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2024届4月深圳二模英语应用文写作思路分析
开头段：简要介绍写作背景和目的，即班级在英语戏剧节中的获奖情况，以及外教James希望了解学生们庆祝方式的需求。并表达对James的感谢，感谢他计划为英语戏剧节获奖一事进行庆祝。
主体段：调查结果展示：按照受欢迎程度列出几种主要的庆祝方式（如观看电影、与朋友外出、外出就餐、购物等），并给出每种方式的百分比。
分析原因：针对每种庆祝方式，分析其受欢迎的可能原因。例如，观看电影可能是因为它是一个轻松愉快的放松方式；与朋友外出可能是因为社交和创造回忆的价值；外出就餐可能是因为食物与庆祝活动的关联；购物可能是因为新物品的获得带来的满足感。（在保证简洁的情况下，也可省略部分细节支撑）
建议段：基于调查结果，提出一个或多个具体的庆祝建议，并解释为什么这些建议是合适的。
结尾段：礼貌地表达愿意提供更多信息或帮助的意愿，并以合适的结束语结束信件。
高分句式积累：
According to the survey l carried out, a staggering 88% of our group is excited about the prospect of a weekend excursion, while 59% are in favor of an English movie evening, and another 32% would rather have a culinary celebration.
在我进行的调查中，有惊人的 88%的团队对周末远足的前景感到兴奋，59%的人支持举行英语电影之夜，另外 32%的人更愿意参加烹饪庆典。
2.As indicated by the research l conducted, the majority at 88% are thrilled with the idea of a weekend trip, while there's a significant interest among 59% for an English film viewing session, with a smaller but notable 32% opting for a gourmet gathering.
我的研究表明，高达 88%的多数人对周末旅行的想法感到激动不已，而有一个重要的 59%群体对观看英文电影表现出浓厚的兴趣，另有一个小但值得注意的 32%选择了美食聚会。
3.Based on my investigation, the enthusiasm for a weekend escape is shared by88% of us;meanwhile/while, 59% lean towards enjoying an English-language movie night, followed by a sizeable 32% who prefer a festive food party.
根据我的研究，我们中有 88%的人热衷于周末出游;同时，59%的人倾向于享受一个英文电影之夜，其次是相当一部分 32%的人更喜欢一个欢乐的美食派对。
The data from my survey reveals that the anticipation of going on a weekend trip is high among 88% of participants, whereas/while 59% are drawn to the idea of settling down for an English movie evening, with 32% more inclined towards a food-centered event.
我的调查数据揭示出，有 88%的参与者对于周末出行的期待很高，而 59%的人则被安排一个英文电影之夜的想法所吸引，还有 32%的人更倾向于参加以食物为中心的活动。
根据调查，分别有 88%和 59%的我们喜欢周末出游和看英语电影之夜，另外 32%的人对共享美食和饮料感到兴奋。
According to the survey, 88% and 59% of us prefer weekend outings and English movie nights, respectively, with an additional 32% excited about sharing food and beverages.
从调查中得知，88%的人赞同周末远足，59%的人青睐英文电影之夜，而有 32%对共享美食和饮品感兴趣。According to the survey findings, 88% agree with weekend excursions, while 59%favor English-language film evenings, with a further 32% interested in sharing gourmet foods and beverages.
调查结果表明，88%和 59%的人分别喜爱周末外出和观看英语电影之夜，同时有 32%的人热衷于分享食物与饮料。
The survey results show that 88% and 59% of people enjoy weekend outings and English movie nights, respectively, and there is also a 32% keenness for sharing food and drink.
参考范文一
Dear James,
I hope this email finds you well. We are so thankful for your enthusiasm in celebrating ourclass winning the first prize at the English Drama Festival. Your support means a lot to us!
Based on the survey I conducted, 88% of us are enthusiastic about a weekend outing, while59% favour an English movie night, followed by 32% who prefer a food party. My preference is in line with the majority, so I suggest a hiking trip along the nearby greenway, which has lively plants and stunning views. Such an outing is perfect for us to take a break from study routines, strengthen friendship and make our success more memorable.
Thanks again for your thoughtful gesture. Looking forward to our exciting celebration! (124词)
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文二
Dear James,
Thank you for trusting me to survey our classmates’ preferred activities for celebrating our success at the English Drama Festival. Here are the results and my personal opinion.
From the survey, outings on weekends and English movie nights are favored by 88% and59% of us respectively, with 32% keen on sharing food and drinks. To meet the varied interests, I would recommend we organize an outdoor gathering at the city park, where we can bring along various foods and drinks to share. I believe this plan would ideally satisfy those seeking an adventure and those who wish to relax and enjoy good company.
Thank you once again for your support and for considering my suggestion! (116词)
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文三
On behalf of our class, I sincerely express my gratitude to you for you.Hadn’t it been for your immediate and generous guidance on our drama show, we wouldn't nave won the first prize.
Having investigated what kind of celebration is preferred,I would suggest launching an outing at weekends.The first reason for my proposal is that those who prefer an outing account for 88 percent of the class, which meets the majority of our tastes. Besides,scheduled at weekends, it won’t occupy the time of academic courses.Additionally, an outing can flexibly include other activities, such as watching English movies and sharing snacks, which help cater to more different preferences..I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into,consideration,.
Thanks again for your assistance !

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