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Starter Unit 3 Welcome!
单元主题写作指导
本单元主题属于“人与自然”范畴，涉及“热爱与敬畏自然，与自然和谐共生”。
一、话题分析
英语写作是一种综合运用英语知识进行输出性书面交际的技能，最能体现学生语言的掌握程度。《义务教育英语课程标准（2022年版）》在语言技能方面要求学生：模仿范文的结构和内容写几句意思连贯的话，并尝试使用描述性词语添加细节，使内容丰富、生动。
在本单元的写作课中，我们将围绕“介绍一个农场”这一核心话题展开。此话题旨在通过学生的创造性写作，加深对农场及其生态环境的认识，同时提升学生的语言综合运用能力。通过前几课时的学习，学生们已经掌握了农场中常见的动植物名称、数量及基本特性的表达方式，这为本次写作课奠定了坚实的基础。
农场作为人类与自然和谐共生的典范，不仅承载着丰富的生物多样性，还体现了人类智慧与劳动的结晶。在写作过程中，学生需要首先明确农场的位置、规模以及主要特色，比如是传统的乡村农场还是现代化的生态农业园。接着，他们可以详细描述农场中的动植物种类，如色彩斑斓的鲜花、硕果累累的果树、悠然自得的牛羊，以及欢快鸣叫的鸡鸭等，这些元素共同构成了农场生机勃勃的景象。在介绍动植物时，学生应注重细节描写，如农作物的生长周期、动物的生活习性等，以展现对农场生活的深入了解。此外，学生还可以结合自己对自然的感悟，表达对农场的情感态度，比如对田园风光的向往、对农民辛勤耕耘的敬意，以及对自然生态平衡的珍视。
本次写作课不仅是一次语言实践的机会，更是一次心灵之旅。通过笔下的文字，学生们将带领读者走进一个充满生机与希望的农场世界，感受人与自然的和谐共处，从而加深对自然环境的热爱与敬畏之心。在此过程中，学生的观察力、想象力、语言表达能力和创新思维都将得到显著提升。
二、好词佳句
词汇短语积累 农场相关词汇 farm: 农场 countryside: 乡村 ecological agriculture: 生态农业 biodiversity: 生物多样性 fruitful: 硕果累累的 grazing cattle and sheep: 放牧的牛羊 chirping chickens and ducks: 欢快鸣叫的鸡鸭 flower beds: 花坛 orchard: 果园 vegetable patch: 蔬菜地 动植物细节词汇 growth cycle: 生长周期 habitat: 栖息地 leisurely: 悠然的 blooming: 盛开的 ripe: 成熟的 domesticated animals: 家畜 wildlife: 野生动物 colorful blossoms: 色彩斑斓的花朵 情感与态度词汇 admiration: 敬意 appreciation: 欣赏 respect: 尊重 harmony: 和谐 cherish: 珍视 ecological balance: 生态平衡 tranquility: 宁静 awe: 敬畏
话题常用句型 描述农场位置和规模 The farm is located in the heart of the countryside, surrounded by lush green fields. 这个农场位于乡村的中心，周围是郁郁葱葱的田野。 This sprawling farm covers an area of hundreds of acres, showcasing a wide array of agricultural activities. 这个庞大的农场占地数百英亩，展示了各种各样的农业活动。 介绍农场特色 Known for its traditional farming practices, the farm preserves the essence of rural life. 该农场以其传统的耕作方式而闻名，保留了农村生活的精髓。 As a cutting-edge ecological agriculture park, it integrates modern technology with sustainable farming methods. 作为一个前沿的生态农业园区，它将现代科技与可持续农业方式相结合。 描述动植物种类及细节 The vibrant flower beds are adorned with a myriad of colorful blossoms, attracting bees and butterflies alike. 生机勃勃的花坛上点缀着无数五颜六色的花朵，吸引着蜜蜂和蝴蝶。 The orchard boasts a variety of fruit trees, yielding juicy apples and sweet cherries during harvest season. 果园里有各种各样的果树，在收获季节出产多汁的苹果和甜樱桃。 The grazing cattle and sheep can be seen wandering leisurely across the pasture, enjoying the fresh air and sunshine. 可以看到吃草的牛羊悠闲地在牧场上漫步，享受着新鲜的空气和阳光。 结合自然感悟与情感态度 As I wander through the farm, I am filled with a profound sense of admiration for the hard work and dedication of the farmers. 当我漫步在农场时，我对农民们的辛勤劳动和奉献精神充满了深深的钦佩。 The harmonious coexistence between humans and nature on this farm inspires a deep respect for the environment and ecological balance. 