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2024年中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题速递(湖南专用)
第六期
书面表达15篇(湖南名校模拟)
1．（2024·湖南长沙·二模）俗话说：“读万卷书，行万里路。”你的英国笔友John不明白这句话的意思，写信向你咨询。假如你是李华，请根据来信内容用英语给他写一封回信。
Dear Li Hua,
Recently I have read a book about China. In the book, there is an old Chinese saying “Read 10,000 books and travel 10,000 miles.” What does it mean Would you please tell me about it Do you like reading Could you tell me something about your favorite book
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
John
要求：
(1) 要点齐全，并适当发挥；
(2) 80词左右 (开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
(3) 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；
(4) 卷面整洁，书写美观。
Dear John,
Thanks for your letter. I’m very glad to tell you something about the Chinese saying “Read 10, 000 books and travel 10, 000 miles.”
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2．（2024·湖南长沙·一模）假如你是李华，将参加今年暑假的英国伦敦游学(study tour)活动。英方提供了两个家庭供你选择居住，并征询你对游学活动的建议。请阅读以下信息，写一封电子邮件回复。
(1) 所写内容必须包括某一家所有信息及你选择的理由;
(2) 结合自身情况提出1–2点游学活动建议；
(3) 80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
(4) 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(5) 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
The Green family an old couple no children two dogs a flat, in the centre of London Wi-Fi cost: 350 pounds The Black family a middle-aged couple a junior school boy a primary girl a house, a little far from London a garden cost: 230 pounds
Dear Sir/Madam,
I have read the information about two families. And I have decided to live in_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．（2024·湖南邵阳·二模）学习成绩与学习习惯密切相关。你身边是否有一些同学不但聪明，而且还很刻苦，学习效率就是不高。不良的学习习惯，比如注意力不集中或不合理的时间安排等因素，都可能导致学习效率不高。请以How to develop good study habits为主题，写一篇不少于80字的短文。注意结合自身情况分析原因，并给出合理可行的建议。
要点：
1. 说明你或周边的朋友是否存在学习效率不高的问题；
2. 分析出现学习效率不高的原因，并举例说明；
3. 给出建议。
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4．（2024·湖南娄底·二模）假设你是李华，你校将于下周举办“活动周”，“活动周”共有三个项目。请你根据下面表格的信息，写一篇英文短文，介绍“活动周”三个项目的内容与意义。
Project A Sports Day A Volunteer Day A．..Day
Activities ·play ping-pong ·... ·clean the Hongshuiling Park ·... ·... ·...
Meanings ·keep healthy ·... ·protect the environment ·... ·... ·...
要求：
(1)表格已列出项目一和项目二，请补充项目三；
(2)文中不得出现真实校名和人名等；
(3)字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，条理清楚；
(4)80词左右(标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
The Activity Week
Our school is going to hold “The Activity Week” next week.
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5．（2024·湖南怀化·一模）假如你叫李华，是光明中学初三(1)班的一名学生，你校学生会(Student Union)正在招募学生干部，你很想加入，请根据下面提供的信息用英语给学生会主席(Chairman)写一封自荐信。
Abilities 1. be good at communicating 2. ...
Hobbies 1. doing sports 2. ...
Reasons 1. ...
提示：
1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明，可适当发挥；
2. 词数不少于80，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 不能出现真实的人名和地名。
Dear Chairman,
I am Li Hua, a student from class 1, Grade 3 in Guangming Middle School. I’d like to be a member of Student Union.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6．（2024·湖南株洲·一模）你校举办了主题为“Being thankful”的毕业晚会。请你根据以下的信息和提示为校报英语角写一篇报道。
Time ◆ from 7:00 pm to 8:30 pm, June 25th
Place ◆ the school music hall
Hosts ◆ Junjun and Yunyun
Topic ◆ Being thankful
Headmaster speech ◆ You’re the future
Performances ◆ Song Growing up I’ll do like you
◆ Poem reciting Teachers, you’re the diamonds in my heart
◆ Dance Fill in the campus with love
Feelings ◆ …
注意：
(1)词数80左右；
(2)开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(3)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
To celebrate our graduation and express our thanks for the past years, our school successfully organized a graduation party on June 25th.
