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2024年高考英语写作读后续写|主题升华高频万能句
今日主题—成长与改变（高考超高频）
1.In the journey of life, growth and progress are our constant companions. Let's embrace challenges and make every step count.在人生的旅途中，成长和进步是我们永恒的伙伴。让我们拥抱挑战，每一步都走得有意义。
2.As the old saying goes, “Honesty is the best policy./No pains, no gains./A promise is a promise.”俗话说：“诚实是上策。/没有付出就没有收获。/言出必行。”
3.If you work hard, your efforts will pay off sooner or later.如果你付出努力，迟早会获得回报。
4.Opportunities always come to those who are prepared.机会青睐有准备的人。
5.The unforgettable experience has totally changed me, giving me a new life and hope.（非谓语）这次难忘的经历彻底改变了我，给了我新生和希望。
6.There is no doubt that it has become the most unforgettable experience, which I will cherish for ever in the rest of my life！
毫无疑问，这已经成为我一生中最难忘的经历，我余生将永远珍惜。
7.It was his brave heart and strong faith that could make something unusual happen finally.（强调句）正是他勇敢的心和坚强的信念，最终会让一些不寻常事情发生。
8.Through him, I learned having an unflagging spirit could overcome challenges and David truly had that.（动名词短语做主语）
通过他，我学会了拥有一种不屈的精神可以克服挑战，大卫确实做到了这一点。
9.It is not intelligence alone that brings success, but also the drive to succeed, the commitment to work hard and the courage to believe in yourself.I am proud of her, and I am lucky to have learned so much in helping her.带来成功的不单是智慧本身，而且还要有想要成功的动力、对工作的投入和相信自己的勇气。我为她感到骄傲，我很幸运能从帮助她中学到很多东西。
10.If it had not been for this event, they wouldn’t have realized that they should cooperate and cultivate team spirit to achieve their goals.（虚拟语气）
如果不是因为这次活动，他们就不会意识到他们应该通过合作和培养团队精神来实现自己的目标。
11.Put your imperfections out of your mind and concentrate on what you value within yourself, and your beauty will shine through.
把你的不完美从脑海中抹去，专注于你内心珍视的东西，你的美就会闪耀。
There was no doubt that I succeeded in becoming a member of the basketball team.It was my determination and efforts that helped me achieve my dream.（同位语从句+强调句）毫无疑问，我成功地成为了篮球队的一员。是我的决心和努力帮助我实现了梦想。
二、成长篇 故事构造三部曲
[第一步:成长前的苦恼(负面情绪塑造)][孤独]
I never made friends easily, and for a time I did little more than get on speaking terms with some boys.我从不轻易交朋友，有一段时间，我只是和一些男孩子说说话而已。[伤心]
I found nothing in my pocket, a fact that seemed like a spear piercing into my heart, which started to bleed immediately.我口袋里什么也没找到，这事实就像一支长矛刺进了我的心脏，我的心脏立刻开始流血。
Looking around anxiously, I almost burst into crying.(我焦急地环顾四周，差点哭出来)
She was overwhelmed / overcome/ consumed with guilt and shame .(她被内疚和羞愧淹没)
A wave of guilt swept over me and I had to admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was the real reason why I was late.一阵内疚席卷了我，我不得不承认我去看电影了，这才是我迟到的真正原因。[嘲笑]
They laughed loudly with Crawley screaming words like “What a finest broken watch!”他们大声笑着，卡劳利尖叫着说:“多好的一块坏表啊!”[绝望]
“My mother wouldn't let me bring it,”I lied, desperation boiling inside me.“我妈妈不让我带，”我撒了个谎，绝望在我心里沸腾。[紧张]
Meanwhile, Karie sat restlessly in her seat with her fingers crossed .与此同时，凯莉不安地坐在座位上，双手交叉着。
She told the teacher the truth , with her heart thumping / pounding/ pumping like a drum.她把实情告诉了老师，心怦怦直跳。
Having paced up and down restlessly in front of the the teacher's office, she finally gathered courage and plodded in.(她在老师的办公室前不安地踱来踱去，终于鼓起勇气，慢吞吞地走了进去。[害怕]
I unknowingly (不知不觉地) avoided interacting (interact) with anyone because I was afraid they'd laugh in my face .(我在不知不觉中避免与任何人互动，因为我害怕他们会当面嘲笑我)[犯错]
Considering there was no way to persuade my mother to let me take the watch, I decided to wait for her to step outside and slip the watch into my pocket. So I did.考虑到没有办法说服母亲让我带手表，我决定等她走出去，把手表塞进我的口袋里,我这样做了。
Karie stuffed the test paper into backpack and explained that she was just too excited.凯莉把试卷塞进背包里，解释说她只是太兴奋了。[第二步:成长中(蜕变塑造)]
Raising her eyebrows in surprise, Mrs Rossi froze, as if rooted on the ground.罗西夫人惊讶地扬起眉毛，僵住了，仿佛在地上生了根。[希望]
ked up to him, his eyes sparkling with hope and determination.杰斯抬头看着他，他的眼睛里闪烁着希望和决心。[教育与成长]
“That's not the right way. Patience, Will. Patience,"a voice echoed in my ears after the boys left.这不是正确的方法。耐心，意志。当孩子们离开后，一个声音在我的耳边回响。“What was done was done,"thought I to myself.“What is important now is to do correct things next.”“所做的已经做了，”我自己想。“现在重要的是下一步要纠正一些事情。”
Though anger, embarrassment and sadness hung heavily in the air, the voice drew me to the awareness of the mistakes I had made when I attempted to impress the boys.尽管愤怒、尴尬和悲伤重重地笼罩在空气中，但这个声音还是让我意识到我在试图给同学留下深刻印象时犯下的错误。
I shouldn't have tried to integrate in such a hasty way, nor should I have stolen the watch behind my mother.我不该如此匆忙的方式试图融入，也不该把母亲身后的手表偷走。
After school, I would tell my mother honestly that I had stolen the watch out to impress friends who turned out not to be my true friends.放学后，我会诚实地告诉妈妈，我偷了手表是为了给那些不是我真正朋友的朋友留下好印象。
After saying that with her face flushed red, she handed the paper and the prize to the teacher.说完这话，脸红了，她把纸和奖品交给了老师。
To my surprise, she smiled at me and expressed her apology for ignoring my loneliness as wel1 as my difficulty with English communication.令我吃惊的是，她对我笑了笑，并为忽视我的孤独和英语交流的困难表示道歉。
Torn between the honor and conscience, she had a restless night, tossing and tuming on bed.她在荣誉和良心之间挣扎，一夜不安，在床上辗转反侧。
I plucked up my courage and took my first step onto the suspension bridge.我鼓起勇气，向吊索桥走了第一步。
He saw Trashaun as a tough role mode1 who had a seemingly similar born disability but led a brilliant life.他认为特拉申是一个坚强的榜样，似乎有类似的先天残疾，但过着辉煌的生活。
We often take for granted the very things that most deserve our gratitude(那些值得我们感恩的事情我们经常当作理所当然).