在这个农场里，人与自然的和谐共处激发了人们对环境和生态平衡的深切尊重。 I cherish the moments spent amidst the tranquility of the countryside, where nature unfolds its beauty in all its simplicity. 我珍惜在宁静的乡村度过的时光，在那里大自然展现了它的美丽。 总结与呼吁 This journey through the farm has ignited a passion within me for preserving the natural world and promoting sustainable living practices. 这次农场之旅点燃了我对保护自然世界和促进可持续生活方式的热情。 Let us all strive to emulate the harmony found on this farm, fostering a deeper connection with nature and the environment we share. 让我们都努力效仿这个农场的和谐，与大自然和我们共享的环境建立更深的联系。
示例段落 开头段落： Welcome to my family's farm. It's a wonderful place full of life and hard work. Located in the countryside, our farm is surrounded by green fields and fresh air. Let me show you around and tell you more about it. 欢迎来到我家的农场。这是一个充满生机和辛勤工作的美妙地方。我们的农场位于农村，四周是绿色的田野和新鲜的空气。让我带你四处看看，告诉你更多的情况。 中间段落： As you walk through the farm, you'll see rows of corn and beans growing tall and strong. We also have a big vegetable garden where we grow tomatoes, cucumbers, and carrots. Our apple trees are filled with juicy apples ready to be picked. The farm animals are always busy too. Our cows provide us with fresh milk, and the chickens lay eggs every day. We even have a friendly horse named Daisy who loves to be brushed. There's a big barn where we store hay and feed for the animals. It's amazing to see how everything works together in harmony. 当你穿过农场时，你会看到一排排的玉米和豆子长得又高又壮。我们还有一个大菜园，我们在那里种西红柿、黄瓜和胡萝卜。我们的苹果树上挂满了多汁的苹果，等着摘。农场里的动物也总是很忙。奶牛为我们提供新鲜的牛奶，小鸡每天下蛋。我们甚至有一匹叫黛西的友好的马，它喜欢被刷毛。有一个大谷仓，我们在那里储存干草和动物饲料。看到万物如此和谐地运转，真是令人惊异。 结尾段落： I love spending time on the farm. It's not just a place to live; it's a way of life. Seeing the plants grow and the animals thrive makes me feel connected to nature. Working on the farm teaches me about responsibility and the importance of taking care of the land. I feel grateful to be part of such a special place and to learn so much about where our food comes from. It's truly a magical place that fills my heart with joy. 我喜欢在农场度过时光。它不仅仅是一个居住的地方;这是一种生活方式。看到植物生长，动物茁壮成长，让我感到与自然息息相关。在农场工作教会了我责任和照顾土地的重要性。我很感激能成为这样一个特别的地方的一部分，并了解到我们的食物来自哪里。这真是一个神奇的地方，让我的心充满了快乐。
写作框架
Step 1 认真审题，明确要求 审主题 The Farm
审文体 记叙文
审人称 第一人称为主
审时态 一般现在时为主
审要点 观点鲜明，层次分明，语言简洁，过渡自然，综述观点。
Step 2 分析要点，编制提纲 开头 开门见山，点明主题。 引入话题： 说明参观农场的经历和时间。 表达对这次经历的期待或兴奋之情。 例句： “上个周末，我和家人去了叔叔的农场。” “I visited my uncle's farm last weekend with my family.” 简要描述农场的位置和规模： 提到农场的大致位置和大小。 “农场位于乡村的一片开阔地带，大约有五十英亩大。” “The farm is located in an open area in the countryside and covers about fifty acres.”
