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四种表达类型
第一部分 类型解析
类型 1：写人叙事
【真题解析】(2020·泸州中考)
泸州是全国文明城市, 我们应从身边小事做起, 成为文明泸州人。请你根据以下要点提 示, 以“To Be a Better Citizen (市民)”为题, 用英语写一篇短文。
要点提示:
1. 爱护环境, 不乱扔垃圾等;
2. 注意安全, 遵守交通规则, 不私自下河、塘游泳等;
3. 锻炼身体, 养成良好的生活习惯等;
4. 对人友善, 乐于助人等;
5. 其他……
要求: 1. 词数 110 左右(文章开头已给出, 不计入总词数);
2. 要点提示均须涉及, 可适当增加内容;
3. 字迹工整, 卷面整洁, 文意连贯, 语言流畅;
4. 不用真实姓名、校名、地名。
参考词语: protect, environment, litter, traffic rules, living habits
【写作分析】
1. 审主题: 由标题可知本文的主题就是“To Be a Better Citizen”。
2. 审人称: 由题干中的“我们”可判断本文以第一人称为主。
3. 审时态: 根据提示要点可判断本文主要用一般现在时。
【参考范文】
To Be a Better Citizen
Luzhou is a national civilized city. As a citizen, we should take pride in our city. And I think we have lots of things to do if we want to be a civilized citizen.
Firstly, it’s our duty to protect the environment because we live here every day. We mustn’t throw litter everywhere. Instead we can put it in the dustbins. Secondly, we should keep ourselves safe all the time. For example, following the traffic rules, not swimming in the river or the pool by ourselves. Thirdly, try to develop a good living habit. We had better play sports for at least one hour a day and don’t stay up too late. Fourthly, we are supposed to be friendly to others, and be ready to help others. Last but not least, we should respect our parents and help them do more housework.
If we follow these, we will be better citizens. And I hope our city will be better and better tomorrow.
【突破策略】
策略 1: 巧借小词大用
汉语中有些语意看来很复杂, 但在英语中可用一些常用词来表达。下面这些词为书面表 达高频词汇: talk, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kid, help 等。
策略 2: 巧用高级词汇
为了增加中考书面表达的亮点, 增强其表达效果, 可以使用高级词汇来代替一般词汇。 例如:
now/today→nowadays decide→make one’s mind/ make a decision should→be supposed to besides→what’s more/in addition
good→excellent/wonderful sb. think(s)→in one’s opinion
策略 3: 句式灵活变换
采用丰富的英语句式结构可以增强文章的表达效果, 能够凸显作者深厚的英语语言功 底。被动语态、非谓语动词、主从复合句以及特殊句型的使用, 均能够收到很好的效果。例 如: It’s our duty to protect the environment。另外, 适当使用英语谚语、格言也会使文章更出彩。
策略 4: 主题升格, 思想升华
“升华思想, 突出主题”是写作中的一个常用技法, 就是将一个浅显、普遍的主题提升到 一个更高的精神层面, 从而使文章主题更深刻、更突出。
类型 2：方法建议
【真题解析】(2020 莆田中考)
“平安出行, 文明乘车”已成为人们普遍关心的一个社会热门话题。请你根据图表中所提 示的内容要点用英语写一篇短文。
内容要点:
注意: 1. 短文的开头已给出, 不计入总词数;
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
3. 内容可适当发挥, 并表达你个人的看法;
4. 词数 90 左右。
How can we keep safe when we go out
【写作分析】
1. 审主题: 由题目可知本文的主题就是“How to keep safe”。
2. 审人称: 由题干中的“我们”可判断本文以第一人称为主。
3. 审时态: 根据提示要点可判断本文主要用一般现在时。
【参考范文】
How can we keep safe when we go out First, we must obey the traffic rules, especially
when we cross the road. Second, we are supposed to help children and the old to cross the road. Third, we should be careful when we get on a bus.
While we are on a bus, we should remember not to spit in public or throw litter around.
Neither should we speak loudly to disturb others. We’re expected to offer our seats to people in need. What’s more, smoking isn’t allowed on the bus.
In short, as students we should not only keep safe when we go out, but also be ready to help others.
【突破策略】
策略 1: 言之有理, 言之有物
建议、观点要鲜明、正确; 要有实实在在的内容去支撑建议、观点。如: First, we must obey the traffic rules, especially when we cross the road 等。
策略 2: 首尾呼应, 合理分段
在写此类短文时, 把文章的主题句写在最前面, 一目了然。在短文尾处, 精简概括前面 说过的内容, 文章的中心更加鲜明突出。
策略 3: 连词增色, 长短得当
使用恰当的连词对短文加以润色, 使所写短文思路清晰、文字连贯、语言流畅。以短句 为主, 与长句搭配, 使短文中的句子富有变化, 给人以错落有致的美感。如: we are supposed to. . . , We’re expected to. . . 等; 倒装句的使用, 均能起到很好的效果。如: Neither should we speak loudly to disturb others. 。
策略 4: 段落清晰, 完美收尾
运用简洁的语言, 把主题思想明确地表达出来, 升华思想, 或者在全文即将煞尾时, 卒 章显志, 使文章中心鲜明突出。如: In short, as students we should not only keep safe when we go out, but also be ready to help others. 。
类型 3：计划梦想
【真题解析】(2020·武汉中考)
假如你是李明, 打算向 ABC English 投稿, 谈谈你的英语学习计划。请根据以下内容提 示用英语完成稿件。
内容要点如下:
1. 时常阅读, 培养良好语感; 2. 看英文影片, 了解西方文化;
3. 坚持写英文日记, 提高写作策略; 4. 向他人学习, 改进学习方法;
5. 补充一两点个人想法。 注意:
1. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称; 2. 词数:60～80;
3. 内容连贯, 不要逐条翻译; 4. 标题和开头已给出, 不计入总词数。 参考词汇: develop v. 培养 sense n. 感觉 western adj. 西方的
My English Study Plan I will put more time and energy into English study.
