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2024中考英语书面表达经典范文20篇
一、1.假设你叫李辉，你所在的班级拟组织一次“和合古街探访与环境改善”的项目化学习活动，请你给外教Mr. Smith写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加此次活动，内容包括如下：
内容要点 参考词汇
Where will we go ·Hehe Ancient Street ·take the bus
How will we go there ·interview…
What will we do ·discuss ways of improving…
Why will we go there ·learn more about…… ·…
When and where will we meet ·9: 00 a. m. Friday, the school gate
注意：（1）邮件中必须包括所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；
（2）邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
（3）词数 80～100。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
To: Mr. Smith
From: Li Hui
Dear Mr. Smith, How’s it going ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply. Li Hui
2.六、书面表达假设你叫李华，你的英国朋友Alex很难读懂中国诗句“山重水复疑无路，柳岸花明又一村”(For every cloud, there is a silver lining)，来信向你寻求帮助。请你根据表格信息，并结合自身例子给他回一封e-mail，谈谈你的理解。
内容要点 写作参考
About the sentence written by Lu You in English: For every cloud, there is a silver lining.
Your example Any difficult situation that you experienced, and how did you get out
Your understanding never give up, find a way out, ...
注意：
1.文中必须包含所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；写作参考供选择使用；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3.词数：80~100；
4.正文首句和尾句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Alex,
Glad to hear from you. It’s natural for a foreigner not to understand the sentence._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope my reply will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
3.根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris对中国文化很感兴趣，他给你发来邮件，询问中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪，如待人接物、餐桌礼仪等。请你用英语回复一封邮件，介绍你所知道的相关礼仪。
提示词语：manners, shake hands, polite, gift, chopsticks
提示问题：
What do we do when we meet people for the first time
How do we behave properly at table
Dear Chris,
I'm glad to know that you re interested in Chinese social manners. _____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________ I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information. Yours, Li Hua
4.初中三年，我们都有一些难以忘怀的经历。学校英语俱乐部将组织题为"An Unforgettable Experience"的征文比赛。请根据提示，写一篇短文参赛。
1.What was the experience
2.What have you learned from it
注意事项：
（1）词数：100 词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
（3）文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
An Unforgettable Experience Looking back on the past three years, everyone had some unforgettable experiences.
5.你是校志愿队队长李华。你校将于下周六组织主题（theme）为“健康你和我”的志愿服务活动，交换生Sam也报名参加。请你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件，向他介绍活动的安排。
Theme Healthy You and Me
Time 8:30 a.m.—11:30 a.m.
Place Sports Center
Activities …
Purpose …
注意：
1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 词数80词左右（邮件的开头已给出，不计入词数）；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Sam,
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday.
____________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6.某中学生英语杂志开展主题为 My favorite book 的征文活动，请你写一篇 100词左右的英语短文投稿，文中要包含这本书的主要内容和你喜爱它的理由。
注意：
（1）书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的区县、学校及姓名。
7.假定你是李华，为了鼓励同学们积极参加劳动，获得足够的生活技能去面对成长道路上的挑战，学校英文社团请你写一封倡议信，内容包括：
（1）倡议的原因；
（2）倡议的内容（如做家务、参加学校劳动、参与社会劳动等）；
（3）发出倡议。
注意：
（1）词数 80—100，开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
（2）短文须包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）在文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
Dear fellow students,
We will finally grow up someday,leaving our parents and facing the challenges in life.
8.Enjoy Sports，Enjoy Life提示：享受运动，享受生活。你喜欢运动吗？你享受过运动带来的乐趣吗？请以 "Enjoy Sports，Enjoy Life"为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次你通过运动享受生活的经历，或谈谈运动给我们带来的好处。
要求：
（ 1）根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于60个；
（ 2）语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
（ 3）文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
9.假设你是李华。你们班想在毕业之前为学校做一件有意义的事，如种植纪念树、去校图书馆整理图书等。你打算邀请交换生Peter参加这次活动。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，告诉他活动内容、意义及安排。
提示词语：
invite, plant, meaningful, beautiful, library
提示问题：
What activity do you plan to do
Why do you want to organize this activity
When and where will you have this activity
Dear Peter,
How is everything going
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
10.假如你是李华，你们学校的英语社团将开展以“体育锻炼，健康你我”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请以“Better Exercise, Better Life”为题，根据以下要点，写一篇英语演讲稿。
我的日常锻炼 1. 最喜欢的锻炼方式
2. 锻炼时长
3. 带来益处（不少于两点)
给同学的建议 1. 校内锻炼方式（不少于两点）
2. 校外锻炼方式（不少于两点）
号召 1. 希望大家多锻炼
2. …
参考词汇：做早操do morning exercises
上体育课 have PE lessons
压力减轻 feel less stressed
合理锻炼 exercise properly
注意：
1. 词数在80—100之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数；
2. 可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Better Exercise, Better Life
Dear classmates,
I'm glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is "Better Exercise, Better Life".



