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学霸君1对1 英语课
U6-U10
八下作文复习课
单元话题
本单元以“传统经典故事”为话题，谈论了故事的主要内容、精彩片断等。要求同学们会简写一个经典故事。在写作时，首先要把故事的主要角色写出来，其次简单介绍故事发展的过程，最后写出故事的结局或蕴含的道理。可采用“SCQA”讲故事方法来构造。
unit 6
How can you tell the stories in English
How to
tell a story
情境 S(Situation)
冲突 C(Complication)
问题 Q(Question)
答案 A(Answer)
Who
When
Where
What
Why
How
What
Tense:
Past Tense
What do you think of the story/ the main character
/Why
the way to solve problem
the reason
SCQA
Hansel
and Gretel
Complication
Situation
Answer
How to tell the story of Hansel and Gretel
Question
Who
When
Where
Why
What
How
What
How do they save themselves (twice)
Their stepmother planned to kill them.
The stones showed them the way home.
Hansel and Gretel were lost.
What do you think of
the story/ the main
character
main character
one year
forest
Unless...,the whole..
Beginning
Body
Ending
Describe the background or cause of the story.
Explain the process of the story.
Describe the results or express your feeling.
The structure of the article
谋篇布局
引出话题
讲述故事
阐述启示
Good afternoon, everyone. I’m going to tell you...
Once upon a time, a farmer...
One day, while he was... he...
The hare ran so quickly that...
From that day on, he...
He finally realized...
The story reminds us that...
Only through hard work can we get success.
你喜欢音乐，电影或者文学吗？请以“My favorite Star” 为题，写一篇文章介绍你喜欢的仍然在世的明星，她/他可以是歌手，演员或作家等。内容包括：
1.介绍你最喜欢的这位明星的基本情况（如姓名，外貌，年龄等）；
2.你喜欢他/她的原因；
3.她/他已经取得成就（至少写两点）
作文要求：
1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯，注意分段，词数80左右。
Level 1
Introduction--straight to the point.
My favorite story
I love reading and I have read many books. My favorite story is Cinderella.
The characters in the story are Cinderella, her stepmother, two stepsisters, a fairy godmother and a prince. The story is about a beautiful but poor girl. With the help of the fairy godmother, she was able to go to the ball. There, she fell in love with the prince, got married and lived happily ever after. Cinderella is not only pretty but also very nice, she treats everyone around her very well and I really admire her.
This is my favorite story because it is interesting and it teaches us always to be kind to others and not to be wicked or mean like both her stepmother and stepsisters.
Share the writing.
Level 2
The body--
① general introduction of
the story
② admiration of Cinderella
Level 3
My feelings--
① why I like the story
② what I've learnt from it.
Production
unit 7
Pre-writing
What do they look like
Where do they live
What do they eat
What can they do
Why do some of them have
to be protected
How can we protect them
How to talk about an endangered animal.
home
Reasons
actions
Abilities
Food
Appearance
Para.1 Facts
about animal
Para.3 Ways
to protect them
Para.2 Reasons
why they are in danger
Review
only one baby every ______ years.
teaching children
trying hard
doing research
kilos of bamboo one day
10
12
300
2000
______ forests.
human activities
hours a day to eat
pandas live in zoos
pandas live in the forests
a program
government
scientists
What do you know about pandas
less
Facts
about Pandas
Reasons why
they are in danger
Ways to
protect pandas
two
What do you know about whales
Where do they live
What do they look like
What do they eat
What can they do
They live in the sea.
They are very huge.
They eat small fish and other animals in the sea.
They can sing and jump.
What is the situation the whales are facing now
Safe Or in danger
思路点拨
定人称
定时态
定体裁
说明文
一般现在时
第一/三人称
While-writing
Outline
Whales are… They live in… They eat… They can…
One interesting fact is… Another interesting fact is…
Some kinds of whales are in danger because …
We should protect whales from …
I think people should / shouldn’t …
Reasons
Ways
Facts
Try to write an outline of your article
Linking words
While-writing
While-writing
Whales are huge animals . They live in the sea and eat some sea life . One interesting fact is that whales can jump out of the water . Another interesting fact is that they can sing songs .
However,Some kinds of whales are in danger because humans catch them for meat and use whale parts to make things like candles and soap .
In my opinion, We should protect whales from water pollution . I think people should stop putting rubbish into the sea , make rules on whale protection and learn more about whales .
