资源简介 读后续写微技能:“可视化手段” 拆解动作链“动作链”在各个领域都有应用,我们所熟知的就是“游戏”和“动画”(或者漫画)游戏中,不同按键组合到一起,变成连招。这个“连招”,就是动作链,每个按键,就是动作链上的一个“点”动作链是【猎人听见草丛中有声音 → 迅速举枪对准草丛 → 一头狼缓缓出现 → 狼身形健壮,在月光下毛发泛着冷光 → 猎人紧张,额头出汗 → 瞄准狼的头,手指扣住扳机 → 狼目光如炬,盯着猎人,眼睛仿佛红色宝石,光芒令人胆寒 】在不同场景中,动作链按照什么逻辑进行呢?列举几个例子:战斗:快速攻击 → 击打防御 → 强力攻击 → 造成伤害 → 最终一击逃生:听到声音/考到危险 → 快速选择逃生路线 → 怎么跑 → 跨过什么障碍 → 跑的过程中心情如何 → 跑没跑出来悲伤:听到消息 → 震惊 → 表情 → 慢慢坐下 或者 缓缓走进房间躺下 → 捂着脸 → 流下眼泪 → 内心挣扎沟通:微笑 → 伸出手 同时 打招呼 → 轻轻握手 → 眼神接触 → 短暂握手 → 邀请对方坐下猎人遇到狼:警觉(包含 五官、身体、头部、意识等) → 动作反应(包含举枪、手、身体、眼睛等) → 实际观察 → 决定是否采取最终行动总结:借助图片来把动作可视化,更容易学好动作链 动作链由一系列连续的动作或事件组成,每个动作或事件3. 都是链条上的一个“点”。可以考虑把每个动作当成一个“按键”学习创造动作链之前,要先学会看图片拆解动作链4. 动作链在不同场景下,有不同的逻辑详解① 遇到火灾/水灾/雪灾/地震/洪水动作链:察觉异常(闻到焦味/听到巨响)→ 迅速确认灾难源头 → 寻找最近的逃生路径 → 迅速逃离 → 找到安全位置例子:她闻到一股刺鼻的焦味,立刻停下手中的活→ 四处查看,发现厨房已被火焰吞噬 → 她赶紧抓起手机,冲向大门 → 一边拨打119,一边奔向街道 → 到达安全地带后,她终于松了一口气。She smelled a sharp, acrid burning odor and immediately stopped what she was doing → She looked around and discovered that the kitchen was engulfed in flames → She quickly grabbed her phone and rushed towards the door → While dialing 911, she ran out onto the street → After reaching a safe spot, she finally breathed a sigh of relief.② 各种灾难救人动作链:听到求救声音→ 确定求救者位置 → 准备救援工具 → 进入救援现场 → 成功救出伤者 → 将伤者带到安全区域例子:他隐约听到废墟下传来微弱的呼救声→ 立即确定声源 → 找到一根铁杆作为撬杠 → 小心翼翼地挪开瓦砾 → 成功将受困者拉出 → 他背起受困者,迅速撤离到安全区域。He vaguely heard faint cries for help from beneath the rubble → Immediately located the source → Found a metal rod to use as a lever → Carefully lifted away the debris → Successfully pulled the trapped person out → He carried the person to a safe area.③ 各种灾难求救动作链:意识到无法独自脱险→ 寻找求救工具(电话/信号设备)→ 发送求救信号(拨打电话/发射信号)→ 等待救援 → 确认救援抵达例子:她意识到自己被困在水中,无法游到岸边→ 她拼命寻找漂浮的木板 → 抓住木板,用随身携带的手机拨打求救电话 → 等待救援时,她紧紧抓住木板 → 听到远处传来直升机的声音,她的心情逐渐平静下来。She realized she was trapped in the water and couldn’t swim to shore → She desperately looked for a floating plank → Grabbing the plank, she used her phone to call for help → While waiting for rescue, she held onto the plank tightly → Hearing the sound of a helicopter in the distance, her anxiety started to fade.④ 各种灾难逃生动作链:察觉到灾难逼近→ 确定最佳逃生路径 → 准备逃生用品 → 按照计划逃生 → 确保安全后停止行动例子:他感到地面剧烈震动→ 马上确定通往出口的最短路线 → 拿上背包中的急救包和水 → 沿着走廊迅速朝出口方向跑去 → 到达户外空旷地后,他停下来,检查自己是否受伤。He felt the ground shake violently → Immediately determined the shortest route to the exit → Grabbed the first-aid kit and water from his backpack → Ran quickly down the hallway towards the exit → After reaching the open outdoor area, he stopped to check if he was injured.⑤ 灾难结束之后庆幸动作链:确认灾难结束→ 检查自己是否安全 → 环顾四周确定无危险 → 感叹生还幸运 → 与他人分享劫后余生的感受例子:地震终于停止→ 他拍了拍自己的身体,确保没有受伤 → 环顾四周,确认没有新的危险 → 他长舒一口气,感叹道:“我还活着!” → 随后与周围的幸存者紧紧拥抱。