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学校空地绿化布局的建议
学校新建图书馆前的空地即将绿化，现征求学生的建议。假如你是李华，请给校英语报Colorful Campus编辑Martin写封邮件，内容包括：
1.绿化布局；2.设计理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para 1：开头：表达问候，引入主题，写信目的；
框架构思
框架构思
Para 2：正文：给予建议及理由;
Para 3：结尾：总结并表达愿望。
Brainstorm
确定绿地面积：根据空地大小和周围环境，确定合适的绿地面积，包括草坪和植被覆盖区。
植物选择：
优先选择具有美观性、观赏性、适应性强的植物。可以按照季节进行植物配置，在不同季节展现不同美感。
营造自然景观：
在绿地中布置自然景观，如小山丘、小溪流、石头堆、小桥等，打造出自然、野趣、生态的感觉。
学校新建图书馆前的空地绿化布局
保护生态环境：在建设过程中，要注意保护周边的自然环境，如水源、土壤、生态、气候等，避免对自然环境的破坏。建立起来后需要注意垃圾分类、防火等方面的管理和应对。
评分标准
A. 评分原则
1. 本节满分 15 分，按 5 个档次给分，精确到 1 分。
2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其档次，然后以该档次要求衡量，确定或调整档
次，最后给分。
3. 词数少于 50 的，从总分中减去 1 分。多于 110、但都是有效表达，不扣分。
4. 评分时应关注内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性、准确性及上下文的连贯性。
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6. 如书写较差以至影响交际，将其分数降低一个档次。
应用文高考考核的能力
TA: Task Achievement(任务完成)--1
TR: Task Response(任务回应)--2
CC: Coherence & Cohesion
（内容连贯与篇章衔接）
GRA:
Grammatical
Range and Accuracy
（语法范围与精确性)
LR:Lexical Resource
（词汇资源)
语言能力
思维能力
核心词汇
Determine the suitable green space area
lawn and vegetation cover areas
create a natural, wild, and ecological feeling.
Create natural landscapes
Plant selection
Plant arrangement
Green space maintenance
Protect the ecological environment
确定合适的绿地面积
草坪和植被覆盖区
打造出自然、野趣、生态的感觉
营造自然景观
植物选择
植物布局
绿地维护
保护生态环境
核心词汇
the tree-lined lane
a lawn dotted with flowers
a small bridge over the flowing stream
rockery
a feast for the eyes
what greets us firstly is
绿树成荫的小巷
点缀着鲜花的草坪
小桥流水
假山
视觉盛宴
映入眼帘
核心词汇
the layout and design.
be decorated with colorful flowers
provide students with a visually appealing environment
create a relaxing atmosphere
providing students a place for both learning and recreation
enhance the beauty of the campus
ecologically friendly
add some vitality to the campus.
布局和设计
用多彩的花卉来装饰
为学生提供一个视觉上吸引人的环境
创造一个放松的氛围
为学生提供一个学习和娱乐的场所
提升校园美观性
生态友好
增添生气和活力
相关表达积累
表明写作目的
1.I have heard that you have some trouble in ... and I would like to give / offer you the following suggestions.
2. You’ve asked me for advice with regard to/ regarding(关于)... and I’ll try to make some useful / helpful/ practical suggestions here.
3. In response to your letter where you asked me for advice on how to ..../ express your (concern/ anxiety) , I’m writing to offer some practical suggestions at your request.
1.As far as I’m concerned,/ Personally, it would be wise to take the following action.
2. When it comes to/ As for..., the following are my suggestions.
3. My suggestions are （listed） as follows.
相关表达积累 提建议总起句
(1)As far as I’m concerned, it would be a wise choice if you ...
(2) Another effective suggestion is that 从句, which is beneficial for you do ....
(3) You are supposed to do...., which enables you to ....
(4) It’s suggested that... sb. should do, which makes it possible for you to do ...
(5) By doing these/this, not only can you..., but also you can...
