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公共秩序
第一部分 关联教材
（人教新目标）
【教材话题衔接】
教 材 话 题 写作角度
7 下 Unit 4 Don’t eat in class. Rules Talk about rules
8 上 Unit 10 If you go to the party, you’ll have a great time! Decision making Talk about consequences
8 下 Unit 2 I’ll help to clean up the city parks. Volunteering and charity Offer help
8 下 Unit 4 Why don’t you talk to your Interpersonal Talk about problems;
parents communication Give advice
9 Unit 10 You’re supposed to shake hands. Customs Talk about customs and what you are supposed to do
【教材句式回顾】
1. At school, we have more rules—don’t be noisy, don’t eat in class, ...
在学校里,我们有更多的规则——不准大声喧哗,不准在课堂上吃东西,……(7 下教材 P23)
2. If people have problems, they should talk to other people.
如果人们遇到麻烦,他们应该与其他人交谈。(8 上教材 P77)
3. He thinks the first step is to find someone you trust to talk to.他认为第一步就是找个你信任的 人去倾诉。(8 上教材 P77)
4. They go out of their way to make me feel at home.他们尽力使我感到宾至如归。(9 教材 P78) 5. Another example is that you’re not supposed to eat anything with your hands except bread, not even fruit.
另一个例子是除了面包外,你不应该用手拿任何东西吃,甚至水果也不可以。(9 教材 P78)
【文化表达积累】
1.Actions speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩。
2.A good beginning is half done. 良好的开端是成功的一半。
3.All things are difficult before they are easy. 凡事总是由难而易。
4.A single flower does not make a spring. 一花独放不是春,百花齐放春满园。
第二部分 策略解析
近来,为了进一步加强学生在校的管理,许多学校制定了新的校规。假如你是李华,请你根 据下面表格的内容提示,用英文给你的笔友 Mark 写一封信,介绍你校的新校规,并谈谈你对新 校规的看法。
作业 按时完成
手机 禁止进课堂
睡眠 每天至少 9 小时
阅读 一周至少读一本好书
锻炼 一天 1 小时
安全 1.不打架 2.……(至少补充一点)
你的看法 ……
写作要求:
1.内容必须包含所给要点,并适当发挥; 2.语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范;
3.文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名; 4.词数 80 左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mark,
How’s it going I’m glad to share my new school rules with you.
【写作解析】
第一步：审题
1.定人称:第一人称为主 2.定时态:一般现在时
3.定要点:(1)表格内容:finish homework, develop reading habits...;
(2)补充内容:Don’t go swimming alone. Don’t ride bikes side by side...;
(3)个人观点:Follow the school rules。
4.定思路:根据表格内容陈述学校的规定,可用情态动词 must 、 have to 、 can’t 等或祈使
句表达;然后表达自己的观点,可用词组 be good for 等;最后提出自己的愿望。
第二步：谋篇
框架 要点 升格/扩写
开头 引出话题 综述内容 We have many new rules in our school. 用 there be 句 型 升 格 : many new rules in our school.
主体 表格内容 As students, we must finish homework on time every day. 用 句 型 It’s +n. + to do sth. 升 格 :As students, finish our ____________________________________ homework on time every day.
补充内容 We shouldn’t go swimming alone. 用 句 型 It’s +adj. + for sb. to do sth. 升 格 : us to go swimming alone. We’d better not go swimming by ourselves.
结尾 表达愿望 个人观点 We must follow the school rules. 用 宾 语 从 句 升 格 : we students follow all the school rules.
第三步：成篇
Dear Mark, How’s it going I’m glad to share my new school rules with you.There are many new rules in our school. As students,it’s our duty to finish our homework on time every day. We can’t take phones with us to school. We had better get enough sleep, at least 9 hours a day. We should develop reading habits. We must read at least one good book a week. Doing exercise is also important. We must do exercise an hour a day. We must keep safe first. Don’t fight with each other. It’s dangerous for us to go swimming alone. We’d better not go swimming by ourselves. I think these school rules are good for us. I hope we students follow all the school rules.What about your school rules Please write soon. Yours, Li Hua ①had better do sth.“最好做某 事”,为表建议的句型,语气委婉 客气;at least“至少”,使描写的 内容更具体。 ②动名词短语作主语,句子结 构正确。 ③It’s +adj. + for sb. to do sth. 为固定句型,形容词 dangerous 和go swimming alone 使内容更 加突出。 ④词组 be good for...是对上文 内容的总结, 也表达了自己的 观点
第三部分 综合提升
1 ．俗话说“没有规矩不成方圆”，相信同学们家中也都有一些具体的家规。请你根据下 面的提示内容及要求， 以 My Family Rules 为题写一篇短文，在英语课上与同学们交流。
要点提示：（1）按时完成作业；（2）不能玩游戏；（3）帮助做家务（例如：打扫房间， );
（4）对家规的感受。 注意：
1. 词数为 80 词左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
My Family Rules
My parents are very strict with me, and they have made some family rules.
