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图画类作文:
表达的多样性（词汇 句型 ）
--图画作文描述--- 非常重要
如何准备？
1、描述素材
--身份 动作 表情（心理） 语言 道具
身份---- people = folks = individuals
大学生—college students / 年轻人：young folks = youngsters
=young adults / 小孩-children / kids / tourists =visitors
/ 毕业生：graduates 运动员：athlete / postgraduate 研究生--- the disabled 残疾人； 消费者： customer = consumers
--servant / 面试官：interviewer / interviewee –
--动作的梳理：
手部：--point to sth 指向某物；hold sth 拿住某物；knock sth 敲；throw / take off / keep sb off阻挡某人；pick up 捡；
--hold one’s hand –wave one’s arms at sb 向某人招手 /write
眼睛:--look at sth / stare at sth 凝视； glance at 瞥
腿脚：stand / sit / lie / lean / kick / climb /rush into 冲；run
--人物的表情：--都是以形容词居多
---够用为好---
--乐：--happy / delighted / excited /
--satisfied 满足的；
--吃惊的--- surprised = astonished = shocked
悲惨的：sorrowful / miserable / sad
--confused ---迷惑的；bewildered / puzzled
--愤怒的—angry /
★Type One: 单图型
one .... the other
写法1：--As is ___shown in the picture, sitting in the front of computer screen, a young student is selecting courses from course system, with confused expression on his face. one is innovative and challenging, while the other is easy to pass with high scores. The caption below the picture reads, _____.
--倒装：--Sitting in front of computer screen is a young student who is selecting courses from course system, with confused expression on his face.
第一个人（坐）：--坐在台阶上 说：累了 不爬了 ---
第二个人：-递上一瓶水 说：休息会继续爬
--thought-provoking / interesting /
--细节 从整体然后到具体---描述过程
--表达方式的组合与安排--- 插入语—最好学 最好模仿 –
--pass sb sth – give sb sth ---基础词汇的用法---
--The picture presented above mirrors a ____ scene(场景): there are two young people climbing the mountain. As is depicted in the drawing, one boy , feeling tired , sits on the step and intends to give up his trip, while another guy passes / gives him a bottle of water and encourages him to continue his trip after a short break.
--stimulate / encourage / motivate / inspire /persuade / ...
★Type Two: 双图型----一定要观察两幅图的关系--
躺 靠 说：我有这么多书 注视书架
The two pictures present a sharp contrast. ----套话—直接背诵（用于两幅图呈现对比关系）
这两幅图清楚地表明了两个人对待读书的截然不同的态度。
The two pictures clearly indicate two people’s totally different attitudes towards reading.
As is depicted in the picture, in the left drawing, there is a youngster leaning on the sofa and showing off (炫耀)her / his books. By sharp contrast/in contrast / conversely / on the contrary , in the right picture, sitting in front of the desk is a boy who plans to read 20 books in a year.
-争取—
--intend to do sth / plan to do sth / make efforts to do sth / try to do sth= attempt to do sth -备选---
哲理性
★核心主题词提炼与点睛
--objective = aim 目标； dream / diligence 勤奋； take action 行动 confidence 信心 make plan 制定计划 value time 珍惜时间 patience 耐心 do small things
----determination 决心 modesty 谦虚 communication 交流 honesty 诚实 诚信
--mutual trust 相互信任； sense of responsibility 责任感
--innovation 创新 adversity 逆境 a strong will 强大的意志 optimism 乐观 -independence 独立性
--第二段写什么？----explain its intended meaning---
--点题---一般放在第二段开头--- （1—2种点题句型）
--论证---重要性---最容易写出来---
--坚持—正面话题--- 重要性角度---importance /
--两个方面来准备：----
1--准备表达重要性的句型或词组
--be important to / play a critical role in
-- lay a solid foundation for / …be beneficial to /
2—对谁重要？---- 对个人 对社会 对公司团体
The intended meaning of the drawing can be illustrated in terms of persistence. 或 The picture aims to highlight the supreme importance of persistence. For individuals, persistence is the key factor for attaining success. 或 persistence is the key factor to become top performers(成功人士) in study, work and life. Without this desirable quality(=persistence), everything will end with failure. 或 it is persistent spirit that enables us to overcome a variety of difficulties , face adversity bravely and attain ultimate goals smoothly. (红色下划线部分都是正面的积极短语).
For corporations, the quality of persistence can make businesses=corporations constantly enhance the image and quality of a brand, sharpen competitive edge and finally win a unique advantage in this fierce market competition.
