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2024年中考英语写作热点话题
问题及建议课件
素养解读
每个人的生活中都会遇到困惑和难题。当我们遇到的问题时，我们应该学会勇敢面对，
积极反省，找出解决方案；当我们周围的朋友遇到问题时，我们应该热心解答，积极地给出
合理建议。这样我们才会更好地适应未来的生活。
考点分析
问题建议类文章多以说明文（介绍）、记叙文或应用文（写建议信等）为主。介绍的对
象会涉及到方方面面，比如环境污染、保护动物等社会问题和青少年的心理或情感问题等。
提出建议的层面通常包括个人（青少年/老师/父母等）和组织（学校/政府/相关部门）等。
中考预测:
“12355 青年之声”是共青团的青少年权益服务平台，提供心理咨询、法律帮助、困难
支持、考试减压和自护教育等服务。假设你的身份是“12355 青年之声”平台的志愿者李
华，你在 12355 服务站树洞邮箱收到一封来自中学生 Mike 的邮件，请阅读邮件内容并进行
回复。
From Mike To Li Hua
Subject Finding Balance in Our Busy Lives
Dear Li Hua,
How’s everything going Because the exams are around the corner, I'm feeling stressed out. I wonder if you have a busy life. Did you have an experience about how to relax from the busy life Can you give me some advice to relax
要求：
1. 词数不少于 100 词； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名 校名。 常考词语：balance 平衡
审题
1. 人称：第一人称（谈论自己的生活和放松方式的经历）
/ 第二人称（给出建议）
2. 时态：一般现在时（谈论自己生活和给出建议）
/ 一般过去时（放松的经历）
3. 体裁：记叙文&应用文
4. 主题：心理健康和放松方式……
范文 Dear Mike,
I’m sorry to know that you’re stressed out. I am as busy as you. ①With exams coming, I am under much pressure as well. I have to get up early to rush to school. ②The teachers speak so quickly that I must be more careful to follow them. When I get home, there is still a lot of homework to do. ③I often stay up late to review my lessons. But I’ve also learned to find ways to relax.
Last week, I was having a lot of stress ④because of the exam preparation. Therefore, I went out to take a walk in the park. When I got tired, I sat on the grass and saw the birds flying around. ⑤At that moment, I felt much better.
As for the advice I can give you, you can choose something you like to relax, such as listening to music, playing sports, drawing pictures and so on.
Best wishes!
Yours,
亲爱的迈克，
听说你感到压力很大，我很难过。我和你一样也很忙碌。随着考试的临近，我也承受着很大的压力。我每天都要早早起床去上学。老师讲得很快，我必须更加仔细才能跟上他们。放学回到家，还有很多作业要做。我经常熬夜复习功课。但我也学会了寻找放松的方法。
上个星期，我因为准备考试感到很大的压力。因此，我出去公园散步。当我感到疲倦时，我坐在草地上，看着鸟儿在周围飞翔。那一刻，我感觉好多了。
至于我能给你的建议，你可以选择一些喜欢的方式来放松自己，比如听音乐、运动、画画等等。
祝一切顺利！
范文二 Dear Mike,
①Hearing that you’re having a hard time, I feel so sorry and worried.With the exams approaching, I have a busy life as well. ②In order to get better grades, I get up early to rush to school and spend more time doingexercises. I often stay up late to review my lessons. Even on weekends, I have many classes. ③Despite this, I still find ways to relax.
Last week, due to the exam preparation, I felt so stressed out that I couldn’t keep calm to study. Therefore, I made a decision to take a walk in the park. Feeling tired, I sat on the grass and looked up the blue sky ④dotted with cute clouds, which made me relaxed and felt better. And then I could put in more effort to study.
⑤When it comes to ways to relax, I’d like to suggest that you should take up some hobbies like painting, singing, playing sports. It’s also a good choice to just sit without thinking about anything. I do hope that you feel better soon.
Best wishes!
练习一
Jack 是一名九年级的学生,最近迷上手机游戏经常玩到深夜,睡眠不足,不能认真听讲,导致成绩下降。妈妈很生气,不再让他使用手机。假如你是他的朋友 Tina,请你写一封信给他,建议他要合理使用手机.如查阅资料,记单词等。同时,考试在即,要理解父母、老师的心情,要主动去沟通,得到他们的原谅和帮助。要求:包含所给要点,语言流畅,意思连贯,适当拓展:
词数 80 词左右:开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇: become poor in study; get angry with; com-municate with ; forgive
(高分范文)
Dear Jack ,
I am sorry to hear that you quarreled with your par-ents about playing mobile phone games. I will give yousome advice about this.
You spent so much time playing games that you forgot when to sleep and you felt too sleepy to listen to theteachers in class the next day. In the long term , youbecame poor in your study. Your mother got angry withyou. You felt bad about this.Firstly , I think you should stop playing games.Y oucan use mobile phone to search for information and memorize new words. Secondly, you need to communicate with your parents and teachers , and let them knowyour problems. They will help you. At the same timethey will forgive you for your mistakes.
I hope my suggestions are helpful to you.
Yours ,Tina
练习二 假如你是 Jake,你的朋友李林给你写信称自己就是否应该住学校宿金感到很矛盾。请你用英语给李林写封回信,谈谈你的观点
提示语:get along withlook afterspend more time on...communicate with..
高分范文)
Dear Li Lin .
How is everything going I am so happy to hear fromyou. As for me, I prefer to live in school
First of all, living with roommates can make youlearn how to get along with others. Also , you can learnhow to look after yourself. What's more , you can spendmore time on study. When you are free , you may havemore time reading books in the library. Last but not theleast, roommates can bring you happiness and driveaway the loneliness. When you live alone , you will haveno one to talk to. No one shares your sorrow and happiness. We are human beings , and we need to communicate with others. So I advise you to live in school
Best wishes !
Y ours ,Jake
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How to Deal with the Exam Stress
We students are very busy with schoolwork and in the face of many exams every school day. Everyone may have the exam stress. A little stress can be good for us. If we have proper stress, we can think actively and work harder. So we can pass the exam easily.
However, if we have too much stress, we can’t sleep well at night and we may feel tired or sleepy in class. We may be afraid of exams too much and fail in the end.
In my opinion, we’d better plan and prepare everything well to deal with stress. We should also have some good habits.
For example, we can exercise more and eat healthy food, especially fresh vegetables and milk. Also we must have enough sleep and listen to soft music. Then we’ll feel relaxed and do well in exams.
We need a good sleep
As we know, most of us students don’t have enough sleep. As a result some feel sleepy in class. That’s because we often have too much homework to do and we have to stay up late. On the other hand, some of us don’t have a good living habit, like being crazy about playing computer games at night. It’s also the reason why they don’t sleep well.
To solve the problems and improve our sleep, we should do something and have some charges. First, schools should make a particular timetable for sleep, and teachers should reduce our homework. We can be given talks about the knowledge of sleep.Second, our parents should urge us to go to bed on time and not stay up late, They also can make us a warm and comfortable sleeping place. Finally, as students, we should plan out time carefully and try to finish our homework at school. Moreover we can do some exercise in the day time, it can help us sleep well.
I hope all of us can have a good sleep and grow up healthily.
I know your problems and recent situation through the last conversation. Faced with the long online courses in the past and the coming exams, you felt a lot of pressure. Here are some suggestions for you.
First, you should learn to relax yourself. You can listen to some music or do something you feel comfortable. Next, you should do some sports every day. Sports can make you feel relaxed. At last, smile at yourself every day. It helps you keep happy.
It’s very common that everyone can meet difficulties in the life. I hope my suggestions can give you some help.

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