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The Christmas holidays were fast approaching, and we had ordered many gifts online. So, when the doorbell rang, I was sure some of the packages had arrived. I ran to the door and swung it open, but no one was there. I sensed something and looked down, only to find a beautiful calico kitten (杂色猫) sitting there, looking up at me with big, intelligent eyes. There was no way that she could have rung the doorbell by herself, was there
交待小猫的来历。时间：圣诞节期间，意料之外的礼物。方式：猜测自己按门铃。本段中的时间、礼物、来历都为后文铺垫。尤其是对小猫的来历的描述为后文小猫具有独特的能力这一点铺垫。作者第一次见到小猫的印象：beautiful, big, intelligent eyes说明了小猫的一些特点。为后文小猫的聪明和敏锐铺垫。
语言特点：动作描写；大量并列句和从句（时间状语从句、宾语从句、定语从句等），非谓语动词如：结果状语、伴随状语等。
We figured that someone had found the kitten somewhere and left her there, and then rang the doorbell and ran away. They accurately guessed we would welcome an additional family member and take care of her.
这个段落对小猫的特点进行了详细的介绍：angel, a calm aura, an old soul, perfect companion, more like a puppy, wise beyond her years, enjoy wandering through the tunnels and mysterious rooms, courageous等都为后文作者被困后小猫的陪伴和帮助女主人脱困铺垫。
angel这个名字恰如其分，救人于水火。
性格特点：calm, wise, courageous, adventurous(enjoy wandering through the tunnels and mysterious rooms), loyal (perfect companion, more like a puppy)
My husband called her our little angel, so we named her accordingly. She had a calm aura (气质) about her as she walked straight into our home and hearts, fitting in perfectly. It seemed as if she was always meant to be in this big house with us. She was an old soul and turned out to be the perfect companion. Always by my side, she was more like a puppy than a kitten. Wise beyond her years, she enjoyed wandering through the tunnels and mysterious rooms as much as I did, but with much less fear. Angelica the calico was courageous.
本段为后文作者被困的地点铺垫。介绍了自己的孤身勇探地窖的原因——take a page from her book。地窖的特点：a rickety ladder, murky depths, old. Twelve feet deep都为后文铺垫。梯子坏掉，女主人公摔下地窖，昏暗老旧的地窖和作者的恐惧心理关联，12 feet deep（3.6米）说明无法爬出地窖。
So, I took a page from her book and decided to be brave, too. There was an underground stone cellar (地窖) I had been eager to explore. The only way in was down a rickety (摇晃的) ladder to its murky depths. I guessed it was an old root cellar, probably twelve feet deep.
本段为后文作者被困的地点铺垫。介绍了自己的孤身勇探地窖的原因——take a page from her book。地窖的特点：a rickety ladder, murky depths, old. Twelve feet deep都为后文铺垫。梯子坏掉，女主人公摔下地窖，昏暗老旧的地窖和作者的恐惧心理关联，12 feet deep（3.6米）说明无法爬出地窖。
I had promised my husband that I wouldn’t explore dangerous areas unless he or someone else was around. （铺垫作者摔下地窖无法自救时的懊悔心理）Though I knew I was stretching it, I figured that Angelica would count as my companion. （铺垫后文小猫作为同伴陪伴并救出作者的情节）I was ready to explore this cellar, and so was she.
I equipped myself with a good flashlight and warm clothes,（铺垫摔下地窖后有手电帮助作者缓解恐惧心理并观察所处环境的寻找出路） and carefully started down the rickety ladder while Angelica was looking down at me from above.（没有一起下去，铺垫后文作者摔下地窖后往上看到小猫的情节） Faint crack and sudden crash were what I could remember.
注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 左右：2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1 I woke up with pieces of the rotting, broken ladder lying around me on the stone cellar floor._______________________________________________________
Paragraph 2 It seemed my companion, Angelica, was my last hope.________________
文本分析：
故事梗概：
The protagonist received an abandoned stray cat named Angelica before Christmas. Angelica gets along harmoniously with her master's family, is brave and intelligent, and has become her faithful companion. The owner, by understanding Angelica's bravery, decided to become brave as well. So, the owner decided to explore the underground stone cellar at home, and Angelica became her exploration companion. However, the owner fell on the ladder of the stone cellar. Angelica promptly notified the owner's husband to come for rescue. The story reflects the importance of courage and responsibility that the protagonist learned from Angelica.
续写思路分析：
Para l. I woke up with pieces of the rotting, broken ladder lying around me on the stone cellar floor.
首句分析：
Woke up和前文结尾处的what I could remember照应，说明作者摔下地窖后陷入昏迷，时间未知。Rotting, broken ladder照应前文faint crack and sudden crash，可知作者摔下地窖的原因是梯子年久失修而腐烂断裂。
从第二段的首句可知，本段中主要描写作者在醒来后用不同的方式自救。
大概情节推断：
腿伤——利用手电探查环境和寻找出口未果——抬头呼救（期待）未果（（懊悔，害怕）——发现小猫；
（如何自救？我的心情？结果如何？）
Para 2. It seemed my companion, Angelica, was my last hope.
首句分析：
根据句中my companion, Angelica可知，续写第一段中在作者摔下地窖昏迷后小猫并没有离开，而是作为一个忠实的陪伴者在守护作者。Was my last hope可知，作者之前尝试了不同逃离地窖的方式，但是没有成功。最后的希望是小猫，暗示本段将讲述小猫如何利用自己的智慧帮作者脱困。
大概情节推断：
尝试与小猫交流——小猫离开（期待，担忧）——获救（庆幸，感激）——尾声（主题升华，首位呼应）
（如何让小猫救我？我的心情？结果？）
主题：
The theme of the article is about the story of Angelica, an abandoned stray cat, and the owner's experience of becoming brave and adventurous under her influence. At the same time, the story also conveys the importance of responsibility and bravery.
参考范文：
I woke up with pieces of the rotting, broken ladder lying around me on the stone cellar floor. I woke up on the stone floor with a splitting headache and unclear thinking. I stumbled on the third step and the ladder collapsed, causing me to fall to the ground. My left arm is in severe pain, and I know it's broken. I am trapped in the dark ground, unable to climb out, lonely and helpless. I requested rescue, but my voice echoed, empty and powerless. As despair was about to engulf me, I heard a faint but familiar meow.
It seemed my companion, Angelica, was my last hope. I pray that she will realize that the situation is not right and come to save me. Her brave nature and loyal qualities gave me a glimmer of hope. Lying in the darkness, I tried to calm my breathing and listen to any sound from above. Time seemed to stagnate until the hurried footsteps broke the silence. That's Angelica and my husband! She seemed to have noticed my situation and led my husband here by tirelessly pulling his pants. Stroking her soft hair, I believe this angel has always been by my side.

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