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个人情感
第一部分 关联教材
（人教新目标）
【教材话题衔接】
教材 话题 写作角度
7 下 Unit 1 Can you play the guitar Joining a club Talk about abilities
7 下 Unit 10 I’d like some noodles. Food Order food
8 上 Unit 6 I’m going to study computer science. Life goals Talk about future intentions
8 上 Unit 7 Will people have robots Life in the future Make predictions
8 下 Unit 8 Have you read Treasure Island Literature and Talk about recent events and
yet music experiences
9 Unit 9 I like music that I can dance to. Music and movies Express preferences
【教材句式回顾】
1. Are you good with old people
你善于与老人相处吗 (7 下教材 P5)
2.They never cut up the noodles because the long noodles are a symbol of long life.他们从不切碎 面条, 因为长长的面条是长寿的象征。(7 下教材 P59 )
3.Some people might say they are going to take up a hobby like painting or taking photos, or learn to play the guitar.
有些人可能说他们要从事一种爱好,如绘画或者拍照,或者学习弹吉他。(8 上教材 P45)
4.However, they agree it may take hundreds of years.然而,他们也同意说也许需要几百年的时 间。(8 上教材 P53)
5 and she can’t wait to read them!
……她迫不及待地想读它们!(8 下教材 P60)
6.The music was strangely beautiful, but under the beauty I sensed a strong sadness and pain. 乐曲异常优美,但在唯美的背后我感觉到了一种强烈的悲伤和痛苦。(9 教材 P70)
【文化表达积累】
1.The secret of success is interest.
成功的秘诀在于兴趣。
2.Every man has his own taste in clothes and hats.穿衣戴帽,各有所好。 3.Interest is the best teacher.
兴趣是最好的老师。
4.Hobbies are the first step to acquire knowledge. 爱好是获得知识的第一步。
5.The more devoted you are, the more skilled you are. 嗜之越笃,技巧越工。
第二部分 策略解析
(2021·临沂中考)在你的学校生活、家庭生活、社会活动及兴趣爱好等方面,一定有让你 引以为豪的事情。请以 “ One Thing I’m Proud of ” 为题,根据以下要求与提示,用英语写一篇 短文,记述一件令你感到自豪的事情。
要求:1.短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息, 否则不予评分; 2.不少于 60 词。
提示:1.What is the thing you’re proud of 2.Why are you proud of it
One Thing I’m Proud of
【写作解析】
第一步：审题
1.定人称:第一人称为主
2.定时态:一般过去时和一般现在时
3.定要点:(1)引出主题:how I became good at English (2)开始情况:be like a bad dream; not understand...
(3)举例说明:talked with me; gave some advice; reviewed; read aloud...
(4)陈述结果:be good at...; got an “A” ...
(5)发表感想:everyone can achieve their goals if they work hard
4.定思路:首先点明主题——值得骄傲的事情;然后进行具体陈述,可用具体事例来说明; 接着叙述结果;最后发表自己的感想。
第二步：谋篇
框架 要点 升格/扩写
开头 引出话题 骄傲之事 I still remember how I became good at English. 用 比 较 级 升 格 :Now I still remember how I became at English.
主体 陈述经过 开始情况 At first, every English class was like a bad dream for me. 用 used to 升 格 :At first, every English class be like a bad dream for me.
举例说明 I kept using English every day. 增 加 修 饰 语 :I kept using English every day. ( 用 as much as I could 提升)
陈述结果 Two months later, I got an“A” in the final exam. 扩 写 结果 : and got an “A” in the final exam.