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【写作分析】
1. 审主题: 由标题可知本文的主题就是“My English Study Plan”。
2. 审人称: 由标题中“My”及开头的“I”可判断本文以第一人称为主。
3. 审时态: 根据要点提示可判断本文应用一般将来时。
【参考范文】
My English Study Plan
I will put more time and energy into English study. Here is my plan for learning English.
Firstly, I’ll read more English newspapers and magazines in order to develop a good sense of language. Secondly, listening is also very important in learning English, so I will watch
more English movies. By watching these movies, I can not only improve my listening skills, but also understand western culture. Thirdly, I’ll keep writing English diaries to improve my writing skills. Fourthly, I’ll join an English club where I can learn from others, practice
speaking English as well as making good friends.
All in all, there is no fast way to learn English well but working hard. So I’ll try my best to follow my plan.
【突破策略】
策略 1: 遵循实事, 合理想象
根据实际情况做出计划, 以现实为依据合情合理地描述理想, 写出富有创造性、新奇、 有趣、可信的佳作。
策略 2: 巧妙过渡, 彰显文采
巧妙使用高级的过渡句或过渡词汇, 彰显作者的文字功底和写作才气, 增强语言的表 现力。如: in order to, not only. . . but also. . . , as well as 等。
策略 3: 大题小作, 变隐为显
在写作时, 面对“计划”或“梦想”等题材范围十分宽泛的“大题目”, 要选取自己占有材料 丰富的题目, 从新颖深刻的立意角度去写。并将题干中的隐含信息道破, 使其变为明示信息。
策略 4: 巧用词句, “语”众不同
短语的意思往往比单词更为饱满, 因此我们宜用短语巧妙表达。恰当使用高级词汇和复 合句等精彩词句可以让文章“靓”起来, 给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。
类型 4：说明介绍
【真题解析】(2020·广元中考)
新冠肺炎疫情使得 2020 年似乎变得漫长而沉重。但正是在这样一个特殊时期, 各行各 业涌现出了许多英雄, 诸如钟南山(呼吸科专家respiratory expert), 刘仙(志愿者), 吴辉(外卖 骑手 delivery man)等。他们不畏疫情、不辞辛劳, 用自己的默默奉献与坚持温暖了整个社会。
在这次疫情中, 谁是你心中的英雄呢 请以 Hero in My Heart 为题, 描述你心目中的英雄。 要点: 1. 介绍你心目中的英雄;
2. 你为什么崇拜他(她);
3. 你能从他(她)身上学到什么。
注意: 1. 包含以上要点, 文中不得出现考生真实姓名和校名;
2. 词数 80 左右。文章开头已给出, 不计入词数。
Hero in My Heart
In the battle against COVID-19, we have been moved by so many people.
【写作分析】
1. 审主题: 由标题可知本文的主题就是“Hero in My Heart”。
2. 审人称: 由题干中要求“介绍你心目中的英雄”可判断本文以第三人称为主。
3. 审时态: 根据要点提示中的要点可判断本文宜用一般现在时和一般过去时。
【参考范文】
Hero in My Heart
In the battle against COVID-19, we have been moved by so many people. Among them, the hero in my heart is Zhong Nanshan.
Zhong Nanshan, 84, is an excellent famous Chinese respiratory expert and is working
hard to study drugs for treating viruses. Seventeen years ago, he was the first hero in the fight
against SARS. And on January 22, 2020, he led a medical team to Wuhan for COVID-19. In the face of danger, he had a brave behavior. In the end, we Chinese beat COVID-19 with the help of Zhong and other experts and doctors. In my opinion, we should learn the bravery and the strong social responsibility from Zhong.
As a faithful fan of Zhong, I take pride in him. I hope that I should contribute my own strength to the motherland like him!
【突破策略】
策略 1: 凤头豹尾, 言之有序
开门见山, 直奔主题。开篇干脆利落, 入题快捷。结尾要像豹尾有平衡感, 即简洁明了。 如: Among them, the hero in my heart is Zhong Nanshan.