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2 ．我们学校正在落实社会主义核心价值观，创建美好、和谐校园活动，作为一名中学 生，请你以“Rules of Our School”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对校规的认识。 要点如下：请你从学习、卫生、衣着等方面构思，按顺序表达，并增加一条；谈论你 对这些校规的认识；并对改善校规提出自己的建议。 要求：行文连贯，条例清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范，可适当发挥，词数在 80—100 左右。 Rules of Our School At present, there are lots of rules in our school.
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3 ．在流感发生时，同学们在保护好自己的同时还要把网课上好。请结合以下提示制定 班级线上上课的规则。词数：约 30 词。
要求：要点齐全；表达通顺；简洁得体。 1.按时上课，不迟到，不旷课。
2.遵守课堂纪律，认真听老师讲课。 3.坚持复习，按时独立完成作业。
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4 ．良好的礼仪非常重要。在日常生活中，你看到身边有哪些不良现象呢？请你写一篇 英语短文列举一些你看到的不良现象，并谈谈你的看法。
要求：
1. 可适当加入细节，使行文连贯；
2. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
3. 词数 80 个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：speak loudly, cut in line(插队), politely, offer…to …
As we all know, good manners are very important in our daily life.
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Work hard together, and our world will be a better place to live in.
5 ． 日常生活中，有很多值得我们注意和遵守的公共秩序和道德准则，每个人都应该从 自身做起，为自己的城市增光填彩，做文明市民。谈谈作为中学生的我们， 该如何做一个文
明市民？ 内容包括：
（1）The importance of being a civilized citizen (文明市民)
（2）How to do in our daily life (至少涉及到三个方面)
（3）Hope and confidence (信心) 要求：
（1）语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
（2）内容要点所有提示必须全部用上，并适当发挥；
（3）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
（4）词数 80 个左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
（5）参考词汇：harmony 和谐，融洽
How to be a civilized citizen
Being a civilized citizen is our duty. The better we do, …
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6 ．今年 3 月份起全国中小学生手机禁令正式生效。假设你是李明，以前经常带手机到 学校去，现在没有手机的校园生活里，你的感受如何呢？请你就此给英国的笔友 Tony 写一 封回信，内容包括：
1. 不能带手机到学校之后，你感觉如何？有什么不习惯的地方？
2. 你准备如何去克服这些“不习惯”？（两点）
3. 询问对方的学校有没有类似规定？
作文要求：1. 不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯，词数 80 个左右。作文的开头已经给出， 不必抄写在试卷上，也不计入总词数。 Dear Tony,
I’m so glad to hear from you. You asked me about the new policy that from taking my phone to school.
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours, Li Ming
7 ．假设你是李华。近日，你校英语报“Life Corner”专栏面向全校学生征集主题文章， 需要用英语向大家介绍如何做一个高素质的学生。请你根据以下思维导图提示，以“How to behave well”为题，用英语给专栏写一篇稿件。
要求：
1. 包括提示中所有的写作要点；
2. 条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
3. 稿件中不能出现真实的人名和地名等信息；
4. 词数：80 左右。题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How to behave well
In order to make our city a better living place, we students should try our best to behave well.
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8 ．如今，很多青少年都拥有自己的手机，并且花大量时间玩手机。学校规定是不能带 手机进入学校学习。有些人赞成，有些人反对，请谈谈你的观点。内容包括：
1. 你觉得这条校规是好还是不好；
2. 陈述你的理由，至少两点；
3. 提醒大家以正确的方式使用手机。 注意：
1. 内容必须包含提供的所有信息，开头已经给出，可适当发挥。
2. 词数：80 词左右。开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 文中不能出现学生真实姓名和所在学校名称。
This term, our school has a new rule that students mustn’t bring their mobile phones to school.公共秩序
第一部分 关联教材
（人教新目标）
【教材话题衔接】
教 材 话 题 写作角度
7 下 Unit 4 Don’t eat in class. Rules Talk about rules
8 上 Unit 10 If you go to the party, you’ll have a great time! Decision making Talk about consequences
8 下 Unit 2 I’ll help to clean up the city parks. Volunteering and charity Offer help
8 下 Unit 4 Why don’t you talk to your Interpersonal Talk about problems;
