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2024年中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题速递(天津专用)
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书面表达12篇(天津名校模拟)
1．（2024·天津红桥·二模）请你根据以下提示，以“The Story of Wang Ping”为题，为学校广播站英语专栏写一篇短文，介绍发生在一位年轻的公交车司机王平身上的一件事。
(1)昨天上午九点王平驾驶公交车，看到有位老人躺在路边，旁边的女士在呼救。
(2)王平把车停住并下了车，他了解到老人有心脏病。
(3)王平告知乘客他必须将老人送到医院，所有乘客部同意。
(4)医生及时挽救了老入的生命。
(5)你认为……
参考词汇：呼救 shout for help； 心脏病 a heart problem
要求：
(1)词数：80～100个。
(2)题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
The Story of Wang Ping At 9:00 a.m. yesterday, Wang Ping was driving the bus along the road when ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．（2024·天津河北·二模）假如你是晨光中学的学生李华，请你根据以下要点，写一篇英文短文向你校英文校刊投稿，讲述你班同学张鹏夜遇火灾并冷静报警的事件经过，并表达自己的想法。
(1)上周二晚上同学张鹏发现他家附近的工厂出现了火情；
(2)他立刻拨打报警电话，报告准确的地址；
(3)其后、他大声呼叫附近居民快速离开；
(4)几分钟后消防队员赶到，成功扑灭了大火；
(5)转天，消防员来到学校，表扬了张鹏并送给他礼物；
(6)你认为……。
参考词汇： 消防队员 firefighter(s) 扑灭 put out 表扬 praise
要求：
(1)词数：80~100个；
(2)短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
A touching story
Last Tuesday night, my classmate Zhang Peng_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．（2024·天津西青·二模）本周我校校报开展了英文征文活动，活动的主题是用英文讲述发生在你身边的好人好事，请根据以下提示，完成一篇英文作文。
(1)两周前李明在踢球时腿受伤住院了；
(2)李明家庭困难无法支付住院费；
(3)班长李华决定号召同学筹钱帮助他；同学们积极参与；
(4)李华亲自把钱交到李明的父母手中，李明的父母非常感动；
(5)我认为……
参考词汇：号召 call on
要求：(1)词数：80～100个。
(2)开头已给出，不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全，行文连贯,，可适当发挥。
Two weeks ago, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．（2024·天津和平·二模）随着2024年春节档电影《热辣滚烫》的爆火，我们看到了主演贾玲减肥100斤的励志故事。科学减肥、健康生活的话题再次引起人们热议。在接受采访时，贾玲结合自身经历，给我们提出了几条建议。假如你是学校的小记者，请你将主要内容进行梳理。
1. 学会控制日常饮食，吃低脂的食物，像鱼肉，水果和蔬菜；
2. 多喝水，每天至少八杯水，不容易感到饥饿；
3. 选择适合自己的锻炼方式，比如跑步、游泳和瑜伽；
4. 合理计划时间，养成良好的生活习惯；
5. 要有坚强的意志；
6. 你的观点……。
参考词汇： diet 日常饮食 low-fat 低脂的 yoga 瑜伽
写作要求：
(1)不得使用真实姓名和学校名。
(2)包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
(3)字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚。
(4)词数80词左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数。)
With the success of YOLO (You Only Live Once)《热辣滚烫》, the topic of losing weight in a healthy way becomes hot again. During the interview, Jia Ling, the main role, gives us some advice. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．（2024·天津·一模）你是一名中学生，有时候厌烦父母的管教。但是父母出差后你独自生活的经历使你改变了观点。请根据以下提示信息写一篇作文。
要点如下：
(1)第一天放学后，吃零食、打游戏。
(2)第二天上学迟到，没吃早饭。
(3)没能交上作业，没力气玩耍。
(4)晚上烧糊了饭，切伤了手指。
(5)你明白了……
要求：
(1)词数：80～100个。
(2)结构合理，层次清楚。
(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
(4)开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Last week, my parents went away on business.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．（2024·天津河北·一模）假如你是李华，请你给英国笔友 Kevin写一封电子邮件，讲述你班同学王亮的一个感人故事，并谈谈感受。
(1) 上周六，王亮在街上拍着篮球，走过一个摆满花盆的架子；
(2) 不巧，他手中的篮球飞向花架，打碎了一个花盆；
(3) 他站在原地，思考片刻；
(4) 随后他把钱和纸条放在打碎的花盆下；
(5) 他在纸条上道歉并留下了电话号码；
(6) 你很感动……
参考词汇：拍 (球) pat
花盆 a flower pot
纸条 a slip of paper
要求：
(1) 词数：80—100个；
(2) 电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
(3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear Kevin,
How are you I’d like to share a story with you.
