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人教版八年级英语上Units 9-10写作能力提升
Unit 9 Can you come to my party
写作能力提升练
写作任务
假如你是刘金，你的笔友Dale 本周五要来拜访你，你准备举行一个派对。你想邀请你班交换生Betty 来参加，请给她发一封邀请函。
思路点拨
【谋篇布局】理清文章要素，构建文章结构。
排队邀请函
邀请原因、排队时间及地点 My penfriend Dale,8:00,Saturday morning,at home
活动安排 You needn’t bring food or drinks,parents,provide,sing,dance
期待回复 By email;By Friday afternoon,come or not
【遣词造句】根据结构图中的要点写出句子。
1. 我的笔友Dale 本周五将来看我。
My penfriend Dale_is coming to visit me this Friday.
2. 我将在家举办一个欢迎派对。
I will have a welcome party at home.
3. 派对将在周六上午八点举行。
The party will be at 8: 00 on Saturday morning.
4.你不必带食物或饮料。我的父母将提供一切。
You needn’t bring food or drinks . My parents will provide everything.
5. 饭后，我们可以唱歌或跳舞。
After the meal, we can sing or dance .
6. 请在周五下午前通过电子邮件回复我，让我知道你是否能来。
Please reply to me by email by Friday afternoon to let me know if you can come.
【巧妙衔接】
利用连词，使句子意思连贯。本文要写一封邀请函，将会用到与其语意相关的表达，如invite sb. to, reply to, look forward to 等。
【精彩范文】
Dear Betty,
My penfriend Dale is coming to visit me this Friday. I will have a welcome party at home. It will be at 8:00 on Saturday morning. I would like to invite you to the party.
You needn’t bring food or drinks. My parents will provide everything. After the meal, we can sing or dance. I’m sure we’ll have fun.
Please reply to me by email by Friday afternoon to let me know if you can come.
I am looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Liu Jin
写作实践
假如你叫李明，你所在的跑步俱乐部拟组织一次师生户外跑活动。请你写信给外教布朗先生，邀请他参加此次活动，内容包括：
1. 写信意图和邀请原因； 2. 活动路线和距离； 3. 活动注意事项（至少两点）。
要求: 1. 文中不得出现真实校名、地点和真实姓名；2. 语句连贯，词数80 左右。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr.Brown，
How are you doing Our running club will go for a run this Saturday morning. I'm writing to invite you to join us. On the one hand, you can make us feel more interesting in the run because you're very funny. On the other hand, you like running.
Our run will start from the street in front of our school to the Town Cinema, and then go back to our school on the same road. It's about 10 kilometers.
However, I'd like to advise you to wear sports clothes and sports shoes. At the same time, you should bring some water with you.
Best wishes，
Li Ming
Unit 10 If you go to the party, you'll have a great time!
写作能力提升练
写作任务
　假设你是学生张磊，刚刚收到笔友Joe 的求助信。请你根据来信内容给他提供一些帮助和建议。80 词左右。
Dear Zhang Lei,
I get into a new school and meet some problems. Can you help me
I’m too shy to make new friends. When I run into difficulties with my homework, I don’t know who I can ask for help. What should I do
Joe
思路点拨
【谋篇布局】理清文章要素，构建文章结构。
问题与建议
引出话题 I’m happy that you talk to me about your problems.
针对问题提出建议 Too shy: take part in activities
Nobody helps with homework: be kind and friendly,try your best to help others
表达希望 I hope the advice will be helpful.
【遣词造句】根据结构图中的要点写出句子。
1. 如果你参加一些活动，你就会变得更外向。
If you take part in some activities_, you’ll be more outgoing.
2. 通过这种方式，你就会遇到与你一样的同学。
In this way, you’ll meet the classmates like you.
3. 他们有困难时，你应该友好对待他们并尽全力去帮助他们。
You should be friendly to them and try your best to help them when they are in trouble.
4. 如果你这么做，你很容易和他们交朋友。
If you do so, you will have no problem making friends with them.
5. 你做作业遇到困难时，他们（你的朋友们） 会乐意帮忙。
When you have difficulty _(in) doing homework, they will be glad to help.
【巧妙衔接】
利用连词，使句子意思连贯。根据来信内容分析Joe 遇到的两个困难，针对这两个问题，可以运用first, second 来逐一解答，提出建议，使文章层次分明。使用“If..., ...will...” 使文章节奏匀称，上下文条理清楚。
【精彩范文】
Dear Joe,
I’m happy that you talk to me about your problems. Here is my advice.
First, if you take part in some activities, you’ll be more outgoing. In this way, you’ll meet the classmates like you. Second, you should be friendly to them and try your best to help them when they are in trouble. If you do so, you will have no problem making friends with them. When you have difficulty in doing homework, they will be glad to help.
I really hope you can solve the problems and get on well with your new friends.
Yours,
Zhang Lei
写作实践
假如你是李华，期末考试即将来临，你的朋友Peter 感到很焦虑，学习效率低下。请你根据下面的要点及要求，给他写一封邮件，提一些建议，帮助他调整心态，提高学习效率，轻松应考。
要点：1. 学会放松（体育锻炼，听音乐……）；
2. 健康饮食；3. 睡眠充足；4. 学会沟通。
要求：1. 包括所有要点，可适当发挥；2. 80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Peter,
Don't worry about your study too much.
First, you should learn how to relax. I think doing sports is good for your health. Listening to music is also a good way to relax. Second, it's necessary to have healthy eating habits. Please remember to have breakfast every morning. It can give you enough energy to study for the whole morning. Third, you'd better go to bed early and have enough sleep. It will keep you active during the day. Finally, you should talk with your friends, parents or teachers. Tell them about your thoughts and feelings. Try to get help from them.
I hope you can stay in good spirits and study better.
Yours,
Li Hua

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