结尾 发表感想 I realize that everyone can achieve their goals through hard work. 用 if 引导的状语从句提升:I realize that everyone can achieve their goals
第三步：成篇
One Thing I’m Proud of Now I still remember how I became much better at English. At first, every English class used to be like a bad dream for me.I could hardly understand my teacher. One day, the teacher talked with me and gave me some useful advice. I began to review words from time to time, even on the way to school. I read aloud to practice pronunciation. I watched English videos, ①副词 hardly 表程度, 明确 地表达了刚开始学英语时的 状况。 ②词组from time to time 及 even on the way to school 进 一步表明作者学习英语的勤 奋和用心。
and kept diaries in English. Whenever I met new words, I looked them up in a dictionary. I kept using English as much as I could every day. Practice makes perfect. About two months later, I became good at English and got an “A” in the final exam. I am really proud of this experience, because I realize that everyone can achieve their goals if they work hard. ③Practice makes perfect 用 在这里恰到好处,不但表达了 作者的努力, 同时也告诉读者 一个道理。 ④最后一句为复合句, 句式 结构正确、合理
第三部分 综合提升
1 ．作为一名中学生，我们应该有一颗感恩的心。请以“Learn to Express Thanks”为话题，根 据以下提示写一篇演讲稿。
提示：
1. 列举身边缺乏感恩的实例；
2. 列举生活中我们主要的感恩对象和原因；
3. 简述如何表达感恩之心。 要求：
1. 语言表达准确，语意连贯；
2. 词数 90 左右。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Good morning, boys and girls!
The topic of my speech is “Learn to Express Thanks” .
Thank you for listening!
2 ．榜样，就是那些闪耀着奋进之光的人，他们为我们指引方向。在你的成长过程中，
一定有许多值得你学习的榜样，比如袁隆平、姚明等著名人物，或者你身边的老师、亲人、 朋友等普通人。假如你是李华，学校英语角将举办 “The Person I Admire” 为题的演讲比赛，
请你根据要点适当发挥，写一篇介绍自己的榜样的演讲稿。 要点提示：
1.Who do you admire (general information about the person you admire) 2.Why do you admire him/her
(1)What does he/she look like (appearance of the person you admire)
(2)What is he/she like (qualities, abilities, hobbies of the person you admire and examples) 3.What will you do to learn from him/her (future plan)
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3 ．电影《你好，李焕英》讲述了妈妈和女儿之间的故事。影片将母爱诠释得恰到好处， 令观众感动不已。我们总以为自己已经很爱妈妈了， 但妈妈远比你想象中还要爱你。生活 中，你和妈妈之间肯定发生过很多令你难以忘记的事情，请用英语介绍你的妈妈，讲述一件 你们经历过的事情，并说说你会用什么实际行动来报答妈妈。
内容包括：
something about your mother（外表，性格，爱好） an experience you had with your mother
what you will do to thank her 要求：
1. 词数不少于 80；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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4 ．党的二十大完美落幕，对我们国家的发展进行了重大的战略布局，在中国共产党的 领导下，我们的国家从以前的峥嵘岁月到现在的国泰民安。作为中学生， 我们有责任让更多 人了解我们的国家。根据下面思维导图内容提示，请以“China in My Eyes”为题，写一篇英 语短文，介绍一下我们亲爱的祖国！
要求：
1. 书写认真规范，词数不少于 80 词，开头已给出不计入总词数；
2. 短文必须包括所有要点提示，语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
China in My Eyes
Hello, everyone! I am from China and I like my country very much. Now I’d like to introduce my country to you!
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5 ．每个人都有心情不好的时候，当情绪不好的时候，该怎样调节自己？有人通过旅行 忘掉烦恼，有人通过听音乐换种心情，有人通过阅读找回快乐 ……某英语报社开展“How I change my bad feelings”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你是怎样调节心情的。 要求：
1.词数 100 词左右；
2.须包括所有要点提示，并适当补充，语句通顺，内容连贯； 3.文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。
How I change my bad feelings!
