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高考英语读后续写解题策略
一、读后续写基本原则
1.Problem/Conflict →___________
2.Negative →____________
3.Foreshadow 伏笔→___________
4.Action →___________
二、如何读？
1. What：
(1) 故事背景：
(2) 故事人物：
(3) 故事情节：
2. Why：
3. How：
三、如何续？
Para.1 : 段首句
Para.2: 段首句
四、评价标准
第五档 （21-25） 1. 与所给短文融合度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理，内容完整、丰富，逻辑合理； 2. 所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，语言错误很少，且完全不影响意义表达； 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使续写短文结构清晰、紧凑，意义连贯。
注意：字数少于120的、书写较差的会酌情扣分！
解题思路及素材
读后续写解题步骤(25分)：
一，任务型阅读（在阅读文章时回答Who/What/when/where/why/how)
二，阅读所给两个段落开头，每一段列出5-8续写内容相关动词（注意第一段与第二段动作衔接性）
三，简单句→复合句（升级句式法）
英语简单句语序：
主语+谓语（动作）+宾语+方式+地点+时间
例1：Lihua studied English carefully at school yesterday.
例2：Asad returned the wallet immediately in the class after school.
升级句式方法：
①使用非谓语动词法（to do,doing)
例1：To improve himself,Lihua studied English carefully at school yesterday. (-to do表目的)
例2：Remembering mother`s words，Asad returned the wallet immediately in the class after school.(-ing表主动)
②加介词短语法(with/without＋情感）
例1：With patience，Lihua studied English carefully at school yesterday.
例2：Without any hesitation,Asad returned the wallet immediately in the class after school.
（常用：With ＋happiness/love/sadness/excitement/anger/patience 带着...）
with/ in great surprise/ amazement / sorrow / sadness/joy/delight
without saying /uttering a word(介词短语修饰） excitedly/carefully/happily/sadly（副词修饰）
③使用定语从句法（which，who，whose等）
例1：Lihua studied English carefully ,which is her favorite subject.
例2：Asad returned the wallet to Fahad,who was surprised by his action.
续写词汇与句子积累
一、必备动作词汇（简单→高级）
①“说” ：
tell sth to sb immediately/at once talk with sb about sth whisper sth to sb in a low/deep voice
say sth 说 add补充说 continue接着说
apologize to sb 向某人道歉 persuade sb to do 劝说 remind sb of sth 提醒，使想起
②“看”：
look at sb/sth immediately/at once see sb/sth doing sth glance at sb/sth glance around 环视四周
glare at sb 怒目而视 with annoyed expression lose sight of看不见 catch sight of 看见
③“叫喊”：
cry out loudly 大声地喊叫 shout/yell at sb大声说；喊叫 let out a scream 发出一声尖叫
④“行走”：
walk/run/wander 走/跑/慢步 enter/step into sp 走进 slip into /out of the room 悄悄溜进，溜出
head for sp前往+地点 rush to sp 匆忙向.. rush out like arrows健步如飞
例：动作＋ with joy/delight/excitement 高兴地/兴奋地
⑤“哭”：
cry sadly/bitterly 伤心地哭 burst out crying 突然哭 with tears rolling/streaming down one`s face/cheeks 掉下眼泪
weep tears of+ joy/happiness/regret/sadness 喜极而泣/遗憾地哭泣/伤心地哭泣
try one`s best to fight back tears ,but in vain.抑制住泪水,但是未能做到
⑥“笑”：
smile to sb kindly/gently burst out laughing 突然笑起 let out a scream 发出一声尖叫
wear a broad/happy smile带着微笑 force a smile 强颜欢笑 laugh at sb 嘲笑某人
⑦“问答”:
ask sb in a curious/puzzled/confused voice 好奇/困惑地语气问
answer/reply sb 问/回答某人 without hesitation毫不犹豫地
二、情绪心理描写句子
① 快乐/喜悦：
1. I was pleased beyond description.我高兴得难以形容。
2. She was overflowing with happiness.她洋溢着幸福。
3.There was obvious pleasure in her voice.她的声音中明显地透露着开心
②生气/愤怒:
1. I was seized by anger.我充满了愤怒。
2.He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.他几乎控制不住怒火。
3.His voice trembled with anger.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。