Last Saturday, my classmate Wang Liang _______________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Do you have a story to tell Hope to hear from you.
Li Hua
7．（2024·天津河东·一模）曾子曰：“吾日三省吾身：为人谋而不忠乎？与朋友交而不信乎？传不习乎？”习近平总书记演讲中多次引用这句话，告诫青少年要勇于面对自己的缺点，在学习中求真务实。怎样成为更好的自己？请你根据以下内容提示，以“How to be a better teenager”为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿，在毕业典礼上发言。
内容提示：
1.养成健康的生活习惯……；
2.学习有计划、有行动；
3.友善待人；
4.培养良好的兴趣爱好，参加志愿活动，比如清扫城市公园。
写作要求
1.内容必须包括所给要点，并适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3.文中不能出现真实的姓名、校名和地名；
4.不少于 90 词 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：培养爱好 take up hobbies；志愿活动 volunteer activity
How to be a better teenager
Hello, everyone! Today I’d like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager.
First of all, we should ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．（2024·天津南开·一模）为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，学校即将开展以“安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。
要点：
(1)遇到危险时，拨打报警电话求助。
(2)慎重交友，不随便与陌生人交谈。
(3)上网时，不要轻易告诉别人个人信息。
(4)如独自一人在家，要与家长保持联系。
(5) …… (补充一点)
参考词汇： casually 随便地
要求：
(1)词数：80～100个。
(2)短文的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear friends,
As students, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all.
Thank you.
9．（2024·天津南开·二模）假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔友Tony用英文写一封邮件，向他讲述一个发生在海河岸边的感人故事。
(1)上周日晚上，你在海河边散步。当时游人很多。
(2)你发现一个小女孩在哭。她与父母走散了。
(3)你一边安慰她一边打电话报警。
(4)警察最终找到了她的父母。
(5)她的父母非常感谢你，你认为……
参考词汇：安慰 comfort
要求：
(1)词数：80—100个。
(2)短文的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear Tony,
How are you I’d like to tell you a story that happened by the Haihe River.
Last Sunday evening, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Do you have a story to share Hope to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
10．（2024·天津河东·二模）假如你是光华中学初三2班的学生李华，你经常用英语给你的笔友Tony写信，请根据以下要点，给Tony写一封信介绍上周班里发生的一些情况，并表达自己的看法。
（1）上周一，班里来了一名叫王明的新同学，个子很高，戴着眼镜。
（2）课上回答老师问题时，他的口音让一些同学哄堂大笑；他很紧张，没能回答出问题，感到害羞；老师鼓励了他。
（3）下课后很多同学对他微笑，并主动提供帮助，与他交朋友。
（4）你认为……
参考词汇：口音 accent
要求：
（1）词数：80～100个；
（2）信的格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear Tony,
How are you! I am writing to tell you something in my class. Last Monday, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I am looking forward to your letter.
