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高分主题句-句式
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六大主题
助人为乐
个人成长
遇困脱险
亲情关爱
人与动物
趣事
高分句式1：强调句： It is + 被强调部分 + that + 其他部分
1. 困难和障碍使我们更强大。
Difficulties and obstacles make us stronger.
It is difficulties and obstacles that make us stronger.
2. 爱使世界转动。
Love makes the world go around.
It is love that makes the world go around.
3. 冷静和智慧帮助我们脱离危险。
Calmness and wisdom help us get out of danger.
It is calmness and wisdom that help us get out of danger.
高分句式2：This unforgettable experience taught me a valuable lesson that...From then on, I became/grew...
1. 这段难忘的经历使我学到了一个道理：只要我们不放弃希望，任何困境都有出路。从那天起，我变得更聪明，更自信了。(个人成长类/脱困类)
The unforgettable experience taught me a valuable lesson that there’s always a way out as long as we never give up our hope. From that day on, I grew wiser and more confident.
2. 这段难忘的经历给我上了宝贵的一课：每个人都应该学点急救知识，因为这有助于你迅速对紧急情况作出反应。在紧急情况下每一秒都很重要。(遇险脱困类)
This unforgettable experience taught me a valuable lesson that everyone should learn first aid because it will help you respond quickly to emergencies. Every second counts in an emergency.
高分句式3：Only then did sb. realize ...
直到那时，他才意识到原谅和爱/善意/友谊的重要性。
Only then did he realize the importance of forgiveness and love/kindness/friendship.
直到那时我才意识到真诚和诚实在友谊中的价值。
Only then did I realize the value of sincerity and honesty in friendship.
高分句式4：感叹句：What a + adj + experience!+感悟It turns out that…
What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any dilemma as long as we stay calm /never give up hope / unite together.
多么难忘的经历啊！事实证明，只要我们保持冷静/ 不放弃希望 / 团结一致，就总有办法摆脱困境。
比喻句
我明白了一个忠实的朋友抵得上一万个亲戚。
那份亲情像一抹清茶，沁人心脾，温暖人心。
善良就像一缕阳光，可以照亮我们的生活。
没有爱的家庭就像没有灵魂的身体。
It dawned on me that one loyal friend is worth ten thousand relatives.
That affection towards our family is like a touch of green tea, refreashing and heartwarming.
Kindness is like a ray of sunlight, which can light up our life.
A home without love is no more than a body without soul.
比喻句
生活是一盒巧克力，你永远不知道下一步你会得到。
朋友之于我犹如水之于鱼。
读书之于心灵，犹如食物之于身体。
Life is a box of chocolate. You never know what you will get.
A friend is to me what water is to fish.
Reading is to the mind what food is to the body.
高分句式1：强调句： It is + 被强调部分 + that + 其他部分
2. This unforgettable experience taught me a valuable lesson that...From then on, I became/grew...
3.Only then did sb. realize ...
4.感叹句：What a + adj + experience!+感悟
It turns out that…
.
回环照应式结尾( Circular Ending )
结尾与开头照应，有时可引用作者在开头的观点、甚至以与开头语一模一样的字眼结尾。结尾回到文章开头阐明的中心思想或主题句上，深化主题，起到画龙点睛的效果。但是注意一点，不要照搬开头的句子，要变化句式或者用词来表达相同的主题。
【2017年浙江高考题】开头；I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother--loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful.
高考读后续写几种结尾方法
结尾：Despite mom's being absent-minded and forgetful, she was still a kind and nice mom.
【2018年浙江高考题】开头：It was summer and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before(前所未有). He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
结尾：Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip to the Wild West was deeply engraved in my mind.
开头
A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.
一天，亚瑟在上班的路上发生了一件有趣的事情。
结尾
What a funny day. Arthur couldn't stop laughing whenever he looked back on this hilarious experience.
多么有趣的一天啊，每当亚瑟回想起这次欢乐的经历，他就忍不住笑个不停。
首尾呼应
2.道理寓意式结尾(Lesson or Moral Ending)
哲理式结尾，即在结尾用富含哲理的语句，总结全文，升华主旨，并给人以启发。其一般用于引申文意，起到“言已尽而意无穷”的效果，使文章的中心更突出。同学们平常可以积累一些富含哲理的段落或句子，若将之移用到文章的结尾，不仅能深化主题，而且能启人深思，给读者以有益的启迪。
【 2020年新高考全国卷I（山东）】It is love that makes the world go round，just as a saying goes，“the fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose.”