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7．（2024·湖南湘西·一模）在新学期，学校打算增设一间学生活动室(student activity room)，同学们纷纷就活动室的用途开展了讨论。假如你是校报记者，请综合同学们的建议和你自己的意向，写一篇短文，向校报投稿。
要求：（1）介绍下表中的设想，并联系实际或发挥想象，补充自己的观点；
（2）80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（3）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
New Student Activity Room
The new term is here. Our school is going to set up one more student activity room. Different students have different ideas.
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8．（2024·湖南永州·一模）日本政府不顾国际社会的坚决反对，于2023年8月24日启动福岛核污染水排海，据统计，福岛核污水排海至少要持续30年，这将对全世界的海洋造成极大的污染。国际海洋日即将来临，假如你是李华，请根据以下表格和提示，以“Protecting Our Oceans from Pollution”为题，写一篇英语短文，呼吁大家保护我们的海洋环境。
What were the problems The ocean was polluted. More and more marine life (海洋生物) is dying from pollution.
What caused the problems Plastic waste, ships’ waste oil spills (泼洒) , chemicals from factories, nuclear wastewater. . .
What should we do Don’t throw rubbish into the sea. Stop factories from pouring chemical waste water. . . . . . .
要求：
1. 结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰；
2. 文中不得出现任何真实的人名，学校名等信息；
3. 不少于80个单词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：release排放 nuclear wastewater核污水 chemicals化学品
Protecting Our Oceans from Pollution
Our ocean is a vast and beautiful place, full of mysterious creatures and colorful coral reefs (珊瑚礁).
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9．（2024·湖南岳阳·二模）请根据要点提示写一篇英文短文，给学校英文杂志社投稿。
要点提示：
1. What’s your biggest problem in the past year
2. How did you solve it And what did you get from it
3. What’s your resolutions in the new year (At least 2 resolutions. )
注意：1.词数80以上，开头已给出，不计入总词数内； 2.不得出现真实姓名、班级等信息。
How time flies!
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10．（2024·湖南长沙·一模）根据要求完成短文写作。学校参加了国际志愿者项目（Global Volunteers），面向全校招募志愿者培养对象，请你结合以下提示，写一封申请邮件。
要求：
(1)短文必须包含提示中的所有要点，可适当发挥；
(2)80词左右（给出的开头内容不计入总词数）；
(3)不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I’d like to become a member of Global Volunteers.
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11．（2024·湖南长沙·一模）前任联合国秘书长安南指出，志愿精神的核心是服务、团结的理想和共同使这个世界变得更加美好的信念。这表达了人们对志愿服务的由衷赞美，同时也让志愿者的精神“奉献、友爱、互助、进步”深入人心。越来越多的中学生也加入到了志愿者的行列。在4月24日的“校园开放日”中，你非常幸运地与同学们一起担任了本次开放日的志愿者，参与了提前打扫校园、为来访的老师和家长们介绍学校、在课前引导他们去往公开课(open classes)的教室等活动。请你以“An Unforgettable Experience”为主题，用英语写一篇短文，分享你这次当志愿者的经历和收获，并呼吁同学们加入到志愿者行列为大家服务。写作要求：
1. 要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅；
3. 80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数，文中不得出现真实人名和校名）。
An Unforgettable Experience
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12．（23-24九年级下·湖南常德·期中）初中生活即将结束，你会迎来一个轻松且漫长的暑假，你有什么打算呢？请根据下图提示，以“My Summer Vacation Plan”为题，用英语写一篇短文， 谈谈你将如何安排假期，放松身心的同时，为将要到来的高中学习生活做准备。
要求：
1.短文必须包含图中的全部信息，并适当发挥；
2.词数：不少于80词（文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
My Summer Vacation Plan
The summer vacation is coming. Here are my plans for it. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All in all, I’m looking forward to spending a happy summer vacation.
