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Starter Unit 1 Hello!
单元主题写作指导
本单元主题属于“人与自我”范畴，涉及“有意义的学校生活”。
一、话题分析
英语写作是一种综合运用英语知识进行输出性书面交际的技能，最能体现学生语言的掌握程度。《义务教育英语课程标准（2022年版）》在语言技能方面要求学生：模仿范文的结构和内容写几句意思连贯的话，并尝试使用描述性词语添加细节，使内容丰富、生动。本单元以“Hello”为主题，围绕学生进入初中后如何与同学、老师相互问候和展开交流展开，旨在培养学生的人际交往能力和语言运用能力。结合2022年版《义务教育英语课程标准》，本单元的写作课话题可以设定为“My First Day at Junior High School”，即“我在初中的第一天”。这一话题贴近学生生活实际，能够激发学生的写作兴趣，同时也有助于巩固他们在本单元中所学的问候语、自我介绍、询问姓名等语言知识。
二、好词佳句
词汇短语积累 问候与介绍 greet each other 互相问候 introduce oneself 自我介绍 say hello to sb. 向某人 make friends 交朋友 学校环境 school gate 校门口 classroom 教室 teacher's desk 讲台 school library 学校图书馆 playground 操场 情绪与感受 excited 兴奋的 nervous 紧张的 happy 快乐的 surprised 惊讶的 curious 好奇的 学习与活动 first lesson 第一节课 learn new things 学习新事物 take notes 记笔记 participate in activities 参加活动 follow the teacher's instructions 遵循老师的指示 人物描述 classmates 同学 teachers 老师 friendly 友好的 helpful 有帮助的 smart 聪明的
话题常用句型 开头引入 Today is my first day at junior high school, and I feel so excited! 今天是我上初中的第一天，我感到很兴奋! When I stepped into the school gate, my heart was pounding with excitement. 当我踏进校门时，我的心兴奋得怦怦直跳。 描述学校环境 The school is big and beautiful, with tall trees and colorful flowers everywhere. 学校又大又漂亮，到处都是高大的树木和五颜六色的花朵。 The classroom is bright and spacious, equipped with modern teaching facilities. 教室明亮宽敞，配备了现代化的教学设施。 介绍同学和老师 I met many new classmates who were friendly and easy to get along with. 我遇到了许多新同学，他们都很友好，很容易相处。 讲述第一天经历 During the first lesson, I was a bit nervous, but my teacher's warm welcome made me feel at ease. 在第一节课上，我有点紧张，但老师的热情欢迎让我感到轻松。 My English teacher is very kind and has a great sense of humor. 我的英语老师很善良，很有幽默感。 We introduced ourselves to each other and shared our hobbies in the class meeting. 在班会上，我们互相介绍了自己，分享了自己的爱好。 表达感受与收获 Although I felt a little bit overwhelmed at first, I'm confident that I'll fit in soon. 虽然一开始我感到有点不知所措，但我相信我很快就会适应的。 My first day at junior high school was full of surprises and joys. I can't wait for what's coming next. 我在初中的第一天充满了惊喜和喜悦。我迫不及待地想知道接下来会发生什么。 总结与展望 Looking back on my first day, I'm grateful for the opportunities and challenges ahead. 回顾我的第一天，我很感激眼前的机遇和挑战。 I hope to make many friends, learn a lot, and have a meaningful school life. 我希望能交到很多朋友，学到很多东西，并有一个有意义的学校生活。
示例段落 开头段落： “As I walked through the grand gates of my new junior high school, my heart raced with anticipation. The sun shone brightly, casting a warm glow over the entire campus. It was my first day, and I couldn't wait to explore the new environment and meet my classmates.” 中间段落： “During the morning, I attended my first English class. Our teacher, Mrs. Smith, greeted us with a warm smile and made us feel right at home. She encouraged us to introduce ourselves, and I shared my love for reading with the class. I also met some of my classmates during breaks, and we bonded over our shared hobbies like playing basketball and drawing.” 结尾段落： “As the day came to an end, I realized how much I had learned and experienced. From navigating the vast school building to forging new friendships, every moment was unforgettable. I left the school feeling excited for the days to come, knowing that my junior high school journey was going to be filled with adventures and growth.”