That's all for my speech. Thank you for listening.
在我们的成长过程中，自律起着重要的作用。为了加强青少年的自我约束能力，某英语杂志社正在开展以"争做自律好学生"为主题的征文比赛。请你以How to be a self-disciplined student 为题，写一篇英语短文参赛。
要点如下：
（1）在学校：遵守校规，与同学相处融洽……
（2）在家里：按时完成家庭作业，帮助父母做家务……
（3）其他方面：多阅读，少玩电子游戏……
（4）自律的作用：使我们更健康，更快乐……
参考词汇：self-discipline n.自律：self-disciplined adj.自律的
要求：
（1）短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息，并适当发挥；
（2）词数：80左右（短文标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（3）文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名和地名。
How to be a self-disciplined student Self-discipline plays an important role in our life.We must be strict with ourselves in everyday life.
12. 假如你是李华，你们学校要举办一场关于京剧的讲座，你打算邀请你们班交换生Peter参加，请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他讲座时间和地点以及需要做什么准备。
提示词语:
lecture (讲座), invite, information, question, online
提示问题：
When and where will you have the lecture
What do you advise Peter to prepare for it
Dear peter,
How is it going
There'll be a lecture on Peking Opera in our school. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
If there is anything that I can do, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
13.假如你是李华，你不小心把Peter借给你的书弄丢了。为表达歉意，请用英语给他写一封邮件，告知此事，并提出弥补的办法。
提示词语：lose, make up（弥补）, buy, send
提示问题：
What happened to the book
What will you do to make up for it
Dear Peter, How are you getting on I'm writing this email to say sorry_____________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua
14. 北京是一座蕴含着丰富文化的城市，这里的建筑、戏曲、美食、服饰、手工艺品等，都有文化的印记。
假如你是华，你校英语社团正在开展线上国际交流活动，其公众号计划做关于北京文化的系列推送，现就"Cultural Symbols of Beijing (北京文化标志）"这一话题在校内收集素材。请你用英语给公众号留言，推荐一个你眼中的北京文化标志，对其作简要介绍，并说明推荐理由。
提示词语：show, traditional, love, treasure, important
提示问题：In your opinion, what's the cultural symbol of Beijing Please describe it. Why do you think it can be a symbol
I'm Li Hua, from Class I, Grade 9.
...
I hope my idea can be taken. Thanks!
15.假如你是李华，你们学校正在开展"安全月"宣传活动，倡议大家制作关于安全教育的主题海报，你们班交换生Peter给你发邮件询问相关事情。请用英语回复一封邮件，告诉他海报上交的时间，并分享你设计海报的一些想法。
提示词语： design，safety rule，careful，protect，picture
提示问题： When should you hand in the poster？
What would you like to share with Peter about designing the poster？
Dear Peter，
I'm glad to receive your email．__________________________________________________________________
If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
16.根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
某英文网站正在开展以“提升效率”为主题的征文活动。假定你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在学习或生活中是如何提升效率的，取得了什么效果。
提示词语：plan, task, attention, make use of, progress
提示问题：· How do you increase your efficiency(效率)
· What have you achieved
High efficiency is important for a busy student. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
17.“不积跬步，无以至千里。”积累，有助于我们达成目标，实现梦想。
某英文网站正在开展以“积累”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在积累知识方面做过什么，有什么收获。
提示词语：accumulate（积累）, read, keep, make progress
提示问题：●What did you do to accumulate knowledge
●What have you learned from doing so
Without accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
18.题目②
现实中，大到自然环境和社会环境，小到个人生活和学习，变化无处不在，面对变化，唯有积极适应，才能有所进步和收获。
某英文网站正在开展以"适应变化"为主题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你生活中的一个变化，你是如何应对这个变化的，以及有什么收获。
提示词语：help, enjoy, new, challenge, take action
提示问题： What is the change that happened in your life
How did you deal with it
What have you learned from the experience
There are many changes in a person's life.