13．（23-24九年级下·湖南长沙·期中）在春节热播电影《热辣滚烫》中，贾玲通过坚持不懈的努力，实现了自己的人生价值，过上了“热辣滚烫”的人生。作为九年级的学生，我们正需要不屈不挠的毅力，不断拼搏的勇气。坚持做好每一件小事，成为更好的自己。请以“How to Improve Myself”以题，根据以下提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿，参加学校的英语主题演讲活动。
要求：
1.应包含思维导图提供的所有信息，可适当发挥，使文章通顺、连贯；
2.80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称等信息。
Dear classmates,
It’s my honor to make a speech here ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
14．（23-24九年级下·湖南常德·期中）近日，学校Campus英语报正在举行以“My favourite photo taken in the school”为主题的英语征文比赛。请你选择在校园中拍摄的一张照片，简要描述其内容，并谈谈该照片对你的重要意义。注意：
（1）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
（2）词数：80左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I have collected some meaningful photos taken in the school. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
15．（2024·湖南长沙·二模）作为中国人，我们理应学好汉语。随着中国国际地位的提高，有部分人认为现在学好汉语就可以了，没有必要再学习英语了。你认为还需要学英语吗？近日，你校校园网英语论坛上正在开展以“Is it necessary to learn English ”为主题的讨论。请你写一篇英语短文，结合现在的社会现状和自身的经历，谈谈你的看法并给出相关建议。
提示：
（1）Is it necessary to learn English
（2）Why do you think so
（3）What advice can you give to the people who want to learn English well
要求：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
（3）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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参考答案：
1．例文
Dear John,
Thanks for your letter. I’m very glad to tell you something about the Chinese saying “Read 10,000 books and travel 10,000 miles. “
It means that it is important to read ten thousand books and walk ten thousand miles. It tells us that reading and travelling can make us learn more knowledge. I like reading because I can learn a lot from books. I usually read after I finish my homework or before I go to bed. I also like travelling. The visit to Beijing last year was my favorite trip. I visited the places of interest in Beijing and learned about its traditional culture. I really understand the meaning of “He who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man.”
Do you like travelling Have you ever been to China I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封回信；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括来信中所提要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍回信的目的，从而引出话题；
第二步，解释“读万卷书，行万里路。”的含义，并回答笔友来信中的问题；
第三步，表达期待。
［亮点词汇］
① places of interest 名胜古迹
② look forward to 期待
［高分句型］
① I like reading because I can learn a lot from books. (because引导原因状语从句)
② It tells us that reading and travelling can make us learn more knowledge. (宾语从句)
2．例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I have read the information about two families. And I have decided to live in the centre of London with the Green family. I chose them because they have a flat with Wi-Fi, which is good because I can use the internet to study and talk to my family at home. The Green family seems quiet and nice because they are an old couple with no children but have two dogs. I love dogs!
I know it costs more to stay with them, but I think it’s worth it because of the location and the peaceful home. This will help me focus on my studies and enjoy London too.
Thank you for helping me with my choice!
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：适当使用文中所给信息，做到逻辑合理，上下连贯，并且表述清楚理由。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山说明自己的决定并给出具体理由；
第二步，结合表格中所给信息，运用正确的句子表达表格中信息对于自身的某些发展有哪些好处；
第三步，解释选择价格更贵的的理由并给予对方所提供的帮助以感谢。
[高分词汇]
①seems quiet and nice 似乎是安静并好的
②it’s worth it它是值得的
③focus on my studies专注于我的学习
[亮点句型]
①I chose them because they have a flat with Wi-Fi, which is good because I can use the internet to study and talk to my family at home.（非限定性定语从句）
②I know it costs more to stay with them, but I think it’s worth it because of the location and the peaceful home.（宾语从句）
3．例文
I have noticed that some of my classmates are not achieving high study efficiency, though they are intelligent and hardworking. There are two reasons why they have these problems.