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6 ．同学们，在你的学生和生活中，一定经历过对你来说难忘的瞬间（开心、感动、激 动……）。请你以 The Most Unforgettable Moment 为题，写一篇不少于 80 词的短文。
提示：
1. 难忘的瞬间是什么？
2. 你的感受、收获，对你的影响。
The Most Unforgettable Moment
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7 ．生活中有时会有不如意的事情，但当你回首拾起那些零碎的小事时，欢喜便会一点 点涌上心头。请结合自己的体会， 讨论“发现生活中的小欢喜”这一主题，分享你青春的故事 吧！
要求：
1. 内容必须包括写作要点，也可在此基础上适当发挥。
2. 开头已给出，不少于 80 词。
3. 短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，严禁乱写乱画，否则不予评分。提示：
（1）What makes you happy
（2）What happened and what did you do at that moment
Discover the little happiness in daily life
Hey, guys! In fact, little happiness is everywhere in our daily life.
_______________________________________________________________________________个人情感
第一部分 关联教材
（人教新目标）
【教材话题衔接】
教材 话题 写作角度
7 下 Unit 1 Can you play the guitar Joining a club Talk about abilities
7 下 Unit 10 I’d like some noodles. Food Order food
8 上 Unit 6 I’m going to study computer science. Life goals Talk about future intentions
8 上 Unit 7 Will people have robots Life in the future Make predictions
8 下 Unit 8 Have you read Treasure Island Literature and Talk about recent events and
yet music experiences
9 Unit 9 I like music that I can dance to. Music and movies Express preferences
【教材句式回顾】
1. Are you good with old people
你善于与老人相处吗 (7 下教材 P5)
2.They never cut up the noodles because the long noodles are a symbol of long life.他们从不切碎 面条, 因为长长的面条是长寿的象征。(7 下教材 P59 )
3.Some people might say they are going to take up a hobby like painting or taking photos, or learn to play the guitar.
有些人可能说他们要从事一种爱好,如绘画或者拍照,或者学习弹吉他。(8 上教材 P45)
4.However, they agree it may take hundreds of years.然而,他们也同意说也许需要几百年的时 间。(8 上教材 P53)
5 and she can’t wait to read them!
……她迫不及待地想读它们!(8 下教材 P60)
6.The music was strangely beautiful, but under the beauty I sensed a strong sadness and pain. 乐曲异常优美,但在唯美的背后我感觉到了一种强烈的悲伤和痛苦。(9 教材 P70)
【文化表达积累】
1.The secret of success is interest.
成功的秘诀在于兴趣。
2.Every man has his own taste in clothes and hats.穿衣戴帽,各有所好。 3.Interest is the best teacher.
兴趣是最好的老师。
4.Hobbies are the first step to acquire knowledge. 爱好是获得知识的第一步。
5.The more devoted you are, the more skilled you are. 嗜之越笃,技巧越工。
第二部分 策略解析
(2021·临沂中考)在你的学校生活、家庭生活、社会活动及兴趣爱好等方面,一定有让你 引以为豪的事情。请以 “ One Thing I’m Proud of ” 为题,根据以下要求与提示,用英语写一篇 短文,记述一件令你感到自豪的事情。
要求:1.短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息, 否则不予评分; 2.不少于 60 词。
提示:1.What is the thing you’re proud of 2.Why are you proud of it
One Thing I’m Proud of
【写作解析】
第一步：审题
1.定人称:第一人称为主
2.定时态:一般过去时和一般现在时
3.定要点:(1)引出主题:how I became good at English (2)开始情况:be like a bad dream; not understand...
(3)举例说明:talked with me; gave some advice; reviewed; read aloud...
(4)陈述结果:be good at...; got an “A” ...
(5)发表感想:everyone can achieve their goals if they work hard
4.定思路:首先点明主题——值得骄傲的事情;然后进行具体陈述,可用具体事例来说明; 接着叙述结果;最后发表自己的感想。
第二步：谋篇
框架 要点 升格/扩写
开头 引出话题 骄傲之事 I still remember how I became good at English. 用比较级升格:Now I still remember how I became much better at English.
主体 陈述经过 开始情况 At first, every English class was like a bad dream for me. 用 used to 升格:At first, every English class used to be like a bad dream for me.