19. 自律，即自我约束，是自我提升的一种途径，有助于我们成长，促使我们不断前行。
某英文网站正在开展以"自律"为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈为了增强自律意识，你做过什么，以及这样做给你带来的好处。
提示词语：
self-disciplined(自律的), plan, goal, habit, improve
提示问题：
What did you do to be self-disciplined
What benefits have you got from doing so
Self-discipline plays an important role in our life ______.
20.“不积跬步，无以至千里。”积累，有助于我们达成目标，实现梦想。
某英文网站正在开展以“积累”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在积累知识方面做过什么，有什么收获。
提示词语：accumulate (积累) read, keep, make progress
提示问题：●What did you do to accumulate knowledge
●What have you learned from doing so
Without accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. ______________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
答案和解析
1.【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
How’s it going Knowing that you are interested in Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to take part in our trip to Hehe Ancient Street.
We are going there by bus. When we arrive, we will interview the old people, hoping they will tell us stories about the past. Then we plan to discuss ways of improving the travel environment to interest more tourists. These activities will surely help us learn more about the history of the ancient street and sense the beauty of Hehe Culture. Besides, it offers us a good chance to do community service.
Would you like to come If yes, please meet us at 9:00 on Friday morning at the school gate.
Looking forward to your reply.
Li Hui
【解析】①题材：本文是一篇应用文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述活动的时间、地点、内容以及活动意义；
第三步，期盼对方的回复。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②plan to do计划做某事
③the beauty of……的美丽
④offer sb sth提供某人某物
[高分句型]
①When we arrive, we will interview the old people, hoping they will tell us stories about the past.（非谓语作状语）
②Then we plan to discuss ways of improving the travel environment to interest more tourists.（动词不定式表目的）
2.【答案】Dear Alex,
Glad to hear from you. It’s natural for a foreigner not to understand the sentence. It’s written by Lu You and similar to “For every cloud, there’s a silver lining” in English. You’re encouraged to keep trying when meeting difficulties. My example may help you better understand it.
Once, I entered our school’s photo competition but couldn’t find a proper subject. I felt worried and hopeless. One day, my friend May gave me a big smile. Suddenly, I was hit and touched, feeling something bright. An idea came to me that I could bring the warmth to others through photos. After many tries, I took the subject—A Warm Hug. Finally, I got the prize. So we should never give up and try to find a way out.
I hope my reply will be helpful to you,
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍关于“山重水复疑无路，柳岸花明又一村”的基本信息；
第二步，结合自身例子说明这个诗句的含义；
第三步，最后说明自己的理解。
[亮点词汇]
①keep doing sth一直做某事
②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
You’re encouraged to keep trying when meeting difficulties.（when引导的时间状语从句）
3.【答案】Dear Chris,
I m glad to know that you're interested in Chinese social manners. China is a country with a long history, so there are many customs here. Let me tell you some of them.
Firstly, you are supposed to shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. Secondly, you should bring a gift when you are invited to a party and be sure to arrive on time or a few minutes earlier. ①Thirdly, when you eat meals with others, it s rude to point at others with your chopsticks. ②And don t make noise when you have your soup.
I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
这是一篇应用文，话题为介绍中国人的基本社交礼仪，写作时态应以一般现在时为主，人称应以第一/二人称为主，写作时注意亮点词汇和高分句型的正确运用。
【亮点词汇】
①be supposed to do sth应该做某事
②be sure to一定，务必
③feel free to随意
【高分句型】
①Thirdly, when you eat meals with others, it s rude to point at others with your chopsticks.（when引导时间状语从句）
②And don t make noise when you have your soup.（Don't型祈使句）
【结构布局】
引言：问候
中心：分要点详细介绍中国的基本社交礼仪
结尾：祝愿以及落款
【拓展词汇】
略
【拓展句型】
略
4.【答案】
An Unforgettable Experience
Looking back on the past three years, everyone had some unforgettable experiences.
Last Saturday afternoon, we had a football competition against the team from the senior class in our school. Though inferior in skills and experience, our team showed great enthusiasm and fought hard. ①As a member of our team, I used every chance to catch the ball and pass it on to my teammates. However, the senior team showed great skills in their performance. ②Unluckily, we lost the game, but we all felt satisfied as we had gone all out on the sports field.
