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Starter Unit 2 Keep Tidy!
单元主题写作指导
本单元主题属于“人与自我”范畴，涉及“居室、自我管理”。
一、话题分析
英语写作是一种综合运用英语知识进行输出性书面交际的技能，最能体现学生语言的掌握程度。《义务教育英语课程标准（2022年版）》在语言技能方面要求学生：模仿范文的结构和内容写几句意思连贯的话，并尝试使用描述性词语添加细节，使内容丰富、生动。
本单元主题为“Keep Tidy”，聚焦于学生自我管理能力的培养，特别是物品整理与房间整洁性的重要性。本单元主题紧密围绕“人与自我”范畴中的“自我管理”，特别是针对个人物品的管理与房间整洁性的培养。通过一系列的日常对话、颂歌以及项目任务，学生已经学会了如何描述物品的特点、位置以及如何进行基本的自我管理。因此，在本单元的写作课上，我们将话题聚焦于“描述自己的房间并理解保持整洁的重要性”。这一话题不仅是对本单元学习内容的综合运用，也是对学生个人生活管理能力的一次检验和提升。通过写作，学生不仅能够巩固所学词汇、句型和语法结构，还能进一步加深对自我管理重要性的认识，从而在日常生活中养成良好的物品整理和房间清洁习惯。最终，学生将能够用准确、流畅的语言描述自己的房间，并阐述出保持整洁对于提高生活品质和学习效率的重要意义。
二、好词佳句
词汇短语积累 描述房间的词汇： bedroom（卧室） tidy（整洁的） messy（杂乱的） shelf（架子） desk（书桌） bed（床） wardrobe（衣柜） drawer（抽屉） curtain（窗帘） lamp（台灯） 物品描述词汇： organized（有组织的） cluttered（杂乱的） neat（整洁的） colorful（五彩缤纷的） bookcase（书架） poster（海报） toy（玩具） blanket（毯子） pillow（枕头） 自我管理词汇： self-management（自我管理） routine（日常习惯） efficiency（效率） productivity（生产力） prioritize（优先排序） declutter（清理杂乱） maintain（保持） 描述重要性的词汇和短语： essential（必要的） significant（重要的） conducive to（有利于） elevate（提升） enhance（增强） personal well-being（个人福祉）
话题常用句型 描述房间整洁状态的句子： My bedroom is a sanctuary of tidiness, where everything has its designated place. 我的卧室是一个整洁的圣地，每样东西都有其指定的位置。 The neat arrangement of my books on the shelves creates a sense of calm and orderliness. 我把书整齐地摆放在书架上，给人一种平静有序的感觉。 表达物品摆放方式的句子： I keep my clothes neatly folded in the drawers, categorized by type and season. 我把衣服整齐地叠在抽屉里，按款式和季节分类。 The colorful posters on my walls add a touch of personality and liveliness to my otherwise simple room. 墙上五颜六色的海报给我简朴的房间增添了一点个性和活力。 强调自我管理和房间整洁性的重要性： Maintaining a tidy room is not just about aesthetics; it's a crucial aspect of personal self-management. 保持房间整洁不仅仅是美学问题;这是个人自我管理的重要方面。 A clutter-free environment significantly enhances my focus and productivity, allowing me to tackle tasks with renewed energy. 整洁的环境能显著提高我的注意力和工作效率，让我以全新的精力处理任务。 阐述整洁房间对生活品质和学习效率的影响： By prioritizing the cleanliness of my space, I have created an environment that is conducive to relaxation and rejuvenation after a long day of studying. 通过优先清洁我的空间，我创造了一个环境，有利于放松和恢复在漫长的一天学习后。 The organization in my room reflects my commitment to efficiency, ensuring that I can quickly find what I need when I need it, thereby saving valuable time. 我房间里的组织反映了我对效率的承诺，确保我可以在需要的时候迅速找到我需要的东西，从而节省宝贵的时间。 个人感受与总结的句子： There's a sense of satisfaction that comes with the sight of a neatly arranged room, knowing that I've taken control of my surroundings. 看到整洁的房间会有一种满足感，因为我知道我已经控制了周围的环境。 My journey towards better self-management started with keeping my room tidy, and it has undoubtedly elevated my overall well-being and academic performance. 我的自我管理之旅始于保持房间整洁，这无疑提高了我的整体幸福感和学习成绩。