通过对实体事物的解说, 使读者对事物的形态、构造、性质等有所认识, 从而获得有关 的知识。这就要求说明的语言有逻辑性, 行文有条理。
策略 2: 多措并举, 优化布局
介绍事物时, 我们可以使用比较法和细节描述法等, 精心构思设计介绍次序, 使短文结 构、层次清晰, 更能深刻、完整地表现中心。如: Seventeen years ago, he was the first hero in the fight against SARS 等。
策略 3: 避繁就简, 措辞精准
说明介绍类书面表达的写作目的是介绍客观事物, 这就要求说明的语言应简练精辟、通 俗易懂。同时, 措辞必须严谨, 语言必须准确。绝不可言不达意, 有任何笼统、含糊、生硬 牵强的表达出现。
策略 4: 凸显亮点, 美化文章
尝试使用高级词汇或句型, 彰显我们的语言功底, 以凸显文章的亮点, 给文章增添文采, 给阅卷老师留下深刻印象。如: I hope that I should contribute my own strength to the motherland like him! 等。
第二部分 提升演练
1 ．"与人为善"是中华民族的传统美德。与人为善就是以善意的态度对待他人, 帮助他 人。善待他人,乐于助人也能让自己的心情保持愉悦。
某英文网站正在开展以"与人为善"为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英文写一篇 短文投稿,谈谈你对与人为善的看法, 曾经与人为善的经历以及你的感受。
提示词语:virtue(美德）,kind, important, help, improve, happy 提示问题:
●What do you think of being kind to others
●What did you do ●How did you feel
Being kind to others is a traditional virtue of Chinese people.
2 ．每一个周末都值得被热情以待。假如你是王明， 请以“My Weekend Life”为题，并根 据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。
1 ．要点：
1)你通常是如何度过周末的
2)你觉得哪些时光是愉快的
3)你觉得自己的周末生活如何
2 ．要求：
1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2)词数 100 左右。
My Weekend Life
3 ．每个人生活中都会经历很多事情，体会喜怒哀乐等种种情绪变化。请根据以下要点 和要求用英语写一篇短文。
1. 要点：1) 你经历过的一件（或几件）事情；
2) 它（们）给你带来哪些情绪变化；
3) 你的感受和体会。
2. 要求：1) 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2) 词数 90 左右。
4.昨天发生了一起交通事故,请根据以下的要点写一篇作文,必须包含以下几点: 1.事故发生时间:昨天事发地:大街上
2.事发经过:一个骑自行车的人撞了一个老妇人之后逃离现场,我扶起老人并把她送到了 附近的医院。
3.提醒大家要互相帮助。
5 ．上周日在秦淮河边发生了张明救落水小男孩的事情。请根据以下四幅图所描述的事情经 过，为校刊的英语园地写一篇题为“A Brave Young Man”的英文稿件。
注意：
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 词数 80 左右。
6．假定你是李华，请给你的笔友 Alan 写封邮件，告诉他今年你将去他所在的城市游玩，并 制定了旅行计划。你想征求他的意见，同时询问他是否可以接机。
邮件还应包括以下内容：
Your arrive time 10:30 a.m. July 2
Your travel Plan go to concert go camping ….
Means of transport(交通方式) during your visit by bike, by bus … ..
注意：
1、词数 90 左右，开头和结尾部分已经写好，不计入总词数；
2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3、文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
Dear Alan,
How is it going
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
7 ．请以“My Rules for a Healthy Life”为题写一篇 80 词左右的短文。 提示：足够的休息；恰当的饮食；适当的锻炼；
要求完整通顺，可适当发挥。
My Rules for a Healthy Life
Here are my rules for a healthy life.
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8．某语言学习网站针对人们学外语时遇到的困难做了一项调查，共有 6400 名网友参与，下 图是这次调查的投票结果。其中，没有足够的时间的人数占 35%，不能一直保持积极性的 人数占 25%。
请你用两段文字写一篇短文，第一段简要说明图表内容，第二段阐述你学外语遇到的困难以 及你的解决办法。
要求：1.词数不少于 80 词；
2.开头已给出，不计入总词数
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Recently ，I read a result of a survey made among 6 ，400 people about their difficulties in learning a foreign language.
9 ．现如今，我们国家认为劳动教育(LabourEducation)在社会发展中起着越来越重要的 作用。为此，你校校报英语栏目 English World 就开展校园劳动教育发起征文。请你根据以 下要点写一篇短文，内容须包括:
1.劳动教育的目标：学生明白劳动的重要性，培养学生的劳动意识和良好的劳动习惯 2.劳动教育的意义:以劳健体，以劳增智
3.你对劳动的看法及理由
4.对校内开展劳动活动的建议:
(1)学校开设劳动课程，教学生种树和栽花等
(2)学校设立一些俱乐部，比如烹饪和剪纸等
(3)“最能干住校生”评比
(4)班级组织学生分小组制定劳动计划，分配劳动任务 5.发出劳动倡议
注意:1.短文必须包含所有要点
2.文中不能出现真实的校名和姓名
10 ．随着科技的发展，电子书（e-books）逐渐进入校园，但对于电子书的争论一直没 有停息。你班同学发起了一次主题为“E-books, good or bad ”的讨论，假如你是李明，请你给 某英文报社写一封信，介绍一下讨论的情况及你自己的观点。
赞成 反对
意见 意见四种表达类型
第一部分 类型解析
类型 1：写人叙事
【真题解析】(2020·泸州中考)
泸州是全国文明城市, 我们应从身边小事做起, 成为文明泸州人。请你根据以下要点提 示, 以“To Be a Better Citizen (市民)”为题, 用英语写一篇短文。
要点提示:
1. 爱护环境, 不乱扔垃圾等;
2. 注意安全, 遵守交通规则, 不私自下河、塘游泳等;
3. 锻炼身体, 养成良好的生活习惯等;
4. 对人友善, 乐于助人等;
5. 其他……
要求: 1. 词数 110 左右(文章开头已给出, 不计入总词数);
2. 要点提示均须涉及, 可适当增加内容;
3. 字迹工整, 卷面整洁, 文意连贯, 语言流畅;
4. 不用真实姓名、校名、地名。
参考词语: protect, environment, litter, traffic rules, living habits
【写作分析】
1. 审主题: 由标题可知本文的主题就是“To Be a Better Citizen”。
2. 审人称: 由题干中的“我们”可判断本文以第一人称为主。
3. 审时态: 根据提示要点可判断本文主要用一般现在时。
【参考范文】
To Be a Better Citizen
Luzhou is a national civilized city. As a citizen, we should take pride in our city. And I think we have lots of things to do if we want to be a civilized citizen.
