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Starter Welcome to junior high
写作技巧
1. 主题明确
开篇点题：明确文章的中心思想，例如欢迎来到初中或描述初中生活的某个方面。
紧扣主题：在整篇文章中保持对主题的聚焦，避免偏离主题的内容。
2. 结构清晰
三段式：
开头：引出主题，引起读者兴趣。可以使用一些描述性词汇或短语来描绘初中的新生活或环境。
正文：展开论述，可以包括对新环境的描述、对新朋友的期待、学习新科目的感受等。每一段围绕一个主要观点进行。
结尾：总结全文，点明主题的意义或对未来生活的展望。
3. 语言表达
用词准确：选择恰当的词汇来表达思想，避免使用过于复杂或模糊的词汇。
句式多样：结合简单句、并列句和复合句，使文章表达更加生动丰富。
时态正确：在描述初中生活时，常用一般现在时描述日常活动，也可使用一般将来时表达期待或计划。
4. 细节描写
场景描绘：通过具体的场景描绘来增强文章的画面感，如新学校的环境、教室的布置、同学的互动等。
情感表达：适当融入个人情感，如对新学校的期待、紧张或兴奋等，使文章更加真实感人。
5. 衔接连贯
使用过渡词：如“首先”、“然后”、“最后”等，使文章段落之间衔接自然。
逻辑清晰：确保文章内容在逻辑上连贯，每个段落之间都有合理的联系。
6. 积累词汇和短语
重点短语：积累与初中生活相关的词汇和短语，如“a new stage of study”、“go to a new school”、“learn new subjects”等。
实际应用：在写作中灵活运用这些词汇和短语，使文章更加生动具体。
7. 练习与反馈
多写多练：通过大量的写作练习来提高写作水平。
寻求反馈：向老师或同学请教，获取他们的反馈和建议，不断改进自己的写作技巧。
欣赏
题目： Welcome to Junior High
范文：
As a new junior high school student, I am thrilled to embark on this exciting new journey. Starting from today, I will face many challenges and opportunities, but I am ready to seize every moment and make the most of it.
Firstly, let's talk about my new school. It's a beautiful campus with green trees and colorful flowers everywhere. The buildings are modern and wellequipped, especially the science and computer labs on the first floor. I can't wait to explore them all.
Secondly, I am looking forward to learning new subjects. Math, science, English, and history are just a few of the many fascinating subjects that I will be studying. I know it won't be easy, but I am determined to work hard and achieve good grades.
Furthermore, I am excited to meet new friends. I have heard that junior high school is a great place to make new acquaintances and forge lifelong friendships. I am eager to participate in school activities and clubs to get to know more people.
Lastly, I want to set some goals for myself. I want to be a more confident and outgoing person. I also aim to improve my academic skills and become a wellrounded student. I believe that with hard work and perseverance, I can achieve anything I set my mind to.
句子句式分析：
1.简单句：
"As a new junior high school student, I am thrilled to embark on this exciting new journey."
这是一个复合句，但主句"I am thrilled..."是一个简单句，使用了系动词be和形容词thrilled构成表语结构。
2. 并列句：
"Starting from today, I will face many challenges and opportunities, but I am ready to seize every moment and make the most of it."
这是一个并列句，由并列连词but连接两个简单句。
3. 复合句：
"It's a beautiful campus with green trees and colorful flowers everywhere."
这是一个复合句，其中"with green trees and colorful flowers everywhere"是介词短语作定语，修饰"campus"。
"The buildings are modern and wellequipped, especially the science and computer labs on the first floor."
这也是一个复合句，其中"especially the science and computer labs on the first floor"是插入语，进一步说明"buildings"的特点。
4. 并列结构：
"Math, science, English, and history are just a few of the many fascinating subjects that I will be studying."
使用了并列结构列出多个学科，并且包含了一个定语从句"that I will be studying"修饰"subjects"。
5. 倒装句：
范文中没有直接出现倒装句，但可以在表达强调或疑问时使用，例如："Here comes my new life in junior high."（强调新生活的到来）
6. 非谓语动词短语：
"I can't wait to explore them all."
"to explore"是非谓语动词不定式短语作状语，表示期待或打算做某事。
英语范文
描述初中生活的第一天：
请描述你初中生活的第一天，包括你的心情、感受以及遇到的新事物。
范文1：
My first day in junior high was filled with excitement and nervousness. Walking through the big gates, I felt a sense of wonderment at the new surroundings. The campus was huge, with towering trees and colorful flowers everywhere. Inside, I met my new classmates and teachers, all of whom were friendly and welcoming. Despite the initial anxiety, I couldn't help but feel a sense of joy at embarking on this new chapter of my life.
介绍校园环境和设施：
简要介绍你的初中校园环境和一些重要的设施，如图书馆、实验室、操场等。
范文2：
Our junior high school boasts a magnificent campus filled with modern facilities. The library, situated on the third floor, houses a vast collection of books and provides a serene environment for study. The science and computer labs on the first floor are equipped with state-of-the-art technology, making learning interactive and engaging. The sports fields and playgrounds, sprawling across the school's perimeter, offer ample space for physical activities and team sports. The entire campus fosters an environment conducive to holistic development.
分享你结识的新朋友：
讲述你在初中如何结识新朋友的经历，以及你们之间有趣的小故事。
范文3
I met my first friend in junior high, Lily, during the lunch break. We accidentally sat next to each other at the cafeteria and started talking about our favorite subjects. Little did we know that our conversation would blossom into a strong friendship. We discovered we shared a passion for literature and often borrowed books from each other. Our bond grew stronger as we participated in extracurricular activities together, creating memories that will last a lifetime.
表达对未来学习生活的期待：
展望你接下来初中生活的学习计划和目标，以及你期望自己如何成长。
范文4
As I embark on this new journey in junior high, I am filled with anticipation and aspirations. I aim to excel academically by devoting more time to studying and actively participating in classroom discussions. I also aspire to join clubs and societies that align with my interests, such as the debate club and the art society. I hope to cultivate leadership skills and develop a sense of responsibility through organizing school activities. Ultimately, I aspire to grow into a well-rounded individual, both academically and personally.

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