示例段落 开头段落： Keeping your room tidy is very important for staying organized and feeling good. It shows self-discipline and helps make a nice place to work and relax. 保持房间整洁对于保持井井有条和感觉良好非常重要。它显示了自律，有助于创造一个工作和放松的好地方。 中间段落： My room is like a special place where I go to rest after a busy day. There are posters of my favorite books and movies on the walls. They show my different interests. In the middle of the room, there's a bed with a clean white cover. It looks really nice and makes me want to sleep. Next to the bed, there's a strong wood desk where I study and do things I love. There's a lamp on the desk that gives off a soft light. It helps me see better and makes me feel creative. 我的房间就像一个特殊的地方，在忙碌的一天之后我可以去休息。墙上有我最喜欢的书和电影的海报。他们展示了我不同的兴趣。在房间的中央，有一张床，上面有一个干净的白色床罩。它看起来真的很漂亮，让我想睡觉。在床的旁边，有一张坚固的木桌，我在那里学习和做我喜欢的事情。桌子上有一盏灯，发出柔和的光。它帮助我看得更清楚，让我感到有创造力。 But the best part of my room isn't just how it looks, it's how it works. Everything has its own spot: books are put on shelves, clothes are folded and put in drawers, and toys are kept in boxes. I learned to do this from a class called "Keep Tidy." I found out that having a clean room not only looks good but also helps me concentrate and feel happy. When things are in their places, I can find them easily and feel less stressed. 但我的房间最棒的地方不只是它的外观，而是它的运作方式。每样东西都有自己的位置:书放在书架上，衣服叠起来放在抽屉里，玩具放在盒子里。我是从一门叫做“保持整洁”的课上学会的。我发现有一个干净的房间不仅看起来很好，而且还能帮助我集中精力，感到快乐。当东西都在它们的地方时，我可以很容易地找到它们，感觉压力也小了。 Cleaning my room has taught me to be responsible and proud of myself. Now I know that keeping a clean space isn’t just about looking good, it’s about making a place that helps me grow and get better. Taking care of my room means I’m taking care of my life too. Small acts of cleaning can make a big difference in how I feel every day. 打扫房间教会了我要对自己负责，并为自己感到骄傲。现在我知道保持一个干净的空间不仅仅是为了好看，它是为了让一个地方帮助我成长和变得更好。照顾好我的房间意味着我也在照顾我的生活。小的清洁动作可以让我每天的感觉有很大的不同。 结尾段落： In short, talking about my room and why it’s important to keep it clean shows how much self-management matters. From the "Keep Tidy" class, I learned how to talk about my room and how keeping it clean affects my life. My room is both pretty and useful. It reminds me that taking care of myself is important for living a good life. As I keep practicing this habit, I know the things I learned will help me in many ways, not just in my room but everywhere else too. 简而言之，谈论我的房间以及为什么保持房间整洁很重要，表明自我管理有多重要。从“保持整洁”课上，我学会了如何谈论我的房间，以及保持房间整洁如何影响我的生活。我的房间既漂亮又实用。它提醒我，照顾好自己对过好生活很重要。当我坚持练习这个习惯时，我知道我学到的东西会在很多方面帮助我，不仅在我的房间里，而且在其他任何地方。
写作框架
Step 1 认真审题，明确要求 审主题 My Tidy Room
审文体 记叙文
审人称 第一人称为主
审时态 一般现在时为主
审要点 观点鲜明，层次分明，语言简洁，过渡自然，综述观点。
Step 2 分析要点，编制提纲 开头 开门见山，点明主题。 引入话题：可以从一个日常生活场景或感受出发，比如提到每天放学回家，最希望看到的是一个怎样的环境，引出对整洁房间的向往。 点明主题：明确表达本文的主题——我的整洁房间（My Tidy Room），并简要说明整洁房间给自己带来的舒适感和愉悦心情。 示例开头： Every day after school, I am always eager to step into a cozy and organized space where I can unwind and recharge. That place, of course, is my tidy room. In this essay, I will introduce you to my cherished sanctuary and explain why keeping it tidy is of utmost importance to me.