--从公司和个人两个角度对坚持的重要性进行论证。-
--纯粹的论证之外--- 举例 --
--阅卷的时候--- 时间非常快---
--用明确明了的逻辑关联词或短语—
--firstly , secondly ---
第三段--- give your comments
表明观点---
--哲理性 抽象性话题--- 首先盖棺定论--- 然后说怎么做。
2—3句话搞定
--From my perspective / for my part = from my stance = to the best way of my understanding = to the best way of my knowledge. To sum up 总结上文
On my personal level, / In a word, we need to possess this quality of perseverance. =persistence . 坚持不懈；How can we possess the quality Among the steps(步骤 措施)= Of all the steps , I think that / I do deem that the effective and efficient way is to start from small things, such as getting up early and going to bed on time. Only in this way can we perfect ourselves and enjoy a fulfilling and confident life.
最后一句如何不想用倒装，对于哲理性话题可以用引用名人名言做结尾。
--As a distinguished scholar once put it, “ _____”
第二段：点题+论证
点题：---一句话--- 反映的话题或现象：--现在的孩子缺乏独立性。（自理能力差）
--缺乏---lack of –名词短语--- be lack of 或 lack sth -词性正确—
--be absence of = be lack of = be shortage of 缺乏
--换个角度：-当今，越来越多的父母过度关爱孩子（溺爱）
-The drawing aims to inform us of a prevailing /prevalent / popular / common phenomenon: 或 a phenomenon not uncommon: (后置定语+双重否定)： Currently a host of kids / children are lack of independence/ independent ability.
--Currently, a growing number of / an increasing number of parents over-protect their kids.
--论证环节：--孩子缺乏独立性--- 从哪个角度加以论证？-
---原因：--碰到负面话题或现象----
---就现象本身进行论证----
在当今的家庭中，大多数的父母把他们的孩子看成掌上明珠。也就是说，他们往往尽全力去给孩子提供最好的教育和生活条件。
In current= today’s = contemporary families, most of parents / a majority of parents regard their kids as the apple of their eyes. That is to say, they tend to do all in their power to provide children with the best education and living condition.
--随着过去几十年独生子女政策的实行，导致父母过度溺爱孩子。
--With the implementation of decades-ago policy of one child,
--在第二段分析现象的时候，背景的交代与运用也是非常重要的手段。--打开思路--- 模仿---
--Policy of one child is a catalyst for parents over-protect their children. 最好使用名词结构
--点题+背景和现象交代+危害
--众所周知的是，过度关爱可能会产生负面的影响。比如说，当孩子达到成年的时候（走入社会的时候），他们没有独立处理问题的能力。
--It is universally acknowledged that excessive care and protection may produce adverse influence. For example, when children enter / step into society, they have no ability to solve problems independently. / by themselves.
-第三段：--give your comments --
--现象类--- 建议或措施--- 针对性
--在我看来，这个迫切的问题值得我们关注。具体措施如下。第一，父母应该教给孩子如何处理各种状况，尤其是在非常困难的情况下。第二，孩子们应该利用各种机会来提升他们的问题处理能力并且得到真正的独立。我们希望这些孩子能够更少地依赖父母并且在经济和心理上变得独立。
--teach sb to do sth
-- In my eyes, the pressing problem deserves our attention. Much can be done. In the first place, parents should teach kids to how to deal with various situations, especially in fairly difficult ones. Secondly, children should take every opportunity to enhance / promote / raise their problem-solving ability and gain real independence. We do hope that these children have less dependence/ reliance on their parents and become independent economically and mentally.
第一段：--描述图画： 中国新闻漫画网---newscartoon
--首先观察图画有什么？---
--主体：一名学生--- 身份？动作（主体动作和次要动作）--表情或心理 basin –观察仔细 – 提示：---
观察越仔细 第一段描述越具体--- sock -- a pair of ..数量
-The cartoon depicts an ironic / thought-provoking scene happening in a student’s dormitory. –划黄色部分为功能句型
-department n.部门；系--- ---- apartment n.公寓；
--易混词--- department store 百货商店；--The cartoon depicts an inspiring scene happening in climbing the mountain. 背诵+模仿
--具体描述：--人--- 形成非常通顺的中文思路--- 英文
无奈的—unwilling ---勉强的；
不安的—uneasy a. 困惑的—confused / puzzled / --
As is mirrored in the drawing, standing in front of the bed, a student, with a basin of / a pair of nasty socks on his hand, is phoning his mother and asking her how to wash socks, with confused / unwilling expression on his face. –
--名词后加with结构是可以的，表示名词所具有的属性。
-句型： sb , with ___ expression on sb’s face, is doing sth.