From this experience, I've learned that, whenever we face challenges, we should fight hard instead of being discouraged or even giving up. Meanwhile, we should make full use of every opportunity to improve ourselves.
【解析】【思路点拨】
【思路点拨】本文要求以“An Unforgettable Experience”为题，并结合提示写一篇作文，描述初中三年中一些难忘的经历。所以写作时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主。
【结构布局】
引言：点明主题
中心：讲述自己难忘的经历
结尾：做总结
【亮点词汇】
①go all out全力以赴
②instead of而不是
③make full use of充分利用
【高分句型】
①As a member of our team, I used every chance to catch the ball and pass it on to my teammates.（and连接并列成分）
②Unluckily, we lost the game, but we all felt satisfied as we had gone all out on the sports field.（as引导原因状语从句）
5.【答案】Dear Sam,
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday. Let me introduce something about the activity to you.
①The theme of the activity is "Healthy You and Me", and it will be held from 8:30 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. next Saturday. It will be held in the Sports Center. There are many interesting activities. First, there will be a sports history show. It will be held in our school hall. Besides, "Healthy You and Me" speech will be on, too. If you want to take part, please let us know before this Friday. There will be different kinds of after-school exercise classes, such as football, basketball, tennis and so on. You can choose the one you like.
②The main purpose is to increase students' interest in sports, and encourage students to take exercise actively. I am looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文写作。话题是你是校志愿队队长李华。你校将于下周六组织主题（theme）为“健康你和我”的志愿服务活动，交换生Sam也报名参加。请你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件，向他介绍活动的安排。注意表述清楚，有条理。注意词汇时态等的合理运用。
【结构布局】
引言：表明写作意图，引出对活动的重点介绍；
中心：具体阐述写作内容；
结尾：介绍活动的目的并期望回复；
【亮点词汇】
①introduce...to...介绍……给……
②different kinds of各种不同的
③look forward to期待
【高分句型】
①The theme of the activity is "Healthy You and Me", and it will be held from 8:30 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. next Saturday. （and连接并列句）
②The main purpose is to increase students' interest in sports, and encourage students to take exercise actively.（不定式结构作表语和宾语补足语）
6.【答案】 My favorite book
①I like reading, because they not only broaden my horizons but also give me inspiration and the book that I like best is My Life Story. It was created by an American writer-Helen Keller in 1902. She was a blind, deaf and dumb person. My Life Story described her hard struggle to become an outstanding writer and educationist of the world. In the book, she wrote how she learned to write English words with the help of Miss Sullivan, her good teacher. Through reading this book, it not only enriches my knowledge, but also broadens my vision.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇命题作文，要求以My favorite book为主题来进行写作，写作时时态以一般过去时为主，围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
【亮点词汇】
①not only…but also不仅……而且；
②with the help of在……的帮助下
【高分句型】
①I like reading, because they not only broaden my horizons but also give me inspiration and the book that I like best is My Life Story.（because引导原因状语从句；关系词that引导定语从句。）
【结构布局】
开头：引入主题，表示我喜欢阅读；
中心：详细介绍我最喜欢的书所讲述的内容；
结尾：阐述阅读这本书给自己所带来的好处。
7.【答案】Dear fellow students,
We will finally grow up someday, leaving our parents and facing the challenges in life.①We need to learn and practise some basic life skills because they can help build our working spirit.
Firstly, we can help do some housework, such as washing clothes or sweeping floors. Therefore, we can become more positive to face the future life. Secondly, cleaning classrooms is our duty.②It is comfortable for us to study in such a clean environment. Thirdly, it's also a good idea to help pick up litter in our neighborhood. This can help us become more responsible.
