资源简介 读后续写描写感受:1. 高兴After hearing this satisfactory result, Steve felt a sense of joy and happiness filling him. 在听到这个令人满意的结果后,史蒂夫感到一种喜悦和幸福的感觉涌上心头。(适合成年人)A bright smile spread over his face. 他高兴的咧着嘴笑。He clapped his hands,jumping up and down with joy. 他拍着手,高兴地跳来跳去。(适合孩子)He was overwhelmed with joy. 他欣喜若狂2. 激动She felt on top of the world, eyes twinkling with excitement. 她感到高兴极了,眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。3. 伤心、感动(忍住哭)A tear swam in the eye of Jeff, but it didn’t fall. 一滴泪珠在杰夫的眼眶里滚动,却没落下来。(没忍住哭)Without thinking, I leaned down and gave her a hug, with tears of joys(gratitude) welling up in myeyes. 我不假思索地俯下身来拥抱她,流下了喜悦(感激)的眼泪。4. 害怕My heart was stuck in my throat. 我的心都提到嗓子眼儿了Frightened by the scene,he was rooted to the spot. 他很害怕,一动不动。She trembled all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles. 她浑身颤抖,如坐针毡。5. 累My muscles were aching and knees shaking as we dragged ourselves down the mountain towards home. 当我们拖着沉重的脚步下山回家时,我的肌肉酸痛,膝盖发抖。6. 紧张At first Ryan was so nervous that his palms were sweating, but soon a great wave of warmth filled him. 一开始瑞恩很紧张,手掌出汗,但很快一股暖流涌上他的心头。7. 自豪To our amazement, David insisted on running until he crossed the finish line to the thunderous applause, quite content and proud. 令我们惊讶的是,大卫在雷鸣般的掌声中坚持跑到终点线,非常满足和自豪。8. 犹豫David sat there with his eyes focused on the track, growing more and more hesitant and confused.大卫坐在那里,眼睛盯着跑道,越来越犹豫和困惑。9. 鼓励(自我鼓励)“Maybe I can’t be the champion of the game, but I can be the champion for myself.” he said in a determined voice.“也许我不能成为比赛的冠军,但我可以成为自己的冠军。”他用坚定的声音说。(他人鼓励)Jeff approached him, sat down and gave him an encouraging pat on the shoulder. “Just go, I believe you can.” 杰夫走近他,坐了下来,拍拍他的肩膀鼓励他。“去吧,我相信你能行的。”10. 纠结He bit his lower lips, with his hand tightly clutching the dollar.他咬着下唇,手紧紧攥着那美元。11. 内疚If only I had not said that to him. 要是我没对他说那句话该多好啊!12. 生气Her eyes turned red and eyebrows narrowed. 她气的的眼睛变红,眉头紧皱。13. 混合情感I felt a mix of warmth and relief. 我感到既温暖又宽慰。She felt a mix of fear and thrill. 她感觉既害怕又兴奋。读后续写描写环境:1. 冷Numb with cold, the old man moved clumsily.老人冻得麻木,行动笨拙。2. 天黑It was getting dark.3. 雨越下越大It was raining cats and dogs.读后续写描写动作眼睛动作:流泪 tears rolled down his face睁大眼睛 opened her eyes wide闭上眼睛 closed her eyes看一眼 glanced at盯着stared at生气地看 glared at四处看looked around观察 observed注意到 noticed看向我turned to me仰望looked up into眼睛变红 eyes turned red眉毛紧皱 eyebrows narrowed嘴巴动作:大喊shouted/cried大叫screamed咆哮growled at欢呼 cheered up小声说whispered补充说 added回答 replied咬嘴唇bit his lower lips点头微笑smiling哈哈大笑burst out laughing深呼吸 took a deep breath松了一口气 sighed with relief捂住我的嘴 covered my mouth头部动作:思考wondering陷入沉思 thinking hard点头 nodded摇头 shook his head低头lowered his head抬头 raised his head听到我的话hearing what I said手臂动作:拍肩膀patted sb on the shoulder抱住gathered sb into her arms/hugged竖起大拇指thumbed up at sb拿出来took out扔出去threw...to...举手raised her hand拍手clapped hands伸出手held out his hand/stretched out his hand手掌朝上palm up双臂低垂arms drooped指着pointing to脱掉外套took off coat捡起来picked up瞄准aimed at放一边put...aside推轮椅往前走rolled his wheelchair to递给handed攥着clutching剪切cut折叠folded粘贴pasted/glued拖拽dragged拦车 blocked a car腿部动作:走近approached him冲过去 rushed to/dashed to蹲下 knelt down弯腰 bent down/leaned down站起来stood up怒气冲冲地闯进来stormed in怒气冲冲地出去 stormed out冲过终点线crossed the finish line跳进河里jumped into the river跳上跳下jumped up and down踱来踱去 pace up and down拖着腿走 dragged himself上车got into the car下沉sinking读后续写对话描写1. “Come on! You can make it!” they shouted. “加油!你能做到的!”他们喊道。2. “It’s not easy. But it’s worth it.”“这并不容易。但是值得。”3. “Try again Was he kidding ”she thought. “再试一次吗 他是在开玩笑吗 ”她想。4. “It’s going to be alright. ”“一切都会好的。”5. “It's ok. ”“没关系。”6. “It was you that helped me although it really wasn’t your responsibility. I can’t thank you enough.” “是你帮助了我,虽然这真的不是你的责任。我感激不尽。”7. “Nobody deserves this more than you.” “没有人比你更值得拥有它。”8. “Stop! Stop!” he cried.“停!停!”他大叫道。9. “Has it really left ”Joao wondered.“它真的走了吗 ”若昂疑惑。10. “Fine, it’s finally grown up.” he said to himself. “很好,它终于长大了。”他自言自语道。读后续写表达出现转机1. 突然想到好主意It hit him that he should do something nice for Ronny.2. 情况开始变好It seemed as if a spell had been broken. 好像一个咒语被打破了。读后续写结尾句1. 升华主旨Looking back on that day, I did learn a lesson: nothing is more precious than friendship.2. 快乐场景Soon the playground was filled with laughter and talks.很快,操场上充满了欢声笑语。读后续写短句变长句1. 动作三连:主+谓1..., 谓2..., and 谓3....(3个动作先后发生,3个谓语都是过去式)2. Done...,主+谓, doing...(多个动作同时发生,保留一个动词做谓语,其他改非谓语)3. 肢体语言+面部语言+心理语言(对话)(让阅卷老师更有画面感) 展开更多...... 收起↑ 资源预览