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Unit 1 "Where did you go on vacation "
主要围绕以日记形式记录假期活动展开
1.时态选择：
一般过去时：用于叙述过去发生的活动，如“I went to the park yesterday.”（我昨天去了公园。）
偶尔可以穿插现在时态或将来时态，特别是在表达感受、计划或进行风景描写时。
2. 人称使用：
通常使用第一人称（I, we）进行叙述，使读者能够身临其境地感受到作者的经历和感受。
3. 内容组织：
时间顺序：按照事件发生的时间顺序进行叙述，如“In the morning, we...; After lunch, we...”
地点顺序：如果涉及多个地点，可以按照地点的转换进行叙述。
重点突出：不必面面俱到，只需选取印象最深刻的1-2件事进行描述。
4. 语言表达：
使用多样化的句型和词汇，避免单调乏味。
可以适当加入个人感受和评价，使文章更加生动有趣。
5. 格式规范：
日期、星期写在左上角，通常顶格写，如“Sunday, May 1st”
正文部分可以顶格写或空几个字母的位置。
结尾处可以简短总结一天的感受或经历，如“We had a wonderful day.”
范文分析
以下是一篇范文分析，以供参考：
Plain Text
Sunday, May 1st
It was a beautiful day for a vacation. My friends and I decided to go sightseeing. We started our day with a visit to the West Lake Park. The park was filled with people enjoying the warm spring sunshine.
After a while, we found a nice spot under a big tree for our picnic. We spread out our blanket and placed our food on it. The lunch was delicious, especially the sandwiches my mom made for us.
After the picnic, we couldn't resist the temptation to go boating on the lake. The water was calm and clear, reflecting the beautiful scenery around us. As we rowed, we saw ducks swimming and fish jumping out of the water.
When we finished boating, we walked to the shore and met some foreign friends. We said hello to them and started a conversation in English. They were surprised by our fluency and complimented us on our English skills. We felt very proud and happy.
As the sun started to set, we knew it was time to head back home. Although we were tired from all the walking and activities, we couldn't help but feel grateful for such a wonderful day. We had a great time on our vacation and made some new friends in the process.
分析：
时态：全文使用了一般过去时，符合日记的叙述要求。
人称：使用了第一人称“we”和“I”，使文章更加亲切。
内容组织：按照时间顺序（早上、午餐后、划船后）进行叙述，条理清晰。
语言表达：使用了多样化的句型和词汇，如“filled with”, “couldn't resist”, “couldn't help but feel”等，使文章更加丰富。
感受与评价：在文章结尾处加入了个人感受和评价，如“felt very proud and happy”和“couldn't help but feel grateful”，使文章更具感染力。
练习
1. 假设你是李明，去年暑假你和家人一起去了桂林旅游。请写一篇短文，描述你的旅游经历，包括你们如何到达、游览了哪些景点、感受如何等。
英语范文：
My Trip to Guilin
My name is Li Ming and last summer vacation, I had the opportunity to travel with my family to the beautiful city of Guilin. We set off early in the morning by train, excited about the upcoming adventure.
After a few hours of travel, we arrived in Guilin and were greeted by the breathtaking scenery. Our first destination was the Li River, famous for its stunning karst mountains reflected in the calm waters. We took a bamboo raft ride, floating gently down the river, admiring the picturesque views. We couldn't help but take numerous photos to capture these unforgettable moments.
The next day, we visited the Elephant Trunk Hill, which truly lived up to its name. From a distance, it looked just like an elephant drinking water from the river. We climbed to the top, enjoying the panoramic view of the city and its surroundings.
The trip was filled with laughter and joy. We tasted delicious local cuisine, including spicy hot pot and fragrant rice noodles. Every night, we would stroll around the West Lake, admiring the illuminated bridges and water features.
Although we were tired from all the walking and sightseeing, I felt incredibly fulfilled and happy. The memories of this trip will stay with me forever. Guilin truly is a paradise on earth, and I would love to visit again someday.
2. 你是张华，去年寒假你和父母去了北京，参观了故宫和长城。请写一篇短文，描述你们的旅游经历，特别是你在长城上的感受。
英语范文：
A Winter Vacation Adventure in Beijing
I'm Zhang Hua, and during last winter vacation, I embarked on an exciting journey with my parents to the capital city of China, Beijing. We were eager to explore the rich history and culture of this ancient city.
One of our highlights was the visit to the Forbidden City, also known as the Palace Museum. Walking through the majestic red gates, we were awestruck by the grandeur of the buildings and the intricate details of their decorations. We spent hours wandering through the halls, admiring the priceless artifacts and learning about the history of the Ming and Qing dynasties.
But the most memorable part of our trip was undoubtedly the climb up the Great Wall. The day was sunny and clear, and we arrived at the entrance early to avoid the crowds. As we ascended the steps, I couldn't help but feel a sense of awe and pride. The wall stretched out for miles, a testament to the wisdom and strength of our ancestors.
At the top, we paused to catch our breath and take in the breathtaking views. The mountains and valleys stretched out beneath us, and we could see the walls disappearing into the distance. I felt a deep connection to the land and its history, and a sense of gratitude for the opportunity to stand where so many have stood before me.
Despite the physical exhaustion, the sense of accomplishment and the joy of exploration made the climb up the Great Wall one of the most unforgettable experiences of my life.
3. 假设你是王丽，去年暑假你和朋友去了海南岛度假。请写一篇短文，介绍你们如何度过这次假期，包括去了哪些海滩、参与了哪些水上活动以及感受如何。
英语范文：
A Summer Escape to Hainan Island
My name is Wang Li, and last summer, I embarked on a dreamy vacation with my friends to Hainan Island, the tropical paradise in southern China. The moment we arrived, the warm sun and gentle breeze wrapped us in a welcome embrace.
Our first stop was Sanya Bay, where we spent lazy days lounging on the soft white sands and dipping our toes in the crystal-clear water. The beach was bustling with activities, but we found a peaceful corner to set up our umbrellas and towels. We went for long walks along the shore, collecting shells and savoring the moment.
One of the highlights of our trip was a day trip to Yalong Bay. The water there was so blue and clear that it looked like a painting. We went snorkeling and saw a vibrant underwater world filled with colorful fish and coral reefs. The experience was magical, and we couldn't stop taking photos and videos to capture the beauty.
We also tried our hand at water sports, including jet skiing and parasailing. The rush of adrenaline as we soared through

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