One possible reason for low study efficiency is the lack of focus when they study. For example, some students are easily distracted by their phones or social media while studying. Another reason is poor time management. Many students tend to leave their homework or studying until the last minute. Although they always finish their homework on time, they don’t do it carefully. To develop good study habits and improve study efficiency, it is important to address these issues. Firstly, it is crucial to create a suitable study environment. This can be done by turning off smartphones or placing them in a different room while studying. Additionally, planning specific study time each day and keeping it can help with time management. Breaking down tasks into smaller can also lead to better study habits. Seeking help from teachers or classmates can further enhance understanding and improve efficiency.
All in all, developing good study habits is essential for improving study efficiency.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明你或周边的朋友是否存在学习效率不高的问题；
第二步，分析出现学习效率不高的原因，并举例说明；
第三步，最后给出建议。
[亮点词汇]
① be the lack of缺乏
② on time准时
③ seek help寻求帮助
[高分句型]
①One possible reason for low study efficiency is the lack of focus when they study.（时间状语从句）
②Although they always finish their homework on time, they don’t do it carefully. （让步状语从句）
4．One possible version:
The Activity Week
Our school is going to hold “The Activity Week” next week. During the Activity week, we will be able to join three projects.
The first one is A Sports Day. In this project, we can play ping-pong, basketball and volleyball, which will help us keep healthy and feel relaxed. The second project is A Volunteer Day, in which we will clean the Hongshuiling Park and the Renmin Street. It will help protect the environment and make our life better. The last project is A Talent Show Day. This project can help improve ourselves by giving us a chance to sing and dance.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍“活动周”共有三个项目；
第二步，具体介绍“活动周”三个项目的内容与意义。
[亮点词汇]
①be able to do能够做
②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
In this project, we can play ping-pong, basketball and volleyball, which will help us keep healthy and feel relaxed.（定语从句）
5．例文
Dear Chairman,
I am Li Hua, a student from class 1, Grade 3 in Guangming Middle School. I’d like to be a member of Student Union.
I like doing sports, so I am quite healthy and fit. I like studying very much and often help my classmates with their lessons. I get on well with others, so I have many municating with others is one of my abilities. I think it’s very important as a member of Student Union. And I’d like to help others, too.
If I can be a member of Student Union, I’ll be able to make more friends. And I can do more for others.
I hope I can be received. Look forward to your answer.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据表格提示介绍自己爱好和能力；
第二步，介绍自己想加入的原因；
第三步，最后表达希望和期待。
[亮点词汇]
① help sb with sth帮助某人做某事
② get on well with sb和某人相处很好
③ be able to do sth能够做某事
[高分句型]
If I can be a member of Student Union, I’ll be able to make more friends.（条件状语从句）
6．Possible versions:
A
To celebrate our graduation and express our thanks for the past years, our school successfully organized a graduation party on June 25th. The event themed Being Thankful was hosted by Junjun and Yunyun in the school music hall.
From 7:00 p.m. to 8:30 p.m., we enjoyed several wonderful performances. I will never forget the heartfelt song, Growing up I’ll Do like You. The poem reciting called Teachers, You’re the Diamonds in My Heart, and the dance named Fill in the Campus with Love made us cry. The headmaster’s inspiring speech, You’re the Future, filled us with hope and encouragement.
As I watched the performances, I felt a deep sense of appreciation for all the people who have supported and guided me during my school years. I will always remember where I came from.
B
To celebrate our graduation and express our thanks for the past years, our school successfully organized a graduation party on June 25th. Its topic was Being Thankful, which was from 7:00 p.m. to 8:30 p.m. and was hosted by Junjun and Yunyun in the school music hall.
At the beginning of the party, the speech, You’re the Future, was delivered by our dear headmaster. Also, there were colorful shows. It was the song Growing up I’ll Do like You that encouraged us to meet a better self. What’s more, you could never imagine how great the poem is, Teachers, You’re the Diamonds in My Heart. Fill in the Campus with Love reminded us that the best things in life are free.