正文 基于体验，介绍房间并阐述保持整洁的重要性 房间布局：描述房间的大致布局，包括床、书桌、衣柜等主要家具的位置。 装饰与氛围：提及房间的装饰风格，如墙上挂的画作、书架上摆放的书籍或是一些小饰品，以及这些装饰如何营造出温馨或学习的好氛围。 整洁度：强调房间的整洁程度，如书桌上的物品摆放有序、床铺平整、地面干净无杂物。 示例正文： My tidy room is a reflection of my personality—neat, organized, and inviting. Upon entering, you'll be greeted by a queen-sized bed, made up with crisp sheets and neatly piled pillows. Adjacent to the bed, a spacious desk stands, its surface clutter-free and adorned with a sleek lamp, a computer, and a stack of neatly arranged books. The walls are adorned with a mix of framed photographs and art prints, each adding a touch of personality to the space. A towering bookshelf filled with a diverse collection of books completes the picture, showcasing my love for learning and exploration. 说出保持整洁的重要性 提升效率：阐述整洁环境如何帮助提高学习或工作效率，减少寻找物品的时间。 心理健康：讨论整洁环境对心理健康的积极影响，如减少压力、增强心情的愉悦感。 生活习惯：强调保持房间整洁是一种良好的生活习惯，能够培养自律性和责任感。 示例正文： The importance of keeping my room tidy cannot be overstated. First and foremost, it significantly boosts my productivity and efficiency. With everything in its rightful place, I can quickly locate what I need, whether it's a notebook for homework or a specific book for research. This eliminates the frustration of rummaging through piles of clutter, allowing me to focus on what truly matters. Moreover, the tranquility of a clean and organized space has a profound impact on my mental well-being. It serves as a sanctuary where I can unwind, freeing myself from the stress of daily life. Lastly, maintaining a tidy room instills within me a sense of discipline and responsibility. It teaches me that even the smallest acts of tidiness contribute to a happier, more fulfilling life.
结尾 进行总结概括，重点谈论保持整洁的重要性。 总结全文：简要回顾文章的主要内容，即房间的介绍和保持整洁的重要性。 强调主题：再次强调整洁房间对自己生活的积极影响，鼓励读者也养成保持环境整洁的好习惯。 展望未来：可以表达对未来继续保持房间整洁的决心或期待。 示例结尾： In conclusion, my tidy room is not just a physical space; it's a reflection of my values and a cornerstone of my daily happiness. I am grateful for the peace and clarity it brings to my life, and I am committed to maintaining its orderliness for years to come. I encourage everyone to discover the joys of a clutter-free environment and let the simplicity of tidiness enrich your own life.
Step 3巧用词句，衔接成文 类别 单词/ 短语
顺序 first of all/ first (ly) / to start with/...comes first.首先 secondly/ second/ next/ then 其次 finally/ in the end/at last 最后 last but not least最后但同样重要的是 at the same time/ meanwhile同时
并列 补充 and 和；又；而且 besides 除此之外 in addition 除此之外还有, not only. . . but also不但……而且 on the one hand…，on the other hand…一方面……另一方面……
转折对比 but 但是however 然而while 然而
递进 what’s more 甚至;更重要的是 what’s worse 更糟糕的是 even 甚至 especially 特别是 above all 首先；最重要的是
因果 /目的 because/ as/ since/ because of/for 因为 thanks to多亏了…… as a result 结果 without 没有 with the help of. . . 在……的帮助下 therefore 所以 for this reason 因为这个原因 so that 以便于 in order that/ in order to 为了 for this purpose 为了这个目的
举例 for example例如 such as. . . 比如；例如 and so on 等等
观点 陈述自己观点： as far as I know 就我所知 in my opinion 依我来看 to tell the truth 说实话 to be honest 诚实地说 generally speaking 通常来说 陈述正反方不同观点： on the one hand. . . on the other hand. . . 一方面……又一方面…… some. . . while others. . . 一些人认为……而另一些人为…… Everything has two sides. 事物都具有两面性。 Some people hold the view that. . . while the others prefer the view that. . . 一些人坚持这种观点, 而另一些人更喜欢另一种观点
总结 in short /in a word/ all in all总之
写作范例
（2023山西太原期中）北京冬奥会开启了外国运动员对中国元素的“沉浸式”体验，他们在社交平台对中国元素纷纷点赞。英国运动员Jack不仅热爱中国美食，更是对自己所住的房间赞不绝口。假如你是Jack，请根据图片，在微信朋友圈写一篇80词左右的短文介绍你的房间。开头已给出。
Jack
Here is a picture of my room in Olympic village in China.
