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2024年高考英语写作读后续写之亲情感悟类
亲情感悟类
第一类是相亲相爱的锦上添花，比如纪念重要日子（如举办惊喜生日派对，送生日礼物，母亲节，父亲节等）和父亲教孩子学习新技能，孩子为长辈解决困难。这一类整体基调是快乐的，积极的，充满爱的。最后加上收获，开心，感恩等。
第二类是解决小误会小矛盾的握手言和，如：亲子之间缺乏沟通，父母把自己的意志强加给子女，子女觉得父母做法不对，孩子想要帮父母却帮倒忙等。续写往往要求考生能够用续写原文的伏笔，让冲突得到化解，化解可以是弥补，解释，道歉，回忆等。如果是亲人间的矛盾、误会，结尾往往会亲人间冰释前嫌，握手言和。
矛盾塑造（尴尬+紧张）
So nervous was he that （他太紧张了）he dropped the electric carving knife.
2.I got into a panic（ 陷入惊慌之中）as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use.
3. Sweating and nearly tearing（汗流浃背，眼泪差点流下来）, I could imagine how silly and strange I was at that moment based on the continuing laughter from my parents and Jason.
3.她立刻涨红了脸，感到尴尬几乎把她整个包围起来。
Blushing scarlet instantly, she felt embarrassment almost wreathed her entirely.
快乐结局塑造（感激+开心）
1. 他们耸了耸肩，咧着嘴笑，这就驱散了她的一切烦恼，给了她安慰。
They shrugged and grinned, which dissipated all her distress and consoled her.
2.谢谢。她紧紧抓住打开的袋子，充满了感激和温暖。
‘Thanks.’ Clinging her hands to the bag opening, she was overwhelmed by a surge of gratitude and warmth.
3.这两个强壮的陌生人点亮了她的一天。
The two strong strangers undoubtedly lit her day up.
We all jumped to our feet, dancing and screaming with joy（开心得欢呼雀跃）.
5. Though I was dissatisfied with my ugly gesture and stupid image, I was satisfied with the happiness and fun that I brought to others（对我带给别人的快乐和乐趣感到满意）.
6. 她停了下来，心中洋溢着欢快的心情，拿出一把硬币，扭头把它们攥在他们的手里，尽管两个男人的表情都很惊讶。Brimming over with bright feeling and joy, she stopped, fished out a handful coins and tuned around to squeeze them in their fists despite two men's astonished expression.
情感升华（感悟+感动）
1. It was Henry's kindness that made me feel the warmth of our family. I will treasure it with all my heart.
正是亨利的善良让我感受到了我们家庭的温暖。我会用心珍惜它的。
2. I keep the little plane as a reminder of my daughter's love and also the power of words.
我留着这架小飞机，以提醒女儿对我的爱和语言的力量。
3. Every time I faced challenges, a thought of giving up flashed in my mind, but the support of my family gave me the strength to keep going.
每次面对挑战，我都想放弃，但是家人的支持给了我继续前进的力量。
4. The warm golden sunlight, flooding in through the window, together with love between my family, warmed us.
透过窗户的温暖的金色阳光，和我们家人之间的爱，温暖了我们。
5. From then on, the three chocolates rang the alarm in his heart every time he intended to lie, reminding him to be honest.
从那以后，每当他打算撒谎的时候，那三颗巧克力就会在他心里敲响警钟，提醒他要诚实。
写作练习 A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 am. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式作答。
Paragraph 1:As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.

Paragraph 2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.

原创范文赏析
Paragraph 1:As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.Knowing what they were preparing for, he was greatly surprised. So immediately, he offered to get involved in the kids’ job. Firstly, he put the pot of porridge on a gentle heat, asking Jeff to watch out for it going for fifteen minutes. And then, he asked Jenna to break another two eggs and mix them with milk. With all preparations done, they started to fry bread together. In a flash, sweet smell filled the air in the kitchen. To their delight, the breakfast was a success in the end.
Paragraph 2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. She blinked in surprise as she saw the two of them standing at her bedside, holding a tray with a breakfast that was now perfectly cooked. The French toast was golden and crispy, and the chicken porridge was steaming and aromatic. Their mother's eyes welled up with tears of joy and gratitude as she realized the effort they had put into making her day special. As they all sat together, savoring the meal and the moment, the twins knew that despite the initial mess, their Mother's Day surprise had turned out to be a heartwarming success.
2024年高考冲刺好题
读后续写--奶奶的圣诞节礼物
It was Christmastime 1974. I was ten years old, but I was not looking forward to Christmas. The previous spring my mother had moved our family from rural Alabama to sunny Southern California. My little brother Todd, and I were leaving behind all of our extended family. This would be my first Christmas away from Alabama.
I was a fat, awkward child with a high-pitched voice and a heavy southern accent. My first day at my new school, I went to the front of my fourth grade class to introduce myself. All I said was my name and where I was from. The class burst into laughter with jeers of “He talks funny”. It took the teacher two minutes to restore order.
I was so disappointed that I went to a gas station afterschool and used the phone booth (亭子) there to place a call to my grandmother. I was going to ask her whether I could return to Alabama and live with her and whether she would send me the money for a bus ticket home. But the line was busy, and despite several attempts, I didn’t get through.
My Granny was everything good about Christmas. Her language of love was food. She would spend weeks cooking for Christmas Eve when all of her children and grandchildren would gather at her house. Every favorite dish dessert and cakes was made. Her table and sideboard groaned (发吱嘎声) under the weight of the food. My cousins, my brother and I would burst through her backdoor, our arrival announced by the rhyme of five silver bells, which hung on the door. Her house was tiny but to us children, it was glorious.
She sewed new night dresses for all of her grandchildren. She searched catalogs, newspaper advertisements, and stores all over town to get us exactly the toys we had requested. She was my comfort. She was magical. I missed her desperately.
Fortunately, there was only one week left before the Christmas break. I was longing for my familiar southern Christmas.
注意：1.续写的词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1首句:The next morning, a large enough package from Granny was delivered to our new house.

Paragraph 2首句:Just then the phone rang.

原创范文欣赏
Paragraph 1:
The next morning, a large enough package from Granny was delivered to our new house. I could hardly contain my excitement as I tore open the brown paper wrapping. Inside, I found a treasure trove of homemade delights: jars of her famous peach preserves, a tin of chocolate chip cookies just like the ones she baked every Christmas, and a beautifully embroidered tablecloth with our family's initials. There were also small gifts for my brother and me, including a hand-knitted sweater that felt like a warm hug from Granny herself.But the most precious item was a letter, filled with her loving words and reassurances that she was with us in spirit, no matter how many miles lay between us.

Paragraph 2:
Just then the phone rang. Racing to pick it up, I heard my grandmother's familiar, comforting voice on the other end. She spoke of her love and how she had been preparing for our visit, despite the distance. Her words were like a balm to my homesick heart, and I could almost taste the sweetness of her cooking and feel the warmth of her embrace. She told me about the plans she had made for our Christmas reunion and how she had been talking to the other relatives about us. As we chatted, I could hear the joy in her voice, and it was as if the miles between Alabama and California had melted away. The call ended with her reminding me of the true spirit of Christmas, which was not about the place but the love we shared. With a lighter heart and a renewed sense of anticipation for the holiday, I hung up the phone, ready to embrace this new chapter of our family's Christmas story.

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