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2024届高考英语写作：如何写好英文求助信
进行求助信写作时，文章开篇需明确说明自己遇到的难题或困惑，描述问题时，注意要点间的逻辑衔接，求助时，态度要诚恳，语气要委婉。求助的内容、对获得帮助的期望以及表达感谢之间的衔接要自然、合理。
【锦囊妙计】
求助信：(1)开门见山表明求助意图，有时需自我介绍
(2)求助事由
(3)期盼回复并表示感谢
【范文赏析】
(2021.6全国卷甲)假定你是李华，你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英语网站上展示，请你给外国朋友Chris写封信，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国朋友，内容如下：
1. 阐明写信事由；
2. 征求建议；
3. 表达感谢。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Chris,
How is everything going with you Recently, a class meeting is to be held in our school themed “Chinese Traditional Culture" , which will be shown on an English website. Now lam writing to ask you to give me some advice on this. As is known to all, China has abundant and unique cultures with a long history, like tea culture, Peking opera, traditional handicraft, Chinese calligraphy and so on. Could you please tell me which attracts foreign friends most so that our meeting can gain much popularity
Thank you ahead for your suggestions and l am looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【常用词汇】
1.ask/ seek for help/ advice/ suggestions寻求帮助/建议
2.encounter some problems遇到一些问题
3.be faced with difficulties面临困难
4.offer some useful guidance on提供一些有用的指导
5.ask sb. a favor请某人帮忙
6.help me solve these problems帮我解决这些问题
7.leave sb. a deep impression给某人留下深刻印象
8.further information进一步的消息
9.be busy doing sth忙于做某事
10.make preparations for做准备
11. let sb. down 让某人失望
12.appreciate感激;欣赏
13.be anxious to do sth./ long to do sth渴望做某事
14.be grateful to sb. for sth因某事感激某人
15. in desperate need of 急需
【常用句型】
1.I am writing this letter to ask you to do me a favor. 我写信想请您帮我一个忙。
2. I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand.如果您能帮助我，我将感激不尽。
3.Now I wonder whether I could ask you a favor.不知道我是否可以请帮个忙
I am facing three problems which trouble me a lot. 我遇到三个困扰我的问题。
What troubles me most is that I don’t know to get along with others.
最困扰我的是我不知道如何与人相处。
6.Unfortunately, I find/ feel it quite difficult/hard to learn English well.遗憾的是，我觉得学好英语很困难。
7.Faced with the above problems, l am anxious to get your help.
面对以上的问题，我渴望得到你的帮助。
8. I have trouble/a hard time making friends, so I have no choice but to turn to you for
advice.我交友方面有困难, 所以不得不向你寻求建议。
9.Getting up early is another terrible headache for me.
早起是另一件令我头疼的事。
10.I find myself making progress not as fast as before, which has been annoying me for a long time.
我发现自己的进步没有以前那么快，这一直困扰着我很长一段时间。
11.Seriously disturbed,I am desperately in need of your assistance.
深受其扰,我迫切需要你的帮助。
12.Thanks for considering my request. Your early reply is well appreciated. I’m looking forward lo your reply.
多谢考虑我的请求。十分感谢您的早日答复。期待您的答复。
【巩固练习】
(一)
(2020年全国卷3)假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans 写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
1.剧情简介;
2.指导内容;
3.商定时间地点。
注意:
1.词数100左右:
2.结束语己为你写好。
Dear Miss Evans,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Miss Evans,
How is everything I was wondering if you could guide us to revise a short play adapted from our English textbook.The story, The Million Pound Bank Note, is about the adventure of a poor young man who was given a million pound bank note by two rich gentlemen.He turned millionaire overnight and met dramatic changes to his life. When adapting the play, we met some difficulties, Could you kindly give us guidance on two aspects Firstly, we hope that you can check the use of the language for us, Secondly, please give us some direction on our acting and tones.
Would it be possible for us to meet in our classroom at 5 pm this Friday We are looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
(二)
(天台中学2021届)假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：
1.本人简介；
2.求助内容；
3.约定时间。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear Sir/Madam,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university, I'm writing to seek for your help with my learning.