parents communication Give advice
9 Unit 10 You’re supposed to shake hands. Customs Talk about customs and what you are supposed to do
【教材句式回顾】
1. At school, we have more rules—don’t be noisy, don’t eat in class, ...
在学校里,我们有更多的规则——不准大声喧哗,不准在课堂上吃东西,……(7 下教材 P23)
2. If people have problems, they should talk to other people.
如果人们遇到麻烦,他们应该与其他人交谈。(8 上教材 P77)
3. He thinks the first step is to find someone you trust to talk to.他认为第一步就是找个你信任的 人去倾诉。(8 上教材 P77)
4. They go out of their way to make me feel at home.他们尽力使我感到宾至如归。(9 教材 P78) 5. Another example is that you’re not supposed to eat anything with your hands except bread, not even fruit.
另一个例子是除了面包外,你不应该用手拿任何东西吃,甚至水果也不可以。(9 教材 P78)
【文化表达积累】
1.Actions speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩。
2.A good beginning is half done. 良好的开端是成功的一半。
3.All things are difficult before they are easy. 凡事总是由难而易。
4.A single flower does not make a spring. 一花独放不是春,百花齐放春满园。
第二部分 策略解析
近来,为了进一步加强学生在校的管理,许多学校制定了新的校规。假如你是李华,请你根 据下面表格的内容提示,用英文给你的笔友 Mark 写一封信,介绍你校的新校规,并谈谈你对新 校规的看法。
作业 按时完成
手机 禁止进课堂
睡眠 每天至少 9 小时
阅读 一周至少读一本好书
锻炼 一天 1 小时
安全 1.不打架 2.……(至少补充一点)
你的看法 ……
写作要求:
1.内容必须包含所给要点,并适当发挥; 2.语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范;
3.文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名; 4.词数 80 左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mark,
How’s it going I’m glad to share my new school rules with you.
【写作解析】
第一步：审题
1.定人称:第一人称为主 2.定时态:一般现在时
3.定要点:(1)表格内容:finish homework, develop reading habits...;
(2)补充内容:Don’t go swimming alone. Don’t ride bikes side by side...;
(3)个人观点:Follow the school rules。
4.定思路:根据表格内容陈述学校的规定,可用情态动词 must 、 have to 、 can’t 等或祈使
句表达;然后表达自己的观点,可用词组 be good for 等;最后提出自己的愿望。
第二步：谋篇
框架 要点 升格/扩写
开头 引出话题 综述内容 We have many new rules in our school. 用 there be 句型升格:There are many new rules in our school.
主体 表格内容 As students, we must finish homework on time every day. 用句 型 It’s +n. + to do sth. 升格 :As students, it’s our duty to finish our homework on time every day.
补充内容 We shouldn’t go swimming alone. 用句型 It’s +adj. + for sb. to do sth.升格:It’s dangerous for us to go swimming alone. We’d better not go swimming by ourselves.
结尾 表达愿望 个人观点 We must follow the school rules. 用宾语从句升格:I hope we students follow all the school rules.
第三步：成篇
Dear Mark, How’s it going I’m glad to share my new school rules with you.There are many new rules in our school. As students,it’s our duty to finish our homework on time ①had better do sth.“最好做某 事”,为表建议的句型,语气委婉 客气;at least“至少”,使描写的 内容更具体。
every day. We can’t take phones with us to school. We had better get enough sleep, at least 9 hours a day. We should develop reading habits. We must read at least one good book a week. Doing exercise is also important. We must do exercise an hour a day. We must keep safe first. Don’t fight with each other. It’s dangerous for us to go swimming alone. We’d better not go swimming by ourselves. I think these school rules are good for us. I hope we students follow all the school rules.What about your school rules Please write soon. Yours, Li Hua ②动名词短语作主语,句子结 构正确。 ③It’s +adj. + for sb. to do sth. 为固定句型,形容词 dangerous 和go swimming alone 使内容更 加突出。 ④词组 be good for...是对上文 内容的总结, 也表达了自己的 观点
第三部分 综合提升
1 ．俗话说“没有规矩不成方圆”，相信同学们家中也都有一些具体的家规。请你根据下 面的提示内容及要求， 以 My Family Rules 为题写一篇短文，在英语课上与同学们交流。
要点提示：（1）按时完成作业；（2）不能玩游戏；（3）帮助做家务（例如：打扫房间， );
（4）对家规的感受。 注意：
1. 词数为 80 词左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
My Family Rules
My parents are very strict with me, and they have made some family rules.