举例说明 I kept using English every day. 增加修饰语 :I kept using English as much as I could every day. ( 用 as much as I could 提升)
陈述结果 Two months later, I got an“A” in the final exam. 扩写结果:About two months later, I became good at English and got an “A” in the final exam.
结尾 发表感想 I realize that everyone can achieve their goals through hard work. 用 if 引导的状语从句提升:I realize that everyone can achieve their goals if they work hard.
第三步：成篇
One Thing I’m Proud of Now I still remember how I became much better at English. At first, every English class used to be like a bad dream for me.I could hardly understand my teacher. One day, the teacher talked with me and gave me some useful advice. I began to review words from time to time, even on the way to school. I read aloud to practice pronunciation. I watched English videos, and kept diaries in English. Whenever I met new words, I looked them up in a dictionary. I kept using English as much as I could ①副词 hardly 表程度, 明确 地表达了刚开始学英语时的 状况。 ②词组from time to time 及 even on the way to school 进 一步表明作者学习英语的勤 奋和用心。 ③Practice makes perfect 用 在这里恰到好处,不但表达了
every day. Practice makes perfect. About two months later, I became good at English and got an “A” in the final exam. I am really proud of this experience, because I realize that everyone can achieve their goals if they work hard. 作者的努力, 同时也告诉读者 一个道理。 ④最后一句为复合句, 句式 结构正确、合理
第三部分 综合提升
1 ．作为一名中学生，我们应该有一颗感恩的心。请以“Learn to Express Thanks”为话题，根 据以下提示写一篇演讲稿。
提示：
1. 列举身边缺乏感恩的实例；
2. 列举生活中我们主要的感恩对象和原因；
3. 简述如何表达感恩之心。 要求：
1. 语言表达准确，语意连贯；
2. 词数 90 左右。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Good morning, boys and girls!
The topic of my speech is “Learn to Express Thanks” .
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Thank you for listening!
【参考范文】
Good morning, boys a
nd girls!
The topic of
my speech is “Learn to Express Thanks”
. Now
adays
some middle
school
students don’t express thanks in their daily lives. They usually think they’re
the
center
o
f
their
families without caring about their parents and teachers. They hardly do any
hou
sework
in
the
house
even
though
their
parents
work
hard
.
And
some
of
them
sometimes
talk
back
to
their
teachers.
)
(
As middle school students, we should learn to
express tha
nks. We
should
thank
our parents
for bringing us to the world and our teachers for giving us knowledge. We need to
stud
y harder to
pay them back in the future.
Thank you for listening!
【写作解析】
①
题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②
时态：时态为
“
一般现在时
”
；
③
提示：材料所给内容不得遗漏，可适当发挥，语意要通顺，无拼写
和语法错误。
[
写作步骤
]
第一步，开门见山，说明演讲主题；
第二步，列举缺乏感恩的事例以及需要感恩
的对象和原因；
第三步，具体介绍如何表达感恩；
第四步，表达感谢。
[
亮点词汇
]
①
care about
关心
②
talk back
反驳，顶撞
③
pay back
回报
[
高分句型
]
①
They usually think they’re the center of
their families without caring about their parents
and
teachers.
（宾语从句）
②
They hardly do any housework in the house even though their pa
rents work hard.
（让步状语
从句）
)
2 ．榜样，就是那些闪耀着奋进之光的人，他们为我们指引方向。在你的成长过程中，
一定有许多值得你学习的榜样，比如袁隆平、姚明等著名人物，或者你身边的老师、亲人、 朋友等普通人。假如你是李华，学校英语角将举办 “The Person I Admire” 为题的演讲比赛， 请你根据要点适当发挥，写一篇介绍自己的榜样的演讲稿。
要点提示：
1.Who do you admire (general information about the person you admire) 2.Why do you admire him/her
(1)What does he/she look like (appearance of the person you admire)
(2)What is he/she like (qualities, abilities, hobbies of the person you admire and examples) 3.What will you do to learn from him/her (future plan)
(
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Hello, everyone!
I’m Li Hua. The person I admire most is my mother.
She
is
in her
forties.