Behind these performances lies the true meaning of the party: we should never fail to be thankful to the people around us.
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To celebrate our graduation and express our thanks for the past years, our school successfully organized a graduation party on June 25th. Junjun and Yunyun hosted the party themed Being Thankful in our school music hall from 7:00 p.m. to 8:30 p.m..
At first, our headmaster gave a moving speech called You’re the Future, which touched us all deeply. After that, there were some amazing performances. The song, Growing up I’ll Do like You, and the poem reciting, Teachers, You’re the Diamonds in My Heart, reminded us of the important lessons we had learned from our teachers. Finally, an energetic dance named Fill in the Campus with Love ended the evening with a great cheer.
The party made us realize the value of our school memories and encouraged us to carry the spirit of being thankful into our future.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先介绍晚会的主题、时间、地点和主持人；
第二步，具体介绍晚会的内容，例如校长的演讲、歌曲表演、诗朗诵和舞蹈表演等；
第三步，书写结束语，表达晚会给自己的触动，比如要懂得感恩。
[亮点词汇]
①inspiring speech 鼓舞人心的演讲
②fill...with... 用……填满……
③encouragement 鼓励
④a deep sense of appreciation 深深的感激之情
[高分句型]
①As I watched the performances, I felt a deep sense of appreciation for all the people who have supported and guided me during my school years.（who引导的定语从句）
②I will always remember where I came from.（where引导的宾语从句）
7．例文
New Student Activity Room
The new term is here. Our school is going to set up one more student activity room. Different students have different ideas.
Some students want to set up a Reading Corner because they want to read different kinds of books and magazines. They think reading can open up eyes and enrich the after-school activities. Some students would like to open a Mini Workshop. They can design and make some models by hand in the club. Mini workshop can improve the practical abilities and learn to work with others.
I think we’d better make it a Release Room. Students may feel sad and helpless when meeting troubles in life. If these problems aren’t solved well, they may bring serious results. So it is important for them to have a room to release. Students can play enjoyable games, sing their favorite songs and chat with teachers in there.
I can’t wait to have a Release Room in our school. I believe students are looking forward to it as well!
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章开头已经给出，注意内容的衔接，内容应该包括表中的同学们的设想和自己的意见，不能遗漏信息，适当添加细节。
[写作步骤］
第一步，引出主题，建立一个新的活动室；
第二步，介绍同学们的建议；
第三步，介绍自己的设想；
第四步，表达期待。
[亮点词汇］
①set up建立
②want to想要
③by hand用手
④can’t wait to do sth. 迫不及待做某事
[高分句型］
①Some students want to set up a Reading Corner because they want to read different kinds of books and magazines. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②If these problems aren’t solved well, they may bring serious results. (if引导的条件状语从句)
③I believe students are looking forward to it as well! (省略that的宾语从句)
8．例文
Protecting Our Oceans from Pollution
Our ocean is a vast and beautiful place, full of mysterious creatures and colorful coral reefs (珊瑚礁). But now the ocean is polluted. More and more marine life is dying from pollution. Plastic waste, ship waste oil, factory chemicals, nuclear wastewater have led to increasingly severe marine pollution.
It’s our duty to protect the ocean. First of all, we should not pour the rubbish into the sea. Next, our government should take action to stop factories from pouring chemical waste water.
From my point of view, we should stop polluting the ocean from now on. We all need to raise awareness of these problems. It now becomes necessary for us to take action now.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“海洋是个美丽的地方”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述内容。介绍海洋环境被污染的原因及应采取哪些应对措施；
第三步，书写结语，呼吁大家保护海洋环境。
[亮点词汇]
①stop doing sth.停止做某事
②pour...into把……倒入
③take action采取行动
[高分句型]
①It’s our duty to protect the ocean.(it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语)
②But now the ocean is polluted.(一般现在时的被动语态)
9．例文
How time flies! My middle school life is coming to an end.