相关表达积累 提建议常用句式
1.I will be glad if you will take my advice/ suggestion into consideration.
2.I hope that my suggestions/ advice will be beneficial/ of benefit to you.
3.I hope you will find my suggestions/ advice helpful/ useful/ practical/ beneficial.
相关表达积累 建议信结尾常用句式
及格版参考范文
Dear Martin ,
Hearing our school is to green the empty space in front of the new library, I would like to share my suggestions.
To begin with, it would be a wise choice if flowers are planted in the east part where students will enjoy the beauty of nature. In addition, I suggest trees and benches be arranged in the west section, providing students with a place to study and relax. More importantly, the central part can be covered with grass with a sculpture standing there, reflecting the culture of our school.
Thank you for considering my opinion. I hope our school will become more beautiful.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Martin ,
Hearing our school is to green the empty space in front of the new library, I would like to share my suggestions.
_____________________________(首先，这将是一个明智的选择)if flowers are planted in the east part _____________________(此外，我建议) trees and benches can be arranged in the west secton,___________________(为学生提供学习和放松的场所).___________(更重要的是),the central part can be covered with grass with a sculpture standing there,___________________(反映学校的文化内涵).
______________________________________________(谢谢你考虑我的意见). I hope our school will become more beautiful.
Yours,
Li Hua
及格版范文默写
优秀版参考范文
Dear Martin,
Hearing that the empty land in front of the new school library is going to be greened, I can’t wait to offer some suggestions on the layout and design.
To begin with, I propose that the eastern part of the green space should be decorated with colorful flowers, which will provide students with a visually appealing environment and help to create a relaxing atmosphere. Additionally, the western section can be designed with trees and benches, providing students a place for both learning and recreation. With shade provided by the trees, students can sit on the benches to study, read or chat with friends in a comfortable environment.
Moreover, it is supposed to be ecologically friendly, with a variety of plants that can provide a place for birds, bees and other small animals to thrive.
I hope you will find my suggestions practical.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Martin,
Hearing that the empty land in front of the new school library is going to be greened, ___________________________________________(我迫不及待地想提供一些关于布局和设计的建议。)
To begin with, ______________(我提议)the eastern part of the green space should be decorated with colorful flowers, _____________________________
____________________________________(这将为学生提供一个视觉上吸引人的环境，并帮助创造一个轻松的氛围). Additionally, the western section can be designed with trees and benches, providing students a place for both learning and recreation. ________________________(有由树木提供的遮荫), students can sit on the benches to study, read or chat with friends in a comfortable environment. Moreover, ______________________(它应该是生态友好的), with a variety of plants that can provide a place for birds, bees and other small animals to thrive.
_________________________(我希望你会觉得我的建议很实用。)
Yours,
Li Hua
优秀版范文默写
鸟儿细节描写
Swang/flapped its wings
With its innocent eyes twinkling with gratitude
Twittered/sang joyfully
Bounced around
The bird landed on my shoulder, left kisses on my cheeks, and dashed/soared to the sky where it belonged to in a squeaking call.
Circling/hovering above us for a few minutes, the bird then flew out to embrace the blue sky, leaving/letting out a string of crisp sound.
人鸟互动动作描写
救助
Put some cloth/cotton to keep it warm and comfortable
Provide food and water
Open the window to ventilate the room
Cautiously put the box in a warm place
Attend it in turn the whole night
互动
Our gazes/eyes met and locked
Extended/stretched out my hand
Cupped my hands to hold it
精准升华
It was not until we experienced the episode that we were aware that the true meaning of what we did as a wildlife rescuer and we made up our mind to do a further extension.
It was a meaningful episode in our heart, symbolizing as the first time in our life we rescue a wildlife.
It was no exaggeration to utter that the unforgettable episode was like an everlasting flower, blooming in the river of my memories, and enabling me to keep my life as a volunteer wildlife rescuer!
It enlightened me that I would continue to rescue animals in need, from which I found solace and joy.

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