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2024年新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷高考英语读后续写讲评
试题原文
I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. l touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.
That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn’t heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car.
试题原文
Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue (队列) still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. “We made it,” he said.
Just then I realized that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out.
试题原文
At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There, at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message: “Out of order. Sorry.”
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I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.
Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.
Read for the main characters
Narrator
“I”
“attend a conference in Prague by bus after a delayed flight”
“jumped into a taxi and made it to the bus station”
“did not have any cash to pay for the taxi fare”
Gunter
A patient taxi driver who was kind-hearted and willing to trust strangers.
Read for the plot and emotions
Opening
Build-up
Climax
Resolution
Ending
I was in a hurry to catch the last bus to Prague because of the delayed of flight.
I jumped into a taxi and Gunter took me to the bus station just in time despite some struggles.
I had no cash to pay the taxi fare after trying every possible means.
I promised to pay Gunter the fare four days later when I was back in Vienna and he trusted me.
I kept my promise and took a photo of Gunter and me as a reminder of my restored faith in humanity.
Read for the plot and emotions
Anxious
Relieved
Frustrated and helpless
Grateful and touched
Lucky and fulfilled
Read for conflicts/problems
I did not have cash to pay the taxi fare after trying every possible means but I had to catch the last bus.
Problem
Resolution
I promised Gunter that I would pay him back four days later and eventually kept my promise.
Read for the theme
The theme of this article is concentrated on the kindness and trust between strangers. Additionally, keeping promises is also highlighted.
Design four key sentences and main plots
Paragraph 1 I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. 衔接句1 What was Gunter's reaction to the news Sympathy and understanding
微场景1 What did Gunter do He comforted me and showed his kindness.
微场景2 How did I feel about the situation Grateful and touched.
段位句1 How to end para.l to ensure the coherence with para. 2 I promised to pay him back four days later when I was back in Vienna and Gunter trusted me.
Design four key sentences and main plots
Paragraph 1 Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. 衔接句2 What did I say I wanted to meet him at the appointed place and paid him the fare.
微场景1 What happened after we met I kept my promise and handed him an envelope with the fare and a little extra as a token of my appreciation for all the trouble caused.
微场景2 How did Gunter react to the extra money Gunter refused the extra money and asked me to buy him a beer next time I came to Vietnam.
段位句2 How did I feel after all this I took a picture of Gunter and me laughing heartily at Vienna airport, a constant reminder of my restored faith in humanity.
Language choice
● 动作描写助推情节
Sensing my frustration, Gunter patted me on the shoulder.
Looking at Gunter with the biggest and sincerest smile since adulthood, I said, “Thanks. You’ve really made my day.” and then rushed to board the bus.
Then I handed him an envelope with the fare and a little extra as a token of my appreciation for all the trouble caused.
Language choice
● 地道表达生动鲜活
“Well, I guess today is just not my day. I am so sorry.”
“Thank you. You’ve really made my day.”
● 高级句式增色添彩
Hearing what he said, a warm current surged through me.（非谓语作状语）
He told me to call him the next time I was in Vienna and buy him a beer, which I happily agreed to. (非限制性定语从句）
Continuation and Samples
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I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. “Well, I guess today is just not my day. I am so sorry.” I apologized earnestly. Sensing my frustration, Gunter patted me on the shoulder, grinning,“It is okay. Forget about the fare and go catch your bus.” Hearing what he said, a warm current surged through me. “Actually, I will be back in Vienna in four days. I can pay you the money then if it is okay with you. Please give me your phone number.” I promised. Gunter nodded his head simply,“Sure, I trust you.” Looking at Gunter with the biggest and sincerest smile since adulthood, I said,“Thanks. You've really made my day.” and then rushed to board the bus.
Continuation and Samples
Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. We met at the spot where I jumped into his taxi. Upon seeing each other, we embraced like long lost friends. Gunter told me he was genuinely delighted to hear my voice when I called him. Then I handed him an envelope with the fare and a little extra as a token of my appreciation for all the trouble caused, but he refused the extra money. He told me to call him the next time I was in Vienna and buy him a beer, which I happily agreed to. Before leaving, I took a picture of Gunter and me laughing heartily at Vienna airport, a constant reminder of my restored faith in humanity.

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