The earthquake finally stopped → He patted his body to make sure he wasn’t injured → Looked around to confirm there was no new danger → He exhaled deeply, saying, “I’m alive!” → Then embraced the surrounding survivors tightly.⑥ 发现子女/妻子/丈夫不见动作链:发现不在预期位置→ 寻找可能的去向 → 询问周围的人 → 联系家人和朋友 → 报警或求助 → 持续寻找例子:她发现儿子不在卧室里→ 迅速检查了整个房子 → 问了邻居,没人见过他 → 她拿起电话,急切地拨打家人和朋友的号码 → 最终报警,并请求帮助寻找 → 整晚她都在街上四处寻找。She noticed her son wasn’t in his bedroom → Quickly checked the entire house → Asked the neighbors, but no one had seen him → She grabbed her phone and urgently called family and friends → Finally reported to the police and asked for help → She spent the whole night searching the streets.⑦ 找人一波三折动作链:初步线索失败→ 重整计划寻找 → 新的线索引导 → 途中遇到挫折或意外 → 最终找到目标例子:他先去常去的咖啡馆找她,但没找到→ 重新思考她可能去的地方 → 突然想到她提过的公园 → 在公园里找了半天,甚至跟一位陌生人发生了争执 → 终于在一个偏僻的长椅上发现了她,她正静静地坐着。He first went to the usual café to find her, but she wasn’t there → Reconsidered where she might have gone → Suddenly remembered she mentioned a park → Searched the park for a long time, even got into an argument with a stranger → Finally found her sitting quietly on a secluded bench.⑧ 欣赏景色动作链:抵达观景点→ 选定最佳观景位置 → 放松身体 → 环顾四周欣赏美景 → 深呼吸感受空气 → 内心平静下来例子:她走到山顶,选了一个视野开阔的地方坐下→ 调整姿势,让自己更舒适 → 眼睛扫过山谷的每一寸风景 → 深吸一口气,感受到空气中的清新 → 她闭上眼睛,心中感到无比宁静。She reached the mountain top and found a spot with a wide view to sit down → Adjusted her posture to get comfortable → Let her eyes sweep across every inch of the valley → Took a deep breath, feeling the freshness in the air → Closed her eyes, feeling an overwhelming sense of peace.⑨ 发现野生动物动作链:发现不寻常动静→ 定睛观察 → 确认是野生动物 → 慢慢靠近 → 观察动物的行为 → 保持安全距离例子:他听到草丛里有动静→ 他停下脚步,仔细观察 → 发现是一只小鹿在觅食 → 他放慢脚步,小心翼翼地靠近 → 观察它的每一个动作,不想惊吓到它 → 但始终保持一定的距离。He heard rustling in the bushes → Stopped walking and observed closely → Saw it was a deer foraging → Slowed his pace and cautiously approached → Watched its every move, not wanting to startle it → But kept a safe distance at all times.⑩ 救动物动作链:发现动物受困→ 判断如何解救 → 获取工具或方法 → 接近动物 → 实施救援 → 检查动物状态例子:他看到一只小狗被困在河边的泥潭里→ 判断必须用绳子才能把它拉出来 → 找到一根结实的树枝和绳子 → 小心接近小狗,安抚它别害怕 → 将绳子套在小狗身上,慢慢拉上岸 → 小狗获救后,他检查了一下它的四肢,确保没有受伤。He saw a puppy trapped in a muddy bank by the river → Realized he needed a rope to pull it out → Found a sturdy branch and some rope → Carefully approached the puppy, calming it down → Looped the rope around the puppy and slowly pulled it to safety → After rescuing the puppy, he checked its legs to make sureit wasn’t 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