【2020年新高考全国卷I（山东）】 It dawned on me that a moment of kindness could mean so much to another,and that a simple act could make the world so much better.
【哲理式结尾佳句积累】
1. Man is not made for defeat. A man can be destroyed but not defeated.
2.The pessimist sees difficulty in every opportunity. The optimist sees opportunity in every difficulty.
人不是为失败而生的。人可以毁灭，但不能被打败。
悲观主义者在每个机会里看到困难，乐观主义者在每个困难那里看到机会。
3. Be thankful for what you have; you’ll end up having more. If you concentrate on what you don't have，you’ll never，ever have enough.
4. The best way to defeat your fear is to face your fear head-on.
5. Never underestimate yourself，for you have no idea what you are capable of.
感激你所拥有的，最终你会得到更多。如果你总是对那些没有得到的东西耿耿于怀，那么你永远也不会满足。
克服恐惧最好的方法是迎面直击。
永远不要低估自己，因为你不知道你的能力所限。
3.以景结情结尾 （ Image Ending ）
在写景结尾时，同学们要选择具有美感的景物，在情景交融中回味文意，体会文章主旨。景物应简洁疏朗，结尾写景抓住一两个意象即可，景物过多显得杂乱，冲淡了景物描写的作用，难以表现景物中蕴含的情感，忌简单罗列。
【2020年新高考全国卷I（山东）】 Gentle breeze wiping his face，a sudden happiness and warmth just hit him.
【以景结情式结尾佳句】
1. No matter how cold the winter was，all that they could feel now was the surpassing warmth.
无论冬天多么寒冷，他们现在感受到的都是扑面而来的温暖。
Surpassing adj出色的，卓越的（文学用词）
2. Everything went smoothly and quietly， so in the dark night， a boy was reading while his mother was eating，snows heavy outside though， it just couldn’t stop the warmth filling up the whole room.
一切都进行得顺利而安静，因此在黑暗的夜晚，一位男孩在读书的同时，他的母亲在吃饭。尽管外面下着大雪，但也阻挡不了整个房间弥漫的温暖。
3. I believe in full blossom，Grandmas sitting peacefully in the sun，every flower carrying her previously hope，with Grandpa beside her，giggling like a child.
4. The wind murmured in the trees and the sunlight flooded in through the window，warming the whole room，as if freezing ice was melted.
5. In the heavy snow，passion and love burnt as they hugged and smiled.
我相信盛开的花朵，奶奶安详地坐在阳光下，每一朵花都带着她以前的希望。爷爷在她身边，咯咯地笑着，像个孩子。
风在树上低语，阳光透过整个房间照射进来，冰冻的冰好像融化了。
在大雪中，当他们拥抱并微笑时，激情和爱在燃烧。
4.名言警句结尾法（wisdom words ending）
使用名言结尾往往能给文章增添文采，同时也能起到凝炼中心，深化主旨的作用，这样的结尾可以引出结论，即时抒情，凸显主旨渲染氛围等，合理使用名言可以为续写文章画龙点睛，因此在平时我们不仅要多加积累，也要明白名言蕴含的道理，以便使其用在合适的语境中。需要注意的是：不可生搬硬套名言警句，一定要具体文本具体分析。
As a proverb goes, ‘Every coin has two sides.’ Making full use of your strength is your achievement. Please remember that in no case will you give up especially in trouble. “ God is fair to everyone.”(借用名言警句来升华主题）
例1：Don't judge each day by the harvest you reap but by the seeds that you plant. （不要根据你每天的收获来判断每一天，而是根据你每天播种了多少。）这则名言采用了比喻的手法，将人的付出和回报比作耕种和收获。本质上，是过程和结果之间的比较，强调过程的重要性大于结果，可以用于习惯养成类和或者长期活动类叙事的结尾，提升思想境界。
例2：It is during our darkest moments that we must focus to see the light.
（越是在最黑暗的时刻，我们越要寻找光明。）
这则名言通过前后反复概念的对比，突出光明的重要性，引申为在困境中保持积极乐观的生活态度，可以用于主要人物经历重大坎坷，最后凭借乐观心态度过艰难岁月的文章。
例子3：Tell me and I forget. Teach me and I remember. Involve me and I learn.
