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(共26张PPT)
Drafting a lecture（演讲稿、讲座稿）
Developing ideas---Writing
What World Heritage Site is it
Warming up
Fanjing Mountain
Read the passage and answer the questions.
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2
Read and Answer
What does a lecture usually include
A lecture
Reason for selection
Opening
Conclusion
Other information
Read for the structure(结构)
Now draft your lecture about Fanjing Mountain.
Complete the outline to organise your lecture draft based on the information in Activity 5.
Do online research if necessary.
Now draft a lecture about Fanjing Mountain.
Reading & Writing
Good morning, everyone! It's my great pleasure to give a lecture here on behalf of our association. If you haven't already heard of Fanjing Mountain, you soon will.
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Fangjing Mountain, located in Guizhou Province, has now been added to the UNESCO World Heritage List, and the main reason for its inclusion is its biological diversity.
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The most impressive aspect of Fanjing Mountain is in environmental protection, which represents one of the country's greatest achievements . It is also renowned for its breathtaking scenery as a summer resort.
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All of this explains why Fanjing Mountain earned and deserves its place on the UNESCO World Heritage List.
Thank you for listening. Now, does anyone have any questions
A Sample Passage
Good morning, everyone! It's my great pleasure to give a lecture here on behalf of our association. If you haven't already heard of Fanjing Mountain, you soon will.
Fangjing Mountain, located in Guizhou Province, has now been added to the UNESCO World Heritage List, and the main reason for its inclusion is its biological diversity. The most impressive aspect of Fanjing Mountain is in environmental protection, which represents one of the country's greatest achievements . It is also renowned for its breathtaking scenery as a summer resort.
All of this explains why Fanjing Mountain earned and deserves its place on the UNESCO World Heritage List.
Thank you for listening. Now, does anyone have any questions
Questions Your evaluation Evaluator
Does the lecture include the key points 4 2 0
Is the lecture organized properly and smoothly 3 2 1
How is the language 12 8 4 2
How is the handwriting 3 1 -1
Paper design 3 1 -1
TOTAL MARK
Evaluation table
Work in pairs. Make improvements to each other’s lecture drafts according to the following evaluation form.
Let`s protect our
Clear Waters
and
Lush Mountains
Please polish (润色) your lecture about Fanjing Mountain after class and hand it in.
Homework
Writing
［技法指导］
如何写地点介绍类的演讲稿
地点介绍类的演讲稿是一种常见的应用文。它以口头的形式 向听众介绍一个地点，让听众更深入地了解这个地点的情况。写 作时注意要重点突出，详略得当。文章不一定要面面俱到，应重 点描写该地点的特别之处，突出其特色（如其独特的自然风景、历 史文化、地貌特征、风土人情、传说故事、民族习俗或名胜古迹 等），这样才能给读者留下深刻的印象。在写这类文章时，通常有 以下几个步骤：
首先，整体介绍其地理位置或人文环境；
其次，具体介绍其独特的历史价值或突出的人文特色等；
最后，总结概括以吸引读者前往。
在语言特点上要注意:
第一，时态多为一般现在时:
第二，要准确运用方位词，恰当使用过渡词；
第三，遣词造句要简洁，内容要尊重客观事实，不可过分渲染。
Writing
常用表达
1. 开场白常用表达：
Good morning/afternoon/evening,everyone.
I'm glad/honoured to be here to give a lecture about...
It's my great pleasure to give a lecture here on behalf of...
Thanks for giving me the chance to talk about...
The topic of my speech is...
Writing
2. 主体部分常用表达!
It is located/situated... with an area of...
It has a long history of... years.
It is a(n) ...place/country with... history.
It dates back to/dates from...
It is in the center of/to the left/to the right/at the foot of/on the top
It is universally accepted that...
The reason why... is that...
It is a famous... with a history of..
It covers an area of... square kilometers
Is it its... that... Or s it the... that...
It contains a(n). .. environment that...
Writing
It is also one of the rare locations in the world where...One example is that... Another one is that...According to official statistics..., which represents... per cent
The most impressive aspect of... is.It is well-known for its world-renowned places of interest.The city, known as..., attracts millions of visitors from all over the world.
3. 结束语常用表达:
Thanks for your listening /attention. Does anyone have any questions You are welcome to pay a visit to...I think you will have a great time in...is a must when you are visiting...
Writing
Writing
[精品展示]
安徽黄山(HuangshanMountain)是世界文化与自然双重遗产被誉为“天下第一奇山”请根据下列信息，写一篇100词左右的演讲稿，简单介绍一下黄山。
内容要点:
1. 位于安徽省南部，是中国著名的旅游胜地。
2. 在黄山可领略其云海、松树、温泉、冬雪等秀丽的风景及清晨美丽的日出。
参考词汇: 云海the sea of clouds; 松树pine trees
审题谋篇
第一步: 明确要求
本文属于介绍地点的演讲稿，时态应以一般现在时为主，人称以第二人称为主。
第二步: 确定段落。
第一段: 表达问候，开门见山，引入主题。
第二段: 介绍黄山美丽的风景与清晨的日出等。
第三段: 进行总结，提出问题，并与听众进行互动。
第三步: 提炼要点。
Writing
Writing
词块准备
1. 作演讲 _______________________
2. 坐落在/位于 _______________________
3. 一则......二则..... ____________________________________
4. 给....提供...... _______________________
5. 旅行目的地 _______________________
give a lecture
be located in
for one thing...; for another thing...
provide... for...
tourist destination
Writing
句式升级
1. 黄山位于安徽省，是中国最著名的旅游景点之一。
(一般表达)Huangshan Mountain is located in the south of AnhuProvince. It is one of the most famous tourist attractions in China.
(高级表达)Huangshan Mountain, located in the south of Anhui Province, is one of the most famous tourist attractions in China.
2.它(黄山)有丰富的自然资源，这些具有科学和生态价值。
(一般表达)It has rich natural resources and these have scientific and ecological values.
(高级表达) It has rich natural resources which have scientific and ecological values.
A Sample Passage(原版)
Good morning, everyone. It is a great pleasure for me to give a lecture about Huangshan Mountain here.
As we know, Huangshan Mountain, located in the south of AnhuiProvince, is one of the most famous tourist attractions in China. As a famous Chinese saying goes, “ There is no need to see other mountains after visiting Huangshan Mountain.” For one thing, the landscape of Huangshan Mountain is dramatic.While you are climbing the mountain, you can enjoy its unique scenes: the pine trees. the sea of clouds. hotsprings and the snows of winter. In the early morning, when the sunrises, the sky looks incredibly beautiful. For another, HuangshanMountain provides a great natural habitat for a wide variety of animals and plants. It has rich natural resources which have scientific andecological values.
While you are in Anhui, Huangshan Mountain is a must for you. You are welcome to visit this attractive tourist destination.
Thank you for your attention. Do you have any questions
A Sample Passage(修改版)
Good morning, everyone. It is a great pleasure for me to give a lecture about Huangshan Mountain here. If you haven't already heard of Huangshan Mountain, you soon will.
Huangshan Mountain is located in the south of Anhui Province and it has now been added to the UNESCO World Heritage List. The main reason for its inclusion is that it is one of the most famous tourist(travelling) resorts in China. The most impressive aspect of Huangshang Mountain is its beauty, which can let you enjoy its breath-taking scenery, such as, the sea of clouds. the pine trees, hot springs and the winter snow. It is also renowned for its wonderful sunrise early in the morning.
All of this explains why Huangsahn Mountain earned and deserves its place on the UNESCO World Heritage List.
Thank you for listening. Now, does anyone have any questions

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