4. He glared at me with burning eyes.他用灼热的目光怒视着我。
③伤心/烦恼：
1.He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.他静静地站着, 眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。
2. She burst into tears and ran out of the room.她突然哭了起来,跑出了房间。
3. I tried to fight back tears. /My eyes were filled with tears.我努力忍住眼泪。 / 我的眼里充满了泪水。
4.Seeing the ending of the letter,she could not contain her sorrow and tears rolled down her cheeks.看到信的结尾，她再也抑制不住内心的悲伤，潸然泪下。
5.He was physically and mentally exhausted.他身心俱疲
④害怕:
1.He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.他转过身来,眼里充满了恐惧。
2.She was choked by fear. 她因恐惧而窒息。
3. A flood of fear welled up in him. / Fear flooded over him. 他心中涌起一阵恐惧。 / 恐惧淹没了他。
⑤感动:
1. Touched deeply/immensely, we… 被深深感动 , 我们 ……
2.With tears streaming down her face, she... 泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来, ……
4.A warm current welled up in his heart the moment he realized how much love his father had devoted to him.当他意识到父亲为他付出了多少爱的时候，一股暖流涌上心头
三、必备衔接过渡接词
1.Early in the morning 一大早 the other day = a few days ago 几天前
2.The next/following day 第二天（一般过去时）Just then, …
3.After that=Later on, …. Then … 然后，…After a while 一会儿以后
4.Ultimately/ finally/ In the end/ at last/ finally/eventually最后
5.from then on 从那以后, from now on 从今以后
6.at the same time/Meanwhile/just at that moment 同时/正在那时
7.Apparently, Unfortunately, Luckily, Amazingly, Unexpectedly,
8.All of a sudden,突然 Hearing this,听到这个Almost without thinking,几乎想都没想
Without hesitation, 毫不犹豫地 Knowing what had happened, 知道发生什么事情后
9.to one’s surprise/joy/disappointment/relief令人惊讶/高兴/失望/放心的是
四、主题升华句
1.我永远不会忘记这次经历。 I will never forget ... （倒装句否定词置于句首）
Never will I forget this unforgettable experience.
2.正是我的妈妈教会我这么宝贵的一课。It was mom who/that taught me the valuable lesson.
3.从那时起，无论我遇到什么困难和问题，妈妈鼓励性的话语“...”, 总会嬴荡在耳边。
From then on, whenever I encountered difficulties or problems, Mom's encouraging words“Every cloud has a silver lining.” always rang in my ears.（乌云背后总有一线光芒）
4.我逐渐明白只要我们在困境中不失去希望，永远都会有出路。
It dawned on me that if we never lose hope in adversity, there will be a way out.
5.我会尽我所能做的一切来帮助有需要有困难的人。
I would like to do everything in my power to help those in trouble/need.
6.我要学会珍惜并感激我所拥有的一切。
I learn to cherish/treasure and be grateful for all /everything （that I had.）
7.这是我生命中一段意义深刻的时光，我会永远铭记在心。
It was a profound time in my life, which I would keep in mind forever.
8.尽管外面天气很冷，但有了爱，他们的心不再寒冷。
In this bitter winter, they would never felt cold because of love and kindness.
9.世界总会给有梦想的人开路。 The world always makes way for dreamers.
10.苦难是磨炼人的好机会。 Suffering is a good opportunity to cultivate people
11.事实上，每个人都有天赋。发现它的时候要勇敢，也要付出努力。最终，你会创造奇迹。
In fact, everyone has talent. Be brave when you find it and work hard. In the end, you'll create miracles .
12.生命就是充满欢笑和泪水的。只有同时接受两者，我们才能享受生活。
Life is full of laughter and tears. Only by accepting both can we enjoy life.
13.有时候一些小小的善行也能带来巨大的改变Sometimes a little kindness can make a big difference.
14.一个小小的善行，无论是对施予者还是接受者，都是一份祝福。 A little good deed is a blessing to both the giver and the receiver.
15.永远不要低估你的行为的力量。Never underestimate the power of your action.

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