All in all, let's take action now. A small action can make a big difference.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
【思路点拨】这是一篇提纲作文，题目要求围绕提示内容写作，命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。
【亮点词汇】
①such as例如；
②pick up捡起；
③take action行动起来；
【高分句型】
①We need to learn and practise some basic life skills because they can help build our working spirit.我们需要学习和实践一些基本的生活技能，因为它们有助于培养我们的工作精神。（because 引导的原因状语从句。)
②It is comfortable for us to study in such a clean environment.在这样干净的环境中学习对我们来说很舒服。（it is adj （for sb ） to do sth做某事怎么样，是固定句型。)
【结构布局】
引言：倡议的原因
中心：倡议的内容
结尾：发出倡议
8.【答案】Enjoy Sports，Enjoy Life More and more people are fond of participating in sports，so am I.Sports are good for my mental，physical and emotional development.First of all，when taking part in sports with others，I learn the importance of team work which is necessary in my life and work.【高分句型一】What's more，not only do I get relaxed in sports but also I can cultivate a lot of good qualities such as perseverance，loyalty，self-confidence and the strength.【高分句型二】（运动对我的益处）
The reason why my favorite sport is table tennis is that it is very popular in China.I can easily find friends to play table tennis together，and the requirements for venues are very low.Almost all communities and schools have table tennis venues.（最喜欢的运动及原因）
【解析】高分句型一
First of all，when taking part in sports with others，I learn the importance of team work which is necessary in my life and work.
分析：句子里，现在分词taking part in sports with others作时间状语；代指先行词the importance of team work，关系词which引导定语从句is necessary in my life and work。
翻译：首先，当我和其他人一起参加体育活动时，我了解到团队合作的重要性，这在我的生活和工作中是必要的。
高分句型二
What's more，not only do I get relaxed in sports but also I can cultivate a lot of good qualities such as perseverance，loyalty，self-confidence and the strength.
分析：句子里，否定词not only位于句首，句子do I get relaxed in sports用部分倒装。
翻译：更重要的是，我不仅可以在运动中放松，还可以培养很多优秀的品质，比如毅力、忠诚、自信和力量。
能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
9.【答案】Dear Peter,
How is everything going I'm writing to invite you to join us. ①As we are going to graduate, our classmates plan to plant a tree together. We all know that trees can stop the wind from blowing the sand, and they can also make our school beautiful. So we decide to plant a tree for our school. Next Sunday, we will meet at the gate of the school and then go to the playground. We will dig a hole, plant the tree and then water it. ②I believe we all will have a great time.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文写作。话题是假如你是李华，你们班想在毕业之前为学校做一件有意义的事，如种植纪念树、去校图书馆整理图书等。你打算邀请交换生Peter参加这次活动。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，告诉他活动内容、意义及安排。注意表述清楚，有条理。注意词汇时态等的合理运用。
【结构布局】
引言：写信目的；
中心：介绍活动，活动的原因和安排；
结尾：期待收到回复；
【亮点词汇】
①invite sb. to do sth. 邀请某人做某事
②stop ... from doing sth. 阻止……做某事
【高分句型】
①As we are going to graduate, our classmates plan to plant a tree together.（as引导原因状语从句）
②I believe we all will have a great time.（省略that的宾语从句）
10.【答案】Better Exercise, Better LifeDear classmates,
I'm glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is "Better Exercise, Better Life'”.
My favorite exercise is playing basketball. I often play basketball for about ten hours a week, because I think it is interesting and relaxing and it also enables me to make friends with others.
I think we should do morning exercises every day to start our day. ①What's more, when we have PE lessons, we can take part in different kinds of activities. We can also run for half an hour every day to build up our body. ②If we have time, we can ride bikes on weekends with our friends.
③I hope everyone can exercise more and have a better life.
That's all for my speech. Thank you for listening.
【解析】【思路点拨】本篇书面表达是一篇演讲稿。首先认真审题，确定文章体裁、题材和中心。本文主要使用第一人称和一般现在时。写作内容包括提示中的要点，适当发挥，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词和句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。确保内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，书写清晰，卷面整洁。
【结构布局】
引言：开头已给出，开门见山，点明主题；
中心：根据提示具体介绍自己的日常锻炼和给同学的建议以及发出号召；
结尾：结尾已给出，概括总结，表达感谢。
【亮点短语】
①make friends with sb.和某人交朋友
②take part in参与
③on weekends在周末
【高分句型】
①What's more, when we have PE lessons, we can take part in different kinds of activities.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②If we have time, we can ride bikes on weekends with our friends.（if引导的条件状语从句）
③I hope everyone can exercise more and have a better life. (省略that的宾语从句)
11.【答案】How to be a self-disciplined student Self-discipline plays an important role in our life.We must be strict with ourselves in everyday life.