Firstly, it’s our duty to protect the environment because we live here every day. We mustn’t throw litter everywhere. Instead we can put it in the dustbins. Secondly, we should keep ourselves safe all the time. For example, following the traffic rules, not swimming in the river or the pool by ourselves. Thirdly, try to develop a good living habit. We had better play sports for at least one hour a day and don’t stay up too late. Fourthly, we are supposed to be friendly to others, and be ready to help others. Last but not least, we should respect our parents and help them do more housework.
If we follow these, we will be better citizens. And I hope our city will be better and better tomorrow.
【突破策略】
策略 1: 巧借小词大用
汉语中有些语意看来很复杂, 但在英语中可用一些常用词来表达。下面这些词为书面表 达高频词汇: talk, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kid, help 等。
策略 2: 巧用高级词汇
为了增加中考书面表达的亮点, 增强其表达效果, 可以使用高级词汇来代替一般词汇。 例如:
now/today→nowadays decide→make one’s mind/ make a decision should→be supposed to besides→what’s more/in addition
good→excellent/wonderful sb. think(s)→in one’s opinion
策略 3: 句式灵活变换
采用丰富的英语句式结构可以增强文章的表达效果, 能够凸显作者深厚的英语语言功 底。被动语态、非谓语动词、主从复合句以及特殊句型的使用, 均能够收到很好的效果。例 如: It’s our duty to protect the environment。另外, 适当使用英语谚语、格言也会使文章更出彩。
策略 4: 主题升格, 思想升华
“升华思想, 突出主题”是写作中的一个常用技法, 就是将一个浅显、普遍的主题提升到 一个更高的精神层面, 从而使文章主题更深刻、更突出。
类型 2：方法建议
【真题解析】(2020 莆田中考)
“平安出行, 文明乘车”已成为人们普遍关心的一个社会热门话题。请你根据图表中所提 示的内容要点用英语写一篇短文。
内容要点:
注意: 1. 短文的开头已给出, 不计入总词数;
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
3. 内容可适当发挥, 并表达你个人的看法;
4. 词数 90 左右。
How can we keep safe when we go out
【写作分析】
1. 审主题: 由题目可知本文的主题就是“How to keep safe”。
2. 审人称: 由题干中的“我们”可判断本文以第一人称为主。
3. 审时态: 根据提示要点可判断本文主要用一般现在时。
【参考范文】
How can we keep safe when we go out First, we must obey the traffic rules, especially
when we cross the road. Second, we are supposed to help children and the old to cross the road. Third, we should be careful when we get on a bus.
While we are on a bus, we should remember not to spit in public or throw litter around.
Neither should we speak loudly to disturb others. We’re expected to offer our seats to people in need. What’s more, smoking isn’t allowed on the bus.
In short, as students we should not only keep safe when we go out, but also be ready to help others.
【突破策略】
策略 1: 言之有理, 言之有物
建议、观点要鲜明、正确; 要有实实在在的内容去支撑建议、观点。如: First, we must obey the traffic rules, especially when we cross the road 等。
策略 2: 首尾呼应, 合理分段
在写此类短文时, 把文章的主题句写在最前面, 一目了然。在短文尾处, 精简概括前面 说过的内容, 文章的中心更加鲜明突出。
策略 3: 连词增色, 长短得当
使用恰当的连词对短文加以润色, 使所写短文思路清晰、文字连贯、语言流畅。以短句 为主, 与长句搭配, 使短文中的句子富有变化, 给人以错落有致的美感。如: we are supposed to. . . , We’re expected to. . . 等; 倒装句的使用, 均能起到很好的效果。如: Neither should we speak loudly to disturb others. 。
策略 4: 段落清晰, 完美收尾
运用简洁的语言, 把主题思想明确地表达出来, 升华思想, 或者在全文即将煞尾时, 卒 章显志, 使文章中心鲜明突出。如: In short, as students we should not only keep safe when we go out, but also be ready to help others. 。
类型 3：计划梦想
【真题解析】(2020·武汉中考)
假如你是李明, 打算向 ABC English 投稿, 谈谈你的英语学习计划。请根据以下内容提 示用英语完成稿件。
内容要点如下:
1. 时常阅读, 培养良好语感; 2. 看英文影片, 了解西方文化;
3. 坚持写英文日记, 提高写作策略; 4. 向他人学习, 改进学习方法;
5. 补充一两点个人想法。 注意:
1. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称; 2. 词数:60～80;
3. 内容连贯, 不要逐条翻译; 4. 标题和开头已给出, 不计入总词数。 参考词汇: develop v. 培养 sense n. 感觉 western adj. 西方的
My English Study Plan I will put more time and energy into English study.
