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写作高级表达技巧
积累高阶词汇
词性 普通词汇 高阶词（组） 普通词汇 高阶词（组）
名词 wealth（财富） treasure,fortune way（方法） method,means
chance（机会） opportunity difficulty（困难） challenge
动词 use（使用） take advantage of, make good/full use of, put sth. to good use like（喜欢） admire, be fond of, be interested in, be crazy about, fall in love with
try（尝试） make efforts to do grow（增长） rise, improve, increase,
hope（希望） expect（to do）, look forward to doing cause（导致） lead to, result in
keep（保持） stick to, insist on finish（完成） achieve, complete
形容词 bad（坏的） awful, terrible helpful （有帮助的） be of great help
good （好的；优秀的） perfect, fantastic, excellent, outstanding happy （高兴的） pleased,cheerful, joyful
beautiful/pretty （漂亮的） attractive, fascinating Clever （聪明的） wise,bright, intelligent
hopeful （有希望的） promising Tired （劳累的） Worn out
增加句式多样性
一、复合句
（一）并列复合句
分点讲解
①表并列：常用and,not only...but also...,both...and...和neither...nor...
例1： He is not tall. He is not short.→He is neither tall nor short.
②表转折：常用but
例2： I like coffee. Mary dislikes coffee.→I like coffee but Mary dislikes it.
③表选择：常用or,either...or...
例3： Will you go swimming？Will you go fishing？→Will you go swimming or fishing？
④表因果：常用so
例4： She had a cold. She went to a doctor. →She had a cold,so she went to a doctor.
即时训练
1. I will join the art club . Mary will join the art club.（用both...and...）
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2. Joining a sports club makes me healthy. Joining a sports club helps me make more friends.（用not only...but also...）
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3. My father reads newspapers after dinner. My father listens to the radio after dinner.（用either...or...）
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4. Jim studied hard. He got good grades in the final exams.（用so）
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（二）主从复合句
（1）状语从句
分点讲解
①时间状语从句：when,while,since,before,after,until/till,as soon as等
例1： I feel nervous before an exam. I will listen to some relaxing music.
→When I feel nervous before an exam,I will listen to some relaxing music.
②让步状语从句：though/although,even though/if,whatever等
例2： I still like our English teacher. Our English teacher is sometimes strict with us.
→Although/Though our English teacher is sometimes strict with us,I still like him.
③条件状语从句：if,unless,as long as
例3： You study hard. I'm sure your grades will greatly improve.
→If you study hard,I'm sure your grades will greatly improve.
④原因状语从句：because
例4： Children love winter. Children love to play in the snow.
→Children love winter because they love to play in the snow.
⑤目的状语从句：so that,in order that
例5： I have made up my mind to do what I really want to do. I can achieve my dream.
→I have made up my mind to do what I really want to do so that I can achieve my dream.
⑥结果状语从句：so...that...，such...that...
例6： My math teacher makes her class interesting. I start to fall in love with math.
→My math teacher makes her class so interesting that I start to fall in love with math.
即时训练
5. We were having dinner. Dylan told us some interesting stories about his travel. （用while）
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6. We need to think twice. We follow others.（用before）
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7. We speak different types of English. We are a part of an international club.（用even though/if）
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8. There will be nothing to worry about. You work hard and keep trying.（用as long as）
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9. Failure is not always a bad thing. We can always learn something from it.（用because）
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10. She learns many new words. She can understand English movies more easily.（用in order that）
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11. 天气这么好，我们都想去公园野餐。（用so...that...或such...that...）
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（2）宾语从句
分点讲解
例：How does he go to school？Do you know？→Do you know how he goes to school？
即时训练
12. “Will she come to the party？” He asked me.
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（3）定语从句
分点讲解
①先行词为人：who/whom/that引导
例1： Linda is a brave girl. Our headteacher praised her at the meeting.
→Linda is a brave girl （who/whom/that） our headteacher praised at the meeting.
②先行词为物：which/that引导
例2： David's kindness taught me a lesson. I would never forget it.