正文 基于体验，介绍农场的整体情况 农场的环境与设施： 描述农场的整体环境。 “一进入农场，我就被清新的空气和绿色的草地所吸引。” “As soon as I entered the farm, I was attracted by the fresh air and green grass.” 介绍农场里的一些设施，如牲畜棚、仓库等。 “There are several barns for animals and a big storage shed for equipment.” 农场里的动物： 列举一些常见的农场动物。 “我们看到了奶牛、绵羊、鸡和鸭子。” “We saw cows, sheep, chickens, and ducks.” 描述这些动物的样子和它们的生活习性。 “奶牛正在吃草，小鸡们在母鸡的带领下四处跑动。” “The cows were grazing, and the chicks were running around under their mother’s guidance.” 农场的工作日常： 讲述农民一天的工作安排。 “每天清晨，农民们就开始忙碌起来，给动物喂食、挤牛奶。” “Every morning, the farmers start their busy day by feeding the animals and milking the cows.” 描述参与的一些活动，比如帮忙喂养动物或采摘水果。 “我帮忙喂了鸡，还学会了如何挤牛奶。” “I helped feed the chickens and learned how to milk a cow.”
结尾 进行总结概括，重点谈论自己的感受。 总结体验： 回顾整个农场之旅的感受。 “这次参观让我更加了解了农民的辛勤工作。” “This visit made me understand more about the hard work of farmers.” 表达对农民工作的敬意和对大自然的感激之情。 “I have a great respect for farmers and feel grateful for nature.” “I have great respect for farmers and feel grateful for nature.” 结束语： 对未来的展望或愿望。 “我希望将来有机会再次访问这个美丽的农场。” “I hope to have the chance to visit this beautiful farm again in the future.”
Step 3巧用词句，衔接成文 类别 单词/ 短语
顺序 first of all/ first (ly) / to start with/...comes first.首先 secondly/ second/ next/ then 其次 finally/ in the end/at last 最后 last but not least最后但同样重要的是 at the same time/ meanwhile同时
并列 补充 and 和；又；而且 besides 除此之外 in addition 除此之外还有, not only. . . but also不但……而且 on the one hand…，on the other hand…一方面……另一方面……
转折对比 but 但是however 然而while 然而
递进 what’s more 甚至;更重要的是 what’s worse 更糟糕的是 even 甚至 especially 特别是 above all 首先；最重要的是
因果 /目的 because/ as/ since/ because of/for 因为 thanks to多亏了…… as a result 结果 without 没有 with the help of. . . 在……的帮助下 therefore 所以 for this reason 因为这个原因 so that 以便于 in order that/ in order to 为了 for this purpose 为了这个目的
举例 for example例如 such as. . . 比如；例如 and so on 等等
观点 陈述自己观点： as far as I know 就我所知 in my opinion 依我来看 to tell the truth 说实话 to be honest 诚实地说 generally speaking 通常来说 陈述正反方不同观点： on the one hand. . . on the other hand. . . 一方面……又一方面…… some. . . while others. . . 一些人认为……而另一些人为…… Everything has two sides. 事物都具有两面性。 Some people hold the view that. . . while the others prefer the view that. . . 一些人坚持这种观点, 而另一些人更喜欢另一种观点