____________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________
【写作分析】
1. 审主题: 由标题可知本文的主题就是“My English Study Plan”。
2. 审人称: 由标题中“My”及开头的“I”可判断本文以第一人称为主。
3. 审时态: 根据要点提示可判断本文应用一般将来时。
【参考范文】
My English Study Plan
I will put more time and energy into English study. Here is my plan for learning English.
Firstly, I’ll read more English newspapers and magazines in order to develop a good sense of language. Secondly, listening is also very important in learning English, so I will watch
more English movies. By watching these movies, I can not only improve my listening skills, but also understand western culture. Thirdly, I’ll keep writing English diaries to improve my writing skills. Fourthly, I’ll join an English club where I can learn from others, practice
speaking English as well as making good friends.
All in all, there is no fast way to learn English well but working hard. So I’ll try my best to follow my plan.
【突破策略】
策略 1: 遵循实事, 合理想象
根据实际情况做出计划, 以现实为依据合情合理地描述理想, 写出富有创造性、新奇、 有趣、可信的佳作。
策略 2: 巧妙过渡, 彰显文采
巧妙使用高级的过渡句或过渡词汇, 彰显作者的文字功底和写作才气, 增强语言的表 现力。如: in order to, not only. . . but also. . . , as well as 等。
策略 3: 大题小作, 变隐为显
在写作时, 面对“计划”或“梦想”等题材范围十分宽泛的“大题目”, 要选取自己占有材料 丰富的题目, 从新颖深刻的立意角度去写。并将题干中的隐含信息道破, 使其变为明示信息。
策略 4: 巧用词句, “语”众不同
短语的意思往往比单词更为饱满, 因此我们宜用短语巧妙表达。恰当使用高级词汇和复 合句等精彩词句可以让文章“靓”起来, 给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。
类型 4：说明介绍
【真题解析】(2020·广元中考)
新冠肺炎疫情使得 2020 年似乎变得漫长而沉重。但正是在这样一个特殊时期, 各行各 业涌现出了许多英雄, 诸如钟南山(呼吸科专家respiratory expert), 刘仙(志愿者), 吴辉(外卖 骑手 delivery man)等。他们不畏疫情、不辞辛劳, 用自己的默默奉献与坚持温暖了整个社会。
在这次疫情中, 谁是你心中的英雄呢 请以 Hero in My Heart 为题, 描述你心目中的英雄。 要点: 1. 介绍你心目中的英雄;
2. 你为什么崇拜他(她);
3. 你能从他(她)身上学到什么。
注意: 1. 包含以上要点, 文中不得出现考生真实姓名和校名;
2. 词数 80 左右。文章开头已给出, 不计入词数。
Hero in My Heart
In the battle against COVID-19, we have been moved by so many people.
【写作分析】
1. 审主题: 由标题可知本文的主题就是“Hero in My Heart”。
2. 审人称: 由题干中要求“介绍你心目中的英雄”可判断本文以第三人称为主。
3. 审时态: 根据要点提示中的要点可判断本文宜用一般现在时和一般过去时。
【参考范文】
Hero in My Heart
In the battle against COVID-19, we have been moved by so many people. Among them, the hero in my heart is Zhong Nanshan.
Zhong Nanshan, 84, is an excellent famous Chinese respiratory expert and is working
hard to study drugs for treating viruses. Seventeen years ago, he was the first hero in the fight
against SARS. And on January 22, 2020, he led a medical team to Wuhan for COVID-19. In the face of danger, he had a brave behavior. In the end, we Chinese beat COVID-19 with the help of Zhong and other experts and doctors. In my opinion, we should learn the bravery and the strong social responsibility from Zhong.
As a faithful fan of Zhong, I take pride in him. I hope that I should contribute my own strength to the motherland like him!
【突破策略】
策略 1: 凤头豹尾, 言之有序
开门见山, 直奔主题。开篇干脆利落, 入题快捷。结尾要像豹尾有平衡感, 即简洁明了。 如: Among them, the hero in my heart is Zhong Nanshan.
通过对实体事物的解说, 使读者对事物的形态、构造、性质等有所认识, 从而获得有关 的知识。这就要求说明的语言有逻辑性, 行文有条理。
策略 2: 多措并举, 优化布局
介绍事物时, 我们可以使用比较法和细节描述法等, 精心构思设计介绍次序, 使短文结 构、层次清晰, 更能深刻、完整地表现中心。如: Seventeen years ago, he was the first hero in the fight against SARS 等。
策略 3: 避繁就简, 措辞精准
说明介绍类书面表达的写作目的是介绍客观事物, 这就要求说明的语言应简练精辟、通 俗易懂。同时, 措辞必须严谨, 语言必须准确。绝不可言不达意, 有任何笼统、含糊、生硬 牵强的表达出现。
策略 4: 凸显亮点, 美化文章
尝试使用高级词汇或句型, 彰显我们的语言功底, 以凸显文章的亮点, 给文章增添文采, 给阅卷老师留下深刻印象。如: I hope that I should contribute my own strength to the motherland like him! 等。
第二部分 提升演练
1 ．"与人为善"是中华民族的传统美德。与人为善就是以善意的态度对待他人, 帮助他 人。善待他人,乐于助人也能让自己的心情保持愉悦。
某英文网站正在开展以"与人为善"为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英文写一篇 短文投稿,谈谈你对与人为善的看法, 曾经与人为善的经历以及你的感受。
提示词语:virtue(美德）,kind, important, help, improve, happy 提示问题:
●What do you think of being kind to others
●What did you do ●How did you feel
Being kind to others is a traditional virtue of Chinese people.