Facts
Reasons
Ways
One possible version
unit 8
本单元的话题是“文学与音乐”，请写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的一位作家、一本书、一名歌手或一个乐队。可先介绍想写的人，然后具体谈谈其相关情况或喜欢他/她的原因，最后可表达自己的感受或感想等，可用到一般现在时、现在完成时。文章要层次分明，感情真挚。
01
02
03
体裁
应用文
人称
第一人称
时态
一般现在时
现在完成时
第一步：审题
第二步：列提纲
列提纲
开篇点题，
介绍情况
介绍成就
介绍你喜欢
他/她的原因
1....is one of my favorite writers/ singers.
2.He/ She is...He/She was born on...
3.He/ She has a talent for ..../is talented in...
1.It has been +数+years since I knew him/her.
2.He/She has made a great achievements in..
3. He/ She is known for/as...
1. I like...because his/her books/songs make me...
2. The reason why I like...is that...
3.One of the reasons why I like...
hard-working; positive attitudes towards ...
be kind/friendly to../give me the power to...
第三步：语料库
one of the most famous writers/singers
be famous for/as
hard-working and try
to do his/ her best..
have the positive attitudes
toward the life...
give me the power and
confidence to...
feel happy and full of
energy when I....
learn from
get the energy from...
enjoy great success in...
①.表示并列或递进: and, both…and, not only…but also, neither…nor…
②.表示结果: so…that, too…to… …
③.表示转折: but, however, although, though...
④.表示因果: because, so, therefore, as a result…
⑤.表示条件: if , unless…
⑥.表示对比: on the one hand…on the other hand…
⑦.表示解释: for example, such as…
⑧.表示顺序: first, first (of all), to begin with; second, next, later, finally,
in the end…
⑨.表示目的: to, in order to, in order that…
⑩.表示结论: all in all, in a word…
第四步：用连词
One possible version
My favorite singer is Jay Chou(Zhou Jielun). It took him a few years to become famous. While Jay wrote songs for other pop singers, he also learned recording and sound mixing.
His first album was released in 2000, and since then, he released about one album per year. His albums have enjoyed great success in many countries, and his songs are popular with listeners of all ages.
One possible version
I like his music very much. First of all, although it is pop music,it has a mix of other kinds of music, such as R&B, rap, and rock. Besides, many of his songs are about the world we live in. One of my favorite songs is Dao Xiang, which encourages people not to give up even when life is difficult.
I feel happy and full of energy when I listen to his songs. I have introduced my best friend to Jay’s songs, and he enjoys the songs, too!
你喜欢音乐，电影或者文学吗？请以“My favorite Star” 为题，写一篇文章介绍你喜欢的仍然在世的明星，她/他可以是歌手，演员或作家等。内容包括：
1.介绍你最喜欢的这位明星的基本情况（如姓名，外貌，年龄等）；
2.你喜欢他/她的原因；
3.她/他已经取得成就（至少写两点）
作文要求：
1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯，注意分段，词数80左右。
unit 8
01
02
03
体裁
应用文
人称
第一人称
时态
一般现在时
现在完成时
第一步：审题
第二步：列提纲
列提纲
开篇点题，
介绍情况
介绍成就
介绍你喜欢
他/她的原因
1....is one of my favorite writers/ singers.
2.He/ She is...He/She was born on...
3.He/ She has a talent for ..../is talented in...
1.It has been +数+years since I knew him/her.
2.He/She has made a great achievements in..
3. He/ She is known for/as...
1. I like...because his/her books/songs make me...
2. The reason why I like...is that...
3.One of the reasons why I like...
hard-working; positive attitudes towards ...
be kind/friendly to../give me the power to...
第三步：语料库
one of the most famous writers/singers
be famous for/as
hard-working and try
to do his/ her best..
have the positive attitudes
toward the life...
give me the power and
confidence to...
feel happy and full of
energy when I....
learn from
get the energy from...
enjoy great success in...
①.表示并列或递进: and, both…and, not only…but also, neither…nor…
②.表示结果: so…that, too…to… …
③.表示转折: but, however, although, though...
④.表示因果: because, so, therefore, as a result…
⑤.表示条件: if , unless…
⑥.表示对比: on the one hand…on the other hand…
⑦.表示解释: for example, such as…
⑧.表示顺序: first, first (of all), to begin with; second, next, later, finally,
in the end…
⑨.表示目的: to, in order to, in order that…
⑩.表示结论: all in all, in a word…
第四步：用连词
One possible version
My favorite singer is Jay Chou(Zhou Jielun). It took him a few years to become famous. While Jay wrote songs for other pop singers, he also learned recording and sound mixing.
