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2024全国卷
Continuation Writing
读后续写
如何读
注重以文化人，培育正确的世界观、人生观和价值观
2024年高考英语全国卷注重体现国家发展和社会进步，试卷有机融入社会主义核心价值观，引导学生坚定理想信念、提升品德修养。全国甲卷写作第二节要求学生根据提供的关于共享单车、新能源汽车和高铁的三幅图片，撰写一篇题目为“中国交通发展”的发言稿，引导学生关注我国经济社会的发展变化，增强国家富强、民族复兴的自豪感和自信心。新课标Ⅰ卷读后续写题选取的语篇讲述了作者在出差途中，与出租车司机协商解决车费支付问题的故事，提示学生循着信任他人与遵守诺言的思路进行续写，引导学生培养诚实守信的美好品德。
【源自《中国考试》教育部教育考试院】
Beginning
Climax / Problem
Ending
touched down in … and jumped into the first taxi…
in such a hurry
anxious
Development
put his phone down and started the car… “We made it,”
enthusiastic
kind-hearted
confident
Solution
When: on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September
Where: Vienna-taxi-the bus station-Prague
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2-3
4-5
Para.1
Para.2
had zero cash
… did not play
… was out of order
apologetic helpless
disappointed
thankful
+ Theme
Gunter I
keep one’s promise
be helpful
语言分析：
1.使用了大量的描述性语言，如“a cold, wet and unforgettable evening”、“made a mad run for”等，营造了紧张和紧迫的氛围，也用了一些小词，如fish out, thin out等。
2.直接引语，即对话。因此，我们后文也可以使用一些对话描写。
如何想
④ What was the solution / promise (根据第二段段首句中as promised提示）
② How did Gunter feel after hearing the bad news
③ What did we do then
Para. 1: I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.
① What was the bad news
① Why did I call Gunter when I was back in Vienna
② What did we do next
③ How did I / Gunter feel
④ What was the end of the story
⑤ What is the theme of the story
Para. 2: Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.
Para.1 I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.
Para.2 Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.
①
②
③
④
⑤
⑥
⑦
⑧
⑨
⑩
Gunter反应
难以置信，问怎么办
我请求延迟支付
解释末班车&急着参加会议
我问其电话号码
承诺回电和付款
Gunter思考
同意留下他的电话号码
我感动 冲向巴士
Gunter来(巴士站)接我
我感谢他，告知会议顺利 （在去机场路上）
(到机场)我付两次费用，给小费但他拒绝
结局：我再次感动
其善意融化我内心
升华：传播善意的决心
深刻在我心
如何写
1. 他难以置信地看着我，问我解决方案.
He looked at me in disbelief and asked for my solution.
2.我又向他露出一个歉意的微笑,恳求他延迟付款.“错过最后一班去布拉格的巴士会让我在会议中迟到,这太重要了,我不能错过!”我焦急地强调.
Flashing him another apologetic smile, I begged him for a delayed payment. “Missing this last bus to Prague will make me late for the conference which is so important that I can’t afford to miss it! ” I emphasized anxiously.
3.我要了他的电话号码,递上我的名片,并承诺在返回维也纳时打电话给他支付应得的钱。
I asked for his phone number, handed over my business card and promised to call him to pay the due money when returning to Vienna.
4. 一接过名片，Gunter就记下了我的号码. “信守诺言, 先生.” 他补充说到.
Hardly had Gunter accepted the business card when he jotted down my phone number. “Just keep your promise, Sir.” He added.
5.我坚定地和他握了握手,满怀感激地向他道别.然后冲向公共汽车就在它出发之前.
Giving him a firm handshake, I said goodbye to him gratefully / I bid him a grateful farewell. Then I rushed to the bus just ahead of its departure.
6. 他来之前送我走的巴士站接我.
He picked me up at the bus station where he had dropped me off before.
7.在去机场的路上,我对他的慷慨和及时的帮助表示衷心的感谢,没有他的帮助,一切都不会顺利.
On the way to the airport, I conveyed hearty appreciation to him for his generosity and timely help, without which everything wouldn’t have gone smoothly.
8.当在机场外停下出租车时,我付给他“两次车程”的费用,从机场到汽车站来回,还有一笔慷慨的小费,他拒绝了.
The moment he stopped his taxi outside the airport, I paid him for the “double car ride”, back and forth from the airport to the bus station, together with a generous tip that he turned down.
9.感动和无言的,我能感觉到他的善意融化了我心中最柔软的地方。
Touched and speechless, I could feel his goodwill melting the softest place in my heart.
10.就在那时,传递善意的决心深深地刻在我的脑海中.
It was then that the determination to deliver kindness was deeply engraved in my mind.
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. He looked at me in disbelief, asking me what to do. Flashing him another apologetic smile, I begged him for a delayed payment. “If I miss this last bus to Prague, I’ll be late for the conference which is so important that I can’t afford to miss it!” I explained. “May I have your phone number I will call you and return the money I owe you. I promise I will keep my word or you keep my watch!” I added, handing him my watch as well as my business card. Gunter accepted my business card but rejected my watch. He wrote down his phone number and gave it to me. “Just keep your promise, Sir.” A feeling of gratitude washed over me as I heard his words. Giving him a firm handshake, I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the bus, and jumped onto it just before its departure.
Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. He picked me up at the bus station where he had dropped me off four days before. Beaming a warm smile at him, I gave him a big hug the moment I saw him. We chatted happily on the way to the airport. I told him that thanks to his generosity and timely help, everything had gone smoothly. When he stopped his taxi outside the airport, I paid him for the “double car ride”, back and forth from the airport to the bus station, together with a generous tip that he turned down. I had no choice but to give him an attractive souvenir I had bought at Prague, which he accepted with delight. In this way, we became good friends and kept in touch with each other regularly. I felt blessed to have such a warm-hearted friend like Gunter who has a heart of gold.
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. Caught in such a dilemma, I could obviously feel a wave of helplessness and anxiety sweeping over me. However, it was at this moment that Gunter, having sensed my uneasiness, offered to help me without the slightest hesitation.“Don’t worry. I can pay the money for you.” He said. No one could ever imagine what great relief his words brought me! “Sorry to bother you,but I promise I wil1 pay back the money.” I responded. Having said that, I accepted his offer, exchanged our numbers and rushed to board the bus.Before I knew it, tears had already streamed down my cheeks.
Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter a as promised. Delighted and excited, we agreed to meet at the same place where we last met.No sooner had I caught sight of him than I rushed to him, hugging him tightly just as if we were long-lost friends who had not seen each other for ages. That day witnessed a never-ending and pleasant chat between us, during which we exchanged what we had been through recently, the flower of friendship blooming in our hearts. As we were ready to bid farewell, I returned him the money he had lent me and once again expressed my sincere gratitude. It was through this unforgettable experience that I learned that acts of kindness, be they big or small, could make such a difference that I made up my mind to pay it forward in return.
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