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读后续写
新高考题型
读时如何把握文意，续时如何谋篇布局
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读后续写是新高考英语中新增加的题型。在新高考中，短文改错题型被删去，完形填空题量缩减（从20题变成15题），增加了读后续写这一新题型。读后续写顾名思义，先读后写，考察了学生的阅读能力和语言应用能力。在新高考中，读后续写主要涉及记叙文，考查学生对人物、语言、心理、环境等的描写能力。相比于应用文的“模板化”，读后续写就像是学生语言功底的“照妖镜”。
言
什么是读后续写？
要求：
1. 阅读短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之
构成一个完整的故事。（所给故事350词左
右）
2.续写词数应为150左右
评
分
标
准
评
分
标
准
怎么编故事？
怎么编故事？
制造矛盾
解决矛盾
情节
矛盾(主题)
人与人
人与自然
人与社会
① 负 - 转 -正 的情节轮廓
负
正
转
传播正能量
弘扬真善美
① 确定负 - 转 -正 的情节轮廓
② 段首句决定故事走向
③ 找到可呼应的细节以提升主旨。
怎样才算是正能量的结尾 ？
负转正的情节轮廓，正能量结尾
例1. “监守自盗”
文章讲述了职员Jack，因妻子出车祸缺手术费，而抢劫银行的故事。文章写到他成功抢到一大袋钱之后，出现了续写的两个段首句：
Paragraph 1：After Jack had been gone from the bank for a while，the alarms began to ring.
杰克离开银行一段时间后，警报响了起来。
Paragraph 2：But the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank, an old man.
最倒霉的是银行经理，一位老人。
Jack的结局？
正能量≠皆大欢喜
负转正的情节轮廓，正能量结尾
例2. “舞蹈比赛”
文章主人公Marry，之前因出车祸而受伤，她特别想通过一场比赛重新证明自己。Linda是她的竞争对手，但是临近比赛，Linda把配乐的磁带弄丢了，随后出现了续写的两个段首句：
Paragraph 1：Suddenly，Marry caught sight of a black box under the chair where Linda put her bag.
突然，Marry看见Linda放包的椅子下面有一个黑盒子。
Paragraph 2：Hearing her name called，Mary walked on the stage with her heart beating faster and faster.
听到有人叫她的名字，Mary走上舞台，心跳的越来越快。
磁带归还了吗？
比赛结果如何？
负转正的情节轮廓，正能量结尾
例1. “家中遇蛇”
文章主人公Roman呆在家里非常无聊，有一天在沙发下抓出一条蛇，他还以为是假的就扔给弟弟捉弄他，过后才意识到那是一条真蛇！
随后出现了续写的两个段首句：
Paragraph 1：As Roman was father from the snake，he jumped to the window and grabbed the curtain.
Roman离蛇更远，他跳到窗前抓住窗帘。
Paragraph 2：After the rescue team caught and took the snake away，everyone went inside the home.
救援队抓住了蛇并将其带走后，所有人都回到了屋里。
故事结局如何？
故事结局≠文章结尾
负转正的情节轮廓，正能量结尾
例1. “家中遇蛇”
文章主人公Roman呆在家里非常无聊，有一天在沙发下抓出一条蛇，他还以为是假的就扔给弟弟捉弄他，过后才意识到那是一条真蛇！
故事结局如何？
故事结局≠文章结尾
结尾需要点题
“Usual boring day!” This would be the answer from Roman if somebody asked him how his day was.These days he found everything boring, nothing excited he.
At home, safety comes first, not excitement.
如何用段首句和负转正的情节轮廓
分析情节 ？
负转正的情节轮廓，标记文章发展趋势
例1. “北极熊”
①One fall， my wife Elli and I had a single goal： to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside "the polar bear capital of the world" - the town of Churchill in Manitoba， Canada.
②Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears - like all wild animals - should be photographed from a safe distance. When I'm face to face with a polar bear， I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes， that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.
③As Elli and I cooked dinner， a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed， and smelled our garlic bread.
④The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp， which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.
⑤Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though - he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws（爪子）.
负转正的情节轮廓，正能量结尾
例1. “北极熊”
⑥I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way,but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter（相遇），I took some pictures of the bear.
⑦Elli and I feared the fence wouldn't last through 30 more minutes of the bear's punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears' eyes,but doesn't hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and,through the fence,sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar（吼叫），the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.
Paragraph 1: A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.______________________
Paragraph 2: At that very moment,the helicopter arrived._________________________
负转正的情节轮廓，标记文章发展趋势
例1. “北极熊”
Paragraph 1: A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.______________________
Paragraph 2: At that very moment,the helicopter arrived._________________________
前情提要
负1
转1
正
我和妻子准备去拍摄北极熊
北极熊袭击了我们的营地
直升机来了......
