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高考续写之动作链描写
1. 猎人发现危险的野兽
动作链：感受到威胁→ 确认野兽的位置 → 准备武器 → 评估逃跑或战斗的可能 → 做出决定 → 行动以确保安全
例子：
他感觉到背后有一阵寒意→ 慢慢转身，发现是一头熊正向他走来 → 他悄悄拉开弓箭，目光紧盯着熊 → 评估了周围的地形，决定采取防御姿态 → 当熊靠近时，他果断射出箭矢 → 熊受伤后逃跑，他才松了一口气。
He felt a chill down his spine → Slowly turned around to see a bear approaching him → Quietly drew his bow, eyes locked on the bear → Assessed the surrounding terrain and decided to take a defensive stance → As the bear came closer, he swiftly released the arrow → The bear fled after being hit, and he finally breathed a sigh of relief.
2. 受到野兽攻击
动作链：意识到被攻击→ 尝试躲避 → 找到武器或防御物 → 反击或逃跑 → 确保自己安全
例子：
一声低吼在他耳边响起，他猛然转头，发现一头狼正扑向他→ 他迅速躲闪，狼的爪子擦过他的肩膀 → 他抓起地上的树枝，用力挥向狼 → 狼被击退，他趁机拔腿跑开 → 跑出一段距离后，他回头确认狼没有追来，才稍稍放下心。
A low growl sounded in his ear, and he turned sharply to see a wolf lunging at him → He quickly dodged, the wolf’s claws grazing his shoulder → He grabbed a branch from the ground and swung it hard at the wolf → The wolf retreated, and he seized the moment to sprint away → After running a good distance, he looked back to make sure the wolf wasn’t following before he relaxed slightly.
3. 转危为安
动作链：发现自己处于危险之中→ 冷静思考解决办法 → 实施行动 → 成功脱险 → 重新确认安全
例子：
他发现自己被困在狭窄的山路上，两侧是陡峭的悬崖→ 他深吸一口气，努力让自己冷静下来 → 发现一块较大的石头可以作为支撑点 → 小心翼翼地一步步爬上去，避免滑倒 → 终于到达安全地带，他长舒一口气，环顾四周确认无其他危险。
He found himself trapped on a narrow mountain path, with steep cliffs on both sides → Took a deep breath, trying to calm himself down → Spotted a larger rock that could serve as a foothold → Carefully climbed up, making sure not to slip → Finally reached a safe area, he exhaled deeply and looked around to ensure there was no other danger.
4. 朋友/夫妻吵架
动作链：意见产生分歧→ 情绪逐渐升级 → 爆发争吵 → 言辞激烈 → 其中一方冷静下来 → 吵架结束，气氛紧张
例子：
他们讨论着晚饭的安排，意见很快产生了分歧→ 声音逐渐提高，彼此都不愿让步 → 最终，话语变得越来越尖锐，争吵不可避免地爆发了 → “你从来不考虑我的感受！”她喊道 → 他看着她，一言不发，慢慢冷静下来 → 房间里陷入了一片沉默，空气中弥漫着紧张的气氛。
They were discussing dinner plans, and it didn’t take long for their opinions to diverge → Their voices gradually grew louder, neither willing to back down → Finally, the words became sharper, and a full-blown argument erupted → “You never consider my feelings!” she shouted → He looked at her, saying nothing, slowly calming down → The room fell into silence, tension hanging in the air.
5. 内心挣扎
动作链：面临选择→ 内心纠结 → 不断反复权衡利弊 → 决定采取行动 → 付诸实践
例子：
他站在门口，手里握着那封信，心里充满了挣扎→ 他一遍遍告诉自己这是正确的决定 → 但另一种声音却在耳边响起，提醒他可能的后果 → 他反复踱步，手心冒汗 → 最终，他深吸一口气，将信放进了信箱 → 决定已经做出，他的肩膀顿时感到一阵轻松。
He stood at the door, holding the letter, his heart full of conflict → He kept telling himself this was the right decision → But another voice echoed in his mind, reminding him of the potential consequences → He paced back and forth, palms sweating → Finally, he took a deep breath and dropped the letter into the mailbox → The decision was made, and a weight lifted from his shoulders.
6. 筹备惊喜活动
动作链：产生惊喜的想法→ 计划活动细节 → 准备惊喜材料 → 实施惊喜 → 观察对方反应
例子：
他突然想到要为她筹备一个惊喜生日派对→ 他列出宾客名单，挑选合适的场地 → 购买了她最喜欢的花和蛋糕，装饰了场地 → 当她走进房间时，灯光突然亮起，大家齐声高喊“生日快乐！” → 看着她脸上的惊讶与感动，他的心里满是满足感。
He suddenly thought of organizing a surprise birthday party for her → He made a guest list and chose a suitable venue → Bought her favorite flowers and cake, decorated the venue → When she walked into the room, the lights suddenly came on, and everyone shouted “Happy Birthday!” → Seeing the surprise and emotion on her face, his heart was filled with satisfaction.
7. 准备礼物
动作链：决定送礼物→ 选择礼物类型 → 考虑对方的喜好 → 购买或制作礼物 → 包装礼物 → 将礼物送出
例子：
他决定给她准备一份特别的礼物→ 想了想她最近提到的那本书 → 马上去了书店，挑选了一本精装版 → 回家后，他用心地包上了漂亮的包装纸 → 当她打开礼物时，脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。
He decided to prepare a special gift for her → Remembered she had recently mentioned a particular book → Immediately went to the bookstore and picked out a hardcover edition → At home, he carefully wrapped it in beautiful paper → When she opened the gift, a bright smile appeared on her face.
8. 意料之外
动作链：事情按计划进行→ 突发意外 → 应急反应 → 处理意外 → 结果出乎意料
例子：
他们按计划去野餐，一切都很顺利→ 突然天色变暗，下起了大雨 → 他们慌忙收拾东西，寻找避雨的地方 → 但雨越下越大，他们只好躲进一间废弃的小屋 → 虽然计划被打乱，但他们反而在小屋里度过了一段难忘的时光。
They went on a picnic as planned, everything was going smoothly → Suddenly, the sky darkened, and it started to rain heavily → They quickly packed up and looked for shelter → But the rain kept pouring, so they had to take refuge in an abandoned hut → Although their plans were disrupted, they ended up having an unforgettable time in the hut.
9. 自己一个人在野外探险
动作链：准备探险装备→ 选择探险路线 → 出发 → 途中遇到困难 → 解决问题 → 继续探险
例子：
他整理好背包，检查了地图和指南针→ 选了一条通往森林深处的路线 → 迎着晨光，他开始了独自的探险 → 途中他遇到了一片沼泽地，前进受阻 → 他仔细观察地形，找到了一条绕过沼泽的小道 → 克服了障碍后，他继续向前，心中充满了成就感。
He packed his bag, checking the map and compass → Chose a route leading deep into the forest → Setting out in the morning light, he began his solo adventure → Along the way, he encountered a swampy area that blocked his path → He carefully observed the terrain and found a narrow path around the swamp → After overcoming the obstacle, he continued forward, filled with a sense of accomplishment.

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