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不要过分关注白纸中的小黑点
文 本
Linda, a high school girl, was feeling depressed after she had failed her mid-term exams. She didn’t answer her teachers’ questions actively in class like she used to.（冲突） Instead, she began to lower her head and got absent-minded easily.（冲突） Her friends and classmates were worried about her, but she didn’t feel like talking about it with them. Mrs Green, her English teacher, noticed her changes and decided to do something before it got worse（解决方法）.
One day, Mrs Green entered the classroom and asked her students to prepare for a surprise test（解决方法）. They waited anxiously at their desks for the test to begin. Mrs Green handed out the question papers, with the text facing down as usual. After she handed them all out, she asked her students to turn the page and begin. To everyone’s surprise, there were no questions, just a black dot(点) in the center of the page.（冲突） Mrs Green, seeing the expression on everyone’s face, told them the following:
“I want you to write what you see there.”
The students, confused, got started on the task.
At the end of the class, Mrs Green collected all the answer papers and started reading them aloud in front of all the students. Just as Mrs Green had expected, with no exception, all of them described the black dot, trying to explain its position in the middle of the sheet, etc.（解决方法） Mrs Green then picked out Linda’s paper and added, “Linda, I like your idea. Would you please follow me to the office and talk about it ”
“Er... Yes, madam!” Linda was puzzled because she thought her idea was no better than anyone else’s.（冲突） Like others, she also described the black dot only and ignored the white part of the paper.
Paragraph 1： Feeling nervous, Linda went into Mrs Green’s office.
　　 Paragraph 2：“Mrs Green is right. I should focus more on the white part of the paper!”（解决方法） Linda got refreshed.
思 路
Step 1　快读文本 获取信息
故事发展线索:Linda期中考试没有考好,心情低落→Mrs Green想帮助她→一天,Mrs Green让学生进行一次特别的测试,试卷上只有一个黑点→学生都描述那个黑点,包括Linda在内→Mrs Green说她喜欢Linda的想法→Linda感到困惑
Step 2　细读续写段首句合理推测
根据续写第一段首句设问:
(1)What would Mrs Green say to Linda in the office
(2)How would Linda react
根据续写第二段首句设问:
(1)What would be Linda’s reflection
(2)What would Linda decide to do after the talk
推测:Mrs Green会告诉Linda不要注意那个黑点,要注意范围更大的纸上的白区。这个黑点就像是一次失败,不要让失败使我们忽视生活中其他更多的美好的事情。
Linda听了老师的话以后会做出改变——变得乐观、豁达。最后根据续写第二段的首句进行主旨升华。
恢复精神的表现：眼中闪过一丝希望
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Para.2: “Mrs Green is right. I should focus more on the white part of the paper!”（解决方法） Linda got refreshed.
续写框架：五五拍戏法
Para.1: Feeling nervous, Linda went into Mrs Green’s office.
承上
老师的反应：微笑着安排她坐下
满怀希望地离开办公室
希望：指出应该关注白纸的白色部分
谈心：指出这个黑点就像是一次失败
承上
不要让失败使我们忽视生活中其他更多的美好的事情
她终于在期末考试中取得好成绩
她意识到过去忽视了很多生活中的美好
故事结局
改变态度，开始积极参与课堂
启下
情感态度价值观升华
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她明白了老师的用意，点了点头
逐句写作
第一句：老师的反应：微笑着安排她坐下
Mrs Green smiled warmly and asked Linda to sit down.
Mrs Green smiled warmly and gestured for her to sit down.
第二句：和她谈心：指出这个黑点就像是一次失败
第三句：希望：指出应该关注白纸的白色部分
She pointed at Linda's answer paper and said gently, "Linda, life is like this piece of paper. The black dot represents the challenges and difficulties we face, but the white part represents the opportunities and possibilities that surround us. Don't let the small things overshadow the big picture."
第四句：她明白了老师的用意，点了点头
Linda nodded, feeling inspired.
Linda nodded, her eyes showing understanding.
第五句：满怀希望地离开办公室
She thanked Mrs Green and walked out of the office with a newfound sense of hope and determination.
第一句：她眼中闪过一丝希望
A glimmer of hope sparked in her eyes.
She felt a newfound strength within her.
第二句：她意识到过去忽视了很多生活中的美好
Only then did she realize that she had been too focused on her mistakes and failures, ignoring the many positive aspects of her life.
第三句：改变态度，开始积极参与课堂
With newfound determination, she decided to change her attitude.
She decided to let go of the past failure and embrace the future.
She started to actively participate in class again, ready to fill the white space of her life with colors of success.
第四句：她终于在期末考试中取得好成绩
She made steady progress in study and eventually got the best grades in the final exams.
主题升华：不要让失败使我们忽视生活中其他更多的美好的事情
After this experience, Linda deeply realized that sometimes life can be hard, but we should always be positive and look at the bright side.
Don't let failure prevent us from noticing the many other wonderful things in life.
Failure shouldn't cause us to lose sight of life's many wonderful aspects.
范文1
Feeling nervous, Linda went into Mrs Green’s office. Mrs Green invited her to share her ideas. After that, Mrs Green smiled, “Have you ever noticed the white part of the paper ” Linda shook her head confused because it never occurred to her. Mrs Green continued, “The black dot is just like the failure in life, only a small part. If we focus only on it, we might easily overlook the happiness of life, the bigger part.” Suddenly, Linda understood it. Tears welling up her eyes, she expressed gratitude to Mrs Green before leaving the office.
“Mrs Green is right. I should focus more on the white part of the paper!” Linda got refreshed. Only then did she realize that she had a lot of admirable teachers, beloved families and friendly classmates. The failure of the exams was just a small part. From then on, Linda became active in the class again. She made steady progress in study and eventually got the best grades in the final exams. After this experience, Linda deeply realized that sometimes life can be hard, but we should always be positive and look at the bright side.
范文2
Feeling nervous, Linda went into Mrs Green’s office. Mrs Green smiled warmly and asked Linda to sit down. She pointed at Linda's answer paper and said gently, "Linda, life is like this piece of paper. The black dot represents the challenges and difficulties we face, but the white part represents the opportunities and possibilities that surround us. Don't let the small things overshadow the big picture." Linda nodded, feeling inspired. She thanked Mrs Green and walked out of the office with a newfound sense of hope and determination.
“Mrs Green is right. I should focus more on the white part of the paper!” Linda got refreshed. She realized that her failure in the mid-term exams was just a small black dot in her life’s paper. There was still so much white space, representing all the opportunities and chances for her to succeed. From then on, Linda started to actively engage in class discussions again and regained her confidence. She knew that with a positive mindset, she could overcome any obstacle in her life.
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