--stand --- standing
打电话--- call / phone v. 打电话---
人物的描述--- 什么人 动作 表情 语言 道具
--单人单图
第二段--- 点题+论证
--现象：---很多年轻人缺乏独立性--- lack of independence
--原因：---
--就现象本身进行分析--- 普遍性 ---背景 。。。
-第三段—观点 措施
科技类★核心主题词提炼与点睛(1—2次替换)—词汇表达多样性和丰富性--
-网络—Internet = virtual world = cyberspace
-手机：--cellphone / mobile phone / portable phone /
-上网：--go online = surf the net
-网民：net user = net citizen = net surfer
-网瘾：--net addiction
-上网成瘾的人--- net addict
网络购物—online shopping =virtual shopping
在线课程—online course
电子书—e-book = paperless book
网络谣言—Internet gossip = Internet rumor
网络安全—Internet safety / security
个人隐私--- personal privacy
数据泄露—data leakage 假新闻 fake / false news / fade-
★例1：
第一部分：--点题：--沉溺手机；手机对生活的影响；
-功能句+具体主题句--- 短语---！！！！--造句能力提高--
--Digging(深挖) =probing into this picture, we can effortlessly find that the cartoonist strives to put a spotlight on（凸显） a pronounced（明显的） trend : currently, a growing number of youngsters are addicted to mobile phones.
--当今，手机已经极大地影响了我们的日常生活。（更笼统）
--currently, mobile phone has impacted our daily =ordinary life hugely. ---影响; affect
--对。。。产生威胁：--pose a serious threat to –
--严重地; seriously / severely /
--exert an influence / impact on 对。。。施加影响；
--have influence on …/ have influenced sth ..
--引出图画的主题（现象）--点题
--极大地影响了某某 impact sth hugely. / change sth hugely …
第一句：点题---
接下来应该开始论证：---论证手段？？？---针对主题句论证---第一种点题：---沉溺于手机--- 危害？--从危害角度展开
---第二种点题：---手机对我们的生活有很大影响：
--从影响的角度展开--- 首先写好处；然后过渡到弊端
一方面，手机的出现和普及给我们的生活带来了很多便利（总）。在所有的好处中，最明显的是我们可以通过手机随时随地地获取各种信息并且与同学，朋友和家人交流。
--popularize v.使普及；---词性的正确使用 2010
--For one thing, the emergence =advent and prevalence =popularity of cellphone has brought a lot of convenience to our lives. Of all the benefits/ merits / advantages, the most obvious is that we can acquire = access all kinds of information and communicate = interact with friends, classmates and family members anytime and anywhere by virtue of = by means of (凭借。。。的手段)cellphone.
--另一方面，我们也不能忽视手机给我们的生活，尤其是我们的人际交往带来的弊端。
--impact / influence on sth
--for another, we cannot ignore / neglect disadvantages / demerits / side effects / downsides of portable phone on our life, especially our interpersonal communication.
In our daily life, it is not uncommon that on buses or subways, or walking on the road, we are virtually all playing with phones for recreation(娱乐), such as reading novels, watching videos or movies, even though we travel with friends , parents or classmates.
--先整体构思展开方式（想第二段由几部分构成） 然后再寻找素材进行材料组合整合。
第三段写法：---评价
盖棺定论：---明确自己的态度（如何解决 重视）
From my perspective, we should take a rational attitude towards the use of mobile phone. (可以用在任何作文的最后一段，表明自己对话题或现象的态度)
笼统：-- 政府应该开展活动来。。。
--the government should launch a series of campaigns to enhance / improve / promote the awareness of healthy lifestyle. As individuals, we should devote our time and energy to various meaningful activities, such as …举例。
--outdoor activities ---
--思路 框架 表达---- 全文背诵一篇文章
100篇这本书---
第二段：--在我们的互联网上，网络谣言正在变得日益普遍。
---Currently, Internet rumors are becoming increasingly prevalent.
---gossip =rumor
--网络谣言严重地破坏了我们的网络环境 –
--scandal 丑闻--
负面--- 原因展开更方便 更好写---
--网络谣言为什么为猖獗 普遍？--- 结合相关者来写
网络本身 ---匿名—监管不严
--anonymity n.匿名；
--The convenience of anonymity on the net enables net users to shirk responsibility for their remarks, which has also reinforced this ill trend.
--核心表达：enable sb to do sth / the convenience of sth /
/ shirk =evade responsibility 逃避责任/ reinforce this trend 加剧 助长
--lack of adequate and strict Internet supervision
造谣的人
In our contemporary society, there are a host of ill-intentioned people existing on the Internet. They always wish to draw others’ attention or even disturb public order via circulating rumors.
网民
--第二段，除了写原因之外，还可以增加一条危害
最后一段：解决方案--- 对照第二段的原因一一对应
教育类
★核心主题词提炼与点睛
---life-long education 终身学习；--read books读书；/ read classics 阅读经典；---如何合理利用时间 value time –
-adult education 成人教育； compulsory education义务教育 practical skill 实践技能 online course 在线课程
---further / advance / continue one’s study 继续某人的学业；
/ information age = information era 信息时代
--affect academic/study achievement 影响学习成绩
--skip class 逃课；
-必修课—compulsory course =required course
--选修课： optional course / selective course
--录取：enrollment ---/ enrollment expansion 扩招
--admission n.录取= enrollment

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