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My husband Kenny and i grew up playing sports.We both worked in the field of physical education and coach youth high school track and field, so Kenny and i weren't surprised when our daughter, Becky, showed early athletic promise.
我和丈夫肯尼是在运动中长大的。我们都在体育教育领域工作，也都是高中田径队的教练。所以，当我们的女儿贝基很早就展现出运动的希望时，肯尼和我并不感到惊讶。
Watching her outrun other kids on the playground, I knew she was destined for winning medals on the track. $lowly but surely. track took over our lives, Weekends were devoted to training, We stopped taking vacations so the girl wouldn't miss any practices, We missed her birthdays and family outings, I even restricted the time she could spend hanging out with her friends, which would consume the energy she needed for competition.
看着她在操场上跑得比其他孩子快，我知道她注定要在赛道上赢得奖牌$地位低下但肯定。田径占据了我们的生活，周末专门用于训练，我们停止休假，这样女孩就不会错过任何训练，我们错过了她的生日和家庭郊游，我甚至限制了她与朋友们一起玩的时间，这会消耗她比赛所需的能量。
We didn't really ask Becky if that was what she wanted, Of course she did! Who wouldn't want to use a God-given talent to the fullest Occasionally, Becky would open up after a loss."I wish you were the same even if I have a bad day on the track, I feel like you don't accept me just for who l am."
我们并没有真正问贝基这是不是她想要的，她当然问了！谁会不想充分利用上帝赋予的天赋呢？偶尔，贝基会在输球后敞开心扉。“我希望你也一样，即使我在赛道上度过了糟糕的一天，我觉得你不会因为我是谁而接受我。”
Honestly, that hurt, In my heart. I knew what she said was true. l could behave more like a coach than a Mom on the sideline, But i didn't mind, Ensuring her on the track of winning was my only goal, i probably cared more about the medals than she did, By the time Becky started middle school,our family life had revolved around(以……为中心) practices and competitions. l had visions of college scholarships, maybe even the Olympics.One day. at a regional Junior Olympics qualifying event，she twisted her leg and ended up in a heavy fall,screaming in pain. This was not supposed to happen. Kenny and l pushed her too hard the day before and she attempted to break the record which was clearly beyond her reach .
老实说，那很伤人，在我心里。我知道她说的是真的。我可以表现得更像一个教练，而不是场边的妈妈，但我不介意，确保她走上胜利的轨道是我唯一的目标，我可能比她更关心奖牌。当贝基开始上中学时，我们的家庭生活已经围绕着(以……为中心) 练习和比赛。我曾设想过大学奖学金，甚至奥运会。有一天。在一次地区青少年奥运会资格赛上，她扭伤了腿，摔得很重，痛苦地尖叫着。这是不应该发生的。肯尼和我前一天对她施加了太大的压力，她试图打破纪录，这显然超出了她的能力范围。
We rushed her to the hospital right away. Never did l imagine sitting in a doctor's office,staring at the X-ray result as the doctor calmly explained that Becky's posterior cruciate ligament------the thick tissue stabilizing the back of her knee was torn.
我们马上把她送到医院。我从来没有想过坐在医生的办公室里，凝视着X光检查结果，医生平静地解释说贝基的后十字韧带——稳定她膝盖后部的厚组织撕裂了。
续写第一段：" Her professional career as an athlete was over, " the doctor broke the news to me.
续写第二段：Following the hard fought recovery, I watched her running with a new attitude.
故事情节：
故事以Kenny和作者夫妇俩的成长背景和他们女儿Becky的体育天赋为起点，描绘了一个典型的体育世家形象。随着Becky在体育方面展现出的潜力，全家人的生活重心逐渐转移到她的训练和比赛上，牺牲了许多家庭时光和休闲活动。尽管Becky在体育上取得了不错的成绩，但她逐渐表达出对家庭氛围和母亲态度的不满，觉得母亲更像教练而不是母亲。在一次重要比赛中，Becky受伤 (原因可能在于家长过度追求成绩，让她尝试超出自己能力范围的动作)。
续写分析：
续写第一段：从段首句提示可知，后续文字应描述Kenny和作者夫妇在得知女儿伤情后的震惊、懊悔和焦虑情绪，以及对过去错误做法的反思。从续写第二段首句提示可知，第一段续写后半部分应写家人和Kenny的具体变化（开始有转机--可以继续跑步） 续写第二段：续写要写出究竟是带着什么变化的态度看着Kenny跑步，如“我和丈夫”调整心态，不再过分追求体育成绩和奖项，而是更加注重女儿的身心健康和全面发展。最后Becky康复，家庭关系变得更加和谐，每个人都学会了平衡个人追求与家庭幸福。
升华建议：
通过这个故事，可以升华到对教育方式的反思，强调尊重孩子的兴趣和意愿，避免过度追求成绩而忽略孩子的身心健康。
强调家庭关系对个人成长的重要性，提倡家庭成员之间的相互理解、支持和包容。
讨论如何在个人追求和家庭幸福之间找到平衡点，鼓励读者在面对类似情况时能够做出明智的选择。
参考范文：
“Her professional career as an athlete was over,” the doctor broke the news to me. The words hit me like a ton of bricks. My heart sank as I realized the dreams I had for Becky were now shattered. She had sacrificed so much for the track. Now it was all gone. I felt guilty for pushing her too hard. How we wish we had listened to her when she said she wanted to be accepted for who she was, not just for her medals. “She can still run if aided with recovery drills,” the doctor continued. I thanked and prayed tearfully. (87 words)
Following the hard-fought recovery, I watched her running with a new attitude. No longer was it about winning medals or breaking records. Instead, it was about her enjoying the sport she loved, about her challenging herself and growing stronger and staying healthy. Becky was still talented, still competitive, but more importantly, she was happy. She found new passions and interests apart from track, and our family life slowly returned to normal. Her fall made us aware that medals or trophies are nothing compared with love and happiness we share as a family. (80 words)
语言积累：
Sweeping away tears in her face, I patted her back and told her, Dear,please cheer up.No matter what happened, we will always be your side. Lets conquer the difficulty together!"
Hearing the doctor's cold voice, i felt like l was falling into the depth of despair and the whole world was crashing in front of my eyes.
As the sun sinks towards the horizon,casting long shadows on her energetic body,I couldn’t help but rejoice as i clearly knew both Becky and I bad found the true meaning for running, not for win , but for passion and love.
Fortunately, she was still incredibly hopeful to her life.
With hope growing dim,I only wish her could be healthy and happy as she used to be.
Without my push and urging, Becky picked up her daily training again.
She could feel more like a daughter,instead of an athlete.
And,as a mom, Becky’s smile matters more than the golden medals.

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