写作框架
Step 1 认真审题，明确要求 审主题 My First Day at Junior High School
审文体 记叙文
审人称 第一人称为主
审时态 一般现在时为主
审要点 观点鲜明，层次分明，语言简洁，过渡自然，综述观点。
Step 2 分析要点，编制提纲 开头 开门见山，点明主题。 背景介绍：简要描述升入初中的心情和期待，如“当夏日的余晖渐渐消散，我迎来了初中生活的第一天，心中充满了激动与好奇。” 引入主题：直接点明文章主题，即“我的初中第一天”，可以描述自己对新环境的第一印象，如“踏入这所崭新的校园，高大的教学楼、绿树成荫的小道，一切都让我感到既陌生又亲切。”
正文 基于体验，描述所见所闻 初遇校园 校园环境：描述校园的布局、设施等，如“校园的中央是一片宽阔的操场，四周环绕着教学楼，每一栋楼都显得那么庄严而富有活力。” 感受与心情：表达自己对新环境的初步感受，如“走在这样美丽的校园里，我感到无比自豪，仿佛已经融入了这片知识的海洋。” 认识新同学 描述开学时在校门口或教室与同学初次相遇的情景，如“在教室门口，我遇到了许多新面孔，大家脸上都洋溢着同样的笑容，我们相互打招呼，介绍自己。” 与交流：讲述与新同学交流的过程，如“通过简单的交谈，我了解到大家的兴趣爱好，有的喜欢阅读，有的热爱篮球，这让我对未来充满了期待。” 与老师的初识 教师形象：描述第一位或印象深刻的老师的形象，如“我的班主任老师是一位和蔼可亲的中年女士，她的眼神中充满了智慧与关爱，让我立刻感到了一种家的温暖。” 课堂体验：分享第一节课的学习体验，如“第一节课是英语课，老师用生动有趣的方式介绍了自己和我们即将学习的新知识，让我对英语产生了浓厚的兴趣。” 新生活的挑战与期待 面临的挑战：讨论可能遇到的学习或生活上的挑战，如“我知道接下来的学习会更加紧张，但我已经做好了准备，相信通过努力一定能够克服困难。” 未来展望：表达对未来初中生活的期待和规划，如“我期待着在未来的日子里，与同学们共同进步，与老师共同探讨知识的奥秘，为自己的梦想努力奋斗。”
结尾 进行总结概括，重点谈论感受。 总结感受：回顾一天的经历，总结自己的感受，如“我的初中第一天，虽然短暂却充满了意义。我收获了新朋友的友谊，感受到了老师的关怀，也看到了自己未来的方向。” 展望未来：以积极向上的态度展望未来，如“我相信，在初中的这段旅程中，我会不断成长，不断超越自我，最终实现自己的梦想。” 结尾句：用一句富有哲理或鼓舞人心的话作为结尾，如“让我们携手共进，在初中的舞台上绽放属于自己的光彩！”
Step 3巧用词句，衔接成文 类别 单词/ 短语
顺序 first of all/ first (ly) / to start with/...comes first.首先 secondly/ second/ next/ then 其次 finally/ in the end/at last 最后 last but not least最后但同样重要的是 at the same time/ meanwhile同时
并列 补充 and 和；又；而且 besides 除此之外 in addition 除此之外还有, not only. . . but also不但……而且 on the one hand…，on the other hand…一方面……另一方面……
转折对比 but 但是however 然而while 然而
递进 what’s more 甚至;更重要的是 what’s worse 更糟糕的是 even 甚至 especially 特别是 above all 首先；最重要的是
因果 /目的 because/ as/ since/ because of/for 因为 thanks to多亏了…… as a result 结果 without 没有 with the help of. . . 在……的帮助下 therefore 所以 for this reason 因为这个原因 so that 以便于 in order that/ in order to 为了 for this purpose 为了这个目的
举例 for example例如 such as. . . 比如；例如 and so on 等等
观点 陈述自己观点： as far as I know 就我所知 in my opinion 依我来看 to tell the truth 说实话 to be honest 诚实地说 generally speaking 通常来说 陈述正反方不同观点： on the one hand. . . on the other hand. . . 一方面……又一方面…… some. . . while others. . . 一些人认为……而另一些人为…… Everything has two sides. 事物都具有两面性。 Some people hold the view that. . . while the others prefer the view that. . . 一些人坚持这种观点, 而另一些人更喜欢另一种观点
总结 in short /in a word/ all in all总之
写作范例
（2023辽宁抚顺中考）初中三年生活转瞬即逝，如今即将毕业离开母校，此时此刻，你是否还记得升入初中第一天的情景呢？请以“My First Day in the Middle School”为题，用英语写一篇短文，描述一下你入校当天的所见所闻、经历感受，再次体验曾经的美好时光，满怀信心地去迎接新的未来！词数：80~100词。
要求：
（1）语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
（3）短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My First Day in the Middle School
When I first walked into the middle school,
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Now I will leave my school. I’m going to work hard in the future to make my school proud of me.