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【参考范文】
Being kind to others is a traditional virtue of
Chinese people.I think we should be
kind
to
others and it is very important fo
r us. When I
started middle
school,
my
friend
Peter
failed
in
the
math exam. He was so sad that he wanted to gi
ve
up.
When
I
knew
this,
I
encouraged
him
and
gave him some advice. Every day we did homework together
and
I
helped
him
when
he
was
in
trouble. With my help he improved a lot. I was very happy and pro
ud.
【写作解析】本题目属于记叙文写作，根据写作要求，首先对乐于助人提出自己的见解；其
次描写自己是如何做的；第三描写自身的心态。注意要点
要全面，时态要准确。
短语：
failed in the math exam
；
be
in trouble
；
With my help
；
improve a lot
句型：
It He was so sad that he
wanted to
give up.
When I knew this, I encouraged him a
nd gave him
some
advice.
)
2 ．每一个周末都值得被热情以待。假如你是王明， 请以“My Weekend Life”为题，并根 据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。
1 ．要点：
1)你通常是如何度过周末的
2)你觉得哪些时光是愉快的
3)你觉得自己的周末生活如何
2 ．要求：
1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2)词数 100 左右。
My Weekend Life
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【参考范文】
My weekend life
I have a busy weekend. On
Saturday morning, I get u
p very late. Then
my
mother
asks
me
to
clean the rooms.. Then I read a book ab
out famous Chinese.
In
the
afternoon,
I
often
do
my
English homework. It is very easy fo
r me. And I like
it
very
much.
On
Saturday
evening,
I
have
to
wash my clothes. I think it is interersting. I could
n't
watch
the
Animal
World.
On
Sunday
morning, I go to the supermarket and buy a lot
of
food.
In
the
afternoon,
I
sometimes
play
computer games with my friends. On
Sunday evening
, I go to
a big
restaurant
to
have
dinner with
my parents. The food is delicious. I am very tire
d, but
I
feel
happy!
【写作解析】题干解读：根据提示可知：需要这种短文中介绍的有：怎样度过周末、那些时
间是愉快的和你的看法。用第一人称来写，
因为介绍周末的生活习惯，所以用一般现在时。
例文点评：短文介绍了了周六和周日做的事情，
自己动手做事情，
看书，洗衣服，购物等，
周末过得开心，语言通顺、简练。是好文章。
高分亮点：
短语：
get up; do one’s homework; have to; a lot
of
句型：
ask sb. to do sth.
；宾语从句
I think it was
too bad.
)
3 ．每个人生活中都会经历很多事情，体会喜怒哀乐等种种情绪变化。请根据以下要点 和要求用英语写一篇短文。
1. 要点：1) 你经历过的一件（或几件）事情；
2) 它（们）给你带来哪些情绪变化；
3) 你的感受和体会。
2. 要求：1) 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2) 词数 90 左右。
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【参考范文】
There are a lot of
things happening around us ev
ery
day. Now
let me
share
a
story between
a
stranger and me with you.
One day, I
just got on a crowded bus. A woman behind me pushed me hard,
an
d
shouted
loudly," Go, go, go inside. Don't stand
at the
door.
."
I was
so
angry
and
thought
she
was
a bored
woman. But I went inside. After a while, the woman wen
t up to me and
said
in
a
low voice,"
Someone put his hand into your bag. I really wanted to help you
. Then I checked my bag
and
all
the things were inside. I felt so ash
amed that
I
only
said,"
I
am
so
sorry, but thank
you."
This thing will be left in my mind for
ever. I know sometimes
someone
did
a
little
thing,
and
maybe it is nothing to her, but for
another one,
it
means
a
lot.
【写作解析】
题干解析：本文要记述生活中发生的一件事情，所以文章体裁是记叙文，并且要用一般
过去时，而且文章中要体现出情绪的变化及从这件事情中自己的
体会和感受。
例文解析：本篇文章讲述了自己在公交车上和一个陌生人之间发生的故事。开头开篇点
题，中间部分，讲述了事情发生的讲过，并描述了自己情绪的变化，例如
I was so angry
，
ashamed
以及
I am so sorry, but thank you
，作者先是生气，后来羞愧并感激；最后写了在这
件故事中自己的感受。事件描述清晰，并且内容符合题目要求。
经典例句：短语：
go up to me
走向某人
, so….that….
如此
…
以至于
…
. shar
e…with
sb
和
某人分享某物
, left in my mind
留在我的记忆中
句子：
This thing will be left in my mind
forever.
After a while, the woman went up to me an
d said in
a
low
voice.
)
4.昨天发生了一起交通事故,请根据以下的要点写一篇作文,必须包含以下几点: 1.事故发生时间:昨天事发地:大街上
2.事发经过:一个骑自行车的人撞了一个老妇人之后逃离现场,我扶起老人并把她送到了 附近的医院。
3.提醒大家要互相帮助。
(
【参考范文】
A traffic accident
There was a traffic accident on the street yesterda
y. A man who rode
a
bike
hit
an
old
woman. Then the man ran away from the scene. Nobody came to
help
him.
I
went
over
to
her.
And I asked
:“What’s wrong with you ”She said:“Nothing serious.