总结 in short /in a word/ all in all总之
写作范例
假设你是彭超，你的叔叔有一个农场。请根据下面所给要点，写一篇短文，介绍一下这个农场。
要点：
1. 农场很大，有许多花和树；
2. 农场里有一所房子 (house)，里面有20头猪 (pig) 和30只鸡 (chicken)；
3.农场的中间是一个大湖 (lake)，湖面有40只鸭子 (duck)。
提示：
1. My name is...
2. My uncle has a big farm with...
3. There is...on the farm...
4. There are...pigs and...chickens...
5. In the middle of...is...
6. There are...ducks on the lake.
要求：1. 条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确； 2. 50～60词。
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Step 1认真审题，明确要求
主题 热爱与敬畏自然
人称 第一人称为主
时态 一般现在时为主
文体 记叙文
要点 第一步，首先介绍农场的总体情况。 第二步，根据要点内容，介绍农场的具体信息。 第三步，阐明要热爱自然，尊重自然。
Step 2 列要点，编提纲
立框架 列要点 添细节
Step 3 巧用词句，衔接成文
普通范文 美化范文 升级点拨
My name is Peng Chao. My uncle has a big farm with a lot of flowers and trees. There is a big house on the farm and there are twenty pigs and thirty chickens in it. In the middle of the farm is a big lake and there are forty ducks on the lake. I like my uncle's farm. What about you Hello, my name is Peng Chao. Today, I want to tell you about my uncle's farm. It's a wonderful place full of life and beauty. Every time I visit, I feel like I'm stepping into a whole new world! My uncle's farm is located in a quiet corner of the countryside, far away from the noise and pollution of the city. The farm is quite large, covering over twenty acres. As you walk through the entrance, you'll be greeted by rows of colorful flowers and lush green trees that line the path. In the heart of the farm stands a cozy and spacious house. It's painted a warm shade of yellow, making it look inviting. The house has a wide porch where my uncle often sits and enjoys the peaceful view of his land. My uncle keeps a variety of animals on his farm. There are twenty pigs, each with its own personality. Some are playful, while others are quite lazy. They love to roll around in the mud on hot summer days, which always makes me laugh. Beside the pigs, there are thirty chickens. These chickens are very busy! They spend their days pecking at the ground, looking for seeds and insects. In the evenings, they all return to their cozy coop to rest. One of my favorite parts of the farm is the big lake in the middle. It's so peaceful and serene. On the lake, there are forty ducks, all swimming gracefully. Sometimes, they form a perfect line, moving in unison across the water. Other times, they playfully splash each other with their wings. During my visits, I get to help out with some of the daily chores. One of my favorite tasks is feeding the pigs. They get so excited when they see me coming with a bucket of food. Another fun activity is collecting eggs from the chicken coop. It's amazing to see the different colors and sizes of the eggs. I really enjoy spending time on my uncle's farm. It's a place where I can connect with nature and learn about the importance of hard work. If you ever have the chance to visit a farm, I highly recommend it. You'll be amazed by the beauty and tranquility you'll find there. 词汇升级：wonderful完美的 结构衔接：用as表达衔接 词汇升级：be painted被画成 句型升级：将此句升级为which引导的非限定性的定语从句。 意义升华：使用高级句式重申观点，升华主题。
实战演练
请你以“A Day on the Farm”为题，并根据以下提示和要求，用英语写一篇短文。
提示：1、How do you go there
2、What do you take with you
What do you do there
How do you like it
要求：1.文章应包含提示的所有内容，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息；
3.词数100词左右。
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【参考答案】
A Day on the Farm
I had a great day. On May Day, my parents and I went to my uncle’s farm and we spent a whole day there.
The weather was cool then. We went there by bike. It took us about an hour and a half to get there. We took some fruits and bread with us. We started doing farm work as soon as we arrived there. In the morning, my parents helped my uncle pick strawberries, and I helped him feed cows. Strawberries were delicious, and we ate a lot. The cow seemed happy to be with us, too. For lunch, my aunt made noodles for us. It was really delicious. In the afternoon, we helped my uncle milk.
I enjoy spending time with my parents on the farm because the air there was very fresh and the environment was very beautiful. All in all, it is an exciting day. I want to visit my uncle’s farm again.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：要求以“A Day on the Farm”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出对自己农场一天的介绍；
第二步，具体阐述在农场做了什么；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①as soon as一……就……
②start doing开始做某事
③All in all总之
[高分句型]
①In the morning, my parents helped my uncle pick strawberries, and I helped him feed cows.（并列句）
②I enjoy spending time with my parents on the farm because the air there is very fresh and the environment is very beautiful.（原因状语从句）
评价量规
Mark（打分）each other’s passages（满分15分）
Structure（结构） Does it have a clear beginning, body and ending 文章结构是否完整？ 满分2分 分数：______
Content（内容） Does it include（包含）these main points: topic sentence, examples, reasons, feelings and conclusion 文章内容是否包括以上要点？ 满分5分 分数：______
Linking words（连接词） Does he/she add enough linking words 是否有连接词？ 满分2分 分数：______
Expressions（表达） Does he/she use special sentences 是否使用特殊句型？ 满分3分 分数：______
Grammar（语法） Are there any spelling or grammatical mistakes 是否有拼写或语法错误？ 满分2分 分数：______
Handwriting（书写） Does he/she use neat handwriting 书写是否工整？ 满分1分 分数：______

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