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On the bus
Give the passage：
Give the passage：
第一步：搞清楚文章中的“5W1H”
Who
When
Where
Why
What
How
I 、a young guy（he/him）、many passenagers（they/them）
On a cold December moring in 2020
on a bus
go back to my homwtown
the bus broke down and I had to go to another bus with four big bags.
waited for next bus
Story mountain
conflict
build up
beginning
resolution
ending
雨很大，水打湿了我的笔记本电脑，他腾了一个塑料袋给我
车坏了。我不得不挪到另外一个车，可是我行李很多，并且乘客也很多
第二步：画故事山，定主题（乐于助人）
我坐车回家，遇到了一名男子，他和我交谈
这个男人帮助我成功地坐上了车
因为男人的善意表达感谢，对人生又充满了希望
catious
sheeplish “thank”
worried、helpless
happy、thankful
第三步：开始推理，定主题句
2.This unforgettable experience was carved into my heart and nothing would be able to erase it!
Theme-kindness/help
1.It was his kindness that taught me the value of helping, which I could treasure forever!
3.What happened today made me perceive that helping is a kind of virtue and only a little kindness can light something shining making the world more beautiful and harmonious!
4.Sometimes, a small action of kindness may be helpful enough to make a huge difference.
第四步：开始推理，推理出第一段的最后一句
As the bus left for my hometown, I looked around for the guy.
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1. 我上车了
2. 上了车的情绪描写
第五步：开始推理，推理出第一段的内容
As the bus left for my hometown, I looked around for the guy.
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1. 我上车了
2. 上了车的情绪描写
1.没上车时的情绪？
2.怎么上的车？
3.这个男人起了什么作用？
第六步：开始推理，推理出第二段的内容
As the bus left for my hometown, I looked around for the guy.
1. 我上车了
2. 上了车的情绪描写
1.没上车时的情绪？
2.怎么上的车？
3.这个男人起了什么作用？
1. 找到了吗？
2.在车里还是车外？
1.在车里的话？面对面对话
2.在车外的话，对着他大声说
情绪带入
第七步：作文展示
第七步：作文展示
第七步：作文展示
第八步：范文展示
When the bus finally arrived, it had many passengers already.
I was wondering whether I could go on the bus with these four big bags. It seemed that there wasn’t enough space for us. Hopeless and frustrated, I signed heavily, took a deep breath and waited for the coming bus. Seeing that, the guy walked to me and said,”Don’t worry, I will help you get on it.” Hearing his words, I was curious about how he made it. When the door opened, he rushed into the bus, and opened the windows immediately, yelling to me loudly,”Hand me the bags!” Without even thinking, I gave him my bags and I rushed into the bus quickly.It was crowded on the bus, but at least I got on it.
As the bus left for my hometown, I looked around for the guy.
He did me such a favor, and ! should say thanks to him. However, reminded by another passenger, I found that he was on the side of the road, waving goodbye to me. I came to the window and shouted to him, "What's your name " The guy smiled but didn't reply. The bus bumped its way slowly down the road while his figure gradually faded away and my heart couldn't be calm for a long time. We do have to meet hard experiences sometimes, but we can still expect kindness and warmth.
谢谢，再见！

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