
a
fire
at
Mr
Li's home
at three
o'clock y
esterday
afternoon.When
the
house
caught
fire,his
father
was
alone
at home,and he was watching
TV
in the
living
room.He
was
very
frightened
and
he
called
119.Finally
the
firemen helped him
out.His right
arm was
hurt.
Fire
is very
dangerous.We
should be
careful with
it.When
our building
is
on
fire,try to
get
out
as
soon
as
possible.We
should use a wet towel to cover our mout
h
and
nose
and
stay
low
to
the
ground
to
protect
ourselves
from thick smoke.
)
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文。
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”;
③ 提示写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中关于火灾的报道的介绍要点，适当添加细节，
并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“写一篇关于火灾的报道”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、地点、经过等”几个方面重点介绍火灾的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，介绍“我们应该用湿毛巾盖住我们的嘴和鼻子，保持贴近地面，以保护自己免受浓烟
的伤害”的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①catch fire着火；
② help sb out 帮助某人摆脱困境；
③as…as possible 尽可能……;
④ protect…from…保护……不受……的伤害。
[高分句型]
① There was a fire at Mr Li's home at three o'clock yesterday afternoon.("there be"句型)
② When our building is on fire,try to get out as soon as possible.(when 引导的时间状语从句)
二、电子邮件
9. 假如你是李华，昨天你家附近的一个服装厂发生了爆炸，你的英国好友Jack发来一封电子邮件向
你表示关心，并询问当时的情况以及你和家人正在做什么。请你根据以下要点，给他回一封邮件。
要点：
1. 爆炸时的情况听到几声巨响，感觉到地面在晃动；
2.你和家人正在做的事情爸爸在开车回家的路上妈妈在洗衣服你在上网。
要求：
1.包含所有提示耍点，可适当发挥。
2. 词数：不少于80词。
参考词汇：explosion 爆炸； shake 晃动
Dear Jack,
Thanks for your e-mail.
Yours:
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Jack,
Thanks for your email.Don't worry about me.I'm fine.When the explosion happened,I heard some loud sound.I could feel the ground shaking.At that time,my father was driving home and my mother was washing
clothes.I was surfing the Internet in my bedroom.We were all very surprised and didn't know what was
happening The next morning,we learned about t from the TV news.Some people were killed in the explosion.
I'm really sorry for them.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文， 一封电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称和第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己目前状况很好；
第二步，介绍爆炸时的情况以及自己和家人在做什么;
第三步，最后表达对于那些遇难的人的遗憾。
[亮点词汇]
① worry about 担心
② At that time 在那时
(
③
surf
the Internet
上网
[高分句型]
①When the explosion happened,I heard some loud
sound.(When 引导时间状
语从句)
②We
were all very surprised and didn't know what was happening.(wh
at
引导的宾语从句)
)
三、看图作文
10. 假如你是李大明，你昨天骑自行车时遇到一位疲劳驾驶的司机，发生了一场交通事故。请根据图
片提示写一篇英语短文，介绍事故发生的经过及吸取的教训，并呼吁大家遵守交通规则、注意交通安全。
要求；
1)包含图片信息，语句通顺、流畅，可适当发挥；
2)100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
I'm Li Daming. Yesterday, an accident happened to me near my home.
(
【答案】例文
I'm
Li
Daming.Yesterday,an
accident
happened
to
me
near
my
home.While
I
was
riding
a
bike
in
the
middle
of
the
road
,
I
was
listening
to
music
.
A
car
appeared
and
it
wasn't
going fast
However,the
driver
was
very
tired,so
he
didn't see
me.The driver
and
I
didn't
stop
and
I
hit
the
car.I
fell
off my
bike
and
broke
my
leg.The
driv
er
called 120
and
I
went
to
the
hospital
with
his
help
)
Now I am very careful.It's important to pay attention on the road.Don't listen to music when you are riding
a bike.And don't drive a car when you are very tired.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇看图作文，介绍一起交通事故的记叙文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示：根据题目图片提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括事故发生的时间、地点、经过以及结果等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍昨天发生了一起事故；
第二步，具体阐述事故的情况。包括事故发生的经过以及结果等；
第三步，最后介绍通过这次事故吸取的教训。
[亮点词汇]
① happen to 发生于
② in the middle of在……中间
③ ride a bike骑自行车
[高分句型]
① While I was riding a bike in the middle of the road,I was listening to music.(while 引导时间状语从句)
② And don't drive a car when you are very tired.(when 引导的时间状语从句)
四、 日记

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