At school，we should obey the school rules and get along well with our classmates.【高分句型一】At the same time，we should take the initiative to help our teachers clean up. （在学校：遵守校规，与同学相处融洽）At home，we should finish our homework on time and help our parents with housework.If we have time，we can do some things we like. （在家里：按时完成家庭作业，帮助父母做家务）In addition，we should read more and play less video games.（其他方面：多阅读，少玩电子游戏）
In conclusion，self-discipline not only makes us healthier and happier，but also makes us better at getting along with others.【高分句型二】（自律的作用：使我们更健康，更快乐）
【解析】【高分句型一】
At school，we should obey the school rules and get along well with our classmates.在学校，我们应该遵守校规，与同学和睦相处。and表并列。
【高分句型二】
In conclusion，self-discipline not only makes us healthier and happier，but also makes us better at getting along with others.总之，自律不仅使我们更健康、更快乐，而且使我们更好地与他人相处。not only ...but also ...不仅......而且......
能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
12.【答案】Dear Peter,
How is it going
There'll be a lecture on Peking Opera in our school. The Peking Opera will start at 10:00 this Friday morning in the school hall. ①I am writing to invite you to take part in the meaningful lecture.
In the lecture, we can not only get some useful information about the Peking Opera, but also get close to the traditional Chinese culture, which can benefit us a lot.
There are some suggestions for you to prepare for it. First of all, remember to be there on time. What's more, don't forget to bring a camera with you, which can record the precious moment. Last but not least, it's a golden chance for you to come up with some questions that you are willing to learn about.
②If there is anything that I can do, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文，要求写一封电子邮件，告诉Peter讲座的时间、地点及需要准备的事。写作时，认真审题，本文时代以一般将来时为主，人称以第一人称为主。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【亮点词汇】
①not only...but also...不但......而且……
②remember to do sth.记住做某事
③last but not least最后但并不是最不重要的，最后重要一点
【高分句型】
①I am writing to invite you to take part in the meaningful lecture.我写信是想邀请你参加这个有意义的演讲。（invite sb. to do sth.表示“邀请某人做某事”）
②If there is anything that I can do, please let me know. 如果有什么我能做的，请告诉我。（if引导条件状语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：点明主题
中心：介绍京剧讲座的内容
结尾：介绍参加讲座的注意事项
13.【答案】Dear Peter,
How are you getting on ①I'm writing this email to say sorry, because I lost the book which I borrowed from you a week ago. I want to make up for my error. I will buy the same one from the bookstore and send it to you. What do you think of my method ② I hope that you can forgive me. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时要按邮件格式写。开头介绍我写信的目的；接下来介绍我打算如何弥补我的过失；最后希望你能原谅我。例文采用一段式；用第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时，用一般将来时介绍我提出的弥补办法，介绍全面，条理清晰，用连词连接并列成分，文章前后连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①borrow from从……借；
②want to do sth想做某事；
③send…to…送……给；
④look forward to期待。
【高分句型】
①I'm writing this email to say sorry, because I lost the book which I borrowed from you a week ago.（which引导定语从句）
② I hope that you can forgive me.(that引导宾语从句）
【结构布局】
略
14.【答案】 I'm Li Hua.from Class I，Grade 9①.I believe that Jingju is a cultural symbol of Beijing . Jingju tells time-honored stories through singing and movements,showing us what life was like in the past.The performers are in beautiful clothes and with colorful faces.
Jingju is a traditional art form loved by people of all ages. Besides, as a national treasure,it plays an important role in Chinese culture.②That's why I think Jingju can be a cultural symbol of Beijing.
I hope my idea can be taken.Thanks!
【解析】【思路点拨】
【思路点拨】本文要求以Cultural Symbols of Beijing（北京文化标志）"这一话题在校内收集素材。用英语给公众号留言，推荐一个你眼中的北京文化标志，对其作简要介绍，并说明推荐理由。注意把提示的要点写全，可适当发挥。
【结构布局】
引言：介绍自己
中心：说明推荐的理由
结尾：表达希望
【亮点词汇】
①a symbol of……的象征
②in the past在过去
③plays an important role in在......发挥重要作用
【高分句型】
①I believe that Jingju is a cultural symbol of Beijing .我相信京剧是北京的文化象征。（that引导的宾语从句）
②That's why I think Jingju can be a cultural symbol of Beijing.这就是为什么我认为京剧可以成为北京的文化象征。（why引导的表语从句）
15.【答案】Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your email. As it is required, you are supposed to hand in the poster before next Friday.