His first album was released in 2000, and since then, he released about one album per year. His albums have enjoyed great success in many countries, and his songs are popular with listeners of all ages.
One possible version
I like his music very much. First of all, although it is pop music,it has a mix of other kinds of music, such as R&B, rap, and rock. Besides, many of his songs are about the world we live in. One of my favorite songs is Dao Xiang, which encourages people not to give up even when life is difficult.
I feel happy and full of energy when I listen to his songs. I have introduced my best friend to Jay’s songs, and he enjoys the songs, too!
What do you know about Singapore
General Information
Food
Places
to visit
Location
Language
Chinese Food
Name
Weather
What is the weather like
Open time
Population
New Food
Feature
When is the best time to visit it
Singapore
Close to the equator.
Not too far
from China.
A small island in
Southeast Asia.
English
Putonghua
3/4 of the population are Chinese
rice
noodles
dumplings
Western food
Indian food
Japanese food
Night Safari
at night
more natural environment
The weather is nice all year round .
We can go whenever we like.
unit 9
话题 时态 体裁 人称
写作时能用have ever been to…表达某人曾经去过的地方，能用have ever done sth.表达曾经经历过某事，能用一般将来时表达对将来的期望。
本单元的话题是“有趣的地方”, 可以介绍自己游览过的一个地方，也可以介绍自己的家乡。
写作多从它们的地理位置、人口、气候、景观和美食等方面入手。
第一人称
第二人称
说明文
advertise a fun place
My hometown
Location
size
population/people
weather
history
places to visit
things to eat/drink
Talk about your hometown with your partner.
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标题文字
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标题文字
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How to write an article to advertise a fun place
advertise a fun place
引出话题
对该地方进行描述
表达感受
Have you ever been to …
For thousands of tourists, … is a wonderful place to…
It lies in… It is famous for…
There are many things you can…
Besides, you can taste...
One great thing about … is that …
If you visit…, you will…/If you go there, I'm sure you will enjoy yourself/have fun.
Have you ever been to Kunming Well, I have been there with my parents.
For thousands of tourists, Kunming is a wonderful place to take a holiday. Kunming, the capital city of Yunnan Province, is in Southwest China and has a population of about 8 million. One great thing about Kunming is that the temperature is almost the same all year round. So you can choose to go there whenever you like. In Kunming, you can have a relaxing holiday. On the one hand, you can try many kinds of delicious local food, for example, the famous crossing-the-bridge rice noodles. On the other hand, you can visit some interesting places like Dianchi.
All in all, Kunming is a great place to visit. If you go there, you will have a good time.
One example:
childhood memories
toy bear
model car
rubber ball
toy frog
earthbags
bike
storybook
unit 10
Talk about your favorite thing from childhood which you still have.
What is it
How did you get it
How long have you had it
Why do you like it so much
What does it look like
Did you buy it yourself
Did someone give it to you
Who gave it to you
Why did he/she give it to you
What can we talk about
One possible version
My favorite thing from childhood is my teddy bear. I've had it since I was five years old. My grandmother gave it to me on my tenth birthday. (P1)
I like the teddy bear so much because it's dressed in my favorite color. It's special to me because my grandmother made it for me. I think I will keep it forever to remind me of my grandmother. (P2)
The teddy bear has given me many good memories. I remember when I was young and I was scared at night because I didn't like the dark, I held my teddy bear to feel safe. (P3)
Introduce your favorite thing.
Talk about why it is special.
Write about memories.
校英语报此次征文的主题是“家乡的变化”，请你根据下面的提示，介绍你家乡的变化来投稿。提示：
1.What did your hometown look like in the past years
2.What does your hometown look like now
3.What do you think of these changes
要求：1.语句通顺，符合逻辑，可适当发挥；
2．80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My hometown has changed a lot in recent years.
话题作文二
审人称
审时态
审体裁
写作前：三审
1.描述各方面家乡的过去（建筑物人等）
the change of hometown
家乡的变化
总写：
My hometown has changed a lot in recent years.
分写：
It used to be a/an...place.
它过去是个…地方。
2.描述家乡的现在
Now things have changed a lot. 现在事情发生了很大变化。
展望家乡的未来
总写：
I hope my hometown will be …
Outline
One possible version
My hometown has changed a lot in recent years.
In the past, there weren't so many tall buildings in the city, and the buildings were old. But now, many new and tall buildings have been built. In my memory, there was only one small park in the city. Now I can find big and beautiful parks in different areas of the city. The roads were dirty and narrow in the past, but now they have become clean and wide.
I think such developments are good, and I hope the future of my hometown will be better and better.

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