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同步话题作文写作指导Units 11-12
Unit 11
【步骤和标准】
（一）
首先一篇满分作文写作应该遵循这几个写作步骤：审题定基调---分析得分点---布局列提纲---修饰添佳句---汇思谋成篇。
（二）
另外了解下满分作文的标准，同学们要向这里看齐哦！
1.包含所有要点。
2.行文连贯、自然，表述清晰，没有或者几乎没有语法、拼写错误。
3.能很好地完成写作任务，达到写作意图。
4.卷面整齐、干净、规范。
5.达到规定的词数。
【出题点】
本单元的话题是“旅行经历”，一般考试会选择一篇关于学校郊游的日记或信进行考查，内容包括：时间、地点、天气、交通、所见所闻和所做的事情，并描述旅行的感受等。
1.运用动词的一般过去式表达过去的活动；
2.运用郊游活动类的动词短语描述郊游的活动内容；
3.用great/terrible/interesting/exciting/boring等描述性形容词表达对郊游的感受；
【考查方式】
形式：要点提示介绍
体裁：应用文(日记和书信)
时态：一般过去时
人称：第一人称
考查形式：日记或者书信
写作技巧：同学们可以按照事情发生的先后顺序来介绍某次旅行或者某个时间进行的活动，时态要选择一般过去时。叙事时注意条理清楚，长短句交错使用。
【语句储备】
1.excellent
2.luckily
3.exciting
4.milk a cow
5.ride a horse
6.feed chickens
7.worry about
8.take photos
9.take the train
10.pick strawberries
11.show sb around
12.be interested in
13.go for a walk
14.My school trip was great.
15.We went to...
16.We had great fun.
17.How was your shcool trip last week
18.I visited my grandparents in the countryside.
19.I didn't like the trip at all.
20.All in all, it was an exciting day.
【范文模板】
My School Trip
（一）
My school went to the zoo yesterday.It was really exciting.We tookthe bus there.It took us about two hours to get there.At the zoo,I saw a lot of animals and I took some photos.My classmates and I also went to the gift shop and bought some gifts for my parents.All in all, it was a great school trip.
（二）
Sunday，May 15th
My school trip was great.It was sunny.I went to a farm with my classmates by bus.I saw quite a lot of cows and I milked a cow on the farm.It was interesting.I also saw some chickens，but I didn't feed them.My friends and I went for a walk around the farm and talked with a farmer.He was very friendly and he showed us around the farm.We learned a lot from him about farming.We picked some strawberries and took some home.They were delicious.
All in all，our school trip was exciting.We had a great time on the farm.
Unit 12
【步骤和标准】
（一）
首先一篇满分作文写作应该遵循这几个写作步骤：审题定基调---分析得分点---布局列提纲---修饰添佳句---汇思谋成篇。
（二）
另外了解下满分作文的标准，同学们要向这里看齐哦！
1.包含所有要点。
2.行文连贯、自然，表述清晰，没有或者几乎没有语法、拼写错误。
3.能很好地完成写作任务，达到写作意图。
4.卷面整齐、干净、规范。
5.达到规定的词数。
【出题点】
本单元的话题是“周末活动”，考查会围绕周末所发生的的事情和自己的感受开展写作，时态上与第11单元写作要求一样，选择一般过去时态去描述过去发生的事件。同学们要掌握课本中的重要短语和相关句型，搜集优美句子，帮助自己更好地写作。出题点主要有：一是让同学们运用动词的一般过去时表达过去的活动，二是能运用活动类的动词短语描述活动内容。
【考查方式】
形式：要点提示介绍
体裁：记叙文
时态：一般过去时
人称：第一人称
提示：写作时应注意按照时间顺序记叙，理清事件发展经过，结尾可适当表达感受。
【语句储备】
1.do my homework
2.go to the cinema
3.go boating
4.camp by the lake
5.go to the beach
6.play badminton
7.visit my grandma
8.feed some sheep
9.study for the test
10.watch the soccer game
11.have dinner with friends
12.fly a kite
13.play the guitar
14.I had a busy weekend.
15.On Saturday morning, I cleaned my room.
16.I'm kind of tired now.
17.I stayed up late to watch TV.
18.We took a long bus ride to a lake in the countryside.
19.I had a school trip last week.
20.This was a very useful lesson for me.
21.We were busy last Sunday,but we were very happy.
22.It was a really hppy and relaxing weekend.
23.We had a good time/ enjoyed ourselves.
【范文模板】
（一）
I had a busy weekend.I did many things last weekend.On Saturday morning, I cleaned my room.In the afternoon, I did my homework.It was a little difficult.On Saturday night, I stayed at home and helped my mother cook dinner.On Sunday morning, I went to the library.I read a book about history.Then in the afternoon, I played badminton with my friends.On Sunday night, I watched TV.I saw an interesting talk show.I was tired but happy.
（二）
How was your weekend I had a great weekend.It was rainy on Saturday.I stayed at home and watched TV in the morning.In the afternoon, I went shopping with my parents.They bought me some new clothes.On Sunday morning, I met my classmates and we played pingpong.In the evening, I went to a birthday party with them.We had a good time at the party.

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