我们获救了
？
负转正的情节轮廓，标记文章发展趋势
例2. “爆米花”
①The Meredith family lived in a small community．As the economy was in decline，some people in the town had lost their jobs．Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet．People were trying to help each other meet the challenges．
②Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman．She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor．She knew they had problems，and they needed all kinds of help．When she had time，she would bring food and medicine to them．
③One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before．There was a man sick in bed，his wife，who took care of him and could not go out to work，and their little boy．The little boy - his name was Bernard - had interested her very much．
④"I wish you could see him，" she said to her own children，John，Harry，and Clara．"He is such a help to his mother．He wants very much to earn some money，but I don't see what he can do．"
⑤After their mother left the room，the children sat thinking about Bernard．"I wish we could help him to earn money，" said Clara． "His family is suffering so much．" "So do I，" said Harry．"We really should do something to assist them．"
负转正的情节轮廓，正能量结尾
例2. “爆米花”
⑥For some moments，John said nothing，but，suddenly，he sprang to his feet and cried，"I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish（完成）．"
⑦The other children also jumped up all attention．When John had an idea，it was sure to be a good one．"I tell you what we can do，" said John．"You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us？Well，we can make popcorn（爆米花），and put it into paper bags，and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it．"
Paragraph 1: When Mrs．Meredith heard of John's idea，she thought it was a good one too．__________
Paragraph 2: With everything ready，Bernard started out on his new business.__________________
负转正的情节轮廓，标记文章发展趋势
例2. “爆米花”
Paragraph 1: When Mrs．Meredith heard of John's idea，she thought it was a good one too．__________
Paragraph 2: With everything ready，Bernard started out on his new business.__________________
前情提要
负1
转1
正
经济萧条许多家庭都很困难，Meredith一家想要帮助困难的人们
Meredith发现Berbard的家庭很困难，决定帮助他
John想到了一个好主意...
Berbard 开始做生意.....
Berbard赚到了钱
？
负转正的情节轮廓，标记文章发展趋势
例2. “爆米花”
Paragraph 1: When Mrs．Meredith heard of John's idea，she thought it was a good one too．__________
Paragraph 2: With everything ready，Bernard started out on his new business.__________________
前情提要
负1
转1
正
经济萧条许多家庭都很困难，Meredith一家想要帮助困难的人们
Meredith发现Berbard的家庭很困难，决定帮助他
John想到了一个好主意
Berbard赚到了钱
负2
转2
Berbard 开始做生意.....
做爆米花时遇到了困难
负转正的情节轮廓，标记文章发展趋势
例3. “道歉短信”
①I was surprised when I received a short message from my father wishing me a happy birthday. I had expected to hear from my mother, my grandmother and my other relatives but never from my father. Lying in bed, memories of my father flooded back.
②When I was a little boy, I regarded my father as a hero able to do anything. However, things slowly began to change. The more I learned, the more I doubted what he said. The gap between us grew and, at last, I didn’t even like communicating with him.
③My father, in my mind, had no interest in talking with me. Dinner was the only time we were together. He had no time to watch TV with me. He would tell me to ask my mother if I needed something. He even refused to answer my calls when I phoned from school. I got accustomed to the changes. I thought that perhaps my father no longer loved me, so I hardly communicated with him and even was unwilling to contact him.
负转正的情节轮廓，正能量结尾
例3. “道歉短信”
④As time passed by, however, I began to wonder whether my behavior was right. And I began to be more and more upset. I had no idea how to get along well with him. One day, my mother told me that each time I called, my father was always listening beside her. Suddenly, I hated myself for my cold behaviour toward him.
⑤I tried thousands of times to apologize to my father. In the end, however, I was always too embarrassed about what I had done.
Paragraph 1: But that Saturday, I was so touched by his short message and decided to send a reply:“Thank you, my dear father.”________________
Paragraph 2:Two days later, I decided to go home.________________________________
负转正的情节轮廓，标记文章发展趋势
例3. “道歉短信”
Paragraph 1: But that Saturday, I was so touched by his short message and decided to send a reply:“Thank you, my dear father.”________________
Paragraph 2:Two days later, I decided to go home.________________________________
前情提要
负1
转1
正
父亲给我发送生日祝福，勾起了我关于他的回忆。
我难以和父亲沟通，
很少和他联系
母亲告诉我父亲经常偷听电话
父亲给我发送生日祝福短信
父亲和我和好了
？
负转正的情节轮廓，标记文章发展趋势
例3. “道歉短信”
Paragraph 1: But that Saturday, I was so touched by his short message and decided to send a reply:“Thank you, my dear father.”________________
Paragraph 2:Two days later, I decided to go home.________________________________
前情提要
负1
转1
正
父亲给我发送生日祝福，勾起了我关于他的回忆。
我难以和父亲沟通，
很少和他联系
母亲告诉我父亲经常偷听电话
父亲给我发送生日祝福短信
父亲和我和好了
负转正的情节轮廓，标记文章发展趋势
例3. “道歉短信”
Paragraph 1: But that Saturday, I was so touched by his short message and decided to send a reply:“Thank you, my dear father.”________________
Paragraph 2:Two days later, I decided to go home.________________________________
前情提要
负1
转1
正
父亲给我发送生日祝福，勾起了我关于他的回忆。
我难以和父亲沟通，
很少和他联系
母亲告诉我父亲经常偷听电话
父亲给我发送生日祝福短信
父亲和我和好了
负2
转2
我给父亲发短信，父亲未回复
我回家了
找到了父亲
如何在找到可呼应的细节进行点题 ？
负转正的情节轮廓，标记文章发展趋势
例1. “北极熊”
①One fall， my wife Elli and I had a single goal： to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside "the polar bear capital of the world" - the town of Churchill in Manitoba， Canada.
②Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears - like all wild animals - should be photographed from a safe distance. When I'm face to face with a polar bear， I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes， that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.
③As Elli and I cooked dinner， a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed， and smelled our garlic bread.
④The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp， which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.
⑤Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though - he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws（爪子）.
负转正的情节轮廓，正能量结尾
例1. “北极熊”
⑥I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way,but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter（相遇），I took some pictures of the bear.
⑦Elli and I feared the fence wouldn't last through 30 more minutes of the bear's punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears' eyes,but doesn't hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and,through the fence,sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar（吼叫），the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.
Paragraph 1: A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.______________________
Paragraph 2: At that very moment,the helicopter arrived._________________________
负转正的情节轮廓，正能量结尾
例1. “北极熊”
主题
人与自然
细节：my wife Elli and I had a single goal： to photograph polar bears
照片拍成了吗？
他们的感受是什么？
相机丢了
但对这次的惊险记忆犹新
对大自然保持敬畏之心
人尊重自然、探索自然
负转正的情节轮廓，标记文章发展趋势
例2. “爆米花”
①The Meredith family lived in a small community．As the economy was in decline，some people in the town had lost their jobs．Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet．People were trying to help each other meet the challenges．
②Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman．She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor．She knew they had problems，and they needed all kinds of help．When she had time，she would bring food and medicine to them．
③One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before．There was a man sick in bed，his wife，who took care of him and could not go out to work，and their little boy．The little boy - his name was Bernard - had interested her very much．
④"I wish you could see him，" she said to her own children，John，Harry，and Clara．"He is such a help to his mother．He wants very much to earn some money，but I don't see what he can do．"
⑤After their mother left the room，the children sat thinking about Bernard．"I wish we could help him to earn money，" said Clara． "His family is suffering so much．" "So do I，" said Harry．"We really should do something to assist them．"
负转正的情节轮廓，正能量结尾
例2. “爆米花”
⑥For some moments，John said nothing，but，suddenly，he sprang to his feet and cried，"I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish（完成）．"
⑦The other children also jumped up all attention．When John had an idea，it was sure to be a good one．"I tell you what we can do，" said John．"You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us？Well，we can make popcorn（爆米花），and put it into paper bags，and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it．"
Paragraph 1: When Mrs．Meredith heard of John's idea，she thought it was a good one too．__________
Paragraph 2: With everything ready，Bernard started out on his new business.__________________
负转正的情节轮廓，正能量结尾
例2. “爆米花”
主题
人与人
细节：People were trying to help each other meet the challenges
成功帮助了小男孩吗？
他们的感受是什么？
成功帮助小男孩
互相帮扶，世界更美好
人与人互相帮助
负转正的情节轮廓，标记文章发展趋势
例3. “道歉短信”
①I was surprised when I received a short message from my father wishing me a happy birthday. I had expected to hear from my mother, my grandmother and my other relatives but never from my father. Lying in bed, memories of my father flooded back.
②When I was a little boy, I regarded my father as a hero able to do anything. However, things slowly began to change. The more I learned, the more I doubted what he said. The gap between us grew and, at last, I didn’t even like communicating with him.
③My father, in my mind, had no interest in talking with me. Dinner was the only time we were together. He had no time to watch TV with me. He would tell me to ask my mother if I needed something. He even refused to answer my calls when I phoned from school. I got accustomed to the changes. I thought that perhaps my father no longer loved me, so I hardly communicated with him and even was unwilling to contact him.
负转正的情节轮廓，正能量结尾
例3. “道歉短信”
④As time passed by, however, I began to wonder whether my behavior was right. And I began to be more and more upset. I had no idea how to get along well with him. One day, my mother told me that each time I called, my father was always listening beside her. Suddenly, I hated myself for my cold behaviour toward him.
⑤I tried thousands of times to apologize to my father. In the end, however, I was always too embarrassed about what I had done.
Paragraph 1: But that Saturday, I was so touched by his short message and decided to send a reply:“Thank you, my dear father.”________________
Paragraph 2:Two days later, I decided to go home.________________________________
负转正的情节轮廓，正能量结尾
例3. “道歉短信”
主题
人与人
细节：I thought that perhaps my father no longer loved me,
父女和好了吗？
他们的感受是什么？
父女和好了
父爱不善于表露，但一直都在
父女关系/ 亲情
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