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2024年新课标II卷读后续写
一个好心的出租车司机
原文传递
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.
That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so l explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car.
Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station.Thankfully, there was a long queue (队列) still waiting to board the bus.Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face."We made it, "he said.
Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out.
At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There, at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message: “Out of order.Sorry.”
注意：
(1)续写词数应为150个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.
Four days later, When I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.
阅读文章，找出主要情节的句子
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.
That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so l explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car.
Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station.Thankfully, there was a long queue (队列) still waiting to board the bus.Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face."We made it, "he said.
Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out.
At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There, at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message: “Out of order.Sorry.”
注意：
(1)续写词数应为150个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.
Four days later, When I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.
When
What
按照角色梳理信息
I : Arriving at the airport of Vienna, with only a little time to spare, I jumped into a taxi to catch the last bus to Prague for a conference. It took the driver, Gunter, great efforts to understand where I wanted to go and drove me there in time. However, I had no cash to pay him and no cash machine could work. But my bus was ready to go and it would not wait for me.（我所面临的问题）
Gunter: He tried his best to drove me to the bus station in time. （他是个善良的人，为下文帮助我埋下了伏笔）
根据立德树人的正能量原则，这篇文章所传达的点有两个：1. Gunter一定会帮了我，让我及时上车去参加了我的会议2.我也遵守诺言，4天后回到维也纳，找到司机把车钱付给了他。
续写思路（镜头感）
Paragraph1: I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.
假如你是导演，你的文字要有画面感，根据你的文字，演员可以演出来
设定第一个镜头：Gunter听到坏消息的反应
用 “I”的视角去描述，可以有Gunter面部表情，心里活动，甚至还会有简短的对话.
Gunter 没有生气或失望，相反，他催促我赶紧上车，并且安慰我说不用给钱了。
Much to my surprise, he urged me to get on the bus instead of getting angry or disappointed, adding that I didn’t have to pay him for the ride for it was the machines’ fault but not mine, with a broad smile on his face. (模仿原文语言特色，但不能抄袭，稍微做一下改动）
续写思路（镜头感）
设定第二个镜头：我的心理活动及动作描写。
Much to my surprise, he urged me to get on the bus instead of getting angry or disappointed, adding that I didn’t have to pay him for the ride for it was the machines’ fault but not mine, with a broad smile on his face.
第二段的首句提醒我们还要写问出租车司机要电话号码并承诺返回维也纳后联系他。
我肯定感到如释重负，赶紧上车。
A feeling of relief surged through my whole body.(模仿原文语言特色，但不能抄袭，稍微做一下改动） Before boarding the bus ,I asked Gunter for his phone number, ensuring that I was bound to pay him after returning to Vienna.
续写思路（镜头感）
A feeling of relief surged through my whole body. Before boarding the bus ,I asked Gunter for his phone number, ensuring that I was bound to pay him after returning to Vienna.
设定第三个镜头：可以写我坐在车上心情，如果还有空间，可以顺便提一下你的会议情况
回顾第一段的环境描写，这是一个又冷又下雨的旁晚，那么衬托出你此时此刻感受到的温暖以及你很感激这个司机的帮助。
Hardly had I sat on the bus when it started to move. Instantly, an intense wave of relief and gratitude surrounded me like a beam of sunlight, throwing me into a sense of kindness and warmth.
续写思路（镜头感）
续写第一段参考范文：
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. Much to my surprise, however, he urged me to get on the bus in no time instead of getting angry or disappointed, adding that I didn’t have to pay him for the ride for it was the machines’fault but not mine, with a broad smile on his face. A feeling of relief surged through my whole body and before boarding the bus, I asked Gunter for his phone number, ensuring that I was bound to pay him after returning to Vienna. He just waved good-bye to me and wished me a smooth journey. Hardly had I sat on the bus when it started to move. Instantly, an intense wave of relief and gratitude surrounded me like a beam of sunlight, throwing me into a sense of kindness and warmth.
把三个镜头连成段落，中间还可以加上一些承上启下的词或句子。
续写思路（镜头感）
Paragraph 2: Four days later, When I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.
设定第四个镜头：Gunter 答应和我见面，当Gunter出现在我眼前时，我心存感激地拥抱了他.
He agreed to meet me in a delighted voice. A few minutes later, when Gunter got out of his car and approached me, I rushed to him and gave him a bear hug, conveying my sincere appreciation to him, with tears of gratitude in my eyes.
续写思路（镜头感）
He agreed to meet me in a delighted voice. A few minutes later, when Gunter got out of his car and approached me, I rushed to him and gave him a bear hug, conveying my sincere appreciation to him, with tears of gratitude in my eyes.
设定第五个镜头：然后我把车钱付给了他,还送了他一个小礼物。告诉他正是他的帮助，我才没有错过人生中这么重要的会议。
Then I gave him the money along with a small gift, which made him extremely surprised and delighted when he received the unexpected gift. I gratefully informed him that it was with his assistance that I didn’t miss my important conference. It turned out to be a turning point in my successful career life.
续写思路（镜头感）
Then I gave him the money along with a small gift, which made him extremely surprised and delighted when he received the unexpected gift. I gratefully informed him that it was with his assistance that I didn’t miss my important conference. It turned out to be a turning point in my successful career life.
设定第六个镜头：Gunter的回应及肢体语言。
Hearing what I said, Guter responded to me by flashing me a celebrating smile.(模仿原文语言特色，稍微做一下改动）
续写思路（镜头感）
主题升华：
Never before had I got such a unique experience, which was deeply engraved（雕刻） in my mind and had a profound influence on me in the rest of my life. What mattered most was kindness , with which we could bring light and hope to others and ourselves as well
续写思路（镜头感）
续写第二段参考范文
Four days later, When I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. He agreed to meet me in a delighted voice. A few minutes later, when Gunter got out of his car and approached me, I rushed to him and gave him a bear hug, conveying my sincere appreciation to him. Then I gave him the money along with a small gift. I gratefully informed him that it was with his assistance that I didn’t miss my important conference. It turned out to be a turning point in my successful future career life. Hearing what I said, Guter responded to me by flashing me a celebrating smile.Never before had I got such a unique experience, which was deeply engraved（雕刻） in my mind and had a profound influence on me in the rest of my life. A small act of kindness could make a great difference to others.
第二段续写思路：我和Gunter见面了，把车钱给了他，并且对他表示感谢。这次难忘的经历让我意识到善良的行为会给他人带来积极的影响，我也决定向他学习。
Thank you

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