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中考好人好事类作文 写作指导
人称：第三人称+第一人称
结构：二段式 （第一段：叙述事情经过 第二段：表达个人观点）
时态：第一段（一般过去时） 第二段（一般现在时态\一般将来时）
好人好事类作文个人观点（尾段）模板：
第一句：I am deeply moved by what he did. \ I am deeply touched by his kind act.
我被他的善行深深打动了。
第二句：In my opinion, \As far as I am concerned,\From my point of view,\ I think
我认为...
he sets a good example for us by helping those in need (and expecting nothing in return). 他帮助了有需要的人，(并不求回报,) 为我们树立了好榜样。
第三句：We should learn from him because he is kind\is warm-heated\ has a strong sense of responsibility.
我们应当像他学习因为他是善良的\热心的\有很强的责任感的。
（第二句和第三句可以任选一句写）
第四句：If everyone lends a hand to others, the world will be a better place.
如果每个人都帮助他人，世界将变得更美好。
范文：
(一)
A moving story
On the afternoon of 22nd March, when Yuan Feng and Huang Bin went back home from school, a two-year-old boy was walking on the street all alone. Suddenly, he fell down. As soon as Yuan Feng and Huang Bin saw that, they rushed to lift him up. They tried to comfort the little boy who was crying sadly. They realized the boy got separated from his parents. While they were waiting for the little boy's parents, they played games and shared potato chips with him. Half an hour later, they decided to call the police for help. With their help, the little boy's parents found their child. They thanked them for everything they had done for their son.
I am deeply touched by their kind act. They set a good example for us. They are both so warm-hearted that the little boy doesn't feel lonely or afraid. I'm sure the more we care about others, the better our world will be!
（二）
坚韧不拔、欣欣向荣的中国，每天都带给人们新的温暖和感动。2024年伊始，互联网就记录下许许多多生动而真挚的故事。时而激情澎湃，时而细水潺潺，就像微光汇聚成冬日暖阳，照亮奋斗之路。
假如你是李明，请根据以下提示，讲述发生在身边的一个平凡而温暖的故事。
（1）上周五的英语课上，你的同学王红昏昏欲睡；
（2） 张老师(Mr. Zhang)了解原因后，得知王红感冒；在去给王红买药的路上出了车祸，左腿骨折；
（3）王红去医院看望张老师，感动又难过，老师告诉她不要担心；
（4）全班同学给老师写了一封感谢信，祝老师早日康复；
（5）我认为……
写作要求：
（1）不得使用真实姓名和学校名。
（2）包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
（3）字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚。
（4）词数80词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数。）
Last Friday,
参考例文
Last Friday, my classmate Wang Hong felt quite sleepy while we were having an English lesson. After talking with her, Mr. Zhang knew that she had a bad cold. Unluckily, Mr. Zhang had an accident when he was on his way to buy the medicine for Wang Hong. Even worse, he broke his left leg and had to be in hospital. Wang Hong went to see him, feeling moved and sad. However, Mr. Zhang told her not to worry. And the whole class wrote a thank-you letter to wish our teacher to get well soon.
I am really moved by what Mr. Zhang did. In my opinion, he is such a loving teacher who not only teaches us knowledge but also cares about us. Furthermore, he helps us to know that everyone can make the world a little warmer if we want to.
（三）
当前，我国已经进入了老龄化社会，尊敬老人，是中华民族的传统美德，关爱老人应该从我们身边的小事做起。请根据下面的内容提示，写一篇短文。
（1）李奶奶是一位独居老人，她很善良，深受邻居尊重；
（2）上周六，李奶奶生病住院了，没有人照顾；
（3）李津和社区志愿者买了鲜花和水果去医院看望老人；
（4）他们帮助老人洗衣服，和老人聊天；
（5）李奶奶很开心，感觉好多了；
（6）你认为……
参考词汇：尊重 respect 社区志愿者community volunteer 和……聊天chat with
要求：
（1）词数：80~100个。
（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Grandma Li is an old woman,
【答案】例文
Grandma Li is an old woman, who lives alone. She is kind to others, so she is greatly respected by neighbors.
Last Saturday, Grandma Li was ill in hospital. There was no one around taking care of her. So Li Jin and community volunteers went to the hospital to visit her with some flowers and fruit. In the hospital, some helped the old woman wash clothes, and the others chatted with her. Grandma Li was very happy and felt much better.
From my point of view, if everyone gives a hand to someone who is in trouble, the world will be more beautiful and nicer.
（四）
（五）
请你根据以下内容提示，以“The Story of Li Hua”为题，为学校广播站英语专栏写一篇短文，介绍发生在你班同学李华身上的一件事。
(1)上周五放学后李华步行回家，路上车辆很多。
(2)他看到一位老太太坐在一家商店的门口，脸色苍白。
(3)李华主动走过去询问情况，并且递给她一瓶水。过了一会儿，对方感觉舒服多了，并向李华表示感谢。
(4)周围的人看到后，称赞了李华。李华认为帮助他人是应该的。
(5)你觉得……
参考词汇：称赞praise
要求：
(1)词数:80~100个。
(2)短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
The Story of Li Hua
Last Friday, my classmate Li Hua
The Story of Li Hua
Last Friday, my classmate Li Hua walked home after school. There were a lot of cars on the road. He saw an old lady sitting in front of a shop and her face was pale. Li Hua took the initiative to ask her about the situation and handed her a bottle of water. After a while, the old lady felt more comfortable. And she thanked Li Hua for his help. When the people around him saw it, they praised Li Hua. Li Hua thinks it is good to help others.
I think he is a helpful person and I should learn from him to help those who need help.

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