She
is very
tall
and
beautiful.
She is a gr
eat mother and a good
doctor. When
I
have
trouble
in
my
study,
she
always
listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me on how
to solve
them
and
encourages
me
to
challenge these problems. And
I always succeed in solving them.
As
a
doctor,
she
often
says
she
must be more careful.
She sets a good example
for my
study.
She
often works
extra hours.
She
has
devoted most of
her time to her work. I think she is not only
a
goo
d mother but
also
a
good
doctor.
I hope I can be a person
like her.
So I’m going to
study
medicine
at
a university
after
I
finish
high
school. I’m sure I can
achieve my
dream
one
day.
That’s all. Thanks
for listening.
【写作解析】
①
题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②
时态：时态为
“
一般现在时
”
和
“
一般将来时
”
；
③
提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏
“
要点提示
”
中对榜样的介绍，包括外貌、
)
(
性格以及钦佩此人的原因。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[
写作步骤
]
第一步，介绍自己最钦佩的人是谁；
第二步，介绍自己最钦佩的人的外貌、性格特征以及钦佩此人的原因；
第三步，描述自己未来的计划。
[
亮点词汇
]
①
in her forties
在她四十几岁时
②
as a doctor
作为一名医生
③
set a good example
树立一
个好榜样
④
achieve one’s dream
实 现某
人的梦想
[
高分句型
]
①
When I have trouble in my study, s
he
always
listens
to
my problems patiently.
（
When
引导时
间状语从句）
②
So I think she is not only a
good mother but
also
a
good
doctor.
（并列连词
not
only…but
also…
连接和强调两个同等句子成分）
③
I hope I can be a person like her.
（省略
that
的宾语从句）
)
3 ．电影《你好，李焕英》讲述了妈妈和女儿之间的故事。影片将母爱诠释得恰到好处， 令观众感动不已。我们总以为自己已经很爱妈妈了， 但妈妈远比你想象中还要爱你。生活 中，你和妈妈之间肯定发生过很多令你难以忘记的事情，请用英语介绍你的妈妈，讲述一件 你们经历过的事情，并说说你会用什么实际行动来报答妈妈。
内容包括：
something about your mother（外表，性格，爱好） an experience you had with your mother
what you will do to thank her 要求：
1. 词数不少于 80；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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【参考范文】
My mother is a kind and gentle woman
.
She is a pretty woman
with
a
round
face
and
two big
black eyes.
She always has a smile on her
face. And
she
likes
cooking
and reading.
I
love
my
mother very much.
I still remember it was th
e summer vacation in Grade
8
when
I
felt painful
in
my
foot
and
found that I was bitten by a snake. Without saying anything,
my
mot
her
took me
to
the
hospital
in
a rush. Thanks to my mother, the doctor saved
me in time.
It took me
a
few
days
to
fully
recover.
What a great mother
she
is!
My mother loves me so much. To thank my mother, I will
always
listen
to
her
and
never
do
anything that makes her angry. And I will make every effort to do
the hou
sework
to
help
my
mother reduce the burd
en.
【写作解析】
①
题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②
时态：时态为
“
一般过去时
”
和
“
一般现在时
”
；
③
提示：根据所给的内容提示完成写作，可适当添加细节，
并突出写作重点。
[
写作步骤
]
第一步，介绍妈妈的外表，性格，爱好，并
表明很爱妈妈；
第二步，讲述你和妈妈之间难忘的一件事；
第三步，介绍自己将如何感谢妈妈。
[
亮点词汇
]
①
in a rush
匆忙地
②
thanks to
由于
③
make every effort to do
尽一切努力去做
④
do the housework
做家务
)
(
[
高分句型
]
①
I still remember it
was the summer vacation in Grade
8
when
I
felt painful
in
my
foot
and
found that I was bitten by a snake.
（宾语从句；
when
引导的定语从句）
②
What a great mother she
is!
