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2步 10句话
——教你轻松玩转读后续写
读后续写构思
START
外貌、动作、神态、语言、心理
How to make your writing vivid and attractive
细节描写
环境描写
人物描写
Lead-in
Please describe the following picture and video.
Tom cooked the duck.
Tom added some carrots,mixed them and took a sip .
Please describe the following picture and video.
The two pandas hugged .
The old panda dashed forward, raised his son up and hugged him tightly.
重结果更要重过程
Tip: 拆解动作，形成动作链
将结果性的动作，拆解成更细致的连贯性的微动作，使动作结果过程化，形成动作链。
近2年高考真题の读后续写
高考真题 问题 原 因 办 法 体裁 主题思想 侧重点
2023新高考Ⅰ&II 我不愿参加英文作文比赛 英语为非母语，写作很困难 老师的肯定和鼓励 记叙文 自我成长 动作描写
2022新高考Ⅰ&II 残疾的David不敢参加越野赛 害怕别人嘲笑 特教老师的劝说 记叙文 战胜自卑 动作描写
Full of worries, she grabbed the present and slowly ripped the present wrapping paper.
支点①:接Para1首句——关键词接龙,拆解动作。
第1步：3个支点，撬动半篇读后续写!
1段首句：Tom held a nice card in his hand carefully as he hurried home.
He hid the card behind his back and slid into the front door.
1段首句：Lucy’s present was the very last to be opened.
（2022新高考Ⅰ）1段首句：We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’t look at me.我们挨着坐了下来，David不看我。
（2023新高考Ⅰ）1段首句：A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news.
接：He just lowered his head without a word.
接：I won the first prize! I could hardly believe my ears.
第1步："3个支点，撬动半篇读后续写!
支点②看2段首句——就地取材、推上句接下句
2段首句：Deeply moved by what she said, Madison held the leash tightly ...
推上句：Lucy said “I heard you talking about your dog at school.That’s when I got the idea to make you a leash”.
接下句：It was, by far, her favourite birthday present of the day.
接下句：Then the race began. All the runners shot out like arrows./The moment the starting gun rang, all the students rushed out.
（2022新高考Ⅰ）2段首句：I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners.
推上句：Nervously looking at the field, he said to himself with determination, “I can make it.”
接下句：With the trophy in hand, I entered the office.And I presented the award certificate to my teacher.
（2023新高考Ⅰ）2段首句：I went to my teacher’s office after the award presentation.
推上句(颁奖时）：At the award presentation, l accepted the award certificate. At that moment, l couldn't help thinking of my teacher.
支点③交代结局，点睛升华。
使劲夸!使劲谢!灌鸡汤!皆大欢喜！
万能高分结尾：
A wave of delight/happiness seized sb.
第1步："3个支点，撬动半篇读后续写!
（2022新高考Ⅰ）我见证了David超越自我取得打破了自己记录的成绩。It turned out that he achieved his best record ever.我相信他这次的经历足以让他去面对未来一切困难。/我发现一个老师能带给学生的力量不容小觑。With the power to conquer himself, he can conquer anything on the way to a promising future.We shouldn't overlook the power that the teachers can give others.万能高分结尾：A wave of delight/happiness seized him.
（2023新高考Ⅰ）从那以后，我爱上了写作。/我成为了一名优秀的作家。That was when l fell in love with writing./I became an excellent writer.这一切都归功于我的老师给我的自信和鼓励。/每次遇到困难，我都会想起曾经相信我、鼓舞我的恩师。I was grateful to him for his inspiration and encouragement.
万能高分结尾：A wave of delight/happiness seized us.
调配顶级优质演员——情感表达、群演互动
擅长制造和化解冲突——起承转合
带资进组的特效大师——语言、动作活起来！
第2步：做超级编剧!
2023年：几周后，当我几乎忘记比赛的时候，传来了消息。①(关键词接龙,拆解动作。)我获得了第一名。②(顶级演员，刻画情感)听到这个消息，我站在那里呆住了，简直不敢相信自己的耳朵。③(群演互动)我的同学们一开始表示简直难以置信，然后立刻为我欢呼和鼓掌。④顶级演员，刻画情感)当我回过种来，激动的泪水涌上了我的眼睛。⑤(由2段首句推出)在颁奖典礼上，我接过奖杯，紧张兴奋不已，情不自禁想起了我的老师。
颁奖典礼后，我去了老师的办公室。⑥(就地取材，接下句)拿着奖杯，我走进了办公室。⑦(群演互动)老师从座位上站起来，笑着对我说恭喜你!⑧(刻画情感)我向老师表达了最诚挚的感谢，并把这小小的成就归功于他。⑨(点睛升华)老师对我说，是我自己的努力得到了回报，相信自己，你就能写得越来越好。我点头表示同意，从此爱上了写作。⑩万能高分结尾：A wave of delight/happiness seized us.
（2023新高考Ⅰ）A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. I could hardly believe that I won the first place. It felt like a dream. Then I was informed that the award presentation was just two days later. Not until the big day did I know it was the creativity and emotions in my essay that impressed all judges. Immersed in excitement and joy, I couldn’t wait to share my feelings with my social studies teacher, whom I should be most grateful to.
I went to my teacher’s office after the award presentation. With the trophy in hand, I entered the office.And I presented the award certificate to my teacher.“Congratulations! ”My teacher stood up and smiled .“When I watched you act out the play of the Titanic, I knew you were gifted at writing stories. ” he said, his eyes filled with pride. “Thank you.” I replied, “But for your encouragement, I wouldn’t have taken the first step and seen my own potential.” “Your hard work and persistence also played an important role! So keep writing!” he patted my shoulder gently and a determination rose from my heart. I was so lucky to meet my Bo Le.At that moment, a wave of happiness seized us.
2步10句话玩转读后续写
支点①:承接1段首句—关键词接龙,拆解动作。
支点②:读2段首句—就地取材、推上句接下句
情感表达、群演互动
第1步：找3个支点
第2步：做超级编剧
制造和化解冲突
语言、动作活起来！
支点③交代结局，点睛升华。
⑩万能高分结尾：A wave of delight/happiness seized me.
Conclusion
Assignment
Design the two paragraphs’ plots and finish the writing.（2022新高考Ⅰ）
Collect more useful words and expressions to decribe actions in your notebook.
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