What bothers me most is how to find reference books for my essays, which is really a big challenge for me for I fail to figure out the instructions of the library here, I am also at a loss as to how to take notes quickly in class. I wonder if you could give me some guidance on Friday afternoon. Please send me an email at Li Hua @.
Thank you in advance. Your prompt reply would be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
(三)
(2018年全国卷)假定你是李华，乘坐FL753航班抵达伦敦后发现钱包遗失。请给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括：
1.行程信息；
2.钱包特征；
3.联系方式。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
Dear Sir,
I'm Li Hua, an exchange student from China. I am writing to ask you for a favor about the loss of my wallet on Flight 753. I took the flight on June 25 from China to London. To my dismay, I found my wallet missing upon my arrival at the airport.It is a black leather one, with 500 pounds in cash, a family photo as well as an ID card, which definitely matters a lot to me. It really becomes a headache for me at the thought of the loss of my wallet.
I would greatly appreciate it if you are kind enough to help me get any information about the wallet. Please contact me by phone at987654321. Thanks a million!
Yours
Li Hua
(四)
（台州市2020学年第一学期高一年级期末质量评估试题）假定你是学生李华，下个月你将参加某英文报社举办的英语配音大赛（English Dubbing Contest），在备赛过程中你遇到了一些困难。请你给学校外教David写封邮件，请他帮忙指导。内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.求助内容；
3.期待回复。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：配音dub
Dear David,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear David,
I'm Li Hua, a freshman in our school. I will participate in an English dubbing contest next month, but I have some difficulty with my preparation process, so I am writing to ask you for a favor.
Failing to express myself in pure English bothers me first. I wonder if there is any shortcut for me to improve quickly. What also concerns me is how to combine my emotional expression with the characters in the work, which is definitely the key factor to determine the success of a dubbing work.
Would you be so kind as to give me some suggestions Looking forward to your earliest reply at your convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
(五)
（广州市2024年第二次模拟考试）你校英文报将增设主题为“讲好中国故事”的栏目。你是栏目负责人李华，请给外教Kate写邮件咨询她对栏目的建议。内容包括：
1.介绍设想；
2.咨询建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
Dear Kate,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Kate,
I am Li Hua, the person in charge of the school English newspaper’s new column “Sharing Chinese Stories”. I am writing to seek your advice on this column.
The column will share China's history, culture, science and technology, education and other topics in the form of short stories, to make China voice better heard. How do you think we can better tell Chinese stories to our exchange students Plus we find ourselves in a dilemma on how to attract more readers.We are also wondering if there is any better way to improve the quality and impact of our program.
We would appreciate it if you could give us some advice of value. Your favorable reply will be highly expected.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(六)
假设你是学生李华，你的家乡剪纸艺术负有盛名，你写了一篇英文宣传稿，想请外籍教师Bob帮助润色。请根据提示，用英语给Bob写一封求助信。内容包括：
1.求助事由；
2.求助内容；
3.表达感激。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.信的格式已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Bob,
I’m writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favor.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Bob,
I’m writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favor. When it comes to paper cutting, there is no denying that it enjoys a great reputation in my hometown. For a long time I have been longing to write an appealing article to make it better known. However, only when I put the idea into practice did I find that my English is far from satisfaction.
As far as I’m concerned, you have a good command of written English, which impresses me a lot. Would you like to do me a favor to have my draft polished I will pay you a visit at your earliest convenience.
I would appreciate it if you could take my request into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
(七)
假如你是李华。本期你校开设了英语口语课,由于你不太适应外教Chris的授课，你决定给她写一封求助信。内容包括：
1.告诉她你的困难；
2.求助的内容(推荐一些听力材料、周末和她练习口语等)；
3.希望得到帮助。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
I am Li Hua, one of your students in Oral English class.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Chris,
I am Li Hua, one of your students in Oral English class. I am writing to seek help from you.
You know, I come from a junior high school in the countryside, where teachers don’t speak much English in class. That is why I am not good at listening or speaking. Now I find it really hard to follow you in class. I hope you can recommend some listening materials to me so that I can improve my listening after class. Besides, could I practice speaking with you for half an hour at weekends at your convenient time I think it can help me improve my spoken English.
I would be grateful if you could lend me a helping hand.
Yours,
Li Hua

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