（告诉我，我会忘记。教给我，我会铭记。让我参与，我会掌握。）
这则名言通过排比和对比，揭示了学习的规律，阐明了实践出真知的道理，可以用于总结学习经历，反思技能掌握的过程等。
例4：In the end, it's not the years in your life but the life in your years that count. （最后，重要的不是你生命中的岁月，而是你如何度过这些岁月的。）
这则名言通过巧妙的词汇调换，改变句意，揭示了生活的真谛：只有认真对待生活，人生才不会留下遗憾，由于本句涉及的时间跨度较大，写作中最好有最好从长者的视角提出。
我们来看下面的实战演练，故事里，主人公在柔道比赛中，通过向对手暴露自己的弱点，充分发挥自己的力量，最终赢得了比赛。故事结尾，借用教练对他的鼓励，完成了升华，其中就用到了名言警句。
5.情感升华结尾（emotion-sublimating ending）
情感升华的结尾要求，要有较高的立意，它是故事的灵魂所在，这样的结尾能够产生强烈的艺术感染力，通常我们可以通过表现人生感悟、生活真谛、生活哲理、人生观或价值观来达到结尾部分的情感升华。
【2017年浙江高考】Without her in my life, I would have no idea whether I can be a famous dancer. Someday, when I am older and have children of my own, I hope I can be just as great a parent as my mom.
【2018年浙江高考】Finally, we went out of the forest that trapped us. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm.
情感升华万能句：
Seeing sth , I felt as if it had been doing and saying,”........”
看到某物，感觉某物好像在做某动作，并且说“（突出主题的话）”。
It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulty we are faced with (= we may face), we mustn’t give up our hope.
Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way.
Finally, we did .... What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm.
From then on, Bernard made up his mind to help someone who needs help . Only in this way could more and more people help each other in the future.
6.对话式结尾（dialogue ending）
对话式结尾指文章以对话结束，此对话的功能包括：紧扣主线、意味深长、反映人物心理、揭示谜底、首尾呼应等。对话式结尾有时伴有相应的动作收尾，因为说完话总会有肢体动作伴随。对话式结尾有时意味深长，值得回味，留有空白给读者思考与感悟。使用这种结尾的前提是文章立意佳，否则就会弄巧成拙。
【Necklace项链】Madame Forestier, deeply moved, took her two hands. “Oh, my poor Mathilde! But mine was imitation. It was worth at the very most five hundred francs!...”
【例3】They hung all the things back to the wall. Jack asked Paisley, “Are you really willing to lead a tough life with me？” She patted away the ashes on hands and looked at the walls with loads of stuff on them satisfactorily, saying，“Yes! For me，it is not a suffering to live.”
7 留白结尾(Blank ending )
故事结尾留白，给予读者想象空间
【例1】The beggar hesitated for a moment, then he decided to open it. He declared aloud, “Who cares He wanted me to have it anyway. I might as well enjoy it now.”With that, he unwrapped the white tissue paper, but to his surprise, there was no hard rock candy inside. Instead, into his fingers fell a shiny white pearl worth thousands of dollars.
【例2】While she wrapped them, I took a deep breath and asked Joy, “Do you have dinner plans ” I explained that I’d like to wait a bit before I went back to the hospital – gave Grace and her husband some time alone with baby. “Would you be interested in joining me in a bite to eat ” I asked. “I’d love to,” she replied, her eyes sparkling like diamonds. And, this was the beginning of the end to my months of heartbreak following Betsy’s death.
8 画面定格结尾（freeze-frame ending）
画面定格是电影镜头运用的技巧手法之一。是指银幕上的画面骤然停止、动作刹那间凝结，显示宛若雕塑的静态美，用以突出或渲染某一场面、某种神态、某个细节等。
【例1】The crystal and cerulean water was gentle as I waded through it, the sunset like orange paint on a blue canvas.
当我涉过水晶般天蓝色的轻柔的水时，日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料。（美好日落时的画面）
【例2】The moon under siege by stars seemed to lighten the night bringing forth stars that shone and hung in the blackness. The never ending blackness consumed everything.
被群星围困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，带来了在黑暗中闪耀和悬挂着的群星。无尽的黑暗吞噬了一切。（描写夜空的画面）
9 回忆式结尾（reminiscence ending）
读后续写在末段经常回到回忆式感慨，但很多都是Years later开头，我在冰心的作品翻译里看到这样的，觉得非常不错：
I giggled in his arms, not knowing what it was like to be eaten up by a wolf. Today, nevertheless, the small incident never fails to strike fear in me whenever I recall it.（strike terror into...只能表示害怕）
这一句，把now和future给connect完美连起来了，可以形成一个公式：
【句式1】
实时场景（画面定格）+Today, nevertheless, ... never fails to remind me of...(主题关键词） in me whenever I recall it.