During the three years, my biggest problem was that I had too much homework. Homework seemed endless for me, which made me stay up late and feel very tired every day. How can I deal with the problem I concentrated more on my study in class and made homework plans. I did the homework as quickly as possible instead of being slow. As a result, I spent less time on homework, and I wasn’t worried any more. As we know, practice makes plaining or waiting can’t help. Instead we should be active to face our problems.
In the new year, I’m going to get a better grade in my study. The next resolution has something to do with improving the relationships with my parents. I will spend more time with them.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为一般过去时与一般将来时；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你最大的问题；
第二步，介绍如何解决问题以及自己的收获；
第三步，最后介绍自己的新年决心。
[亮点词汇]
①stay up熬夜
②deal with应对
③concentrated on专注于
[高分句型]
Homework seemed endless for me, which made me stay up late and feel very tired every day.（定语从句）
10．例文
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I’d like to become a member of Global Volunteers.
I really enjoy helping people and think volunteering is fun! I am good at organizing games and I love to teach others new things. At school, I help my classmates with their homework, and we often play sports together after classes. I think being a volunteer will let me help even more people and make new friends.
I also want to learn about other cultures and how kids in different countries live. I believe that being a part of Global Volunteers will teach me a lot and help me grow up to be a kind person who cares about the world.
Thank you for considering my application!
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示中的四个主要内容，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，介绍自己的兴趣爱好和能力；
②第二步，介绍自己的想法；
③第三步，说明自己希望加入的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②make friends交朋友
③learn about了解
[高分句型]
I believe that being a part of Global Volunteers will teach me a lot and help me grow up to be a kind person who cares about the world.（宾语从句，定语从句）
11．参考范文：
An Unforgettable Experience
Last April 24th, our school celebrated Open Day, and I had the wonderful opportunity to volunteer.
Starting early, my classmates and I cleaned and prepared our campus, feeling proud to create a welcoming environment. Later, I guided visiting parents and teachers, sharing our school’s history and student life. The highlight was leading them to open classes, witnessing their excitement and curiosity.
This experience taught me the joy of volunteering—it’s not just about helping others but also enriching ourselves. I encourage all my classmates to experience this fulfillment by joining volunteer efforts. Together, we can make a big difference!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己做了4月24日的“校园开放日”中志愿者；
第二步，具体分享自己这次当志愿者的经历和收获；
第三步，最后呼吁同学们加入到志愿者行列为大家服务。
[亮点词汇]
① not only...but also...不但……而且……
② encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
③ make a difference起作用
[高分句型]
Starting early, my classmates and I cleaned and prepared our campus, feeling proud to create a welcoming environment.（现在分词作状语）
12．例文
My Summer Vacation Plan
The summer vacation is coming. Here are my plans for it.
First, it’s important to have healthy eating habits. I’ll eat more fruit and vegetables, and try to eat less junk food. At the same time, I’ll keep exercising and get enough sleep every day. Second, I plan to take up some hobbies, like taking photos or playing the guitar. Besides, I’ll spend more time reading books to improve myself. And I’m going to try my best to practice English listening and speaking by watching English movies. If possible, I’ll travel with my friends. Last, I am going to help my parents with housework, such as doing the dishes, sweeping the floor and so on.
All in all, I’m looking forward to spending a happy and meaningful summer vacation.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍自己的暑假计划。
第三步，书写结语，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①and so on等等
②at the same time同时
③such as例如
[高分句型]
①First, it’s important to have health y eating habits.（it’s adj. to do sth句型）
②I’ll eat more fruit and vegetables, and try to eat less junk food. （并列句）
13．例文：
Dear classmates,
It’s my honor to make a speech here. The topic of my speech is How to Improve Myself.