（感叹句）
)
4 ．党的二十大完美落幕，对我们国家的发展进行了重大的战略布局，在中国共产党的 领导下，我们的国家从以前的峥嵘岁月到现在的国泰民安。作为中学生， 我们有责任让更多 人了解我们的国家。根据下面思维导图内容提示，请以“China in My Eyes”为题，写一篇英 语短文，介绍一下我们亲爱的祖国！
要求：
1. 书写认真规范，词数不少于 80 词，开头已给出不计入总词数；
2. 短文必须包括所有要点提示，语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
China in My Eyes
Hello, everyone! I am from China and I like my country very much. Now I’d like to introduce my country to you!
_______________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
China in My Eyes
Hello, everyone! I am from China and I like my country very much. Now I’d like to introduce my country to you!
First, what I want to talk about today is tea culture. Chinese tea has a history of four or five
thousand years. Shennong was the first to discover tea as a drink. Next, Chinese classical music is wonderful, like Erquan Yingyue. What’s more, Chinese table manners are different. We are
supposed to pick up our bowl to eat. And we should let the old start eating first, and so on.
China has succeeded in controlling the COVID-19, showing other countries that China is the strongest. It is a great feat to control such a terrible epidemic in such a short period of time.
Moreover, AI is widely uesd in different areas.
We should work hard and gain knowledge to make our country better. We should never give up and try to realize our dreams. I am proud, I am Chinese. I hope our country can be more and more prosperous and people will live a better life.
【写作解析】
①题材：本文是篇材料作文；
②时态：本文的时态一般现在时为主；
③提示：本文的要点已给出，注意要点衔接自然顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述要介绍自己眼中的中国； 第二步，介绍中国的文化；
第三步，介绍中国的技术；
第四步，介绍自己的责任和感受。
[亮点词汇]
What’s more 此外
are supposed to 应该
[高分句型]
We should work hard and gain knowledge to make our country better.（不定式表目的）
5 ．每个人都有心情不好的时候，当情绪不好的时候，该怎样调节自己？有人通过旅行
忘掉烦恼，有人通过听音乐换种心情，有人通过阅读找回快乐 ……某英语报社开展“How I change my bad feelings”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你是怎样调节心情的。 要求：
1.词数 100 词左右；
2.须包括所有要点提示，并适当补充，语句通顺，内容连贯； 3.文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。
How I change my bad feelings!
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【参考范文】
How I change my bad
feelings!
I
t’s normal to feel sad when something bad happens to us. I
often
feel b
ad when
I have
lots
o
f homework to do. Every time I’m tired of
it, I’d go to
Lis
a, my best
friend.
She
can
always
find
ways to cheer me up.
So chat with a friend with a
sense
of
humor
when you
feel bad.
For me,
another way to deal with bad feelings is to
spend time
on hobbies. When
I’m
sad
and
alone,
I’d
like to write poems. By writing poems, I can express and release my bad fee
lings
in
a positive
way.
These are my ways of
dealing with bad feelings. Try our best, and we
can
f
ind
many
ways
to
change bad feelings.
)
(
【写作解析】
①
题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②
时态：时态为
“
一般现在时
”
；
③
提示：根据所给题目完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意
上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[
写作步骤
]
第一步，点明主旨，介绍自己的坏心情；
第二步，具体描述调节心情的方法；
第三步，最后表达总结。
[
亮点词汇
]
①
be
tired
of
厌倦
②
a sense of
humor
幽默感
③
spend time on sth
在某事上
花时间
[
高分句型
]
When I’m sad and alone, I
’d like to write poems.
（
when
引导的时间状语从句）
)
6 ．同学们，在你的学生和生活中，一定经历过对你来说难忘的瞬间（开心、感动、激
动……）。请你以 The Most Unforgettable Moment 为题，写一篇不少于 80 词的短文。 提示：
1. 难忘的瞬间是什么？
2. 你的感受、收获，对你的影响。
The Most Unforgettable Moment
_______________________________________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
The Most Unforgettable
Moment
)
I have experienced a lot in my studies and life. I have also encountered many unforgettable
people and things, but the most unforgettable moment for me was what happened on my birthday last year.