Yours,
Li Hua
11．（2024·天津河西·一模）你的学校近期开辟英文专栏，征集发生在大家身边的感人故事。请你以“The story of Xiaochen”为题，根据以下提示，为该专栏投稿，讲述发生在你班同学小晨身上的故事。
(1)去年一个冬天的晚上，下起了大雪。小晨在回家的路上，看见一位司机遇到了困难，车子在大雪中无法移动。
(2)小晨立刻上前帮忙推车，但是车子太重， 一直无法移动。
(3)小晨没有放弃，最终和警察一起帮助司机摆脱了困境。
(4)司机非常感动，向小晨和警察道谢。小晨也被授予了“河西好人”的称号。
(5)我们为小晨感到骄傲，你的看法和体会是……
参考词汇：感动的 be moved；摆脱困境 get out of the trouble；被授予 be titled ；“河西好人” “Good Person of Hexi”
要求：
1. 词数：80-100个
2. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥
The story of Xiaochen
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12．（2024·天津滨海新·一模）上周五你们学校举办了“话说中国节(Festivals in China)”的活动。假如你是学校校报英语专栏的小记者，请根据以下要点写一篇英文报道，介绍此活动。
（1）活动于上周五晚上在英语俱乐部举办。
（2）学校邀请了在津学习的两名外国学生参加了这次活动。
（3）历史老师介绍了许多中国节日，包括它们的起源、背景和习俗。
（4）活动期间，一些学生们学剪纸、做灯笼；还有一些学包饺子。
（5）你觉得……
要求：
（1）词数：80~100个。
（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
参考词汇：起源：origin 背景：background 习俗：custom 剪纸：paper cuttings
Last Friday, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
1．例文
The Story of Wang Ping
At 9:00 a.m. yesterday, Wang Ping was driving the bus along the road when he found an old man lying on the side of the road. A woman next to him was shouting for help. Wang Ping stopped the bus without thinking twice and got out. He knew that the old man had a heart problem. He told the passengers that he must take the old man to the hospital immediately. To his surprise, all the passengers agreed with him. Thanks to Wang Ping, the old man was saved by the doctors in time.
As far as I’m concerned, Wang Ping, a young driver, has set a good example for us. We are supposed to learn from them and help others if necessary.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先叙述公交车司机王平救人的经过；
第二步，谈谈自己对这件事的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①without thinking twice毫不犹豫地
②to one’s surprise令某人惊讶的是
③agree with sb认同某人
④set a good example树立好榜样
[高分句型]
①At 9:00 a.m. yesterday, Wang Ping was driving the bus along the road when he found an old man lying on the side of the road.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②He knew that the old man had a heart problem.(宾语从句)
2．例文
A touching story
Last Tuesday night, my classmate Zhang Peng noticed that the factory near his house was on fire. Immediately, he called the police for help and reported the exact address of the factory.
After that, he shouted so loudly that the people who lived near the factory could leave as quickly as possible. A few minutes later, the firefighters arrived and they put out the fire. They also gave him some presents because of his brave actions successfully. The next day, the firefighters came to our school in order to praise Zhang Peng.
From my point of view, I am deeply touched by what Zhang Peng has done. He is such a brave and wise boy that we should learn from him. If everyone cares about others, our whole society will be better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体说明张鹏夜遇火灾并冷静报警的事情；
第二步，具体描述过程；
第三步，最后表达自己的想法。
[亮点词汇]
① put out扑灭
② because of因为
③ from my point of view依我看
[高分句型]
①After that, he shouted so loudly that the people who lived near the factory could leave as quickly as possible.（结果状语从句，定语从句）
②I am deeply touched by what Zhang Peng has done.（宾语从句）
3．范文：
Two weeks ago, Li Ming, one of my classmates, hurt his legs while he was playing football. His legs hurt too badly to walk. So he had to be in hospital. What’s worse, Li Ming’s family was so poor that they couldn’t afford the cost. After hearing this, our monitor Li Hua decided to call on our classmates to raise money to help Li Ming. Each of us took an active part in giving money. Soon Li Hua raised enough money. When he gave the money to Li Ming’s parents, they were moved a lot.
I believe that the world is what you think it is. If we are always ready to help others, our world will surely become more beautiful!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据提示，讲述发生在自己身边的好人好事；
第二步，介绍自己对此的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①too…to太……而不能
②be in hospital住院
③call on号召
④raise money募款
⑤take an active part in积极参与
[高分句型]
What’s worse, Li Ming’s family was so poor that they couldn’t afford the cost. (so…that引导结果状语从句)
4．例文
With the success of YOLO (You Only Live Once)《热辣滚烫》, the topic of losing weight in a healthy way becomes hot again. During the interview, Jia Ling, the main role, gives us some advice.