Being your close friend, I am extremely willing to share some ideas about designing the poster with you. ①First, the basic safety rules are of great importance, which should be included in your poster. Second, following the safety rules is so meaningful and crucial that you had better remind your readers of its importance and advise them to be careful both in and out of school. Third, adding a few suggestions about safety awareness is necessary. ②In addition, it is a good idea for you to draw a few pictures on your poster so as to make it more lively and acceptable.
If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题。
【亮点词汇】
①be supposed to应该……
②hand in上交
③be willing to do sth.愿意做某事
④be of great importance非常重要
⑤remind sb. of sth.提醒某人某事
⑥acceptable可接受的
【高分句型】
①First, the basic safety rules are of great importance, which should be included in your poster.（which引导定语从句）
②In addition, it is a good idea for you to draw a few pictures on your poster so as to make it more lively and acceptable.（so as to引导状语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：海报上交的时间
中心：海报设计的想法
结尾：总结全文
16.【答案】 High efficiency is important for a busy student. ①It is necessary for everyone to learn how to increase efficiency.
②I have tried many ways to increase my efficiency since I was a middle school student. Before the beginning of a day, I always think about my goals and make a list of things I need to do. Then, I organize my to-do list to make an effective plan for the day. I always spend time doing important tasks first and make good use of the rest of the time.
By managing my time well, I have made progress. I usually finish my homework on time and still have time to relax myself. High efficiency and time management have helped me be successful in various areas of my life.
【解析】【思路点拨】
这是一篇提示作文，话题为提升效率，写作时态应以一般现在时为主，人称应以第一人称为主，写作时注意亮点词汇和高分句型的正确运用。
【亮点词汇】
①spend time (in) doing sth花费时间做某事；
②make good use of充分利用；
③on time按时
【高分句型】
①It is necessary for everyone to learn how to increase efficiency.（how引导宾语从句）
②I have tried many ways to increase my efficiency since I was a middle school student.（since引导时间状语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：点题，提高效率很重要
中心：详细介绍自己是如何高效地安排一天的时间
结尾：高效率生活对自己的帮助
【拓展词汇】
略
【拓展句型】
略
17.【答案】 Without accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. As for me, I have taken lots of measures to accumulate knowledge. ① First of all, I attentively listened to the teachers, parents, and the others who could provide me with much knowledge, considering that it was one of the most effective ways to enrich myself.② In the second place, I used to observe something carefully and took note at the same time so that I would not miss anything important. ③Last but not least, when having spare time, I chose to read various books and reviewed what I had gained regularly.
In a word, I have learned a lot during the process of accumulating knowledge. Just as an old saying goes, Rome was not built in one day. That is to say, one cannot succeed without persistent accumulation. ④So I have learned that only by gaining knowledge step by step can we achieve our goal and realize our dream. In the future, I will continue to keep accumulating knowledge and make greater progress.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本题属于材料作文，题目的开头已给出。要求根据提示词语和提示问题来写一篇短文，谈谈你在积累知识方面做过什么，有什么收获。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，用上了所给提示词并回答了“你是如何积累知识的？”和“你从中学到了什么？”这两个问题。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。
【亮点词汇】
①as for至于；
②take lots of measures to do sth.采取很多措施做某事；
③first of all首先；
④provide sb. with sth.提供给某人某物；
⑤used to do sth.过去常常做某事；
⑥at the same time同时；
⑦last but not least最后但并非最不重要的（一点）；
⑧in a word总之；
⑨step by step逐步地；
⑩make progress取得进步。
【高分句型】
① First of all, I attentively listened to the teachers, parents, and the others who could provide me with much knowledge, considering ② that it was one of the most effective ways to enrich myself. （who引导的限制性定语从句；that引导的宾语从句；）
②In the second place, I used to observe something carefully and took note at the same time so that I would not miss anything important.（so that引导的目的状语从句 ）
③Last but not least, when having spare time, I chose to read various books and reviewed what I had gained regularly.（when引导的时间状语从句；what引导的宾语从句）
④So I have learned that only by gaining knowledge step by step can we achieve our goal and realize our dream.（only引导的倒装句）
【结构布局】
引言：点明主题，作者采取措施积累知识
中心：介绍自己积累知识的步骤
结尾：表达感受
18.【答案】 There are many changes in a person's life. ①When I entered middle school, I felt lonely. ②I missed my old friends, but I knew I had to fit in. I offered help to my class, joined in the after-school activities and invited my classmates to my birthday party. Gradually, I made some friends and enjoyed the company of my new classmates.