But when the time came, I got up on stage and faced one of my greatest fears-and discovered I could do more than I ever gave myself credit for.(但当时机到来的时候，我站上舞台，面对我最大的恐惧之一-我发现我可以做的比我自己认为的更多。
[第三步:成长后的升华(喜悦+感激+升华)][喜悦]
Dad looked at the paper, with his lips curving into a smile.(爸爸看着报纸,他的嘴唇弯成了微笑)
Hearing that, Karie grinned from ear to ear, a wave of happiness flooding over her.(听到这话，卡里咧嘴一笑,幸福的浪潮涌上她的心头)(2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试)[感激]
I looked at her, tears of love and gratitude welling up in my eyes.我看着她，爱和感激的泪水在我的眼睛里涌出。[结尾句]
I knew for sure that every time I lost patience in the future I would remember my grandfather’s words.(我确信，将来每次我失去耐心，我就会想起我祖父的话。)
It was the first time that I had truly realized the meaning of the gift --- patience.(我第一次真正体会到这份礼物--耐心的意义)
Aram said,“Thanks, Mrs Rossi, for teaching me how to make a cake to realize my dream." Mrs Rossi held his hands, saying.“It is you who teach me how to stick to my dream.”亚兰说:“谢谢罗西夫人，你教我如何做蛋糕来实现我的梦想。”罗西太太握着他的手说:“是你教我如何坚持我的梦想。
It dawned on Aram that“One should stick to his/her dream no matter what happens.”(亚兰明白了一个人应该坚持她的梦想，无论发生什么)
So thankfu1 was he for Cathy’s honesty that he actually ended up donating a generous amount to VNSA to show his gratitude.他非常感谢凯茜的诚实，他向VNSA捐赠了一大笔钱来表达他的感激之情。
Bravery was the most significant quality that I wanted her to possess.勇敢是我希望她拥有的最重要的品质
Afterwards, it was my tum to give a small lecture,in which I expressed my sincere gratitude to my mom and friends,bowing to them several times.之后，轮到我做了一个小型讲座，在会上我向妈妈和朋友们表达了诚挚的感谢，并向他们多次鞠躬。
Then he patted Jayce’s head, “ But I think this is the perfect way God made me. With five fingers, we also made it in lots of things just now. The missing arm is like a wing folded by an ange1.Only when you're tough will you see the wing.他拍了拍杰斯的头，“但我认为这是上帝创造我的完美方式。”用五个手指，我们现在还做了很多东西。这个缺失的手臂就像一只被天使折叠起来的翅膀。只有当你很坚强的时候，你才会看到翅膀。
成长类场景描写【学习知识而成长]
It's never too late to learn. Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make more attempts.学习永远为时不晚。每个人都应该并且有权利去接受更多的挑战，做更多尝试。[分析]individual 这里表示“个人，个体”。make more attempts 做更多尝试。【发挥天赋促成长]
Actually, every individual possesses talent. Be brave when you find it and also make efforts.You can create miracles in the end.
事实上，每个人都有天赋，发现它的时候要勇敢，也要付出努力，最终你会创造奇迹。[分析]possess 拥有。create miracles 表示创造奇迹。[追逐梦想而成长]
It's never too late to go for your dream. As long as you grasp every opportunity and take full advantage of it, you will stand a chance to realize your dreams.追梦永远不晚。只要你抓住机会，充分利用机会，你就有机会实现梦想。
As long as we dare to dream and don't let difficulties get in our way, anything is possible.只要我们敢于梦想，不被困难所阻挡，一切皆有可能。[分析]take full advantage of 充分利用，realize your dreams 表示“实现梦想”【克服困难促而成长]
The journey to success is not smooth. It is full of challenges and difficulties. We should be brave to face them. As long as we don’t give up hope and make every effort to overcome al1 the difficulties, we will surely achieve our goal (success) finally.通往成功的路不会平坦，充满挑战和艰辛。我们要勇敢面对。只要不放弃希望并竭尽全力克服所有困难，我们最终会实现我们的目标(成功)。
[分析]smooth 表示“平坦的”overcome all the difficulties表示“克服困难”; make every effort 表示“做出努力”;as long as，表示“只要”，引导条件状语从句。

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