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【参考范文】
My Family Rules
My parents are very strict with me, and they have mad
e some
family
rules.
For
example,
I
must finish my homework on time. I mus
t go to bed at
9:
30.
I
can’t play
computer
games.
My
parents think it is bad for my study and
eyes. I
can
only
go
out
to
meet
my
friends
on
Saturday
night but I must go back home before 8 o’clock. I must help with the housework
on we
ekends,
such as cleaning the rooms and cooking the meals. I think my
parents
are
too
strict with
me,
I
don’t like the family rules. What about you
【写作解析】
①
题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②
时态：时态为
“
一般现在时
”
；
③
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点提示，适当增
加细节完整表述内容。
[
写作步骤
]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，具体介绍你家的家规；
第三步，表达自己不喜欢这些家规。
[
亮点词汇
]
①
be strict with
对
……
要求严格
②
on time
按时
③
be bad for
对
……
有害
[
高分句型
]
My parents think it is bad for
my study and
eyes.
（宾语从句）
)
2 ．我们学校正在落实社会主义核心价值观，创建美好、和谐校园活动，作为一名中学 生，请你以“Rules of Our School”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对校规的认识。
要点如下：请你从学习、卫生、衣着等方面构思，按顺序表达，并增加一条；谈论你 对这些校规的认识；并对改善校规提出自己的建议。
要求：行文连贯，条例清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范，可适当发挥，词数在
80—100 左右。
Rules of Our School
At present, there are lots of rules in our school.
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【参考范文】
Rules of
Our
School
)
At present, there are lots of rules in our school. Firstly, we should listen to teachers carefully in class. It can make us much easier to improve the study skills. We have an hour of homework every day. There is a big library with lots of useful books. We can read books there. Secondly, we need keep our schools clean. We can do many things for it, such as cleaning the floor every day,
collecting the waste instead of throwing it everywhere and so on. Thirdly, we need to wear school uniforms every day. The problem is that all of our classmates think uniforms are ugly. I think
young people should look smart, so I would like to wear my own clothes. If we have to wear
uniforms, we should be allowed to design our own uniforms. Fourthly, we need to save the energy at school. We should turn off the lights before we leave the classrooms.
Although we have different views on the rules of our school, I think everyone should obey them.
(
【写作解析】
①
题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②
时态：时态为
“
一般现在时
”
；
)
(
③
提示：根据要点完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，
不要犯语法错误。注意上下
文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[
写作步骤
]
第一步，开篇点题；
第二步，介绍学校校规及你对这些校规的认识并对改善校规提出自己的建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[
亮点词汇
]
①
improve
提高
②
collect
收集
③
waste
废品
④
instead of
而不是
⑤
uniform
制服
⑥
smart
漂亮的
⑦
be allowed to do sth.
被允许做某事
⑧
design
设计
⑨
turn
off
关闭
⑩
obey
遵守
[
高分句型
]
①
The problem is that all of
our classmates think u
niforms are ugly.
（
that
引导表语从句）
②
Although we have different views on the rules of
our school, I th
ink
everyone
should
obey
them.
（
although
引导让步状语从句）
)
3 ．在流感发生时，同学们在保护好自己的同时还要把网课上好。请结合以下提示制定 班级线上上课的规则。词数：约 30 词。
要求：要点齐全；表达通顺；简洁得体。 1.按时上课，不迟到，不旷课。
2.遵守课堂纪律，认真听老师讲课。 3.坚持复习，按时独立完成作业。
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During the epidemic, we should protect ourselves and do
a
good
j
ob
in
online
courses. Here
are the rules for online
courses.
First of
all, we must have classes on time and not be late
or
abs
ent.
Second, we must
obey
the
class rules and listen to the teacher carefully. Thirdly, we should keep reviewi
ng
what
we
have
learned and finish our homewo
rk on
time.
【写作解析】
①
题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②
时态：时态为
“
一般现在时
”
；
③
提示：写作要点已给出，写作过程中不能遗漏题干给出的信
息要点，写作时要注意适当
添加内容，使文章语句更通顺。
[
写作步骤
]
第一步，介绍写作意图，引出具体规则；
第二步，详细阐述网课的规则。
[
亮点词汇
]
①
epidemic
流行病
②
on time
按时
③
be late
迟到
④
absent
缺席的
[
高分句型
]
①
Here are the rules for online courses.