1. It is never too old to learn. 活到老，学到老。
2. No cross, no crown. 不经历风雨，怎么见彩虹。
3. Doing is better than saying. 行胜于言。
4. An idle youth, a needy age. 少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲。
5. A good beginning makes a good ending. 良好的开端就是成功的一半。
6. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难之交才是真朋友
7. Nothing is impossible to the man who will try.
世上无难事,只怕有心人。
谚语名言
8.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. 只工作，不玩耍，聪明孩子要变傻。
9. There is no secret of success but hard work. 成功无秘诀,只是努力干。
10. Don't leave today's work for tomorrow. 当日事，当日毕。
11. Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
12. Time means life, time means speed, time means strength.
时间就是生命，时间就是速度，时间就是力量。
13. A fall into a pit, a gain in your wit. 吃一堑，长一智。
14. A good book is a good friend. 好书如挚友。
15. Time and tide wait for no man. 时不我待。
16. Virtue is fairer far than beauty. 美德远远胜过美貌。
17. No pains, no gains. 没有付出就没有收获。
18. All that glitters is not gold. 闪光的不一定都是金子。
19. Do not impose on others what you yourself do not desire . 己所不欲，勿施于人。
20. A man cannot spin and reel at the same time. 一心不能二用。
高分句式1：强调句： It is + 被强调部分 + that + 其他部分
2. This unforgettable experience taught me a valuable lesson that...From then on, I became/grew...
3.Only then did sb. realize ...
4.感叹句：What a + adj + experience!+感悟
It turns out that…
.
回环照应式结尾( Circular Ending )
结尾与开头照应，有时可引用作者在开头的观点、甚至以与开头语一模一样的字眼结尾。结尾回到文章开头阐明的中心思想或主题句上，深化主题，起到画龙点睛的效果。但是注意一点，不要照搬开头的句子，要变化句式或者用词来表达相同的主题。
2.道理寓意式结尾(Lesson or Moral Ending)
哲理式结尾，即在结尾用富含哲理的语句，总结全文，升华主旨，并给人以启发。其一般用于引申文意，起到“言已尽而意无穷”的效果，使文章的中心更突出。同学们平常可以积累一些富含哲理的段落或句子，若将之移用到文章的结尾，不仅能深化主题，而且能启人深思，给读者以有益的启迪。
3.以景结情结尾 （ Image Ending ）
在写景结尾时，同学们要选择具有美感的景物，在情景交融中回味文意，体会文章主旨。景物应简洁疏朗，结尾写景抓住一两个意象即可，景物过多显得杂乱，冲淡了景物描写的作用，难以表现景物中蕴含的情感，忌简单罗列。
4.名言警句结尾法（wisdom words ending）
使用名言结尾往往能给文章增添文采，同时也能起到凝炼中心，深化主旨的作用，这样的结尾可以引出结论，即时抒情，凸显主旨渲染氛围等，合理使用名言可以为续写文章画龙点睛，因此在平时我们不仅要多加积累，也要明白名言蕴含的道理，以便使其用在合适的语境中。需要注意的是：不可生搬硬套名言警句，一定要具体文本具体分析。
5.情感升华结尾（emotion-sublimating ending）
情感升华的结尾要求，要有较高的立意，它是故事的灵魂所在，这样的结尾能够产生强烈的艺术感染力，通常我们可以通过表现人生感悟、生活真谛、生活哲理、人生观或价值观来达到结尾部分的情感升华。Seeing sth , I felt as if it had been doing and saying,”........”看到某物，感觉某物好像在做某动作，并且说“（突出主题的话）”
6.对话式结尾（dialogue ending）
对话式结尾指文章以对话结束，此对话的功能包括：紧扣主线、意味深长、反映人物心理、揭示谜底、首尾呼应等。对话式结尾有时伴有相应的动作收尾，因为说完话总会有肢体动作伴随。对话式结尾有时意味深长，值得回味，留有空白给读者思考与感悟。使用这种结尾的前提是文章立意佳，否则就会弄巧成拙。
7 留白结尾(Blank ending )故事结尾留白，给予读者想象空间
8 画面定格结尾（freeze-frame ending）
画面定格是电影镜头运用的技巧手法之一。是指银幕上的画面骤然停止、动作刹那间凝结，显示宛若雕塑的静态美，用以突出或渲染某一场面、某种神态、某个细节等。
9 回忆式结尾（reminiscence ending）
读后续写在末段经常回到回忆式感慨，多都是Years later开头，实时场景（画面定格）+Today, nevertheless, ... never fails to remind me of...(主题关键词） in me whenever I recall it.

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