On the night before my birthday, I was too excited to fall asleep because the next day would be my birthday. The next morning, by the time I got up, it had already been seven o’clock. I rushed to school without eating breakfast. Unluckily, a bike knocked me down on my way to school and the doctor told me that I had to stay in bed for a few days. I felt so sad. What surprised me was that
my friends came to see me and helped me with my schoolwork. They also had a wonderful
birthday party for me that evening. I was touched by everything they had done for me. What an unforgettable moment it was!
This unforgettable birthday let me know the meaning of friendship. Good friends will always be there for me. I will remember the moment and the friendship in my heart.
(
【写作解析】
①
题材：本文是一篇记叙类作文；
②
时态：时态为
“
一般过去时
”
；
③
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不能遗漏信息，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[
写作步骤
]
第一步，借用
“
生活中有很多难以忘怀的时刻，其中最令我忘怀的瞬间是我去年生日
”
来引入
话题；
第二步，详细概括难忘的瞬间是什么；
第三步，书写结语，你的感受和收获是什么。
[
亮点词汇
]
①
too……to
太
……
而不能
②
on my way to school
在我去学校的路上
③
help sb with sth.
在某方面帮助某人
④
an unforgettable mo
ment
难以忘怀的瞬间
[
高分句型
]
)
(
①
but the most unforgettable moment for me was what happened on my birthday las
t year.
（
what
引导表语从句）
②
What surprised me was that my friends came to
see me
and
helped
me
with
my
schoolwork.
（
what
引导主语从句）
③
What an unforgettable moment it was!
（
what
引导的感叹句）
)
7 ．生活中有时会有不如意的事情，但当你回首拾起那些零碎的小事时，欢喜便会一点 点涌上心头。请结合自己的体会， 讨论“发现生活中的小欢喜”这一主题，分享你青春的故事 吧！
要求：
1. 内容必须包括写作要点，也可在此基础上适当发挥。
2. 开头已给出，不少于 80 词。
3. 短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，严禁乱写乱画，否则不予评分。提示：
（1）What makes you happy
（2）What happened and what did you do at that moment
Discover the little happiness in daily life
Hey, guys! In fact, little happiness is everywhere in our daily life.
(
【参考范文】
Hey, guys! In fact, little happ
iness is everywhere
in
our
daily
life.
It
is really
important
in
our
1ife and happiness is always around you if
you put your h
eart into
it.
I will never forget one thing. Once, I did
badly in
a
math
test.
I
was
afraid
to
meet
my
parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened. They said
to
me,
“It
)
(
doesn’t matter, my child. Remember we’ll be always behind you when you need help. We
believe
you can be better next time. Never give up!” I felt happy because my parents were so
understanding. I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder. Wheneve
r I am
in
trouble, I can feel my par
ents’
love.
I believe as long as you pay attention, you will feel t
he
little happiness
in
life.
【写作解析】
①
题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②
时态：一般现在时和一般过去时；
③
提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意要结合具体语境正确使
用时态，适当发挥，使上下
文连贯。
[
写作步骤
]
第一步，由于短文开头已给出，故接下来具体描写一个生活中的小欢喜；
第二步，从
“
起因、经过、结果
”
等方面详细描写你的小欢喜；
第三步，表明生活中处处都有小欢喜，只有用心去感受。
[
亮点词汇
]
①
put one’s heart into...
全心全意的投入
……
②
be afraid to do
sth.
害怕做某事
③
understanding
善解人意的，体贴的
④
make up one’s mind to do
sth.
下定决心做某事
⑤
as long
as
只要
[
高分句型
]
①
But when I got back home late, my parents knew wh
at happened.
w
（
hen
引导的时间状语从句，
what
引导的宾语从句）
②
I believe as long as
you pay attention, you will feel the
little
happiness
in
life.
（省略
that
的宾
语从句，
as long as
引导的条件状语从句）
)

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