（
here
引导的倒装句）
②
Thirdly, we should keep reviewing what we have learned and finish
our homework
on
time.
（
what
引导宾语从句）
)
4 ．良好的礼仪非常重要。在日常生活中，你看到身边有哪些不良现象呢？请你写一篇 英语短文列举一些你看到的不良现象，并谈谈你的看法。
要求：
1. 可适当加入细节，使行文连贯；
2. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
3. 词数 80 个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：speak loudly, cut in line(插队), politely, offer…to …
As we all know, good manners are very important in our daily life.
Work hard together, and our world will be a better place to live in.
【参考范文】
As we all know, good manners are very important in our daily life. But we often see some bad behavior around us. For example, we often hear some people speak and laugh loudly in
public. Some people cut in line while others are waiting.
That makes me unhappy. Something must be done to make our environment more and more beautiful. We should try to behave politely. When we are at the bus stop, we should wait in line and take turns to get on the bus. When we are on the bus, we’d better offer our seats to those who are old or sick.
Work hard together, and our world will be a better place to live in. 【写作解析】
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要只列举一个不良现象，适当发挥，使上下文连 贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，由于短文开头已给出，故接下来列举一些你看到的不良现象； 第二步，阐述看法。具体阐述你对于这些不良现象的看法及建议；
第三步，结尾已给出。 [亮点词汇]
①for example 比如
②in public 在公共场合
③cut in line 插队
(
④
politely
礼貌地
⑤
take turns
依次
[
高分句型
]
①
Something must be done to make our environment more
and more beautiful.
（动词不定式作
目的状语）
②
When we are at the bus stop, w
e should wait
in
line
and take
turns
to
get
on
the bus.
When we
are on the bus, we’d better
offer our seats to those who
are old
or
sick.
（
when
引导的时间状语从
句）
)
5 ． 日常生活中，有很多值得我们注意和遵守的公共秩序和道德准则，每个人都应该从 自身做起，为自己的城市增光填彩，做文明市民。谈谈作为中学生的我们， 该如何做一个文 明市民？
内容包括：
（1）The importance of being a civilized citizen (文明市民)
（2）How to do in our daily life (至少涉及到三个方面)
（3）Hope and confidence (信心) 要求：
（1）语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
（2）内容要点所有提示必须全部用上，并适当发挥；
（3）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
（4）词数 80 个左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
（5）参考词汇：harmony 和谐，融洽
How to be a civilized citizen
Being a civilized citizen is our duty. The better we do, …
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【参考范文】
)
How to be a Civilized Citizen
Being a civilized citizen is our duty. The better we do, the better society will be.
First, we should pay attention to the public rules. When we are crossing the road, it’s
important for us to follow the traffic rules. Secondly, we should mind our own manners in public. When we ask people for help, it’s polite to use expressions like “Excuse me” or “Thanks” .
Thirdly, we can join lots of volunteer activities. For example, we can help clean up the city parks. Besides, we should let more people know the importance of being a civilized citizen.
As long as we try our best to do what we can do, everyone can feel the love and live a happy life.
【写作解析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤]
第一步，引出“该如何做一个文明市民”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从如何做以及文明市民的重要性来具体阐述； 第三步，书写结语。表达自己的期许以及信心。
[亮点词汇]
①pay attention to 注意
②in public 在公共场合
③clean up 打扫 [高分句型]
①When we are crossing the road, it’s important for us to follow the traffic rules.（when 引导的时 间状语从句）
②As long as we try our best to do what we can do, everyone can feel the love and live a happy life.（as long as 引导的条件状语从句）
6 ．今年 3 月份起全国中小学生手机禁令正式生效。假设你是李明，以前经常带手机到 学校去，现在没有手机的校园生活里，你的感受如何呢？请你就此给英国的笔友 Tony 写一 封回信，内容包括：
1. 不能带手机到学校之后，你感觉如何？有什么不习惯的地方？
2. 你准备如何去克服这些“不习惯”？（两点）
3. 询问对方的学校有没有类似规定？
作文要求：1. 不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯，词数 80 个左右。作文的开头已经给出， 不必抄写在试卷上，也不计入总词数。 Dear Tony,
I’m so glad to hear from you. You asked me about the new policy that from taking my phone to school.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours, Li Ming
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【参考范文】
Dear Tony.
I’m so glad to hear from you. You asked me
about t
he new policy that
stops
me
from
taking
my phone to school.