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Step 1认真审题，明确要求
主题 居室、自我管理
人称 第一人称为主
时态 一般现在时为主
文体 记叙文
要点 第一步，首先承接短文开头。 第二步，根据图片内容，在微信朋友圈写一篇短文介绍你的房间。 第三步，阐述保持房间整洁的重要性。
Step 2 列要点，编提纲
立框架 列要点 添细节
Step 3 巧用词句，衔接成文
普通范文 美化范文 升级点拨
Here is a picture of my room in Olympic village in China. Look! You can see a big Bing Dwen Dwen on my bed. It’s very cute. Two pillows and a quilt are on my bed, too. They are all white. I like this color. Where is my jacket Oh, it’s on the quilt. I have a watch and it’s on the bedside table. A cup and a table lamp are also on it. And there are two pictures and a clock on the wall. My room is clean and tidy. I like it very much. Here is a picture of my room in Olympic village in China. I'm proud to share my personal space, which reflects my personality and the importance of maintaining a clean and organized environment. Upon entering, you'll immediately notice the large Bing Dwen Dwen plush toy on my bed. It's adorable and adds a touch of fun to the room. Two fluffy white pillows and a matching quilt create a serene atmosphere. A stylish jacket drapes over the quilt, adding a splash of color. On the bedside table, you'll find a sleek watch, a cup, and a modern table lamp. Two framed pictures and a clock hang on the wall, enhancing the room's decor. Maintaining a clean and tidy room is crucial for me. Not only does it ensure that everything is in its place, but it also creates a peaceful and welcoming environment. Knowing that my belongings are organized reduces stress and boosts my productivity. Keeping my room spick and span is a daily habit that I cherish, and it greatly contributes to my overall well-being. 词汇升级：be proud to do sth.做某事很骄傲 结构衔接：用as another example表达衔接 词汇升级：framed pictures相框 句型升级：将此句升级为not only but also引导的条件状语从句。 意义升华：使用高级句式重申观点，升华主题。
实战演练
假设你刚搬进新居，你很开心有了属于自己的房间，并想与你的好友一起分享这份快乐。下面是一张你的房间的图片，请你根据图片提示写一篇小短文，介绍一下你的房间。
要求：
1. 条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确
2. 不少于 50词，可适当发挥。文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
This is my room.
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【参考答案】
This is my room. (这是我的房间。) It is different from my old room, so I want to tell you about my new room. (它和我以前的房间不一样，所以我想要告诉你关于我的新房间。)
When you step inside, you'll notice a big new bed in the corner. (当你走进来的时候，你会注意到角落里有一张崭新的大床。) There is a beautiful blanket and a small pillow on it. (床上铺着一条漂亮的毯子和一个小枕头。) After coming back home from school, I often put my backpack on my bed. (放学回家后，我经常把书包放在床上。) Next to the bed, there is a sturdy desk. (床旁边是一张结实的书桌。) On my desk, there is a book and a pen. (书桌上有一本书和一支笔。) A small chair is positioned by the desk. (一张小椅子摆在书桌旁。) On the chair sits a big toy helicopter, which I love playing with during my free time. (椅子上放着一个大玩具直升机，这是我空闲时喜欢玩的。)
I take great pride in keeping my room tidy. (我很自豪能保持我的房间整洁。) Everything has its place, and this helps me stay focused and relaxed. (每样东西都有它的位置，这有助于我保持专注和平静。) I like my room very much. (我非常喜欢我的房间。)
评价量规
Mark（打分）each other’s passages（满分15分）
Structure（结构） Does it have a clear beginning, body and ending 文章结构是否完整？ 满分2分 分数：______
Content（内容） Does it include（包含）these main points: topic sentence, examples, reasons, feelings and conclusion 文章内容是否包括以上要点？ 满分5分 分数：______
Linking words（连接词） Does he/she add enough linking words 是否有连接词？ 满分2分 分数：______
Expressions（表达） Does he/she use special sentences 是否使用特殊句型？ 满分3分 分数：______
Grammar（语法） Are there any spelling or grammatical mistakes 是否有拼写或语法错误？ 满分2分 分数：______
Handwriting（书写） Does he/she use neat handwriting 书写是否工整？ 满分1分 分数：______

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