Step 1认真审题，明确要求
主题 校园生活
人称 第一人称为主
时态 一般过去时为主
文体 记叙文
要点 第一步，承接短文开头，描述你入校当天的感受； 第二步，结合自身经历，描述你入校时的所见所闻和经历感受，可列举具体的事例； 第三步，抒发毕业感悟并书写结语。
Step 2 列要点，编提纲
立框架 列要点 添细节
Step 3 巧用词句，衔接成文
My First Day in the Middle School
When I first walked into the middle school, I was excited as well as worried. I was excited because I was a student of junior middle school now. I was worried because I didn’t quite know about the teachers and students in this school. I was afraid I couldn’t fit in well. However, when I sat down at my desk and began to know about my teachers and classmates, I found everyone was really nice to me. Teachers were very kind and ready to help us. My classmates were active and easy to get along with. After class, I played soccer with my newly-made friends on the playground. Looking at the beautiful campus, I gradually forgot my nervousness. I felt at home. At the end of that first school day, I felt no more fear and I believed I would have lots of fun at this new school.
Now I will leave my school. I’m going to work hard in the future to make my school proud of me.
实战演练
假定你是李平，请阅读以下邮件并回复。词数70左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Hi Li Ping!
How are you It’s my first day at a new school today. It’s a great school. Do you like your school How do you feel about your school and classmates Can you write to me soon
I’m looking forward to your reply. All the best.
John
Dear John,
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Li Ping
【参考答案】
Dear John,
I'm glad to hear that you're having a great first day at your new school! Yes, I love my school very much. It's full of opportunities to learn and grow, and the teachers are all very supportive and kind.
I feel quite content with my school life. The classrooms are modern and equipped with all the necessary technology. The extracurricular activities are diverse, allowing me to explore my interests in art, music, and sports.
Regarding my classmates, I've made some wonderful friends. We often study together, play sports, and share our daily lives. They are all friendly and helpful, making my school days enjoyable and memorable.I hope you'll soon settle in and make lots of new friends too. Don't hesitate to reach out if you need any help or just want to chat. Remember, it takes time to get used to a new environment, but it's definitely worth it.
All the best with your new school adventure!
Warm regards,
Li Ping
评价量规
Mark（打分）each other’s passages（满分15分）
Structure（结构） Does it have a clear beginning, body and ending 文章结构是否完整？ 满分2分 分数：______
Content（内容） Does it include（包含）these main points: topic sentence, examples, reasons, feelings and conclusion 文章内容是否包括以上要点？ 满分5分 分数：______
Linking words（连接词） Does he/she add enough linking words 是否有连接词？ 满分2分 分数：______
Expressions（表达） Does he/she use special sentences 是否使用特殊句型？ 满分3分 分数：______
Grammar（语法） Are there any spelling or grammatical mistakes 是否有拼写或语法错误？ 满分2分 分数：______
Handwriting（书写） Does he/she use neat handwriting 书写是否工整？ 满分1分 分数：______

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