I’m really worried/upset about that. I can’t listen
to
music
wi
th
my phone
while doing homework after school as usual, which helps me block out
outside
sound. What’s
more, I have no games to play during the breaks and I
g
ot bored.
However, I know I have to get used to it.
I will
find a
quiet place
like
the
library
to
do
my
homework. Moreover, I think it would be good for me to do
someth
ing with my
classmates
during
breaks, such as playing basketball, so t
hat we can be closer
to
one
another.
I
do
hope
I
can
get
)
(
used to the school life without phone
s.
What about you Does your school have similar policies on
st
udents’ phones
Looking forward to your
reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【写作解析】
1.
题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，但写作时要按书信格式写。在写作时应
承接短文开头；内容是根据所给的提示材料，给英国的笔友
Tony
写一封回信，介绍一下如
果不带手机，你的感受如何。
2.
写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述作文内容；时态采用一般现在时为主
；首先介绍不
带手机到学校后有什么感觉，有什么不习惯的地方；其次介绍如何去克服这些
“
不习惯
”
；最
后是询问对方的学校有没有类似的规定。
)
7 ．假设你是李华。近日，你校英语报“Life Corner”专栏面向全校学生征集主题文章， 需要用英语向大家介绍如何做一个高素质的学生。请你根据以下思维导图提示，以“How to behave well”为题，用英语给专栏写一篇稿件。
要求：
1. 包括提示中所有的写作要点；
2. 条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
3. 稿件中不能出现真实的人名和地名等信息；
4. 词数：80 左右。题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How to behave well
In order to make our city a better living place, we students should try our best to behave well.
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【参考范文】
How to behave well
In order to make our city a better living place, we
students
sho
uld try our best
to behave
well.
First, we must follow traffic rules. Don’t run on the streets and
never run
th
rough
red
lights.
It’s really dangerous for us.
Second, we shouldn’t pick flower
s which make our
city more
beautiful. It is also a bad habit t
o step
on
grass.
Third,
it’s important
for us
to
keep
our
city
clean,
so we mustn’t throw rubbish here and there. Last but not the least, we’d better not talk
or laugh
loudly in public. It makes others feel t
errible.
Of
course
there
are
many
other
things
we
can
do
to
behave
well
.
And
if
everyone
behaves well, our city will surely become a better pla
ce.
【写作解析】
①
题材：这是一篇材料作文，为说明文；
②
时态：主要采用
“
一般现在时
”
；
③
提示：写作要点已给出，根据
4
点英文提示表达成句，需适当补充。
[
写作步骤
]
第一步，介绍我们应该举止良好的目的
；（
已给出）
第二步，具体介绍如何举止良好，这是本文写作重点；
第三步，总结、点题。
[
亮点词汇
]
①
had better not
最
好不要
②
feel terrible
感觉糟糕
③
make our city more beautiful
使
得城市更漂亮
[
高分句型
]
①
Third, it’s important for us to keep our city
clean,
so we
mustn’t
throw
rubbish
here
and
there.
（
it
固定句型）
②
Second, we shouldn’t pick flowers whic
h make our city more beautiful.
（定语从句）
③
And if
everyone behaves well, our city will surely become a better place.
（
if
引导条件状语从
句）
)
8 ．如今，很多青少年都拥有自己的手机，并且花大量时间玩手机。学校规定是不能带 手机进入学校学习。有些人赞成，有些人反对，请谈谈你的观点。内容包括：
1. 你觉得这条校规是好还是不好；
2. 陈述你的理由，至少两点；
3. 提醒大家以正确的方式使用手机。 注意：
1. 内容必须包含提供的所有信息，开头已经给出，可适当发挥。
2. 词数：80 词左右。开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 文中不能出现学生真实姓名和所在学校名称。
This term, our school has a new rule that students mustn’t bring their mobile phones to school.
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【参考范文】
This term, our school has a new rule that students mustn’t bring their
mobile
phone
to
school.
I totally agree (I think this new rule is good for us). Firstly,
many
students use
t
heir
mobile phones
to chat or play games all the time and even
in
cl
ass.
It’s bad
for
our
study.
Secondly,
if
you
really
have something important and want to call your parents, you can
ask your
teachers
for help.
They’re always ready to help you.
So there’s no need to bring the mobile pho
nes to school. All in
all, our school makes rules to help us and we should
obey them. Don’t bring
your m
obile phones
to school and remember to use your mobile phone in a right
way.
)

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