→David's kindness taught me a lesson （which/that） I would never forget.
即时训练
13. I prefer novels. They give me something meaningful to think about.
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14. She is my best friend. She always helps me when I meet difficulties.
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二、感叹句
分点讲解
（一）由what引导
例1： Tom helped me. He is a helpful person.→Tom helped me. What a helpful person（he is）！
（二）由how引导
例2： We had a special class.→How special a class we had！
即时训练
1. My brother has made great progress in English.（用what引导）
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2. Looking back at the days we spent together,we were happy.（用how引导）
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三、功能句型
（一）提建议的句型
分点讲解
常用于提建议的表达： had better （not）.../Why not...？/Let's...
例1： We'd better ride a bike or walk instead of driving a car.
例2： Why not get/keep away from junk food to keep healthy？
即时训练
1. 让我们尽我们所能来保护环境吧！
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2. 你最好穿上外套，否则你会感冒的。
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（二）发表观点的句型
分点讲解
常用于发表观点的句型： I think.../In my opinion/From my point of view/As for me,...
例： In my opinion/From my point of view/As for me,it is necessary for us to write words correctly and beautifully. The reasons are as follows.
即时训练
3. 在我看来，孩子们有必要做一些家务。原因如下。
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4. 我认为我们应该一分为二地看待事物。
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（三）It is＋adj.＋for/of sb. ＋to do sth.
分点讲解
例1： I ride a bike to school. It's convenient.→It is convenient for me to ride a bike to school.
例2： You helped the old man find his family. You are kind.→It's kind of you to help the old man find his family.
即时训练
5. We should master a foreign language. It's important.
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6. You greet the elders first. You are polite.
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四、拓展延伸——倒装句
分点讲解
例1： By developing healthy eating habits and exercising more,we can have strong bodies.
→Only by developing healthy eating habits and exercising more can we have strong bodies.
例2： He spoke not only correctly but also smoothly.→Not only did he speak correctly,but also smoothly.
即时训练
1. By following the traffic rules,everyone can keep safe.（用only倒装句改写）
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2. He not only studies well,but also is crazy about sports. （用not only...but also...倒装句改写）
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巧用衔接词
类别 单词/短语
并列 and和；又；而　　　　　　　　　　　　　 both...and...两者都 …… not only...but also...不但 ……而且 …… either...or...或者 ……或者 ……
转折 but但是　　　　　 however然而 on one hand...on the other hand...一方面 ……另一方面 ……
顺序 first（ly）/at first/first of all/to begin with/to start with首先 second（ly）/then/after that/next 其次　　　 meanwhile/at the same time 同时 finally/in the end/at last最后 last but not least 最后但同样重要的是 after a while过了一会儿
因果/目的 so所以　　　　so that 以便于 as a result结果是 in order to 为了 as a result of由于 because/because of/for因为
递进 also 也　　 　　　　　besides 而且，另外 what's more更重要的是 what's worse更糟糕的是
观点 in my opinion/view/eyes/as for me/from my point of view 在我看来 as we all know众所周知 to be honest/honestly speaking坦诚地说
总结 on the whole 总的来说　　　　　　　　　　　 in a word/all in all/in short 总而言之
其他 in other words/that is（to say）换句话说　 　 in fact/as a matter of fact 事实上
即时训练
阅读短文，用恰当的过渡词或短语填空
Hello,everyone. I'm Li Xin. I want to talk about something about reading.
① 　　　　　　　　 develop reading habits, we can read in different places, such as in the library, on the subway or at home. ② 　　　　　　　　, there are different tools of reading, from the most common paper book reading to e books and online reading. As the saying goes, “It's never too late to learn.” Reading is ③ 　　　　　　　　 a hobby for people of all ages.
One of my hobbies is reading. Reading ④ 　　　　　　　　 increases my knowledge, 　　　　　　　　 broadens my horizon. ⑤ 　　　　　　　　,reading is helpful for me to learn from the experience of others and make progress.Reading helps me be a better person. So, let's enjoy reading together！

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