From this experience, I get to know change brings challenges as well as opportunities. When change comes, we should face it and take action.
【解析】【思路点拨】
【思路点拨】
本文是一篇提示作文，话题为介绍生活中的一个变化，你是如何应对这个变化的，以及有什么收获。根据提示和要求可知，本文以一般过去时和第一人称描述为主，写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
【亮点词汇】
①make friends交朋友
②as well as还，也
③take action采取行动
【高分句型】
【高分句型】
①When I entered middle school, I felt lonely.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②I missed my old friends, but I knew I had to fit in. （but引导的并列句）
【结构布局】
【结构布局】
引言：点明主题，生活中有许多变化
中心：介绍生活中的具体变化
结尾：变化带来的收获
19.【答案】 Self-discipline plays an important role in our life. To be honest, I am a person who is self-disciplined. I used to follow all kinds of rules and hand in the tasks appointed on time at school. ①And I could not only respect all my teachers but also get on well with my classmates. At home, I was able to balance housework and homework. I usually made a plan in advance to make it easier to achieve my goal. After finishing all the task, I developed the habit of going to bed early and getting up early. In the society, I spared no effort to improve myself all the time.
In a word, I have benefited a lot from being self-discipline. First of all, I have had many good habits, which makes my life easier and more regular. ② Secondly, my life and my study have been of high efficiency so that a lot of time has been saved. Thirdly, being self-disciplined has prepared me for a better and brighter future. In the future, I will continue to be a self-disciplined person.
【解析】【思路点拨】
【思路点拨】
本文是一篇提示作文，话题为写一篇增强自律意识的文章，写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【结构布局】
引言：点明主题
中心：介绍自己是如何自律的
结尾：介绍自律的好处
【亮点词汇】
①hand in上交；
②get on well with与……相处很好；
③in advance提前；
④in the future将来
【高分句型】
①And I could not only respect all my teachers but also get on well with my classmates.（not only …but also…不仅……而且……）
②Secondly, my life and my study have been of high efficiency so that a lot of time has been saved.（so that引导目的状语从句）
20.【答案】 Without accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. As for me, I have taken lots of measures to accumulate knowledge. ① First of all, I attentively listened to the teachers, parents, and the others who could provide me with much knowledge, considering that it was one of the most effective ways to enrich myself.② In the second place, I used to observe something carefully and took note at the same time so that I would not miss anything important. ③Last but not least, when having spare time, I chose to read various books and reviewed what I had gained regularly.
In a word, I have learned a lot during the process of accumulating knowledge. Just as an old saying goes, Rome was not built in one day. That is to say, one cannot succeed without persistent accumulation. ④So I have learned that only by gaining knowledge step by step can we achieve our goal and realize our dream. In the future, I will continue to keep accumulating knowledge and make greater progress.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本题属于材料作文，题目的开头已给出。要求根据提示词语和提示问题来写一篇短文，谈谈你在积累知识方面做过什么，有什么收获。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，用上了所给提示词并回答了“你是如何积累知识的？”和“你从中学到了什么？”这两个问题。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。
【亮点词汇】
①as for至于；
②take lots of measures to do sth.采取很多措施做某事；
③first of all首先；
④provide sb. with sth.提供给某人某物；
⑤used to do sth.过去常常做某事；
⑥at the same time同时；
⑦last but not least最后但并非最不重要的（一点）；
⑧in a word总之；
⑨step by step逐步地；
⑩make progress取得进步。
【高分句型】
① First of all, I attentively listened to the teachers, parents, and the others who could provide me with much knowledge, considering ② that it was one of the most effective ways to enrich myself. （who引导的限制性定语从句；that引导的宾语从句；）
②In the second place, I used to observe something carefully and took note at the same time so that I would not miss anything important.（so that引导的目的状语从句 ）
③Last but not least, when having spare time, I chose to read various books and reviewed what I had gained regularly.（when引导的时间状语从句；what引导的宾语从句）
④So I have learned that only by gaining knowledge step by step can we achieve our goal and realize our dream.（only引导的倒装句）
【结构布局】
引言：点明主题，作者采取措施积累知识
中心：介绍自己积累知识的步骤
结尾：表达感受
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