Please
help
me.”I picked up
the old man and took her to a nearby hospi
tal.
I think we should help each other when
we
are in
trouble.
【写作解析】
题干解读：该题目属于记述文，也是材料作文作文，根据所给要点写一篇作文，描述昨天发
生了一起交通事故。本文时态主要是一般过去时。认为阅读材料， 认真审题，根
据提示要点
列出提纲，短文必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥。
例文点评：例文采用二段式，第
1
段描述了事故过程，第
2
段表达作者的观
点。本文时态使
用正确，表达条理清楚连贯，包含了所有要点，运用了直接引用，定语从句，宾语从句等多
种句式，增强了文章的感染力。
高分亮点：
短语和连词的使用：
there be
，
run away
，
pick
up
，
take…to…
等。
句型
：（
1
）
There was a traffic accident
on the street yesterday.
（
2
）
A
man
who
rode
a
bike
hit
an
old woman.
（
3
）
And I asked
:“What’s wrong with you ”She said
:“Nothing serious.
Please help
)
(
me.”
（
4
）
I think we should help each other when we
are in trouble.
等。
)
5 ．上周日在秦淮河边发生了张明救落水小男孩的事情。请根据以下四幅图所描述的事情经 过，为校刊的英语园地写一篇题为“A Brave Young Man”的英文稿件。
注意：
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 词数 80 左右。
(
【参考范文】
A Brave Young Man
It was a nice day last
Sunday. Zhang Ming wa
s fishing by the
Qinhuai
River when
a
little boy
went to play nearby.
Suddenly, Zhang Ming heard someone shout
ing for help. He
looked
around
and found that the little boy fell into the water. It was very
dangerous. Zhang
Ming
j
umped
into
the river immediately. He tried his best to pull the boy out of
the river. At that time other people
came to offer help. Finally, the boy was saved and he was very
grateful.
People
all
said
Zhang
Ming was very brave and helpful. We should learn from
him.
【写作解析】这是一篇给材料作文，本文通过几张图片给出
了写作的主要内容。动笔前我们
首先要认真观察这几张图片，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来。写作前先结合要
表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意写
作中的时态、人称和数的问题， 由于是故事性文章，故时态一般是一般过去时态，人
称是单
)
(
数第三人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明，说
明有条理，符合逻辑。
)
6．假定你是李华，请给你的笔友 Alan 写封邮件，告诉他今年你将去他所在的城市游玩，并 制定了旅行计划。你想征求他的意见，同时询问他是否可以接机。
邮件还应包括以下内容：
Your arrive time 10:30 a.m. July 2
Your travel Plan go to concert go camping ….
Means of transport(交通方式) during your visit by bike, by bus … ..
注意：
1、词数 90 左右，开头和结尾部分已经写好，不计入总词数；
2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3、文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
Dear Alan,
How is it going
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
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【参考范文】
Dear Alan
How is
it
going
I'
m
thinking
of
taking
a
trip
to
your
city
this
summer
vacation
,
I
wonder
if
you
will
meet
me
at the airport at
10:30 am, July 2,
since
it
is my
first
visit
t
here.
Besides, I’ve made a travel plan, including enjoying mus
ic at a
concert,
going
camping
and
)
(
visiting some places of
interest. I've heard that there are some
amazing
sig
hts
in your
city!
Would
you please give me some advice Either traveling by bike or by bus w
ould
suit me
fine. It'
s
environmentally friendly. Do you have any plans for the coming
vacation
Looking forward to your
reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作解析】假定你是李华，请给你的笔友
Alan
写封邮件，告诉他今年你将去他所在的城
市游玩，并制定了旅行计划。你想征求他的意见， 同时询问他是否可以接机
。文章要使用第
一人称为主。注意所给要点提示。建议在写作时， 尽量使用你熟悉句式和词
汇，同时添加适
当内容，让文章更加自然流畅。特别注意不要出现中国
式英语思维的句式。
)
7 ．请以“My Rules for a Healthy Life”为题写一篇 80 词左右的短文。 提示：足够的休息；恰当的饮食；适当的锻炼；
要求完整通顺，可适当发挥。
My Rules for a Healthy Life
Here are my rules for a healthy life.
(
【参考范文】
My Rules for a
Healthy
Life
Here are my rules for a healthy lif
e.The first
and most
important
one
is to
get
enough
rest.You must always get enough rest
！
If
you are tired
，
you will not be
able
to
work
well
，
and
you
will be in a bad mood all the time.The second is to
make
sure
that you
eat properly.Make
sure
you
eat enough rice
，
vegetables and meat.Stay away from fast
food
enough
，
and
don’t
overeat.
The third rule is to exercise twice a week.If
you don’t exerci
se
at
least
this much
，
your body
will get stiff
and weak.The fourth rule is to care
for your
friends
an
d your
family.Not
only will
your friends and family be happy
，
you will too
【写作解析】题干解读：这是一篇话题作文，围绕
“
我的健康生活准则
”
来写，根据题干提示，
)
(
从饮食、休息、锻炼及其他活动等方面适当发挥想象并延展开来， 写作时注意
语句通顺，条
理清晰，书写规范。
写作指导：文章主要以第一人称来写，时态为一般现在时，全文分三段来写。具体围绕足够
的休息，健康平衡的饮食，适当的运动锻炼来展开。最后一段总结一下，再拓展升华一下主
题即可。
)
8．某语言学习网站针对人们学外语时遇到的困难做了一项调查，共有 6400 名网友参与，下 图是这次调查的投票结果。其中，没有足够的时间的人数占 35%，不能一直保持积极性的 人数占 25%。
请你用两段文字写一篇短文，第一段简要说明图表内容，第二段阐述你学外语遇到的困难以 及你的解决办法。
要求：1.词数不少于 80 词；
2.开头已给出，不计入总词数
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Recently ，I read a result of a survey made among 6 ，400 people about their difficulties in learning a foreign language.