As a ninth-grader, I believe we all have the desire to be better. Here are some tips that might help us achieve our goals. Firstly, make a plan. We should set specific and achievable goals for ourselves. Secondly, eat healthily. A balanced diet is essential for our physical and mental health. We should avoid junk food and sugary drinks and choose fruits, vegetables, and lean protein instead. Lastly, take exercise. Exercise is not only good for our physical health but also our mental health. It can reduce stress and improve our mood. We can join sports teams or go for a run in the park.
In conclusion, by making a plan, eating healthily, and taking exercise, we can improve ourselves in many aspects. Let’s take action and become the best version of ourselves.
Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明演讲主题，如何提升自己；
第二步，详细介绍如何提升自己的方法，包括制定计划、吃得健康、做运动等；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①set goals设定目标
②be essential for对……重要
③be good for对……有好处
④take action采取行动
[高分句型]
①As a ninth-grader, I believe we all have the desire to be better. (省略that的宾语从句)
②Exercise is not only good for our physical health but also our mental health. (not only…but also…句型)
14．例文
1
I have collected some meaningful photos taken in the school. Among them, one photo stands out the most. It shows a group of students gathered around a tree, having a gardening activity. In the photo, we are planting flowers and cleaning up the surrounding area.
This photo holds significant importance to me. It reminds me of the importance of teamwork and the influence we can make when we work together towards a common goal. Most importantly, this activity encourages us to make our school a greener and more beautiful place.
Every time I look at this photo, it fills me with a sense of pride and happiness, which brings me back to the most meaningful moment.
2
I have collected some meaningful photos taken in the school. Among them, there is one that holds a special place in my heart. In the photo, I am surrounded by my classmates, all cheering and smiling.
This photo is important to me because it reminds me of the strong connection and teamwork we share. It was a day filled with joy and excitement, and this photo is a beautiful memory of that time. It also reminds me of the importance of unity and support, both on the sports field and in life.
3
I have collected some meaningful photos taken in the school. Among them, there is one that holds special importance for me. In the photo, my friends and I are gathered under a tree, laughing and chatting during a sunny afternoon. It captures a moment of camaraderie and happiness, reflecting the strong bond we share as classmates.
This photo is important to me because it reminds me of the happy moments we’ve shared together in school. It stands for our priceless friendships and unforgettable memories. Whenever I look at this photo, it brings a smile to my face and fills my heart with warmth.
In short, this photo is a valuable moment of my school days, reminding me of the wonderful experiences and friendships that have enriched my life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：结合题干介绍在校园拍摄的一张照片的内容，并阐述该照片对自己的意义；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，收集了一些在学校拍摄的有意义的照片；
第二步，介绍某一张照片的内容；
第三步，谈谈该照片对自己的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①clean up 打扫
②remind sb. of ... 使某人想起……
③encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
①It reminds me of the importance of teamwork and the influence we can make when we work together towards a common goal.（定语从句，when引导的时间状语从句）
②Every time I look at this photo, it fills me with a sense of pride and happiness, which brings me back to the most meaningful moment.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
15．例文
Is it necessary to learn English With the rise of China’s international status, I think it is important to learn English well.
Learning English well can not only help you get good grades, but also help you communicate with foreign friends. Take myself for example. Last Saturday I met a foreigner who asked for directions on the road, but I couldn’t say exactly what I meant, so I couldn’t help him. Through this, I understand the importance of learning English well. If you want to learn English well, you can do many things, such as making word cards, reading English textbooks, studying with friends and so on.
Finally, I wish your English is getting better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，点明学习英语很重要。
第二步，具体介绍为什么自己觉得学好英语很重要以及对学好英语的一些建议。
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
① it is important to do sth.做某事很重要
②help sb. with sth.帮助某人做某事
③do word cards做单词卡片
[高分句型]
①Learning English well can not only help you get good grades, but also help you communicate with foreign friends.(not only...but also 不仅……而且……)
②If you want to learn English well, you can do many things, such as making word cards, reading English textbooks, studying with friends and so on.(If 引导的条件状语从句)

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