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2024年人教版八年级上单元英语写作指南-我的朋友，开学前必看原创作文！
写 作 任 务
请以“My best friend”为题写一篇介绍你的朋友的短文。短文要运用课文所学的有关句式，把你的朋友和你的长相（包括身高、头发、眼睛等）、体格(包括强壮强度等)、性格(开朗、文静等)、学习情况等方面进行比较。
提示词：popular，hard-working，outgoing，short/long straight hair
词数80-100左右。
思 路 点 拨
第一步：审题这是一篇关于介绍你最好朋友的短文写作任务。你需要根据提示，比较你和你的朋友在长相、体格、性格和学习情况等方面的不同，并运用所学的句式进行表达。
第二步：写作提纲开头部分：简要介绍你的朋友，并引出接下来的比较。中间部分：比较你和朋友的长相，如身高、头发、眼睛等。比较你和朋友的体格，如强壮程度。比较你和朋友的性格，如开朗、文静等。比较你和朋友的学习情况。
结尾部分：总结你对朋友的感情和友谊的珍视。
第三步：选词组句可能用到的词语及中文解释：popular：受欢迎的hard-working：努力的outgoing：外向的short/long straight hair：短/长直发
高 分 作 文高分作文一：
My best friend is Lily.
She is taller than me and has long straight hair, while I have short hair. She is also stronger than me and really good at sports. Lily is very outgoing and popular at school. I'm a bit quieter. She is really hard-working and always gets good grades. I work hard too, but not as hard as her.
We are different, but that's what makes our friendship special. I love being friends with Lily!
我最好的朋友是莉莉。
她比我高，有着长长的直发，而我的头发比较短。她也比我强壮，非常擅长运动。莉莉非常外向，在学校里很受欢迎。我有点安静。她非常努力，总是取得好成绩。我也很努力，但不如她努力。
我们虽然不同，但这正是我们的友谊特别的地方。我喜欢和莉莉做朋友！
高分作文二：
My best friend is called Tom. He is shorter than me and has short hair, just like me.
But his eyes are bigger and brighter. Tom is very strong and loves playing football. I'm not as strong, but I like reading. He is outgoing and always making friends. I'm a bit more shy. Tom is really hard-working in school and gets top grades. I try hard, but he is better.
We are different in many ways, but we are still best friends. I'm glad to have Tom as my friend!
我最好的朋友叫汤姆。
他比我矮，和我一样是短发。但他的眼睛更大更明亮。汤姆非常强壮，喜欢踢足球。我不如他强壮，但我喜欢阅读。他很外向，总是交朋友。我有点害羞。汤姆在学校里非常努力，总是取得顶尖的成绩。我也很努力，但他更出色。
我们在很多方面都不同，但我们仍然是最好的朋友。我很高兴有汤姆这样的朋友！
好 句 背 诵
以下是上面高分作文摘取的优秀的表达：
She is taller than me and has long straight hair, while I have short hair.（她比我高，有着长长的直发，而我的头发比较短。）通过对比的方式清晰地描述了朋友和自己的身高及发型差异，简洁明了。
Lily is very outgoing and popular at school.（莉莉非常外向，在学校里很受欢迎。）简洁地描述了朋友的性格和在学校中的受欢迎程度，用词准确。
She is really hard-working and always gets good grades.（她非常努力，总是取得好成绩。）突出了朋友的努力和学习成绩，用词简单但表达清晰。
He is shorter than me and has short hair, just like me.（他比我矮，和我一样是短发。）通过对比的方式描述了朋友和自己的身高及发型相似之处，用词简洁。
But his eyes are bigger and brighter.（但他的眼睛更大更明亮。）简洁地描述了朋友眼睛的特点，用词生动。
We are different in many ways, but we are still best friends.（我们在很多方面都不同，但我们仍然是最好的朋友。）总结了朋友之间的差异和友谊的坚固，用词简单但富有深意。
满分作文三
I have many friends, but Lily is the most remarkable one in my life.
Engaging in a conversation with her, you'll notice her excellent communication skills. I vividly recall a time when I felt down, and Lily not only listened empathetically but also comforted me with her warm words. Besides being a stellar badminton player, she excels academically, earning frequent praise from teachers. Lily has cultivated various hobbies, such as playing the guitar, writing poetry, and cooking.
I feel fortunate to have such an outstanding friend, who not only understands me but also inspires me. I hope our friendship continues to flourish, sharing more wonderful moments together.
参考译文
我有很多朋友，而丽娜是我生活中最特别的一个。
与她交往，你会发现她擅长与人沟通。我清楚记得有一次我情绪低落，她不仅倾听我的心声，还用温暖的话语安慰了我。除此之外，她还是个出色的羽毛球手，每次看她运动，我都深感钦佩。在学业上，她也表现出色，经常受到老师的表扬。她还培养了一些有趣的爱好，如弹吉他、写诗、烹饪美食等等。
我感到很幸运能交到丽娜这样优秀的朋友。她不仅是我的知己，也是我生活中的启发者。希望我们的友谊能一直持续下去，共同经历更多美好的时光。
学习要点
重点词汇、词组、固定搭配和常用表达：
1. Remarkable: 卓越的，显著的
2. Engaging in a conversation: 参与对话
3. Excellent communication skills: 出色的沟通技巧
4. Vividly recall: 生动地回忆起
5. Felt down: 感到沮丧
6. Listened empathetically: 有同感地倾听
7. Comforted me with warm words: 用温暖的话语安慰我
8. Stellar badminton player: 出色的羽毛球运动员
9. Excels academically: 在学业上表现出色
10. Earning frequent praise: 经常受到表扬
11. Cultivated various hobbies: 培养了各种爱好
12. Playing the guitar, writing poetry, and cooking: 弹吉他、写诗和烹饪
13. Feel fortunate: 感到幸运
14. Outstanding friend: 杰出的朋友
15. Understands me: 理解我
16. Inspires me: 激励我
17. Friendship continues to flourish: 友谊持续蓬勃发展
丰富的句式：
1. I have many friends, but...: 我有很多朋友，但是...
- I have many friends, but Lily is the most remarkable one in my life.
2. Engaging in a conversation with her, you'll notice...: 与她交流时，你会注意到...
- Engaging in a conversation with her, you'll notice her excellent communication skills.
3. I vividly recall a time when...: 我生动地回忆起一个时刻，当...
- I vividly recall a time when I felt down, and Lily not only listened empathetically but also comforted me with her warm words.
4. Besides being a...: 除了是一个...
- Besides being a stellar badminton player, she excels academically, earning frequent praise from teachers.
5. Lily has cultivated various hobbies, such as...: 莉莉培养了各种爱好，比如...
- Lily has cultivated various hobbies, such as playing the guitar, writing poetry, and cooking.
6. I feel fortunate to have such an...: 我感到很幸运有这样一个...
- I feel fortunate to have such an outstanding friend, who not only understands me but also inspires me.
7. I hope our friendship continues to flourish, sharing more...: 我希望我们的友谊继续蓬勃发展，分享更多...
- I hope our friendship continues to flourish, sharing more wonderful moments together.
地道英语写作技巧和经验：
1. 使用形容词和副词强化描写：通过使用形容词如"remarkable"、"excellent"、"stellar"等，增强了对朋友的积极评价。
2. 生动的描写：使用动词和形容词的组合，如"vividly recall"、"engaging in a conversation"，使描写更加生动。
3. 多元的表达方式：使用多种表达方式，如"besides being"、"not only... but also"，使句子结构更加多样化。
4. 表达感情和期望：通过使用"I feel fortunate"、"I hope"等表达方式，突显感激之情和对未来的期望。

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