(
【参考范文】
Recently, I read a result of
a survey made among
6, 400 people
about
their
difficulties
in
)
(
learning a foreign language.
35% of
people think there is no
enough
time
for them.
25%
of
them
think that keeping up the motivation is their main difficulty. 20% say the
y often
feel
ashamed
when speaking a foreign language. And the rest of
20%
of
people
say they
have
n
o
access
to
native speakers
.
For me, the two main difficulties are “ being unable to keep up the motivation” and “ h
aving
no access to native speakers”
. However, where t
here are difficulties, there
are
ways
to
get
over
them.
So I watch English movies in my free time.
There are
many
foreign
teachers
giving
lessons
online, so I practice my English in
that
way.
【写作解析】
1
、题干解读：本文要求阐述图表内容和你学外语时遇到的
问题以及你的解决
办法，故文体为说明文。阐述图表内容时，人称以第三人称为主；阐述你学外语时遇到的困
难以及解决办法，以第一人称为主；时态以
一般现在时为主。
2
、例文点评：例文第一段说明图表内容；第二段介绍学外语遇到的困难以及
解决办法。叙
事完整且条理清晰，无语法错误。
3
、高分亮点：
the
rest
of
剩余的
be unable to do sth.
不能做某事
in one’s free time
在某人空闲时间
in that way
用那种方式
There be
某处有某物
...when speaking a foreign language.
When
引导的时间状语从句（省略句）
...where there are difficulties, the
re are ways to
get over
them.
Where
引导的地点状语从句
)
9 ．现如今，我们国家认为劳动教育(LabourEducation)在社会发展中起着越来越重要的 作用。为此，你校校报英语栏目 English World 就开展校园劳动教育发起征文。请你根据以 下要点写一篇短文，内容须包括:
1.劳动教育的目标：学生明白劳动的重要性，培养学生的劳动意识和良好的劳动习惯 2.劳动教育的意义:以劳健体，以劳增智
3.你对劳动的看法及理由
4.对校内开展劳动活动的建议:
(1)学校开设劳动课程，教学生种树和栽花等
(2)学校设立一些俱乐部，比如烹饪和剪纸等
(3)“最能干住校生”评比
(4)班级组织学生分小组制定劳动计划，分配劳动任务 5.发出劳动倡议
注意:1.短文必须包含所有要点
2.文中不能出现真实的校名和姓名
(
【参考范文】
Nowadays, Labour Education plays an important role in the social development.
As a student, we should understand the important of
working
and
develop
good work
ing
habits
.
As
we
all
know
,
working
can
make
us
healthy
and
clever
.
I
like
working
because
it
makes
me powerful.
There will be more activities about working in our school. Firstly, there
will
be
working
courses which teach us to plant trees and flowers.
Secondly, t
here will be some clubs
about
cooking and paper cuttings. Thirdly, we will hold a match to
choose the most
able
student.
At
last,
the students will be divided into different groups. Each of
the
groups
will
make
working plans
a
nd
finish the tasks.
Let’s take part in working and enjoy it with ou
r
classmates.
【写作解析】
1.
题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作，但是作文应该用宣传号召的语气写。第
一段描述劳动教育越来越受重视；第二段描述劳动的重要性和目标；第三段写学校的劳动活
动；最后一段呼吁同学们积极劳动。
2.
写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时；论述观
点时应叙述完
整，保证条理清晰。
)
10 ．随着科技的发展，电子书（e-books）逐渐进入校园，但对于电子书的争论一直没 有停息。你班同学发起了一次主题为“E-books, good or bad ”的讨论，假如你是李明，请你给 某英文报社写一封信，介绍一下讨论的情况及你自己的观点。
赞成意见 反对意见
环保，节约纸张 长时间使用对眼睛 有害
易于携带，便于查找 资料 不利于记笔记
你的观点:
要求：
（1）词数：80—100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；（2）覆盖所有信息点；（3）注意 合适的连接词的应用；（4）你的观点至少两条；（5）不能出现真实姓名和校名。
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about a discussion we’ve had about whether e-books are good or bad.
Yours truly, Li Ming
(
【参考范文】
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about a discussion we’ve had about wh
ether e-books
are
good
or bad.
Some of
the students prefer e-books because they think that using e-books is
g
ood
for the
environment and it can save a lot
of
paper. What’s
mor
e,
e-books
are
also
very
nice
and
small.
And they are easy to carry. People can
search fo
r
information
conveniently.
However, other students have different ideas. They think if
they use
e-books
for
a
long time,
it is bad for their eyes. While having classes, stude
nts
can’t take
notes
directly
in
the
e-books.
In my opinion, I love to read paper books. On the one hand, paper
books
are
easier for us
to
)
(
see and memorize the knowledge. On the other hand, they are mo
re
comfortable to read
and
they
won’t hurt our
eyes.
)

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