First of all, we should learn to control our diet and it’s a good idea to eat some low-fat food, like fish, fruit and vegetables. Besides, we had better drink more water. She advises us to drink at least eight cups of water so that we won’t feel hungry easily. And remember the ways of exercise we choose must be fit for us, such as running, swimming and doing yoga. Also, don’t forget to plan our time properly, so we can get into good living habits. Above all, it’s necessary that we have a strong will to keep doing it.
As far as I’m concerned, we can achieve success as long as we stick to the end. Losing weight is certainly good for our health, but remember to do it in a scientific way.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据所给主要内容提示具体介绍科学减肥、健康生活的建议；
第二步，表达自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
① first of all首先
② advise sb to do sth建议某人做某事
③ such as比如
④ above all最重要的
⑤ as far as I’m concerned就我而言
[高分句型]
①She advises us to drink at least eight cups of water so that we won’t feel hungry easily. （目的状语从句）
②Above all, it’s necessary that we have a strong will to keep doing it.（it作形式主语）
5．例文
Last week, my parents went away on business. I had to live by myself. On the first day, I ate snacks and played games happily after school. And the next day, things got worse. I was late for school and had no time to eat breakfast. I didn’t hand in my homework in time. I felt so tired that I had no energy to play. Unfortunately, I burned my meal and cut my finger. It was really a bad day. I realized that I couldn’t have a nice day without my parents.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示内容适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写作背景介绍；
第二步，介绍父母出差后独自生活的经历；
第三步，介绍独自生活的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①on business出差
②by oneself独自
③be late for迟到
④hand in上交
[高分句型]
①I felt so tired that I had no energy to play. (so...that...引导的结果状语从句)
②I realized that I couldn’t have a nice day without my parents.(that引导的宾语从句)
6．例文
Dear Kevin,
How are you I’d like to share a story with you.
Last Saturday, my classmate Wang Liang was patting the basketball on the street while he was walking past a shelf with lots of flower pots. Unfortunately, the basketball flew towards a pot so hard that the pot was broken into pieces. He stood there and thought about what to do for a moment. Then he put some money and a slip of paper under the pot which he broke just now. He apologised to the owner and left his mobile phone number.
I’m deeply touched by what he has done. I think he was honest and brave enough to pay for his action. He sets such a good example that we should learn from him. If everyone takes a simple step, our society will be better and better.
Do you have a story to tell Hope to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章应该包括所列6个方面的要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，分享一个感人的故事，从而引出话题；
第二步，讲述故事的经过；
第三步，表达自己的感受；
第四步，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
① break into pieces 破成碎片
② set a good example 树立好榜样
[高分句型]
① Last Saturday, my classmate Wang Liang was patting the basketball on the street while he was walking past a shelf with lots of flower pots. (while引导时间状语从句)
② I think he was honest and brave enough to pay for his action. (宾语从句)
7．One possible version
How to be a better teenager
Hello, everyone! Today I’d like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager.
First of all, we should develop healthy living habits. We can run for half an hour every day to keep healthy. What’s more, we should make a study plan and take actions to achieve it. The more knowledge we learn, the brighter future we will have. And we had better be friendly to others. When others need help, We should try our best to help them. Finally, it is good to take up good hobbies and take part in volunteer activities, such as cleaning the city park.
In a word, if we try our best, we will become better and better.
Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，借用“如何成为一个更好的青少年”的话题来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述怎样成为一个更好的青少年；
第三步，书写结语，表达“我们会变得越来越好”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be friendly to sb对某人友好
②take up培养
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
①The more knowledge we learn, the brighter future we will have. (the+比较级，the+比较级句式)
②In a word, if we try our best, we will become better and better. (if引导的条件状语从句)
8．例文
Dear friends,
As students, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe Here is some advice.
Firstly, we must call the police for help when we are in danger. Secondly, be careful to make friends online and don’t talk to strangers casually. Thirdly, don’t give personal information to others when surfing the Internet. Fourthly, if you are alone at home, keep in touch with your parents. What’s more, we must follow the traffic rules and pay attention to the food safety. Don’t eat too much junk food. In a word, we must always keep safety all the time.
That’s all.
Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出下文的建议；
第二步，根据要点提示具体描述如何自我保护。
[亮点词汇]
①in danger处于危险中
②personal information个人信息
③what’s more此外
[高分句型]
①Firstly, we must call the police for help when we are in danger.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Fourthly, if you are alone at home, keep in touch with your parents.（if引导的条件状语从句）
9．例文
Dear Tony,
How are you I’d like to tell you a story that happened by the Haihe River.
Last Sunday evening, I took a walk with our parents by the sea. There were many tourists there. At that time, I found a little girl crying loudly because she was separated from her parents. So I comforted her and called the police. The police finally found her parents. Her parents thank me very much. From my point of view, I am very happy to help the little girl. We should do what we can to help those people in need. We should pass love. As the old saying goes, give someone a rose and leave a lingering fragrance in your hand.
Do you have a story to share Hope to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写作意图开头已给出，写作时可直接描写发生在海河岸边的感人故事。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“时间”、“地点”以及“具体的故事”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。
第三步，书写结语，表达感受和期望。
[亮点词汇]
①take a walk with sb.和某人一起散步
②by the sea在海边
③At that time在那时
④be separated from与……分离
⑤From my point of view在我看来
⑥As the old saying goes正如谚语所说
[高分句型]
①At that time, I found a little girl crying loudly because she was separated from her parents. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②We should do what we can to help those people in need. (what引导的宾语从句)
③As the old saying goes, give someone a rose and leave a lingering fragrance in your hand. (祈使句)
10．例文
Dear Tony,
How are you! I am writing to tell you something in my class. Last Monday, a new classmate came to our class. His name is Wang Ming. He is tall and wears glasses. In Chinese class, Miss Wu asked him to answer the questions. He was too shy and his accent made some classmates burst into laughter. He was too nervous to answer questions. Miss Wu encouraged him. After class, many classmates smiled at him. They offered to help him and made friends with him.
In my opinion, we should get along well with our classmates and be ready to help others because helping others is helping ourselves.
I am looking forward to your letter.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏任何要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍新同学的情况；
第二步，具体介绍在课堂上发生的事情；
第三步，表达自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①ask sb. to do sth. 要求某人做某事
②burst into laughter 突然大笑
③too...to... 太……而不能……
④make friends with sb. 与某人交朋友
⑤get along well with sb. 与某人相处融洽
⑥in my opinion 依我看来
⑦be ready to 准备好做某事
[高分句型]
①In my opinion, we should get along well with our classmates and be ready to help others because helping others is helping ourselves. (and并列句；because引导的原因状语从句；动名词作主语与表语)
11．例文
The story of Xiaochen One winter night last year, it snowed heavily. On his way home, Xiaochen saw a driver in trouble. The car could not move in the heavy snow. Xiaochen immediately stepped forward to help push the car, but the car is too heavy to move. Xiaochen did not give up and eventually worked with the police to help the driver out of trouble. The driver was very moved and thanked Xiaochen and the police. Xiaochen was also titled as “Good Person of Hexi”.
We are proud of Xiaochen. I should learn from him and help the people in need.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍故事发生的经过；
第二步，介绍自己的看法和体会。
[亮点词汇]
①heavily大量地
②on one’s way home在回家的路上
③immediately立即
④step forward上前
⑤give up放弃
⑥out of trouble摆脱困境
[高分句型]
Xiaochen immediately stepped forward to help push the car, but the car is too heavy to move.(too…to句型)
12．例文
Last Friday, our school held an activity called “Festivals in China”.
It was held at the English Club last Friday evening. Our school invited two foreign students studying in Tianjin to participate in the activity. Our history teacher introduced many Chinese festivals, including their origins, backgrounds and customs. During the activity, some students learned to cut paper and make lanterns. Others learned to make dumplings.
I think “Festivals in China” was a great success and all of us learned a lot from it. I hope there will be more and more activities like that.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出对活动的介绍；
第二步，具体介绍活动内容；
第三步，表达自己的看法，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①participate in 参加
②learn to do sth 学习做某事
③more and more 越来越多
[高分句型]
①Our history teacher introduced many Chinese festivals, including their origins, backgrounds and customs.（并列结构）
②I think “Festivals in China” was a great success and all of us learned a lot from it.（省略that的宾语从句和并列句）

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